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Momochikun

Joined October 2012

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Momochikun 2013-11-30T09:39:19+00:00

Ethercastle wrote:
Hi from my queue. Just some suggestions ^ ^

[General]

Check AI mod. Seems that there are some inconsistencies.

[Insane]

~~00:00:656 (4,5) - Spacing feels a bit uncomfortable for me. You can probably rotate 00:00:141 (1,2,3,4) clockwise by 45° for more steady spacing.~~ saw you already fixed this, nvm then
00:03:399 (2,1) - This overlap is not that necessary and potentially confusing. Would suggest break 00:03:399 (2) into a slider and a circle.
00:04:427 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer oval flow to jumps here
00:05:283 - feels a bit emty here (follow vocal?)
00:05:627 (1) - move sliderend down a bit for a better blanket? yeah
00:06:827 (5) - NC here instead? sure
00:06:827 (5,1,2) - Shape it like this?
SPOILER
00:09:227 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - sv here may be even lower I think. still feels fast. Or making the sliders curved?
00:12:656 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - not a big fan of the zigzag shape here, as I the beats here don't feel that uniform. 00:13:170 (1,2,3) those three should have larger spacing imo it flows nicely imo.. didn't have any idea
00:13:170 (1,2,3) - spacing?
00:15:913 (4) - move to (140,48) ? for what ?
00:18:656 (4,5) - I personally find the spacing here too large
00:40:255 (4,5,6,7) - make the two sliders here more symmetrical?
00:43:684 (6) - find the spacing here a bit too large. Keeping it constant with 00:46:084 (5,6) ? okay
01:02:542 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) & 01:05:456 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - are these stream shapes intentional? kinda messy
01:10:084 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - shape here could be a bit better, e.g. arranging 01:10:599 (1,2,3,1,2,1) into a hexagram? yeah it should be like that
01:11:456 (1) - Follow the vocal here and make it a dotted half?
01:12:656 (3,4,1,2) - I feel that these four notes are in a group. Sliders doesn't fit 01:11:970 (1,2) that well so I will suggest changing those two, dreacse the spacing, add NC on 01:12:656 (3) and make a pattern for 01:12:656 (3,4,1,2). i prefer mine here.. sorry
01:17:799 (2), 01:18:484 (3), 01:19:170 (5) & 01:20:542 (2) - Sound similar so won't recommend different shape for them eh o.o ?
01:23:284 (5,6,1,2,3) - those 1/2 sliders feel kinda Maybe you're right orz.. sligthtly rearranged the rhytm

Hope this helps ^_^

lkx_Shore wrote:
[General]
Hi

[Insane]
00:05:283 - add note? why ? o.o
00:06:142 (2) - change into 1/2 slider is better didn't have any ideas here
00:19:856 (2) - if you follow vocal,plz use redline 1/2 slider it break my blanket ><
00:21:399 (3) - strange rhythm eeehhh. i follow the drum here
00:25:856 (5) - change into note and add 1/2 slider in 00:26:026 - ? sounds nice. changed
00:40:941 (7,8,9,10,11) - use normal hitsound sampleset? sounds weird imo
01:02:542 (5,6) - add whistle

[Other]
Goodluck

Sorry for being late..
Thanks for modding guys :3 , All diffs now Updated ~

Hinsvar

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-11-30T13:46:00+00:00

Ethercastle wrote:
[Hinsvar's Prayer]
Like this diff a lot ^_^ So just some nazi Okay~

Feel that it may spam the 1/4s too much, may consider some variety? Can't be helped; blame the song for that.

00:09:055 (4,1) - nc on 4? (Well it seems that I interpreted it differently, prefer a nc here due to the strong clap sound. Well up to U, same reasons for all following nc suggestions) Umm, no. We're supposed to follow the instrument after that clap here. The clap is still the part of the previous stanza, according to the song.
00:10:426 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:11:798 (4,1) - & ^ (Yes, I do realize that this is a typo.)
00:13:169 (1,2,3,4) - - Delete 4 and make 3's spacing larger? I'm sure enough an instrument is still being played here, and I want to emphasize that.
00:14:541 (4,1) - nc on 4? Well, no. I have already explained the reason before.
00:17:283 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:19:341 - 00:30:055 - guess you are intentionally choosing not to use any extra hitsounds here? may consider some soft/drum whistle though. Yep, it's intentional. It's not like there's anything special to emphasize here. Maybe you can suggest where should I place those whistles?
00:42:483 (1,2,3,1,2) - Symmetry between two line of lyrics so maybe consider some symmetry in the map too? Nah, I don't want to use symmetrical patterns too often. They'll make the map look lazily designed.
00:48:141 (1,2,1,2) - ^ ^
00:48:655 (2,1) - nc on 2? I think you know about what am I going to say here.
00:52:941 (3) - not a perfect blanket here Oops. Fixed.
00:53:969 (2) - personally don't like the 3/4 slider here It goes quite well with how the vocal goes, so I'll keep it for now.
01:07:683 (3) - prefer circles here as the background here is quite strong The instrument's sounds are "connected" to each other, though, so it is better to map them with a slider.
01:21:226 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - feel that the ending part is much more difficult, probably due to the streams with large spacing Can't be helped. Blame the song, again.

