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Chihara Minori - Kyoukai no Kanata (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Umi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 17 novembre 2013 at 07:29:32

Artist: Chihara Minori
Title: Kyoukai no Kanata (TV Size)
Source: Kyoukai no Kanata
Tags: Opening Beyond the Boundary Rezoons Moway Reyshel
BPM: 184
Filesize: 9684kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3,14 stars, 96 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 275 notes)
  3. Moway (5 stars, 336 notes)
  4. Normal (4,21 stars, 121 notes)
  5. ReySHeL's Muzu (4,66 stars, 351 notes)
  6. ReySHeL's Oni (4,78 stars, 438 notes)
  7. Rz's Hard (4,91 stars, 243 notes)
Download: Chihara Minori - Kyoukai no Kanata (TV Size)
Download: Chihara Minori - Kyoukai no Kanata (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kyoukai no Kanata Opening theme

Easy - done ~ By me
Normal - done ~ By me
Hard - done ~ By Rezoons
Insane - done ~ By me
2nd Insane - done ~ By Moway
Muzu by ReySHeL
Oni by ReySHeL
xChippy
Me first =w=/
*Runs back to study*
Topic Starter
Umi
Yeah back to your study mister always first
Momochikun
Nice song ~
koreapenguin
K.Penguin's low quality mod

- my mod all suggestion :D

  • [General]
  1. Check Ai MOD :D - Normal other diff different last two timing points
    SPOILER
    [Normal]

    [TimingPoints]
    83129,413.793103448276,4,2,1,40,1,0
    84113,571.428571428571,4,2,1,30,1,0

    -----------------------------------------------

    [other diff]

    [TimingPoints]
    82716,413.793103448276,4,2,1,40,1,0
    83543,571.428571428571,4,2,1,30,1,0

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:06:730 (1) - move 268, 264
  2. 00:10:298 (6) - move 172, 168
  3. 00:43:876 (2) - add finish slider head
  4. 00:43:876 (2) - add clap slider reverse arrow

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:22:029 (1) - add finish
  2. 00:53:985 (2) - move 140, 360

  • [Rz's Hard]
  1. 00:08:352 (5) - move 240, 188
  2. 00:09:001 (1) - NC
  3. 00:18:095 (5) - add whistle(?) slider head
  4. 00:33:115 (3,4) - i think so this badflow 00:33:768 (4) - this 00:34:420 (5) - this Ctrl+G just suggestion :D
  5. 00:35:072 (1) - NC
  6. 00:38:007 (2) - add clap, sound is better imo
  7. 00:38:659 (5) - add clap slider tail ^
  8. 00:40:615 (2) - add clap ^
  9. 00:41:267 (5) - add clap slider tail ^
  10. 00:52:599 (1,1) - how about this rhythm

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:09:001 (1,2,3,4) - flow is this better just suggestion :D

    nice diff :D

  • [Moway]
  1. nice diff :D

that all xD Good luck :D
Topic Starter
Umi

koreapenguin wrote:

K.Penguin's low quality mod

- my mod all suggestion :D

  • [General]
  1. Check Ai MOD :D - Normal other diff different last two timing points Oops Fixed
    SPOILER
    [Normal]

    [TimingPoints]
    83129,413.793103448276,4,2,1,40,1,0
    84113,571.428571428571,4,2,1,30,1,0

    -----------------------------------------------

    [other diff]

    [TimingPoints]
    82716,413.793103448276,4,2,1,40,1,0
    83543,571.428571428571,4,2,1,30,1,0

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:06:730 (1) - move 268, 264 no because slider's end is stack with a note :x
  2. 00:10:298 (6) - move 172, 168 Fixed
  3. 00:43:876 (2) - add finish slider head Fixed
  4. 00:43:876 (2) - add clap slider reverse arrow Fixed

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:22:029 (1) - add finish Fixed
  2. 00:53:985 (2) - move 140, 360 Fixed

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:09:001 (1,2,3,4) - flow is this better just suggestion :D Ah yeah fixed

    nice diff :D

that all xD Good luck :D
thx for mod :3 !
Satellite
Hai
guest diff skip.

