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Mimori Suzuko - Univer Page (TV Size)

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Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
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Fycho
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年10月27日 at 14:54:59

Artist: Mimori Suzuko
Title: Univer Page (TV Size)
Source: Outbreak Company
Tags: Awaken opening アウトブレイク・カンパニー feel
BPM: 187
Filesize: 8699kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Awaken's Easy (3.14 stars, 105 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 236 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 365 notes)
  4. Normal (4.29 stars, 139 notes)
Download: Mimori Suzuko - Univer Page (TV Size)
Download: Mimori Suzuko - Univer Page (TV Size) (no video)
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#11
Univer Page
~萌萌侵略者(outbreak company)~♪アウトブレイク・カンパニー~opening~♪
Easy——Awaken
Last edited by Fycho , edited 25 times in total.
Spring Roll
230 posts
Joined April 2013
Spring Roll
mod from game PM~

[Normal]

..Nice diff xD


[Hard]
00:09:474 (4,6) - 要么包一下要么不要重合吧。。
00:38:672 (8,1) - ^
00:33:218 (5) - NC
00:46:052 (3) - 还是和4stack起来好点吧，hard就不要这么遮了


[Insane]
00:04:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这一块跳着有点别扭，00:06:266 (3) - 以及这个滑条比较难受。前面可以稍微调整下，后面ctrl+G大概好点。。。（不过感觉要改就要改一堆了为了整体流畅的话）
01:12:362 (1) - 感觉会遮住血条，放低点
00:30:330 (2) - Ctrl+G



美丽，比较简短
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[General]
hi
一拳打爆Fycho

[Insane]
00:22:790 (4,5) - 其实我一直觉得这种梗这样放比较酷炫 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1044296
00:41:881 (2) - 我比较喜欢他落在00:42:362 (4) - 这个位置,然后调整00:42:202 (3,4,5) - 的顺序，在00:42:523 (5,1) - 的是顿下来然后按下去的感觉
00:58:245 (1) - 这里有一个前后梗链接的问题，前面你使用了类似纵跳的梗，然后这个滑条作为一个过渡段，我希望下一个跳梗不再是纵跳，不然显得有点怪
00:59:368 (7,1) - 你是没梗了才这么放跳的么

[Hard]
00:31:293 (1) - 这两重音都没click到，感觉不太好
01:16:774 (4) - 滑条尾巴也加上Whistle会Good点

[Other]
你的最低难度呢
我只看到了一个4.28star的难度
G S X
88 posts
Joined August 2012
G S X
[Normal]
00:47:977 (5) - 换这个节奏试试? http://puu.sh/4T2dZ.jpg
01:08:833 (3,5) - 感觉可以去掉这两个Note然后在01:07:870 (2,4,1) - finish
[Hard]
00:26:159 (1,2,3) - 换成一个1/1滑条
01:08:512 (1,2,3) - ^
[Insane]
00:06:908 (1) - 换成一个3/4滑条+circle如何?
00:19:100 (3,4) - 这两个换个顺序吧
00:22:790 (4) - 加个clap?
00:32:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 考虑做个音量渐减?其他两个难度也一样
01:02:095 (1) - 这一段后面可以加点whistle什么的呀
01:17:175 (3) - 这个换成一个减速滑条试试
01:21:346 (1) - 前面加两个circle做三连

基本都是小建议 没什么大问题 GL!
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
from ur req

Insane

  1. 00:22:469 (2) - 删掉怎样？这段钢琴存在感实在太强了，就这么塞满感觉有点怪。如果改的话这片跳的排版可能都要变一下
  2. 00:34:501 (3,4) - 这电子音的连打放过了？感觉加了更爽啊
  3. 00:37:389 (4,5,1,2,3) - 这串我个人觉得，位置不变，顺序换成42153更好，不然稍感别扭
  4. 00:59:528 (1) - 果然还是推荐反向，跳够多了
变ds超多，跳大了也没事，高bpm的特权。

Hard

  1. 00:24:715 (4) - 感觉stack在3上更好
没感觉出来什么，挺好的

Normal

  1. 00:46:694 (1,2,3,4) - 所以说为什么23的ds变了，这是什么新玩法吗
这什么情况？要去speed rank吗？

good luck
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi，Fycho，game-pm，來摸圖幫你+個sp。 speed req。

[General]

同拉克修的Other.
感覺鼓聲音效能再大聲點.

