AllStar12 wrote:

Mod request, lets see here:
Note: You can ignore the suggestions if you wish to so and I've test played only once, two times for the insane.
(Have the Grid Snap disabled in order to do these re-positioning and fixes) ( For Easy and Normal, some of the bullet points can be outdated. Be sure to check if they are or not)

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1. 00:09:933 (3) - blanket it a bit better, Here's the code: ► Applied.
   

   208,168,9933,2,0,P|210:226|242:282,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:28:708 (2) - re-positioned a bit to stack completely against the end of the slider| x:85 y:99
3. 00:29:116 (3) - re-positioned a bit to stack completely against the end of the slider| x:204 y:155
   
4. 00:42:586 (3) - Have both ends of the slider the same y axis. Here's the code: ► Applied.
   

   176,207,42586,2,0,P|234:194|292:208,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:44:218 (1,2,3) - Moved this so slider 2 would be on 00:42:586 (3) - x and y axis and slider 1 is polished a bit to curve around 00:43:810 (4) - . Here's the code: ► Applied.
   

   21,130,44218,6,0,P|81:128|135:152,1,120
   176,208,44831,2,0,B|176:95|276:72,1,180
   404,60,45851,1,0,0:0:0:0:

6. 00:54:014 (1) - blanket the circle with the slider a bit better. Here's the code: ► Applied.
   

   168,232,54014,6,0,P|128:278|72:301,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 00:57:892 (2) - blanket the slider with the other slider a bit better. Here's the code: ► Applied.
   

   211,183,57892,2,0,P|167:162|128:162,2,90

8. 01:16:872 (5,1) - blanketed the circle with the slider a bit better and re-positioned the second slider to stack on top of the first slider. Here's the code: ► Applied.
   

   354,189,76872,2,0,P|325:155|309:97,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   ↳ 01:16:872 (5) - slider ► Applied.
   

   354,190,78504,6,0,P|294:190|230:230,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   ↳ 01:18:504 (1) - slider ► Applied.
   
   
9. 01:20:137 (4) - blanketed the circle with the slider a bit better. Here's the code: ► Applied.
   

   140,136,80137,2,0,P|171:168|190:208,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   
   
   Suggestions
   
10. 00:44:218 (1) - Have this as a straight, 1/2, repeated slider ► Applied.
11. Maybe give it a bit more patterns? ► my idea closet got empty in 4 hours ><.
12. 01:11:565 (1,2) - try having it like this? 00:46:667 (1,2) - ► Applied.
    
    Test play for Normal Difficulty
    
    Result

    
    Comments: Smooth game-play, appropriate slider velocity, AR, HD, OD and CS and style is pretty good. There's one part where I thought it can be a questionable placement which was 01:11:565 (1,2) - , maybe it could be like 00:46:667 (1,2) - ?. Felt fine for me since I experienced these quite a lot but never really seen one like this in normal difficulty (Can be wrong). I would say keep it for now and if you do run into a experienced modder or multiple modder pointing this out then do reconsider this. Overall I say this looks good and thought this was acceptable to be a normal difficulty, though leaning a bit towards hard. Check to see if some are still not fixed, this is a bit outdated. Sorry
    Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Normal ~ Hard (5%)

- Jelly - wrote:

Hi~

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00:18:096 (1) - end at 00:20:545 ► Ok ^^

Easy i have a rough look because i have no time , but i can't find problems and offer better advice . sorry.
Nice map and shoot a star

Best wishes ~

LexiaLovesU wrote:

in game request
15:26 toloveruu: Hey, do you mod?
15:55 LexiaLovesU: yes
15:56 toloveruu: Do you take requests?
15:56 LexiaLovesU: yes
15:56 *toloveruu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/312888 RO-KYU-BU! - Get goal! (TV Size)]
15:56 toloveruu: Thanks alot
15:56 LexiaLovesU: ill mod now
15:56 toloveruu: Sounds good, thanks
16:01 LexiaLovesU: do you want in game mod
16:01 LexiaLovesU: or post
16:01 toloveruu: Up to you
16:01 toloveruu: In game is fine
16:02 LexiaLovesU: got to your map ill do both
16:02 toloveruu: Alright
16:04 LexiaLovesU: are you on get goal
16:04 toloveruu: Yep
16:04 LexiaLovesU: this is easy
16:04 LexiaLovesU: 00:06:667(3) put that slider upward its a bit ugly right now
16:05 toloveruu: Move it higher?
16:05 LexiaLovesU: no it tail move it upward
16:06 toloveruu: oh ok
16:07 toloveruu: I'll reposition them to make it look better
16:07 LexiaLovesU: ready for next thing
16:07 toloveruu: yep
16:07 LexiaLovesU: 00:09:525(1,2) maybe let 1 blanket 2
16:09 toloveruu: I like it better how it is right now
16:10 LexiaLovesU: ok i cant make people change
16:10 LexiaLovesU: if they dont want to
16:12 LexiaLovesU: 00:11:565(1) put that in a different postion it looks really repetitive
16:13 toloveruu: Added some curve to it
16:14 LexiaLovesU: 00:11:565(1) Dont end on red ticks in easy
16:14 toloveruu: I'm pretty sure its okay
16:14 LexiaLovesU: red ticks are for normal and hard and insane
16:14 LexiaLovesU: ITS NOT OK
16:15 toloveruu: I'll change it then
16:15 LexiaLovesU: you have to think about noobs
16:15 LexiaLovesU: this is going to be played by people who are starting the game
16:15 toloveruu: true
16:15 toloveruu: okay then
16:16 LexiaLovesU: 00:12:382(2) no red ticks
16:17 LexiaLovesU: 00:13:198(3)^
16:17 toloveruu: Fixed all
16:19 LexiaLovesU: 00:16:463(1,2) remove 2 then make 1 a 1/1 slider repeat then add a note on the next whit tick
16:21 toloveruu: Changed
16:23 LexiaLovesU: do you want me to mod placement as well
16:24 toloveruu: Yeah
16:28 LexiaLovesU: im not a big fan in this placement
16:30 toloveruu: Where
16:34 LexiaLovesU: 00:21:146(1,2) maybe put on to tippy top invert it then get 2 and invert then make it parrel 1 make sure they are idetical
16:34 LexiaLovesU: 00:21:146(1,2) maybe put 1 to tippy top invert it then get 2 and invert then make it parrel 1 make sure they are idetical
16:36 toloveruu: There's nothing at 00:21:146
16:36 LexiaLovesU: 361
16:37 LexiaLovesU: 00:21:361
16:37 LexiaLovesU: sorry
16:38 toloveruu: I don't know where you want me to put it >< sorry
16:39 LexiaLovesU: 00:21:146(1,2) maybe put 1 to tippy top invert it then get 2 and invert then make it parrel 1 make sure they are idetical
16:39 toloveruu: I think it's okay how it is right now
16:40 LexiaLovesU: okay
16:43 LexiaLovesU: 00:35:239(2) pls let 2 blanket 1's tail
16:45 LexiaLovesU: after this mod i review placement
16:46 toloveruu: Okay
16:48 LexiaLovesU: 00:37:688 nice blanket
16:49 toloveruu: Thanks
16:58 LexiaLovesU: np
16:58 LexiaLovesU: sorry im back now
16:58 toloveruu: No problem
17:02 LexiaLovesU: 00:52:382(2,3) remove 3 then extend 2 to make it a long 1/1
17:03 toloveruu: How long should 2 be
17:05 LexiaLovesU: make it extend to next white tick
17:06 toloveruu: 00:53:198
17:06 toloveruu: ?
17:07 LexiaLovesU: yeah
17:07 toloveruu: kk
17:12 LexiaLovesU: 00:57:280 no red ticks
17:13 toloveruu: It's a repeat though
17:15 LexiaLovesU: doesnt matter usually in easy there is no red ticks
17:15 toloveruu: Alright
17:16 LexiaLovesU: do a different pattern]
17:16 toloveruu: YEAH
17:16 toloveruu: Sorry caps
17:22 LexiaLovesU: 01:00:545 i think you know
17:23 toloveruu: Yep
17:28 LexiaLovesU: 01:05:443(1,2,3,4) i know you can place this better
17:31 toloveruu: ok
17:41 LexiaLovesU: 01:11:974 no to all of that
17:41 toloveruu: I changed all of the red tick sliders
17:41 toloveruu: no worries
17:42 LexiaLovesU: ok then thats all for easy
17:42 toloveruu: The normal and hard are guest diffs
17:45 LexiaLovesU: pls make the diffs their names
17:46 toloveruu: I added it
17:46 toloveruu: In the thread
17:47 LexiaLovesU: NOOOOO
17:48 LexiaLovesU: THE DIFFS HAVE THE MY person's normal
17:48 LexiaLovesU: and be
17:48 LexiaLovesU: person's hard
17:50 toloveruu: I checked with a bat
17:50 toloveruu: and its fine
17:50 LexiaLovesU: thats weird
17:55 LexiaLovesU: i like insane
17:55 toloveruu: Thanks
17:58 LexiaLovesU: its great
17:58 toloveruu: Thank you
17:58 LexiaLovesU: i dont mod guest diffs so thats all
17:59 toloveruu: Oh okay then
17:59 toloveruu: Thanks for the mod ^^
17:59 LexiaLovesU: nice map just need to work on the easy
18:00 toloveruu: Alrighty
18:00 LexiaLovesU: ill post this on the thread

