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Afilia Saga - S . M . L (TV Size)

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Xinely
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Joined April 2012
Xinely

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

m4m

Xinely's Normal

00:37:607 (3) - NC this to show a change in the rhythm? its the first slider that lands on a blue tick so the new color may hint that to the players consistency

00:51:707 (2) - Try to stack this on top of 00:50:207 (5) - since a lot of the patterning here is stacking, so try to make that consistent well but need to tweak some patterns orz, but fixed as i can

01:06:257 (4) - Bend the slider more by pushing the middle node to (300,208) to make the flow easier orz you make an inconsistency spacing and forced flow

Laurier wrote:

mod4mod

Normal
00:01:607 (4) - try this rhythm
SPOILER
and this placing fixed
SPOILER
00:06:407 (3,4) - same as ^
00:18:407 (1) - add new combo ? because it start new sounds pattern. agreed, added
00:37:607 (3) - try Ctr+H yap, flow seems better
SPOILER
00:52:007 (3,4) - make a curve
SPOILER
it will be better smooth pattern i prefer mine for this patten. sorry

that's it

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m, std only 0.0

Xinely's Normal

  1. 00:01:007 (3,4) - blanket perfect isn't blanket again since changed from laurier's mod
  2. 00:10:007 (1,2,3) - arrange these objs to make 2 and 3 a blanket? flow won't nicely again
  3. 00:40:607 (4,1) - blanket? well, no blanket can be a necessity, just consider a bit... and more blanket issue after this, u can fix them by urself or feel free to ignore :3
  4. haha, why nealy 70% of objs r set on the left side of the screen? lol

good luck

Karia wrote:

Hi, try M4M
Xinely's Normal
  1. 00:04:607 : Maybe useless greenline. removed
  2. 00:13:607 (3) - Where are the hitsounds..;w; whistle on head, clap on tail. added drum finish on repeat too
  3. 00:15:707 (2) - x1.05 → x1.00? not really an issue but let's fix it for avoiding missunderstanding
  4. 00:16:007 (3,4) - feel so closed..move (4) to down and adjust next (1)? 1 grid down
    SPOILER
  5. 00:31:007 (4) - rotate 20*? flow isn't really good for me, rotate 5 degree instead
    SPOILER
  6. 01:16:007 (3) - change tail's clap into finish? nice catch
  7. 01:18:857 : Useless greenline? removed
thanks 4 mods all ~
Update
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: NouCome (SML).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38923
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 70723
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:S . M . L (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Love Comedy wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
Tags:opening xinely koreapenguin regenz P_A_N noucome 俺の脳内選択肢が  学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している reyshel
BeatmapID:314169
BeatmapSetID:122441

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Title:S . M . L (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:P A N
Version:K.Penguin's Hard
Source:Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Love Comedy wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
Tags:opening xinely koreapenguin regenz P_A_N noucome 俺の脳内選択肢が  学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している reyshel
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Momochikun
1,927 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
baka PAN :P



[General]
Clear~!

