This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 12, 2014 at 7:14:44 PM

Artist: Larval Stage Planning
Title: Sympathy (TV Size)
Source: Highschool DxD New
Tags: opening op 1 2 Rakuen leonardlucky
BPM: 170
Filesize: 12063kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

1. Insane (4.68 stars, 260 notes)
2. Leonard's Hard (2.75 stars, 162 notes)
3. Rakuen's Normal (1.43 stars, 90 notes)

Download: Larval Stage Planning - Sympathy (TV Size)
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Sympathy (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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"X"th Map. Highschool DxD New Opening 1 TV Size
X = Number
After half a year inactive... decided to revive this.... still.....
Insane is remapped, i dunno what to do with the hard.... :/
Easy is deleted cause the diff is too bad, sorry gokugohan
Normal - Completed by Rakuen
Hard - Done by leonardlucky
Insane - Remapped - Completed by me
half a year have passed and still an awesome song
Need Modding
Having A Blast while mapping Insane
(10/12) Beatmap uploaded (Hard & Insane)
(10/26) Easy Added & Insane re-snapping (distance)
(10/27) Easy Removed & Rakuen's Normal Added, Changed tags, Changed Creator name (I changed username)
(11/2) Gokuhan's Easy Added, Changed Tags, Added Video for Rakuen's Normal Diff
(7/6) revived, remapped insane.

thx ^_^

I'd just like to point out that this is my favourite anime <3
Insane:

00:03:474 - Put a note here for flow.

Oh wow.. This map is amazing >.< (I can't find anything else wrong)

Karamu-Kun wrote:

I'd just like to point out that this is my favourite anime <3
Insane:

00:03:474 - Put a note here for flow. - Added

Oh wow.. This map is amazing >.< (I can't find anything else wrong)

Well that was a quick response 0_0 and thank you >.<

yoooo m4m from your queue ~
just a fast check on your map

hmm i like the song tho but not the animu, meeeh

[General]
ukuran lagunya saya liat 192kbps, imo it's too high. aturan nya kudu 128kbps. so here's better mp3 for you
source harus pake romaji, i mean "Highschool DxD New" not "ハイスクール D×D NEW". cmiiw ~
tags maybe just "op opening" for now
ini hitsound kepake nda?
soft-hitfinish3
soft-sliferslide4
soft-slidertick4
kalo ga dipake delete dari folder nya
how about try this combo colours?
overall volume is too looouuuudddd orz, turunin jadi 70% atau 75% biar hitsoundnya ga terlalu keras kalo dibanding ama lagu nya

[Hard]
AR,OD+1 HP-1
00:04:357 (1) remove NC
00:05:240 (3,4) ga cocok ama vocal nya. how about try this rhythm, start from 00:04:357
00:16:710 (1) remove NC
00:18:651 (2,3,4,5) flow nya agak jelek, coba tambah spacing + atur lagi penempatan nya biar lebih menarik secara diff ini hard
00:22:887 (6) slider's curve nya apa ga kebalik itu?
00:33:475 (4) move the circle to the right by 3 grid
00:35:769 feels empty here. coba kasi note disini, kalo engga mungkin bisa mundurin slider 00:35:945 (1) ke tick merah belakang trus panjangin lagi. kalo bingung contohnya kaya ini
00:41:945 (3,4) kenapa ga dibikin slider aja drpd 2 circle?
00:44:416 (1,2,3,4) spacing? terlalu dempet + berantakan arah slider nya
00:47:592 ini knp SV naik mendadak? ga fit sama vocal nya duh, player dah pasti kaget tar. mending ini SV nya tetep 0.5 deh
00:49:710 add clap here
00:54:828 (6) ga ngepas ama vocal nya. coba pindah ke 00:55:004
00:58:357 kenapa kiai berhenti disini? toh ini kan masi chorus.
00:58:887 dan SV tiba2 turun jadi 0,5
01:09:298 (3,4,1) nda pas ama vocal nya, jadiin slider aja?