1. 00:58:912 (3) - move more to the left to have a nicer curve from 1 to 2 to 3, the movement feels less abrupt that way
2. 01:00:545 (4,1) - there is no connection at all ><
3. 01:03:810 (3,4) - movement from 3 to 4 doen't feel as smooth as for example 00:09:933 (3,4,1) or 01:15:239 (1,2)
4. 01:05:443 (1,2,3) - if you don't place them linear but slightly curvy this does have a smoother feeling as well, it matches better with the sliders before and after imo
5. 01:08:708 (1) - looks better if you keep that 'perfect distance' here and place the slidertail at a distance of 1,1 to 01:07:076 (4) as well
   something similar here - 01:11:157 (3) - place it either around 384|172 or at the end of 01:10:341 (2) around 452|236

1. 00:25:443 (2,3) - together those two look.. so unmatching. x:
   maybe move it to 456|288? looks better imo ><
2. 00:31:157 (1) - I know this is the exact same shape as 00:29:525 (4) but cause it's shorter it looks like there's something missing. >:
3. 01:03:810 (3,4,5,1) - form a curve with all of them? 1 looks 'excluded' atm

1. 00:13:606 (2,3) - bend them in the other directions? looks better if they create a path imo.
2. 00:16:055 (4,5) - have a nicer feeling if you move them to (example) 72|288 and 160|288, cause it forms a zigzag pattern with the sliders before and after (and I like that.. )
   I know 00:17:280 (2) isn't at the same place as 00:16:259 (5) then, but it still looks nice. ;o;
3. 00:22:586 (4,5) - similar thing here if you move them to 344|236 and 286|153
4. 00:41:361 (2) - you could reverse this. (not to add extra jumps but it looks nice if two sliders from oppsoite direction move to the same spot.. or at least I think so. |D)
5. 00:47:484 (1,2,3) -
   create a triangle pattern? ;o;

   
   looks nice imo, it messes up the following though.. you could move 00:48:912 (5) to where 00:47:892 (2) starts, then it'd kinda has a similar style, buuuut Idk. x:

1. 00:06:055 (5,7) - move 5 to 76|180 and 7 to 96|88 ? the curve that's created with 00:06:259 (6) and 00:06:667 (1) looks smoother that way
2. 00:20:137 (7) - doesn't have the same distance to 00:20:443 (8) and 00:19:831 (6) .. move to 156|80?
   sorry, I notice some pixel inregularities by eye and just have to point that out. my kind of perfectionism. x:
   same here - 01:27:076 (3) - move to 296|40?
3. 00:37:688 (1,2,3) - you've been using three sliders of the same kind (angular/curvy) up till now, why not here? .o.

Squirrel wrote:

hellow. :3
I don't think I can do much, cause all difficulties look great already, but I'll try. >o<

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this diff's totally fine as well. ► Thanksie~ D: nuffin to mod here, just soething cause of personal taste:

1. 00:25:443 (2,3) - together those two look.. so unmatching. x: ► Since make axial symmetry without jumps is impossible...
   maybe move it to 456|288? looks better imo ><
2. 00:31:157 (1) - I know this is the exact same shape as 00:29:525 (4) but cause it's shorter it looks like there's something missing. >: ► but looks fine ~.~ it was by purpose.
3. 01:03:810 (3,4,5,1) - form a curve with all of them? 1 looks 'excluded' atm ► The (1) is part of a 1/2 triplet here, while I saw the intended integration you wanted here (Ctrl-G the (3) and move (1,2) to the other tail?), however flow would get hurt ><

EDIT WITH HARD/INSANE COMING TOMORROW sorry! orz

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From in-game req
sry for my late mod.
Here are some suggestions. And here is some issue to fix I think.