[General]
AudioLeadIn:1000 please.
why low volume? I think all diff +10%~20%


[Easy]
looks good :)

[Normal]
00:08:028 (3) - Disarray DS
01:28:114 - un snapped
00:16:136 - and 00:16:460 (3) - this samplest drum?
00:44:528 (3) - remove note?
01:06:376 - add note
01:08:659 - ^
01:22:716 (1,2) - I thinks "slider follow" is better.


[Insane]
good diff.

00:23:496 (7) - Nc?
00:25:942 (6,1) - Swap NC here,so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
00:30:344 (5,6) - I don't like this rhythm. try this.

00:37:355 (3) - add clap?
00:40:126 (6) - Move. x448 y284 try this.
00:42:735 (6) - Move x296 y248 try this.
01:23:543 (1,2) - humm...I think "slider follow" is better.


good luck ;)
Topic Starter
Umi

Satellite wrote:

Hai
guest diff skip.

[General]
AudioLeadIn:1000 please. fixed
why low volume? I think all diff +10%~20% Prefer the current volume

[Easy]
looks good :)

[Normal]
00:08:028 (3) - Disarray DS fixed
01:28:114 - un snapped fixed
00:16:136 - and 00:16:460 (3) - this samplest drum? fixed
00:44:528 (3) - remove note? following the voice here
01:06:376 - add note ^
01:08:659 - ^ Fixed
01:22:716 (1,2) - I thinks "slider follow" is better. k fixed


[Insane]
good diff.

00:23:496 (7) - Nc?
00:25:942 (6,1) - Swap NC here,so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
00:30:344 (5,6) - I don't like this rhythm. try this.

00:37:355 (3) - add clap?
00:40:126 (6) - Move. x448 y284 try this.
00:42:735 (6) - Move x296 y248 try this.
01:23:543 (1,2) - humm...I think "slider follow" is better.
All fixed


good luck ;)
thx for mod !
rezoons

koreapenguin wrote:

  • [Rz's Hard]
  1. 00:33:115 (3,4) - i think so this badflow 00:33:768 (4) - this 00:34:420 (5) - this Ctrl+G just suggestion :D
    The gap would be 1/2, i'd agrre but here it's a gap of 1/1 so the player have the time to rectify it. (If you want me to show you with an image telle me!)
  2. 00:52:599 (1,1) - how about this rhythm
I think the spinner fits better here.
Fixed the rest and add some more claps. Thanks for the mod ^^

update:
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Kyoukai no Kanata.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 63642
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Kyoukai no Kanata (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:境界の彼方 (TV Size)
Artist:Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:茅原 実里
Creator:-Umi-
Version:Chirac's Hard
Source:Kyoukai no Kanata
Tags:Opening Beyond the Boundary Rezoons Moway
BeatmapID:310159
BeatmapSetID:120366

