Mimori Suzuko - Univer Page (TV Size) · forum

AppLoad

AppLoad 2013-10-19T14:31:36+00:00

Good map =)

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-10-19T15:05:26+00:00

DUN DUN DUN...

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-10-19T15:34:50+00:00

okay, seems its better to have a quick mod~

General

Please disable countdown and the letterbox during breaks

Awaken's Easy

00:10:758 (1,2) - distance isnt correct, you should consider that newbies will be confused and get missed here. Try to keep the distance snapped and it will be better for newbies to play, if I were you, I would have tried to place it on the right hand side instead
00:17:175 (3) - I guess a whistle is missed at the tail since you added one at 00:22:309 (3) -
00:42:202 (2,3) - personally, you stacked (2) at (3)'s tail, newbies will be misclicked (2) as a slider and failed to catch slider (3), try not to stack it like this, move 00:42:683 (3) a bit is better imo, moreover, you may add a NC here to notice the 1/2 beat, here is an example for you :
SPOILER
01:01:774 - it is better to remove this useless inherited green line
01:21:346 (3,1) - how about twist a better blanket? Dont forget to snap 01:23:432 (2) - if you take it :
SPOILER

Normal

00:22:309 (3,4) - have you tried to place slider like what you did at 00:17:175 (3,4) - ? This rhythm is better imo!
01:11:079 (3) - for me, melody seems to be changed, its better to have a NC here

Hard

00:33:218 (5) - NC seems to be more readable, but its up to you
00:42:523 (4) - just a little suggestion, look, I love what you did a stop-and-jump in 00:40:918 (6,7,1) -, sooo, you can stack 00:42:202 (3,4) - for a stop-and-jump again, it will be much more fun imo

Insane

00:21:025 (1) - if you wanna have a blanket, try to move the last anchor one grid to right
00:31:934 (3) - hmm, I guess this is a strong Beat and it feels empty without a NC
00:32:576 (1) - missing a finish maybe?
as fun as always

Keep going Fy-chan <3
support you

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Fycho 2013-10-19T15:52:22+00:00

happy623 wrote:
okay, seems its better to have a quick mod~

General
Please disable countdown and the letterbox during breaksok~;w;

Normal
00:22:309 (3,4) - have you tried to place slider like what you did at 00:17:175 (3,4) - ? This rhythm is better imo! It will be a mess and I lke the rhythm before:>
01:11:079 (3) - for me, melody seems to be changed, its better to have a NC hereok

Hard
00:33:218 (5) - NC seems to be more readable, but its up to you ok
00:42:523 (4) - just a little suggestion, look, I love what you did a stop-and-jump in 00:40:918 (6,7,1) -, sooo, you can stack 00:42:202 (3,4) - for a stop-and-jump again, it will be much more fun imo no,I think it's fine now

Insane
00:21:025 (1) - if you wanna have a blanket, try to move the last anchor one grid to rightok
00:31:934 (3) - hmm, I guess this is a strong Beat and it feels empty without a NCno,it's not good imo,and it doesn't feel empty
00:32:576 (1) - missing a finish maybe?changed whistle to finish
as fun as always

Keep going Fy-chan <3
support you

thank you for modding~I will update when next bat comes

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-10-19T16:05:30+00:00

Fycho wrote:
thank you for modding~I will update when next bat comes

If you're planning to do some changes, never wait for a BAT or anything and just go straight and apply them.

Popping this for now, get 2-3 more mods and call me back so I'll mod this as well for a rebubble.

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-10-19T16:28:51+00:00

happy623 wrote:
Awaken's Easy
00:10:758 (1,2) - distance isnt correct, you should consider that newbies will be confused and get missed here. Try to keep the distance snapped and it will be better for newbies to play, if I were you, I would have tried to place it on the right hand side instead ok fixed
00:17:175 (3) - I guess a whistle is missed at the tail since you added one at 00:22:309 (3) - yep fixed
00:42:202 (2,3) - personally, you stacked (2) at (3)'s tail, newbies will be misclicked (2) as a slider and failed to catch slider (3), try not to stack it like this, move 00:42:683 (3) a bit is better imo, moreover, you may add a NC here to notice the 1/2 beat, here is an example for you : fixed
SPOILER
01:01:774 - it is better to remove this useless inherited green line No.It's for removing the kiai.The music has a empty beat here.
01:21:346 (3,1) - how about twist a better blanket? Dont forget to snap 01:23:432 (2) - if you take it : umm..Maybe I should understand what you mean .w. fixed~
SPOILER