[Insane]
  1. 00:00:857 - How about adding circle ? Here you can hear slightly a piano instrument that can be unnecessary if it skipped which different with 00:03:257 - that didn't have any instrument that can be heared. Here's a pattern suggestion if you agree, With this you can make both a fun jump and pretty nice circular flow here ~
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  2. 00:06:107 (5,6) - How about adding circle at 00:06:107 - then start (5) 1/2 later to following that trumpet hold ? this can be flowing better with the music during gameplay imo, compared to 00:01:457 (3) - that have same sound and same techniques.
  3. 00:07:307 (9) - I'd really like to see more jump pattern here since the next rhytm is a pretty fun instrument that sticked out from the music. How about shorten this into 3/4 or better 1/2 ( you can emphasize drum at 00:07:457 - with this ) then add a NC'ed note here 00:07:607 - ? Also you can place it like this :
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  4. 00:07:757 (1,2,5) - Hm.. i guess you missed whistles at these note ? you can still hear the drum on the BGM here, also whistle here could fit really nice with the finish instrument that played on the music.
  5. 00:09:707 (1) - How about shortening this into 3/4 so you can give a shot on the drum clap at 00:09:932 - on the BGM ? I just feel that a 1/1 slider can't really give enough fun for players xD, If you did this you also can repair your NC pattern
  6. 00:10:907 (5) - Is this whistle on the slider's end intentional ? i can't hear any drum sound that provided on the music here.
  7. 00:17:657 (2) - This placement didn't really making smooth flow imo, I'd prefer 2 circle here that give more strong emphasize to the drum before star pattern jump. Maybe something like this :
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  8. 00:28:832 (5) - Try adding a clap here, if you hear it correctly there're duplet sounds on the music. Adding them would give more sense and flowing smoothly to follow during gameplay
  9. 00:40:532 (7) - ^ same reason
  10. 00:38:507 - I'd highly suggest you to remove the kiai fountain here, it may cause a kiai abuse issue as the ranking criteria said, since the fountain would clash with the next one ( 00:38:807 - ) that maybe too strong that can cause epilepsy. Consider this..
  11. 00:54:257 (4,5) - I'd suggest you to swap this two to give smoother transition during gameplay, i mean 1/2 slider first to follow the hold vocal "wa~" then you can add a circle to emphasize the drum.
  12. 00:56:057 (9,1) - Maybe swap this NC for neater combo rhytm ? as you can see the down beat was lying on the reverse point of (8). So i think the NC should be on (9) instead of (1). But idk if you want to following the vocal, it's up to you
  13. 01:01:307 (5,6) - I would suggest to changing (5) into a note then start a 1/2 slider from the red tick to following the vocal more precise here. During gameplay you'll feel that awkward feelings of hitting 1/1 slider (6) when the long hold vocal was emphasized with the end of slider's (5). This will avoid that feelings and make the transition more smoother.
  14. 01:06:857 (7) - If you hear it properly, the rhytm has already changed into 1/3 here.. So i'd suggest you to remove this and add 1/3 slider from 01:06:807 -
    I'd have to admit that this diff was very fun and well made ( even if i can't pass this.. holyshit that BPM -w- ) , good job that you got there PAN ! :P

[Hard]
  1. 00:09:707 (3) - This stack merely broken the flow here, it would be better if you can use correct DS instead
  2. 00:11:807 (8,1) - Pretty strange placement, if i.. i would moving the (8) that can be overlapped with the sliderbody but not with the hitcircle, sometimes it can be hard to read, like this
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  3. 00:27:257 (2) - I'd be better if you can delete this note to give some rest to players with your 1/2 combo pattern in this high bpm songs.
  4. 00:31:007 (4,2) - Seems bear pattern, it would be neater if you can make these two sliders have same shape to create smoother pattern to follow during gameplay
  5. 00:37:607 (1,2) - 1/3 slider pattern maybe can be too hard to read on Hard diff even if it following the music properly. The rhytm would be easier to read if you give reverse point to (1) then add note instead
  6. 00:44:657 (4,5) - This rhytm can be arranged better to follow the vocal, if you change (4) into a 1/2 slider then add another 1/2 slider. you can emphasize it both vocal and drum instrument here
  7. 00:46:007 (3) - You will need a finish at the slider's head to emphasize the high vocal,also i can hear other instrument that provide a splashy sound here
  8. 01:14:507 (6) - This stack plays awkwardly. I'd suggest you to remove this to 350 32 to create smoother pattern to follow during gameplay.
  9. 01:23:207 (1,2,3,4) - This is extremely too hard for 200 BPM song, i hope you can scale them to make it smaller a bit.

