wtf can't update anything O_O
Updated + fixed volume in the end (thanks to Mickey for noticing that). Also fixed preview pointyeahyeahyeahhh wrote:
Was asked for mod this
General:
Kiai timings across all diffs aren't the same. Intended? Shouldn't be but Kodora has 5 kiai timings and the others only 3. On Kodora delete the Kiai at 00:10:492 and 01:16:116 It's fine since i'm guest mapper (i just added 2 more fountains)
Kodora:
Lots of unsnapped inherited timing sections, maybe go through and adjustment or make sure that this doesn't effect your hitsounds at all And some of them DO affect D: fixed
00:14:866 (2) - Hidden under the slider of 00:14:241 (4), maybe arrange it so its not under it. It's fine ~.~
01:07:991 (2) - ^ ^
yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:
Was asked for mod this
General:
Your MP3 is 32kb/s... try to find a better quality one? Try to find a 128kb/s mp3.
Kiai timings across all diffs aren't the same. Intended? Shouldn't be but Kodora has 5 kiai timings and the others only 3. On Kodora delete the Kiai at 00:10:492 and 01:16:116
Skystar:
Lots of unsnapped inherited timing sections, maybe go through and adjustment or make sure that this doesn't effect your hitsounds at all it doesnt matter, hitsounding is fine
01:19:554 (1) - Unsnapped slider-end fixed
00:42:523 - Maybe put a break or a spinner here? as i have said... no
00:50:491 (1) - Covered up too much by the previous slider imo, hard to see. nah it's fine ;-;
01:04:241 (1) - ^
01:05:023 (1,2,1) - This is... IDK what. It looks sloppy and extremely hard to read, 01:05:335 (2) make its all confusing and hard to see 01:05:491 (1). I suggest completely fixing this pattern or whatever you wanna call it. well it's not confusing while playing, also it just fits perfectly with the streams after this imo
01:19:085 (1) - No, just noooooooooooooo stop hiding notes under sliders D: nah ;-; well i stole this pattern from an other map...
Kodora:
Lots of unsnapped inherited timing sections, maybe go through and adjustment or make sure that this doesn't effect your hitsounds at all
00:14:866 (2) - Hidden under the slider of 00:14:241 (4), maybe arrange it so its not under it.
01:07:991 (2) - ^
Normal:
Lots of unsnapped inherited timing sections, maybe go through and adjustment or make sure that this doesn't effect your hitsounds at all
Easy:
Lots of unsnapped inherited timing sections, maybe go through and adjustment or make sure that this doesn't effect your hitsounds at all
There is one problemHakuNoKaemi wrote:
The one I uploaded is yours but re-equalised, though
(I just did something to avoid an excessive loudness)
There's nothing bad in VBR, it could work badly only on old old old pc's
Amamiya Yuko wrote:
[Easy]
00:25:469 (1) - This section feels a bit cluttered with hit objects. It's a really calm part in the Easy difficulty. I think simplifying 00:28:282 (1,2,3) - to something like this would fit the pace much better this rhythm sounds weird o.o
It was only an example. I still feel that this is a bit too cluttered rhythmically. See if you can simplify it a little here.
00:42:658 - Insert a break here nope, as i have explained
no, break time is something used for letting player know "oops here's a break time you can rest freely huehue", and here's apparently not suitable to add it.
Is this the reason you explained? Could you reword that? I'm not exactly sure I understand how this applies considering the length of these blank spots.
00:47:345 (2,1,2,3) - This is incredibly boring rhythmically for the start of the kiai section. Spruce it up a bit. Same applies to 00:56:252 (1) - i dont see the problem of it.. since it's an easy diff and i just follow the drums, what's wrong with that?
Because it puts me to sleep. Easy doesn't mean boring. It means that it should be easy to grasp for an new player, but still follow the music well. Following the metronome is technically all of this, but it leads to a map that obviously has little thought put into it.