lkx_Shore wrote:
[Hinsvar's Prayer]
00:11:112 (1) - add clap? Sure.
00:13:169 (1) - add finish It isn't that loud, IMO.
00:16:598 (1) - add clap Added.
00:26:198 (1) - strange rhythm I'm emphasizing the instrument here.
01:05:969 (1,1,2) - add finish,and 01:07:169 (1) - head add finish Hmm, the instruments aren't heavy-sounding here, so maybe no. I'll reconsider though, if people thinks finishes are really needed here.
01:26:198 (4) - use soft sampleset Ah, okay.

Thanks for the mods!

lol

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148,256,47283,2,0,P|200:248|248:212,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,47626,2,0,P|319:281|341:225,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,140,47969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,88,48141,6,0,P|196:80|128:92,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,140,48655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,40,48826,5,10,0:0:0:0:
476,240,48998,2,0,P|432:232|368:248,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,304,49341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,256,49512,6,0,P|192:160|236:64,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,40,50026,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,44,50369,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,52,50712,6,0,P|444:152|408:248,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,288,51226,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,212,51398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,256,51569,2,0,P|124:232|100:184,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,44,51912,5,12,0:0:0:0:
240,44,52255,6,0,P|292:40|352:64,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,152,52598,2,0,P|272:156|212:132,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,128,52941,6,0,P|388:224|296:248,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,160,53455,2,0,P|152:64|244:40,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,80,53969,2,0,P|352:152|336:240,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,232,54312,2,0,P|356:228|416:244,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,304,54655,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,380,54826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,320,54998,6,0,P|232:324|176:352,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,284,55341,2,0,P|119:233|108:171,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,112,55683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,16,55855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,124,56026,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,36,56198,6,0,P|464:132|420:232,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,156,56712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,156,57055,2,0,P|228:208|244:256,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,280,57312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,57398,2,0,P|216:300|140:320,1,150,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,336,57741,6,0,P|148:236|120:144,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,146,58426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,72,58598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,164,58769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,232,58941,6,0,P|308:212|360:128,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,40,59455,2,0,P|276:32|224:40,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,84,59798,5,2,0:0:0:0:
20,192,59969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,312,60141,2,0,P|180:324|236:316,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,60483,6,0,P|188:104|80:124,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,200,60998,2,0,P|20:248|24:308,2,100,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,212,61512,1,10,0:0:0:0:
228,180,61683,6,0,P|260:136|272:80,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,148,62026,2,0,P|368:94|357:38,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,240,62541,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,276,62626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,308,62712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,332,62798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,324,62969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,308,63055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,296,63141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,288,63226,6,0,L|476:176,2,100,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,340,63741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,268,63912,2,0,P|216:260|120:296,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,148,64426,6,0,P|300:140|400:172,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,256,64941,2,0,P|384:176|412:68,1,200,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,28,65455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,70,65626,2,0,P|360:80|300:64,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,16,65969,5,2,0:0:0:0:
120,16,66312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,196,66483,5,2,0:0:0:0:
196,208,66826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,220,67169,6,0,P|132:232|72:212,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,144,67512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,68,67683,2,0,P|132:56|192:76,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,120,68026,2,0,P|316:132|376:112,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,92,68369,2,0,P|468:116|472:140,3,50
464,176,68712,6,0,P|368:216|316:304,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,336,69226,2,0,P|176:344|120:328,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,276,69569,2,0,P|36:224|52:172,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,96,69912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,116,70083,6,0,P|248:124|300:104,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,172,70426,2,0,P|364:280|420:364,1,200,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,300,70941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,355,71112,2,0,P|360:364|308:352,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,196,71455,6,0,P|280:168|396:188,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,368,71969,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,360,72312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,352,72655,6,0,P|220:344|152:356,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,72998,2,0,P|140:232|160:176,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:3:0:0:
152,84,73341,5,2,0:0:0:0:
59,213,73512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,301,73683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
279,173,73855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,172,74198,6,0,P|348:208|384:280,1,150.000005722046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,352,74712,2,0,P|288:360|232:352,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,268,75055,2,0,P|169:253|128:215,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,140,75398,2,0,P|168:108|156:53,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,75741,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,76,75912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,36,76083,2,0,P|452:108|440:192,1,150.000005722046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,264,76598,6,0,P|260:268|208:244,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,76941,5,4,0:0:0:0:
248,168,77112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,224,77283,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,308,77455,2,0,P|156:320|212:304,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,77798,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,80,77969,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,140,78141,2,0,P|420:144|480:136,1,100
508,44,78483,5,2,0:0:0:0:
476,32,78569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,24,78655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,24,78741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,32,78826,5,2,0:0:0:0:
324,60,78912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,88,78998,2,0,P|240:92|188:76,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,36,79341,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,60,79426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,79512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,140,79598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,188,79683,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,332,79855,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,144,80026,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,144,80369,6,0,L|296:164,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,80541,2,0,L|324:236,1,50
384,108,80712,5,0,0:0:0:0:
216,240,80883,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,240,81226,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,308,81398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,156,81569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,52,81741,6,0,P|164:44|196:40,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,80,81912,2,0,P|236:80|260:88,1,50
296,128,82083,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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20,340,82769,2,0,P|48:296|40:236,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,88,83112,5,2,1:0:0:0:
112,24,83283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,83455,2,0,P|244:88|312:80,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,72,83712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,48,83798,5,2,1:0:0:0:
436,184,83969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,132,84312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,132,84398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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56,292,84912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,32,86026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2013-12-01T02:46:39+00:00

