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supercell - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 24 de diciembre de 2013 at 01:52:01 p.m.

Artist: supercell
Title: Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (TV Size)
Source: Bakemonogatari
Tags: Supercell YoCheck Simple_Star
BPM: 165
Filesize: 2040kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K Easy - 4Key (1.55 stars, 296 notes)
  2. 4K Hard - 4Key (3.07 stars, 561 notes)
  3. 4K Normal - 4Key (1.88 stars, 358 notes)
  4. 5K Normal - 5Key (2.2 stars, 406 notes)
  5. 7K Hard - 7Key (3.7 stars, 622 notes)
  6. 7K Insane - 7Key (5 stars, 852 notes)
  7. S.Star's 7K Normal - 7Key (2.29 stars, 371 notes)
  8. YoCheck's 5K Hard - 5Key (3.7 stars, 684 notes)
Download: supercell - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mod Please~
[Shi-Ra]
Hi, there's mod for your diff as you requested ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
7K Insane
Inside :3
00:05:746 (5746|6,5850|5) - move these notes to 1st and 2nd column accordingly to perform more comfortable triplet here

00:10:952 (10952|0) - move to 3rd column, more suitable with your pattern here rather then in 0 column

00:19:699 (19699|0) - there are four notes already in this section so delete fifth

00:33:653 (33653|1) - move to 2nd column, there's no repeating sound so this pattern more suitable here

00:58:227 (58227|1) - too far from next going note, it's uncomfortable, move it to 3rd column or another

01:13:847 (73847|5) - delete this note, there's no need to place three note chord, two notes will be enough

01:24:364 (84364|0) - move to 2nd column, more suitable with your pattern here also you can move this note 01:24:676 (84676|2) - to 0 column to make balance between columns after previous replacing

01:32:695 - add one more note here in according to the beat

01:45:919 (105919|2,106231|4) - you can detete these notes, there are unnecessary coz there's no suitable sound

01:59:248 - use 1/3 divisor here to place all notes correctly, listen closely to music / example

02:21:532 (141532|1) - move this LN to 5th column to make playable this part with one hand

02:32:049 - you can add one more note here, according to the rhythm

03:44:940 - add note to 3rd or 4th column according to the beat

04:12:118 (252118|0,252535|2) - finally you can end these LNs here 04:12:847 and after this start 04:12:951 (252951|3) - this LN here 04:13:056

PM me when you finish other diffs, and if you want I'll mod them too~
Good luck :3/
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi, there's mod for your diff as you requested ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
7K Insane
Inside :3
00:05:746 (5746|6,5850|5) - move these notes to 1st and 2nd column accordingly to perform more comfortable triplet here

00:10:952 (10952|0) - move to 3rd column, more suitable with your pattern here rather then in 0 column

00:19:699 (19699|0) - there are four notes already in this section so delete fifth

00:33:653 (33653|1) - move to 2nd column, there's no repeating sound so this pattern more suitable here

00:58:227 (58227|1) - too far from next going note, it's uncomfortable, move it to 3rd column or another

01:13:847 (73847|5) - delete this note, there's no need to place three note chord, two notes will be enough

01:24:364 (84364|0) - move to 2nd column, more suitable with your pattern here also you can move this note 01:24:676 (84676|2) - to 0 column to make balance between columns after previous replacing

01:32:695 - add one more note here in according to the beat

01:45:919 (105919|2,106231|4) - you can detete these notes, there are unnecessary coz there's no suitable sound

01:59:248 - use 1/3 divisor here to place all notes correctly, listen closely to music / example

02:21:532 (141532|1) - move this LN to 5th column to make playable this part with one hand

02:32:049 - you can add one more note here, according to the rhythm

03:44:940 - add note to 3rd or 4th column according to the beat

04:12:118 (252118|0,252535|2) - finally you can end these LNs here 04:12:847 and after this start 04:12:951 (252951|3) - this LN here 04:13:056

PM me when you finish other diffs, and if you want I'll mod them too~
Good luck :3/
Thanks Shi-Ra! :D, fixed ^^
Skalim
Hola dante, aqui esta el IRC mod ^^

