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[General]
[General]
- why dont you add a video ? =v=
- 01:11:347 - unsnapped green sections, please resnap on 1/4 line.
- 00:27:597 (3) - add a clap to the tail and repeat of the slider.
- 00:33:011 (1,2) - i prefer your previous part.00:18:575 (1,2) - so i hope you make in a similar here.
- 00:43:838 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music.
- 00:43:838 (1,2,1) - this part is a little boring to me. 00:45:642 (2) - please remake this slider so will be more interesting !
- 00:56:469 (3) - add a whistle to the head of the slider.
- 01:20:830 (4) - why don't you follow the crash cymbal here ? 01:21:733 - so consider adding a slider here, like this
- 01:24:439 (3,4) - hmm i feel kinda empty here 01:22:635 (1) - , it is better to put 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so i recommend you to use 2/1 slider + note. If you follow my suggestions, it prevents the biginner from misreading.
- 00:00:530 - ~00:07:748 - it is better to use spacing around DS1.0x
- 00:13:612 (2) - add a finish to the head of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music. like your previous slider 00:12:259 -
- 00:31:206 (1) - Design suggestion: how about putting more spacing between red point ? like this
- 00:33:462 (2) - hmm.. i feel this part looks crowded. so you should consider moving this note left for the flow ?
- 00:37:522 (2) - i recommend you to put to the opposite direction for the flow. like this
- 00:43:161 (3) - finish.
- 01:19:026 (2,2) - a bit nazi mod, it would look better if it was symmetrical.
- 01:27:146 - i feel kinda empty here, it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a note here.
- 00:13:387 - ,00:13:838 (3) - i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a whistle
- 00:57:823 (5) - Flow suggestion : i feel this part looks crowded and unnatural. it is better to make the spacing equal here. like this
- 01:21:507 (5) - a bit nazi mod, you forgot to put a new combo here. i guessed your previous part.
- 01:27:372 - how about using more lower volume ? since the melody is calmer than previous part. i hope you use 40 ~ 50% volume here.
really nice diff 0.0
- 00:08:199 (2) - flow suggestion: this part feels too hard. so you should consider reduce the spacing this part like my suggestion. it prevents the player is going to misread.
- 00:12:484 (4) - the note looks crowded , so please put more distance around (0.60 ~0.80x) spacing.
- 00:14:289 (6) - As you can see here, since you already have the up and down motion from your previous patterns, the transition from this to the next slider almost feels like unnatural jump. so i recommend you to use ctrl + G command.
- 00:17:221 (2) - Same as above. try to unify the patterns 00:15:417 (4) - ,it looks better to me.
- 00:36:620 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider here to follow the strong sound in this music. like your previous slider 00:33:011 (1) -
- 00:40:229 (1) - ^
- 00:43:838 (1) - ^
- 00:44:289 (2) - flow suggestion: how about moving this note down for the flow ? so this part will flow more naturally and beautifully.
- 00:45:642 (1) - a bit nazi mod, please move to this slider to x:408 y:188 will be more beautiful.
- 00:49:702 - I recommend you to put a note same as your previous part.
- 00:54:439 (1,2) - hmm please check your new combo pattern.00:43:612 (8,1) - so you should consider remake it here.also, 00:54:665 (2) - add a finish to the head of the slider here to follow the strong sound in this music.
- 01:09:552 (2) - flow suggestion: feels like unnatural jump in this note. so try to move to center around x:240 y:172 . will be more interesting imo :3
- 01:27:372 - Same as Hard diff