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Kanata.avi"
0,0,"Kyoukai.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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346,171,50398,2,0,P|334:132|347:92,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,36,50724,5,4,0:0:0:0:
440,104,50887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,188,51050,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,252,51213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,148,51376,5,8,0:0:0:0:
300,80,51539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,80,51702,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,148,51865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,252,52028,5,8,0:0:0:0:
68,188,52191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,104,52354,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,36,52517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52599,12,4,53333,0:0:0:0:
256,68,53496,6,0,L|256:180,1,82.5000025177003
232,240,53822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,220,53985,2,0,P|400:188|476:240,1,165.000005035401,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,280,54474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,324,54637,2,0,P|276:336|212:320,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,300,54963,2,0,P|104:256|112:216,1,82.5000025177003,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,144,55289,2,0,P|113:105|148:84,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,53,55615,2,0,P|272:47|312:60,1,82.5000025177003,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,124,55942,6,0,P|420:192|380:260,1,165.000005035401,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,336,56431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,260,56594,2,0,B|280:240|288:212|320:192|320:192|288:172|280:144|284:120,1,165.000005035401,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,124,57083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,57246,2,0,L|224:192,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,268,57572,2,0,P|160:244|148:200,1,82.5000025177003,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,128,57898,2,0,P|136:112|180:123,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,116,58224,2,0,B|276:164|236:192|236:192|284:216|280:284,2,165.000005035401,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,40,59039,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,120,59202,2,0,P|424:144|456:128,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,242,59528,2,0,P|393:241|360:264,1,82.5000025177003,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,344,59855,2,0,B|272:364|208:344|208:344|176:336|132:360,2,165.000005035401,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,332,60670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
434,242,60833,2,0,P|410:190|378:174,1,82.5000025177003,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,260,61159,2,0,B|304:236|300:192|300:192|264:156|200:184,1,165.000005035401,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,196,61648,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,260,61811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,174,61974,2,0,L|256:80,1,82.5000025177003,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,124,62300,2,0,P|412:192|372:260,1,165.000005035401,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,268,62789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,192,62952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,116,63115,2,0,L|240:80,3,41.2500012588501
212,108,63442,2,0,L|168:72,3,41.2500012588501
140,100,63768,5,4,0:0:0:0:
52,112,63931,2,0,P|16:144|8:196,1,82.5000025177003
96,188,64257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,220,64420,2,0,P|244:272|236:356,1,165.000005035401,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,308,64909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,220,65072,2,0,P|168:168|128:144,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,76,65398,2,0,P|248:64|272:24,1,82.5000025177003,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,88,65724,2,0,P|356:140|396:164,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,232,66050,2,0,P|276:244|252:284,1,82.5000025177003,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,348,66377,6,0,P|148:380|112:312,1,165.000005035401,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,66865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,148,67028,2,0,P|96:112|48:96,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,184,67355,1,10,0:0:0:0:
124,148,67518,2,0,L|228:108,1,82.5000025177003,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,100,67844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,136,68007,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,180,68170,2,0,P|384:224|360:216,1,82.5000025177003
372,136,68496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,48,68659,2,8,P|426:59|450:92,1,82.5000025177003
372,136,68985,6,0,P|288:140|224:84,1,165.000005035401,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,16,69474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,340,69963,6,0,P|322:265|403:237,1,165.000005035401,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,233,70452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,156,70942,6,0,P|209:226|192:310,1,165.000005035401
144,376,71431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,364,71594,5,4,0:0:0:0:
8,288,71757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,196,71920,2,0,P|56:156|96:164,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,244,72246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,292,72409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,72572,2,0,P|296:244|288:204,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,212,72898,5,0,0:0:0:0:
156,136,73061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,44,73224,2,0,P|204:4|244:12,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,92,73550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,140,73713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,136,73876,2,0,P|444:92|436:52,1,82.5000025177003,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,60,74202,6,0,P|312:120|344:204,1,165.000005035401,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,272,74692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,328,74855,2,0,P|249:355|184:311,1,165.000005035401
278,193,75344,2,0,L|258:281,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,141,75670,2,0,L|230:53,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,193,75996,2,0,L|366:213,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,141,76322,2,0,L|122:121,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,64,76648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,152,76811,6,0,P|68:196|116:212,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,77137,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,264,77300,2,0,P|320:292|336:324,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,356,77626,2,0,B|204:352|184:316|184:316|164:352|116:356,2,165.000005035401,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,264,78442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,172,78605,2,0,P|216:128|176:128,1,82.5000025177003
328,128,78931,2,0,P|364:172|404:172,1,82.5000025177003,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,88,79257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,36,79420,6,0,P|256:16|204:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,207,80079,2,0,P|103:280|157:309,1,120
355,332,80738,2,0,P|408:280|406:218,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,128,81398,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,128,81727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,237,82057,2,0,P|111:295|157:332,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,82716,6,0,L|256:176,2,75,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,340,84114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84685,12,0,88114,0:0:0:0:
rezoons
Double post FTW!

[Easy]
Rythm
  1. 00:19:406 (1,2,3) - Le rythme ici est vraiment étrange. Les 3/2 gaps sont peu instinctifs a jouer et ne correspondent pas tant que ça à la musique. Regarde le premier slider, si tu suivais vraiment la voix en ralentissant la musique tu remarquerais que le slider devrait finir 1/4 beat plus tard (oui la voix est légèrement désynchro de l'instru) du coup je te proposerais plutôt d'utiliser l'un de ses deux rythmes ici:

  2. 01:03:115 (3) - change la note en un slider de 1 beat de long?
  3. 01:11:594 (2) - Musicalement c'est comme 00:48:115 (1,2) (pour les percu. en tout cas) donc utilise le même ryhtme?
Placement/Aesthetic
  1. 01:03:768 (1,2) - Je sais qu'on est dans une Easy mais le flow ici est meh.....
NC
  1. 00:09:001 (4) - Dans cette partie calme au début tu passes de combos de longueur vers les 3 à 6 ici. Je conseillerais un NC ici. (En plus tu l'as mis en normal)
  2. 01:24:685 (3) - NC? (Et pareil dans la diff Normal)
Hitsound
  1. 00:18:095 (3) - (sur la tête) Tu as mis un finish ici dans tes autres diffs. Bon, moi j'ai mis qu'un whistle mais met un hitsound!
[Normal]
Rythm
  1. 00:19:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - Le rythme ici me parait assez étrange à cause de certains sons comme celui à 00:20:390 qui sont maintenant dans la musique mais qui ne forme pas de slider dans la map comparé à d'autres sons comme 00:19:898 qui eux ne sont (presque) pas maintenu dans la musique mais forme un slider de longueur 3/2 dans la map. Je suggererait ce rythme plutot:

    Je pense d'ailleurs qu'on peut trouver un autre rythme meilleur ici. Mais j'ai pas trouvé XD
  2. 01:11:431 (2) - Euh... Ce slider devrait commencer 1/2 beat plus tard car c'est là que commence la voix et le son puissant de la musique. Ton insane souffre du même problème a cet endroit aussi.
Placement/Aesthetic
  1. 01:24:685 (3) - C'est pas compliqué de faire une vraie étoile qui ne ressemble pas au fils caché de frankenstein!
    144,220,84685,2,0,B|197:249|197:249|256:331|256:331|313:250|313:250|395:192|395:192|313:133|313:133|256:51|256:51|197:133|197:133|144:164,1,720,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Insane]
Rythm
  1. 01:01:974 (3) - change cette note en slider 1/2 plutôt. Le chanteur maintient la note!
Placement/Aesthetic
  1. 00:02:514 (5) - CTRL+G? Ça améliore le flow avec 00:01:865 (4) et augmente le jump avec 00:03:163 (1) ^^
  2. 00:03:163 (1,2,3,4,5) - Il répète deux fois la même chose donc tu aurais pu faire un pattern qui se répète!
  3. 00:10:947 (4) - C'est une insane! Osef du DS! Met le à x=408 y=256 pour l'overlap!
  4. 00:18:095 (4,5) - Ici je proposerait de CTRL+G'd le 4 puis de bouger le 5 à x=192 y=316 pour conserver le pattern et améliorer le flow assez chelou de ce passage. (Reteste cette partie si tu ne me crois pas)
  5. 00:37:681 (1) - Franchement, le coup du "je ralenti lors des notes tellement puissante que je met des finishs de partout" ça me dépasse. Même Moway il accélère ici, et vu le peu de considération que j'ai pour lui c'est te dire à quel point j'insiste!
  6. 00:47:463 (1) - La symétrie est bof.....
  7. 01:03:115 (7,8,9,10) - Généralement pour ce genre de pattern c'est comme ça:
    Avec les mêmes angles, c'est plus joli!
Et voilà!
Topic Starter
Umi

rezoons wrote:

Double post FTW!

[Easy]
Rythm
  1. 00:19:406 (1,2,3) - Le rythme ici est vraiment étrange. Les 3/2 gaps sont peu instinctifs a jouer et ne correspondent pas tant que ça à la musique. Regarde le premier slider, si tu suivais vraiment la voix en ralentissant la musique tu remarquerais que le slider devrait finir 1/4 beat plus tard (oui la voix est légèrement désynchro de l'instru) du coup je te proposerais plutôt d'utiliser l'un de ses deux rythmes ici: Bon à la base je suivais la voix mais j'ai changé pour rendre plsu facile