Irc mod
16:33 Skalim: porque esta parte esta casi igual al inicio
16:35 Skalim: 00:56:576 - añade
16:35 Skalim: 00:56:758 - añade
16:35 Skalim: 00:56:940 - añade
16:35 Skalim: y asi sucesivamente, ojala entiendas
16:38 -DanteMayCry-: Pues cache un poco la idea
16:38 -DanteMayCry-: xD
16:38 -DanteMayCry-: en los suaves dos notas, en los fuertes 3 notas no ?
16:38 Skalim: se
16:38 Skalim: luego de que hagas eso, te digo algunos errores que pille
16:38 Skalim: no quiero confundirte
16:39 -DanteMayCry-: Vale
16:39 -DanteMayCry-: Por ejemplo en partes donde hay drum fuerte
16:39 Skalim: 01:01:213 - aprovecha de eliminar la nota simple
16:39 -DanteMayCry-: Tengo 2 notas pero ahi mismo empieza un LN
16:39 Skalim: eso no es stream XD
16:39 -DanteMayCry-: No hay necesidad de poner 3 notas no ?
16:40 Skalim: yo me los evito, pero en realidad cuando los evito, los mods me dicen que añada igual
16:40 Skalim: es gusto de uno, pero te lo corregiran igual XD
16:40 Skalim: asi que añade aunque no te guste u_U
16:40 -DanteMayCry-: xDDD
16:41 Skalim: 01:01:486 (1) - borra
16:42 Skalim: 01:04:031 (1) - borra
16:42 Skalim: 01:05:122 (5) - borra
16:42 Skalim: 01:05:213 - añade en la 0
16:43 Skalim: 01:05:304 - añade 2 notas en 2 y 3
16:43 Skalim: 01:07:395 - añade
16:44 -DanteMayCry-: 01:05:122 - Borro ese LN ?
16:45 Skalim: no es necesario
16:45 -DanteMayCry-: Vale xD
16:45 Skalim: 01:13:849 - añade 1 nota (desde aqui no enfatizes)
16:46 Skalim: 01:18:577 (1) - borra
16:47 Skalim: 01:19:486 -- 01:22:395 - añade 1 nota en todos
16:47 -DanteMayCry-: En los ticks blancos no mas no ?
16:47 Skalim: en todos
16:48 Skalim: 01:22:213 - este no
16:48 -DanteMayCry-: Listo
16:48 Skalim: 01:22:395 - y este no
16:48 Skalim: 01:23:122 - añade
16:48 Skalim: 01:23:486 - añade
16:49 Skalim: eso es todo con INSANE
16:49 Skalim: vamos la hard, aqui no pille muchos errores
16:49 Skalim: 7K HARD
16:50 Skalim: 00:09:667 (6) - borra
16:50 -DanteMayCry-: Listo
16:50 Skalim: 00:09:849 - añade 2 notas
16:50 Skalim: perdon si voy aapurado XD
16:51 Skalim: todo listo?
16:53 -DanteMayCry-: Listo
16:53 -DanteMayCry-: xD
16:53 -DanteMayCry-: Na tranqui que ahi voy entiendiendo xD
16:53 Skalim: ok XD
16:54 -DanteMayCry-: verga la insane ahora si parece insane xDDDDDDDDDD
16:54 -DanteMayCry-: Listo ahi empiezo con la hard
16:55 Skalim: XD
16:55 Skalim: 01:02:031 - añade
16:55 Skalim: 01:04:031 - borra
16:56 Skalim: 01:05:122 - borra esas 2 notas
16:56 Skalim: 01:05:213 - añade 1 nota (stick azul)
16:56 Skalim: 01:05:849 - borra esas 2 notas
16:57 Skalim: 01:06:577 - borra esas 2 notas
16:57 Skalim: 01:06:849 - añade 1 nota (azul)
16:57 Skalim: 01:07:213 - añade 1 nota (azul)
16:58 Skalim: eso es todo
16:58 Skalim: no le encontre tanto aca
16:58 Skalim: updatea y pruebo aver como quedaron XD
16:59 -DanteMayCry-: Vale xD
17:00 Skalim: specta
17:01 -DanteMayCry-: Voy
17:01 Skalim: bueno, cuando updatees
17:01 -DanteMayCry-: Listo subida xD
17:01 Skalim: ok
17:01 -DanteMayCry-: Lol de 5-5.30 dificultad que tenia
17:01 -DanteMayCry-: subio a 6,57
17:01 Skalim: XD
17:01 -DanteMayCry-: xD
17:01 Skalim: XDD
17:01 Skalim: bn
17:02 Skalim: ahora si es insane
17:02 -DanteMayCry-: See xDDD
17:04 Skalim: ahora siiii
17:04 -DanteMayCry-: Pffff xDD
17:04 -DanteMayCry-: Como cambio jajaja
17:04 Skalim: falle mas XD
17:04 Skalim: te gusto el mapa?
17:04 -DanteMayCry-: Se xDD
17:04 -DanteMayCry-: Sep, mola como quedo :P
17:06 Skalim: yo creo
17:06 Skalim: que ese queda como NORMAL
17:06 Skalim: no le veo tan hardcore XD
17:06 Skalim: pero esa es cosa tuya XD
17:06 -DanteMayCry-: Pues esta normalita, pero he visto que muchos se quejan
17:07 -DanteMayCry-: Por lo que hay mapas que de una normal, pasan a insanes muy jodidas
17:07 -DanteMayCry-: xD
17:07 -DanteMayCry-: Por eso quiero hacer una mas facil de la hard
17:08 Skalim: yo los veo bn
17:08 Skalim: y si, con unas 5 diffs
17:08 -DanteMayCry-: El 4k me gusto como quedo xD
17:08 Skalim: creo que te la pueden modear y rankear
17:09 Skalim: tiene potencial
17:09 -DanteMayCry-: 5 ? o.o
17:09 -DanteMayCry-: Una mas dificil que la hard no ?
17:09 Skalim: no 5 diffs mas
17:09 Skalim: con unas 2 mas basta
17:09 Skalim: con diferentes teclas
17:09 Skalim: la insane esta bn
17:09 Skalim: te falta una easy
17:09 -DanteMayCry-: Una easy 7k
17:09 -DanteMayCry-: sep
17:09 Skalim: y una 6k insane al menos
17:10 Skalim: porque los enfermos son exigentes
17:10 Skalim: XD
17:10 -DanteMayCry-: O 5k
17:10 Skalim: tambien 5k
17:10 Skalim: bueno nos vemos, luego publico e irc ^^
17:11 -DanteMayCry-: Dale w, gracias por el mod
17:11 -DanteMayCry-: :3
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