General
Really good map and song.just some suggtions. good bg but is it not suitable for kids?= = > the TV, radio and most of Web is actually not suitable to Kids...at least not to that ones at 1950's but it seems nicely suitable to 21st century ones due to some revolution thanks to Dr. Spock, Dr. Kinsey, Ms. Sanger and other proeminent people of last century. Then...kept

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good normal. but is it ok to set blanket in the beginning of the song? i don't like the beat here and it breaks the whole beats. > I'm not sure about but...at least it let me mind that song... Demetori - Eastern Dream, mapped by jonathanlfj and approved (it's ~10 minutes~ long). Seriously, I would map it for ranking with a Normal/Hard spread ~.~

That's my suggestions. here's my star~. .

Giralda wrote:

Mod Request from PM.
I apologize for the delay. Studying for midterms can be pretty crazy sometimes. >3<

fanboying box

RO-KYU-BU! ~~
this BG is gonna make me nosebleed. >///<
omg KOTOKO wrote the lyrics for this <3

Everything listed are just suggestions, unless stated otherwise. You are welcome choose whether or not to take any suggestions ~

[General]
Tags: Add "anime" to tags ► Added.

Set Widescreenstoryboard to 0 for Easy and Insane - not a big deal, but if there is no storyboard there shouldn't be a reason for this to be at 1. Alternatively, you can change this in Editor Mode under Song Setup -> Design Tab -> Uncheck Widescreen Support ► Changed to 0 in my diff too (:

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00:09:933 (3) - Could look at lot nicer if you rotate selection center by 15 degrees clockwise, and distance snap 00:10:749 (4) to blanket with it, then rotate 00:11:157 (5) by 25 degrees clockwise using selection center as origin, and then dist. snap. Would look something like this.

SPOILER

► Nice idea thanks ^^
00:44:831 - I think if you add a note here, and move the slider to start at 00:45:035 it would fit the music pretty nicely. ► Ok
01:07:076 (5) - remove clap on the repeat arrow and move it to the slider end. it sounds a little bit awkward and doesn't fit music that well there. ► Sure.
01:25:137 (1) - add finish on spinner ► Added.

Pretty good difficulty. ► Thanksie~

Everything else seems good. Good luck and I apologize for the long wait.

Now to sit in my room and stuff my face in another 1000 page textbook...orz

And also, 100th post. <3 ► Congratz~

Alarido wrote:

@Giralda :: Thanks! and send reminds to jlfj too ^^ (well I could call him to mod this ofc)

1. 00:26:259 (2) - I'd move it more to the left so new players won't do any weird moves.
2. 00:29:116 - A beat here sounds pretty well and it changes a pattern which started to be boring
3. 01:23:402 (1) - I'd delete this new combo and keep 4/5 notes per combo like you did before.

1. 00:47:484 (1) - This slider should be flipped, it would flow better. This is how it should be, if you change you probably have to rearrange current pattern
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:23:606 (3) - Flows better if moved a bit to the left.
2. 00:57:586 (2,3,4) - Seems exaggerated, try to reduce spacing between them (at least 0.20)
3. 01:01:463 (4) - I'd say a new combo is really needed here due slider velocity change

HabiHolic wrote:

From Your IRC Reqs

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01:05:035 (1,2) - We recommend that you do not overlap ► well, I'm fine with this... and still basically easier stacked ones than spreaded ones (moving the mouse through the screen while clicking still harder than clicking the same place, especially for a mouse-only player). And also it's hard to find space for 3 notes using DS due to patterns yet solidified. Kept.
01:08:300 (1,2) - ^ ► ^
01:10:341 (6) - NC ► Ok
01:11:565 (1) - Remove NC ► Ok
01:11:974 (2) - NC ► Nice NC patterns ok ^^

Not bad~ Good map~ ► Thanks ^^

GL~

Giralda wrote:

Alarido wrote:

@Giralda :: Thanks! and send reminds to jlfj too ^^ (well I could call him to mod this ofc)

No problem~
I'll try to remind him if I catch him in game tonight xD (assuming you haven't done so already)

ts8zs wrote:

[Insane]
00:00:137 (1) - spinner end at 00:01:770 - Applied
00:04:423 - 1/2 slider No thanks
00:22:790 (1) - blanket Already is a blanket
>00:23:606 (3) - copy from 1It is copied. I just did Ctrl+H, J, and G.
00:24:627 (2) - blanket Already is
00:40:545 (5) - Ctrl+G Applied
>00:40:953 (1) - Ctrl+G Its fine
00:42:586 (1) - Ctrl+G It's better how it is imo
00:43:402 (3) - Ctrl+G ^
01:21:055 - 1/2slider It's fine

