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Afilia Saga - S.M.L (TV Size)

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Fycho
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Fycho
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年11月3日 at 21:14:24

Artist: Afilia Saga
Title: S.M.L (TV Size)
Source: Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
Tags: Laurier Amamiya yuko [Minakami Yuki] opening 俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
BPM: 200
Filesize: 10100kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.95 stars, 279 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 441 notes)
  3. Laurier's Insane (5 stars, 421 notes)
  4. Normal (4.43 stars, 155 notes)
  5. Skystar (5 stars, 414 notes)
  6. Yuki's Easy (3.21 stars, 106 notes)
Download: Afilia Saga - S.M.L (TV Size)
Download: Afilia Saga - S.M.L (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#10
~俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している~opening~

Mapset:
Yuki's Easy—— [Minakami Yuki]
Noraml & Hard & Insane——me
Laurier's Insane——Laurier
Skystar——Amamiya Yuko

BG&Video——-Umi-
Here is P A N's version
You can find the ranked Ending map made by Tsukuyomi here: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/128908
You can find the ranked Taiko map made by kanpakyin here: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/126342
Last edited by Fycho , edited 73 times in total.
Unsfamiliar
540 posts
Joined May 2013
Unsfamiliar
Aaaah so much moe! Good luck with this one Fycho~

Btw I think you should increase the mp3 volume a bit :D
Spencers
98 posts
Joined August 2012
Spencers
I难度打起来好无力 :(
板凳
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
And here the video

http://puu.sh/4NRGV/e1fb72c1c7.rar

Video offset -321 :3
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
恭喜Rank
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

lkx_Shore wrote:

恭喜Rank
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki


GDmapper先主动来摸一下

[General]
  1. Hard的kiai time和Normal、Insane不对 在01:07:218 - 这儿

[Yuki's Easy]
  1. 自摸一下
  2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:47:339 - snap to 00:47:343
  3. 00:29:118 (1) - 没包好
  4. 00:50:418 (4) - 没包好
  5. 00:57:618 (4) - 没包好
  6. 01:09:918 (1) - 比较违和
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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38718
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:S.M.L (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:Fycho
Version:Yuki's Easy
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、青春ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags:[Minakami Yuki] opening Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
BeatmapID:312682
BeatmapSetID:121662

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.900000005960464
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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256,192,86718,12,0,88968,0:0:0:0:

[Normal]
  1. 00:08:418 - 这里的slidertick要不要加上？

[Hard]
  1. 00:24:318 (1) - 没包好
  2. 00:34:068 (2,3,4) - 你这我也觉得不好看-.-
  3. 00:47:418 (2) - unsnap!

[Insane]
  1. 00:53:418 (2) - 强迫症患者表示没stack好

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Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
[General]
mp3太小聲?

[Insane]
00:12:318 (1) - 彎點?
00:19:968 (2) - 140,128
00:21:318 (5,6) - 我覺得這個有點不舒服
00:30:918 (1) - NC?
00:40:518 (3) - ctrl+g
00:58:518 (4,5) - ^

[Hard]
00:34:068 (2,3,4) - 並排得比較好?
01:20:718 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形?

[Normal]
00:08:868 (3) - clap
00:19:068 -
00:38:118 (4) - 轉做whistle?

[Easy]
用一用靜音tick?
00:01:218 - 00:03:618 - 這兩處空了 聽著好違和
00:33:918 (1,2,3,4) - 加個Finish
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:



GDmapper先主动来摸一下

[General]
  1. Hard的kiai time和Normal、Insane不对 在01:07:218 - 这儿 好的


[Normal]
  1. 00:08:418 - 这里的slidertick要不要加上？ 这没tick怎么加音啊

[Hard]
  1. 00:24:318 (1) - 没包好好的
  2. 00:34:068 (2,3,4) - 你这我也觉得不好看-.-我觉得还好
  3. 00:47:418 (2) - unsnap!好的，话说这可能是insane变速不一样导致，aimod纯B找不出

[Insane]
  1. 00:53:418 (2) - 强迫症患者表示没stack好懒叠了这个没事

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Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[General]
mp3太小聲?