[Insane]
AR-1 HP-1/tetep mungkin gpp
00:07:357 (1,2,3) coba pattern yang kaya gini
00:13:004 - 00:15:122 kalo saya, bakal kasi spinner disitu
00:23:769 (5,6,7,8) somehow flow nya kurang enak
00:47:592 sama kaya normal
00:58:357 ^
00:58:887 ^
01:01:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) random positioning circle, kurang enak dilihat.

uh ohh untuk penempatan 1/2 slider nya kok kaya random2 gitu ya.
flow nya juga banyak yang kurang bagus.
well, it's just my opinion though ~

ok then ~ good luck ლ(╹◡╹ლ)

EDIT : kalo normal nya udah selese PM ato ingame chat ya.

Lunaties wrote:

yoooo m4m from your queue ~
just a fast check on your map

hmm i like the song tho but not the animu, meeeh

[General]
ukuran lagunya saya liat 192kbps, imo it's too high. aturan nya kudu 128kbps. so here's better mp3 for you
I'm Just following this http://puu.sh/4QBi8.png itu high quality audio :v aslinya 320 KB/s
source harus pake romaji, i mean "Highschool DxD New" not "ハイスクール D×D NEW". cmiiw ~ -Fixed
tags maybe just "op opening" for now
ini hitsound kepake nda?
soft-hitfinish3
soft-sliferslide4
soft-slidertick4
kalo ga dipake delete dari folder nya -Deleted
how about try this combo colours?

SPOILER

Combo1 : 128,0,0
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,210,55
Combo4 : 0,128,192

Changed
overall volume is too looouuuudddd orz, turunin jadi 70% atau 75% biar hitsoundnya ga terlalu keras kalo dibanding ama lagu nya yes sir!

[Hard]
AR,OD+1 HP-1 -Fixed
00:04:357 (1) remove NC -Fixed
00:05:240 (3,4) ga cocok ama vocal nya. how about try this rhythm, start from 00:04:357 -Fixed
00:16:710 (1) remove NC -Fixed
00:18:651 (2,3,4,5) flow nya agak jelek, coba tambah spacing + atur lagi penempatan nya biar lebih menarik secara diff ini hard -Fixed
00:22:887 (6) slider's curve nya apa ga kebalik itu? Close Enough :v -Fixed
00:33:475 (4) move the circle to the right by 3 grid -Fixed
00:35:769 feels empty here. coba kasi note disini, kalo engga mungkin bisa mundurin slider 00:35:945 (1) ke tick merah belakang trus panjangin lagi. kalo bingung contohnya kaya ini -Fixed
00:41:945 (3,4) kenapa ga dibikin slider aja drpd 2 circle? NU. Sengaja ini :3
00:44:416 (1,2,3,4) spacing? terlalu dempet + berantakan arah slider nya -Fixed
00:47:592 ini knp SV naik mendadak? ga fit sama vocal nya duh, player dah pasti kaget tar. mending ini SV nya tetep 0.5 deh -Fixed
00:49:710 add clap here -Fixed
00:54:828 (6) ga ngepas ama vocal nya. coba pindah ke 00:55:004 -Fixed
00:58:357 kenapa kiai berhenti disini? toh ini kan masi chorus. -Fixed
00:58:887 dan SV tiba2 turun jadi 0,5 -Fixed
01:09:298 (3,4,1) nda pas ama vocal nya, jadiin slider aja? -Fixed

[Insane]
AR-1 HP-1/tetep mungkin gpp NU.
00:07:357 (1,2,3) coba pattern yang kaya gini

SPOILER

124,176,7357,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,240,7534,2,0,P|160:252|204:196,1,161.999995056153
192,124,8063,2,0,P|248:136|272:176,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

-Fixed
00:13:004 - 00:15:122 kalo saya, bakal kasi spinner disitu this is sengaja
00:23:769 (5,6,7,8) somehow flow nya kurang enak -Fixed
00:47:592 sama kaya normal -Fixed
00:58:357 ^ -Fixed
00:58:887 ^ -Fixed
01:01:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) random positioning circle, kurang enak dilihat. -Fixed

uh ohh untuk penempatan 1/2 slider nya kok kaya random2 gitu ya.
flow nya juga banyak yang kurang bagus.
well, it's just my opinion though ~
Yah itulah dasar untuk ngebuat beatmap ini. sometimes random is better. justru lagu ini kalo terlalu terstruktur malah kacau ._.
ok then ~ good luck ლ(╹◡╹ლ)

EDIT : kalo normal nya udah selese PM ato ingame chat ya.

dasarnya ini emang dibuat agak random terus bahsa modding nya itu loh ._. anda artis? idol? :v yah anyway thanks for the mod

I like this song

Can i make easy and normal diff?