01:13:910 (1,2,3) - Considering you're reaching the climax, using circles would give a better feeling of amping up. prefer sliders here... also adding circles would be hard for an easy diff
That's the point of "amping it up" a bit. You want to increase the energy, and you can accomplish that by increasing the difficulty slightly. People aren't going to all suddenly fail because of those circles. It will also give them something to try and work on to improve. You have to start somewhere.
Add a spinner somewhere so that there are variable high scores possible.
Any reply to this? You should have a spinner somewhere in the easier difficulties at the least so that high scores aren't stagnant.
[Normal]
00:21:094 - Add a break same as above
00:42:658 - Add a break same
Add a spinner somewhere so that there are variable high scores possible.
01:06:409 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - This is all 1/1. :/ Try giving a little variation in here. It's pretty drab as-is. 01:11:410 (1) - is fine with the 1/1 considering the musical emphasis, but before it, there's plenty to follow that would fit within a Normal's context well it may be a bit boring but i dont think it's a serious problem... If even you are admitting that it's a bit boring, you should have an idea or two on how to make it more enjoyable to play. This is something that people play to have fun, not get bored of.
And continuing the mod on that diff:Kodora wrote:
Anyway,
[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best Yes, it fits at most of parts but sadly sounds too busy at the beginning & calm part due to SV changes & songs tempo - this song cries for multiple tickrate ;_;
Looks like you took care of this.
[Kodora]
I think lowering the distance snap during the intro would give a better feeling of transition from the slower part to the faster part when the back kicks in at 00:10:155 - I just do not want to make it too clamped here :<
Considering that you're using 1.5x spacing during a slow intro part, dropping it to 1.25x or something still won't have overlaps and won't feel jumpy like it does now.
See if you like the third colour I'm using (it's sampled from Takao's hair)Garven wrote:
[Haku]
00:00:804 (1) - Remove new combo Deleted note, since I'm following vocals mostly
Why is your stack leniency so low? Stuff like 00:22:835 (1,2) - isn't stacking properly It shouldn't stack, only 1/2 have to stack. I used it to achieve a "Stop and Start" effect n many parts.
00:24:085 (3) - Why a slider? Just use a circle it fit better since the vocals isn't only in that point and it does give a "portato-like" effect
00:39:398 (4) - That whistle intended? Actually, yes, used a 45% zone to danpen it
00:54:241 (3,1) - Eew overlap I put it here for for a triangle, and, it is the better way I found to achieve the effect I wanted
01:01:585 (1,2) - Should be stacked It shouldn't stack, only 1/2 have to stack. I used it to achieve a "Stop and Start" effect n many parts.
01:25:257 (1) - End this at 01:26:194 - I had made it end onto a dampened Finish sound
Alarido wrote:
Not a mod. No kd pls (unless you deem as useful).[Kodora]
00:10:960 (3) - Why not stack it onto (4)'s head? Since many players rage with such note placements at such speed, making a flow-stop from 100 to ~0¹ miles per hour... unless for some players whose could do it without stopping by some advanced technique. Hm, done
00:14:866 (2) - It feels ok for me, since the movement is not so hard to predict (due to slider shape), and also it 's at least a bit visible (unless you're HD'ing the song or using an opaque skin). However, it would be so tricky for a Hard diff. Should be fine for Hard+ diff like this one - (2) also can be readed by approach circle.
00:51:116 (3,4,5,1) - It's mighty fitting to an Insane/Extra diff (not in a Hard), since it requires so advanced playing skills (not possible avoid some lewaminiscence) to predict such movements. Should be fine for Hard+. Those hitobjects keeps same DS, also (1) is easy to read by approachcircle (and also predictable due to form of slider).
00:57:991 (2) - The head would be visible, although it's so hard to change the placements. It's very easy to read head of this slider and imo it flows enough intuitive to predict where it starts.
