- R u m i a - wrote:

[8k poet richard] I am not poet TAT
1st time mod 8k ww pls be gentle >///< \:D/
00:00:326 (326|0) - make as hold?x special as a intro
00:05:227 (5227|4) - move to 7? since its the bell thing like 00:05:375 (5375|7,5375|3,5524|6,5524|2) - sure
00:07:306 (7306|6,7306|4) - move rightx
00:11:019 - add a note or 2 not planning on adding new layer
00:11:316 - ^^
00:20:672 (20672|1,20821|1) - move rightx
00:20:969 (20969|1,21118|1) - move at 4x
00:23:123 - add a note
00:23:717 - ^special key to represent all 1/4 so didn't add
00:24:682 - adding stream here would be funsure
00:31:811 (31811|2) - move to 1?x
01:11:910 - add a notesame as previous

1. 00:17:776 - add a k here? there is a sound
2. 00:24:385 (115) - remove finisher, the intensity of the sound is the same as 00:23:791 (111,112) - and you didn't put a finisher here
3. 00:29:583 (140) - k?
4. 00:30:623 (144) - move to 00:30:771 - and change to d
5. 00:30:920 (145) - change to k if you applied the suggestion above
6. 00:33:296 (156) - K?
7. 00:34:484 - add a k here?
8. 00:34:781 (164) - K?
9. 00:35:078 (165) - move to 00:34:929 - ?
10. 00:35:598 - add a k here?
11. 00:39:088 (186) - k?

1. OD and HP +1
   
2. 00:03:296 (16,17,18,19,20) - change to ddkkk?
3. 00:04:038 (23,24,25) - ddk?
4. 00:06:712 (41,42,43) - ^
5. 00:07:454 (46,47) - delete?
6. 00:07:667 - add a note here if you deleted 00:07:454 (46,47) -
7. 00:09:088 (58,59,60) - ddk?
8. 00:14:583 (97,98) - delete?
9. 00:14:806 - add a d here if you deleted 00:14:583 (97,98) -
10. 00:34:781 (229) - K?

ts8zs wrote:

From DB's M4M request
[Oni]
00:08:197 (52,53) - kd
00:15:326 (104) - k
00:22:157 (152,153) - dk
00:32:553 (213) - move later 1/2
00:46:662 (312,313,314,315) - d d kk
00:56:613 (373,374,375,376,377) - kddkk
01:08:642 (453) - d
01:22:900 (561) - k
[Muzu]
00:11:316 (46,47,48,49) - dkdd
00:13:840 (60) - k
00:50:078 (237) - k
01:14:286 (345,346,347,348) - dkdd

1. 00:02:999 (9) - finisher. same as Oni.
2. 00:30:623 (145) - => 00:30:771 - move to here for a main-melody. you didnt follow a snaredrum here 00:30:029 -
3. 00:39:979 (192) - => 00:39:682 - move to here. same reason as above.
4. 00:46:365 (222,223) - no finisher? relatively weak sound than 00:43:989 (211,212) - and 00:48:741 (231,232) -
5. 01:00:623 (284) - 01:01:217 (286) - finisher. i said reason yesterday.

1. OD+1? and HP+1. because this is a short song. low HP Drain doesnt work.
   
   
2. 00:07:306 ~ 00:07:751 - how about this?
   
   00:14:434 (96,97,98,99,100) - ^
   01:07:900 (449,450,451,452,453) - ^
3. 00:27:652 - add any notes? still stronk a main-melody. empty is a bit weird on Oni.
   00:30:771 - ^
   00:32:702 - ^
4. 00:46:365 (314,315) - no finisher? same reason as Muzu.

TKSalt wrote:

a few things.

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:999 (9) - finisher. same as Oni.
2. 00:30:623 (145) - => 00:30:771 - move to here for a main-melody. you didnt follow a snaredrum here 00:30:029 -
3. 00:39:979 (192) - => 00:39:682 - move to here. same reason as above.
4. 00:46:365 (222,223) - no finisher? relatively weak sound than 00:43:989 (211,212) - and 00:48:741 (231,232) -
5. 01:00:623 (284) - 01:01:217 (286) - finisher. i said reason yesterday.

[ Oni]

1. OD+1? and HP+1. because this is a short song. low HP Drain doesnt work.
   
   
2. 00:07:306 ~ 00:07:751 - how about this?
   
   00:14:434 (96,97,98,99,100) - ^
   01:07:900 (449,450,451,452,453) - ^
3. 00:27:652 - add any notes? still stronk a main-melody. empty is a bit weird on Oni.
   00:30:771 - ^
   00:32:702 - ^
4. 00:46:365 (314,315) - no finisher? same reason as Muzu.

TKSalt wrote:

Taiko'd

if you want to change some patterns again, please call me.

Spy wrote:

Kagami太詩了

TKSalt wrote:

grats!