Updated :3

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-12-01T02:53:53+00:00

Selective Modding.
[General]
Easy has no video.
[Easy]
Rhythm
00:10:598(4) Sounds weird, the end should be at 00:11:112, then add a note better.

SPOILER

00:16:083(4) ^
01:05:169(1,2,3) Current looks a bit difficult for the easiest diff, so try to be simply rhythm?

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:00:141(1) Prefer soft-whistle at head.
00:02:883(1)Add soft-whistle at head.
00:54:998(1) Add claps at reverse and end.
[Normal]
Rhythm
00:18:483(4,5) It sounds a bit odd because of weakness.I suppose at 00:18:998 is no sound better. e.g.)

SPOILER

00:56:198(4) Delete this note? Maybe you aimed to follow the vocal, but it looks a bit difficult for Normal, and if nothing here it sounds not bad.
01:27:398(5) Replace it to single note better.Just sounds.
Hit Sound
00:12:655(4) Add whistle at end to follow the instrumental.
01:01:683(3) Add whistle or finish at head?
01:11:112(1) Prefer finish than whistle at end.
[Hard]
Placement
00:30:483(1) It looks fine to be liner slider than curved one to make a blanket.Curved one is a bit hard to play imo.

SPOILER

01:18:312(2) I don't agree with this jumping since there is no emphasized music or vocal.
Rhythm
00:57:569 Add a note here? It would be effective for the next slider.
Hit Sound
In the beginning part, you can put whistle more positively, if no sounds here player might think "missed hitting notes".
00:00:141(1) At head.
00:01:341(4)^
00:02:883(1)^
00:03:398(2)^
00:04:083(1)^
00:19:341(1) prefer soft-finish than drum sound here since it is a first note.
00:46:769(1) Add finish at head, it sounds nicely.
01:03:226(1)^
[Hinsvar]
Placement
00:11:798(4,1) Swap NC better to be consistence.
01:02:541(3) Add NC here to be consistence 4 combo stream.
Rhythm
The gap of difficult (It means before KIAI or after KIAI) looks so large, I suppose latter of them looks overmapped with some notes, and others look a bit easier for AR9. Just suggestion, but you can make this diff more consistence difficulty better.
00:26:026(6) I suppose you can start 1/1 slider from here, it's better to follow the vocal. Curren t sounds a bit lagged.