Easy is already made by me normal is welcome
Update :
1. Added Easy
2. Re-positioning in insane

Hi! mod from my queue.

EASY

00:02:416 (3) - fix spacing
00:15:122 (1) - this note is too near to the spinner. since it's an easy diff you have to delete it or at least make the spinner finish earlyer.
well it's still wip, so nothing more. just remember to always keep the spacing consistent in easy diff.

HARD

00:12:651 (4) - what if you delete this and then add a note at 00:12:651 - and a slider from 00:12:828 - to 00:13:357 - ?
00:16:004 (3) - I think there's no need of a jump here. there's no gap in the music.
00:19:004 (3,4,5,6) - why don't you make something like this? I think it's more clear and symmetric. (I copy/pasted the form of 00:19:004 (3) - for 00:19:710 (5,6) - )
00:22:887 (6) - useless jump? I mean you can keep it but It's not so intuitive imo.
00:33:122 (3,4,5,1,2) - I think here the rhythm is better in this way, give it a try. 00:58:357 (1,2) - blancket better
01:05:240 (6) - keep the right spacing here.

INSANE

00:05:769 (5,6) - if you want to follow the vocal here delete these 2. then make a slider from 00:05:769 - to 00:06:122 - and add a note at 00:06:298 -
00:08:592 (5,6) - same here.
00:13:004 - same as hard. add a slider from 00:13:004 - to 00:13:534 -
00:16:181 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think if you want to follow these vocals better you should try a rhythm like this I added a note at 00:16:181 - and then used a rhythm with all the 1/2 sliders as you did.
00:20:945 (2) - what about instead of this making a triplet as you did 00:22:004 (5,6,7) - just to keep some consistence...?
00:19:181 (6,7,8,9) - instead of using always all these 1/2 sliders, why don't you try something with longer sliders? don't think making longer sliders make it easyer, because you have to keep in mind you can also make some good and hard jumps. and also I think if you use them also in some other part it will follow the vocal better.
00:42:475 - add a note here.
00:44:769 (4) - delete the clap at the beginning and add it on the slider tail.
00:45:122 (5) - delete the clap.
00:45:828 - add a note here
00:53:063 (6,7) - here for example you can try using a unic long slider
maybe the kiai time is too similar to the hard diff one... but this is only my impression maybe.

anyway good luck with this map

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! mod from my queue.

EASY

00:02:416 (3) - fix spacing Fixed
00:15:122 (1) - this note is too near to the spinner. since it's an easy diff you have to delete it or at least make the spinner finish earlyer.
well it's still wip, so nothing more. just remember to always keep the spacing consistent in easy diff.Fixed

HARD

00:12:651 (4) - what if you delete this and then add a note at 00:12:651 - and a slider from 00:12:828 - to 00:13:357 - ?Fixed
00:16:004 (3) - I think there's no need of a jump here. there's no gap in the music.Fixed
00:19:004 (3,4,5,6) - why don't you make something like this? Fixed

SPOILER

I think it's more clear and symmetric. (I copy/pasted the form of 00:19:004 (3) - for 00:19:710 (5,6) - )
00:22:887 (6) - useless jump? I mean you can keep it but It's not so intuitive imo.Fixed
00:33:122 (3,4,5,1,2) - I think here the rhythm is better in this way, give it a try.Fixed

SPOILER

00:58:357 (1,2) - blancket betterFixed
01:05:240 (6) - keep the right spacing here.Fixed

INSANE

00:05:769 (5,6) - if you want to follow the vocal here delete these 2. then make a slider from 00:05:769 - to 00:06:122 - and add a note at 00:06:298 - Fixed
00:08:592 (5,6) - same here.Fixed
00:13:004 - same as hard. add a slider from 00:13:004 - to 00:13:534 - Fixed
00:16:181 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think if you want to follow these vocals better you should try a rhythm like this

SPOILER

I added a note at 00:16:181 - and then used a rhythm with all the 1/2 sliders as you did.Fixed
00:20:945 (2) - what about instead of this making a triplet as you did 00:22:004 (5,6,7) - just to keep some consistence...?Fixed
00:19:181 (6,7,8,9) - instead of using always all these 1/2 sliders, why don't you try something with longer sliders?