Skalim wrote:

Hola dante, aqui esta el IRC mod ^^

Irc mod
16:33 Skalim: porque esta parte esta casi igual al inicio
16:35 Skalim: 00:56:576 - añade
16:35 Skalim: 00:56:758 - añade
16:35 Skalim: 00:56:940 - añade
16:35 Skalim: y asi sucesivamente, ojala entiendas
16:38 -DanteMayCry-: Pues cache un poco la idea
16:38 -DanteMayCry-: xD
16:38 -DanteMayCry-: en los suaves dos notas, en los fuertes 3 notas no ?
16:38 Skalim: se
16:38 Skalim: luego de que hagas eso, te digo algunos errores que pille
16:38 Skalim: no quiero confundirte
16:39 -DanteMayCry-: Vale
16:39 -DanteMayCry-: Por ejemplo en partes donde hay drum fuerte
16:39 Skalim: 01:01:213 - aprovecha de eliminar la nota simple
16:39 -DanteMayCry-: Tengo 2 notas pero ahi mismo empieza un LN
16:39 Skalim: eso no es stream XD
16:39 -DanteMayCry-: No hay necesidad de poner 3 notas no ?
16:40 Skalim: yo me los evito, pero en realidad cuando los evito, los mods me dicen que añada igual
16:40 Skalim: es gusto de uno, pero te lo corregiran igual XD
16:40 Skalim: asi que añade aunque no te guste u_U
16:40 -DanteMayCry-: xDDD
16:41 Skalim: 01:01:486 (1) - borra
16:42 Skalim: 01:04:031 (1) - borra
16:42 Skalim: 01:05:122 (5) - borra
16:42 Skalim: 01:05:213 - añade en la 0
16:43 Skalim: 01:05:304 - añade 2 notas en 2 y 3
16:43 Skalim: 01:07:395 - añade
16:44 -DanteMayCry-: 01:05:122 - Borro ese LN ?
16:45 Skalim: no es necesario
16:45 -DanteMayCry-: Vale xD
16:45 Skalim: 01:13:849 - añade 1 nota (desde aqui no enfatizes)
16:46 Skalim: 01:18:577 (1) - borra
16:47 Skalim: 01:19:486 -- 01:22:395 - añade 1 nota en todos
16:47 -DanteMayCry-: En los ticks blancos no mas no ?
16:47 Skalim: en todos
16:48 Skalim: 01:22:213 - este no
16:48 -DanteMayCry-: Listo
16:48 Skalim: 01:22:395 - y este no
16:48 Skalim: 01:23:122 - añade
16:48 Skalim: 01:23:486 - añade
16:49 Skalim: eso es todo con INSANE
16:49 Skalim: vamos la hard, aqui no pille muchos errores
16:49 Skalim: 7K HARD
16:50 Skalim: 00:09:667 (6) - borra
16:50 -DanteMayCry-: Listo
16:50 Skalim: 00:09:849 - añade 2 notas
16:50 Skalim: perdon si voy aapurado XD
16:51 Skalim: todo listo?
16:53 -DanteMayCry-: Listo
16:53 -DanteMayCry-: xD
16:53 -DanteMayCry-: Na tranqui que ahi voy entiendiendo xD
16:53 Skalim: ok XD
16:54 -DanteMayCry-: verga la insane ahora si parece insane xDDDDDDDDDD
16:54 -DanteMayCry-: Listo ahi empiezo con la hard
16:55 Skalim: XD
16:55 Skalim: 01:02:031 - añade
16:55 Skalim: 01:04:031 - borra
16:56 Skalim: 01:05:122 - borra esas 2 notas
