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Chan Kwong Wing - Wo Zai Na Yi Jiao Luo Huan Guo Shang Feng

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liangv587
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Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

Garven wrote:

(**ﾉ>Å<)ﾉ～☆彡
Thank you for your support :o
Sure, whats up?
13:25 Garven: Sure, whats up?
13:28 liangv587: there is a beatmap because of the hitsound that one of BAT afraid to bubble
13:29 liangv587: There have been no previous
13:31 Garven: one sec
13:31 Garven: Can you link me the map?
13:32 liangv587: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/120204
13:33 Garven: The waveforms look fine
13:33 Garven: http://puu.sh/dgmMd/6a4a0c8916.png
13:34 Garven: Nice work on keysounding this btw
13:34 liangv587: yea, i edited the hitsound by AU
13:34 liangv587: hitsounds?
13:34 Garven: Yeah
13:35 Garven: So tell that BAT they shouldn't have anything to worry about with regards to the hitsounds
13:35 liangv587: thank you
13:35 liangv587: so how about a testplay.-.
13:36 *Garven is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/546374 Chan Kwong Wing - Wo Zai Na Yi Jiao Luo Huan Guo Feng Shang [Hard]] -NoFail
13:36 liangv587: why can't spectate
13:37 Garven: Have you made changes that haven't been uploaded?
13:37 liangv587: now can
13:39 Garven: Seems... a little difficult for a Hard
13:39 Garven: Some of the jumps felt really large
13:39 liangv587: yea, because there's no insane
13:43 Garven: Decent set
13:44 liangv587: thank you
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore

General

  1. I edit bg size for you, Try? → http://puu.sh/dgBsb/ad79b3ccf2.jpg
  2. If you dosen't wanna add SB, Uncheck Widescreen support.
  3. You have some hitsound isn't enough 100ms...
    hitsound
    soft-hitclap67.wav
    soft-hitclap70.wav
    soft-hitclap72.wav
    soft-slidertick67.wav
    soft-slidertick70.wav
    soft-slidertick72.wav

Hard

  1. OD7? highly OD will make score more diverse.
  2. 00:22:213 (2) - Put it on right side will have better flow imo.( like x296 y228 )
  3. 00:50:136 (4) - Honestly, Suddenly use fold slider is not good...
  4. 00:53:829 (5) - ^
  5. 01:08:367 (2) - Change to 1/2slider will have better rhythm.
  6. 01:19:675 (5,6) - Same thing.
  7. 01:15:983 (4) - Add finish. Same as 01:01:213 (3) - .
  8. 01:23:136 (2) - Add finish. Same as 01:08:367 (2) -
  9. 01:39:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad compose... But Normal diff's composebetter than this...

Normal

  1. 01:21:060 (4) - Plz don't stack on slider tail at normal diff.

Easy

  1. AR2.6

Others

音效填充点空白时间应该就行。
TicClick
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4,416 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
Please reduce long jumps in Hard, because they make it a lot harder than Normal.

Here's what I figured from autocheck:
The following hitsounds are unused:
  1. soft-slidertick66.wav
  2. soft-slidertick40.wav
  3. soft-slidertick31.wav
  4. soft-slidertick74.wav
  5. soft-sliderslide75.wav
  6. soft-hitclap72.wav
  7. soft-slidertick61.wav
  8. soft-sliderslide66.wav
  9. soft-slidertick56.wav
  10. soft-slidertick51.wav
  11. soft-hitclap66.wav
  12. soft-slidertick24.wav
  13. soft-slidertick72.wav
  14. soft-slidertick41.wav
  15. soft-slidertick36.wav
  16. soft-sliderslide72.wav
  17. soft-slidertick75.wav
The rest of your hitsounds is okay, they're long enough.

EDIT: please make these objects in Easy more readable, because they start on red ticks:
  1. 01:05:598 (3) -
  2. 01:08:829 (3) -
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

lkx_Shore wrote:

General

  1. I edit bg size for you, Try? → http://puu.sh/dgBsb/ad79b3ccf2.jpgthank you
  2. If you dosen't wanna add SB, Uncheck Widescreen support.ok
  3. You have some hitsound isn't enough 100ms...fixed
    hitsound
    soft-hitclap67.wav
    soft-hitclap70.wav
    soft-hitclap72.wav
    soft-slidertick67.wav
    soft-slidertick70.wav
    soft-slidertick72.wav

