yanaginagi - Yukitoki (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Vita-VVA

Joined March 2013

Vita-VVA 2013-12-01T04:35:57+00:00

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself

Ignore them if you think they are helpless

[general]
歌曲前加两秒左右的前黑（之前有这个功能不过现在不见了只能手动改长度）然后改offset要不太突兀了！
spinner用的太多了点……

[normal]
00:07:566 (1) - 这里不是33分的啦是24分

00:10:839 (1) - ^
00:21:775 (2,3) - 太难了啦，滑条后接note什么的是我入坑时候的噩梦
举个栗子

00:43:205 (7) - 太难了？
01:17:020 (1) - NC
01:22:838 (1) - NC

[Insane]
连打之前都要切指是我的错觉吗
00:05:658 (1) - 转盘在这里停好一些？
00:11:385 (3) - 会不由自主的去

这个位置……
00:22:866 - 如果跟着节奏的话这里就要加note
如果跟着vocal的话 00:27:412 (4) - 00:28:866 (8) - 这里的note就去掉吧
00:37:576 (6) - 移动一下（因为超过了2.0所以不知道间距是怎么放的总之用

的prev和next检查吧
比如

00:40:667 (1,3) - 好好的对齐啦
00:53:572 (1) - 去掉NC加在00:53:753 (2) -
01:07:929 (8) - 这个微小的位移meaningless
01:11:929 (5,1) - 到底要不要对齐啦
01:14:111 (1,2) - 这个1总感觉没必要出现（或者改一下排列吧）
01:21:202 (8) - 换成

that's all

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-01T12:12:35+00:00

Vita-VVA wrote:
[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself Ignore them if you think they are helpless

[general]
歌曲前加两秒左右的前黑（之前有这个功能不过现在不见了只能手动改长度）然后改offset要不太突兀了！
spinner用的太多了点……

[normal]
00:07:566 (1) - 这里不是33分的啦是24分
00:10:839 (1) - ^
00:21:775 (2,3) - 太难了啦，滑条后接note什么的是我入坑时候的噩梦
举个栗子
00:43:205 (7) - 太难了？
01:17:020 (1) - NC
01:22:838 (1) - NC

[Insane]
连打之前都要切指是我的错觉吗
00:05:658 (1) - 转盘在这里停好一些？有什么问题吗...
00:11:385 (3) - 会不由自主的去这个位置……ok
00:22:866 - 如果跟着节奏的话这里就要加noteok
如果跟着vocal的话 00:27:412 (4) - 00:28:866 (8) - 这里的note就去掉吧
00:37:576 (6) - 移动一下（因为超过了2.0所以不知道间距是怎么放的总之用的prev和next检查吧
比如
00:40:667 (1,3) - 好好的对齐啦ok
00:53:572 (1) - 去掉NC加在00:53:753 (2) - 这边没改不过我加上了后面那个变速滑条的NC
01:07:929 (8) - 这个微小的位移meaningless没改
01:11:929 (5,1) - 到底要不要对齐啦没对齐吗……？
01:14:111 (1,2) - 这个1总感觉没必要出现（或者改一下排列吧）o.O长白线空着不太爽啦
01:21:202 (8) - 换成蓝线那儿没音啊o.O

that's all

Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2013-12-02T09:35:14+00:00

[Easy]

00:13:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有那么点紧凑，加上遮挡的话= =。。试试这种 http://puu.sh/5zHuR.jpg
00:53:390 (4,5) - 节奏对应的不是很好。试试这种 http://puu.sh/5zHJ6.jpg 或者干脆 http://puu.sh/5zIgP.jpg 自己感觉一下

[Normal]

00:03:203 - 为什么不加个note呢= =
00:41:758 (5,6) - 滑条尾最好不要压白线，节奏不舒服。可以对应把5改成单点，6变成以白线开头的长滑条 http://puu.sh/5zHUu.jpg
00:53:753 (6,7) - 改成和我Easy里提到的一样试试 http://puu.sh/5zHXE.jpg
01:07:566 (5) - 改成两个单点好一些
01:18:475 (4) - 这个音明显要往后一格。。
01:19:202 (5) - 这个对应歌词改成单滑条吧后面的节奏都很乱，重新做一下这之后的部分，滑条尾尽量不要压大白线