SPOILER

01:20:369(1,2) It looks overmapped I suppose even if you aim to follow the guitar.It's not main sound so you can put notes simply better.(Replace 1/2 slider or 2 notes)
01:26:883(1,2,3,,1,2,3,) Again ^.
Hit Sound
00:13:855(1) Add finish here.
00:52:255(1) It's a beginning of KIAI and it sounds better if add finish here.
01:22:426~ Turn down volume better, currnt sounds so loudly.
01:26:198(4) Really sounds odd and loudly, maybe delete clap better.
[Insane]
Placement
00:02:883(1) I suppose it would be better to make more spacing from (4), (3)-(4) looks small jump but (4)-(1) didn't so it looks a bit odd. e.g.)

SPOILER

00:23:112(4,1) It looks forced flow, I don't suppose it looks nicely.you can be better to make opposite flow (4) or (1).
00:26:883(3) CTRL+G looks more nice flow, and you can move following noes like this?

SPOILER

00:28:769(6,1) Again it is better to put more spacing here, since it is a down beat and Insane.Just move (6) on 72:168?
00:39:569(1,2) Swap NC better to be pattern.
00:53:112(4) Not stacked looks fine because of flow from(5) to (6).

SPOILER

00:55:512(4) Perfectly stacked looks a bit confused, I suppose you can move this note a bit lagged better. e.g.)

SPOILER

01:00:312(4) This jump looks not reasonable, here is a red line and it's note emphasized. So you can make a jump from (4) to (1) better, not (3) to(4).
Rhythm
00:21:398(3) It sounds weird since the beginning of slider is not followed vocal, in this part the vocal has emphasized so I recommend you to follow this.

SPOILER

Good Luck.

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2013-12-01T14:09:52+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
Selective Modding.

[Insane]
Placement
00:02:883(1) I suppose it would be better to make more spacing from (4), (3)-(4) looks small jump but (4)-(1) didn't so it looks a bit odd. e.g.) sure
SPOILER
00:23:112(4,1) It looks forced flow, I don't suppose it looks nicely.you can be better to make opposite flow (4) or (1). i think it's fine, i ctrl G'ed next slider though to provide smoother flow
00:26:883(3) CTRL+G looks more nice flow, and you can move following noes like this? in a similiar way
SPOILER
00:28:769(6,1) Again it is better to put more spacing here, since it is a down beat and Insane.Just move (6) on 72:168? i want to stack it with next note.
00:39:569(1,2) Swap NC better to be pattern. My bad.. fixed
00:53:112(4) Not stacked looks fine because of flow from(5) to (6). Umm.. ? i want to make some variety there
SPOILER
00:55:512(4) Perfectly stacked looks a bit confused, I suppose you can move this note a bit lagged better. e.g.) it's not imo.. some testplayers got no problem there
SPOILER
01:00:312(4) This jump looks not reasonable, here is a red line and it's note emphasized. So you can make a jump from (4) to (1) better, not (3) to(4). i make the jump same now xD
Rhythm
00:21:398(3) It sounds weird since the beginning of slider is not followed vocal, in this part the vocal has emphasized so I recommend you to follow this. i didn't really like to skip instrument, i think it doesn't that weird o.o
SPOILER

Good Luck.

Thanks for modding ~
Added video on Easy too -w-

grumd

1,790 posts

Joined October 2010

grumd 2013-12-02T14:26:12+00:00

I lost the previous post because of internet problems so I'm modding this again today.. Well, good.

— Prayer

Your diff has some notes that are not present in the music, they should be removed:
00:27:483 (5) - 00:40:512 (3) - 00:57:312 (4) -
00:50:712 (1) - Move this 2 grids left and 1 grid up

