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Spoke with zlfence about this map a bit over IRC. Discussed flow on Hard/Insane, and readability of the patterns on Yuki.

Lost the first half of the logs when I disconnected, but here's the second half.

03:43 Kytoxid: Sorry, DCed randomly.
03:43 Kytoxid: Did you see what I said?
03:44 zlfence: yeah
03:45 zlfence: the last meaasge is mine
03:45 Kytoxid: What did you say?
03:45 zlfence: 16.40 zlfence:orz
03:45 Kytoxid: Ah.
03:45 Kytoxid: But yeah, those jumps are pretty hard to read without AR9.
03:45 Kytoxid: Guess there's just 1 diff left.
03:45 zlfence: Which Diff?
03:45 Kytoxid: Feng?
03:46 zlfence: Feng is my Diff
03:46 zlfence: Yuki is GD
03:46 Kytoxid: You should have received my messages on Yuki and Hard, right?
03:46 zlfence: only Hard
03:46 Kytoxid: Ohhh.
03:46 Kytoxid: Okay, I'll repeat what I said about Yuki then. I think it got lost.
03:47 Kytoxid: I think with the jumps it uses, it needs AR9.
03:47 zlfence: ho you are really kindly
03:47 Kytoxid: Even then, some of them are a bit awkward.
03:47 Kytoxid: I'm not sure how good the manual stacking looks when it comes from the bottom-left, feels kinda weird.
03:48 zlfence: umm i will tell what you says to Yuki
03:48 Kytoxid: Alright.
03:48 zlfence: and how about Feng?
03:48 Kytoxid: I haven't played it yet, since I DCed.
03:48 zlfence: OK
03:48 Kytoxid: I'll play it now.
03:48 zlfence: lets go
03:51 Kytoxid: It wasn't bad either.
03:51 zlfence: umm?
03:51 Kytoxid: It's considerably different from Yuki, which is good.
03:52 Kytoxid: You have a jumpy-style diff in Yuki, and a streamy one here.
03:52 zlfence: yeah
03:52 Kytoxid: It played pretty well overall, but felt a bit boring outside the streams.
03:53 Kytoxid: Some of the little sliders in the streams were tough.
03:53 Kytoxid: Since I had to guess the number of repeats.
03:53 zlfence: orzx
03:54 zlfence: And can you help me to Mod it ? Not for full mod and bubble
03:55 zlfence: just tell me something that you dont like ~~~
03:55 Kytoxid: lol
03:56 Kytoxid: Okay, I didn't like how different streams had different number of repeats on the sliders.
03:57 Kytoxid: Like some with 3 (01:51:918 (3) - ), some with 4 (01:57:382 (6) - , 02:00:382 (2) -, and some with a lot 02:03:489 (1) - ).
03:57 Kytoxid: 00:42:918 (1) - I didn't like how this section (and a couple other sections) where very straight and boxy.
03:58 Kytoxid: I think it would look/play better if it was made either to flow or to zig-zag.
03:58 zlfence: well
03:59 Kytoxid: 00:41:203 (1) - I can imagine the change in timing in this combo would be awkward if you didn't know the song, so I'd make 4-5 a slider instead of 2 notes.
03:59 zlfence: i will give more conside
03:59 Kytoxid: Yeah, it's fine, these are sort of just recommendations. I like having my pen move around more smoothly on these slower maps, but it's up to you.
04:01 Kytoxid: Anyways, it's pretty good overall.
04:01 Kytoxid: (like I said at the beginning)
04:01 zlfence: oh thanks~
04:02 zlfence: and can you post it into my Thread?
04:02 Kytoxid: Umm, I lost the first half of it from the disconnect, but I can post the second half.
04:03 zlfence: yeah it is enough


Good luck!
posted

Kytoxid wrote:

03:45 Kytoxid: But yeah, those jumps are pretty hard to read without AR9.
03:47 Kytoxid: I think with the jumps it uses, it needs AR9.
YEAH I ALSO PREFER AR9 YEAH

Kytoxid wrote:

03:47 Kytoxid: Even then, some of them are a bit awkward.
03:47 Kytoxid: I'm not sure how good the manual stacking looks when it comes from the bottom-left, feels kinda weird.
enn... I will make a little change about some partterns
will give the new diff to zlfence soon
posted
Normal

00:03:489 (3) - I think you should mirror 00:01:775 (1) for a nicer symmetrical shape
00:16:775 (3,4) - have the circle before the slider, shift the hitsounds accordingly back to where they were formerly placed in the timings
00:20:203 (3,4) - ^
00:23:632 (3,4) - this is an example of what it should be like for the previous 2 :X
00:49:346 (4,1) - distance spacing is not equal to the rest, you should fix it
01:05:632 (4) - rotate along selection centre by - 15%? blanket the previous note

01:07:775 (7,9) - you were trying to have 8 and 9 on the same horizontal level, but it would be better if 9 didn't overlap 7
01:09:918 - feels empty
01:17:203 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:24:061 (8) - NC
01:25:775 (1) - remove NC
01:27:489 (4) - NC
01:37:346 (1) - finish in middle of repeat slider
01:42:489 (6) - finish on start of slider

Hard

00:09:489 (7) - the finish hitsound doesn't sound like it is in place, put finish individually on each head
00:12:061 (1) - sounds like it ends on nothing in particular, better to end spinner at 00:15:061 -
00:16:775 (4,5,6) - the 2 circles before the slider
00:54:918 (3) - NC
01:10:132 - add a note
01:14:632 (3) - finish on the end of slider
01:21:275 (3) - finish
01:22:775 (2) - ^
01:24:061 (5) - NC
01:25:989 (1) - remove NC
01:27:489 (7) - NC
01:29:632 (1) - remove NC
01:30:918 (6) - NC
01:34:346 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:42:275 (5) - finish on end of slider

Yuki

00:05:632 (2,3,4) - change it to this rhythm, it fits way better:

00:12:061 (1) - all the way to 00:13:560 (3) - the 1/4 stream rhythm here does not make much sense along with the music
00:14:846 to 00:15:382 - continue the stream, don't break it into that slider and circle with 1/2 beats
01:39:275 (7) - finish
01:42:489 (3) - ^
01:43:346 (3) - ^
posted

neonat wrote:

Yuki

00:05:632 (2,3,4) - change it to this rhythm, it fits way better: good

00:12:061 (1) - all the way to 00:13:560 (3) - the 1/4 stream rhythm here does not make much sense along with the music but i think it's good
00:14:846 to 00:15:382 - continue the stream, don't break it into that slider and circle with 1/2 beats ok
01:39:275 (7) - finish
01:42:489 (3) - ^
01:43:346 (3) - ^ all added
thanks
and diff name changed according to the new rule
osu file format v12

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Artist:nao
ArtistUnicode:nao
Creator:zlfence
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Source:Tiny Dungeon
Tags:Rosebleu Black and White Vueru sein Hokuto Minami Ono Ryouko Galgame [Minakami Yuki]
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don't worry, i afk for playing and mapping but i will still check mods and update my map
posted
晚上好

[Insane]
00:06:703 (7,8,9) - 聽不見中間8的音,可以嘗試換成一個滑條?
00:07:132 (1,2) - 感觉这中间的蓝线还是有个音的,可以放下三连,和上面结合在一起,差不多就是这样→ http://puu.sh/5VRUC(顺便说一下我把你的NC取消了._.因为NC放在这里没有什么意义啊)
00:13:989 (1) - 还是NC
00:14:632 (7) - 我感觉1/8别扭,这里和前面一样弄成1/4的连打吧,可以把连打里note与note直接的距离弄近一些
00:27:061 (1) - NC问题
00:28:775 (11) - 我觉得这里用1/8会比较好
00:35:418 加一个Note,和00:35:203 (3,4,5,6) - 组合成5连
00:48:918 (4,5,6,7) - ↑
00:54:275 (6,7) - ctrl+G
02:03:061 (1) - NC
02:04:775 (7,1) - 我的建议是1/8回转滑条到蓝线处然后1往上移动一段距离,差不多→ http://puu.sh/5VSyv



[Yuki]
为什么我感觉ar8会比较合适一点._.肯定是我太弱了喵
00:13:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 红线和白线处都加clap会不会爽一点?
00:40:346 (1) - 换成bpm*0.5,到红线为止的滑条,可以为下一部分曲子做铺垫吧
01:10:025 (11) - 感觉5连有点奇怪啊,去掉这个吧
01:37:346 (5,6,7,8) - 换成2个短滑条吧

[Normal]
00:03:489 (3) - 和1对称吧
00:36:061 (1) - 还是换成在大白线处的note吧
01:00:061 (1,2) - 白线处的note,和上面一样
01:13:775 (1,2) - ↑


就摸到这里了
祝你上班玩恶俗不会被发现 ;););)
posted
晚上好
来自QQ

全局:
Tag统一一下
02:05:203 - 后面建议做完

难度:Normal
01:05:203 (3,4) - 包好

难度:Hard
00:09:275 (6,7) - 想这样的注意一下,尽量包好
00:10:775 (1,2,3) - 后面再加一个note然后移到00:11:203 (4)的附近
00:34:346 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 觉得这里有点简单
00:48:061 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 跟上面重复?不太好吧

难度:Yuki's Insane
怀疑爆星
00:58:989 (4) - 1.2x之后就瞬间变成了2.8x,怀疑是人 没事了

难度:Insane
00:08:203 (3,4,5) - 后面补一个note

加油
posted
Hi`来凑个数orz

总体挺好的;w;谱面很整洁

[Normal]
Countdown没关
01:34:346 (1) - 低难度里不太建议使用这种多次折返。。更何况没有和它成对使用的情况出现,建议拆成两个slider

[Hard]
感觉音效有点简单,试着根据bgm加绿线调调音量,做做样子(大雾
01:00:489 (4) - 这个blanket我觉得是可以修一下的:

01:18:918 (5) - NC
02:02:632 (1) - remove NC?
01:39:382 (6) - 这个可以不要?