16:56 Skalim: 01:05:213 - añade 1 nota (stick azul)
16:56 Skalim: 01:05:849 - borra esas 2 notas
16:57 Skalim: 01:06:577 - borra esas 2 notas
16:57 Skalim: 01:06:849 - añade 1 nota (azul)
16:57 Skalim: 01:07:213 - añade 1 nota (azul)
16:58 Skalim: eso es todo
16:58 Skalim: no le encontre tanto aca
16:58 Skalim: updatea y pruebo aver como quedaron XD
16:59 -DanteMayCry-: Vale xD
17:00 Skalim: specta
17:01 -DanteMayCry-: Voy
17:01 Skalim: bueno, cuando updatees
17:01 -DanteMayCry-: Listo subida xD
17:01 Skalim: ok
17:01 -DanteMayCry-: Lol de 5-5.30 dificultad que tenia
17:01 -DanteMayCry-: subio a 6,57
17:01 Skalim: XD
17:01 -DanteMayCry-: xD
17:01 Skalim: XDD
17:01 Skalim: bn
17:02 Skalim: ahora si es insane
17:02 -DanteMayCry-: See xDDD
17:04 Skalim: ahora siiii
17:04 -DanteMayCry-: Pffff xDD
17:04 -DanteMayCry-: Como cambio jajaja
17:04 Skalim: falle mas XD
17:04 Skalim: te gusto el mapa?
17:04 -DanteMayCry-: Se xDD
17:04 -DanteMayCry-: Sep, mola como quedo :P
17:06 Skalim: yo creo
17:06 Skalim: que ese queda como NORMAL
17:06 Skalim: no le veo tan hardcore XD
17:06 Skalim: pero esa es cosa tuya XD
17:06 -DanteMayCry-: Pues esta normalita, pero he visto que muchos se quejan
17:07 -DanteMayCry-: Por lo que hay mapas que de una normal, pasan a insanes muy jodidas
17:07 -DanteMayCry-: xD
17:07 -DanteMayCry-: Por eso quiero hacer una mas facil de la hard
17:08 Skalim: yo los veo bn
17:08 Skalim: y si, con unas 5 diffs
17:08 -DanteMayCry-: El 4k me gusto como quedo xD
17:08 Skalim: creo que te la pueden modear y rankear
17:09 Skalim: tiene potencial
17:09 -DanteMayCry-: 5 ? o.o
17:09 -DanteMayCry-: Una mas dificil que la hard no ?
17:09 Skalim: no 5 diffs mas
17:09 Skalim: con unas 2 mas basta
17:09 Skalim: con diferentes teclas
17:09 Skalim: la insane esta bn
17:09 Skalim: te falta una easy
17:09 -DanteMayCry-: Una easy 7k
17:09 -DanteMayCry-: sep
17:09 Skalim: y una 6k insane al menos
17:10 Skalim: porque los enfermos son exigentes
17:10 Skalim: XD
17:10 -DanteMayCry-: O 5k
17:10 Skalim: tambien 5k
17:10 Skalim: bueno nos vemos, luego publico e irc ^^
17:11 -DanteMayCry-: Dale w, gracias por el mod
17:11 -DanteMayCry-: :3
Gracias bro ;)
MAAAAAAAAAAAAAS
[ 7K Insane ]

00:28:031 (28031|2) - Long Note 00:28:213 - end , 00:28:213 - add a Long Note
00:30:758 - add a note
00:42:758 - You give this part Note change also not bad ( If you want to insert )
01:02:940 - add to note that
01:05:213 - move note 01:05:304 -
01:20:577 - You give this part Note change also not bad ( If you want to insert )