[Insane]
00:12:318 (1) - 彎點? 不弯了
00:19:968 (2) - 140,128不了
00:21:318 (5,6) - 我覺得這個有點不舒服我觉得可以啊
00:30:918 (1) - NC?这个居然忘记了，感谢提醒
00:40:518 (3) - ctrl+g 不好，有点绕手
00:58:518 (4,5) - ^那样4的间距太小

[Hard]
00:34:068 (2,3,4) - 並排得比較好?不
01:20:718 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形?ok

[Normal]
00:08:868 (3) - clap 这里不用tick了，反而多余不好听
00:19:068 - 这个有clap啊
00:38:118 (4) - 轉做whistle? whistle不强烈啊
thanks for modding~all updated
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
Hi Fycho again me :o

what about this bg (better imo) : http://puu.sh/4PZPu/7f1d3b00df.png

no kd
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
From queue

[General]
我一开始还以为I是skystar 估计没睡醒

[Easy]

00:18:318 (2) - 逆时针转5°
SPOILER
00:26:718 (1) - 拐点移动到白线上？不过貌似无关紧要（
01:15:918 (3,4,1) - ds最好不要改 不过这里我没想到解决办法._.
01:24:918 (2,4) - 压上了 其实我觉得去掉4直接给3加reverse也还可以

[Normal]

00:23:118 (4,5) - ds
00:37:518 (3) - 试试有点变化的slider？
比如
00:49:518 (3) - 形状不太舒服 第二个锚点移到 x431 y230

[Hard]

00:03:768 (4) - 放在1附近 离4远一点
00:04:668 (3) - nc？
00:09:618 (5) - ^
00:16:818 (3,1) - 不好看 先slider后note然后移动移动位置？
举个栗子
00:20:718 (1,3) - 感觉1可以用个和3弧度一样的slider 或者干脆复制3
00:28:518 (3,4) - 调换顺序
00:35:868 (5) - 缩短一点在白线上加圈吧 前面不加也可以
01:06:168 (1,2,3,4) - 1缩短
之后这段加一个圈
01:20:868 (2,3) - 调换位置好玩（砖
01:22:518 (3) - ctrl+g 甩尾flow放在后面
01:24:918 (3) - ^

[Insane]

我大概还是纯鼠玩家 打图的感觉可能有点怪

00:05:418 (2,3,4) - 打起来有种脱力感
00:19:518 (1,2) - 2放在上边顺一点
00:22:518 (4) - 和00:21:768 (7) - 一样 向之后打的note那边弯
00:33:318 (5,6,7,8) - 音乐鼓点变低 这四个ds改成逐渐减小？比如00:33:618 (7) - 放到x292 y224
00:36:168 (4) - 去掉
00:38:718 (1) - 这个可以拉成3/4吧 既然后面用了很多
00:40:518 (3) - ctrl+g
00:48:918 (4) - 缩短到1/2跟鼓点好一点
01:01:818 (3,4,5,6,7) - 五连有点违和感 去掉4吧
00:51:318 (4) - ^

感觉没地方可挑啊 只好写点个人化的建议凑字

lkx_Shore wrote:

恭喜Rank
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Eggache0 wrote:

[Easy]

00:18:318 (2) - 逆时针转5°
SPOILER
fixed
00:26:718 (1) - 拐点移动到白线上？不过貌似无关紧要（
01:15:918 (3,4,1) - ds最好不要改 不过这里我没想到解决办法._. 改好了
01:24:918 (2,4) - 压上了 其实我觉得去掉4直接给3加reverse也还可以 稍微动了下

lkx_Shore wrote:

恭喜Rank
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Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

Eggache0 wrote:

From queue

[General]
我一开始还以为I是skystar 估计没睡醒 吓尿

[Normal]

00:23:118 (4,5) - ds
00:37:518 (3) - 试试有点变化的slider？good idea
比如
00:49:518 (3) - 形状不太舒服 第二个锚点移到 x431 y230 好的

[Hard]

00:03:768 (4) - 放在1附近 离4远一点位置改了
00:04:668 (3) - nc？不了
00:09:618 (5) - ^不了
00:16:818 (3,1) - 不好看 先slider后note然后移动移动位置？不好，这样节奏不舒服，那个人声用的note的话
举个栗子
00:20:718 (1,3) - 感觉1可以用个和3弧度一样的slider 或者干脆复制3 不好看
00:28:518 (3,4) - 调换顺序好主意
00:35:868 (5) - 缩短一点在白线上加圈吧 前面不加也可以不好
01:06:168 (1,2,3,4) - 1缩短
之后这段加一个圈
不好
01:20:868 (2,3) - 调换位置好玩（砖好的，那就调换了
01:22:518 (3) - ctrl+g 甩尾flow放在后面这个和下面的都没改
01:24:918 (3) - ^

[Insane]