[Normal]
  1. 00:01:457 (4,3) - Opo iki.. rhytm sama suara sama tapi kok hitsound ne beda.. sing sitok whistle sitok e clap.. consistency ae. le jareku sing (4) mending gantien whistle. lebih cocok masio gak onok suara drum di music ne. le clap rasane crash karo (3)'s slider end o.o
  2. 00:07:007 (4) - sup.. delok'en spacing ne :3
  3. 00:08:657 (2,3,4) - 1/2 note trus slider iku cukup angel lho gawe newbie.. mending koe ganti note ne jadi slider trus 1/2 reverse ae cek gampangan di follow timbangane 2 1/2 slider... 200 bpm iki coy
  4. 00:23:207 (4,1) - Coba'en blanket ae ta ? luwih apik le jareku
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  5. 00:26:207 (5) - Aku eroh iki pasti slider (4) sing kok puter 120*.. tapi berhubung pattern ne nggak iso mbentuk symmetry ( koyok ngene > 00:29:507 (2,3) - ) gara" (1) kecidekan.. mending gantien sliderliyane atau 2 circle ae..
  6. 00:26:807 (1) - Finish di slider's end dunk.. instrument nya lumayan keras ini lho.. aneh aja klo yg di slidertick di emphasize tapi yg ini malah cmn whistle doang
  7. 00:34:007 (1,2) - Iki dua dua ne end point ne gak ceblok neng suara opopun nang music. dadi awkward ae pas mitek ne soale mek onok 1/2 rhytm di music ne. kok gak di ilangi ae reverse ne cek gampangan sitik diff ne karo luwih fit nang BGM toh ?
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  8. 00:47:807 (4,5) - Lbih prefer 1/1 slider iki lek aku timbangane circle. soale suarane podo persis koyok 00:47:207 (3) - . jadi le rhytm ne digawe podo pisan lak luwih pas gitu pattern ne
  9. 00:49:007 (2) - jujur ae iki cukup aneh shape ne lek jareku ._. inget en mod ne guru mu soal slider's shape (arc) di map eternal reality mu wwwww

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:757 - How about adding circle here ? this part feels empty even for easy diff because you completely ignore the pretty important part which the music provide
  2. 00:39:707 - ^ for same reason. anyway it's kiai. So players won't get bother if you adding it to keep steady the transition and flows smoothly
  3. 00:43:907 (4) - This reverse slider plays awkwardly during gameplay because it's not landed on any dominant part of the music. I'd suggest you to add a note then start a slider 1/1 later to follow the vocal. then add another note to emphasize the drum
  4. 01:17:207 (1,2) - This can be totally hard to read especially on hidden mod because of the double reverse and the placement that you use, which can make possibility to follow with 1 reverse. i'd suggest you to remove the 2nd reverse and rearrange the pattern. or do something similiar with this :
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  5. 01:23:207 (3,1) - Hm.. i think the blanket can be better here, the curved way of (3) seems not arranged properly for blanket imo

Good Luck for getting this ranked !~ :roll:
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
SPOILER
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Artist:Afilia Saga
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Ami
177 posts
Joined November 2012
Ami
Yoyo. m4m :3

[regenz's Easy]
00:00:707 (2) - i think 2 reverse arrows are very confusing on Easy.
00:05:207 (1) - ^
00:10:307 (2) - ^
00:07:607 (1) - make this spinner longer. to 00:09:707 and delete (1)
00:19:907 (2) - Make this perfect blanked and the 2 reverse arrows, yo know D:
00:36:407 (1) - make this spinner longer. :D to 00:38:507 ^_^
00:40:007 (2,1) - Make perfect :3, Disable Grid snap for it. :p
00:41:807 (2,3) - ^
00:49:907 (4,1) - ^
01:05:807 (2,3) - ^
01:17:207 (1,2) - you know what I mean. :D
01:23:207 (3,1) - Make perfect.

[Xinely's Normal]
4 1/2 stars, what. :D
00:15:707 (2) - stack with 00:13:607 (3) - and make this 00:14:807 (1) - perfect :3
00:23:207 (4,1) - Make it perfect blanced
00:56:807 (3,4) - ^
good job, xin. D:

[K.Penguin's Hard]
Looks perfect to me haha.