[ 7K Hard ]
00:54:395 (54395|4) - move to note (6)
00:54:395 (54395|4) - add a note



umm.. you need to 4K Easy , Normal
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

__M A S__ wrote:

[ 7K Insane ]

00:28:031 (28031|2) -(<-- This LN is for Vocal,I like more as it had Sorry >_<) Long Note 00:28:213 - end , 00:28:213 - add a Long Note
00:30:758 - add a note
00:42:758 - You give this part Note change also not bad ( If you want to insert )
01:02:940 - add to note that
01:05:213 - move note 01:05:304 -
01:20:577 - You give this part Note change also not bad ( If you want to insert )

[ 7K Hard ]
00:54:395 (54395|4) - move to note (6)
00:54:395 (54395|4) - add a note



umm.. you need to 4K Easy , Normal
Fixed, Thanks for mod __M A S__ :D
[Shi-Ra]
Re-check PM request, mods for all diffs ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Re-check:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 for 4K diff)
4K HD
Inside :3
00:08:849 - missed note here, add one more note to 0 column according to the sound

00:08:940 (8940|0) - delete this note, after placing previous note in this column there's no need to accent beat here

00:12:395 - you can add one more note here according to the hi-hat sound which goes there, if you'll follow this suggestion I recommend you to remove next going note in this column to keep this pattern comfortable to play

00:16:940 (16940|3,16940|0) - I suggest you to move these notes closer to each other to make pattern more different and little harder here, repeat it with chords here 00:17:304 and 00:17:667 here too

00:22:213 - you can place one more note here according to the sound, add it to 3rd column

00:22:940 - add note to 2nd column here too, same reason ^

00:41:304 - add here note to 1st column to accent cymbal sound, placing LN here is not enough for HD

From 00:42:758 to 00:44:213 - I suggest you re-arrange some notes to make it different from previous tact pattern

00:53:577 (53577|3) - I think it'll be better to place this note to 2nd column, it's uncomfortable to quickly catch two notes in same column here

01:09:667 - add here at least one more note to 3rd column according to the hi-hats, it clearly sounds here

01:11:122 (71122|3) - move it to 2nd column, this and next going note are bass drum kicks so follow them correctly

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7K Hard
Inside :3
Mostly really well-patterned diff, good job! There's only some suggestions:

00:09:667 (9667|6) - move this note to 2nd column, you can leave empty 6th column here and placing this note to 2nd column will be better for your pattern here

00:12:395 - add here one more note to 1st column according to the hi-hat, it'll be well-suitable with your pattern here too

From 00:16:758 to 00:18:031 - this part looks too monotonously, I suggest you to re-arrange it / for expample

00:41:122 (41122|3) - move this note to 1st column, it's more suitable with your pattern here rather than note in same column with next going LN

From 00:42:758 to 00:44:213 - I recommend you to re-arrange this part like in 4K diff, it looks too monotonously for HD

01:03:122 (63122|0,63304|0) - move these notes to 1st column, they are bass drum kicks and after them goes snare hit, so don't place them all in same column

01:19:031 - add one more note here and then 01:19:122 (79122|4) - move this note to 3rd column to perform triplet here according to the drums

7K Insane
Inside :3
00:03:667 (3667|2) - move this note to 4th column, don't be afraid of placing it before LN here, it'll be comfortable to play this triplet

00:07:304 (7304|0) - move it to 4th column too, it's more suitable with your patterns here, you can leave 0 column empty here or if you wanna keep balance I suggest you to move 00:07:122 (7122|1,7486|1) one of these notes to 0 column, it'll help you to save balance in your pattern here

00:08:577 (8577|4,8667|3,8758|4) - re-arrange these notes and perform triplet which'll follow drums, place notes to 5th, 4th, 3rd columns accordingly to make it

00:24:758 (24758|1) - move this note to 5th column here and them move this 00:25:122 (25122|3) - to 1st column to make pattern here more comfortable tp play and avoid shield note

00:44:031 (44031|5) - move this note to 4th column, there's no need to place two notes in same column coz sounds there are not identical

00:54:395 - add here one more note to 6th column to accent this pre-chorus part

01:01:304 (61304|3) - you can move this note to 4th column, there are two snare drum hits in a row, so it'll be good to place it in this way

From 01:19:486 to 01:22:031 - I recommend you to re-arrange this part with more different chords, I suggest you to switch chords here every 4 ticks to make this part more exciting

Dunno can I get kudos for this re-check or not coz I've already got 2kd here but these mods are for another song here, that was changed by creator o.o I think no xD
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Re-check PM request, mods for all diffs ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Re-check:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 for 4K diff)
4K HD
Inside :3
00:08:849 - missed note here, add one more note to 0 column according to the sound