我大概还是纯鼠玩家 打图的感觉可能有点怪

00:05:418 (2,3,4) - 打起来有种脱力感
00:19:518 (1,2) - 2放在上边顺一点 其实差不多，用遮挡坑人
00:22:518 (4) - 和00:21:768 (7) - 一样 向之后打的note那边弯不顺
00:33:318 (5,6,7,8) - 音乐鼓点变低 这四个ds改成逐渐减小？比如00:33:618 (7) - 放到x292 y224调整了部分note的位置
00:36:168 (4) - 去掉好的
00:38:718 (1) - 这个可以拉成3/4吧 既然后面用了很多不了
00:40:518 (3) - ctrl+g不好，虽然顺局部flow，但是大体flow不顺
00:48:918 (4) - 缩短到1/2跟鼓点好一点好的
01:01:818 (3,4,5,6,7) - 五连有点违和感 去掉4吧觉得还好就没去掉了
00:51:318 (4) - ^

感觉没地方可挑啊 只好写点个人化的建议凑字
Thanks for modding~

To Umi,thank you for so beautiful BG~
Spring Roll
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Spring Roll
射一星
Kayano
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Kayano

Spring Roll wrote:

射一星
Zero__wind
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Zero__wind

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

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Kamure
735 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamure
Major apologies...
I can't seem to find anything wrong in the first three difficulties and I can't seem to read [Insane] even with the lowered playback rate.

Also, I'm a day late...

But, I love the map (even though my first impression on the anime is quite negative).

So, I'll shoot a star.
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[General]
  • Very fast mod
    BG小孩子看了根本把持不住
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:768 (6,1) - 接到1的时候，我比较倾向从下面往上拉的感觉
  2. 00:08:568 (6) - Finish
  3. 00:12:168 (8,1) - 不太顺，滑条可以左上拉点
  4. 00:33:018 (3,5,7) - Finish
  5. 00:42:018 (7) - 感觉有点怪,可能是因为我比较喜欢往右边飞
[Hard]
  1. 00:36:468 (6,1,2) - 可能是唱的原因，这里打击感不太好，我比较倾向00:36:468 (6) - 是一个滑条然后折返一次
  2. 01:22:368 (2) - 说实话我不喜欢这种梗，因为打起来很怪，如果是我，我会把弄放在x132 y200附近
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:718 (1,2) - 打击感比较微妙
[Other]
  • 恭喜rank
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho
To Chamle：Thank you for star~about insane diff I may take some consideration maybe I will change some patterns which are hard to read

lkx_Shore wrote:

[General]
  • Very fast mod
    BG小孩子看了根本把持不住 very把持的住
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:768 (6,1) - 接到1的时候，我比较倾向从下面往上拉的感觉 这个从下往上而后面的就不顺，而且从之前的来看，我觉的从上往下顺
  2. 00:08:568 (6) - Finish加了clap，finish和后面的finish组合略吵
  3. 00:12:168 (8,1) - 不太顺，滑条可以左上拉点好的
  4. 00:33:018 (3,5,7) - Finish背景这里是鼓点所以加的是clap
  5. 00:42:018 (7) - 感觉有点怪,可能是因为我比较喜欢往右边飞good idea
[Hard]
  1. 00:36:468 (6,1,2) - 可能是唱的原因，这里打击感不太好，我比较倾向00:36:468 (6) - 是一个滑条然后折返一次 干脆把6给去掉了
  2. 01:22:368 (2) - 说实话我不喜欢这种梗，因为打起来很怪，如果是我，我会把弄放在x132 y200附近不好
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:718 (1,2) - 打击感比较微妙感觉不到怎么微妙.w.
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
Yo!

[General]

- 跟现在online的BAT谈了谈,大多数都说应该换BG. :(
- 我觉得现在slidertick的clap声音有点高; player会以为slider已经完了,因为它比真正的slider end声音都大

[Yuki's Easy]

当Easy来说有点难.

其他没有问题。

[Normal]

01:26:718 (1) - 放中间？有可能会需要调整01:25:518 (3,4)一点。

这个图的kiai全是1/1,有点boring. 找几个地方加1/2 note我觉得会更好玩,象00:46:668+00:46:968.

[Hard]

00:33:918 (1) - 还是两个note比slider更好,现在tick的位置怪怪的 (这几个slider样子也有点怪)
00:57:618 (4) - 减掉一个repeat?
00:59:718 (3) - slider反过来? (三个slider同个方向)
01:06:768 (2) - 重音在01:06:918上, 把这个改成两个note?
01:07:518 (1) - 把slider慢下来有点不自然,特别是在这又开了一次kiai...

