yf_bmp wrote:

From request
[General]
挺多地方漏音效 注意补上 fixed
Nice Insane&Hard

[Megami]
00:15:026 (2,3) - 这是blanket?是的话包好比较好 fixed
00:43:200 (1) - 可以这样 形成更好的flow 考慮一下,暫時保留

SPOILER

00:54:494 (1) - ^ ^
00:45:141 (6) - ^ fixed

SPOILER

00:55:729 (4) - ^ 保留
01:22:376 (1,2,3,4) - 提议双4分滑条 用在这里能有更好的收尾感觉 ^

[Hard]
有些持续跳有点偏Insane难度了 建议减小下
00:18:129 (2,3) - blanket fixed
00:42:494 (3,4) - 因为是hard 建议两个滑条全是一次折返就行 或者 物件之间靠近点 fixed,間距縮小了
01:26:611 (3) - 中间的红点位置不好 物件不润滑 故意這麼拉的;w;

[Normal]
00:11:715 (3,1) - 稍微包住? 或者形成flow 恩...可能影響到後面的flow
00:49:553 (2) - 水平翻转 再微调下 比较好 就像00:59:611 (1,2) 這邊和4對稱
00:59:611 (1) - 弯的幅度大些 fixed

[Easy]
看不出来


Quick Mod 还有要说的游戏PM就行

-Bakari- wrote:

Sorry about the delay.

[General]

1. Disable the widescreen support. It s for widescreen storyboards ONLY. There's no need to keep it if you have a video. fixed
2. Disable letterboxes during breaks. They conflict with the video and it looks a bit strange. i didn't noticed this...

[Easy]

1. 00:20:612 (1,1) - don't. Try to play this in osu!mania and you get an 1/4 pattern which is surely unplayable for the easiest diff. Remove the circle and start the spinner on 00:20:612 -
2. 00:34:729 (1,2,3,3,4) - I'd consider improving your flow a bit. Sometimes it seems a little strange to me. Agree? Interested? See the box below!
   
   uguuu

   Sometimes it's kinda hard to understand your flow. Here're some examples. You'll find some screenshots with a few pictures and I'll try to explain you why your flow bugs me!
   Blue is how the flow actually goes, red is broken flow.
   
   
   See? The cursor's moves are unnatural here, it may confuse some players.
   
   Broken flow is something that makes players' moves unnatural and strange. It's not an unrankable thing, but it really feels kinda wrong to me. Anyway, just think about it. There's no need to re-arange/change anything if you don't want to!
   u r right,fixed
3. 01:02:964 (1) - don't break your consistent rhythm like this. :< It will confuse and bug beginners, try to replace it with an 1/1 slider + repeat. So, your pattern will look like this. It still fits and it makes your rhythm more consistent. hmm... that'll cause remapping... i just want to keep the same part
   
   Basically, it's a good diff. Everything is well-mapped and I quite like it. Your rhythm is a bit hard, but OD1 makes it playable. Everything is fine.

[Normal]

1. 00:04:474 (4,1,2,3) - see my suggestion about the flow on the [Easy] diff. Same thing happens here. Flow should be really simple on the easiier diffs! fixed
2. 00:20:612 (1,1) - same as easy. Unplayaable i some special modes, so I'd recommend you to remove the circle and start the spinner on 00:20:612 - fixed
3. 00:46:376 (2,3) - nazi - the blanket here isn't perfect. You can improve it if you feel like doing it. C'mon, show us what you can, make this pattern even better! example fixed
4. 01:01:729 (5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - well, your rhythm here goes tricky. I'd consider reducing your OD by 1 tick. It'll help players and it'll make his part much more playable! i reserve it , will watch other's view after.
5. 01:09:847 - don't you feel like placing a circle here? It'll fit with vocals and it sounds really fitting here, try it! ^
   
   Good job!

[Hard]

1. 00:03:646 (4,5) - sometimes your jumps make me sad. Sometimes they are too hard and don't really fit at all. Try to consider re-arraging your jumps. Some of them are totally off and it's the only thing that really NEEDS to be changed here. Everything else seems to be alright. :< maybe u r right, i'll consider this
2. 00:20:612 (1,1) - same as for the other diffs. It doesn't really fits because the spinner follows nothing in music. i think this is just fine
   
   I can't tell that the jumps are okay, so I don't really like this diff. Anything else seems to be fine, but you should really work on those jumps. :<

[Insane]

1. 00:01:784 (3,4) - x2.5 jump here? Rally? C'mon, this is a soft part, there shouldn't be any hard jumps! Make it a little bit easier, this is the CALM part of the song! Seriously, it's the same as [Hard], you should make your jumps more fitting! i don't want to change this pattern
2. 00:35:259 (2) - nazi - this sllider looks a bit strange here, try to move it a bit down to make it aligned with (1). So, you'll get something like this I reserve it
   
   Same about hte jumps. They ruin the fun and it makes me sad. :<

You should work on jumps in the harder diffs, everything else is fine.