hard和insane好像基本没啥问题其实是比我做的好我不知道怎么mod了。。

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2013-12-02T12:22:21+00:00

We did a little irc mod on Easy diff

log

19:41 Fycho: 00:54:480 (1) -
19:41 Fycho: 吵
19:42 Fycho: 00:16:658 (1) -
19:42 Fycho: 吵
19:42 S o a p: 卧槽转盘
19:42 Fycho: 00:20:321 (1) - 开头加whistle
19:42 S o a p: 你也能听出声音啊【
19:42 Fycho: 00:29:048 (3,4) -
19:42 Fycho: 真难看
19:42 Fycho: 我又不是聋子啊啊啊
19:43 Fycho: 00:29:048 (3,4) - 做个对称的blanket
19:43 Fycho: 00:33:394 (3) - 包好
19:43 Fycho: 00:31:940 (1) - 这个尾部略难看了
19:43 Fycho: 最后一个描点往右上去点
19:44 Fycho: 00:42:482 (2,3) -
19:44 Fycho: 这个怎么变成normal音效了？？？
19:44 Fycho: 这里应该还是soft
19:44 Fycho: 00:42:121 - 这个
19:44 Fycho: 你那个红线音效看看
19:44 Fycho: 00:44:293 (1) - 滑条尾节奏不对没对上移
19:44 Fycho: 没对上音
19:45 Fycho: 00:22:139 (2) -
19:45 Fycho: 这也没对上音
19:45 Fycho: 滑条头
19:45 Fycho: 00:25:048 (4) -
19:45 Fycho: 一样的
19:45 S o a p: 那放哪儿啊
19:46 Fycho: 00:26:139 (1,2) - 滑条头的音效呢
19:46 Fycho: 00:30:502 (4) - 音效
19:46 Fycho: 00:31:940 (1) - 首finish呢
19:46 Fycho: 各种漏音效自己查
19:47 S o a p: TvT
19:47 Fycho: 00:54:480 (1) - 音效吵
19:47 Fycho: 音效你和hard一样保证没问题
19:47 Fycho: 00:57:747 (3) - 这啥节奏，别跨大白线啊
19:47 Fycho: 换成1/1折返或者note加滑条
19:48 Fycho: KIAI音效你用默认的clap干嘛
19:48 Fycho: 你看hard怎么加的
19:48 Fycho: 默认的难听死l
19:49 Fycho: 00:58:838 (4,1) - 平行啊卧槽，注意细节
19:49 Fycho: 用复制粘贴保证平行而且方便
19:49 Fycho: 01:02:475 (4) - 音效呢
19:50 Fycho: 01:11:202 (1) - 这3/2下的真的不对
19:50 Fycho: 老实的用2/1或者1/1
19:50 Fycho: 中间红线上是个十分微弱的音根本别跟
19:50 Fycho: 01:14:111 (4) - 音效
19:50 Fycho: 01:18:657 (1,2) - 这音效怎么比KIAI还抄
19:51 Fycho: KIAI应该是高潮部分别主次不分啊
19:51 S o a p: TvT猴猴猴
19:51 S o a p: 我妈叫我吃饭了啊啊啊
19:51 Fycho: 01:19:929 (2) - 这是什么畸形滑条
19:51 Fycho: 为什么中间的描点那样
19:51 Fycho: 宝宝好
19:51 Fycho: 包包好
19:51 Fycho: blanket
19:51 S o a p: 好好好T.T
19:52 Fycho: 吃完继续不继续没了
20:05 S o a p: _(:з」∠)_
20:05 S o a p: 吃完了
20:06 S o a p: （煎饺好好吃
20:06 Fycho: ？
20:06 S o a p: 继续呀
20:09 Fycho: vewewwd
20:10 Fycho: 最后的转盘结束时间不对
20:10 Fycho: 太长这转盘
20:10 S o a p: 那怎么办
20:10 Fycho: 01:18:657 (1,2) - 这个包好
20:10 Fycho: 然后没了都是细节问题
20:10 Fycho: 01:19:929 (2) - 这个滑条删了重拉
20:10 S o a p: 拉完了
20:11 Fycho: 你肯定是搞过红点滑条
20:11 Fycho: 然后没了
20:11 S o a p: 最后转盘分成一个好不好啊
20:11 S o a p: 呸
20:11 Fycho: 其他细节的东西
20:11 S o a p: 分成两个
20:11 S o a p: T.T
20:11 Fycho: 什么叫分成一个
20:11 Fycho: 别分啊
20:11 Fycho: 和hard一样就可以了
20:11 Fycho: 01:25:566 -
20:11 Fycho: 这个之前用物件放上
20:12 Fycho: 别用转盘根本没必要
20:12 S o a p: 哦哦哦好
20:12 Fycho: 跟鼓点下
20:12 Fycho: 四维修改
20:13 Fycho: HP2 OD2 AR3
20:13 Fycho: 你这四维被喷死
20:13 S o a p: ;w;