00:59:866 (5) - ^ ^
01:07:991 (2) - But, unlike 00:14:866 (2), slider shape can't tell us right about the underlying note, so it should be visible or, at least, stacked in the head or tail. Actually, this slider is "cornered" to make this note more readable, and 01:07:835 (1,2,3,4) - making together a straight line (also 01:07:366 (5,1,2,3) - keeps same ds) so it works enough intuitive to predict next note (following approachcircles helps to read too)
01:23:929 (1,2,3) - Considering the spped and the harshness of whole map, it could be changed to a 1/4 repeating slider, since the stop achieved here is the same for triplets and 1/4-repeating sliders. Done
And continuing the mod on that diff:Garven wrote:
[Kodora]
I think lowering the distance snap during the intro would give a better feeling of transition from the slower part to the faster part when the back kicks in at 00:10:155 - I just do not want to make it too clamped here :<
Considering that you're using 1.5x spacing during a slow intro part, dropping it to 1.25x or something still won't have overlaps and won't feel jumpy like it does now. Redused to x1.30
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368,215,40804,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,304,40960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
270,214,41116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
153,56,41585,5,8,0:0:0:0:
105,145,41741,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,56,41898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
203,146,42054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,42523,12,0,45335,0:0:0:0:
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376,320,46585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,232,46741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,200,46898,2,0,P|456:120|416:32,1,172,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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131,78,47835,6,0,P|139:38|163:-2,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,174,48148,2,0,P|99:214|75:254,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,337,48460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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368,264,49085,5,8,0:0:0:0:
293,336,49241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,168,49866,2,0,P|160:184|88:104,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,98,50335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,48,50491,6,0,L|352:36,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,116,50804,2,0,L|376:128,1,86,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,216,51116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,255,51273,2,0,P|367:309|286:294,1,172,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,216,51741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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80,304,52366,2,0,B|0:240|40:136,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,64,52835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,104,52991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,181,53148,2,0,B|249:185|301:157|301:157|389:189,1,172,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,271,53616,5,0,0:0:0:0:
357,350,53773,2,0,L|261:318,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,54085,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,272,54241,2,0,P|104:320|72:376,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,208,54554,2,0,P|64:160|96:104,1,86,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,198,54866,6,0,P|221:198|293:158,1,107.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,50,55179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,87,55335,2,0,L|462:111,1,107.5,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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464,304,56116,6,0,L|407:311|359:343|287:335,1,172,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,242,56585,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,288,56741,2,0,L|112:336,1,86,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,278,57054,2,0,L|96:240,1,86,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,190,57366,2,0,P|218:118|178:27,1,172,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,108,57835,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,126,57991,2,0,P|256:120|320:88,1,86,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,128,58304,2,0,P|405:171|440:216,1,86,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,295,58616,6,0,B|368:336|368:336|312:288|240:320,1,172,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,352,59085,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,272,59241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,59398,2,0,P|180:117|104:48,1,172,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,120,59866,2,0,L|229:136|309:128|381:144,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,194,60335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,296,60491,2,0,L|415:287|335:295|287:279,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,280,60960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,120,61273,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,120,61585,5,10,0:0:0:0:
272,144,61741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,64,61898,2,0,B|384:112|360:192|360:192|408:232,1,172,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,280,62366,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,344,62523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,272,62679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,312,62835,2,0,L|214:283|160:240,1,86,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,341,63148,2,0,B|104:304|104:304|32:328|-16:280,1,172,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,216,63616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,168,63773,6,0,P|152:127|144:72,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,32,64085,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,80,64241,2,0,L|400:64,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,145,64554,2,0,L|407:159,1,86,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,64866,6,0,L|368:296|256:320,1,107.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,360,65179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,65335,2,0,L|48:176,1,107.