这个diff挺好玩~

[Insane]

我个人不是很喜欢这种图,觉得整个图都觉得很乱,除了AR以外看不出pattern,所以没法给你好的意见. :(

---

加油！
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

Kytoxid wrote:

Yo!

[General]

- 跟现在online的BAT谈了谈,大多数都说应该换BG. :( 等到将来再看情况吧，也找不到更好的目前
- 我觉得现在slidertick的clap声音有点高; player会以为slider已经完了,因为它比真正的slider end声音都大tick音我想办法调整下音量吧



[Normal]

01:26:718 (1) - 放中间？有可能会需要调整01:25:518 (3,4)一点 ok。

这个图的kiai全是1/1,有点boring. 找几个地方加1/2 note我觉得会更好玩,象00:46:668+00:46:968. 连续三个note在normal又感觉太难，用1/2滑条又感觉太密了，想不到什么好的节奏

[Hard]

00:33:918 (1) - 还是两个note比slider更好,现在tick的位置怪怪的 (这几个slider样子也有点怪)好的，其实都是双点note感觉不怎么好
00:57:618 (4) - 减掉一个repeat?我这里想跟1/4全跟
00:59:718 (3) - slider反过来? (三个slider同个方向)感觉上没有反向来的顺
01:06:768 (2) - 重音在01:06:918上, 把这个改成两个note?其实这里1/4滑条尾压着，在打的时候也是滑条看成note处理，打的时候感觉还不错
01:07:518 (1) - 把slider慢下来有点不自然,特别是在这又开了一次kiai...是嘛？可是我倒没感觉，我是觉得这里音乐里的snare变稀少了所以节奏也下稀了

这个diff挺好玩~

[Insane]

我个人不是很喜欢这种图,觉得整个图都觉得很乱,除了AR以外看不出pattern,所以没法给你好的意见. :( 恩好的:<

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加油！
thanks~ :)
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue
hello~
来自群里的req~fycho姥爷的图真的是摸不出来什么东西，我也只能是挑刺一样的挑一点出来作为一点小小的建议啦~
这里是我的建议（只是建议而已） 这里是我觉得需要修改的地方
General
高难度的确是高难度了。。其余做的我觉得很漂亮了~
Yuki's Easy
高质量Easy，滑条拉的很美观，挑不出来。。
00:01:518 (2) - 滑条尾部音效闲的比较突兀，尝试缩小此处音量或者不要对比这样明显。
00:57:918 (1,3) - 这俩滑条是想要做成一个样式的话弄得形状一样，复制粘贴一下比较好。。
Normal
找不出来啥，提点建议。。
01:07:518 - 音量减的略显突兀，我个人觉得音量可以不减。。
Hard
虽然Bpm很高但还是认为偏难，一点建议
01:14:718 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里确实难了，200单点还有不是一直线上的位移，看着像花舞那一串。。
后面的连续blank应用也许有点难，不过说得过去。。做的难点也是理所应当的。
Insane
这个确实是难了。。。上来就大幅度来回跳，距离还是不一定的，确实太难。。
有一点要说的是跳的方向跟滑条似乎还不是一个方向的= =打不了这个图所以我也没有办法细说了
Laurier's Insane
= = too hard for me. So i cannot give further suggestions. sry..
祝rank good luck！ fycho 神mapper go go！
&是我打图打的太老了？感觉现在图难度飞的不是一般快。。
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Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

azuretwinight wrote:


Yuki's Easy
高质量Easy，滑条拉的很美观，挑不出来。。
00:01:518 (2) - 滑条尾部音效闲的比较突兀，尝试缩小此处音量或者不要对比这样明显。 我觉得还好
00:57:918 (1,3) - 这俩滑条是想要做成一个样式的话弄得形状一样，复制粘贴一下比较好。。 好 我稍微动一下

thx for modding, and don't forget my m4m :3

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Squichu
1,013 posts
Joined November 2012
Squichu
hellow, mod from queue ~ ^__^/

