Mod Request from PM.
I apologize for the delay. Studying for midterms can be pretty crazy sometimes. >3<
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Everything listed are just suggestions, unless stated otherwise. You are welcome choose whether or not to take any suggestions ~[General]
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Set Widescreenstoryboard to 0 for Easy and Insane - not a big deal, but if there is no storyboard there shouldn't be a reason for this to be at 1. Alternatively, you can change this in Editor Mode under Song Setup -> Design Tab -> Uncheck Widescreen Support
[Easy]
01:02:178 (1) - add finish on slider head for more emphasis on kiai ; Could probably make a delicious slider here to fit vocals and a clap in the music at the curve very nicely like this. (There are also several other places you can use this slider for and would fit really nicely.)
01:08:708 (1) - adding a finish on slider head sounds pretty nice here
01:16:055 (2) - remove finish maybe? Personally I don't think it fits well, but up to you.
[Normal]
00:09:933 (3) - Could look at lot nicer if you rotate selection center by 15 degrees clockwise, and distance snap 00:10:749 (4) to blanket with it, then rotate 00:11:157 (5) by 25 degrees clockwise using selection center as origin, and then dist. snap. Would look something like this.
00:44:831 - I think if you add a note here, and move the slider to start at 00:45:035 it would fit the music pretty nicely.
01:07:076 (5) - remove clap on the repeat arrow and move it to the slider end. it sounds a little bit awkward and doesn't fit music that well there.
01:25:137 (1) - add finish on spinner
Pretty good difficulty.
[Hard]
This difficulty seems to have a lot of Whistles o: pretty unique hitsounding, but you may want to take some of them out since it's hard to notice some of them and make it seem kind of pointless to have it on almost every note in the map. Other than that, I like what you're trying to do with the hitsounding, just lay low on the whistles a little bit and it'll be good.
00:30:341 (3,4) - the double here doesn't really fit that well with the music. maybe remove circle and bring slider back one tick?
00:57:280 (1,2,3) - you could use a Normal sampleset for this section to provide more emphasis.
01:00:545 (1,2,3) - ^
01:02:178 (1) - add a note here maybe?
01:03:606 (5) - You should also consider Normal sampleset at the start of kiai here to match the drums in the music.
[Insane]
A few spacing issues that I want to address:
SPOILERMost of the following uses the scaling tool in editor mode (Ctrl + Shift + S) if it includes a percent in reduction.
00:02:790 (1,2) - could be a bit difficult to read. may want to consider reducing it by about 5-10% (or 0.95-0.90)
00:16:055 (5,6) - the (6) feels a bit too far and may want to move it a bit closer.
00:44:218 (1,2,3,4,5) - reduce spacing to by about 10% (or 0.9), and then adjust the (5) to stack with 00:43:810 (4) after changes
00:21:157 - I personally think reducing SV to 0.6x here makes the section feel easier than Hard. You could maybe bring it up to 0.8x and adjust spacing accordingly.
Everything else seems good. Good luck and I apologize for the long wait.
Now to sit in my room and stuff my face in another 1000 page textbook...orz
And also, 100th post. <3