SPOILER

don't think making longer sliders make it easyer, because you have to keep in mind you can also make some good and hard jumps. and also I think if you use them also in some other part it will follow the vocal better.Fixed
00:42:475 - add a note here.Fixed
00:44:769 (4) - delete the clap at the beginning and add it on the slider tail.Fixed
00:45:122 (5) - delete the clap.Fixed
00:45:828 - add a note hereFixed
00:53:063 (6,7) - here for example you can try using a unic long sliderFixed
maybe the kiai time is too similar to the hard diff one... but this is only my impression maybe.Fixed

anyway good luck with this map

Thanks very muxch now i had an idea what to do with the insane

My normal GD:

http://puu.sh/50PRH.osu

You asked me in my queue before~ (if you check my queue I accepted the request)

Sorry for long wait

Thanks Rakuen! been waiting for you
Easy Removed, Rakuen's Normal added, changed tags, changed beatmap creator (I changed username)

wubwubwub wheeeeeee ~

udah itu aja diff nya?

gitu deh :3

Finsih^^


Don't forget add gokuhan and gokugohan12468 for my diff and all

For note:

General:

Add the Video, please
Don't add Widescreen Support (You don have a SB) and Letterbox (Is Bad if you add)
Add Rakuen in tag (becuase she make a Normal Diff)

Good Luck^^

I forget add hitsound
But your can uptade

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Finsih^^

My Diff

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51562
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
Bookmarks: 54651,68239
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:Sympathy (TV Size)
Artist:Larval Stage Planning
ArtistUnicode:Larval Stage Planning
Creator:Kiyura
Version:Gokuhan's Easy
Source:Highschool DxD New
Tags:opening op 1 2 Rakuen gokuhan gokugohan12468
BeatmapID:0
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Don't forget add gokuhan and gokugohan12468 for my diff and all

For note:

General:

Add the Video, please whoops, added :3
Don't add Widescreen Support (You don have a SB) and Letterbox (Is Bad if you add) Fixed
Add Rakuen in tag (becuase she make a Normal Diff) it's already there

Good Luck^^

Thanks! Added Gokuhan's Easy, Changed Tags, Added Video on Rakuen's Normal

+HitSound


Clap is bad in 00:15:22 and 00:32:063
Trying in 00:00:651 and I forget Offset is 651

Don't kudosu

gokugohan12468 wrote:

+HitSound

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:Sympathy (TV Size)
Artist:Larval Stage Planning
ArtistUnicode:Larval Stage Planning
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61710,-100,4,2,2,75,0,1
62945,-100,4,2,2,75,0,1
81298,-100,4,2,2,75,0,0
82886,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,0,0
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,210,55
Combo4 : 0,128,192

