Spy wrote:

Hello,mod by request !

[General]
Source:Nico Nico Douga(可能吧，查到的時候貌似來自這裡)
tag:Vocaloid

其實一開始聲音挺小聲的，可以插幾條線先讓前面的note音效小聲一些，打到後面才開始大聲起來。

[EZ]
00:02:620 - 何不抓這個音呢，反而抓後面的音感覺怪怪的
後面都是同理。
00:34:137 - 重音
00:34:642 - ↑
後面也都是同理。
可以多追一點人聲，應該就不會這麼多拍磚了!

[NM]
00:01:609 (1609|0) - 沒音
00:02:451 (2451|3) - ↑
00:07:002 (7002|0) - ↑
其實這些好像都是聲音太小聲的樣子，不建議抓。
00:07:002 (7002|0) - 這個和之後的紅線都是重音，多加一個。
00:34:642 (34642|2) - ↑
01:04:642 (64642|3,64811|2,64979|1) - 感覺應該是down下來的，建議Ctrl+H
01:45:934 - 多加Note。
01:47:114 (107114|2) - (天啊這段我好想玩變速www純亂)

[HD]
感覺還可以
雖然都是我不會打的類型

Nice map，加油 !

victorica_db wrote:

间谍是第一个！（雾）怎么不是咱呢！


EZ
00:02:620 - 00:05:317 - 00:08:013 - 00:10:204 - 00:10:710 - 00:16:134 - 00:18:800 - 00:21:523 - 01:07:845 - 01:08:013 - +1note
01:13:069 (73069|2) - 这个条子不太和谐

NM
00:33:631 - 00:34:305 - 00:34:988 - 00:35:654 - 00:36:328 - 00:37:002 - 00:37:676 - 00:38:350 - 00:39:024 - 00:39:699 - 00:39:024 - 00:39:699 - 00:40:373 - 00:41:047 - 00:41:384 - +1note
HD
整体来说相当不错
因为比较长 就让我水一下 。。QAQ
条子旁边可以加点note 不必要减少很多。
重音的地方都用双键表达出来QAQ
00:56:890 - +1note
00:59:923 - +1note在一号位
01:00:260 - +1note在4
01:00:597 - ^
01:01:282 - +2note
01:01:958 - +1note
01:02:283 - 01:02:620 - ^
01:13:069 - 01:13:406 - ^
01:21:159 (81159|0,81328|2,81496|1) - +上鼓点
01:26:637 (86637|3,86721|1,86890|2) - ^
01:28:917 - +1note
01:31:614 - ^
01:31:946 (91946|3,92114|0,92283|2) - 同刚刚的
01:34:305 - +1note
02:11:552 - ^
02:12:227 - ^
02:12:901 - ^
02:13:575 - ^
02:13:406 - ^
02:14:249 - ^
02:14:586 - ^
02:14:923 - ^
后面红线位置都加一个音吧?就是长条的部分
02:26:574 - 02:29:081 - 这里的重音用双note
02:37:339 - 02:39:867 - ^
02:48:126 - 02:50:654 - ^
03:01:103 - +1note
03:01:272 - 2note


小星姐的图已经很好啦！ 比我的翔谱棒多啦 点赞 (～o￣▽￣)～o ~☆

asd123iii wrote:

沒能mod的地方啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊!!!

給你星星

richardfeder wrote:

不愧是名谱师小星，完全看不出有什么问题www

SPOILER

HD
00:02:957 (2957|1,3294|2) - switch

00:21:833 (21833|0,22508|2) - 要不跟00:16:440 (16440|0,16609|2,16777|1,16946|2,17114|3) - 一样都填满？

00:29:249 (29249|1) - 换长条

00:32:620 (32620|2) - 去掉

00:34:305 (34305|3) - 挪到00:34:137 (34137|3) -

00:34:642 -加一个？

00:35:654 (35654|2) - 挪到00:35:485 (35485|2) -

00:37:002 (37002|2) - ^

00:37:339 (37339|2) - add a note

00:39:699 (39699|2) - 同上

00:42:227 (42227|3) - add

00:42:564 (42564|1) - add

00:49:137 (49137|0) - move to 00:48:968 (48968|0) -

00:51:833 (51833|3) - ^

00:52:170 (52170|2) - to 00:53:519 (53519|3) - 要不让一个轨道四条白线放满打拍子另外三个再做别的？感觉这样放回清爽一点w