[Insane]
00:29:207 (8,1) - Stack it, it looks better, rlly o3o
00:45:707 (3,1) - ^


Gud map pan ~~ and sry for my bad english >:
Eldwyn
26 posts
Joined March 2013
Eldwyn
I really like this beatmap, kudosu star for youu ~
Don't give up, you'll do it ! :D
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

Eldwyn wrote:

I really like this beatmap, kudosu star for youu ~
Don't give up, you'll do it ! :D
thank you!!
thanks for your encourage. ill try
Swayzo_old
78 posts
Joined April 2013
Swayzo_old
M4M
Hard:
SPOILER
00:13:007 remove 4 and Extend slider 3 so it's 1 beat long
00:20:807 (1,2) ^
00:34:007(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) Suggestion:

00:37:607 replace (1,2) with circles
00:44:657 4 should be the slider, not 5
01:23:357 too fast



Insane:
SPOILER
00:34:007(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) Suggestion:

00:38:507 supposed to snap to slider 1 @ 00:38:807 ?
00:44:507 (5,6,7,8,9) didn't play well, try rearranging the notes
00:37:607 replace (1,2) with circles
01:26:057 should be distanced abit further
00:56:057 (2,3) replace 2 with a slider that lasts 1 beat long and add a note at 00:56:507
01:14:957 (1-11) didn't play very well
00:12:257 needs a note

(sorry for the random order, I had to keep replaying the song to find mistakes)
I guess that's all I can find
Dark Fang
1,981 posts
Joined February 2011
Dark Fang


뭐야 이건

[General]

  1. offset +4 from current state (411)
  2. please uncheck the Widescreen Support in Normal and Easy diffs. you didn't make or use StoryBoard. it's only for SB.
  3. this mapset is unstable. difficult gap is big. it's twice things between Normal and Hard, Hard and Insane. I think Hard diff can reduce difficult from current state. but about Insane.... you should need another Insane diff that light Insane.
[regenz's Easy]

  1. 00:31:607 (1) - try to add a Finish hitsound here? I think you forgot to add to hitsound on here. but if you want to highlight that for rhythm, I'd rather add Finish. or other way. if you don't want to add a Finish here, why don't you use Whistle hitsound on here with 00:32:207 (2) - this circle? the choice is yours.
  2. 00:38:807 - eh... can you try to use long slider that including 3 white ticks? this section will be difficulty for non technical players. because, this section is immediately after the 00:36:407 (1) - this spinner. accordingly, that players will feel difficult to hit the notes. anyway, try to use this slider.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:41:507 (1) - if you want to blanket it, why don't you perfectly blanket it? I recommend one grid move to left on gird level 4 (Tiny)
  4. 01:07:607 (1) - hm.... I think removing the Whistle hitsound on arrow of this slider is good for this section's sound. because of the drum snare sound is too strongly emphasized on that section. anyway I tried add a Clap on here, but not good. just no hitsound is good for here. IMO
[Xinely's Normal]

dat hitsounds...
  1. 00:08:961 - this pattern is too hard to use for Normal diff. why don't you apply Momochikun's opinion?
  2. 00:29:211 (1) - try move to (152,272) with 00:30:411 (3) - this slider if you want to make perfect square. well... if you apply this opinion, you should adjust neighboring notes. don't want to bother you, but that will be increase map's quality.
  3. 00:35:211 (3) - try remove the Clap hitsound on end of this slider as follow 00:34:011 - this pattern. I think this way is good than current state. 00:36:111 (5) - this circle too.
  4. 00:36:411 (1) - add a Finish in stead Whistle on start of slider. I heard a cymbal sound at here.
  5. 01:01:461 (3) - aaaah. I recommend remove this circle. this is not good for Normal diff. non tech-players might be confuse on this pattern.
  6. 01:05:211 (1) - only use one hitsound like previous hitsounds. eh... eventually, remove the Whistle.
  7. 01:11:061 (3) - yea. same opinion as 01:01:461 (3) - this.
  8. 01:17:211 (1) - same opinion as above. At the least, please make it consistent. same opinion the later similar patterns.
[K.Penguin's Hard]