[Insane]
00:15:489 (1,2,3) - 这里和00:18:918 (1,2,3) - 与后面的00:24:061 (1,2) - 这里节奏不太一样,打起来会比较别扭。我建议你用后面那种节奏下法,因为这里的乐器声(电钢琴?)听起来在蓝线上的音比较重,所以滑条从蓝线起比较好(这样手指是在蓝线的时候按下)后面的01:51:489 (1,2,3) - 也是这样
01:12:918 (5) - test里看这个地方比较丑。这个5其实可以跟8stack在一起,因为是重音,所以跳远一点也没关系,最好5这个还可以NC一下
00:36:489 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这里实际打起来感觉也不怎么好看,你可以每三个一组旋转一个角度,排列看上去就高档许多:


[Yuki's Insane]
wocao AR9不给DT,无情;w;
00:10:346 (1,2,3) - 这个地方打起来有点憋手,因为从(1)到(4)这段flow的距离太长了,如果你希望让人打起来爽♂一点,可以试试这种:

嘛也可能你就是想追求这种划过整边屏幕的感觉,不妨作为以后的一种参考
00:56:525 (12,1) - 这个ds大了一点点,好像有点影响美观。。。故意的?
01:23:525 (4) - 170,91 这个好像歪的比较明显
posted

Zweib wrote:

Hi`来凑个数orz

总体挺好的;w;谱面很整洁

[Normal]
Countdown没关
01:34:346 (1) - 低难度里不太建议使用这种多次折返。。更何况没有和它成对使用的情况出现,建议拆成两个slider

[Hard]
感觉音效有点简单,试着根据bgm加绿线调调音量,做做样子(大雾
01:00:489 (4) - 这个blanket我觉得是可以修一下的:

01:18:918 (5) - NC
02:02:632 (1) - remove NC?
01:39:382 (6) - 这个可以不要?

[Insane]
00:15:489 (1,2,3) - 这里和00:18:918 (1,2,3) - 与后面的00:24:061 (1,2) - 这里节奏不太一样,打起来会比较别扭。我建议你用后面那种节奏下法,因为这里的乐器声(电钢琴?)听起来在蓝线上的音比较重,所以滑条从蓝线起比较好(这样手指是在蓝线的时候按下)后面的01:51:489 (1,2,3) - 也是这样
01:12:918 (5) - test里看这个地方比较丑。这个5其实可以跟8stack在一起,因为是重音,所以跳远一点也没关系,最好5这个还可以NC一下
00:36:489 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这里实际打起来感觉也不怎么好看,你可以每三个一组旋转一个角度,排列看上去就高档许多:


[Yuki's Insane]
wocao AR9不给DT,无情;w;
00:10:346 (1,2,3) - 这个地方打起来有点憋手,因为从(1)到(4)这段flow的距离太长了,如果你希望让人打起来爽♂一点,可以试试这种:

嘛也可能你就是想追求这种划过整边屏幕的感觉,不妨作为以后的一种参考
00:56:525 (12,1) - 这个ds大了一点点,好像有点影响美观。。。故意的?
01:23:525 (4) - 170,91 这个好像歪的比较明显
早上起来多了3个Mod,真的是温暖人心...晚上再改- -白天上班...
posted

Ikaros_F wrote:

[Yuki]
为什么我感觉ar8会比较合适一点._.肯定是我太弱了喵
00:13:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 红线和白线处都加clap会不会爽一点? 喵!
00:40:346 (1) - 换成bpm*0.5,到红线为止的滑条,可以为下一部分曲子做铺垫吧 喵?
01:10:025 (11) - 感觉5连有点奇怪啊,去掉这个吧 喵!
01:37:346 (5,6,7,8) - 换成2个短滑条吧 喵-.-

Zweib wrote:

[Yuki's Insane]
wocao AR9不给DT,无情;w; ;w;求mu
00:10:346 (1,2,3) - 这个地方打起来有点憋手,因为从(1)到(4)这段flow的距离太长了,如果你希望让人打起来爽♂一点,可以试试这种:

嘛也可能你就是想追求这种划过整边屏幕的感觉,不妨作为以后的一种参考 喵!
00:56:525 (12,1) - 这个ds大了一点点,好像有点影响美观。。。故意的?ds没调好喵0.0
01:23:525 (4) - 170,91 这个好像歪的比较明显 喵!

Troogle wrote:

[Yuki]

  • 00:54:061 (3) - 头上Whistle?


[Yuki]

  • 00:27:382 (4,1) - 头稍微往下点
    01:04:132 (2,4) - 4和2对称?
    01:22:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 自己稍微修下吧23333 喵喵喵喵
喵喵喵(thanks) 喵(for) 喵喵喵(modding)

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昨晚忘掉了QxQ
我来加SP

General


  • Countdown和Letterbox break统一下
    Clear

Hitsound


[Normal]

  • 00:04:346 (4) - 漏clap
    01:31:775 (4) - 为神马突然冒了一个Whistle/w\

[Hard]

  • 00:09:489 (7) - 去掉中间的clap?(因为这个音00:08:632 (5) - 没有强调0.0)
    01:19:775 (8) - ^
    01:22:132 (6) - 换clap?
    01:22:346 (1) - 换finish?

[Yuki]

  • 00:54:061 (3) - 头上Whistle?

Insane
听不动了……

Pattern&Others


总之这图让人感觉很“干净”,所以就想尽可能的提升“干净”的程度
所谓要做就要做到极致?
[Normal]

  • 01:34:346 (1) - N建议只用一次折返
    01:05:203 (3,4) - 包好?(旋转01:05:632 (4) - )
    01:12:061 (3,4) - ^
    01:25:346 (2,3) - ^
    01:36:918 (4,1) - ^


[Hard]

  • 00:09:275 (6,7) - 虽然很无聊还是包住吧/.\
    00:16:346 (3,4) - 包好顺带调整下flow
    00:17:418 (5,6,7,9) - 是用多边形的么9.9
    00:42:918 (1,4) - 稍微包一点?
    01:00:061 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    01:20:953 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这是随手排的么0.0还是想做直线呢0.0?
    01:26:632 (5,6) - /.\
    01:52:346 (3,4) - /.\
    01:54:918 (1) - 向下向右1格
    02:04:775 (7) - 向下向左1格

[Yuki]

  • 00:27:382 (4,1) - 头稍微往下点
    01:04:132 (2,4) - 4和2对称?
    01:22:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 自己稍微修下吧23333

[Insane]

  • 00:08:096 (x) - 补note
    00:08:525 (x) - 补note
    00:27:811 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 1要向上点的感觉
    02:01:561 (8,6) - 叠好?

打不动的diff也摸不动OTL

祝早日rank~~
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sorry for late
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sammy711 wrote:

sorry for late
我最近也很忙- -过年了事情一大堆...
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[General]
  1. countdown/letterbox的有无需要一致一下
  2. source:Tiny Dungeon ~BLACK and WHITE~
  3. title:blade heart
  4. 以上参照这里


[Insane]
  1. 自己加节奏的地方很多,比如很多00:05:203 (1,2)这样没跟vocal也没什么乐器的地方,关键还漏了点东西所以不算好
    AR推荐9,8勉强说得通,不过OD7在这没变速140的图上没什么理由,建议到8
  2. 00:35:846 (7) - 这种note 要么变成一个slider的末尾 要么就留空 全程1/2间隔到底太偷懒 建议好好把各个乐器部分分出来理一下
  3. 00:36:489 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 这种梗一般会做在重复部分吧,但是目前看要用好至少前移到1的位置
  4. 00:42:489 (6,7,8,1) - 偏偏把00:42:811这里漏了
  5. 01:47:953 (1) - 起始位置比较怪,可以选在vocal的某个长音开始比如01:48:489
  6. 02:03:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 89那里没跟keyboard吧,其实建议换个结束方法,目前太平


[Yuki's Insane]
  1. 00:15:061 (11) - 应该没这么多吧
  2. 00:18:489 (1) - 只是因为地方不够多就变成repeat-slider是不是有点太随意了
  3. 00:28:239 - 不建议留空
  4. 01:39:918 (2) - clap
  5. 01:42:489 (3) - clap去掉或者01:41:632 (2) - clap
  6. 02:01:346 (1) - clap
  7. 02:03:596 (1) - 太省事了...的感觉


[Hard]
  1. 00:10:775 (1,2,3) - 现在的clap用来打拍子还好,拿来当1/4的鼓点有点雷
  2. Hard比Insane工整很多,大概和本身的打图能力也有关系..


[Normal]
  1. 00:08:632 (1,2,3) - 请至少丢在重音上啊 这里是很普通的3/4


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