00:55:541 (55541|0) - 挪到00:55:710 (55710|0) -

00:55:878 (55878|0) - delete

00:59:249 (59249|2) - 挪到00:59:081 (59081|2) - 或者换一下排列方式？总之我想表达的意思是下面两个的是重音上面两个才是只有人声XD

01:00:260 (60260|2,60766|0,61272|3) - 就来短面吧，挺奇怪的

01:04:642 (64642|0) - 挪到01:04:474 (64474|2) -
后面也差不多都是这种，（我觉得）放反了得

02:04:305 (124305|3) - 挪到02:04:137 (124137|3) - ， 02:04:642 (124642|2) - 同理

02:07:002 (127002|1,127339|2) - ^

02:14:333 - 这附近有个木鱼

02:14:333 (134333|1) - 就放短面吧，这样怪怪的

然后后面还是重音（我觉得）放反了得
最后就是剩下的难度都有的一个：打起来感觉少许单调，是不是考虑放一些八分之一在顶难度上，简单的难度抓一些有别于寻常的音呢？只是建议XD~

wwwwwwwwwwww

Reikosaka wrote:

Sorry late mod, i'm busy yesterday

[General]
00:10:710 - i think start from this, beginning sound is too low and hard to find timing
Increase volume to 45% , Add try to add hitsound

[EZ]

SPOILER

00:13:406 - Add note
00:30:260 - Add note
00:32:957 - Add note
00:35:485 - Add note
00:38:013 (38013|0) - Delete
00:38:182 - Add note
00:40:710 (40710|0) - Delete
00:40:878 - Add note
00:44:923 - Add note
00:45:092 (45092|2) - Delete
00:45:429 - Add
00:46:272 - Add
00:46:440 (46440|3) - Delete
00:46:777 - Add
00:47:620 - Add
00:47:788 (47788|1) - Delete
00:48:126 - Add
00:48:968 - Add
00:49:137 (49137|0) - Delete
00:50:317 - Add
00:50:485 (50485|3) - Delete
00:50:822 - Add
00:51:665 - Add

01:13:069 (73069|2) - Delete
01:44:755 (104755|0,105260|1,105597|2) - this note following vocal
03:10:541 (190541|1) - move to 3
03:13:238 (193238|2) - move to 0
03:24:024 (204024|1) - move to 0
03:24:361 (204361|2) - move to 3

[NM]
From 01:00:260 - 01:02:788 - Follow Slider like this http://puu.sh/4IDCz.jpg
01:04:642 (64642|0) - Delete
01:04:474 (64474|0) - move to 01:04:558 -
From 02:37:339 - 02:39:867 - Follow Slider like before
02:42:227 (162227|3) - Delete
02:48:126 - 02:50:654 - same like before

[MX]
00:24:699 (24699|1) - move to 0
00:56:890 (56890|2) - Remove
00:59:586 (59586|2) - Remove
01:05:148 (65148|2) - Remove
01:10:373 (70373|0,70373|1) - Remove
01:13:238 (73238|1) - Remove
02:31:440 (151440|1) - Remove
02:36:665 (156665|2,156665|0) - Remove
02:47:451 (167451|2) - Remove
02:53:013 (173013|1) - Remove

17VA wrote:

ok, I will mod when you applied Reikosaka's mod.

I was busy because of mapping/rank my beatmap/overdue modding request.

c36098651 wrote:

檢查不出什麼問題;W;

[HD]

00:13:912 加note (像00:16:609 (16609|2) - 一樣

00:24:530 加1~2 note

00:27:227 ^

00:29:923 ^

00:32:620 ^

03:12:058 前面這邊類似的地方有加note 看要加note或是前面類似的地方(03:09:361 (189361|2) - 03:06:665 (186665|3) - ) 去掉

17VA wrote:

[Global]

Background is not suitable for song imo

[HD]

Hmm... It feels little boring, how about 1/4 notes more (2~3rd KIAI part) or short LNs..