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,106,65648,6,0,P|133:82|141:34,7,53.75,8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,48,66273,6,0,P|206:48|248:40,1,86,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,8,66585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,88,66741,2,0,B|432:152|392:208|392:208|416:272,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,336,67210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,304,67366,2,0,B|256:264|256:264|176:248|128:328,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,355,67835,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,266,67991,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,184,68148,2,0,P|248:176|168:200,1,86,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,68460,2,0,P|315:93|231:96,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,68773,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,144,68929,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,48,69085,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,96,69241,2,0,P|176:192|80:232,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,311,69710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,328,69866,6,0,B|232:296|280:336|280:336|344:320,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,360,70335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,280,70491,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,240,70648,2,0,L|368:200|384:128,1,86,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,35,70960,2,0,L|473:75|464:120,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,156,71273,5,12,0:0:0:0:
214,61,71585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,240,71898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,208,72210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,240,72523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,360,72835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,176,73148,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,40,73460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,216,73773,6,0,P|272:264|224:320,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,240,74085,2,0,P|155:279|88:308,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,184,74398,6,0,P|5:141|26:104,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,159,74710,2,0,P|118:123|154:99,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,168,75023,6,0,P|240:144|288:128,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,168,75335,2,0,P|360:194|320:208,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,301,75648,6,0,L|292:357,5,43,8|8|8|8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,352,76116,6,0,L|224:368|88:336,1,172,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,338,76585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,256,76741,2,0,L|16:216|40:152,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,55,77054,2,0,L|143:95|128:136,1,86,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,224,77366,2,0,B|224:272|288:240|288:240|320:280,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,336,77835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,248,77991,2,0,L|424:200|456:160,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,42,78304,2,0,L|391:90|368:120,1,86,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,120,78616,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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80,120,79241,2,0,B|88:192|152:208|152:208|136:288,1,172,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,336,79710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,344,79866,2,0,L|248:352|304:320|368:320,1,172,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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371,86,80648,2,0,P|355:125|360:168,1,86,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,264,80960,2,0,L|304:288|256:288,1,86,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,112,81741,2,0,B|280:144|336:96|336:96|376:120,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,208,82210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,168,82366,2,0,P|488:240|456:344,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,360,82835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,320,82991,2,0,B|240:304|240:304|208:368|120:360,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,264,83460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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263,150,84241,2,0,P|351:158|407:70,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,8,84710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,72,84866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Yuko: No rush. I figure I may as well clean up the guest diffs while waiting for you. q:Kodora wrote:
[Kodora]
00:14:866 (2) - This is unacceptable for a Hard difficulty. Make it less covered please. I asked more BATs and mappers for their opinions about this - it should be fine for advanced hard diff like this one since we already have easiest hard here. Also it's really not hard to read.
This isn't acceptable for a Hard difficulty. The circle is completely hidden by the slider body. This is a technique that should be used sparingly in Insane level difficulties. This was designed as a Hard. Make it more visible.
00:36:898 (1,2,1,2) - According to your rhythmic pattern, you shouldn't be moving to 1/2 rhythms until 00:38:148 - though adding a beat at 00:35:491 - would help move things forward a bit. Fixed
You still have premature 1/2ulation at 00:36:898 (1,2,1,2) -
00:49:241 (2) - This was unexpected. You never did these before - it felt like you were going to do your normal stack thing again like the rest of the map prior. That's a little trick to not let HD players FC it in one try - while it still easy to play/read nomod such trap should not case problems it also stolen from other map
It's more about consistency of flow. It breaks your flow up until this point so I have to actually look at the map instead of just playing it and enjoying it. Not a good design move in the long run.
00:51:273 (4,1) - This overlap makes me cry nah D: Real tears yo. They be fallin'
00:54:866 (1) - This speed up makes no sense musically nor does it fit with your mapping. This little speed-up done to emphazire second part, which actually stronger than first one.
If there is an increase in intensity of the music, I sure am not hearing it. Especially to the degree that you're emphasizing it. It plays out of place to the music itself.
01:04:866 (1) - ^
01:07:991 (2) - This is unacceptable for a Hard difficulty. Make it less covered please.
That's because you are at Insane level, so you won't notice it.Chloe wrote:
I finds those overlaps are not so difficult to read, also not too hard as a hard diff, and now the spread is clear here with the E N H H+ I.
It's likely that he IS at Insane level, but assure those overlaps aren't noticeable for an insane player as much as jumps and streams.Priti wrote:
That's because you are at Insane level, so you won't notice it.Chloe wrote:
I finds those overlaps are not so difficult to read, also not too hard as a hard diff, and now the spread is clear here with the E N H H+ I.