[HitObjects]
64,180,651,2,8,P|48:272|92:300,2,110
120,112,1710,2,8,P|192:92|316:176,1,220
372,224,2769,2,8,P|372:292|404:340,2,110
368,136,3828,2,8,P|292:108|228:124,2,110
388,220,4887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,268,5240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,272,5592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,220,5945,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,136,6298,6,8,P|152:68|288:76,2,220
124,224,8063,2,8,B|116:280|120:324|140:332,2,110
160,144,9122,2,8,P|208:92|256:84,2,110
216,212,10181,2,8,P|268:256|312:240,2,110
204,124,11240,2,8,P|192:68|132:64,1,110
146,57,11945,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12298,12,8,14769,0:0:0:0:
264,184,15122,6,12,P|216:232|160:244,1,110,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,204,15828,2,8,P|124:152|72:124,2,110
96,292,16887,2,8,P|128:360|208:376,2,110
88,204,17945,2,8,P|128:104|360:212,1,440
312,280,19710,2,8,P|248:296|208:272,2,110
380,224,20769,6,8,P|392:156|192:88,1,330
124,140,22181,2,8,P|92:192|112:264,2,110
208,108,23240,2,8,B|260:80|308:72|332:80,2,110
152,176,24298,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,252,24651,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,248,25004,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,168,25357,2,8,P|344:104|388:96,2,110
312,256,26416,6,8,P|284:328|160:308,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,228,27475,2,8,P|108:136|76:128,2,110
220,236,28534,2,8,P|268:192|316:184,2,110
132,236,29592,2,8,P|80:220|152:292,2,330
220,220,32063,6,8,P|300:196|320:164,1,110
368,108,32769,2,8,P|408:40|480:44,2,110
316,180,33828,2,8,P|284:232|148:196,1,220
128,116,34887,2,8,P|196:68|328:120,2,220
112,204,36651,2,8,P|112:284|136:300,1,110
216,312,37357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,296,37710,6,8,P|376:232|272:60,2,330
216,312,40181,2,8,P|148:300|204:116,2,330
304,304,42651,2,8,P|380:268|380:132,1,220
340,68,43710,2,8,P|280:48|108:120,1,220
104,172,44769,2,8,P|88:244|132:292,2,110
168,112,45828,6,8,B|248:48|248:48|256:48|280:56|280:56|288:56|296:56|320:48|320:48|344:48|352:48|352:48|364:48|364:48,2,220
108,176,47592,6,8,P|80:256|104:300,2,110
108,176,48651,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,49004,12,8,51122,0:0:0:0:
56,160,51475,6,8,B|116:136|128:112|128:112|152:124|168:124|172:128|180:128|188:128|204:124|228:120|244:116|280:116|284:120|284:120,2,220
48,248,53240,2,8,P|80:316|144:344,3,110
196,332,54651,2,8,P|268:304|152:64,1,440
88,112,56416,2,8,P|56:160|76:252,2,110
172,84,57475,2,8,P|224:68|288:68,2,110
184,172,58534,2,8,P|176:288|160:312,2,110
180,84,59592,6,8,P|228:48|280:56,1,110
256,192,60298,12,8,62416,0:0:0:0:
144,44,62769,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,132,63122,2,8,B|32:132|32:132|-4:160|-4:160,2,110
220,128,64181,2,8,B|304:128|304:128|344:148|344:148,2,110
132,132,65240,2,8,P|104:188|112:260,2,110
212,96,66298,2,8,P|276:72|332:92,1,110
400,104,67004,2,8,P|424:192|408:240,2,110,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,80,68063,2,4,P|236:72|192:84,2,110
404,92,69122,6,8,P|412:184|296:264,2,220
316,72,70887,2,8,P|228:44|112:92,1,220
48,148,71945,2,8,P|24:236|100:340,2,220
120,96,73710,2,8,P|180:68|324:124,1,220
340,200,74769,2,8,P|332:276|360:320,2,110
316,116,75828,6,8,P|216:84|180:96,2,110
340,200,76887,2,8,P|320:264|264:288,1,110
196,292,77592,2,8,P|120:268|96:228,1,110
104,156,78298,6,8,P|160:96|216:88,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,88,79004,6,8,P|348:96|396:160,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,115,79710,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80063,12,8,82887,0:0:0:0:

Clap is bad in 00:15:22 and 00:32:063
Trying in 00:00:651 and I forget Offset is 651 the offset is -407?

Don't kudosu

thanks, updated!

Hello,Kiyura. google form req. (Seems to have been mod your map before? 0.0)
I am Chinese. My English is poor,sorry.

Red words : Should be fix it.

Blue words : I recommended suggestion.

Black words : In my personal suggestion.


[General]

I don't like slidertick sound,try add "slidertick",and no voice?

[Rakuen's Normal] Try to add a bit finish?

00:53:945 (4) - Slider end +finish.
00:57:475 (1) - +finish
01:00:298 (5) - Slider head +finish.
01:05:945 (4) - ^
01:08:769 (1,3) - Slider head +finish
01:11:592 (1) - Slider head and end +finish (medium no add)
01:14:416 (1) - ^
01:17:240 (1,3) - Slider head +finish.

[Hard] HP+1?