Hard

  1. OD7? highly OD will make score more diverse.fixed
  2. 00:22:213 (2) - Put it on right side will have better flow imo.( like x296 y228 )fixed
  3. 00:50:136 (4) - Honestly, Suddenly use fold slider is not good...fixed
  4. 00:53:829 (5) - ^fixed
  5. 01:08:367 (2) - Change to 1/2slider will have better rhythm.fixed
  6. 01:19:675 (5,6) - Same thing.fixed
  7. 01:15:983 (4) - Add finish. Same as 01:01:213 (3) - fixed
  8. 01:23:136 (2) - Add finish. Same as 01:08:367 (2) - fixed
  9. 01:39:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad compose... But Normal diff's composebetter than this...fixed. change to pentagon

Normal

  1. 01:21:060 (4) - Plz don't stack on slider tail at normal diff.fixed

Easy

  1. AR2.6fixed

Others

音效填充点空白时间应该就行。好
thank you

TicClick wrote:

Please reduce long jumps in Hard, because they make it a lot harder than Normal.
it will distroy the structure in degree. i change cs to 3.5. that would be easier
Here's what I figured from autocheck:
The following hitsounds are unused:
  1. soft-slidertick66.wav
  2. soft-slidertick40.wav
  3. soft-slidertick31.wav
  4. soft-slidertick74.wav
  5. soft-sliderslide75.wav
  6. soft-hitclap72.wav
  7. soft-slidertick61.wav
  8. soft-sliderslide66.wav
  9. soft-slidertick56.wav
  10. soft-slidertick51.wav
  11. soft-hitclap66.wav
  12. soft-slidertick24.wav
  13. soft-slidertick72.wav
  14. soft-slidertick41.wav
  15. soft-slidertick36.wav
  16. soft-sliderslide72.wav
  17. soft-slidertick75.wav
Deleted
The rest of your hitsounds is okay, they're long enough.

EDIT: please make these objects in Easy more readable, because they start on red ticks:
  1. 01:05:598 (3) - change the positin
  2. 01:08:829 (3) - similar to 01:23:598 (3,4) -
thank you
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,416 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
please also remove all timing points except the first one, they are unnecessary
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

TicClick wrote:

please also remove all timing points except the first one, they are unnecessary
01:29:944 - I just want to creat a slidertick here.
01:29:829 (1) - Normal and Easy will bring a 1/4 fold-slider if the timing points removed. It doesn't matter?
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,416 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
you can have that slider on normal, but you'll need to make something else (preferably just a note) on easy
kanpakyin
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Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
陈光荣|我在那一角落患过伤(Feng)风(Shang) =.=?
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
恩...我去查了查的确是和kpy说的一样，顺便Tag可以加上现有的tag的拼音，还可以加上 piano 等等你图里有关的东西。
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

kanpakyin wrote:

陈光荣|我在那一角落患过伤(Feng)风(Shang) =.=?
阿西吧，汉字的顺序不影响阅读，原来我一直错了这么多年，自插双目
汉字标题是复制粘贴的

TicClick wrote:

you can have that slider on normal, but you'll need to make something else (preferably just a note) on easy
It's solved now
//Storyboard Sound Samples
Sample,89944,0,"soft-slidertick62.wav",50
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Did a brief irc mod, and I think it's good to go. Bubbled.