  2. 01:03:115 (3) - change la note en un slider de 1 beat de long? nop je prefere comme c'est
  3. 01:11:594 (2) - Musicalement c'est comme 00:48:115 (1,2) (pour les percu. en tout cas) donc utilise le même ryhtme? pas compris ici
Placement/Aesthetic
  1. 01:03:768 (1,2) - Je sais qu'on est dans une Easy mais le flow ici est meh..... Fixed
NC
  1. 00:09:001 (4) - Dans cette partie calme au début tu passes de combos de longueur vers les 3 à 6 ici. Je conseillerais un NC ici. (En plus tu l'as mis en normal) Fixed
  2. 01:24:685 (3) - NC? (Et pareil dans la diff Normal) Fixed
Hitsound
  1. 00:18:095 (3) - (sur la tête) Tu as mis un finish ici dans tes autres diffs. Bon, moi j'ai mis qu'un whistle mais met un hitsound! Fixed
[Normal]
Rythm
  1. 00:19:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - Le rythme ici me parait assez étrange à cause de certains sons comme celui à 00:20:390 qui sont maintenant dans la musique mais qui ne forme pas de slider dans la map comparé à d'autres sons comme 00:19:898 qui eux ne sont (presque) pas maintenu dans la musique mais forme un slider de longueur 3/2 dans la map. Je suggererait ce rythme plutot: je suis la voix ici y'a rien de bizarre >.<

    Je pense d'ailleurs qu'on peut trouver un autre rythme meilleur ici. Mais j'ai pas trouvé XD
  2. 01:11:431 (2) - Euh... Ce slider devrait commencer 1/2 beat plus tard car c'est là que commence la voix et le son puissant de la musique. Ton insane souffre du même problème a cet endroit aussi. La voix commence avant sorry :/
Placement/Aesthetic
  1. 01:24:685 (3) - C'est pas compliqué de faire une vraie étoile qui ne ressemble pas au fils caché de frankenstein! lol fixed
    144,220,84685,2,0,B|197:249|197:249|256:331|256:331|313:250|313:250|395:192|395:192|313:133|313:133|256:51|256:51|197:133|197:133|144:164,1,720,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Insane]
Rythm
  1. 01:01:974 (3) - change cette note en slider 1/2 plutôt. Le chanteur maintient la note! Nop je trouve ça plus fun a play
Placement/Aesthetic
  1. 00:02:514 (5) - CTRL+G? Ça améliore le flow avec 00:01:865 (4) et augmente le jump avec 00:03:163 (1) ^^ Fixed
  2. 00:03:163 (1,2,3,4,5) - Il répète deux fois la même chose donc tu aurais pu faire un pattern qui se répète! j'aime pas répété x)
  3. 00:10:947 (4) - C'est une insane! Osef du DS! Met le à x=408 y=256 pour l'overlap! Fixed xD
  4. 00:18:095 (4,5) - Ici je proposerait de CTRL+G'd le 4 puis de bouger le 5 à x=192 y=316 pour conserver le pattern et améliorer le flow assez chelou de ce passage. (Reteste cette partie si tu ne me crois pas) je préfère le mien
  5. 00:37:681 (1) - Franchement, le coup du "je ralenti lors des notes tellement puissante que je met des finishs de partout" ça me dépasse. Même Moway il accélère ici, et vu le peu de considération que j'ai pour lui c'est te dire à quel point j'insiste! chacun sa manière de ressentir la musique x)
  6. 00:47:463 (1) - La symétrie est bof..... Fixed
  7. 01:03:115 (7,8,9,10) - Généralement pour ce genre de pattern c'est comme ça: Fixed
    Avec les mêmes angles, c'est plus joli!
Et voilà!
Merci pour le mod rez, ah et CS 4 ta hard !!!!!
captin1
Hi~ Timing check requested

Gonna give you this, since you have so many green points already
SPOILER
Offset: -80ms	BPM: 185.00
Offset: 14,190ms BPM: 184.00
Offset: 16,798ms BPM: 183.00
Offset: 19,420ms BPM: 184.00
Offset: 79,420ms BPM: 182.00
Offset: 82,716ms BPM: 136.00
Offset: 83,598ms BPM: 110.00

I think this sounds about right

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Umi
Well not sure about your sorry :/ so no change feel kinda strange at the end thx anyways o/
sheela
[Easy]
00:16:784 (1,2) - Peut-être le faire un parfait blanket?
00:20:390 (2) - Déplace le slider d'une case à la gauche.
00:27:246 (1) - Tourne-le (Ctrl+Shift+R) de -2 degrés.
00:59:855 (3) - Déplace-le d'une case à la gauche (x:34 y:72)
01:06:376 - Peut-être une note ici?