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2013-12-02T14:53:42+00:00

Fycho <3

Random mod

General

add やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている & opening in tag
add video .v. ?
i think BG so sad Orz , change to this or this or Other

Easy

00:03:930 (2) - whistle last silde
00:04:658 (3) - whistle head slide
00:05:748 (4) - ^
00:16:658 - change custum hitsound to soft
00:36:667 (2,4) - so close x_x

need more whistle ><

OblivioN

00:07:930 (1) - finish head slide & remove finish last slide
00:08:476 (2) - ^
00:11:385 (2) - ^
00:31:940 (1) - ^
00:42:301 (6) - ^
00:50:480 (2) - so... change to other pattern Orz

Nice kiai part!

Fycho <3

00:01:930 (6) - try this
SPOILER
00:43:024 (4,5,6,7,1) - it hard diff , take it curved
SPOILER
00:54:299 (3) - remove clap head slide -.-

I love you ><!! Fycho <3

Insane

00:07:839 (4) - move up one scale
00:07:930 (5) - move left [your left] on scale
00:12:203 (2,3,4) - don't have stream in song overmap

it's OK ><

that all , GL
Ps. love you Fycho <3

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2013-12-02T15:39:32+00:00

to soap: kantokun提供的背景因为大陆要翻墙，所以我帮传到puush外链了，你自己看吧

SPOILER

Last edited by Fycho 2013-12-03T08:13:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-03T03:17:34+00:00

Fycho wrote:
to soap: kantokun提供的背景因为大陆要翻墙，所以我帮传到puush外链了，你自己看吧
SPOILER
SPOILER

will edit this when I check the mod:>

哇太感谢你了

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2013-12-03T08:12:32+00:00

kantokun wrote:
Fycho <3

00:01:930 (6) - try this
SPOILER
fixed
00:43:024 (4,5,6,7,1) - it hard diff , take it curved fixed
SPOILER
00:54:299 (3) - remove clap head slide -.-nope

I love you ><!! Fycho <3 <3

thanks for modding

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56475
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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GridSize: 4

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Title:Yukitoki (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ユキトキ (TV Size)
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:S o a p
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:Yahari Ore no Seishun Love Come wa Machigatteiru
Tags:OniJAM Fycho OblivioN
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S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-03T08:19:10+00:00

kantokun wrote:
Fycho <3

Random mod

General

add やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている & opening in tag fix
add video .v. ?
i think BG so sad Orz , change to this or this or Other
thank you very much,nice pic XD

Easy

00:03:930 (2) - whistle last silde fix
00:04:658 (3) - whistle head slide fix
00:05:748 (4) - ^ fix
00:16:658 - change custum hitsound to soft fix
00:36:667 (2,4) - so close x_x xxxxx_xxxxxx

need more whistle ><

OblivioN

00:07:930 (1) - finish head slide & remove finish last slide
00:08:476 (2) - ^
00:11:385 (2) - ^
00:31:940 (1) - ^
00:42:301 (6) - ^
00:50:480 (2) - so... change to other pattern Orz

Nice kiai part!