— Hard

00:00:826 (3) - You should better use only one point for both curves, this will make it more accurate and smooth. Don't forget that these point should form a straight line with the red point for the best curve. Check the screenshot and take the slider code if you want:
Screenshot
Code
```
296,192,826,2,0,B|332:172|368:192|368:192|408:212|440:192,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
There are many similar sliders in your map, you'd better fix them the same way, or maybe just copy the slider with my code everywhere.
Similar sliders: 00:03:398 (2) - 00:10:598 (4) - 00:13:512 (5) - 00:15:398 (5) - 00:19:855 (3) - 00:26:712 (6) - 00:39:226 (2) - 00:46:083 (7) - (this one will need to be scaled by 0.8 if you copy previous sliders) 00:50:712 (1) - 00:53:455 (4) - 00:55:683 (5) - 01:04:426 (5) - 01:08:712 (1,2) - 01:20:026 (3) - 01:23:626 (2) -
01:07:169 (1) - Move the red point closer to the start of this slider to make this more accurate and smooth: http://puu.sh/5zPwo.jpg
01:22:769 (3) - This one is similar to the previous case
00:05:626 (3) - Move the 3rd point a bit up to make a better blanket: http://puu.sh/5zPRo.jpg

— Normal

00:11:112 (1,3) - Make them parallel?
00:18:826 - I think it looks better as a single circle, the sound at the end of this slider is a bit tricky, so better just map the guitars.
00:55:683 (3,4,5) - The rhythm like you did here: 01:03:912 (2,3,4) - sounds a lot better at this place too
01:27:398 - This is the only diff that doesn't end at this point. This time is a better place to end the map (because after this point there is no valid note in music, just a fadeout), please just place a circle here instead of a slider.

— Easy

01:05:969 (1,2,3,1) - This pattern might be a bit confusing for beginners because of the red tick notes. Better make sliders from (1) to (2) and from (3) to the next (1)

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-12-02T14:40:19+00:00

try to fixed all
thanks 4 mod grumd :3~

baka take this

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Anicca TV Size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51912
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Anicca
TitleUnicode:Anicca
Artist:Harada Hitomi
ArtistUnicode:原田 ひとみ
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai
Tags:opening 機巧少女は傷つかない lerche 夜々 -tennya- -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- xinely hinsvar 10nya skydevil
BeatmapID:313272
BeatmapSetID:121744

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2013-12-02T14:48:28+00:00

Uhh im checking the mods later but i do already want to say @grumd that i would prefer those sliders with 2 points >< its just some preference

EDIT:

lkx_Shore wrote:
[SkyDevil's Hard]
00:13:169 (4) - change into 2 note ~nooo it belongs to the pattern ><

kajiyatta wrote:
[Hard]
Placement
00:30:483(1) It looks fine to be liner slider than curved one to make a blanket.Curved one is a bit hard to play imo. ~okee
SPOILER
01:18:312(2) I don't agree with this jumping since there is no emphasized music or vocal. ~uhh it was more like a well fit random jump
Rhythm
00:57:569 Add a note here? It would be effective for the next slider. ~seems too random XD
Hit Sound
In the beginning part, you can put whistle more positively, if no sounds here player might think "missed hitting notes".
00:00:141(1) At head.
00:01:341(4)^
00:02:883(1)^
00:03:398(2)^
00:04:083(1)^ ~imo too messy ;;
00:19:341(1) prefer soft-finish than drum sound here since it is a first note. ~okee
00:46:769(1) Add finish at head, it sounds nicely. ~hmm,, prefer it currently
01:03:226(1)^ ~done

grumd wrote:
I lost the previous post because of internet problems so I'm modding this again today.. Well, good.

— Hard
00:00:826 (3) - You should better use only one point for both curves, this will make it more accurate and smooth. Don't forget that these point should form a straight line with the red point for the best curve. Check the screenshot and take the slider code if you want:
Screenshot
Code
296,192,826,2,0,B|332:172|368:192|368:192|408:212|440:192,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
There are many similar sliders in your map, you'd better fix them the same way, or maybe just copy the slider with my code everywhere.
Similar sliders: 00:03:398 (2) - 00:10:598 (4) - 00:13:512 (5) - 00:15:398 (5) - 00:19:855 (3) - 00:26:712 (6) - 00:39:226 (2) - 00:46:083 (7) - (this one will need to be scaled by 0.8 if you copy previous sliders) 00:50:712 (1) - 00:53:455 (4) - 00:55:683 (5) - 01:04:426 (5) - 01:08:712 (1,2) - 01:20:026 (3) - 01:23:626 (2) - ~mentioned already at the begin of the post ;;
01:07:169 (1) - Move the red point closer to the start of this slider to make this more accurate and smooth: http://puu.sh/5zPwo.jpg
01:22:769 (3) - This one is similar to the previous case ~hmmmmmmmmmmmmm okay .w.
00:05:626 (3) - Move the 3rd point a bit up to make a better blanket: http://puu.sh/5zPRo.jpg ~fixed

thanks for mods all ~

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ArtistUnicode:原田 ひとみ
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Source:Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai
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Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-12-03T04:42:39+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
[Hinsvar]
Placement
00:11:798(4,1) Swap NC better to be consistence. Consistent with what?
01:02:541(3) Add NC here to be consistence 4 combo stream. Uh, but even then, it's still a part of the combo where the note is in.
Rhythm
The gap of difficult (It means before KIAI or after KIAI) looks so large, I suppose latter of them looks overmapped with some notes, and others look a bit easier for AR9. Just suggestion, but you can make this diff more consistence difficulty better. I'm just following how the song goes. If the song gets intense, my map will follow it through.
00:26:026(6) I suppose you can start 1/1 slider from here, it's better to follow the vocal. Curren t sounds a bit lagged. Nope; the instrument is stronger here. It will feel weird if I emphasized the vocal instead.
SPOILER
01:20:369(1,2) It looks overmapped I suppose even if you aim to follow the guitar.It's not main sound so you can put notes simply better.(Replace 1/2 slider or 2 notes) ...I guess I'll make them a stream instead. The sound is definitely loud enough to the point where it needs to be mapped, still.
01:26:883(1,2,3,,1,2,3,) Again ^. No. The guitar definitely needs to be mapped because of their volume.
Hit Sound
00:13:855(1) Add finish here. The instrument isn't that heavy here...
00:52:255(1) It's a beginning of KIAI and it sounds better if add finish here.Okay.
01:22:426~ Turn down volume better, currnt sounds so loudly. Well, the music gets more intense here, so I think I should increase the volume to reinforce it.
01:26:198(4) Really sounds odd and loudly, maybe delete clap better. Sure.

grumd wrote:

— Prayer

Your diff has some notes that are not present in the music, they should be removed:
00:27:483 (5) - 00:40:512 (3) - 00:57:312 (4) - Removed the second and third note, but there's definitely something at 00:27:483. I'm sure enough there's a sound.
00:50:712 (1) - Move this 2 grids left and 1 grid up Ah, sure.

Thanks for modding!

Yeah.

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100,32,76941,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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56,224,77283,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-12-03T14:44:55+00:00

Update :3

grumd

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grumd 2013-12-03T15:37:59+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
00:27:483. I'm sure enough there's a sound.

Yeah, you're right, my bad, I was listening without headphones.

I don't really like the shapes of some sliders in Hard, but the diff itself is well-made in terms of playability and rhythm, so if the mapper likes his sliders, I'm okay with them.

Bubbled!

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-12-06T12:28:18+00:00

Thanks ~
For other Bats that willing to check this, can you make the title and artist appeared at 00:08:369 - ?
With any color that fit the BG / video in your opinion would be appreciated. :3

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2013-12-06T17:55:00+00:00

grumd wrote:
I don't really like the shapes of some sliders in Hard, but the diff itself is well-made in terms of playability and rhythm, so if the mapper likes his sliders, I'm okay with them.

Thanks alot btw >w<

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-12-07T01:08:40+00:00

Sorry but I have to pop this map due to the new rule about difficulty names as you can read here: p/2725713

Make sure to rename "Hinsvar's Prayer" difficulty to something that actually shows which kind of difficulty is that like "Hinsvar's Insane".

Once you've fixed it I'll repair your bubble.

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-12-07T01:23:00+00:00

k.

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2013-12-07T01:24:07+00:00

Re-Bubbled~

Kurai

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Kurai 2013-12-07T17:03:00+00:00

Ranked \o

Ryodan_old_1

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Ryodan_old_1 2013-12-07T17:05:27+00:00

Gratz. o/

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2013-12-07T17:37:16+00:00

I suddenly received a highlight and i was like: wtf who is calling me

and then it said someone reached rank 1 on my diff...

SERIOUSLY DIDNT EXPECT THIS GRATZ >W<

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-12-07T17:40:39+00:00

SkyDevil wrote:
I suddenly received a highlight and i was like: wtf who is calling me

and then it said someone reached rank 1 on my diff...

SERIOUSLY DIDNT EXPECT THIS GRATZ >W<

Something similiar happen to me, i was playing VN and suddenly i received highlight and i was like : shit i'm still playing my favourite VN
when i'm done then it was banchobot HL ing me that my map just got ranked www

Thanks for the effort guys !~

Cydros

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Joined January 2013

Cydros 2013-12-07T18:07:13+00:00

Finallt next song from this anime :3

Shiviaren

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Shiviaren 2013-12-07T18:10:39+00:00

ah kampret lw makin banyak aja bitmep ranked lw >.>

DenoisoGoiso

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