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Best of luck!

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

來填個位子順便射一顆 (irc mod那些什麼的都忘記存了就算了)
_(:3 J L)_ 繼續afk去...

Azails wrote:

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

來填個位子順便射一顆 (irc mod那些什麼的都忘記存了就算了)
_(:3 J L)_ 繼續afk去...

前陣子重灌我也忘記留下來了;w;
感謝irc mod/star :3

你太可惡了啊；；
我要把你碎屍萬段 T T

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

嗯，说好的mod
真心喜欢这首歌啊，先射了~ lol,我也很喜歡這歌
如果我觉得必要的地方会用*标注

General
01:28:376绿线，均往前移动一个四分拍，不然机子慢的可能反应不过来 fixed

Megami
00:20:700 ~ 00:25:906

太长了，分两个图慢慢说

我稍微参照了一下翡翠剑中的那个转盘梗，感觉放在这里十分合适 fixed,十分酷炫
00:29:700 (3) - 去掉，00:30:053加一个note，前面的节奏是pa pa pa pa pa papapa pa，我认为对称能好 不了,有明顯的鼓點
01:04:641 加个note 不了,這裡的節奏挺滿的
01:26:611 (3,4) - 交换一下位置 fixed

Hard
00:28:023 (2,3) - 2变滑条持续到之前3的开头，3变成单点，位于原来3的尾部 fixed,稍微不同
00:42:847 (4) - reverse selection fixed
00:48:494 (8) - ，00:56:964 (6) - ，00:59:788 (7) -
这三处仅仅作为一个提议，移动到往后最近的一个滑条看看
E.G:00:48:494 (8) -移动到00:48:847 (1) - 头部 這部份我remap了
原因：我认为这里的节奏不适合原地点
01:18:670 (1,2,3,4) -

试试这种排列

考慮,暫時保留

Normal
00:17:302 (4) - finish 音效，同时00:16:681 (3) - 尾部取消音效 fixed
00:42:494 (4) - 尾部normal finish音效 不了
01:05:082 (3) - 尾部normal finish音效 ^

Easy
00:29:082 (1) - 头部finish音效 fixed
00:58:023 (1) - 尾部clap音效 fixed
01:04:023 (2) - 头部finish音效 fixed
01:16:376 (3) - finish换成clap fixed
01:19:906 (1) - 和01:18:670 (3) - 尾部都加normal finish 不了

Over~

CET 6 wrote:

HI~不怎么会mod，如有冒犯请见谅！


Easy

00:04:060 (2) - 这个或许可以用1包下？感觉这个位子有点奇怪，或者再往上移一点然后滑条改平一点 故意這麼擺的,他和後面的1 2有對稱效果~
00:06:750 如果不是easy的话可能考虑在这加个note这样觉得节奏比较好打 想跟在重音上,前面也都是這麼做
00:56:964 (5) - 这个跟vocal挺好的，但是导致新vocal（唱出“I”）出现在滑条尾部，这样感觉不合适，或许可以干脆都把节奏放在白线上 后面00:48:494 (4) - 也是 ，00:59:788 (3) -有个折返还好 我考慮一下,因為easy不想放太多的1/4~


Normal

01:00:141 (2,3,4,5) - 感觉这些分布在左上会比较好 感覺差別不大就沒動了

这个挺好的


Hard

FLOW很好！

00:47:259 (5,6,7) - 这种梗感觉出现多了点
新vocal出现在滑条结尾的问题（因人而异吧，在hard以上的diff节奏比较满 或许觉得可以 好 暫時保留
01:24:847 (1) - 这里开始或许可以用SV 0.5 我想和insane一致 雖然這想法挺不錯的:3


Megami

挺好！
00:07:784 (1,2,3) - 这里或许可以想些梗 暫時不更動,會影響flow
00:28:553 (4,5) - 和00:29:612 (2,3,4) - 是有想对称节奏吗，不过感觉有点不恰当，和后面又不一样了（无聊纠结中，可以别理我这里- - 不 00:29:700 明顯有個音
01:19:023 (2,3) - 这里感觉有点不好看 好 fixed



大概就这样了
Good Luck 感謝你的mod!