Fycho <3

00:01:930 (6) - try this
SPOILER
00:43:024 (4,5,6,7,1) - it hard diff , take it curved
SPOILER
00:54:299 (3) - remove clap head slide -.-

I love you ><!! Fycho <3

Insane

00:07:839 (4) - move up one scale fix
00:07:930 (5) - move left [your left] on scale fix
00:12:203 (2,3,4) - don't have stream in song overmap fix

it's OK ><

that all , GL
Ps. love you Fycho <3

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-12-04T03:26:51+00:00

我来拯救南京吧
no kd

[General]
disable letterbox on all diffs
01:28:111 - makes more sense to end the spinners here for all the diffs, this is where the violin comes to a halt in the music (applies to guest diffs)

[Easy]
00:38:849 (4) - clap on end
00:44:293 (1,2) - the spacing here might be a bit confusing, try something like this:

SPOILER

00:54:480 (1) - start this spinner at 00:54:299? also its best to lower the volume of the end since it doesnt really land on a loud beat
00:57:747 (3) - missing claps
01:02:475 (4) - add NC
01:05:929 (1) - shorten to 01:07:566 to give more reaction time for the next note
01:14:111 (4) - NC

[OblivioN's Normal]
missing video on this diff
00:26:139 (6) - NC here to follow your NC pattern
01:08:293 (1) - add a finish on the start?
01:19:929 (1) - ^
01:22:838 (5) - NC

[Fycho's Hard]
add video
(b'-')b

[Insane]
video wwww
use S:C1 sample in the beginning to get rid of the slider slide sound
00:04:294 (1) - no need for the NC here, its the same as 00:00:658 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:12:658 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - should be one combo, more colours interfere with reading the stream
00:44:293 (2,3,4,5,6) - the way this flows is a bit awkward in gameplay, maybe adjust it to something like this:

SPOILER

00:53:753 (6) - use the normal sample set on this note
01:15:566 (1) - remove the finish? sounds a bit random
01:21:020 (7,1) - tbh the transition here plays a bit bad, its better of you just make this into a slider to rid having to click at 01:21:202 (1)
01:24:929 (4) - whoa is that an inaudible note? make it atleast 20% volume pls
i could have picked more on hitsounds here, but its not really noticeable in game play so i will let that go

fix the stuff in red and whatever else and call me back~

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-04T08:54:16+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
我来拯救南京吧
no kd

[General]
disable letterbox on all diffs
01:28:111 - makes more sense to end the spinners here for all the diffs, this is where the violin comes to a halt in the music (applies to guest diffs)

[Easy]
00:38:849 (4) - clap on end
00:44:293 (1,2) - the spacing here might be a bit confusing, try something like this:
SPOILER
00:54:480 (1) - start this spinner at 00:54:299? also its best to lower the volume of the end since it doesnt really land on a loud beat
00:57:747 (3) - missing claps
01:02:475 (4) - add NC
01:05:929 (1) - shorten to 01:07:566 to give more reaction time for the next note
01:14:111 (4) - NC

[OblivioN's Normal]
missing video on this diff
00:26:139 (6) - NC here to follow your NC pattern
01:08:293 (1) - add a finish on the start?
01:19:929 (1) - ^
01:22:838 (5) - NC

[Fycho's Hard]
add video
(b'-')b

[Insane]
video wwww
use S:C1 sample in the beginning to get rid of the slider slide sound
00:04:294 (1) - no need for the NC here, its the same as 00:00:658 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:12:658 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - should be one combo, more colours interfere with reading the stream
00:44:293 (2,3,4,5,6) - the way this flows is a bit awkward in gameplay, maybe adjust it to something like this:
SPOILER
00:53:753 (6) - use the normal sample set on this note
01:15:566 (1) - remove the finish? sounds a bit random
01:21:020 (7,1) - tbh the transition here plays a bit bad, its better of you just make this into a slider to rid having to click at 01:21:202 (1)
01:24:929 (4) - whoa is that an inaudible note? make it atleast 20% volume pls
i could have picked more on hitsounds here, but its not really noticeable in game play so i will let that go

fix the stuff in red and whatever else and call me back~

thank you !!all fixed XD

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2013-12-04T10:18:59+00:00

fixed some more hitsounds and NCs and stuff, i think this is good to go

Bubbled~

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S o a p

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S o a p 2013-12-04T10:20:33+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
fixed some more hitsounds and NCs and stuff, i think this is good to go

Bubbled~

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lkx_Shore

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lkx_Shore 2013-12-04T11:07:40+00:00

Kamio Misuzu

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Kamio Misuzu 2013-12-04T13:37:31+00:00

小板凳

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-12-06T12:50:17+00:00

~General~

It would be nice if you can use the same kiai time on all of the difficulties.