세상에. 하드라니. 하드라기엔 슈퍼하드네요.
  1. 00:19:161 (3,4) - 이거 슬라이더로 대체해서 사용해주시거나. 혹은 두 서클을 겹쳐주세요 다른 패턴들처럼. 하드에 쓰기엔 너무 어렵네요.
에...음.... 일단 모딩하기 이전에. 잘 만드셧긴 한데 하드라고 하기에는 난이도가 있네요. BPM 이 빨라서 그런감도 없지않아 있긴 한데. 00:46:311 - 이 근처에 1/4 연타가 많은점과 01:23:361 (2,3,4) - 이런 점프 등등. 특히나 후자의 경우에는 인세인에서도 잘은 안쓰이는 점프입니다. 음... 확실히 고난도 이긴한데 잘만드신거 같아서, 현재 상태에서 박자를 조금 줄이는 방편을 요구해봅니다. 저런 연타수들도 조금 줄여주시고. 디스턴스가 너무 넓은곳에는 약간 줄이는 식으로. 난이도를 줄여보시는게 어떤가요?

[Insane]

  1. please. please reduce HP drain. none mode's Drain like HR mode.
  2. 00:28:757 (4,5,6) - I think this 3 hit stream is not good for here. certainly, we can hear that drum sound. but in playing? I think almost players impossible hear that. hm... whatever, try to only use (6) circle? E.g. 00:32:807 - here. IMO
  3. 00:40:307 (6,7,8) - this pattern feel awkward for me. anyway, i want to say this. this song's main melody is too loud than sub drums' sounds. so.. I recommend this rhythm
    SPOILER
good



I will taiko mod if you want
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
thanks mod
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: NouCome (SML).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38923
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 10123
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:S . M . L (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:P A N
Version:K.Penguin's Hard
Source:Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Love Comedy wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
Tags:opening xinely koreapenguin regenz P_A_N noucome 俺の脳内選択肢が  学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している reyshel
BeatmapID:313465
BeatmapSetID:122441