这是去掉countdown和letterbox之后的

osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 51824
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SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
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Title:Univer Page (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ユニバーページ (TV Size)
Artist:Mimori Suzuko
ArtistUnicode:三森すずこ
Creator:Fycho
Version:Awaken's Easy
Source:アウトブレイク・カンパニー
Tags:Awaken Outbreak Company opening
BeatmapID:314587
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CircleSize:3
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Kodora

Kodora 2013-10-20T08:11:26+00:00

It was IRCmod for Fycho's diffs

10:06 Kodora: well map looks very clean for me, maybe just some minor things... wanna ircmod?
10:07 Kodora: Fycho
10:08 Fycho: okok
10:08 Fycho: good:3
10:08 Fycho: and post to forum then
10:08 Kodora: nice!
10:08 Kodora: sure
10:08 Kodora: well
10:09 Kodora: first of all, it needs custom audio lead-in
10:09 Kodora: 1500 in all diffs please
10:09 Fycho: now lead-in is auto
10:09 Fycho: no need we set by ourselves
10:09 Kodora: kk
10:09 *Kodora is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/312770 Mimori Suzuko - Univer Page (TV Size) [Insane]]
10:10 Kodora: 00:00:491 (1) - shorten this to 00:02:736 - so players will have enough time to react at next slider
10:11 Kodora: 00:38:672 (4,5,1) - consistent spacing would be better here imo
10:11 Fycho: this is insane so I think 1/2 is ok;w;
10:12 Fycho: ok
10:12 Kodora: nono it's ok, actually new part of music begins at 00:02:736 -
10:13 Kodora: 00:51:667 (5,6,1) - little inconsistent spacing in stream
10:13 Kodora: will bug with hr
10:14 Kodora: 01:07:228 (1,2,3) - spacing
10:14 Fycho: 62
10:14 Fycho: ok
10:15 Kodora: 01:17:175 (3) - could go with nc
10:15 Fycho: 01:17:335 (1) -
10:15 Fycho: but I nc here too
10:16 Kodora: just for new part of music tho
10:17 *Kodora is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/314155 Mimori Suzuko - Univer Page (TV Size) [Hard]]
10:18 Fycho: kk
10:18 Kodora: really great hard diff
10:19 Kodora: maybe change stack leniency here to 0.4-0.5? just because some patterns like 00:24:073 (2,3,4,1) - looks ugly with high stack leniency
10:19 Kodora: it wont affect gameplay much, just to fix those patterns
10:20 Fycho: ok
10:21 Kodora: 00:32:897 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - can you please replace all this notes with 3 1/2 sliders?
10:21 Kodora: it will cover music better and will feels less intense
10:23 Fycho: sorry I prefer 1/2note here:3
10:24 Kodora: well ok, really not a big deal
10:26 Fycho: =.=
10:26 Kodora: 01:06:426 (2,2,3) - stacking lol
10:27 Fycho: can stack leniency be consistent in all diffs
10:27 Fycho: should*
10:27 Kodora: nope
10:29 *Kodora is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/314156 Mimori Suzuko - Univer Page (TV Size) [Normal]]
10:29 Kodora: i hate cs3 but it's just my personal preferense
10:29 Kodora: rest is fine
10:29 Fycho: 0.0
10:30 Fycho: but CS3 is better in this normal BPM=187
10:31 Kodora: SV is very slow so it's just impossible to miss with 4
10:31 Fycho: SV=1.2,BUT BPM is not low
10:31 Fycho: so sliders are not slow
10:32 Kodora: well i have some suggestions for easy so i'll attach them in post
10:32 Fycho: okay~
10:32 Fycho: EZ need more mod imo
10:32 Kodora: yes
10:33 Fycho: >w<

[Awaken's Easy]

Well, in general this diff looks a bit too tricky for an Easy. Overlapped patterns and stacks are not friendly for beginners, and better avoid them as much as possible. Beginners are bad at reading, so better just keep placement clean.

