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Kuribayashi Minami - True Blue Traveler (TV Size)

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popner
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年12月8日星期日 at 22:20:02

Artist: Kuribayashi Minami
Title: True Blue Traveler (TV Size)
Source: Infinite Stratos 2
Tags: opening osuplayer111 Andrea
BPM: 170
Filesize: 15823kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Andrea's Normal (4.2 stars, 149 notes)
  2. Easy (2.54 stars, 96 notes)
  3. Hard (4.95 stars, 195 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 310 notes)
Download: Kuribayashi Minami - True Blue Traveler (TV Size)
Download: Kuribayashi Minami - True Blue Traveler (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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IS2 op True Blue Traveler
Easy by me - 100%
Normal by Andrea - 100%
Hard by me - 100%
Insane by me - 100%
Last edited by popner , edited 13 times in total.
fanzhen0019
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Andrea
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Andrea
Here's my difficulty as requested, enjoy.

http://puu.sh/4O5gD.osu

Make sure to add the same tags as my difficulty please, thank you.
Atrue
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Atrue
modder newbie..
直接用中文了。。
这是我觉得出现的硬性问题(problems) 这是我觉得出现的改进型问题(advises)
General
打起来比较爽快，找不大到错误和不足
就是有一点，进入歌曲的时间比较短（其实这个地方我不知道怎么设置。。求问。。）
Easy
总体没有找到什么值得改进之处，就是感觉滑条有点丑
00:03:680 (1) - 感觉这个滑条第一个音加口哨有点多余
00:44:621 (2) - 这个滑条感觉是不是可以放在别的方向上，感觉略显单调
Andrea’s Normal
没有太大的问题，就是似乎滑条很多都没有踏在人声上会有点卡手
Nothing too serous. But it's a little strange that some sliders are not on the lyric in the normal.
00:07:209 (1) - 往前移动1/4拍会比较好 | 1/4 beyond on the red line will be better
00:29:092 (2,3,4,5) - 不整齐，5往右摆一点弄得整齐一点 | move 5 a little right will be better looked
Hard
很爽快，很赞的hard，不过还是有一个滑条有点丑，问题不大
00:51:680 (1,1,2) - 强烈建议中间加一些过渡性的note，不然爽快的风格毁于此note
Insane
还是没有什么大问题
00:42:327 (2,3,4) - 三连有点多余


可能是我之前本来就比较习惯popner的map，所以打起来很顺手，找不出来什么问题，有点困了。。可能有些地方说的缺乏根据，请多指教~
:)
YoshinoSakura
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YoshinoSakura
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我新人不敢mod大神的图
popner
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azuretwinight wrote:

modder newbie..
直接用中文了。。
这是我觉得出现的硬性问题(problems) 这是我觉得出现的改进型问题(advises)
General
打起来比较爽快，找不大到错误和不足
就是有一点，进入歌曲的时间比较短（其实这个地方我不知道怎么设置。。求问。。）
Easy
总体没有找到什么值得改进之处，就是感觉滑条有点丑
00:03:680 (1) - 感觉这个滑条第一个音加口哨有点多余
00:44:621 (2) - 这个滑条感觉是不是可以放在别的方向上，感觉略显单调 我觉得还行啊
Hard
很爽快，很赞的hard，不过还是有一个滑条有点丑，问题不大
00:51:680 (1,1,2) - 强烈建议中间加一些过渡性的note，不然爽快的风格毁于此note 故意要在这里停的
Insane
还是没有什么大问题
00:42:327 (2,3,4) - 三连有点多余 I think it is fine


可能是我之前本来就比较习惯popner的map，所以打起来很顺手，找不出来什么问题，有点困了。。可能有些地方说的缺乏根据，请多指教~
:)
Thx for mod!
Natsu
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Natsu
HI~ popner M4M from your queue

General:
  • Clean

Insane:
  1. I dont know I feel OD 7 to easy when I was testing this maybe you want to try OD 8 for a little more challenge diff?
  2. 00:03:151 add whistle sound nice here after the little pause imo if you follow this suggestion apply in all the others diffs
  3. 00:54:504 add NC is consistent with your other diff also with your stanzas pattern
  4. 00:57:327 (5) - Also here maybe is just my prefference but start kiai with NC is alot better for me
  5. 01:14:268 mmm add Finish or a clap here I think this spot need more empathize If you follow my suggestion apply in all the others diffs
  6. 00:08:092 (1,1) - maybe slect both of they and move to x:148 y:192 cuz this one 00:08:092 (1) - was really hard to notice for me when I was testing maybe a little nazi but I think it will be more readable
  7. 00:26:268 (1,2) - yeah really nazi but maybe stack them perfect
  8. 00:56:621 (4) - maybe move this to x:256 this patterns play alot better if they finish in the middle of the grid
  9. 01:19:209 (3,4,5) - stack they perfect look kinda bad in game
  10. 01:20:092 what about a NC here since you did id on hard also is a little confuse to read without it in first plays my hit 100s was in here