CET 6 wrote:

很早以前的request
Insane
00:02:405 (1,2,3,4) - 听着有点太野蛮了=。=或许音量小点 ok fixed
00:12:336 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:11:095 (1) - 单独NC或许没必要 和前面归为一组就可以 fixed
00:33:141 (6) - 这种地方叠着感觉比较无聊 因为没感觉出来它和音乐怎么契合 建议把00:33:141 (6) - 和00:33:670 (2) - 都挪到(296,308) 应该会让flow流畅很多 fixed 很好
00:46:906 (4,5) - 这里可以考虑间距递增 让后面的跳不那么突兀 http://puu.sh/56r6M.jpg 供参考 （4没有动 因为我看到你下一个combo的4用了同一个位置） fixed
00:58:553 (1) - CTRL+G会很有意思 能起到强调的效果 现在间距太小了 移动太憋屈 感覺ctrl+g稍有點劇烈 暫時保留
话说Insane刚变BPM的位置那一堆spinner为啥不像Hard一样处理 感觉最高难度做成那样实在有点儿=。= 最高難度想著這麼擺挺有趣的 , 再被噴我會修改的;w;

Hard
00:37:553 (1) - 我感觉它比00:36:141 (1) - 更需要一个finish 前面那个1 我觉得用whistle就可以 fixed

没什么别的 完成度比较高了 感謝MOD!

Nymph wrote:

已经很不错了 nazi一点：

[General]
其实现在是允许source也填日文的 填不填都行反正就是tag和source互换 fixed


[Insane]
00:02:405 (1,2,3,4) - 音量偏大了感觉. 在减小一点音量的前提下 或许可以考虑做一个音量渐变降低 40 35 30 25这种 fixed

00:06:129 (1) - 我有点强迫症因为能看出这货不是完美对称... 或许考虑重新拉一下=_= fixed,沒太注意對稱;w;

00:06:957 (3) - 同上 （对称不再提了=_= CTRL+H试一下就好 fixed

00:12:336 (1,2,3,4) - 同2秒 fixed

00:32:964 (5,6) - 这里重叠让flow稍微有点不顺畅 建议换个摆法 fixed

00:49:200 (2) - 这里弧度再大一点可能更好看一点 跟3稍微有点半blanket的感觉 fixed

01:26:611 (3) - 吹毛求疵 这slider结尾可以静音 感觉更好 fixed


全都是可有可无的东西 随便看看就好 感謝mod!

Nymph wrote:

bubbled.

raheta_adi wrote:

Azails, I'm sorry. I don't think I can help you to mod this map. it's just because this map is perfect.

so take my star.

Autumn wrote:

哇 沒想到這麼快就泡了
抱歉沒能及時mod，shoot a star instead~~

Oyatsu wrote:

I advice you should change Source, why do u put Unicode in source and romaji source in tags? I can't understand. Change repeat plz

Azails wrote:

Oyatsu wrote:

I advice you should change Source, why do u put Unicode in source and romaji source in tags? I can't understand. Change repeat plz

I'll accept the BAT's advice.

for example https://osu.ppy.sh/s/60167

Kytoxid wrote:

Heya. Just a couple little suggestions.

[Hard]

00:26:788 (2) - I would probably not put a jump on the first note of the new BPM; players need some time to adapt to the BPM change. Space this normally? fixed
01:03:670 (3) - I think this plays better as 2 notes, instead of a slider. fixed

[Megami]

Geez, those jumps, lol. i like these jumps , him have some purpose (hexagon)

I recommend you turn the drain down a tick. Otherwise the end (last 2 combos) will frustrate a lot of people because it slows down a lot and so you lose a good chunk of your HP bar even if you 300 all the notes. i change it to spinner

Lemme know when you've looked at the mod.

thx for modding!

Oyatsu wrote:

Yea! I knew it. But the best you should use Romaji plzzz
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/104437

Kytoxid wrote:

Looks good! Ranked.

smallboat wrote:

Grats ! wow，也蠻快的，繼續保持，下一張DAL嗎?

silmarilen wrote:

it's asking me to update after download

Decipher wrote:

oh..