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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188,352,35957,1,4,0:0:0:0:
46,310,36407,6,0,L|22:265,3,35,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,239,36707,2,0,L|60:187,3,35,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,164,37007,2,0,L|35:106,3,35,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,93,37307,2,0,L|99:51,3,35,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,80,37607,6,0,P|176:84|228:60,1,93.3333333333333,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,20,38007,2,0,P|372:20|426:45,1,93.3333333333333,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,208,38507,1,8,3:0:0:0:
360,340,38807,6,0,P|292:360|208:328,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,172,39407,2,0,P|292:152|376:184,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,242,40007,2,0,P|141:217|134:183,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,44,40307,2,0,P|160:70|168:104,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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292,36,41057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,80,41207,2,0,L|444:228,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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460,224,42407,2,0,P|468:152|420:84,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,104,43007,2,0,P|232:108|180:88,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,24,43457,1,2,0:0:0:0:
239,24,43532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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84,196,44207,2,0,P|64:168|56:128,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,60,44507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,44,44657,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,44,44807,2,0,P|228:92|220:180,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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140,248,45332,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,288,45407,6,0,P|192:348|276:356,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,308,45857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,292,46007,2,0,B|420:235|420:235|421:210|421:210|444:196|456:156,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,64,47132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,47207,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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100,52,47807,1,4,0:0:0:0:
220,168,48107,1,4,0:0:0:0:
276,232,48257,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,232,48332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,232,48407,2,0,P|304:168|268:96,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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32,284,49907,2,0,P|31:249|46:217,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,113,50207,2,0,P|134:148|120:180,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,132,50508,2,0,P|52:96|68:64,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,114,50807,2,0,P|203:117|263:82,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,8,51257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,40,51407,2,0,P|396:72|396:124,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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360,16,52457,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,48,52607,2,0,P|476:104|464:196,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,53057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,53132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,236,53657,5,2,0:0:0:0:
112,264,53807,2,0,L|76:332,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,180,54257,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,96,54407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,96,54707,6,0,P|136:36|220:20,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,40,55157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,40,55307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,196,55607,6,0,P|300:256|216:272,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,236,56057,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,152,56207,2,0,P|172:120|224:100,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,236,56507,2,0,P|144:268|92:288,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,272,56807,5,4,0:0:0:0:
152,152,57107,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,284,57407,1,4,0:0:0:0:
360,152,57707,1,4,0:0:0:0:
360,152,58007,6,0,P|428:180|460:260,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,320,58457,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,356,58607,2,0,P|328:356|292:332,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,58907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,268,59057,2,0,P|204:224|124:220,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,248,59507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,172,59657,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,172,59807,2,0,P|36:104|92:60,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,32,60407,5,4,0:0:0:0:
400,112,60707,2,0,P|412:168|392:228,1,105,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,244,61007,2,0,P|404:240|452:260,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,332,61307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,332,61457,2,0,P|400:344|320:308,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,241,61907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,168,62057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,168,62132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,168,62207,2,0,P|344:96|304:24,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,24,62807,6,0,P|112:87|125:168,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,228,63257,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,308,63407,2,0,P|164:336|116:368,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,244,63857,2,0,P|292:224|372:244,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,312,64307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,188,64607,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,56,64907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,56,65207,6,0,P|368:28|292:45,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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436,80,68207,2,0,P|387:43|303:50,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,68657,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,140,68807,2,0,P|140:140|100:120,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