00:08:940 (8940|0) - delete this note, after placing previous note in this column there's no need to accent beat here

00:12:395 - you can add one more note here according to the hi-hat sound which goes there, if you'll follow this suggestion I recommend you to remove next going note in this column to keep this pattern comfortable to play

00:16:940 (16940|3,16940|0) - I suggest you to move these notes closer to each other to make pattern more different and little harder here, repeat it with chords here 00:17:304 and 00:17:667 here too

00:22:213 - you can place one more note here according to the sound, add it to 3rd column

00:22:940 - add note to 2nd column here too, same reason ^

00:41:304 - add here note to 1st column to accent cymbal sound, placing LN here is not enough for HD

From 00:42:758 to 00:44:213 - I suggest you re-arrange some notes to make it different from previous tact pattern

00:53:577 (53577|3) - I think it'll be better to place this note to 2nd column, it's uncomfortable to quickly catch two notes in same column here

01:09:667 - add here at least one more note to 3rd column according to the hi-hats, it clearly sounds here

01:11:122 (71122|3) - move it to 2nd column, this and next going note are bass drum kicks so follow them correctly

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7K Hard
Inside :3
Mostly really well-patterned diff, good job! There's only some suggestions:

00:09:667 (9667|6) - move this note to 2nd column, you can leave empty 6th column here and placing this note to 2nd column will be better for your pattern here

00:12:395 - add here one more note to 1st column according to the hi-hat, it'll be well-suitable with your pattern here too

From 00:16:758 to 00:18:031 - this part looks too monotonously, I suggest you to re-arrange it / for expample

00:41:122 (41122|3) - move this note to 1st column, it's more suitable with your pattern here rather than note in same column with next going LN

From 00:42:758 to 00:44:213 - I recommend you to re-arrange this part like in 4K diff, it looks too monotonously for HD

01:03:122 (63122|0,63304|0) - move these notes to 1st column, they are bass drum kicks and after them goes snare hit, so don't place them all in same column

01:19:031 - add one more note here and then 01:19:122 (79122|4) - move this note to 3rd column to perform triplet here according to the drums

7K Insane
Inside :3
00:03:667 (3667|2) - move this note to 4th column, don't be afraid of placing it before LN here, it'll be comfortable to play this triplet

00:07:304 (7304|0) - move it to 4th column too, it's more suitable with your patterns here, you can leave 0 column empty here or if you wanna keep balance I suggest you to move 00:07:122 (7122|1,7486|1) one of these notes to 0 column, it'll help you to save balance in your pattern here

00:08:577 (8577|4,8667|3,8758|4) - re-arrange these notes and perform triplet which'll follow drums, place notes to 5th, 4th, 3rd columns accordingly to make it

00:24:758 (24758|1) - move this note to 5th column here and them move this 00:25:122 (25122|3) - to 1st column to make pattern here more comfortable tp play and avoid shield note

00:44:031 (44031|5) - move this note to 4th column, there's no need to place two notes in same column coz sounds there are not identical

00:54:395 - add here one more note to 6th column to accent this pre-chorus part

01:01:304 (61304|3) - you can move this note to 4th column, there are two snare drum hits in a row, so it'll be good to place it in this way

From 01:19:486 to 01:22:031 - I recommend you to re-arrange this part with more different chords, I suggest you to switch chords here every 4 ticks to make this part more exciting

Dunno can I get kudos for this re-check or not coz I've already got 2kd here but these mods are for another song here, that was changed by creator o.o I think no xD
Fixed, Thanks for mod Shi-Ra :D!,"Dunno can I get kudos for this re-check or not coz I've already got 2kd here but these mods are for another song here, that was changed by creator o.o I think no xD" I think so, is a different map o.o
Bruce
Here is GD by your request :P
http://puu.sh/5H1IK.osu
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

Simple_Star wrote:

Here is GD by your request :P
http://puu.sh/5H1IK.osu
Thanks S.Star! ^^
Bruce
Mod by request :P
Column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
[General]
Open Aimod, check timing points problems
Maybe need a 5K NM to rank your maps
Need Hitsounds if you want to rank this map
Red Line SV Change is unrankable,you need use green line
Diff names disunion:
4K HD--->4K Hard
YoCheck's 5K HD--->YoCheck's 5K Hard

[4K Normal]
00:16:213 - Remove a Note
00:43:849 (43849|0) - Move to 4
00:59:849 (59849|0) - Move to 2
01:16:940 (76940|0) - Move to 3