[Easy]
01:06:259 (3) - blanket It already is a blanket.

ts8zs wrote:

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00:18:096 (1) - End at 00:20:443 - ► Done.
01:08:504 (2) - remove ► Yes, removed. And removed 01:05:239 (2) - too for consistency (:

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi from your req ~

[General]

1. Redline at 00:00:137 - , since you have spin in Hard and Insane from here.

[Easy]

1. 00:29:525(3) - set a blanket like this ?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:19:831(6,7,8) - finish? like you do at 01:26:769(2,3,4) - ?
2. 00:42:586(1,2) - I think symmetry with 00:41:769(3,4) - will be great , you can try it , but if it's hard to fix continue , ignore it.
3. 00:44:627(3) - miss clap?
4. 00:50:341(3) - ^
5. 00:49:729(4) - This note is not fix with overlapping I think. It don't have vocal or drum to make people attention I think the stack here is fine.

Nice!
Good luck for rank!

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi from your req ~

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1. 00:46:259 - maybe add a note here? ► It's a small stop moment on the song, then I can't do ><

Great!

Nice!
Good luck for rank!

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi~ Simple mod.

Easy:

00:26:259 (2) - Check spacing.
00:38:912 (2) - 1 grid up.
00:58:504 (2) - Missing a clap.
01:08:708 (1) - Adding a Finish at the head will be nice.

Insane:

00:02:382 (1,2,3,4) - The distance was hard for me to distinct the rhythm. Also, the large jump felt quite stressful as a start of a map. Suggest to reduce the spacing of (1,2,3).
00:03:708 (2) - Check spacing if you care.
00:10:239 (2) - ^
00:17:586 (2) - ^
00:12:790 (5) - The current flow to 00:12:790 (5) didn't felt nice. Rather something like ctrl+G will be better, although the jump disappears.
00:19:729 (5) - New combo, because it feels like a new part. Also, it may make the rhythm easier to read.
00:27:484 (4) - Delete the whistle at the end. It could be your intention, but I just felt like a spam. Also, there weren't other parts like this.
01:00:545 (1,2,3) - Reduce spacing please. The spacing is too large, which disturbs reading the speed reduce of 01:01:463 (1).
01:08:708 (1) - Reducing 1/4 would feel more natural, but fine to keep if you want to follow the lyric. I think I'll keep following the lyrics.
01:12:483 (4) - I'd suggest you to delete this, and add a note in 01:12:381. Since you were ignoring a strong beat there, the rhythm selection you've made was a bit difficult.
01:21:157 (4,5) - Consider re-patterning here. The jump at (3,4) didn't felt nice when playing.

I think you've got potential. Good luck with the map :3

smallboat wrote:

Hello,toloveruu.
As in-game req. I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

I think GD should add mapper's name. Now most of them have added names. I've checked on this with a BAT before, it's fine how it is.

[Easy]

I think the slider end have a bit large sound, suggestion volume turn down. (40~45% is better.) True, but I think I'll stay with it for now ><
as 00:03:402 (2) - and 00:05:035 (1) - to listen the end is a bit strange.

00:26:259 (2) -Why is 1.2x? Not 1.1x?
01:22:586 (2) - I suggest don"t cover the 01:20:953 (4) -is good pattern.

[Insane] Try to mute slider end voice? (Especially the part attached) Once again i'll keep it how it is for now ><

00:02:790 (3,4) - Bad flow.
Because you look, click 3 to 4 , click again to go back 00:03:402 (1) , it will not be smooth.
So,I suggest 00:02:790 (3,4) - Ctrl +g , (2) move to (328|176) , is ok.