Hard:
  1. 00:45:856 maybe just me but I preffer if you remove clap from here and just keep the whistle
  2. 00:55:915 maybe you forget to add NC here also is more consistent with the music If you do
  3. 00:57:327 (2) - same as Insane
  4. 00:09:151 maybe add a circle here and start the spinner in 00:09:239 follow better the song imo (If you like it apply on Insane too)
  5. 00:21:856 (3) - add NC here maybe you forget it
  6. 00:23:268 I suggest you to remove this beat like you did on insane since it dont have the same strong empathize like 00:21:856 (3,4,5,6,7) - thats why or maybe convert 00:23:092 (7,8) - in a slider
  7. 00:25:562 (3,1) - yeah nazi stac them perfect?
  8. 00:33:327 the actually way is fine but have a cool slider fiting the vocals like insane will be cool too
  9. 00:34:209 Im not sure but maybe this have to be NC for consistency with your insane?
  10. 01:08:268 (1) - remove NC and add NC here 01:08:621 (2) - following your stanza pattern also this 01:08:268 (1,2) - get better readable for me if you do

Andrea Normal:
  1. AR HP OD +1 maybe? actually the jump to hard is kinda big imo
  2. 00:09:327 Is better if you remove finish and add clap like the main mappeer did in this point also is consisten with the sound here 00:11:268 when you use clap
  3. 00:21:680 (3,4,5) - Finish here sound really annoying maybe change they for claps?
  4. 00:14:974 (1,2,3) - I dont like so much your flow here the transition from 1 to 2 and 2 to 3 is kinda unnatural maybe try this way:
    SPOILER
  5. 00:16:386 the music here is kinda important imo maybe do you want to add a circle with whistle there
  6. 00:25:209 (5,1) - swap NC?
  7. 00:33:151 remove this beat or convert 00:32:974 (2,3) - in a slider the reason is 00:33:151 (3) - dont have the same empathize as 00:32:974 (2,4) - and it feel weird when you play
  8. 00:55:915 (1) - about the spinner in my opinion dont fit to much with the song I suggest you to map this part some important sounds in there
  9. 01:17:974 (3,1) - unstack them is kinda weird are just 2 stacked beats in all the diff the other one is in 01:19:562 (4,1) - and they play really bad and unexpected for new players IMO
  10. 01:26:268 (5) - Stack this one with 01:28:209 (3) - perfect nazi yes :3 /me runs

Easy:
  1. maybe HP and OD 2 ? 1 is really low imo
  2. 00:00:857 add whistle in the tail? you did on all the others diffs
  3. 00:23:445 (1,2) - Fix the distance? is little but noticeable
  4. 00:31:915 (4) - same as above with previous beat
  5. 00:31:915 (4) - also maybe do you want to add NC so the combo is not so long for long time imo

GL popner hope this help you and take a star
Skystar
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Skystar
timing check:
1. Offset: 857ms BPM: 170.00
popner
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Mod

Natsu wrote:

HI~ popner M4M from your queue

General:
  • Clean

Insane:
  1. I dont know I feel OD 7 to easy when I was testing this maybe you want to try OD 8 for a little more challenge diff?
  2. 00:03:151 add whistle sound nice here after the little pause imo if you follow this suggestion apply in all the others diffs
  3. 00:54:504 add NC is consistent with your other diff also with your stanzas pattern
  4. 00:57:327 (5) - Also here maybe is just my prefference but start kiai with NC is alot better for me
  5. 01:14:268 mmm add Finish or a clap here I think this spot need more empathize If you follow my suggestion apply in all the others diffs
  6. 00:08:092 (1,1) - maybe slect both of they and move to x:148 y:192 cuz this one 00:08:092 (1) - was really hard to notice for me when I was testing maybe a little nazi but I think it will be more readable
  7. 00:26:268 (1,2) - yeah really nazi but maybe stack them perfect
  8. 00:56:621 (4) - maybe move this to x:256 this patterns play alot better if they finish in the middle of the grid
  9. 01:19:209 (3,4,5) - stack they perfect look kinda bad in game
  10. 01:20:092 what about a NC here since you did id on hard also is a little confuse to read without it in first plays my hit 100s was in here

