You may try finding more 1/4 drumsounds and make more use of them would be better.
For the current pattern:
00:32:311 (32311|4) - Meaningless, may change to an individual note (or two individual notes both at 00:32:311 and 00:32:714)
- nope.. I'll keep it cuz dat strong drums..
00:33:922 (33922|6) - ^
00:55:365 (55365|3) - Strange to start from blue line, and unnecessary imo. Neither has any sound to support it. I strongly recommend you to make it 1/2 length from white line. - nope... I'll keep it. I wanna express vocal's strength.
And also for the following similar 1/4 length LNs.
01:01:506 (61506|3) - End at 01:01:707 would make a better sense -okay
01:15:399 (75399|5) - Shorten to a half, and start from 01:15:600 - okay
01:16:204 (76204|2) - ^ - okay
01:17:009 (77009|4) - ^ - okay
01:28:486 - Add a note at 7th - okay
01:31:707 - ^, 1st - okay
01:17:311 (77311|1) - Strange here, rather move to 01:16:909 at 4th XD - fixed other ways xD
01:21:036 (81036|1) - Move to 4th (or add a note at 4th) - fixed
Hanyuu's diff looks good, and perhaps I'll look over it again soon, today so tired ;w;