[Yuki's Easy]
looks really nice to, can't say much. ;o;
  1. 00:08:868 (2) - lacks character, it's just my personal tatse, I'd prefer a more angular slider
    like this
  2. 00:24:318 (1) doesn't go well with 00:23:118 (3) imo. I mean, it's nice, but when I look at other parts like 00:13:518 (3,1) you could improve the connection of them
  3. 00:48:318 (1,2) - the end of the first slider is much closer to 2 than the start, you could refine the shape
    the same goes for the following 00:49:518 (3)
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:118 (1) - same as in Easy, lacks character imo ><
    I just prfer more angular sliders ;n;
  2. 00:29:118 (1,2) - where they placed at the same place sometime? the circle looks kinda.. "lost"?
  3. 00:41:118 (1) - has a nicer feeling to it if you include it in the curve of 00:39:918 (3,4,5,6) and place it around 300|140
  4. 00:53:418 (2) - move it a bit further up or down? it's nearly the same height(?) as 00:53:118 (1) and looks out of place
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:718 (1) looks a bit weird with 00:21:318 (3) , change shape a bit?
    same here: 01:10:968 (3) doesn't go well with 01:09:918 (1,2) and 01:11:718 (4,1) imo
  2. 01:22:518 (3) - ctrl+g for nicer movement from 01:22:368 (2) ? .o.
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - curve is too "sharp" for my taste, round it out?
sorrey, I'm not good with Hard and above diffs yet ><

skipping Laurier's Insane, cause of the same reason, didn't see anything when I took a glance at it :\

Really nice mapset, wasn't of help I guess. Sorry. |D
Good luck with this! :3
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Squirrel wrote:

[Yuki's Easy]
looks really nice to, can't say much. ;o;
  1. 00:08:868 (2) - lacks character, it's just my personal tatse, I'd prefer a more angular slider en..make a little change
    like this
  2. 00:24:318 (1) doesn't go well with 00:23:118 (3) imo. I mean, it's nice, but when I look at other parts like 00:13:518 (3,1) you could improve the connection of them ok, changed
  3. 00:48:318 (1,2) - the end of the first slider is much closer to 2 than the start, you could refine the shape
    the same goes for the following 00:49:518 (3) I don't find anything 0.0
thx for modding~
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Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

Squirrel wrote:

hellow, mod from queue ~ ^__^/

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:118 (1) - same as in Easy, lacks character imo >< changed a bit
    I just prfer more angular sliders ;n;
  2. 00:29:118 (1,2) - where they placed at the same place sometime? the circle looks kinda.. "lost"?I don't understand well,but I think this rhythm is no problem~
  3. 00:41:118 (1) - has a nicer feeling to it if you include it in the curve of 00:39:918 (3,4,5,6) and place it around 300|140 ok
  4. 00:53:418 (2) - move it a bit further up or down? it's nearly the same height(?) as 00:53:118 (1) and looks out of placeok
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:718 (1) looks a bit weird with 00:21:318 (3) , change shape a bit?nope,this looks good imo
    same here: 01:10:968 (3) doesn't go well with 01:09:918 (1,2) and 01:11:718 (4,1) imo
  2. 01:22:518 (3) - ctrl+g for nicer movement from 01:22:368 (2) ? .o.no
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - curve is too "sharp" for my taste, round it out?
sorrey, I'm not good with Hard and above diffs yet ><。—。

Really nice mapset, wasn't of help I guess. Sorry. |D
Good luck with this! :3
To azuretwinight：sorry ,no changes to my diff~

thanks for modding!!~updated Yuki's Easy
Last edited by Fycho , edited 1 time in total.
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
hi, from my queue :3

[Yuki]

I think the rhythm is already fine so most of this is a nazi mod.
00:09:918 (1) - move center point to 436|272 and tail: 388|312 for more blanket.
00:18:318 (2) - just move tail 1 grid down.
00:20:718 (2) - I think move to 212|40 is better :/
00:23:118 (3) - move head point 1 grid right for better blanket.
00:48:318 (1,2,3) - please make it blanket like this, looks better and to make (2) more far from (4) to not looks weird.
00:50:718 (1,2,3) - you can improve this blanket, like here
SPOILER
01:24:018 (4) - the note start on white tick after the note that end on red tick is confuse the beginner imo. I think change this note to slider 1/1 and add a note on the slider's tail on this current time.
01:26:268 (4) - same reason as above, so change the rhythm to be this will not confuse the beginner

[Normal]

00:04:668 (4) - what about make it a bit curve to looks blanket with (3)
SPOILER
00:08:868 (3) - what about make it blanket like this
SPOILER
00:57:318 (2) - 1 grid left for parallel?

[Hard]

hm.. so nice hard D:
00:48:018 (4) - maybe more blanket like this?
SPOILER
00:49:818 (2) - overlap here, maybe try other pattern? eg.
SPOILER
00:58:368 (2) - I think distance error here, maybe 1 grid up?