00:03:402 (1,2,3) - A bit noise in slider end.
00:04:626 - Have rhythm , try to place?
00:06:259 (6) - It can with 00:06:055 (5,7) - to do symmetry.
00:09:933 (1,2,3) - A bit noise in slider end.
00:11:565 (1,2,3) - ^
00:13:198 (1,2) - ^
00:14:423 (5,6,7,8) - Radians out. ?
00:15:647 (3,6) - Can be 00:15:851 (4,5) - to do symmetry.
00:16:463 (1,2) - A bit noise in slider end.
00:26:259 (1) - Equilateral triangle. I like the slider how it is atm ><
00:27:484 (4) - Remove slider end whistle.
00:33:912 (3) - Pretty strange protruding.
00:45:035 (5) - This crooked off. It's not crooked ><
01:03:810 (1,2,3) - A bit noise in slider end.
01:23:402 (1) - Test book into an arc? I like it how it is

[Other]

1.If you have any mod questions, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.Can M4M?

smallboat wrote:

Hello,toloveruu.
As in-game req. I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

I think GD should add mapper's name. Now most of them have added names. ► Well, I'm fine with the current names ~.~ under toloveruu's will I am.


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00:36:872 (6) -Use slider head stack the 00:34:831 (2) . ► Done. ..... just I feel did something further modders may complaint with orz
00:51:157 (1) - Rotate (-15 scale)(select Anti-clock and selection centre) blanket the 00:50:341 (4) - ? ► Yes, done the 15º and further added +3º in same direction to correct
00:54:014 (1) - Move down (172|280) to become arc. ► The head already makes an arc within (3,4,5,1,2). Moving anything here would unblanket (1) with (2), so kept.
00:58:708 (3) - DS ► Fixed.
01:02:178 (1) - DS ► Fixed, thanks ^^
01:10:341 (1) - Can blanket 01:09:933 (4) . ► Done, and moved 1 further notes a bit to adjust DS

1. I'm quite questioned about the use of soft-sliderslide3. Do you really need it?
2. Enabling Widescreen Support isn't necessary as there is no storyboards present on this map. Please consider disabling it.

1. Optional suggestion, but I recommend to set the Overall Difficulty to 2 so the OD spread between the other difficulties remains consistent.
2. 00:18:096 (1) - Consider ending this spinner at 00:20:443 (1) since the synths ends here. Similar to what you did in the last spinner. If suggested, remember to adjust the timing section at 00:20:545 if necessary.
3. 00:27:892 (1) - I can hear a soft cymbal sound at the head of this slider. It would be nice if you can emphasize it the a soft-finish (at a lower volume maybe) at the start of this slider.
4. 00:44:218 (1) - Optional suggestion, but you can alternatively replace this slider with a spinner ending at the same spot as the current slider. This is so the combos afterwards will be more consistent with the vocal lines. :3
5. 00:52:382 (2) - About this slider, the green timing section at 00:53:198 causes the sliderslide sound to mute (You can check this by simply going to View > Voulme and set the music to 0%). To fix this issue, you have to first set the hitsound volume back to 60% for that timing section. If you want a silenced slider tick, then add a muted soft-slidertick4 (or normal-slidertick4) file in your map folder and set the sample to be S:C4 or N:C4 for that timing section. That's the only way to fix this issue.

1. Alarido's Normal is very well-mapped and well-structured. Excellent job on the design. Nothing much to really point out.
2. Did Alarido made this difficulty? If so, consider re-naming the difficulty to Alarido's Normal. I'm fully aware that you added one in the map description, but it's easier to know who made each difficulty.
3. 00:20:953 (1) - Why is this timing section here, when you are not even using it? Consider removing this timing section.
4. 00:24:627 (1,3) - It would be nice if you add timing sections at the slidertick of these sliders to manipulate the sound of the slidertick to sound like your claps. Of course this is optional. :3
5. 00:35:239 (1) - This new combo is not necessary as the notes are following the same vocal sections. Consider removing this combo.

1. Simliar to Normal, did iyasine made this difficulty? If so, consider re-naming the difficulty to iyasine's Hard. Again, I'm aware that you added one in the map description, but it's easier to know who made each difficulty.
2. 00:01:770 (1,2) - This pattern can be somewhat confusing for some players because of the next slider is stacked with the end of the previous slider and it's 1/2 beats apart (instead of 1/4 beats apart) from each other. Try reverse selecting slider 2 for a better readability. However, if you don't like my suggestion, feel free to keep it as it is still playable.
3. 00:16:463 (1,2) - Personally, I prefer if both of these sliders ware the same, to indicate that both of these sliders are emphasizing the same musical pattern. Try copy-pasting 00:16:463 (1) with the next slider. Similar concept as what you did at the next musical section at 00:18:096 (1,2,3,4). An alternate way to do is that you can blanket 00:17:280 (2) with 00:16:055 (4) for a more polished slider pattern.
4. 00:36:871 (3) - This timing section is the main reason I was questioned about the use of soft-sliderslide3. Do you really need this file? It sounds exactly the same as the previous timing section and you didn't use it for anything. I would remove this timing section including the one at 00:37:280.
5. 00:44:218 (1,2,1) - This pattern is not a nice way to end the vocal sections. A better way to end this vocal section is to add a note here (or an extra 1/1 slider, possibly copy-pasting the previous slider) and start the spinner at 00:45:034 instead (ending at the same spot as the current spinner).
6. 00:47:892 (2,3) - Eh, rather than using a linear slider at 00:47:892 (2), it would be better to curve this slider to create an oval-flow slider pattern. Here is an example:
   