00:12:683 (3,1) - Yes, noticeable spacing issue. Also, stacking with end of slider might be confusing for beginners anyway. Unstack it please.
00:16:854 (2,4) - Tiny stacking issue. It looks clean here, so i guess this stack is intentional.
00:21:025 (1) - I would really not recommend you hide anything in easiest diffs. Yes, this slider looks cool, but placement may looks too tricky (even Normal have no patterns like this). Please, unstack it from 00:19:742 (3) -
00:23:592 (1) - Move red anchorpoint to x296y232 to have perfect blanket here
00:28:405 (3,1) - Yes. Don't stack anything in easiest diffs please.
00:34:501 (1,2,3) - I'd suggest follow background music here at hitsounds. Remove claps & whistles & set finishes here - sounds better, imo.
00:36:426 (1) - also might add finish here to emphazire vocals? If you will do this, then add 00:37:710 (3) - for consistency
00:41:400 (1) - Sounds pretty mismatched to the vocals. Try to start this slider at 00:41:239 - and end at current position.
00:42:683 (1) - Same, follow vocals it should starts at 00:42:523 -
01:00:170 (4,5) - Try something like this?

SPOILER
01:05:945 (3) - Move it a bit up please, it almost goes offscreen

Take star and good luck, awesome map~

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-10-20T09:20:14+00:00

Kodora wrote:
It was IRCmod for Fycho's diffs
10:06 Kodora: well map looks very clean for me, maybe just some minor things... wanna ircmod?
10:07 Kodora: Fycho
10:08 Fycho: okok
10:08 Fycho: good:3
10:08 Fycho: and post to forum then
10:08 Kodora: nice!
10:08 Kodora: sure
10:08 Kodora: well
10:09 Kodora: first of all, it needs custom audio lead-in
10:09 Kodora: 1500 in all diffs please
10:09 Fycho: now lead-in is auto
10:09 Fycho: no need we set by ourselves
10:09 Kodora: kk
10:09 *Kodora is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/312770 Mimori Suzuko - Univer Page (TV Size) [Insane]]
10:10 Kodora: 00:00:491 (1) - shorten this to 00:02:736 - so players will have enough time to react at next slider
10:11 Kodora: 00:38:672 (4,5,1) - consistent spacing would be better here imo
10:11 Fycho: this is insane so I think 1/2 is ok;w;
10:12 Fycho: ok
10:12 Kodora: nono it's ok, actually new part of music begins at 00:02:736 -
10:13 Kodora: 00:51:667 (5,6,1) - little inconsistent spacing in stream
10:13 Kodora: will bug with hr
10:14 Kodora: 01:07:228 (1,2,3) - spacing
10:14 Fycho: 62
10:14 Fycho: ok
10:15 Kodora: 01:17:175 (3) - could go with nc
10:15 Fycho: 01:17:335 (1) -
10:15 Fycho: but I nc here too
10:16 Kodora: just for new part of music tho
10:17 *Kodora is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/314155 Mimori Suzuko - Univer Page (TV Size) [Hard]]
10:18 Fycho: kk
10:18 Kodora: really great hard diff
10:19 Kodora: maybe change stack leniency here to 0.4-0.5? just because some patterns like 00:24:073 (2,3,4,1) - looks ugly with high stack leniency
10:19 Kodora: it wont affect gameplay much, just to fix those patterns
10:20 Fycho: ok
10:21 Kodora: 00:32:897 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - can you please replace all this notes with 3 1/2 sliders?
10:21 Kodora: it will cover music better and will feels less intense
10:23 Fycho: sorry I prefer 1/2note here:3
10:24 Kodora: well ok, really not a big deal
10:26 Fycho: =.=
10:26 Kodora: 01:06:426 (2,2,3) - stacking lol
10:27 Fycho: can stack leniency be consistent in all diffs
10:27 Fycho: should*
10:27 Kodora: nope
10:29 *Kodora is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/314156 Mimori Suzuko - Univer Page (TV Size) [Normal]]
10:29 Kodora: i hate cs3 but it's just my personal preferense
10:29 Kodora: rest is fine
10:29 Fycho: 0.0
10:30 Fycho: but CS3 is better in this normal BPM=187
10:31 Kodora: SV is very slow so it's just impossible to miss with 4
10:31 Fycho: SV=1.2,BUT BPM is not low
10:31 Fycho: so sliders are not slow
10:32 Kodora: well i have some suggestions for easy so i'll attach them in post
10:32 Fycho: okay~
10:32 Fycho: EZ need more mod imo
10:32 Kodora: yes
10:33 Fycho: >w<

[Awaken's Easy]

Well, in general this diff looks a bit too tricky for an Easy. Overlapped patterns and stacks are not friendly for beginners, and better avoid them as much as possible. Beginners are bad at reading, so better just keep placement clean.

