This is only my second mod, plus this seems very well done to me already. Still, I hope I can give you some helpful advice anyway.
General:- Countdown is enabled only for the insane diff even though all difficulties start on the same note. You might want to make it consistent.
- That flash of kiai time at 01:20:704 strikes me as a bit odd. I don't see why you would want a fountain there and not at, like, 01:17:121 when the piano kicks in. o.o
- Source and title should be removed from hard's and insane's tags (strangely enough, that's already the case for normal o.o). Further, the spelling of the source should match. Dunno, you might probably want to go with "Hakkenden -Touhou Hhakken Ibun-" which you used in normal's metadata.
Normal:00:05:480 (1) – Hm, why a return slider at that point? A normal slider would fit the music better imo.
00:41:301 (1,2) – You seem to like overlaps, but this one is not really pleasant to look at imo. I think something like
wouldn't be too horrible once in a while. But if you want to keep the overlap, maybe try to at least make 1 not go all the way across 2? Something like
It's a small change, but visually, I greatly prefer it.
01:01:226 (1) - 01:03:017 (3) – Why no return slider here? You always used them when it matched the vocals. o.o
But in case you absolutely want to keep the three sliders as they are, move 01:03:017 (3) to 413|123 to stack its end with 01:01:226 (1) .
Hard:00:18:465 (2) – Move to 334|141 (stack).
00:27:644 (2,3) – Maybe lessen the curve a bit? The blanketing seems a bit off, 00:08:838 (5,1) for example looks much better.
00:33:912 (7,1) – Move 7 to 113|188 for better blanketing?
01:02:569 (1,2,3,4) – I'm pretty ok with your use of overlaps, but isn't this a bit much? It's not exactly hard to read, I find it just, well, kind of ugly. Maybe you could just stack them and let them run in different directions? In case 4 stays where it is, 01:03:912 (5) would look better at 436|320 blanketing-wise.
ZZH's Insane:00:14:435 (4,5) – Again, I don't find this overlap very visually appealing, but if you want to keep it, why not let 5 blanket 4's end?
01:04:584 (1,2,3,4) – Maybe curve the sliders a little more and make a nice blanket?
It's not too much, but I did my best and can't make out any other issues. Perhaps you might want to consider some of it. :3
Overall, all diffs were pretty fun to play, so good luck getting this ranked!