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   456,168,47892,2,0,P|480:132|483:91,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   332,16,48300,2,0,P|308:52|305:93,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7. 01:02:178 - 01:27:381 (2): The contrast is inconsistent during this kiai section as the hitsound voulmes varies from 50% to 70% at parts when the music did not call for it. It would be better to just set all the volumes to around 70% ~ 80%. It would also sound more lively if you use N:C1 or N:C2 claps instead, but that's up to you. :3

1. 00:00:137 (1) - Optional, but I prefer if you end this spinner at 00:01:361 and start the song with a note at 00:01:769. My main reason for this suggestion was to be consistent with Hard difficulty (similar to how Easy and Normal was consistent when the first note was placed at this same spot).
2. 00:27:892 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy. "I can hear a soft cymbal sound at the head of this slider. It would be nice if you can emphasize it the a soft-finish (at a lower volume maybe) at the start of this slider."
3. 00:28:708 (4,5,1) - This flow feels awkward because of this slider at 00:29:321 (1). Consider reverse selecting this slider for a better flow with the surrounding notes. Also, about this linear slider at 00:28:708 (4), I would curve this slider upward and adjust accordingly for a better transition with the next notes. Here is an example of what you can do:
   
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4. 01:20:137 (1,2,3) - Ewww! This pattern feels very awkward, because of the way you overlapped with the next note. Consider angling the next slider a few degrees clockwise to improve flow and readability with this pattern. If suggested, you may have to re-adjust slider 3 accordingly.

BeatofIke wrote:

[General]

1. I'm quite questioned about the use of soft-sliderslide3. Do you really need it?
2. Enabling Widescreen Support isn't necessary as there is no storyboards present on this map. Please consider disabling it.

[Normal]

1. Alarido's Normal is very well-mapped and well-structured. Excellent job on the design. Nothing much to really point out. ► Thanks ^^
2. Did Alarido made this difficulty? If so, consider re-naming the difficulty to Alarido's Normal. I'm fully aware that you added one in the map description, but it's easier to know who made each difficulty. ► nice... it's up to mapset's owner (@toloveruu: feel free to rename my diff (: )
3. 00:20:953 (1) - Why is this timing section here, when you are not even using it? Consider removing this timing section. ► Sure.
4. 00:24:627 (1,3) - It would be nice if you add timing sections at the slidertick of these sliders to manipulate the sound of the slidertick to sound like your claps. Of course this is optional. :3 ► Nice :3 (@toloveruu: please add this file to map's folder → http://puu.sh/52i85.zip )
5. 00:35:239 (1) - This new combo is not necessary as the notes are following the same vocal sections. Consider removing this combo. ► Ok.

Good map overall. There are some work to be done, but please don't give up! Just keep up with the mods and your map will be ranked before you know it! ^_^

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[Normal]
00:07:076 (3) - Remove this to match the previous rhythm ► Nice ^^
00:09:116 (2) - Rotate 45degree anti-clockwise, this flow is better imo ► Done as you said.... ....and after testing, rotated 25° clockwise, better flow and connection (especially for DT players).

00:40:545 (6,7,1) - This triple stack kinda break the flow imo ► Not necessarily a flow break, it's more likely a flow stop (like a bus along its path). It feels no enough space to 'spread' the notes (like in a small 1/2 stream) too. Kept in a while.
01:24:218 (4,5,1) - Maybe something like this will be better ► It seems you have an outdated version of the diff (as you might downloaded at right time when the map was moved into pendings area). For example, usually I download the map right before modding. Don't need worry :3 if you already downloaded a map, you can update it by clicking in a pulsating text at the left of the selected diff (when playing or editing).

01:25:034 (5) - If you are following the ^ mod, add a finish here ► Although not followed that mod, finish added here, thanks ^^