~Easy~

Reduce AR by 1 tick, it feels a bit too fast for an Easy.

01:20:838 (1) - This spinner seems a bit too short for the easieast difficulty of the mapset, I would start it on the previous white tick so it's a bit longer at least.

~OblivioN's normal~

Capitalize the N on Normal of the difficulty name.
Increase HP and OD by 1 tick and reduce AR by 1 tick, settings are way too bad right now.

00:10:839 (1,2) - Place these two objects a bit more to the center, they're way too tricky right now to hit after spinner.
00:20:321 (1,2,3) - Spacing is wrong here, fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
00:43:567 (8) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack this circle under the previous slider, it might be confusing to read for beginners, I suggest you to place it somewhere else instead.
00:56:657 (1) - Same as 00:10.

~Fycho's Hard~

00:19:203 (6) - Adding another repeat to this slider fits better to the music, try listening with 25% enabled.

~Insane~

Increase OD by at least 1 tick, it's way too low for an Insane difficulty right now.

00:11:930 (1) - This slidertick here it's a bit annoying to hear, I suggest you to lower the volume on this slider.
01:01:202 (7) - Remove the clap from the slider start and add it to the slider end, seems like a mistake.
01:06:475 (1,2,3) - This triplet here flows pretty bad, try making it a bit more curve for giving it a better flow.
01:14:656 (3) - Reverse arrow of this slider is somehow hidden to see, try to place it a bit more down.
01:23:929 (1,2) - Do not completely silence these sliderends, it's unrankable and not acceptable anymore.

Sadly I have to pop this, call me back once everything is ready again.

S o a p

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S o a p 2013-12-07T04:43:21+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~General~
It would be nice if you can use the same kiai time on all of the difficulties.
~Easy~
Reduce AR by 1 tick, it feels a bit too fast for an Easy.
01:20:838 (1) - This spinner seems a bit too short for the easieast difficulty of the mapset, I would start it on the previous white tick so it's a bit longer at least.
~OblivioN's normal~
Capitalize the N on Normal of the difficulty name.
Increase HP and OD by 1 tick and reduce AR by 1 tick, settings are way too bad right now.
00:10:839 (1,2) - Place these two objects a bit more to the center, they're way too tricky right now to hit after spinner.
00:20:321 (1,2,3) - Spacing is wrong here, fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
00:43:567 (8) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack this circle under the previous slider, it might be confusing to read for beginners, I suggest you to place it somewhere else instead.
00:56:657 (1) - Same as 00:10.
~Fycho's Hard~
00:19:203 (6) - Adding another repeat to this slider fits better to the music, try listening with 25% enabled.
~Insane~
Increase OD by at least 1 tick, it's way too low for an Insane difficulty right now.
00:11:930 (1) - This slidertick here it's a bit annoying to hear, I suggest you to lower the volume on this slider.
01:01:202 (7) - Remove the clap from the slider start and add it to the slider end, seems like a mistake.
01:06:475 (1,2,3) - This triplet here flows pretty bad, try making it a bit more curve for giving it a better flow.
01:14:656 (3) - Reverse arrow of this slider is somehow hidden to see, try to place it a bit more down.
01:23:929 (1,2) - Do not completely silence these sliderends, it's unrankable and not acceptable anymore.
Sadly I have to pop this, call me back once everything is ready again.

insane normal easy are all fixed. thank you

Last edited by S o a p 2013-12-07T05:18:43+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Fycho

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Fycho 2013-12-07T05:08:41+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~Fycho's Hard~
00:19:203 (6) - Adding another repeat to this slider fits better to the music, try listening with 25% enabled.
Sadly I have to pop this, call me back once everything is ready again.