[Insane]

01:21:468 (1) - this is the only note that low spacing, can confusing imo, so maybe move to stack with (4) is better?
nice insane :(

[Laurier]

00:31:218 (5) - ctrl+g is more playable :/
01:26:418 (6) - remove reverse and add note instead? I think its more fit for the strong beat.

that's all, good luck :'( let's make a link to each other map :/
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

P A N wrote:

hi, from my queue :3

[Yuki]

I think the rhythm is already fine so most of this is a nazi mod.
00:09:918 (1) - move center point to 436|272 and tail: 388|312 for more blanket.
00:18:318 (2) - just move tail 1 grid down.
00:20:718 (2) - I think move to 212|40 is better :/
00:23:118 (3) - move head point 1 grid right for better blanket.
00:48:318 (1,2,3) - please make it blanket like this, looks better and to make (2) more far from (4) to not looks weird.
00:50:718 (1,2,3) - you can improve this blanket, like here
SPOILER

↑ all fixed. Thanks that you find it so carefully..>//<

01:24:018 (4) - the note start on white tick after the note that end on red tick is confuse the beginner imo. I think change this note to slider 1/1 and add a note on the slider's tail on this current time.
01:26:268 (4) - same reason as above, so change the rhythm to be this will not confuse the beginner

I keep it. Because if I change it, it becomes 3.5stars T.T
thx for modding~

To Fycho：
source里面用日语“俺の脳内選択肢が、青春ラブコメを全力で邪魔している”，tag里面用罗马音？

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Tags:Laurier [Minakami Yuki] opening 俺の脳内選択肢が、青春ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
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Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

P A N wrote:

hi, from my queue :3

[Normal]

00:04:668 (4) - what about make it a bit curve to looks blanket with (3) OK
SPOILER
00:08:868 (3) - what about make it blanket like thisOK
SPOILER
00:57:318 (2) - 1 grid left for parallel?OK

[Hard]

hm.. so nice hard D:
00:48:018 (4) - maybe more blanket like this?fixed
SPOILER
00:49:818 (2) - overlap here, maybe try other pattern? eg.umm, I like my pattern I think this overlap is no problem
SPOILER
00:58:368 (2) - I think distance error here, maybe 1 grid up?ok

[Insane]

01:21:468 (1) - this is the only note that low spacing, can confusing imo, so maybe move to stack with (4) is better?I used NC to show this anti-jump，and this is readable when playing
nice insane :(

that's all, good luck :'( let's make a link to each other map :/ okay
Edit:thanks for modding~updated easy GD and laurier's Insane
Last edited by Fycho , edited 1 time in total.
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/4XhuH.osu
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Sagisawa-Yukari



[General]
Red: Must fix
Blue: Suggestion only
from AI mod：Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 second.00:48:318
Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 second.00:57:918
Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 second.01:07:518。我不清楚是什么情况不过你最好检查下


[Yuki's Easy]
00:12:318 (1) - 往右过去一格？
00:33:918 (1,2,3,4) - 1有finish的话后面3个全都加上如何？
00:39:318 (2) - 滑条头finish
00:48:918 (2) - ^
01:07:518 (1) - 滑条尾finish
01:09:018 (2) - ^
01:09:918 (1) - 头和尾巴都加上finish
01:11:418 (2) - 滑条尾finish
01:14:718 (1,2,3,4) - 同00:33:918 (1,2,3,4) -
01:20:718 (3,1) - 感觉和下面1的弧度不一样啊，你折返点这里的这个锚点向下一格
01:22:518 (2) - 滑条头finish
01:23:118 (3,4) - 3和4的间距只有0.89，我建议你往右下去一格
01:24:918 (2) - 滑条头finish
01:26:418 (4) - 这个拍子感觉听不出来，不如换个finish加大点音量算了


[Normal]
00:02:718 (1) - 滑条头finish？
00:06:168 (3) - 我觉得这个尾巴的finish不适合啊，反而放在00:07:218 (5) - 这里比较好吧
00:30:918 (4) - 滑条头finish
00:33:318 (4) - ^
00:39:318 (2) - ^
00:48:918 (2) - ^
00:58:818 (2,3) - 这里和01:00:918 (2,3) - 的歌词都是一个节奏为什么58秒这里跟着鼓后面突然变跟歌词？换我会复制01:01:368 (3) - 这个滑条放在00:58:968 - 然后00:59:718 - 加个circle
01:02:418 (5) - finish
01:07:518 (1) - 滑条尾finish
01:09:318 (3) - 滑条头finish
01:09:918 (1) - 头和尾finish
01:11:718 (3) - 滑条头finish
01:15:318 (2,4) - ^
01:23:868 (5) - 滑条尾finish