SPOILER
2014-12-07 00:29 Flower: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/546374 Chan Kwong Wing - Wo Zai Na Yi Jiao Luo Huan Guo Shang Feng [Hard]]
2014-12-07 00:30 liangv587: 好意思手欠，点错了
2014-12-07 00:30 Flower: .
2014-12-07 00:30 liangv587: 没错过什么吧
2014-12-07 00:30 Flower: 没
2014-12-07 00:31 Flower: 首先一个kiai的finish太重了我感觉
2014-12-07 00:31 liangv587: 恩，怎么办好呢
2014-12-07 00:32 Flower: 可以把template skin里那个finish用音量编辑器调小（
2014-12-07 00:32 Flower: 然后复制复制复制
2014-12-07 00:33 liangv587: 这样就又要多加几组了没问吧？
2014-12-07 00:34 Flower: 应该不用多加几组吧，主要是要多加几个finish了
2014-12-07 00:34 liangv587: 我先统计下
2014-12-07 00:38 liangv587: 52 53 60 61 62 64 65 67这八组
2014-12-07 00:38 liangv587: 就是找个柔和点的finish
2014-12-07 00:38 Flower: .
2014-12-07 00:39 Flower: 或者试试这个？http://puu.sh/84u1I.wav
2014-12-07 00:39 liangv587: 替换掉对吧
2014-12-07 00:39 Flower: 队
2014-12-07 00:39 Flower: 我没测试，可能也比较吵
2014-12-07 00:39 liangv587: 跟默认比较下就知道了被
2014-12-07 00:40 liangv587: 我觉得这个有回弹的不好吧
2014-12-07 00:40 liangv587: 应该干脆点的
2014-12-07 00:41 liangv587: 而且也推大了还要x8
2014-12-07 00:43 Flower: 那就还是默认的减小音量吧，我觉得差不多
2014-12-07 00:43 liangv587: 恩
2014-12-07 00:45 liangv587: http://puu.sh/djhPV.wav这个呢
2014-12-07 00:47 Flower: 四暗刻
2014-12-07 00:47 liangv587: 还是默认吧
2014-12-07 00:48 Flower: woyejued
2014-12-07 00:48 Flower: 其实也不用减少太多，75%原来音量应该差不多
2014-12-07 00:49 liangv587: 换成dB是-好多呢
2014-12-07 00:49 Flower: 我看一下
2014-12-07 00:50 Flower: -4db吧？试试看
2014-12-07 00:51 liangv587: 恩
2014-12-07 00:51 Flower: 奇怪，好像播放器的音量是按log2来算的，实际上0.75倍的音量应该是-1.2db，不过这关我屁事
2014-12-07 00:52 liangv587: 233
2014-12-07 00:52 liangv587: 反正我也不太懂
2014-12-07 00:52 Flower: .
2014-12-07 00:53 Flower: -4太小的话就-2，-2太大就-3，以此类推（
2014-12-07 00:53 liangv587: 我第一感觉是-3我会乱说？
2014-12-07 00:53 Flower: 不过我的屙屎貌似和audacity水火不容，只要开着屙屎打开audacity，整个播放设备都会找不到
2014-12-07 00:54 Flower: audition、gold那啥也是的，audition是直接打不开
2014-12-07 00:54 liangv587: 是你电脑问题吧
2014-12-07 00:54 Flower: 是的
2014-12-07 00:54 liangv587: 我这完全没问题
2014-12-07 00:54 Flower: 我打算回国换个电脑，如果吹灰没法解决卡顿的话
2014-12-07 00:55 Flower: 用了3年了从来没吹过灰
2014-12-07 00:55 liangv587: 为毛一定要回国呢
2014-12-07 00:55 Flower: 因为宗达利亚电脑柜
2014-12-07 00:55 Flower: 澳大利亚 电脑 贵
2014-12-07 00:55 liangv587: 好吧
2014-12-07 00:56 Flower: 唯一的特产就是珠宝，然后因为价值太大还不好过关，另外就是UGG的鞋子，但它和croc一样已经成为了没素质的标志，不要穿着出门
2014-12-07 00:57 liangv587: 好想好很多了
2014-12-07 00:57 Flower: hao
2014-12-07 00:57 liangv587: 用的-4都没觉得小声
2014-12-07 00:57 liangv587: 合适了吧
2014-12-07 00:58 Flower: hao
2014-12-07 00:58 liangv587: 我想可以把那波形剪掉一些呢，尽量减少体积嘛