Hard:
  1. 00:45:856 maybe just me but I preffer if you remove clap from here and just keep the whistle
  2. 00:55:915 maybe you forget to add NC here also is more consistent with the music If you do
  3. 00:57:327 (2) - same as Insane
  4. 00:09:151 maybe add a circle here and start the spinner in 00:09:239 follow better the song imo (If you like it apply on Insane too)
  5. 00:21:856 (3) - add NC here maybe you forget it
  6. 00:23:268 I suggest you to remove this beat like you did on insane since it dont have the same strong empathize like 00:21:856 (3,4,5,6,7) - thats why or maybe convert 00:23:092 (7,8) - in a slider
  7. 00:25:562 (3,1) - yeah nazi stac them perfect?
  8. 00:33:327 the actually way is fine but have a cool slider fiting the vocals like insane will be cool too
  9. 00:34:209 Im not sure but maybe this have to be NC for consistency with your insane?
  10. 01:08:268 (1) - remove NC and add NC here 01:08:621 (2) - following your stanza pattern also this 01:08:268 (1,2) - get better readable for me if you do

Andrea Normal:
  1. AR HP OD +1 maybe? actually the jump to hard is kinda big imo
  2. 00:09:327 Is better if you remove finish and add clap like the main mappeer did in this point also is consisten with the sound here 00:11:268 when you use clap
  3. 00:21:680 (3,4,5) - Finish here sound really annoying maybe change they for claps?
  4. 00:14:974 (1,2,3) - I dont like so much your flow here the transition from 1 to 2 and 2 to 3 is kinda unnatural maybe try this way:
    SPOILER
  5. 00:16:386 the music here is kinda important imo maybe do you want to add a circle with whistle there
  6. 00:25:209 (5,1) - swap NC?
  7. 00:33:151 remove this beat or convert 00:32:974 (2,3) - in a slider the reason is 00:33:151 (3) - dont have the same empathize as 00:32:974 (2,4) - and it feel weird when you play
  8. 00:55:915 (1) - about the spinner in my opinion dont fit to much with the song I suggest you to map this part some important sounds in there
  9. 01:17:974 (3,1) - unstack them is kinda weird are just 2 stacked beats in all the diff the other one is in 01:19:562 (4,1) - and they play really bad and unexpected for new players IMO
  10. 01:26:268 (5) - Stack this one with 01:28:209 (3) - perfect nazi yes :3 /me runs

Easy:
  1. maybe HP and OD 2 ? 1 is really low imo
  2. 00:00:857 add whistle in the tail? you did on all the others diffs
  3. 00:23:445 (1,2) - Fix the distance? is little but noticeable
  4. 00:31:915 (4) - same as above with previous beat
  5. 00:31:915 (4) - also maybe do you want to add NC so the combo is not so long for long time imo

GL popner hope this help you and take a star

Fixed the hitsounds and NCs. Thx for mod!

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

timing check:
1. Offset: 857ms BPM: 170.00
Thx, updated.
Princess God
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Princess God
嗯，先占坑，明天给
Hollow Wings
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Hollow Wings
from q ww

Insane

明明是bpm170为什么ar8和ar9这图打起来感觉都差不多。。。怎么做到的哭瞎了OVQ
  1. 00:25:915 (6,7) - 换一下？感觉顺手，还可以遮挡坑人
  2. 01:20:092 (5) - 果然还是建议nc，感觉后面几个最好也nc。。。

    看了三遍什么都没摸出来orz

Hard

1 unsnap
  1. 00:56:974 (1,2) - nc移动一下？
依旧看了三遍依旧什么都没摸出来不我真的不是打酱油orz

Andrea's Normal

  1. 01:26:268 (5,6) - personally i don't prefer this composing... maybe put note 6(edit) in middle and arrange ds to those 3 notes after it?
others r fine

Easy

好多蚯蚓我喜欢OVQ

不要打我

bla gl
popner
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Hollow Wings wrote:

from q ww

Insane

明明是bpm170为什么ar8和ar9这图打起来感觉都差不多。。。怎么做到的哭瞎了OVQ
  1. 00:25:915 (6,7) - 换一下？感觉顺手，还可以遮挡坑人 觉得现在的好一点
  2. 01:20:092 (5) - 果然还是建议nc，感觉后面几个最好也nc。。。加了