00:12:683 (3,1) - Yes, noticeable spacing issue. Also, stacking with end of slider might be confusing for beginners anyway. Unstack it please. ok
00:16:854 (2,4) - Tiny stacking issue. It looks clean here, so i guess this stack is intentional. ok
00:21:025 (1) - I would really not recommend you hide anything in easiest diffs. Yes, this slider looks cool, but placement may looks too tricky (even Normal have no patterns like this). Please, unstack it from 00:19:742 (3) - think carefully.no.I don't know where to put it on ._.
00:23:592 (1) - Move red anchorpoint to x296y232 to have perfect blanket here another way
00:28:405 (3,1) - Yes. Don't stack anything in easiest diffs please. ok
00:34:501 (1,2,3) - I'd suggest follow background music here at hitsounds. Remove claps & whistles & set finishes here - sounds better, imo. ok
00:36:426 (1) - also might add finish here to emphazire vocals? If you will do this, then add 00:37:710 (3) - for consistency no
00:41:400 (1) - Sounds pretty mismatched to the vocals. Try to start this slider at 00:41:239 - and end at current position.maybe current rhythm is also right?
00:42:683 (1) - Same, follow vocals it should starts at 00:42:523 - ^
01:00:170 (4,5) - Try something like this? no

SPOILER
01:05:945 (3) - Move it a bit up please, it almost goes offscreen ok

Take star and good luck, awesome map~

SPOILER

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Kinomi

1,220 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-10-20T09:50:30+00:00

先mod easy

Awaken's Easy
00:21:025 (1) - 这个遮挡不好，要改了
00:42:202 (2) - 间距把前面那玩意的尾巴拉下一点
00:30:009 (3) - 这个离下面那个滑条太近了，分开一点
01:04:662 (1) - 弧度没拉好，注意一下01:03:378 (3) -
00:37:710 (3) - 这个也是 00:38:993 (1) - 然后这个也要改

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-10-20T10:28:16+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
先mod easy

Awaken's Easy
00:21:025 (1) - 这个遮挡不好，要改了
00:42:202 (2) - 间距把前面那玩意的尾巴拉下一点
00:30:009 (3) - 这个离下面那个滑条太近了，分开一点
01:04:662 (1) - 弧度没拉好，注意一下01:03:378 (3) -
00:37:710 (3) - 这个也是 00:38:993 (1) - 然后这个也要改

都改了不过01:04:662 (1)这个我柑橘怎么拉都拉不好哭哭哦

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Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Fycho 2013-10-20T11:12:35+00:00

updated >.<thanks for mod

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-10-20T12:02:02+00:00

~General~

Source should be "Outbreak Company", make sure to fix this on all of the difficulties.

~Normal~

00:10:437 (5) - Do not stack this circle under the previous sliderend, it's really confusing for a Normal difficulty.
01:21:346 (5) - I'd prefer if you space this slider somewhere else and not stack it with the previous note, it would be better to play imo.

~Hard~

Increase HP Drain and OD by 1 tick, they're way too low right now for a Hard difficulty.

00:04:341 (4,5) - Spacing is too close, make sure to fix this properly.
00:05:624 (1,2) - Same as above, wrong spacing.

~Insane~

Increase HP Drain and OD by 1 tick, they're way too low right now for an Insane difficulty.

00:12:362 (1,2) - I somehow dislike this anti-jump here, move them farther? Would be better to play imo.
01:04:020 (1) - I don't think this new combo here is necessary actually, I'd remove it.
01:14:929 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part might be confusing due to the blue ticks, maybe add some sliders here instead? Just an idea.

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Fycho 2013-10-20T12:17:17+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~General~
Source should be "Outbreak Company", make sure to fix this on all of the difficulties. OK
~Normal~
00:10:437 (5) - Do not stack this circle under the previous sliderend, it's really confusing for a Normal difficulty. ok，removed stack
01:21:346 (5) - I'd prefer if you space this slider somewhere else and not stack it with the previous note, it would be better to play imo.^
~Hard~
Increase HP Drain and OD by 1 tick, they're way too low right now for a Hard difficulty.OD6 and HP6 fit hard diff imo.If changed to OD7 and HP7 the diff spread will be worse then.
00:04:341 (4,5) - Spacing is too close, make sure to fix this properly.fixed
00:05:624 (1,2) - Same as above, wrong spacing.fixed
~Insane~
Increase HP Drain and OD by 1 tick, they're way too low right now for an Insane difficulty.OD7 and HP7 fit me better.I don't like OD8 maybe I am noob in playing x.x
00:12:362 (1,2) - I somehow dislike this anti-jump here, move them farther? Would be better to play imo.ok
01:04:020 (1) - I don't think this new combo here is necessary actually, I'd remove it.ok
01:14:929 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part might be confusing due to the blue ticks, maybe add some sliders here instead? Just an idea.I think this is fine now.so I keep this;_;using sliders will break the pattern and rhythm imo

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-10-20T12:36:22+00:00

Okay this is much better already and the map has got enough mods to go.