00:22:508 - add 4

00:33:294 - http://puu.sh/4Lxm1.png (vocal tone)

00:35:317 (35317|3) - change to LN till 00:35:654 -

01:07:508 (67508|1,67845|3) - feels like blank?

01:24:024 (84024|0,84193|1,84361|2) - change to 1/2 LNs?

01:29:418 (89418|0,89586|2,89755|1) - make 1,2,3 and ^ ?

01:34:811 (94811|3,94979|2,95148|1) - ^^

01:38:519 (98519|1) - move to 3 and change to LN till01:38:856 (98856|1) - starts

01:39:361 (99361|2) - ~ 01:42:901 (102901|1) - add a beat-notes..

01:45:934 (105934|1) - ^ (do not following vocals in 4K imo)

01:48:126 (108126|0) - expand till 01:48:800 (108800|1) - starts

02:04:642 (124642|0) - fill empty

[NM]

I cant mod easy diffs..

[EZ]

I cant mod..

Mashiro-Fang wrote:

For HD mod
00:55:036 - +1note
00:56:384 - ^
00:57:732 - ^
01:03:126 - ^
01:04:474 - ^
01:05:822 - ^
01:07:170 - ^
01:08:519 - ^
01:09:867 - ^
01:11:215 - ^
01:12:564 - ^
01:13:912 - ^
01:15:260 - ^
01:16:609 - ^
01:27:395 - ^
01:52:845 - 01:53:182 - 大概弄个面条比较好？
02:21:328 - +1note
02:24:024 - ^
02:29:418 - ^
02:30:766 - ^
02:32:114 - ^
02:33:463 - ^
02:34:811 - ^
02:40:204 - ^
02:41:552 - ^
02:42:901 - ^
02:45:597 - ^
02:46:946 - ^
02:50:991 - ^
02:52:339 - ^
02:53:687 - ^
02:56:384 - ^
02:57:732 - ^
02:59:081 - ^
03:00:429 - ^
03:01:777 - ^
03:03:126 - ^



小星姐加油

ResucecaT wrote:

EZ
00:12:564 (12564|2,12901|2) -
不建議同行,因為不同音
(類似的還有)
03:05:148 (185148|1,185485|1) -
03:07:845 (187845|2,188182|2) -
03:13:238 (193238|0,193575|0) -

00:42:732 (42732|3,43069|0,43406|3,43743|0) -
建議下移一格(1/2尺)....嘛...
02:09:024 (129024|0,129361|1,129699|2,130036|3) -
這兒的話其實也是的,抓BASS比抓那一串低至高的音要好


01:00:260 (60260|2,61609|0,62283|2,62957|1) -
建議每三格一個音(1/2尺),如NM
沒有必要為了簡單而在高潮留空
(而NM還可以強化一下)
(之後也有一堆,略)

01:15:092
以抓VOCAL來結尾吧~高潮的收尾嘛

另外...
開始那一段的(相對)難度真高

之後繼續

woc2006 wrote:

EZ的OD HP太低

- R u m i a - wrote:

juz passing by , btw nice map owo)b!
[all diff]
02:42:058 - continue kiai
[EZ]
this looks great!!

[NM]
00:37:339 (37339|3) - delete?
00:40:036 (40036|2) - ^
00:42:901 (42901|2,43238|0) - suggest change this to hold
00:48:800 - add at 2
01:51:496 (111496|2) - move here 01:51:833
02:48:463 - add?

[HD]
00:18:968 - add
00:20:654 - add 1 more i think
00:32:620 (32620|2,32957|3) - should be in same collumn since its the same chord
00:34:305 - add 1 more
00:38:350 - ^
00:41:047 - ^
00:43:996 (43996|2) - delete
00:49:137 - add at 2nd
00:53:603 (53603|2,53772|0,53940|2,54109|1) - this stream should exist lol , make doubles instead
00:54:614 (54614|0,54699|3,54783|0) - ^
01:41:047 - add drum i think
02:14:081 (134081|1,134249|0) - ctrl + j
02:58:575 - add 1 more
03:11:890 - add

good luck and.
rank this please!

__M A S__ wrote:

[ NM ]

00:50:485 (50485|1) - It is better to have changed to Long note is good

No kudosu

- R u m i a - wrote:

WHYYYYY GRAAAAAVEE THISSSSS ;W;