2014-12-07 00:58 Flower: 那反正听着不违和就行
2014-12-07 00:58 Flower: 开始摸吧
2014-12-07 00:58 Flower: 01:15:521 (2,3,4) - 搞个上下对称？
2014-12-07 00:58 liangv587: 恩
2014-12-07 00:59 liangv587: 好了
2014-12-07 01:00 Flower: 话说hard相对normal会不会难了点
2014-12-07 01:02 liangv587: ```````azdcsxaz\
2014-12-07 01:02 Flower: 好，不难
2014-12-07 01:02 Flower: 除了那个三连以外都fc了
2014-12-07 01:02 Flower: kodora说只要dt能fc就不难
2014-12-07 01:04 Flower: 00:46:444 (5) - 逆时针旋转2度（centre:object），没blanket好
2014-12-07 01:05 Flower: 01:17:367 (3,5) - 也是没blanket好
2014-12-07 01:07 Flower: 。你没回应我也不知道你改没改好……我水煎去了
2014-12-07 01:13 liangv587: 卧槽真是对不起
2014-12-07 01:13 liangv587: 键盘终于能用了
2014-12-07 01:14 Flower: 啊，没事，我正好顺手给薯片点个requalifiy
2014-12-07 01:14 Flower: 继续吧
2014-12-07 01:14 liangv587: 刚才牛奶倒上面了
2014-12-07 01:15 Flower: .
2014-12-07 01:15 liangv587: 那个逆时针怎么弄
2014-12-07 01:15 Flower: ctrl+shitf+r
2014-12-07 01:16 liangv587: center object啊
2014-12-07 01:17 Flower: dui
2014-12-07 01:17 Flower: http://puu.sh/djjoz/7936b21fa4.png
2014-12-07 01:18 liangv587: 哦对
2014-12-07 01:20 liangv587: 好了
2014-12-07 01:25 Flower: 没了，看normal
2014-12-07 01:25 Flower: 00:59:598 (1) - 这个太近了可能会被人喷
2014-12-07 01:26 liangv587: 跟前面吗
2014-12-07 01:26 Flower: 把01:00:290 (1,3) - 交换一下然后把00:59:598 (1) - 放在右边，应该就好了
2014-12-07 01:26 Flower: 不过还有重叠的问题……
2014-12-07 01:27 liangv587: 还是不换吧
2014-12-07 01:29 Flower: http://puu.sh/djk3Y/3fda638f59.jpg 做成这样？
2014-12-07 01:31 liangv587: 看起来很好诶
2014-12-07 01:31 liangv587: 但是两处断flow没问题吗
2014-12-07 01:32 Flower: 我看来没问题
2014-12-07 01:34 liangv587: 好吧
2014-12-07 01:37 Flower: 01:15:060 (1) - 怎么突然一个跳
2014-12-07 01:37 Flower: 其实normal有点小跳也没啥
2014-12-07 01:38 liangv587: 1.4到1.6这也算啊
2014-12-07 01:39 Flower: 。不管他了
2014-12-07 01:39 Flower: 你改好更新我就点泡
2014-12-07 01:39 liangv587: 好的多谢
2014-12-07 01:39 Flower: 。
2014-12-07 01:40 liangv587: sv个吧
2014-12-07 01:40 Flower: sv是啥
2014-12-07 01:40 liangv587: save
2014-12-07 01:40 Flower: 我自动保存私聊的
2014-12-07 01:40 liangv587: 还有这功能
2014-12-07 01:41 Flower: http://puu.sh/djkN5/9ee3eb994b.jpg
2014-12-07 01:41 liangv587: 原来如此
2014-12-07 01:42 liangv587: 我没有照搬你说的，自己改了下
2014-12-07 01:43 Flower: 改好了戳我
sjoy
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Joined April 2012
sjoy
哇 恭喜
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
终于。。。。
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
Repetitive green line check. No kd.
有点多，我插了分割线方便阅读。
[Easy]
00:05:252 -
00:05:713 -
00:07:098 -
00:54:636 -
01:10:329 -
01:25:098 -