[Hard]
00:00:318 (1,2,1) - 我仔细听了下00:00:318 (1) - 应该结束在00:01:068 - 这里吧，然后00:01:068 (2) - 是开始在00:01:218 - 这里的吧，最后00:01:368 (1) - 改成1/2滑条00:01:518 - 开头，这样不是更好么？
00:05:118 (1,2,1) - 这里同前面
00:07:818 (2,3) - 这里为什么突然跳一下，而且就算跳也跳的太小了，感觉阳痿
00:07:968 (3) - finish
00:09:018 (2,3,4) - 你用了这种梗是很好，但是问题他的重音是00:08:868 - 开始的第一拍，这样很让人打的莫名，我建议00:08:568 (1) - 滑条头尾换成circle
00:14:718 (1) - 滑条头finish
00:19:968 (2,3) - ctrl+g然后么，恩，之后不是2变成单点3成滑条了么，滑条保持你之前的原样把2叠上去就行了
00:26:718 (1,2) - 滑条头finish
00:30:618 (2,3,4) - ^
00:32:418 (3) - 往左一格
00:33:018 (2,4) - 滑条头finish
01:16:218 (2,4) - ^
01:21:018 (3,4) - ctrl+g
01:26:268 (3) - 3叠到4的滑条头上？


[Insane]
你这个图这种曲风感觉用soft-hitnormal很不适合，完全没有一点打击感
00:08:268 (4,5,6) - 做成等间距的小跳？
00:20:718 (1,2) - 换成slider？因为你后面00:21:018 (3,4) - 的重音很明显，这样完全表达不出两者有什么不同
00:26:718 (1) - 滑条头finish
00:29:418 (2) - NC应该从这里开始吧，你前面空拍的话
00:31:818 (2) - ^
00:32:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:33:018 (3,4) - 这里我隐约听着有个三连
00:38:418 (1,2,3,4) - ？
00:38:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不应该是这样？
SPOILER
00:41:343 (2,3) - 谜の二连
00:43:818 (2,3,4) - 2和3的间距，你前面好像没有这种节奏很让人第一次以为间隔了1/2
00:45:018 (2,3,4) - ^
00:46:968 (7) - 换成两个circle
00:48:318 (1,2,3,4) - 同00:38:718 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:58:518 (4,5) - 4和5换一下位置
01:08:118 (2,3) - ctrl+g
01:19:218 (2,3,4,5) - 把3去掉


[Laurier's Insane]
00:16:068 (2,3) - ctrl+g？
00:25:968 (4) - why not jump？
00:26:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - maybe the rythem is this
SPOILER
00:28:668 (4,5,6) - make a stack？
00:56:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why use triple?I think slider is better
01:02:418 (5,6,1) - 01:02:643 (6,1) - stack with the end of slider?

good luck~
Last edited by Sagisawa-Yukari , edited 2 times in total.
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
all fixed
thx~

SPOILER
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ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:Fycho
Version:Yuki's Easy
Source:Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
Tags:Laurier [Minakami Yuki] opening 俺の脳内選択肢が、青春ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
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Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

from AI mod：Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 second.00:48:318
Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 second.00:57:918
Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 second.01:07:518。我不清楚是什么情况不过你最好检查下这些是没问题的


[Normal]
00:02:718 (1) - 滑条头finish？ 好
00:06:168 (3) - 我觉得这个尾巴的finish不适合啊，反而放在00:07:218 (5) - 这里比较好吧这里跟音乐里下的finish，加在后面反而不怎么好
00:30:918 (4) - 滑条头finish低难度不想加太多finish，下同
00:33:318 (4) - ^
00:39:318 (2) - ^
00:48:918 (2) - ^
00:58:818 (2,3) - 这里和01:00:918 (2,3) - 的歌词都是一个节奏为什么58秒这里跟着鼓后面突然变跟歌词？换我会复制01:01:368 (3) - 这个滑条放在00:58:968 - 然后00:59:718 - 加个circle好
01:02:418 (5) - finish这些finish和下面的都没加
01:07:518 (1) - 滑条尾finish
01:09:318 (3) - 滑条头finish
01:09:918 (1) - 头和尾finish
01:11:718 (3) - 滑条头finish
01:15:318 (2,4) - ^
01:23:868 (5) - 滑条尾finish