5,38,69107,2,0,P|39:38|72:52,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,127,69407,2,0,P|84:192|104:264,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,268,70007,6,0,P|293:203|273:131,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,321,70607,2,0,P|224:368|300:372,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,344,71057,2,0,B|400:295|400:295|407:267|407:267|436:219,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,220,71507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,52,71807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,128,72107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,168,72257,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,168,72332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,72407,6,0,P|108:88|128:16,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,150,73007,2,0,P|301:183|301:218,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,201,73457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,284,73607,2,0,P|296:308|364:292,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,184,74807,6,0,P|212:196|128:156,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,88,75257,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,88,75332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,88,75407,2,0,P|224:76|308:116,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,268,76007,6,0,P|204:280|120:240,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,180,76457,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,180,76532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,188,77807,2,0,P|348:187|406:225,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,368,78407,6,0,P|284:364|248:340,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,243,78707,2,0,P|201:246|232:264,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,316,79157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,316,79307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,316,79607,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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168,244,80207,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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200,148,81707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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428,76,84407,6,0,P|364:44|284:56,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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384,304,86357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Sarawatlism
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Sarawatlism
Shooting kudo <3 ♥
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Short IRC mod. We fixed some minor things. Good luck!
IRC mod
15:28 P A N: BeatofIke please help me :'( https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122441
15:28 BeatofIke: what is it? ;w
15:29 P A N: 6 months map that you gave me a correct title lol
15:31 BeatofIke: oh
15:33 P A N: I still want it to rank but :(
15:34 BeatofIke: it's graveyarded D:
15:34 P A N: i will dig it today lol
15:34 P A N: oh I should say
15:34 P A N: resurrect
15:38 BeatofIke: okay ;w
15:38 P A N: updating DX
15:38 P A N: mine is almost the first version but
15:38 P A N: ;w;
15:40 BeatofIke: i see o.o
15:45 P A N: ok update
15:46 BeatofIke: okay :D
15:46 BeatofIke: so..............
15:46 BeatofIke: IRC mod? XD
15:46 P A N: ok ><
15:46 BeatofIke: hue hue hue...
15:47 P A N: i will mod yours as well
15:47 P A N: so its a m4m :3
15:47 P A N: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/145885
15:47 BeatofIke: okay thanks XD
15:47 P A N: XD
15:55 BeatofIke: think your Preview time is unsnapped
15:55 BeatofIke: Try setting one at 00:38:807. o.o
15:56 P A N: can I 38:657? XD
15:56 P A N: I like to set before the kial about 1 sec
15:56 BeatofIke: sure :)
15:56 P A N: because of fade in
15:56 P A N: ok
16:00 BeatofIke: Think you should add soft-sliderslide3 because of this slider at 00:26:807 (1) - on Xinely's Normal. o.o
16:01 BeatofIke: you can hear the slider slider sound on this slider
16:03 P A N: oh
16:03 P A N: i see
16:04 P A N: but I think its....... ok? XD
16:04 P A N: just one slider
16:07 BeatofIke: Hard is seems fine.
16:08 P A N: ><
16:09 BeatofIke: idk, the slider just sounds inconsisent that's all :/
16:09 P A N: slidertick right?
16:09 BeatofIke: the map on Easy and Normal itself are good.
16:09 BeatofIke: the slidertick sounds fine
16:10 BeatofIke: just the sliderslide
16:10 P A N: oh
16:11 P A N: you mean
16:11 P A N: I need to add mute sliderslide?
16:12 BeatofIke: yes
16:12 P A N: ok I got it
16:12 P A N: I forget it sorry
16:12 P A N: I just a bit confuse about sliderslide and slidertick
16:12 BeatofIke: sorry for the misunderstanding ><
16:12 P A N: ok i will add it
16:12 P A N: no no my fault
16:12 P A N: : (
16:13 BeatofIke: for the taiko diffs, you
16:13 BeatofIke: will need a Taiko BAT for that one :P
16:14 P A N: ok :3
16:17 P A N: ok I add it
16:17 P A N: silence sliderslide
16:18 BeatofIke: ok
16:23 BeatofIke: why so pro >w<
16:23 P A N: noooo DX
16:23 BeatofIke: lol
16:24 BeatofIke: Think that's it o.o
16:25 P A N: ok please post
16:25 P A N: or you can bubble too ';..;'
16:25 P A N: ahahaha
16:25 BeatofIke: just don't forget to re-snap the Preview time about the Taiko difficulties as well.
16:26 BeatofIke: I can't bubble :P
16:26 P A N: i see
16:26 P A N: ok
16:26 BeatofIke: because of the Taiko diffs
16:26 BeatofIke: have to circle
16:26 P A N: what is circle mean
16:26 P A N: 0.0
16:27 BeatofIke: This: p/2950389
16:27 P A N: I see
16:28 P A N: I can remove taiko you know lol
16:28 P A N: its already unrank DX
16:28 P A N: he have 2 taiko diff but I have just 1 so
16:28 P A N: its unrank
16:29 BeatofIke: You................. could remove them, but it's better to ask the guest mapper.
16:29 P A N: yea I plan to move it to the creator's box instead
16:30 BeatofIke: okay, that's fine o.o
16:31 P A N: but it's
16:31 P A N: really unrank right?
16:31 P A N: 2 taiko gd with 1 diff owner
16:31 BeatofIke: nope
16:32 P A N: ok so
16:32 P A N: I should move it :X
16:33 BeatofIke: Sure, if you want to o.o
16:35 P A N: I will call you back ><
16:35 BeatofIke: okay >w<
P A N
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Topic Starter
P A N
thanks so much ;w;
toara_fict
1,319 posts
Joined July 2012
toara_fict
GoGo~~ <3
P A N
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Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks XD
Frostmourne
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Frostmourne
General
Title should be S.M.L (TV Size) instead of S . M . L (TV Size) (there is a space between each character which will affect when you are searching in the game)
and the other ranked map is sticking with S.M.L as well.