[Normal]

00:25:517 (3,4) - 靠太近了 留個間距? 每個都有空隙這邊那麼窄。
00:35:785 (4,5) - 成個弧形? 這樣不好看
00:33:859 (1,3) - 鼓聲音量太小了可以大一點
00:36:747 (2,4) - ^
00:39:956 (2) - ^

[Hard]

00:08:191 (1) - 應該可以跟前面小跳一下
00:12:683 (2) - 前端f
01:19:742 (5) - 應該可以跟前面小跳一下

[Insane] 我一定打不動這張map 太多遮蓋

00:04:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 從哪學到這種梗..
00:30:330 (2) - 188 116
01:01:934 (6) - 這邊是不是要NC?
01:04:501 (4) - 428 136
01:24:715 (2,3,4,5) - 全選丟到 292 236


[Other]

Hollow Wings wrote:

这什么情况？要去speed rank吗？

good luck

債欠好多還有拉克修和HW..
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho
春卷

Spring Roll wrote:

mod from game PM~



[Hard]
00:09:474 (4,6) - 要么包一下要么不要重合吧。。 不是很理解，这里怎么包？不过现在已经可以
00:38:672 (8,1) - ^
00:33:218 (5) - NC不了，乱
00:46:052 (3) - 还是和4stack起来好点吧，hard就不要这么遮了 就喜欢遮了，这是故意的


[Insane]
00:04:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这一块跳着有点别扭，00:06:266 (3) - 以及这个滑条比较难受。前面可以稍微调整下，后面ctrl+G大概好点。。。（不过感觉要改就要改一堆了为了整体流畅的话）这一块改了
01:12:362 (1) - 感觉会遮住血条，放低点好的
00:30:330 (2) - Ctrl+G不好



美丽，比较简短
拉克修

lkx_Shore wrote:

[General]
hi
一拳打爆Fycho

[Insane]
00:22:790 (4,5) - 其实我一直觉得这种梗这样放比较酷炫 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1044296好的
00:41:881 (2) - 我比较喜欢他落在00:42:362 (4) - 这个位置,然后调整00:42:202 (3,4,5) - 的顺序，在00:42:523 (5,1) - 的是顿下来然后按下去的感觉这差不多，没改
00:58:245 (1) - 这里有一个前后梗链接的问题，前面你使用了类似纵跳的梗，然后这个滑条作为一个过渡段，我希望下一个跳梗不再是纵跳，不然显得有点怪纵向也可以
00:59:368 (7,1) - 你是没梗了才这么放跳的么 什么意思，这里原来改多多次，不过换了个方向

[Hard]
00:31:293 (1) - 这两重音都没click到，感觉不太好这里滑条尾压着重音感觉效果还可以
01:16:774 (4) - 滑条尾巴也加上Whistle会Good点好的

[Other]
你的最低难度呢这不是来了吗
我只看到了一个4.28star的难度
judgement light

judgment light wrote:

[Normal]
00:47:977 (5) - 换这个节奏试试? http://puu.sh/4T2dZ.jpg 好的
01:08:833 (3,5) - 感觉可以去掉这两个Note然后在01:07:870 (2,4,1) - finishKIAI我不喜欢空太多啊
[Hard]
00:26:159 (1,2,3) - 换成一个1/1滑条这里和前面有区别，不太多长滑条了
01:08:512 (1,2,3) - ^^
[Insane]
00:06:908 (1) - 换成一个3/4滑条+circle如何?有点overmap
00:19:100 (3,4) - 这两个换个顺序吧好的
00:22:790 (4) - 加个clap?不了
00:32:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 考虑做个音量渐减?其他两个难度也一样懒改了，其实也没必要，后面音量是加大的
01:02:095 (1) - 这一段后面可以加点whistle什么的呀这里是全clap段不加whistle了
01:17:175 (3) - 这个换成一个减速滑条试试怎么换啊？
01:21:346 (1) - 前面加两个circle做三连这里的停顿和前面是一样的梗，如果三连节奏就不对称了

基本都是小建议 没什么大问题 GL!
HW‘’

Hollow Wings wrote:

from ur req

Insane

  1. 00:22:469 (2) - 删掉怎样？这段钢琴存在感实在太强了，就这么塞满感觉有点怪。如果改的话这片跳的排版可能都要变一下 原先也想过，不过空着太多不好
  2. 00:34:501 (3,4) - 这电子音的连打放过了？感觉加了更爽啊 这里没连打啊
  3. 00:37:389 (4,5,1,2,3) - 这串我个人觉得，位置不变，顺序换成42153更好，不然稍感别扭差不多，没改
  4. 00:59:528 (1) - 果然还是推荐反向，跳够多了好的
变ds超多，跳大了也没事，高bpm的特权。其实我是随机间距流

Hard

  1. 00:24:715 (4) - 感觉stack在3上更好不叠了，这里故意坑人HD的
没感觉出来什么，挺好的

Normal

  1. 00:46:694 (1,2,3,4) - 所以说为什么23的ds变了，这是什么新玩法吗咳咳，不小心手滑了，已改

good luck
小船

smallboat wrote:

Hi，Fycho，game-pm，來摸圖幫你+個sp。 speed req。

[General]

同拉克修的Other.
感覺鼓聲音效能再大聲點. 再大也大不到哪去，现在的也可以

[Normal]

00:25:517 (3,4) - 靠太近了 留個間距? 每個都有空隙這邊那麼窄。好的
00:35:785 (4,5) - 成個弧形? 這樣不好看好的
00:33:859 (1,3) - 鼓聲音量太小了可以大一點大不了233
00:36:747 (2,4) - ^
00:39:956 (2) - ^

[Hard]

00:08:191 (1) - 應該可以跟前面小跳一下不了
00:12:683 (2) - 前端f好的，还加了更多的finish
01:19:742 (5) - 應該可以跟前面小跳一下不了

[Insane] 我一定打不動這張map 太多遮蓋

00:04:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 從哪學到這種梗..这什么意思?
00:30:330 (2) - 188 116位置变化不大，希望能说点理由，这点微妙的移动改了也没意义
01:01:934 (6) - 這邊是不是要NC?不了，坑死他们
01:04:501 (4) - 428 136^[/color]
01:24:715 (2,3,4,5) - 全選丟到 292 236



good luck

債欠好多還有拉克修和HW..[/quote]

thanks for modding~
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
CET 6
Hi Fycho ! 不怎么会mod，如有冒犯请见谅！

Awaken's Easy

00:08:191 (1,2) - 这里的vocal跟的挺好···但是我的话可能会00:08:191和 00:08:512 note 00:08:833-00:09:474 slider
00:12:041 (2) - 这个可能可以换个远点的位置
01:11:079 (3,1) - 感觉这里的节奏可以调整


Normal

00:21:025 (1) - （凑字 或许可以用ctrl+h 的那个方向凹
00:43:485 (3) - 或许可以向右移一点包一下
00:51:346 (2) - 这里消音嗯···我想在3开头也放个finish
01:17:496 (1) - 这个或许可以和前面两个组个三角