[4K HD]
00:05:213 (5213|1) - Move to 1
00:05:304 (5304|2) - Move to 2
00:05:395 (5395|0) - Move to 3
00:05:486 (5486|1) - Move to 1
00:17:304 (17304|2) - Move to 1
00:17:486 (17486|0) - Move to 2
00:17:667 (17667|2) - Move to 1
00:17:849 (17849|0) - Move to 2
00:54:395 - Add a Note at 3
01:00:940 - Add a Note at 1

[7K Hard]
HP8 OD8
00:16:031 - Add a Note at 4
00:20:395 - Add a Note at 3
01:20:395 (80395|5) - Move to 1
01:22:577 - Remove a Note

[YoCheck's 5K HD]
HP8 OD8
00:10:577 - Add 1 or 2 Notes
00:29:667 - Add a Note at 5
00:54:395 - Add a Note at 3
00:59:122 - Add a Note at 5
01:01:304 - Add a Note at 3
01:01:486 (61486|2) - Move to 5
01:04:940 - Add a Note at 2
01:05:667 - Add a Note at 5
01:07:486 - Add a Note at 5
01:07:849 - Add a Note at 4
01:10:758 - Add a Note at 2

[7K Insane]
00:09:486 (9486|1) - Move to 1
00:17:304 (17304|1,17304|5) - Move to 1 and 7
00:17:486 (17486|1,17486|5) - Move to 1 and 7
00:17:667 (17667|1,17667|5) - Move to 1 and 7
00:17:849 (17849|1,17849|5) - Move to 1 and 7
01:19:304 - Add a Note at 3

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

Simple_Star wrote:

Mod by request :P
Column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
[General]
Open Aimod, check timing points problems
Maybe need a 5K NM to rank your maps
Need Hitsounds if you want to rank this map
Red Line SV Change is unrankable,you need use green line
Diff names disunion:
4K HD--->4K Hard
YoCheck's 5K HD--->YoCheck's 5K Hard

[4K Normal]
00:16:213 - Remove a Note
00:43:849 (43849|0) - Move to 4
00:59:849 (59849|0) - Move to 2
01:16:940 (76940|0) - Move to 3

[4K HD]
00:05:213 (5213|1) - Move to 1
00:05:304 (5304|2) - Move to 2
00:05:395 (5395|0) - Move to 3
00:05:486 (5486|1) - Move to 1
00:17:304 (17304|2) - Move to 1
00:17:486 (17486|0) - Move to 2
00:17:667 (17667|2) - Move to 1
00:17:849 (17849|0) - Move to 2
00:54:395 - Add a Note at 3
01:00:940 - Add a Note at 1

[7K Hard]
HP8 OD8
00:16:031 - Add a Note at 4
00:20:395 - Add a Note at 3
01:20:395 (80395|5) - Move to 1
01:22:577 - Remove a Note

[7K Insane]
00:09:486 (9486|1) - Move to 1
00:17:304 (17304|1,17304|5) - Move to 1 and 7
00:17:486 (17486|1,17486|5) - Move to 1 and 7
00:17:667 (17667|1,17667|5) - Move to 1 and 7
00:17:849 (17849|1,17849|5) - Move to 1 and 7
01:19:304 - Add a Note at 3

Good Luck~
Fixed~, thanks for mod S.Star ^^, 5K NM in progress :3.
Evening
Timing Check

Offset

Might be off, unsure about this :\

Is 0BPM even allowed?

Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds. These can be very unexpected for the player while also disrupting the main menu pulse and slightly changing the overall timing of the map.
Use x0.3 SV instead

BPM

No Problems

7K Insane
Note Placement

I'm not sure about the slider significance in most cases, they are sometimes mapped to vocals and some are not

Overmapping

00:11:031 (11031|3) -

Note Count

00:08:940 (8940|5) - Use one note here instead, delete this since the magnitude of volume is used before and it has one note
00:09:577 (9577|3,9667|5) - Same here
00:12:213 (12213|2,12213|0,12213|4,12213|6) - 5 notes is overkill, consider reducing to 3 or 2
00:55:849 (55849|1,55849|3,55849|5) - ^
00:57:667 + 1 Note | You are using 3 notes for high-pitched drums
00:58:395 ^
Consider fixing the Note count for the entire ending, I can't seem to find a note count pattern :\

Hit-Sound Check

lol rule
: Consult me or someone else if you need any help in this

- Since this is all drums I recommend asking idyinyou for hitsound check

SV Check

No problems except for the 0bpm issue

Kiai Time Check

No Problems - well placed

General

Ranking Criteria Check

Refer to Aimod

AiMod

Ctrl + Shift + A, a loooong list there

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check
00:41:667 - great pattern here, very fun for the hands :D

YoCheck's 5K Hard
Note Placement

Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.
Change ending to slider

Overmapping

00:05:577 (5577|0) -
00:05:849 (5849|3) -
00:29:758 (29758|0) -
00:53:486 (53486|1) -
01:07:395 (67395|1) -

Note Count

A lot of note count inconsistencies, the quiet section is having too many chords

Kiai Time Check

No Problems
- Why are there extra red lines?