this beat is very weak,and just not following it is better for me ,sorry,thanks

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-12-07T13:16:54+00:00

Okay, we fixed an hitsound mistake, this is ready again now. :3

Re-Bubbled~

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2013-12-08T05:05:30+00:00

[Insane]
00:07:930 (5,6,7,8) - i guess you could make it in a more consistent way, example: http://puu.sh/5FHVI.jpg
00:10:839 (1,2,3,4) - similar to ^ (you can take a look at how Fycho did in the hard diff too)
00:11:930 (1) - gradually increase the volume may sounds better, (25%-30%-35%-40%-45% at the last for example), it starts at a place not so regular and this could make people get used to it.
00:14:112 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - not sure what you are trying to do here. (when playing you won't fell anything more than triangle since it's just a group of notes)
00:17:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - similar, also i'm not sure why you need such a big spacing here...
00:34:121 (3,4,5,6) - guess you could make the spacing equal and looks better...
00:36:121 (2,3) - make the two notes right/down a bit (maybe x232, y304), don't forget when playing, the place you see is after stacked.
00:42:301 & 00:42:482 - don't get why the consistent clap suddenly stop here...(if you want to follow the drums, 1 should be a reversed slider or something like that)
00:44:838 (5) - http://puu.sh/5FIkp.jpg maybe, also in this part, maybe you should consider use 0.75x slider speed.
00:53:390 (4,5) - should probably be a slider like 3

[Fycho's Hard]
00:12:839 (1,2,3) - the hitsounds in this part confused me a bit... maybe remove the claps...?
Generally good.

[OblivioN's Normal]
00:32:667 (2,3,1) - personally, is it a bit too crowded for a Normal? (especially when you use 0.8x distance spacing)
01:06:838 (4) - obviously should be 1/2 later. you're not just hitting 1/1s when play some music, do you?
01:18:475 (4) - ^similar.

[Easy]
00:07:930 (2) - extend it by 1/2
00:44:293 (1) - the blanket could be better

gxytcgxytc

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gxytcgxytc 2013-12-08T05:05:39+00:00

rank预感

S o a p

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Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-08T05:07:23+00:00

gxytcgxytc wrote:
rank预感

no

Fycho

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Fycho 2013-12-08T05:19:18+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]
00:12:839 (1,2,3) - the hitsounds in this part confused me a bit... maybe remove the claps...? fixed but add some other hitsound,now I think it's ok
Generally good.

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S o a p

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S o a p 2013-12-08T07:30:56+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Insane]
00:07:930 (5,6,7,8) - i guess you could make it in a more consistent way, example: http://puu.sh/5FHVI.jpgfix
00:10:839 (1,2,3,4) - similar to ^ (you can take a look at how Fycho did in the hard diff too)fix
00:11:930 (1) - gradually increase the volume may sounds better, (25%-30%-35%-40%-45% at the last for example), it starts at a place not so regular and this could make people get used to it.fix
00:14:112 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - not sure what you are trying to do here. (when playing you won't fell anything more than triangle since it's just a group of notes)我玩起来感觉这段比较爽，还是不改了吧
00:17:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - similar, also i'm not sure why you need such a big spacing here...^
00:34:121 (3,4,5,6) - guess you could make the spacing equal and looks better...fix
00:36:121 (2,3) - make the two notes right/down a bit (maybe x232, y304), don't forget when playing, the place you see is after stacked.fix
00:42:301 & 00:42:482 - don't get why the consistent clap suddenly stop here...(if you want to follow the drums, 1 should be a reversed slider or something like that)fix
00:44:838 (5) - http://puu.sh/5FIkp.jpg maybe, also in this part, maybe you should consider use 0.75x slider speed.fix
00:53:390 (4,5) - should probably be a slider like 3fix

[Fycho's Hard]
00:12:839 (1,2,3) - the hitsounds in this part confused me a bit... maybe remove the claps...?
Generally good.

[OblivioN's Normal]
00:32:667 (2,3,1) - personally, is it a bit too crowded for a Normal? (especially when you use 0.8x distance spacing)fix
01:06:838 (4) - obviously should be 1/2 later. you're not just hitting 1/1s when play some music, do you?fix
01:18:475 (4) - ^similar.fix

[Easy]
00:07:930 (2) - extend it by 1/2 感觉保持现在这样比较贴合音乐o.O
00:44:293 (1) - the blanket could be better

fix

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NatsumeRin 2013-12-08T08:10:02+00:00

rebubbled.