regenz's Easy
01:17:207 (1) - 2 repeating sliders with 2 repeaters like this may become a bit sudden to play for players in general. Making them have 1 repeater and add some more circles this way could work better in some ways.
01:17:207 (1) - x 252 y 312
01:18:107 (2) - x 204 y 236
01:18:407 (3) - x 292 y 216
01:19:307 (4) - x 380 y 200
SPOILER

Xinely's Normal
00:01:457 (4) - this is following weirdly. I think there is a really significant beat on 00:01:757 (slider's tail) which I believe it's really meaningful here. So having this kind of rhythm will make this map more tasty like 00:05:807 (2,3,4) - you did
SPOILER
00:03:707 (2) - similar to above in term of rhythmical sense
SPOILER
00:37:607 (3) - nazi, maybe you can rotate this a bit to make it more smooth and look clean apart from 00:36:407 (1) -
SPOILER
00:59:207 (3) - as this diff follows vocal quite well, this stack becomes confusing due to off-vocal pattern. I would start a slider on 00:59:057 and extend it to the previous point like this. Don't forget to fix your hitsound if they are effectively changed.
SPOILER
01:01:457 (3,4) - similar to above, a second hit on 01:01:607 (4) - isn't not following the vocal. The first one that follows exactly is on 01:01:457 (3) -
In order to maintain the hitsound usage, I suggest you do this way to still maintain the clap on the tail of that slider and vocal on 01:02:207 (4) -
SPOILER
Really great job on beat placements you have done here. Everything follows music amazingly, I love it!

K.Penguin's Hard
00:42:107 (2) - I think moving this down a bit to make the distance between 00:41:807 (1) - & 00:42:407 (3) - look graphically the same will be more polished.
SPOILER
00:45:257 (6,7,1) - with this bpm (quite high). I don't think spaced stream is a good idea. You'd better stick with a stack like this.
SPOILER

Insane
OD8 could fit more with this song to get more variety of scoreboard.
00:49:307 (4) - the end of this slider is really significant in term of rhythmical sense. I would propose you to end it just on the 00:49:457 (reduced by 1/2) and start a slider on 00:49:607 to be more emphasized with the song. Be aware of the spacing after fixing as well.
SPOILER

Call me back once everything is done and this will be set. ;)
Xinely
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Xinely

Frostmourne wrote:

Xinely's Normal
00:01:457 (4) - this is following weirdly. I think there is a really significant beat on 00:01:757 (slider's tail) which I believe it's really meaningful here. So having this kind of rhythm will make this map more tasty like 00:05:807 (2,3,4) - you did
SPOILER
00:03:707 (2) - similar to above in term of rhythmical sense
SPOILER
00:37:607 (3) - nazi, maybe you can rotate this a bit to make it more smooth and look clean apart from 00:36:407 (1) -
SPOILER
00:59:207 (3) - as this diff follows vocal quite well, this stack becomes confusing due to off-vocal pattern. I would start a slider on 00:59:057 and extend it to the previous point like this. Don't forget to fix your hitsound if they are effectively changed. moved the 00:58:007 (1,2) - to avoid stacked, since 00:59:207 - music of this time is loud, i wanna map this music
SPOILER
01:01:457 (3,4) - similar to above, a second hit on 01:01:607 (4) - isn't not following the vocal. The first one that follows exactly is on 01:01:457 (3) -
In order to maintain the hitsound usage, I suggest you do this way to still maintain the clap on the tail of that slider and vocal on 01:02:207 (4) -
SPOILER
Really great job on beat placements you have done here. Everything follows music amazingly, I love it!

Call me back once everything is done and this will be set. ;)
no reply = fixed
thanks 4 mod frost :D

update
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: NouCome (SML).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38732
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 70723
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:S . M . L (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Love Comedy wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
Tags:opening xinely koreapenguin regenz P_A_N noucome 俺の脳内選択肢が  学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している reyshel
BeatmapID:314169
BeatmapSetID:122441

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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thanks frostmourne so much, all fixed for me

i fixed all of stuff on regenz's and koreapenguin's too
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gratz! <3

/me calls Tari: When do yours rank~ www
koreapenguin
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koreapenguin
lol (?)
P A N
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P A N
thanks all :P
Sapphiire_old_1
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Sapphiire_old_1
congrats~
-Neipezi
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-Neipezi
pan congratz'w'
regenz
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regenz
แร้งก่อนมี SS2 ได้ไง มันผิดละเนี่ย
Sheepsticks
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Sheepsticks
Congrats! Great beatmap. :)
Shiro
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Shiro
I liked this a bit more than the other ranked version, although a few 1/4 are really weird. Methinks this could have been a bit more intense without disrespecting the song, and you missed a few great jump/pattern opportunities, but overall this is really cool.

The biggest problem is hitsounds are absolutely impossible to hear I had to ignore them and play with music at 50% to be able to hear them...
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