Re-Bubbled~

happy623

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happy623 2013-10-20T12:39:01+00:00

gogogo Fycho~!

YoshinoSakura

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YoshinoSakura 2013-10-20T12:43:55+00:00

happy623 wrote:
gogogo Fycho~!

Awaken

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Awaken 2013-10-21T03:57:55+00:00

happy623 wrote:
gogogo Fycho~!

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-10-21T10:10:57+00:00

happy623 wrote:
gogogo Fycho~!

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-10-21T13:11:06+00:00

Mapper fixed tags and some missing finishes on Normal and Easy.

Bubble Repair~

Kodora

Kodora 2013-10-21T17:03:33+00:00

happy623 wrote:
gogogo Fycho~!

Maboyu

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Maboyu 2013-10-22T10:04:10+00:00

happy623 wrote:
gogogo Fycho~!

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-10-27T06:07:12+00:00

Unizer page

Awaken's Easy
00:12:041 (2) - NC perhaps. I know it's far away enough that it could escape distance snap but adding this NC can distinguish that just in case
01:07:228 (1) - Finish on head maybe, matches the finish pattern in this section and will introduce this new measure nicely imo~
01:23:432 (2,3) - Try this rhythm instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062875 or something similar. Right now, 01:24:073 (3) - sounds misleading being started in the silence with that whistle on its head

Normal
00:49:261 (1) - Try ending this spinner at 00:50:384 instead and turning the note into a slider: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062891 Gives players more leniency with a slider rather than a note that might catch beginners off-guard coming out of the spinner
01:07:228 (1) - same as Easy, Finish on head to match this section's hitsound pattern?
01:10:437 (2) - you could blanket this around (1) better if you like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062907 Offline: Fycho
01:18:779 (3,4) - I'd try using a single slider like 01:21:346 (5) - the 1/2 seemed a bit funny being the only one like that

Hard
01:23:432 (3) - you could stack this on the head of (5) for a little jump here to emphasize the finish here would be cool imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062916 The stack's rhythm may be hard to read because of the little rhythm switch there atm

Insane
01:25:036 (5) - NC? then delete NC on next note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062933 to match up pairs of notes i guess xD

nice map, call me back

Fycho

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Fycho 2013-10-27T06:20:44+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
Unizer page

Awaken's Easy
00:12:041 (2) - NC perhaps. I know it's far away enough that it could escape distance snap but adding this NC can distinguish that just in case ok
01:07:228 (1) - Finish on head maybe, matches the finish pattern in this section and will introduce this new measure nicely imo~ ok
01:23:432 (2,3) - Try this rhythm instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062875 or something similar. Right now, 01:24:073 (3) - sounds misleading being started in the silence with that whistle on its head ok

Normal
00:49:261 (1) - Try ending this spinner at 00:50:384 instead and turning the note into a slider: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062891 Gives players more leniency with a slider rather than a note that might catch beginners off-guard coming out of the spinner ok><
01:07:228 (1) - same as Easy, Finish on head to match this section's hitsound pattern?yea~
01:10:437 (2) - you could blanket this around (1) better if you like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062907 Offline: FychoLOLLL,fixed
01:18:779 (3,4) - I'd try using a single slider like 01:21:346 (5) - the 1/2 seemed a bit funny being the only one like that yea~fixed

Hard
01:23:432 (3) - you could stack this on the head of (5) for a little jump here to emphasize the finish here would be cool imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062916 The stack's rhythm may be hard to read because of the little rhythm switch there atm nice idea~

Insane
01:25:036 (5) - NC? then delete NC on next note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062933 to match up pairs of notes i guess xD I use nc at 1 because it is at big white tick,if changed it will be a mess ,and this is a stronge beat imo，so no change this sorry xD

nice map, call me back