Hard

00:03:859 (2) - 00:06:426 (2) - 00:09:314 (3) - 这几个或许可以去掉
00:34:180 (2) - 或许可以ctrl+g 然后00:34:501 (3) - 放在2的后面 00:34:822 (4) - 包3
00:36:105 (7) - 或许可以ctre+g


Insane

感觉一些跳比较乱


大概就这样了~ :)
Good luck ！
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken

CET 6 wrote:

Awaken's Easy

00:08:191 (1,2) - 这里的vocal跟的挺好···但是我的话可能会00:08:191和 00:08:512 note 00:08:833-00:09:474 slider 还是现在的吧
00:12:041 (2) - 这个可能可以换个远点的位置 其实都差不多
01:11:079 (3,1) - 感觉这里的节奏可以调整 唔..
排列改了一点
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51824
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Univer Page (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ユニバーページ (TV Size)
Artist:Mimori Suzuko
ArtistUnicode:三森すずこ
Creator:Fycho
Version:Awaken's Easy
Source:アウトブレイク・カンパニー
Tags:Awaken Outbreak Company opening
BeatmapID:314587
BeatmapSetID:122233

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Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

CET 6 wrote:

Hi Fycho ! 不怎么会mod，如有冒犯请见谅！


Normal

00:21:025 (1) - （凑字 或许可以用ctrl+h 的那个方向凹 那不是左右翻转吗，这样离太远了吧
00:43:485 (3) - 或许可以向右移一点包一下好的
00:51:346 (2) - 这里消音嗯···我想在3开头也放个finish这里把消音去掉了，不说我倒忘记了noraml不要消音
01:17:496 (1) - 这个或许可以和前面两个组个三角好的


Hard

00:03:859 (2) - 00:06:426 (2) - 00:09:314 (3) - 这几个或许可以去掉去掉节奏不完整啊，别扭别扭的
00:34:180 (2) - 或许可以ctrl+g 然后00:34:501 (3) - 放在2的后面 00:34:822 (4) - 包3这里不打算改，这里整体是一个对称的梗
00:36:105 (7) - 或许可以ctre+g^



大概就这样了~ :)
Good luck ！
Thanks for modding~ updated GD
Nymph
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
Nymph
just nazi some spacing on hard diff, good as always.
bubbled.
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Source : Outbreak Company

用日语大丈夫？
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Source : Outbreak Company

用日语大丈夫？
应该没事的，既然source能支持非英语文字，然后也有其他的图用的是日语source :oops:
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
6 mods mostly of them are really short, want to have the first ranked version doesn't mean to rush the ranking

You're a good mapper but your map can always be improved with more mods.

this is what I think
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
I hope this is a joke, seriously.
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
Is this where a BAT comes in and speedranks it? I really hope you're not planning on rushing it.
Please let this map get more mods first.
Momochikun
1,927 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun

Andrea wrote:

I hope this is a joke, seriously.
6 days.
AppLoad
AppLoad
Good map =)
Irreversible
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4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
DUN DUN DUN...
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
okay, seems its better to have a quick mod~

General

  1. Please disable countdown and the letterbox during breaks

Awaken's Easy

  1. 00:10:758 (1,2) - distance isnt correct, you should consider that newbies will be confused and get missed here. Try to keep the distance snapped and it will be better for newbies to play, if I were you, I would have tried to place it on the right hand side instead
  2. 00:17:175 (3) - I guess a whistle is missed at the tail since you added one at 00:22:309 (3) -
  3. 00:42:202 (2,3) - personally, you stacked (2) at (3)'s tail, newbies will be misclicked (2) as a slider and failed to catch slider (3), try not to stack it like this, move 00:42:683 (3) a bit is better imo, moreover, you may add a NC here to notice the 1/2 beat, here is an example for you :
    SPOILER
  4. 01:01:774 - it is better to remove this useless inherited green line
  5. 01:21:346 (3,1) - how about twist a better blanket? Dont forget to snap 01:23:432 (2) - if you take it :
    SPOILER