It's like saying tattoos don't hurt after you have done 30 of them.
Everything i didnt reply to = fixed.Garven wrote:
[General]
Something I overlooked initially, sorry: Your combo colors are very very similar. Make them more distinct from each other.
No tick rate 2 on your maps, Yuko? You didn't reply.TR2 boss Garven!!Well i still prefer TR1... ;-;
[Insane]
00:11:273 (3) - This feels unnecessary considering the strong emphasis in what's going on in the music. The spacing also makes it deceiving when you look at the next tiny combo (that shouldn't be a combo on it's own) Doing something more like what you did at 00:13:616 (2,1,1) - is recommended (except kill all the unnecessary new combos)
I'm not going to name off all the super-short combos. Get rid of them. They screw with the HP Drain metric.
00:38:773 (1,2) - This change in flow just breaks everything you've set up up until this part. I suggest you ctrl + g the 2 slider and adjust the pattern from there.
00:42:523 - Add a break or hit objects.
00:52:210 (1,2,3) - Random triple why?
00:57:835 (2,3) - What is this rhythm. It breaks all the other instances of this part of the music that you mapped. Eh.. I actually dont see the problem of it, it's kind of different with 00:47:679 (3,4) - in the music, if you have listened to it carefully.
01:02:210 (5,6,7) - Another random triple. There's nothing to justify this in the music.
01:05:335 (2,1) - This spacing feels way too close after all the jumps right before it.
01:12:210 (1) - This flows better ctrl + g'd I juststole this pattern from other mapmade a difference with 01:11:273 (1) - to avoid boring things, also it flows good imo?
01:16:898 (3) - Here's this thing again from the intro. And all the too-short combos to go with it.
EDIT: Updated Kodora's diff.Garven wrote:
[General]
Combo colors are still way too similar. fixed
[Easy]
00:46:116 (1) - Alright, now just give more recovery time after the spinner and we're good to go. Aim for about 3-4 beats for an Easy. fixed
[Insane]
00:45:023 - May as well snap the end of the break here. And maaaybe start the break at 00:43:148 - but it's already weird as a delayed break. I dunno. snapped the end, but keep start
There's still rampant new combo spam all over. I'll point them out individually later when I have some time. ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-;
Waiting on Kodora to fix the hidden notes.
Garven wrote:
Changed thisKodora wrote:
[Kodora]
00:14:866 (2) - This isn't acceptable for a Hard difficulty. The circle is completely hidden by the slider body. This is a technique that should be used sparingly in Insane level difficulties. This was designed as a Hard. Make it more visible. This guideline got changed to Avoid covering up objects with hitbursts, slider tracks, and other objects, especially in easier difficulties. Obscuring objects can make them difficult to read. There can be some exceptions where patterns have a clear and logical path and the timing for these objects can be told easily.. Main point here is real playability - In fact players have almost 300 ms to read this, and such circle plasement at this part shouldn't be real problem with AR 8:
00:36:898 (1,2,1,2) - You still have premature 1/2ulation at 00:36:898 (1,2,1,2) - It follows background guitar (Insane also have same rhythm at this point)
00:49:241 (2) - It's more about consistency of flow. It breaks your flow up until this point so I have to actually look at the map instead of just playing it and enjoying it. Not a good design move in the long run. Changed to manual stack ;___;
00:51:273 (4,1) - Real tears yo. They be fallin' Changed this
00:54:866 (1) - If there is an increase in intensity of the music, I sure am not hearing it. Especially to the degree that you're emphasizing it. It plays out of place to the music itself. Second repetition is also "stronger" than first one. And main point - imo, it will looks boring if second repetition will be same as first.
01:04:866 (1) - ^
01:07:991 (2) - This is unacceptable for a Hard difficulty. Make it less covered please.
Yuko: No rush. I figure I may as well clean up the guest diffs while waiting for you. q: