1. Easy (1.46 stars, 118 notes)
2. Hard (4.86 stars, 428 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 846 notes)
4. Normal (3.27 stars, 200 notes)

Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Hard - Done
Insane - Done

lkx_Shore wrote:

No kdz
[Insane]
01:11:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 拉开点？虽然拉开了就破坏这个梗了 这个梗好像不是很好玩，我之后大概会改掉
02:09:105 (1) - 移动到02:09:458 (2) - 的头？ 稍微往下挪了挪，感觉这个地方用原地的不是非常适合

说实话真摸不出啥orz.......另外迟来了一天抱歉了

azuretwinight wrote:

hello~
来自mapper群Q
这里是我的建议（只是建议而已） 这里是我觉得需要修改的地方

General
不错的图，有几个地方要看一下
stack leniency=7 maybe 01:53:223 (8) - this part will be mess if use Stack leniency>5, so i use 5

Easy
02:44:399 (1) - 这个转盘消音比较好，不然最后那个音会不会打在红或白线上 虽然我觉得不会有影响，最后只会听到spinnerbonus的声音，不过既然提到了好吧
03:02:752 (1) - 这个滑条跟的vocal似乎有点问题，vocal是da a，而这个滑条的头没有在da而在a上，速度放成25%听下试试，也许是我听得有问题 这个我有考虑过，但是毕竟是easy，我觉得还是压白线比较好，感觉不会影响很多
另外我觉得slider tick rate=1似乎好些。。不觉得rate2在滑条比较长的时候多出来tick的音比较明显吗？ 我觉得2还好，而且1也会很明显，先保留意见，如果之后很多人都觉得1比较好我会改

Normal
01:05:576 (1,2,1,2) - 第一个combo的滑条2没有上下对称，所以包的note不是很好看，不过我也可以理解为为了使flow更加顺畅所做出的代价，所以这里酌情处理 这里的确是为了flow和01:05:929 (2) - 的尾端扣01:04:164 (2) - 所作出的小牺牲，我觉得一般不是及其严重的强迫症应该不会有感觉的。。。
02:58:517 (1) - 这个转盘的尾部会有一点没有踩上重音的感觉，个人的感觉而已，考虑转盘结尾收在大白线上如何？ my bad~x_x fixed~
str同easy，另外我觉得转盘似乎有些多比如02:26:046 (1) - 转盘又短跟note又紧，除此之外打的还是很顺畅的，尤其是第一段的节奏打的很舒服 这个确实有点近，我还在考虑中，顺便str是什么意思？o.o刚才怎么看怎么是力量...RPG玩多了..T T 观点同easy

Hard
00:14:399 (7,8,1) - 时间间距和00:17:929 (1,2,3) - 是一样的，而间距却不一样，如果是无意为之请改一下，如果是想要强调旋律小节的最后一点而故意加跳则这样我也不是特别推荐= = 的确是故意为之，不知道你有没有发现我只在小节结尾加跳，此处我还是保留自己的观点
00:21:282 (3,4,5) - 这里同上的问题，跟00:14:399 (7,8,1) -时间间距一样而位移间距却不一样 ^同上
01:02:664 - 这里之前的kiai节奏十分赞，但是后面这一段的kiai却节奏上疏松了一些其实这里这样安排也挺赞的，建议听听别人的意见，如果还有人提及这一点的话 o3o
01:40:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里听了原曲，如果不听原曲的话我会觉得有点overmap，听了之后还是感觉强调这里不是很有必要，不过看你个人想法咯~比较无所谓的一个地方，如果你觉得这是亮点的话就这样用即可 16个连打用4个slider带过算是强调吗...难道你说的是音效？或者是让我用转盘带过么o.o
02:44:399 (1) - 这里还是感觉spinner的尾部可以消音 如上所述
还是感觉spinner有点多 spinner多是坏事吗/_\

Insane
= =有点难，如果别人跟你说难度分布的问题的话建议削insane难度 orz如果这还叫难那我真的不知道什么叫简单了...这种难度根本属于随手SS的水平啊
00:59:929 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 前边的那几个连续的三角跳我觉得说得过去，可是三角跳还要往回跳，跳还不跳回三角，往回接连打，连打还是转了一个圈的，我觉得有些难了，梗本身是很不错的，只是难了些 这个是配合音效的，不知道你有没有听出是嚓咚咚嚓咚咚嚓咚嚓咚的节奏，如果不往回跳怎么体现节奏的变化呢？然后你再次提到难这个问题...说实话我一点也不觉得难,顶多算是微难/_\
02:20:752 (1,2,3,4) - 这个滑条会有点跳，连打指速去跳有点难 这已经是常见梗了，我觉得你整个Insane diff的mod用一个字就可以了~难！ 233
虽然难但是后面的连打的确挺过瘾~ 谢谢~

-Kirito wrote:

hi bless :3/

[Easy]
slider tick rate -1 ok

00:00:635 (1) - x:152 y:128 move (senter) ok
00:06:282 (1) - ^ symmetry ok
01:02:046 - circle add? - vocal ok
02:26:046 (3) - sampleset - normal remove nope
02:26:399 - slider add? this nope
03:12:635 (1) - spinner add? - Insane same as nope
clap add plz bless clap sounds not fit x_x

[Normal]
slider tick rate -1 ok

03:12:282 (2) - 1/2 slider change? nope
03:12:635 (1) - spinner add? - Insane same as nope

[Hard]
AR+1 ok

00:11:223 (9) - NC add? ok
00:33:105 (5) - ^ ok
00:56:752 (4) - here change? nope
00:58:517 (1) - ^ ok
01:03:635 (2) - grid 1 down ok
01:12:811 (1) - 01:12:723 - spin start ok
01:14:752 (1) - blanket this better ok
01:15:811 (4) - ^ ok
01:42:635 - circle add? nope
02:03:459 (5) - NC add? ok
02:26:046 (1) - 02:25:252 - spin start nope
03:12:635 (1) - spinner add? - Insane same as nope

[Insane]
00:02:223 (7) - NC add ok
00:05:046 (7) - ^ ok
00:07:693 (6) - ^ ok
00:28:870 (1) - finish add nope
01:01:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - wow..circle stream :O ;D
01:19:693 (9) - NC add? ok
01:33:193 - sampleset normal add? nope
01:33:811 (1) - finish add nope
01:48:988 (5) - NC add? (this jump) ok
02:08:046 (1,2,3) - crtl + g? nope
02:08:752 (1,2,3) - ^ nope
02:12:105 (7) - NC add? ok
02:21:811 (5) - ^ ok
02:49:693 (13) - ^ ok
03:06:370 - here sampleset normal add? nope

Index! xD xD

1. mp3: outro is too long. i suggest to cut it

1. 00:41:576 (3) - how about slider: 00:41:576~00:42:105
2. 01:50:753 (1,2) - avoid overlap
3. 01:56:400 (1,3) - ^

1. 00:23:576 (2,1) - avoid overlap
2. 02:37:693 (1) - start at 02:37:341

1. 01:11:223 (1,2,3) - I prefer to change for reverse slider
2. 01:11:929 (5,6,7) - ^
3. 01:35:223 (6,7) - avoid overlap
4. 02:30:458 (2,3,4,5) - how about stack 02:31:341 (5) - on 02:30:458 (2) - like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   164,164,150458,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   232,84,150635,1,0,1:0:0:0:
   328,44,150811,2,0,P|331:130|267:181,1,175,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   164,164,151341,1,0,1:0:0:0:

5. 02:43:870 (1,2) - not jump
6. 03:09:812 (1,2,3) - I prefer to change for reverse slider
7. 03:10:518 (5,6,7) - ^

1. 00:02:223 (1,4) - avoid overlap
2. 00:03:635 (2,4) - ^
3. 00:48:282 (6,1) - I prefer not to stack
4. 01:26:046 (4,1) - avoid overlap
5. 01:27:282 (3,5) - ^
6. 02:08:046 (1,3) - I prefer Ctrl+G
7. 02:08:752 (1,3) - ^
8. 02:24:105 (5,7) - I prefer stack
9. 03:10:164 (1,3) - I prefer Ctrl+G
10. 03:10:870 (1,3) - ^
11. 03:12:723 (1) - end at 03:14:752

RandomEffect wrote:

Trick or Treat! happy halloween

[General]

1. mp3: outro is too long. i suggest to cut it i mapped more than 80% so i think it's ok

[Easy]

1. 00:41:576 (3) - how about slider: 00:41:576~00:42:105 i change it to 00:41:576~00:42:635 now
2. 01:50:753 (1,2) - avoid overlap ok
3. 01:56:400 (1,3) - ^ ok

[Normal]

1. 00:23:576 (2,1) - avoid overlap i think that's ok
2. 02:37:693 (1) - start at 02:37:341 follow vocal

[Hard]

1. 01:11:223 (1,2,3) - I prefer to change for reverse slider i'll consider it
2. 01:11:929 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
3. 01:35:223 (6,7) - avoid overlap ok
4. 02:30:458 (2,3,4,5) - how about stack 02:31:341 (5) - on 02:30:458 (2) - like this? nice
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   164,164,150458,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   232,84,150635,1,0,1:0:0:0:
   328,44,150811,2,0,P|331:130|267:181,1,175,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   164,164,151341,1,0,1:0:0:0:

5. 02:43:870 (1,2) - not jump why?
6. 03:09:812 (1,2,3) - I prefer to change for reverse slider i'll consider it
7. 03:10:518 (5,6,7) - ^ ^

[Insane]

1. 00:02:223 (1,4) - avoid overlap that's okay
2. 00:03:635 (2,4) - ^ ^
3. 00:48:282 (6,1) - I prefer not to stack nope
4. 01:26:046 (4,1) - avoid overlap that's okay
5. 01:27:282 (3,5) - ^ ^
6. 02:08:046 (1,3) - I prefer Ctrl+G nope
7. 02:08:752 (1,3) - ^ ^
8. 02:24:105 (5,7) - I prefer stack why only this part..? o.o
9. 03:10:164 (1,3) - I prefer Ctrl+G nope
10. 03:10:870 (1,3) - ^ ^
11. 03:12:723 (1) - end at 03:14:752 i think 03:14:943 is better

your map looks measured mapping. so beautiful! thank you
~Good Luck~

1. No tags? maybe you might want to add some like "ending, movie, 劇場版 とある魔術の禁書目録 エンデュミオーンの奇蹟" well you can add more if you want..but up to you
2. Your BG size is wrong, you need 1366x768 or 1024x768
   
   Fixed it for you o3o

   
3. disable the widescreen support since you don't need it in your map, you didn't use wide screen videos or sb..so yeah o3o

1. 00:23:929 (1) - how about moving this slider here x:392 y:124 and then making some blanket with the next slider like this
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:870 (1) - whistle was too soft for this part imo, so i suggest you to remove it and switch it with finish instead..sounds much better
3. 00:37:341 (2,3) - you made so many liner sliders >< how about making some curve with these slider?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:988 (1) - umm it'll make better blanket imo, if you made this slider curved and moved it to here x:93 y:167 like this
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:09:811 (1) - i don't think you need to add a nc here since it didn't follow anything, not the voice or the music ...so i suggest you to remove it
6. 01:39:458 (1,2) - many liner sliders is a bit boring and having the same rhythm repeated so many times >< so how about changing them like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:06:282 (1) - same as i said here 01:09:811 (1) -
8. 02:44:399 (1,1) - making something like this on easy diff, is kinda hard and i don't suggest you to it, since the it'll be hard for some newbie players so how about making one spinner instead?
9. 03:08:399 (1) - same as i said here 01:09:811 (1) -

1. 00:02:223 (1) - this pattern is a bit confusing atm, so how about making something like this instead?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:870 (1,1) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:576 (2,1) - making such overlap on normal is kinda bad imo, so how about moving this slider to here instead x:156 y:276, to avoid such overlap is better o3o
4. 00:26:399 (2) - move the 2nd and last slider points 1 grid up, so it'll make better blanket with the next note
5. 00:57:105 (1,2) - how about changing this pattern to this, so the (1) slider can make nice blanket with other slider o3o
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:07:341 (2) - how about making this curve slider like this so it'll look more prettier and nice
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:51:282 (2) - umm, this kinda patter looks bad to me imo, so how about moving the 2nd slider point to x:292 y:100
8. 02:42:988 (1,1) - same as i said about this on easy diff

1. 02:42:988 (1,1) - how about making some flow here, not just liner sliders =3=/ baka Bless
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:282 (3) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:31:341 (7,3) - these two slider and note are overlapping so, how about stucking to avoid that?
4. 02:43:870 (1,2) - this two notes are a bit confusing to me so, i suggest you don't stuck the (1) on the slider move it somewhere else but don't stuck them to avoid the confusion from some people

1. 00:04:341 (4) - move this note 2 grids down so it'll stuck above the 00:02:929 (4) -
2. 01:40:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - wow why so much spacing baka Bless =3= please make the same spacing or do something else but don't things like this, i'm like "wtf" now, and it looks bad yeah =3=

Sekai-nyan wrote:

in-game pm request =w=/ and hi Bless wwww Hi >3</

General:

1. No tags? maybe you might want to add some like "ending, movie, 劇場版 とある魔術の禁書目録 エンデュミオーンの奇蹟" well you can add more if you want..but up to you added :3
2. Your BG size is wrong, you need 1366x768 or 1024x768 thank you~
   
   Fixed it for you o3o

   
3. disable the widescreen support since you don't need it in your map, you didn't use wide screen videos or sb..so yeah o3o okay~

Easy:

1. 00:23:929 (1) - how about moving this slider here x:392 y:124 and then making some blanket with the next slider like this ok
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:870 (1) - whistle was too soft for this part imo, so i suggest you to remove it and switch it with finish instead..sounds much better ok
3. 00:37:341 (2,3) - you made so many liner sliders >< how about making some curve with these slider? ok
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:988 (1) - umm it'll make better blanket imo, if you made this slider curved and moved it to here x:93 y:167 like this looks nice :3
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:09:811 (1) - i don't think you need to add a nc here since it didn't follow anything, not the voice or the music ...so i suggest you to remove it ok
6. 01:39:458 (1,2) - many liner sliders is a bit boring and having the same rhythm repeated so many times >< so how about changing them like this? ok
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:06:282 (1) - same as i said here 01:09:811 (1) - fixed
8. 02:44:399 (1,1) - making something like this on easy diff, is kinda hard and i don't suggest you to it, since the it'll be hard for some newbie players so how about making one spinner instead? i remove 02:44:399 (1) - the first one now, cause 5s+ spinner is too long =3=
9. 03:08:399 (1) - same as i said here 01:09:811 (1) - fixed

Normal:

1. 00:02:223 (1) - this pattern is a bit confusing atm, so how about making something like this instead? ok
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:870 (1,1) - ^ nice :3
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:576 (2,1) - making such overlap on normal is kinda bad imo, so how about moving this slider to here instead x:156 y:276, to avoid such overlap is better o3o [color=#0080FF]move 00:23:223 (1,2) - to x:296 y:56 now
4. 00:26:399 (2) - move the 2nd and last slider points 1 grid up, so it'll make better blanket with the next note fixed~
5. 00:57:105 (1,2) - how about changing this pattern to this, so the (1) slider can make nice blanket with other slider o3o nice~
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:07:341 (2) - how about making this curve slider like this so it'll look more prettier and nice ok
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:51:282 (2) - umm, this kinda patter looks bad to me imo, so how about moving the 2nd slider point to x:292 y:100 ok
8. 02:42:988 (1,1) - same as i said about this on easy diff change 02:42:988 (1) spinner to slider now~

Hard:
how about lowering the ar by so it'll make better for your spread and for plays ok
and increase the HP drain by 1 at least it's way too low for the hard diff atm >< ok

1. 02:42:988 (1,1) - how about making some flow here, not just liner sliders =3=/ baka Bless i think this liner slider is fine :3
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:282 (3) - ^ ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:31:341 (7,3) - these two slider and note are overlapping so, how about stucking to avoid that? fixed~
4. 02:43:870 (1,2) - this two notes are a bit confusing to me so, i suggest you don't stuck the (1) on the slider move it somewhere else but don't stuck them to avoid the confusion from some people hmm~i'll consider this~ keep it for now

Insane:
maybe use AR8 i think atm it's too fast for this song and for your rhythm >< i prefer AR9, i can't read this diff on AR8 at all orz

1. 00:04:341 (4) - move this note 2 grids down so it'll stuck above the 00:02:929 (4) - ok
2. 01:40:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - wow why so much spacing baka Bless =3= please make the same spacing or do something else but don't things like this, i'm like "wtf" now, and it looks bad yeah =3= lol yeah, i'll change this part xD

No problem just the spacing on some streams kinda worries me a bit, but still nice insane diff as i can say o3o >3<~♡



That's all i can find owo/ good luck moe Bless <3

lkx_Shore wrote:

12sp啦

Frostmourne wrote:

General
good

Easy
01:36:635 (1) - finish here because you have a similar finish on 00:28:870 (1) -

Normal
Nice Normal !

Hard
AR8 feels better for this diff.
01:40:870 (1,2,3,4) - make them close to each other please because these spacings look like 1/2 but they are actually 1/4

Insane
Amazing Insane

call me back Bless

Frostmourne wrote:

:)

ykcarrot wrote:

(´・∀・`) gogo

Shuiyiming wrote:

Easy
good

Normal: combos are too short. Maybe you like colourful beatmaps, but I think a new combo should begin at where a new music passage start.So you should try to reduce them.
00:51:458 (1,2) - Not symmetrical actually. 00:52:870 (2) - place it at x=204,y=64

02:30:282 (1) - I don't think there should be a new combo.
02:35:929 (1) - No new combo too.
02:51:458 (1) - No new combo.
02:56:752 (1) - No new combo. A different colour will make player think he can take a little break here and miss it. It's belongs to the former music passage.
03:04:164 (1) - No new combo.
03:06:988 (1) - No new combo.

Hard
02:57:105 (1) - x=172,y=60
02:57:282 (2) - x=248,y=108
02:57:458 (3) - x=324,y=60
02:57:635 (4) - x=400,y=108

Insane
Nice!

I love this map as well as the anime. Hope your beatmap will be ranked soon:)

Nymph wrote:

good job :3

Sekai-nyan wrote:

BLESSS! GRATZ >w<