00:03:475 (4) - http://puu.sh/57fY0.jpg
00:04:887 (6) - DS. Try to do symmetry? http://puu.sh/57g3E.jpg
00:09:122 (2,3) - I feel can small jump,imo.
00:12:651 (4) - Stack the (5) slider head is better good,easy read.
00:14:063 (2) - (376|80),beacuse cover the slider is not good pattern,imo.
00:15:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:17:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) is the same rhythm,replace it? imo.(Suggest 15122"s rhythm)
00:26:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:33:828 (1) - DS,blanket crooked off.
00:41:945 (3,4) - Delete,change long slider feel good?
00:44:416 (1,2,3,4) - Try this , http://puu.sh/57gXu.jpg
00:48:651 (2) - (280|228).
00:49:357 (3) - (100|192).
00:52:887 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/57heG.jpg
00:54:607 (5) - +finish?
01:01:887 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/57hqH.jpg
01:04:181 (3) - Too close.
01:05:240 (5,6,7,8) - Same as the 00:53:945 (2,3,4,5,6) .
01:07:357 (4) - Slider head +finish.
01:11:592 (1) - ^
01:14:416 (1) - ^
01:17:240 (1) - ^
01:20:945 (3) - Slider end +finish.
01:23:063 (1) - Spinner end sound should add a green line 10% volume? (Feel shouldn"t have sound.)


[Insane]

00:04:710 (2) - Blanket (3) slider head.
00:07:534 (2) - http://puu.sh/57i5e.jpg
00:09:122 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/57i9c.jpg
00:11:240 (4,5) - (5) delete, http://puu.sh/57ige.jpg
00:17:416 (8) - (460|244).
00:17:945 (1,2) - Change short slider. (2) del.
00:18:298 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same rhythm with the 00:15:828 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) .
00:23:592 (4,5) - Ctrl + g ,removed clap.
00:26:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same rhythm with the 00:15:828.
00:33:122 (3,4,5,6,7) - Be the pentagon?
00:34:181 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/57iB7.jpg. Good pattern.
00:36:122 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/57iHN.jpg
00:39:651 (3,4) - Try to do symmetry?
00:48:651 (2) - (336|240)?
00:55:534 (1) - Change 2 note.
01:01:887 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Be the pentagon?
01:05:195 (1,2,3) - replace?
01:06:651 (5,6) - Ctr+g,notice place.
01:13:534 (6,7) - ^
01:12:122 (2,3) - ^
01:17:769 (2,3) - ^
01:23:063 (1) - Spinner end sound should add a green line 10% volume? (Feel shouldn"t have sound.)

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

yoooo m4m from your queue ~#2
just a fast checking o0o

[Gokuhan's Easy]
well2
too many slider here, it's ok lah but... you should make a more space for each note here. especially this part 00:37:710 - 00:47:240
SV 1.10? kinda too fast for easy diff. should be around 0.6 - 0.8 because the bpm it self is 170
why you add clap at each note? really unnecessary
00:47:240 - 00:14:769 this sample note. imo really not fit here. you should change it to SC2 like other diff
this diff needs some improvement orz

[Rakuen's Normal]
00:17:240 (3) nazi. for a perfect curve, move the center anchor to the left by 1 grid and the tail to the left by 2 grid
00:34:887 (5) nazi same as above. move the slider by 2 grid up 1st, then move the center anchor to the right and up by 1 grid, and the tail to the right by 2 grid
00:35:945 - 00:37:357 spinner at this section would be nice
01:05:945 (4,5,6) you can improve a better curve looking this both sliders. for the 1st slider, move the second anchor up by 5 grid and to the right by 2 grid. for the second slider just follow the 1st or you can C&P ctrl+H and ctrl+G. should be like this http://puu.sh/57nV1.jpg

nice normal diff, nothing to say again. good job!

Good luck eaaaa ~

smallboat wrote:

Hello,Kiyura. google form req. (Seems to have been mod your map before? 0.0) you modded This
I am Chinese. My English is poor,sorry.

Red words : Should be fix it.

Blue words : I recommended suggestion.

Black words : In my personal suggestion.


