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Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix[Insane]
Try AR8 for this diff.I played this diff with both ar9 and ar8,but AR9 is fast for me,and these jumps can be read when AR8; Nah,have many big jump this diff.i played AR8, but, i fit AR9.
i like ar9 this map.[/color]
00:21:609 (1,2,3) –try using this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5cafW.jpg.It will be better if you start kick slider at white tick. it's good.
00:22:787 (1) –reduce the volume of this spinner, it’s too loud somehow; umm, i think not need reduce... reservation.
01:06:608 (1,2) –how about using the same rhythm as 02:19:394 (1,2,3,4,5) -,just follow the same track; nice find. fixed!
00:37:680 (4,5,6,7,1,2) –try to place them like this for better flow, http://puu.sh/5canK.jpg umm, this prat fine flow imo. sorry
00:47:322 (2,3) –Ctrl+G, rhythm is bet ter imo; umm, sound fit now..
00:50:965 (1) –try something like this, http://puu.sh/5carT.jpg,flow better,and this jump can emphasize a strong beat; keep flow.
00:51:822 (1) –Ctrl+G for better flow; fixed. but, some possibility of doing change.
00:58:358 (7,8,9) –how about removing these three and make00:58:251 (6) –a 3/4 or 1/2 slider.A little overmap here; fixed
01:21:180 (2) –this spacing is to large.Try to use a smaller one; fixed.
01:34:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) –stack is a little boring.How about setting a stream here? sorry, i want stack stream. i feels easily this.
01:59:751 –add a note to be consistent with 00:46:680 (1) –and 01:56:322 (2) –;Otherwise you can try this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5caKP.jpg no changed.
02:20:108 (1,2) –try using a smaller spacing like this02:26:965 (1,2) –; ok
02:31:679 (2,3,4,5) –You just follow the music at02:30:394 (1,2) -,If you follow music not drums at02:31:251 (1,2,3,4,5) –it will be more consistent and much better; drum and synthesizer find sound this. no problem imo.
03:21:822 (1,2,3,4) -^ ^
03:15:679 (3,1) –These two are to close imo,try to use larger spacing; ok
03:55:679 (1,3) –ctrl+g it plays more smoothly; no
04:11:735 –add a spinner to show the long vocal sorry, same reason hard.[Hard]
01:03:822 (1) –end the spinner at01:05:537 and add finish; follow vocal
00:56:965 (1,2) - snap these to 1/3 tick;
01:00:822 (2) -^ ^
02:09:822 (1,2) –snap these to 1/3 tick; ^
02:13:251 (1,2) -^[/color] ^
01:06:394 (1,2) –If you place them like this, http://puu.sh/5cbcO.jpg;It will be more neat imo.This pattern won’t be hard because this is a hard diff; respecthave spacing.
01:31:251 (1,2,3,4) –same reason as above,try using spacing x1.40; sorry no.
03:31:251 (1,2,3) -^ no.
03:20:536 (4) -^ no.
03:50:108 (1,2,3,4) –These maybe looks a little mess.try to split them out; fine imo.
04:11:735 –add a spinner? no. i like this end.[Easy]
Because this is your lowest diff in your mapset,HP,OD and AR-1 to balance the difficulty; no changed. i will ask other modder.
00:21:823 (1) –This is too up and touch the HP bar; fixed
01:14:108 (1,2,3) –make a better blanket; i can't fix this. idk how to fix
01:57:394 (3,4,5) –make a perfect triangle; (2) slider end and (3) and (4) is triangle.