    看了三遍什么都没摸出来orz

Hard

1 unsnap fixed
  1. 00:56:974 (1,2) - nc移动一下？
ok
依旧看了三遍依旧什么都没摸出来不我真的不是打酱油orz

Easy

好多蚯蚓我喜欢OVQ

不要打我

bla gl
Thanks for mod!
Princess God
135 posts
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Princess God
嗯，说好的mod
觉得必要的地方会用*标注
什么？你说上面还有一楼为何不用？？好吧，手滑了（飞）

Insane
00:08:621 (1) -
似乎这样更符合节奏趋势
00:11:621 (2) - nc
00:21:856 (1,2,3) - 应该算是nazimod？尾部全部5%音量
00:25:562 (4,5,6,7) - 顺序改成6,5,7,4，如果是想突出vocal，可以考虑6,5,4,7，你后面也用了类似的排列
00:31:915 (1) - 减短一个四分拍长度，
并且00:32:268 (2,3) - 变成一个滑条，也许是什么技巧？
00:56:974 (1,2,3,4,5) - 全部nc，后宫什么的，嗯
01:20:092 (5,6,7) - 全部都nc
01:27:504 (1) - flip horizontally

Hard
00:23:092 (7,8) - 变成滑条，最好滑条1.5倍速，并且8的位置消音
00:49:562 (3,4) - 这里明显和1,2的节奏不是对称的，用空间上对称的排列大丈夫？
01:04:386 (1,2) - 合并成一个三点式滑条，实在看不出你这里区别对待的意义OTL

Andrea·s Normal
00:54:856 (2) - move to 00:55:033，I think it is okay to put some objects on this kind of time sections innormal diffs
01:27:504 (1,2) - How about using normal hit finish here?

Easy
01:02:974 (1) - 头部clap音效
01:04:386 (3) - 头部normal finish音效
01:18:151 (2) - 头部clap音效

Over
popner
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Nightcore Princess G wrote:

嗯，说好的mod
觉得必要的地方会用*标注
什么？你说上面还有一楼为何不用？？好吧，手滑了（飞）

Insane
00:08:621 (1) -
似乎这样更符合节奏趋势
感觉差别不大
00:11:621 (2) - nc nope
00:21:856 (1,2,3) - 应该算是nazimod？尾部全部5%音量 没必要吧，尾部音也挺强
00:25:562 (4,5,6,7) - 顺序改成6,5,7,4，如果是想突出vocal，可以考虑6,5,4,7，你后面也用了类似的排列 不喜欢
00:31:915 (1) - 减短一个四分拍长度，
并且00:32:268 (2,3) - 变成一个滑条，也许是什么技巧？ ok
00:56:974 (1,2,3,4,5) - 全部nc，后宫什么的，嗯 。。
01:20:092 (5,6,7) - 全部都nc ok
01:27:504 (1) - flip horizontally ok

Hard
00:23:092 (7,8) - 变成滑条，最好滑条1.5倍速，并且8的位置消音 不太喜欢这种
00:49:562 (3,4) - 这里明显和1,2的节奏不是对称的，用空间上对称的排列大丈夫？ 就是要这种感觉
01:04:386 (1,2) - 合并成一个三点式滑条，实在看不出你这里区别对待的意义OTL 节奏太空了，所以加节奏

Easy
01:02:974 (1) - 头部clap音效 是finish吧
01:04:386 (3) - 头部normal finish音效 感觉意义不明
01:18:151 (2) - 头部clap音效 有clap啊。。

Over
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki


Mod as requeset?

[General]
  1. None

[Easy]
  1. 00:14:974 (1,1) - 头上加个finish？
  2. 00:17:445 - 这里我真心想加一个note
  3. 00:31:915 (4) - NC？

[Andrea's Normal]
  1. WHERE IS THE VIDEO？
  2. 00:14:974 (1) - finish?
  3. 00:16:386 - I prefer to add a note here
  4. 00:17:798 (1) - reverse the slider?

[Hard]
  1. 01:02:092 (4) - move to 219,352?

[Insane]
  1. 00:33:327 (1) - esu

最后祝你身体健康
stared
popner
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[Minakami Yuki] wrote:



Mod as requeset?