[Hard]
00:00:318 (1,2,1) - 我仔细听了下00:00:318 (1) - 应该结束在00:01:068 - 这里吧，然后00:01:068 (2) - 是开始在00:01:218 - 这里的吧，最后00:01:368 (1) - 改成1/2滑条00:01:518 - 开头，这样不是更好么？我仔细听听了几遍都不是这样，所以没改
00:05:118 (1,2,1) - 这里同前面
00:07:818 (2,3) - 这里为什么突然跳一下，而且就算跳也跳的太小了，感觉阳痿小跳一下也没什么啊BPM太高不想搞太难
00:07:968 (3) - finishok
00:09:018 (2,3,4) - 你用了这种梗是很好，但是问题他的重音是00:08:868 - 开始的第一拍，这样很让人打的莫名，我建议00:08:568 (1) - 滑条头尾换成circle我觉得还好
00:14:718 (1) - 滑条头finish这里不finish了 太多吵
00:19:968 (2,3) - ctrl+g然后么，恩，之后不是2变成单点3成滑条了么，滑条保持你之前的原样把2叠上去就行了这里原来ctrl+G过，但是用点变化的节奏更好
00:26:718 (1,2) - 滑条头finish为了突出后面白线的的finish这不加了
00:30:618 (2,3,4) - ^
00:32:418 (3) - 往左一格好的
00:33:018 (2,4) - 滑条头finish没必要加成和insane一样啊
01:16:218 (2,4) - ^
01:21:018 (3,4) - ctrl+g不想换
01:26:268 (3) - 3叠到4的滑条头上？不叠了，空拍jnote想叠正好


[Insane]
你这个图这种曲风感觉用soft-hitnormal很不适合，完全没有一点打击感我觉得挺合适啊，打击感也够的
00:08:268 (4,5,6) - 做成等间距的小跳？音乐强度不等啊这里
00:20:718 (1,2) - 换成slider？因为你后面00:21:018 (3,4) - 的重音很明显，这样完全表达不出两者有什么不同我听起来两个重音都差不多
00:26:718 (1) - 滑条头finish用hard
00:29:418 (2) - NC应该从这里开始吧，你前面空拍的话经过testers打下来读图并没问题，NC一改反而会乱我觉得
00:31:818 (2) - ^
00:32:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:33:018 (3,4) - 这里我隐约听着有个三连fixed
00:38:418 (1,2,3,4) - ？？
00:38:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不应该是这样？节奏都差不多
SPOILER
00:41:343 (2,3) - 谜の二连怎么迷了？
00:43:818 (2,3,4) - 2和3的间距，你前面好像没有这种节奏很让人第一次以为间隔了1/2这块重新改过了
00:45:018 (2,3,4) - ^
00:46:968 (7) - 换成两个circle待定
00:48:318 (1,2,3,4) - 同00:38:718 (1,2,3,4,5) -不想改
00:58:518 (4,5) - 4和5换一下位置改了整体的flow不好啊，顺逆时针变了
01:08:118 (2,3) - ctrl+g不了
01:19:218 (2,3,4,5) - 把3去掉不了

good luck~
thanks for modding~
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
no changed my diff

thanks for mod \^^/
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
pray for masaki :cry:
Pandiar
391 posts
Joined February 2012
Pandiar
Hi ~ request from Fycho :D

[General]
uncheck widescreen support

[Yuki's Easy]
00:39:918 (3) - add finish start point?
00:49:518 (3) - ^
01:00:318 (1) - ^
01:23:118 (3) - ^
01:25:518 (3) - ^

nice easy~

[Normal]
skip
nice diff

[Hard]
00:02:718 (1,2) - try to bend a little,like this?
SPOILER
00:06:618 (2) - move x:228 y:144? look nice
00:10:368 (2) - add note? how about this?
SPOILER
00:50:718 (1) - how about this
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:01:218 (5) - umm...x:176y:208 or stack 00:01:368 (1) imo
00:29:718 (4) - i think use copy slider is better 00:30:018 (5)
SPOILER
00:38:418 (1,2,3,4) - how about this?
SPOILER
00:45:318 (4) - move 1grid left white line
SPOILER
01:08:118 (2) - remove note. i think it is starting point of the slider,like this?
SPOILER

[Laurier's Insane]
00:20:418 (5) - Ctrl+G
00:23:118 (1) - 00:23:418 (3)にスタックしてもいいかもです
00:24:768 (3) - こんなのどうでしょうか
SPOILER
00:58:368 (3) - を次の(4)にスタックさせてこんなのとかどうでしょうか
SPOILER
01:02:268 (4) - 2grid左1~2grid上？
01:03:018 (3,4,5) - 少しスペーシングが狭い気がしました
01:20:118 (3,4) - これはどうでしょうか
SPOILER
01:26:793 (1) - 他のDiffだとスピンの終了が01:28:968なのですが、わざとでないのであれば統一したほうがいいかなと思います

good luck~!
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