[Normal]
00:12:568 (3) - Déplace-le à x:232 y:224
00:55:289 (4) - Déplace le dernier petit carré, sur la fin du slider, à x:276 y:144.
01:08:007 (3) - Enlève cette note. Je ne crois pas que 01:06:702 (1,2,3,4,5) est facile pour un normal.

[Hard]
00:07:703 (4) - Tourne-le (Ctrl+Shift+R) de -2 degrés. Si oui, met 00:09:001 (6) en-dessous de la fin du slider.
00:50:724 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Les anti-jumps, meh. Met-les plus à coté.
00:52:599 (1) - La durée du spinner est vite. Change la durée ou fait un autre chose.

[Moway]
01:05:724 (5) - Move it somewhere to x:340 y:352.

[Insane]
01:18:931 (5) - Déplace-le quelque part à x:184 y:256.
01:23:543 (1) - Bouge-le peut-être à x:400 y:304.

Bonne Chance et voici deux kudosu.
Topic Starter
Umi

sheela901 wrote:

[Easy]
00:16:784 (1,2) - Peut-être le faire un parfait blanket? j'ai fait ça intentionnellement ici
00:20:390 (2) - Déplace le slider d'une case à la gauche. besoin de garder le meme spacing avec (3) pour qu'il reste stack
00:27:246 (1) - Tourne-le (Ctrl+Shift+R) de -2 degrés. ok
00:59:855 (3) - Déplace-le d'une case à la gauche (x:34 y:72) deja à c'est endroit '-'
01:06:376 - Peut-être une note ici? je suis la voix

[Normal]
00:12:568 (3) - Déplace-le à x:232 y:224 fais autrement ^^
00:55:289 (4) - Déplace le dernier petit carré, sur la fin du slider, à x:276 y:144.pourquoi la blanket est parfaite la
01:08:007 (3) - Enlève cette note. Je ne crois pas que 01:06:702 (1,2,3,4,5) est facile pour un normal. y'a des normal bcp plus dur ça passe tkt :3

[Insane]
01:18:931 (5) - Déplace-le quelque part à x:184 y:256. ok
01:23:543 (1) - Bouge-le peut-être à x:400 y:304. ok

Bonne Chance et voici deux kudosu.
thx pour le mod et les 2 star !
rezoons

sheela901 wrote:

[Hard]
00:07:703 (4) - Tourne-le (Ctrl+Shift+R) de -2 degrés. Si oui, met 00:09:001 (6) en-dessous de la fin du slider.
The pattern is all slider are 120° rotation of the slider before so sorry. But i can't rotate them without breaking the pattern.
00:50:724 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Les anti-jumps, meh. Met-les plus à coté.
It's not Anti-jump, it's jump. And why, meh....? I did them on purpose so it's because there are a reason. It's to show the intensity of the song which increase when the singer say another syllable. So, unless i got a good justification i won't touch them.
00:52:599 (1) - La durée du spinner est vite. Change la durée ou fait un autre chose.
Autoplay get's 2000 so it's ok.
Sorry, i didn't change anything. Thanks anyway ^^
Squichu
Hellow. from queue ~ c:
all just suggetsions, hope it's helpful. >o<
General
  1. I think you're lookin for another background(?), there definitely are a few nice pictures on deviantart, you might wanna look there. c:
    just don't forget to ask the artist if you can use their picture, if you find something on there.. c:
    here two I like: one and two.
  2. it seems like I write that in every post, but i think the combo colours could be more.. harmonic. just a bit, cause purple/orange, red/green are really hard contrasts and not very pleasing to look at. (I know it's a bit easier to see cause they differ from the background, but I still think there are other colours that have the same effect.)
Easy
  1. 00:22:192 (1) - spinner's end could be a bit quieter
  2. 00:45:507 (1,2) - those sliders look a bit 'forced', maybe that's cause the edges are on the blue ticks? I'm not sure but a different shape should look better.
  3. 00:48:115 (1,2) - actually, I really do like this part, cause it overlaps and looks good, but I was just told today that it's a no-go in Easy difficulties. :C
    since I'm not going for rank with my maps I won't change it, but you might want to check this with a BAT or something. >o<
And that's all. :c
Normal
  1. 00:22:029 (1) - same as in Easy
Looks like there is nothing I can help you with. D:
Rz's Hard
  1. not much to say, maybe you could try staying below 10 with combos?
    personal taste, I think they are ugly. >-<
  2. 00:15:649 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this is kinda 'too much' imo, it'd be fine if you delete 7 and 10
  3. 00:53:354 - the sped up part does feel a bit weird playing it.. x:
Anddd I totally didn't find anything wrong with Insane and Moway. :\