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No problems except for hitsounds

AiMod

List of errors

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

7K Hard: Not much errors, not going to use format
00:18:031 (18031|6) - Remove | You don't need 3 notes here, too much emphasis
00:23:849 + 1 here since you are emphasizing vocals
00:49:304 (49304|3,49304|6,49486|5,49667|2,49667|4) - Fix to same note count
00:52:577 + 1 Missing one note here for emphasis
00:58:213 (58213|4) - Don't know what's this is emphasizing
01:00:758 (60758|1) - ^
01:02:395 +1 note for emphasis
01:03:122 ^
01:08:213^
01:09:486 (69486|3,69849|4) - Remove - inconsistent note count
01:09:667 + 1 note for emphasis
... and more you should recheck this diff

S.Star's 7K Normal

00:01:667 (1667|6,3122|1) - Unnecessary emphasis?
00:03:486 (3486|2) - ^
00:26:758 (26758|5) - ^

00:13:667 (13667|1,14213|4,14758|1,15122|6) - These are piano chords, consider using 2 notes

Recheck all other diff for note count consistency, I think that's the only problem with the mapset with the exception of minor overmap and AiMod, otherwise it's good for hitsounding and finalization
Good luck!
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

lZenxl wrote:

Timing Check

Offset

Might be off, unsure about this :\

Is 0BPM even allowed?

Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds. These can be very unexpected for the player while also disrupting the main menu pulse and slightly changing the overall timing of the map.
Use x0.3 SV instead

BPM

No Problems

7K Insane
Note Placement

I'm not sure about the slider significance in most cases, they are sometimes mapped to vocals and some are not

Overmapping

00:11:031 (11031|3) -

Note Count

00:08:940 (8940|5) - Use one note here instead, delete this since the magnitude of volume is used before and it has one note
00:09:577 (9577|3,9667|5) - Same here
00:12:213 (12213|2,12213|0,12213|4,12213|6) - 5 notes is overkill, consider reducing to 3 or 2
00:55:849 (55849|1,55849|3,55849|5) - ^
00:57:667 + 1 Note | You are using 3 notes for high-pitched drums
00:58:395 ^
Consider fixing the Note count for the entire ending, I can't seem to find a note count pattern :\

Hit-Sound Check

lol rule
: Consult me or someone else if you need any help in this

- Since this is all drums I recommend asking idyinyou for hitsound check

SV Check

No problems except for the 0bpm issue

Kiai Time Check

No Problems - well placed

General

Ranking Criteria Check

Refer to Aimod

AiMod

Ctrl + Shift + A, a loooong list there

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check
00:41:667 - great pattern here, very fun for the hands :D

YoCheck's 5K Hard
Note Placement

Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.
Change ending to slider

Overmapping

00:05:577 (5577|0) -
00:05:849 (5849|3) -
00:29:758 (29758|0) -
00:53:486 (53486|1) -
01:07:395 (67395|1) -

Note Count

A lot of note count inconsistencies, the quiet section is having too many chords

Kiai Time Check

No Problems
- Why are there extra red lines?

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No problems except for hitsounds

AiMod

List of errors

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

7K Hard: Not much errors, not going to use format
00:18:031 (18031|6) - Remove | You don't need 3 notes here, too much emphasis
00:23:849 + 1 here since you are emphasizing vocals
00:49:304 (49304|3,49304|6,49486|5,49667|2,49667|4) - Fix to same note count
00:52:577 + 1 Missing one note here for emphasis
00:58:213 (58213|4) - Don't know what's this is emphasizing
01:00:758 (60758|1) - ^
01:02:395 +1 note for emphasis
01:03:122 ^
01:08:213^
01:09:486 (69486|3,69849|4) - Remove - inconsistent note count
01:09:667 + 1 note for emphasis
... and more you should recheck this diff

Good luck!
Thanks for mod lZenxl :3, fixed~
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