[Normal]
00:05:252 -
00:30:406 -
00:33:867 -
00:35:713 -
00:46:790 -
00:50:713 -
----------------- Part 1
00:54:175 -
01:03:406 -
01:09:867 -
01:13:560 -
01:18:175 -
01:22:790 -
01:24:636 -

[Hard]
00:30:406 -
00:33:867 -
00:35:713 -
00:38:944 -
00:46:790 -
----------------- Part 1
00:50:483 -
00:50:713 -
00:54:175 -
01:03:406 -
01:08:021 -
----------------- Part 2
01:09:867 -
01:13:560 -
01:18:175 -
01:22:790 -
01:24:636 -
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
liangv587

lkx_Shore wrote:

Repetitive green line check. No kd.
有点多，我插了分割线方便阅读。
all fixed, thanks a lot.
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
irc talk
17:57 liangv587: 拉克修大大
17:58 lkx_Shore: 正好
18:00 liangv587: 你要点了吗（笑
18:00 *lkx_Shore is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/308233 Chan Kwong Wing - Wo Zai Na Yi Jiao Luo Huan Guo Shang Feng [Easy]]
18:00 lkx_Shore: Easy
18:00 lkx_Shore: Kiaitime ends point
18:00 lkx_Shore: 没snap好
18:01 liangv587: 卧槽这种怎么发现的啊
18:01 liangv587: 1ms
18:01 liangv587: aimod都没发现
18:01 lkx_Shore: aibat
18:01 lkx_Shore: 不用aibai查那我就死定了
18:01 liangv587: 卧槽还有这种
18:01 liangv587: 其他bat也有吗
18:01 lkx_Shore: 这个是个公开的软件
18:02 lkx_Shore: 我写的教程里有贴下载地址
18:02 liangv587: 原来如此
18:02 liangv587: 然后呢
18:02 lkx_Shore: 等我查一遍
18:03 liangv587: 恩，麻烦你了
18:06 lkx_Shore: 01:29:829 (1) - 滑条尾用30%音量？ Easy
18:09 lkx_Shore: 绿线还是有重复的...例如5252ms的和5713ms这种
18:09 lkx_Shore: 而且略多,我找出来贴论坛里吧
18:10 lkx_Shore: 你的绿线是所有难度都一样多吗?
18:10 liangv587: 不是
18:10 lkx_Shore: （啊好麻烦
18:10 lkx_Shore: 那等我找
18:10 liangv587: 三个难度都不一样
18:10 liangv587: 恩
18:12 liangv587: 你刚说那个重复，normal里面却没有，，，，，
18:12 lkx_Shore: easy 呀！
18:13 liangv587: 恩
18:13 liangv587: 01:29:944 - 这里的sb音效需要调成40吗
18:14 lkx_Shore: 不用，因为滑条尾的那个soft底音其实是多余的....所以我才问你要不要降低音量
18:14 liangv587: 这样啊
18:16 liangv587: f6看两个相同的数字就注意下对吧
18:16 lkx_Shore: 是
18:16 lkx_Shore: 不过你查还不如我查，我自己查了比较放心..
18:17 liangv587: 恩
18:27 lkx_Shore: 我贴论坛了
18:27 lkx_Shore: 可能会眼花
18:27 liangv587: 没有人比我更清晰吧
18:27 liangv587: 谢了
18:28 lkx_Shore: 恩
18:34 liangv587: 哦hard这里可以用来转盘减音量吧00:38:944 -
18:34 lkx_Shore: 可以
18:37 lkx_Shore: (顺便hard的01:08:829 - 我觉得能点下去比较好...01:20:367 (6) - 用1/1更好
18:38 liangv587: 啊，这个我之前就是1/1，你让我改这样的
18:38 lkx_Shore: 之前我看的时候是两个note...
18:46 liangv587: 好了
18:46 liangv587: 更新了
18:46 lkx_Shore: 我再看看
18:49 lkx_Shore: 你可以准备打图了，可以捞个成就
18:49 lkx_Shore: 等我看看怎么rank图...
18:49 liangv587: 要先reb
18:49 liangv587: 现在是破裂状态
18:50 lkx_Shore: 小问题不用，不过你能找到reb最好
18:50 liangv587: 意思是我还得找个bat
18:50 lkx_Shore: 我去问一下
18:55 liangv587: 刚做出来的时候能ss，现在不行了
18:55 lkx_Shore: ...
18:56 liangv587: 估计是状态原因
18:56 liangv587: 听多了腻了
18:56 lkx_Shore: 确认没有其他任何东西要改了么
18:57 liangv587: 恩
18:57 liangv587: 没了
18:57 lkx_Shore: 好
We fix green line issue. Everything looks good now.
Then, Let's go~
Last edited by lkx_Shore , edited 1 time in total.
Sellenite
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Sellenite
伤(Feng)风(Shang)
congrats
liangv587
472 posts
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Topic Starter
liangv587
感谢拉克修大大带路，终于从新人毕业辣
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Gratzz for your first ranked map~
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
Cool Hitsounds o:
Colourful
80 posts
Joined July 2012
Colourful
Gratz :)
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue

Mao wrote:

Cool Hitsounds o:
Gratz!
AIR
1,577 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
撒花
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
恭喜w
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano
脱新祝贺
Pappy
1,020 posts
Joined August 2013
Pappy
In comments I can see kind of "awesome hitsounds"
Looked into map and I tought it is nothing special
Than listened mp3 and tought "nice troll heh"
It is awesome!
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
懒人有懒福
懒福就是我还没摸，图rank了
Spy
2,538 posts
Joined November 2011
Spy
在Standard上用sample import挺辛苦的，恭喜一個 :)
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
标准结局
Kuuhaku
104 posts
Joined October 2011
Kuuhaku
恭喜，顿觉神mapper就要诞生了！
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
wocao
刚刚把音效关了才发现这个音效真的很屌，真的很屌，因为很重要所以要说两遍
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,123 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal

Karen wrote:

wocao
刚刚把音效关了才发现这个音效真的很屌，真的很屌，因为很重要所以要说两遍
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