yoshiki*lisa - Destin Histoire (TV Size)

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alacat


o_o

[General]
  1. Please add "吉木りさ" to Tags. As you know, she is singer of this song.
  2. Did you use "drum-slidertick" file ? Please remove it If you didn't


[Easy]
  1. 00:03:016 (3) - It's better to use a new comobo from here same as your patterns.
  2. 00:05:365 - add a drum-finish here ? I feel this part is empty. It has nothing in it.
  3. 00:13:859 (3) - I prefer to use soft-finish instead of drum-sound here.
  4. 00:47:655 (1) - Please remove new combo here. It doesn't work.
  5. 00:48:558 - hmm ... I feel this section is a bit loud. So you should consider turning down the volume around 40% ~ 50%.
    Slider tick sounds are very noisy >.>


[Normal]
  1. 00:05:365 - Same as easy diff.
  2. 00:16:028 (1) - Consider removing a new combo same as your patterns.
  3. 00:42:233 (1,2,1) - Please check these distances at this part. I think you should use x0.9 distance same as other parts.
  4. 00:45:667 (2) - ^ Same. Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading.
  5. 01:19:643 (1) - whistle


[Hard]
  1. 00:14:944 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I feel you used new combos too much at this part. So you should reduce it to half.


[Insane]
  1. 01:11:149 - ,01:11:239 (2) - missing a clap


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Topic Starter
wendao

alacat wrote:



o_o o_o

[General]
  1. Please add "吉木りさ" to Tags. As you know, she is singer of this song. added
  2. Did you use "drum-slidertick" file ? Please remove it If you didn't deleted


[Easy]
  1. 00:03:016 (3) - It's better to use a new combo from here same as your patterns. ok
  2. 00:05:365 - add a drum-finish here ? I feel this part is empty. It has nothing in it. done
  3. 00:13:859 (3) - I prefer to use soft-finish instead of drum-sound here. ok
  4. 00:47:655 (1) - Please remove new combo here. It doesn't work. okay
  5. 00:48:558 - hmm ... I feel this section is a bit loud. So you should consider turning down the volume around 40% ~ 50%. 40%
    Slider tick sounds are very noisy >.> D: is 35%~45% too loud?


[Normal]
  1. 00:05:365 - Same as easy diff. done
  2. 00:16:028 (1) - Consider removing a new combo same as your patterns. okay okay
  3. 00:42:233 (1,2,1) - Please check these distances at this part. I think you should use x0.9 distance same as other parts. okay, moved them all
  4. 00:45:667 (2) - ^ Same. Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading. ^^^
  5. 01:19:643 (1) - whistle no, not fit at all :(


[Hard]
  1. 00:14:944 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I feel you used new combos too much at this part. So you should reduce it to half. done


[Insane]
  1. 01:11:149 - ,01:11:239 (2) - missing a clap intentional :)


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:D thanks alacat!!
alacat
Recheck

[Easy]
  1. 00:35:908 (2,3,4) - I'm worry about off-screen at this part. (It's enough for playing) So you should consider moving these up for safety.


[Hard]
  1. 00:14:402 - I have a sense of discomfort with this sound of slider tick. Please check here again!


Let me know ~
Topic Starter
wendao

alacat wrote:

Recheck

[Easy]
  1. 00:35:908 (2,3,4) - I'm worry about off-screen at this part. (It's enough for playing) So you should consider moving these up for safety. done


[Hard]
  1. 00:14:402 - I have a sense of discomfort with this sound of slider tick. Please check here again! oh... I just remembered what drum-slidertick use for... re-added silent drum-slidertick


Let me know ~
alacat

wendao2000 wrote:

re-added silent drum-slidertick
hmm but you can't use silence file both slider ticks and slider slides.

Please check this rule.



So I recommend you to use soft-custom1 at here. 00:14:402 - also try to use 20% volume.
Topic Starter
wendao

alacat wrote:

hmm but you can't use silence file both slider ticks and slider slides.
So I recommend you to use soft-custom1 at here. 00:14:402 - also try to use 20% volume.
even it's really fit? awww that's suck :?

anyway, re-deleted drum-slidertick, added inherited point with 20% volume instead
alacat
got quite better for now !

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