Sorry, it's not much, good luck with this! >o<
Topic Starter
Umi

Squirrel wrote:

Hellow. from queue ~ c:
all just suggetsions, hope it's helpful. >o<
General
  1. I think you're lookin for another background(?), there definitely are a few nice pictures on deviantart, you might wanna look there. c:
    just don't forget to ask the artist if you can use their picture, if you find something on there.. c:
    here two I like: one and two.
    yours are not bad but they're too small to be used as BG :/
  2. it seems like I write that in every post, but i think the combo colours could be more.. harmonic. just a bit, cause purple/orange, red/green are really hard contrasts and not very pleasing to look at. (I know it's a bit easier to see cause they differ from the background, but I still think there are other colours that have the same effect.) I personnally like my combo color '-'
Easy
  1. 00:22:192 (1) - spinner's end could be a bit quieter 30% instead of 40
  2. 00:45:507 (1,2) - those sliders look a bit 'forced', maybe that's cause the edges are on the blue ticks? I'm not sure but a different shape should look better. Fixed the shape
  3. 00:48:115 (1,2) - actually, I really do like this part, cause it overlaps and looks good, but I was just told today that it's a no-go in Easy difficulties. :C i think it's easy catch.
    since I'm not going for rank with my maps I won't change it, but you might want to check this with a BAT or something. >o<
And that's all. :c
Normal
  1. 00:22:029 (1) - same as in Easy same as easy
Looks like there is nothing I can help you with. D:

Anddd I totally didn't find anything wrong with Insane and Moway. :\

Sorry, it's not much, good luck with this! >o<
thx for mod !
rezoons

Squirrel wrote:

  1. not much to say, maybe you could try staying below 10 with combos?
    personal taste, I think they are ugly. >-<
    Combo length depends of the song. Sometimes, i don't have choice! And why did you ever find combos over 10 ugly?
  2. 00:15:649 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this is kinda 'too much' imo, it'd be fine if you delete 7 and 10
    I follow the song and the triplet are REALLY audible. As you could have seen i tried putting the less 1/4 possible but following the song keeps being my top priority.
  3. 00:53:354 - the sped up part does feel a bit weird playing it.. x:
    It's the kiai! It's the intense moment of the song! That's why i sped up this part. So..... Why does it feel weird for you? It doesn't feel weird for me so if you don't explain a little bit more i can't really do anything about it!
Thanks for mod but nothing fixed.

(-umi- dis-moi si sans m'en rendre compte je me comporte en connard quand je répond a des mods car je sais que j'ai du mal à juger si ma réponse est gentille ou méchante XD)
Flower
m4m

[Insane]
00:09:001 (1) - move to 404,79 to make better blanket.
00:28:224 - clap imo.
01:04:909 (4) - move further to x:34 y:206 to fit the flow of 01:05:072 (5) -
01:16:322 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I prefer the flow like this. It's up to you.

[Moway]
00:11:919 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - you can try this:
00:23:007 (1) - the flow should be better if it points a little up.
00:26:757 (3) - move to 286,296? form a regular triangle
00:29:039 (2,3,4) - maybe reduce spacing. flows strange.
00:51:865 (6) - a bit forced. move closer?
01:02:952 (3) - the jump is nonsense, cuz it's neither downbeat nor strong beat. I suggest reducing spacing.
01:18:442 (4,5,6,7,8) - make better shape

[Rz's Hard]
AR+1? Feel kinda hard to read
00:52:599 (1) - this spinner is too short for Hard. please try to map this part with other patterns.
01:14:202 - 01:16:811 - claps are missing in this interval.

[Normal]
00:54:637 (3,4) - blanket better
Nothing to say.

[Easy]
Nice one.

Good luck~!
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