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Aurele 2013-12-10T03:48:20+00:00

Savelog

22:20 S o a p: so..would you like to check my map?lol
22:21 S o a p: wow you are looking my map!i like you so much! 
22:21 Gabe: Insane
22:21 Gabe: 00:11:930 (5) - I suggest you to add a new combo here, to indentify the slow down
22:21 S o a p: ok~
22:22 Gabe: 00:16:658 - I suggest you to add a finish here, to emphasize the bass like you did for 00:13:748 - 
22:23 Gabe: 00:31:940 (5,7) - make them perfectly stacked
22:24 Gabe: 00:41:394 (3,4) - would you prefer doing a blanket here instead? It's not so bad to be honest, but it could be improved with the blanket
22:25 S o a p: ;w;ok
22:26 Gabe: from 00:45:747 -  to 00:51:571 - , we can hear some drums, but, there's no hitsounds to emphasize those sounds. I highly suggest you to add drum samplesets on those loud sounds
22:27 Gabe: 01:11:929 (5,1) - you might wanna do a better stack here
22:29 S o a p: fixed
22:31 Gabe: on Fycho's Hard, 00:19:203 (6) - can you delete one reverse arrow? There's actually nothing to emphasize on 00:19:476 - , so it's better to delete one
22:32 S o a p: Hmm
22:32 S o a p: let me tell him xd
22:33 S o a p: anything else in fycho's hard xd?
22:33 Gabe: nope
22:33 S o a p: : )
22:35 Gabe: Obli's Normal: 00:57:384 (2,3) - Spacing inconsistency
22:36 S o a p: fixed~
22:37 Gabe: Talked about it with another team member: 00:09:021 (1,1) - /  00:11:930 (1,1) - / 00:55:026 (1,1) - those notes are placed too soon after the spinner. it would be prefered to end the spinner 1/4 before
22:39 S o a p: umm
22:39 S o a p: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1160514 like this?
22:39 S o a p: change to like this ;w;?
22:41 Gabe: seems fine
22:42 S o a p: ok~
22:42 S o a p: fixed
22:43 Gabe: you can now update

What we have fixed
Normal: Spacing inconsistency, objects appearing too soon after a spinner (3x)
Insane: Some blanket, stacks, added a new combo to indicate a slowdown.

S o a p

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S o a p 2013-12-10T03:55:33+00:00

Gabe wrote:

Savelog

22:20 S o a p: so..would you like to check my map?lol
22:21 S o a p: wow you are looking my map!i like you so much! 
22:21 Gabe: Insane
22:21 Gabe: 00:11:930 (5) - I suggest you to add a new combo here, to indentify the slow down
22:21 S o a p: ok~
22:22 Gabe: 00:16:658 - I suggest you to add a finish here, to emphasize the bass like you did for 00:13:748 - 
22:23 Gabe: 00:31:940 (5,7) - make them perfectly stacked
22:24 Gabe: 00:41:394 (3,4) - would you prefer doing a blanket here instead? It's not so bad to be honest, but it could be improved with the blanket
22:25 S o a p: ;w;ok
22:26 Gabe: from 00:45:747 -  to 00:51:571 - , we can hear some drums, but, there's no hitsounds to emphasize those sounds. I highly suggest you to add drum samplesets on those loud sounds
22:27 Gabe: 01:11:929 (5,1) - you might wanna do a better stack here
22:29 S o a p: fixed
22:31 Gabe: on Fycho's Hard, 00:19:203 (6) - can you delete one reverse arrow? There's actually nothing to emphasize on 00:19:476 - , so it's better to delete one
22:32 S o a p: Hmm
22:32 S o a p: let me tell him xd
22:33 S o a p: anything else in fycho's hard xd?
22:33 Gabe: nope
22:33 S o a p: : )
22:35 Gabe: Obli's Normal: 00:57:384 (2,3) - Spacing inconsistency
22:36 S o a p: fixed~
22:37 Gabe: Talked about it with another team member: 00:09:021 (1,1) - /  00:11:930 (1,1) - / 00:55:026 (1,1) - those notes are placed too soon after the spinner. it would be prefered to end the spinner 1/4 before
22:39 S o a p: umm
22:39 S o a p: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1160514 like this?
22:39 S o a p: change to like this ;w;?
22:41 Gabe: seems fine
22:42 S o a p: ok~
22:42 S o a p: fixed
22:43 Gabe: you can now update

What we have fixed
Normal: Spacing inconsistency, objects appearing too soon after a spinner (3x)
Insane: Some blanket, stacks, added a new combo to indicate a slowdown.

thank you gabe xd

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Aurele 2013-12-10T03:56:32+00:00

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