[General]

I don't like slidertick sound,try add "slidertick",and no voice? Fine by me but if other modder says so, i'll consider

[Hard] HP+1? ok

00:03:475 (4) - http://puu.sh/57fY0.jpg fixed
00:04:887 (6) - DS. Try to do symmetry? http://puu.sh/57g3E.jpg Symmetry yes, flow still same
00:09:122 (2,3) - I feel can small jump,imo.fixed
00:12:651 (4) - Stack the (5) slider head is better good,easy read.fixed
00:14:063 (2) - (376|80),beacuse cover the slider is not good pattern,imo. Changed
00:15:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:17:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) is the same rhythm,replace it? imo.(Suggest 15122"s rhythm) Fixed
00:26:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ fixed
00:33:828 (1) - DS,blanket crooked off. fixed
00:41:945 (3,4) - Delete,change long slider feel good? no. this one was on purpose
00:44:416 (1,2,3,4) - Try this , http://puu.sh/57gXu.jpg Nice! Fixed
00:48:651 (2) - (280|228). Fixed
00:49:357 (3) - (100|192). Fixed
00:52:887 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/57heG.jpg no. i'm missing a beat if i do this
00:54:607 (5) - +finish? Fixed
01:01:887 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/57hqH.jpg Fixed
01:04:181 (3) - Too close. Fixed
01:05:240 (5,6,7,8) - Same as the 00:53:945 (2,3,4,5,6) . Fixed
01:07:357 (4) - Slider head +finish. Fixed
01:11:592 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:14:416 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:17:240 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:20:945 (3) - Slider end +finish. Fixed
01:23:063 (1) - Spinner end sound should add a green line 10% volume? (Feel shouldn"t have sound.) Fixed


[Insane]

00:04:710 (2) - Blanket (3) slider head. Fixed
00:07:534 (2) - http://puu.sh/57i5e.jpg Fixed
00:09:122 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/57i9c.jpg Fixed
00:11:240 (4,5) - (5) delete, http://puu.sh/57ige.jpg Fixed
00:17:416 (8) - (460|244). Fixed
00:17:945 (1,2) - Change short slider. (2) del. Fixed
00:18:298 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same rhythm with the 00:15:828 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) .No for this one
00:23:592 (4,5) - Ctrl + g ,removed clap. Fixed
00:26:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same rhythm with the 00:15:828. Fixed
00:33:122 (3,4,5,6,7) - Be the pentagon? Fixed
00:34:181 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/57iB7.jpg. Good pattern. Fixed
00:36:122 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/57iHN.jpg Fixed
00:39:651 (3,4) - Try to do symmetry? Fixed
00:48:651 (2) - (336|240)? Fixed
00:55:534 (1) - Change 2 note. Fixed
01:01:887 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Be the pentagon? Fixed
01:05:195 (1,2,3) - replace? ?
01:06:651 (5,6) - Ctr+g,notice place. Fixed
01:13:534 (6,7) - ^ Fixed
01:12:122 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:17:769 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:23:063 (1) - Spinner end sound should add a green line 10% volume? (Feel shouldn"t have sound.) Fixed

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Thanks for the mod. I'll call the others

smallboat wrote:

Hello,Kiyura. google form req. (Seems to have been mod your map before? 0.0)
I am Chinese. My English is poor,sorry.

Red words : Should be fix it.

Blue words : I recommended suggestion.

Black words : In my personal suggestion.


[General]

I don't like slidertick sound,try add "slidertick",and no voice?

[Rakuen's Normal] Try to add a bit finish?

00:53:945 (4) - Slider end +finish.
00:57:475 (1) - +finish
01:00:298 (5) - Slider head +finish.
01:05:945 (4) - ^
01:08:769 (1,3) - Slider head +finish
01:11:592 (1) - Slider head and end +finish (medium no add)
01:14:416 (1) - ^
01:17:240 (1,3) - Slider head +finish.

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Lunaties wrote:

yoooo m4m from your queue ~#2
just a fast checking o0o

[Rakuen's Normal]
00:17:240 (3) nazi. for a perfect curve, move the center anchor to the left by 1 grid and the tail to the left by 2 grid
00:34:887 (5) nazi same as above. move the slider by 2 grid up 1st, then move the center anchor to the right and up by 1 grid, and the tail to the right by 2 grid
00:35:945 - 00:37:357 spinner at this section would be nice
01:05:945 (4,5,6) you can improve a better curve looking this both sliders. for the 1st slider, move the second anchor up by 5 grid and to the right by 2 grid. for the second slider just follow the 1st or you can C&P ctrl+H and ctrl+G. should be like this http://puu.sh/57nV1.jpg

nice normal diff, nothing to say again. good job!

Good luck eaaaa ~

Fixed all~ Thanks for the mods!

My diff: http://puu.sh/58COz.osu