Normal

  1. 00:22:309 (3,4) - have you tried to place slider like what you did at 00:17:175 (3,4) - ? This rhythm is better imo! :D
  2. 01:11:079 (3) - for me, melody seems to be changed, its better to have a NC here

Hard

  1. 00:33:218 (5) - NC seems to be more readable, but its up to you :)
  2. 00:42:523 (4) - just a little suggestion, look, I love what you did a stop-and-jump in 00:40:918 (6,7,1) -, sooo, you can stack 00:42:202 (3,4) - for a stop-and-jump again, it will be much more fun imo

Insane

  1. 00:21:025 (1) - if you wanna have a blanket, try to move the last anchor one grid to right
  2. 00:31:934 (3) - hmm, I guess this is a strong Beat and it feels empty without a NC
  3. 00:32:576 (1) - missing a finish maybe?
  4. as fun as always :D

Keep going Fy-chan <3
support you
Fycho
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Topic Starter
Fycho

happy623 wrote:

okay, seems its better to have a quick mod~

General

  1. Please disable countdown and the letterbox during breaksok~;w;


Normal

  1. 00:22:309 (3,4) - have you tried to place slider like what you did at 00:17:175 (3,4) - ? This rhythm is better imo! :D It will be a mess and I lke the rhythm before:>
  2. 01:11:079 (3) - for me, melody seems to be changed, its better to have a NC hereok

Hard

  1. 00:33:218 (5) - NC seems to be more readable, but its up to you :) ok
  2. 00:42:523 (4) - just a little suggestion, look, I love what you did a stop-and-jump in 00:40:918 (6,7,1) -, sooo, you can stack 00:42:202 (3,4) - for a stop-and-jump again, it will be much more fun imo no,I think it's fine now

Insane

  1. 00:21:025 (1) - if you wanna have a blanket, try to move the last anchor one grid to rightok
  2. 00:31:934 (3) - hmm, I guess this is a strong Beat and it feels empty without a NCno,it's not good imo,and it doesn't feel empty
  3. 00:32:576 (1) - missing a finish maybe?changed whistle to finish
  4. as fun as always :D

Keep going Fy-chan <3
support you
thank you for modding~I will update when next bat comes :oops:
Andrea
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Joined August 2008
Andrea

Fycho wrote:

thank you for modding~I will update when next bat comes :oops:
If you're planning to do some changes, never wait for a BAT or anything and just go straight and apply them.

Popping this for now, get 2-3 more mods and call me back so I'll mod this as well for a rebubble.
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken

happy623 wrote:

Awaken's Easy

  1. 00:10:758 (1,2) - distance isnt correct, you should consider that newbies will be confused and get missed here. Try to keep the distance snapped and it will be better for newbies to play, if I were you, I would have tried to place it on the right hand side instead ok fixed
  2. 00:17:175 (3) - I guess a whistle is missed at the tail since you added one at 00:22:309 (3) - yep fixed
  3. 00:42:202 (2,3) - personally, you stacked (2) at (3)'s tail, newbies will be misclicked (2) as a slider and failed to catch slider (3), try not to stack it like this, move 00:42:683 (3) a bit is better imo, moreover, you may add a NC here to notice the 1/2 beat, here is an example for you : fixed
    SPOILER
  4. 01:01:774 - it is better to remove this useless inherited green line No.It's for removing the kiai.The music has a empty beat here.
  5. 01:21:346 (3,1) - how about twist a better blanket? Dont forget to snap 01:23:432 (2) - if you take it : umm..Maybe I should understand what you mean .w. fixed~
    SPOILER
这是去掉countdown和letterbox之后的
osu file format v12

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266,363,76854,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,316,77496,6,0,P|482:232|437:132,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,114,78458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
318,33,78779,2,0,B|274:55|270:95|270:95|234:91|197:124,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,259,81346,2,0,P|387:227|427:164,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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