[General]
  1. None

[Easy]
  1. 00:14:974 (1,1) - 头上加个finish？ 虽然这里音效单薄，但音乐里确实没有啊
  2. 00:17:445 - 这里我真心想加一个note 似乎可行
  3. 00:31:915 (4) - NC？added

[Andrea's Normal]
  1. WHERE IS THE VIDEO？ fixed
  2. 00:14:974 (1) - finish?
  3. 00:16:386 - I prefer to add a note here
  4. 00:17:798 (1) - reverse the slider?

[Hard]
  1. 01:02:092 (4) - move to 219,352?

[Insane]
  1. 00:33:327 (1) - esu

最后祝你身体健康
stared

祝我身体健康
Thx for mod and star.
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
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Joined March 2009
Guy
Hi! From your modding queue :3

yay, Infinite Stratos xD

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. This map is suddenly started. so I recommend to add Audio Lead-in "1500" (or "1000") in all diffs.
  2. Please uncheck the Enable countdown and Letterbox during breaks in all diffs.

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:151 (1) - Add whistle to slider repeat. for strong voice place and piano sound.
  2. 00:05:621 (2) - hmm I hope add whistle to slider end. because I can hear big piano sound here. It is really fit the song IMO.
  3. 00:17:798 (1) - Add finish to slider head. exist big cymbal sound here.
  4. 00:22:915 (4) - Add finish instead of clap to slider end? it sound 00:23:092 - is long. so finish is fit the sound.
  5. 00:34:386 (2,3) - Ctrl+G. I want to jump pattern placement here.
  6. 00:52:739 - I suggest to add green line here (Volume 30%) and add whislte this note 00:52:739 (1) - .

    pro x_x

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:151 (1) - Add whistle to slider repeat.
  2. 00:17:798 (1) - Add finish to slider head.
  3. 01:08:621 (1) - Stack to 01:08:268 (1) - this slider's end? (like a 00:57:327 (1) - )

[Andrea's Normal]
  1. 00:08:974 (3) - Add whistle to slider end?

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:857 (1,2) - It looks random placement a little. make a blanket?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:17:798 (1) - Add finish.
  3. 00:44:621 (2) - I think not fit clap this slider. Change to whistle?
Good luck popner and Andrea :)
popner
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Guy wrote:

Hi! From your modding queue :3

yay, Infinite Stratos xD

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. This map is suddenly started. so I recommend to add Audio Lead-in "1500" (or "1000") in all diffs. used 1000
  2. Please uncheck the Enable countdown and Letterbox during breaks in all diffs. fixed

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:151 (1) - Add whistle to slider repeat. for strong voice place and piano sound. added
  2. 00:05:621 (2) - hmm I hope add whistle to slider end. because I can hear big piano sound here. It is really fit the song IMO. added
  3. 00:17:798 (1) - Add finish to slider head. exist big cymbal sound here. added
  4. 00:22:915 (4) - Add finish instead of clap to slider end? it sound 00:23:092 - is long. so finish is fit the sound. nope, I prefer current one
  5. 00:34:386 (2,3) - Ctrl+G. I want to jump pattern placement here. good idea
  6. 00:52:739 - I suggest to add green line here (Volume 30%) and add whislte this note 00:52:739 (1) - . added finish

    pro x_x

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:151 (1) - Add whistle to slider repeat. added
  2. 00:17:798 (1) - Add finish to slider head. added
  3. 01:08:621 (1) - Stack to 01:08:268 (1) - this slider's end? (like a 00:57:327 (1) - ) nope

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:857 (1,2) - It looks random placement a little. make a blanket? ok
    SPOILER
  2. 00:17:798 (1) - Add finish. added
  3. 00:44:621 (2) - I think not fit clap this slider. Change to whistle? ok
Good luck popner and Andrea :)
Thx for mod!
Nymph
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EDIT: bubbled
Andrea
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Andrea
Thanks for the mods everyone, fixed a lot of stuff. ^^

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: True Blue Traveler.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57151
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:True Blue Traveler (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:True Blue Traveler (TV Size)
Artist:Kuribayashi Minami
ArtistUnicode:栗林みな実
Creator:popner
Version:Andrea's Normal
Source:Infinite Stratos 2
Tags:opening osuplayer111 Andrea
BeatmapID:312286
BeatmapSetID:120000

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

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popner
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popner
updated
Gloria Guard
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Gloria Guard
Hi, m4m for you're modding queue
and I'm sorry this map already bubbled. but I try this map modding.


[Genera]

Fine


[Easy]

■ 00:54:856 (1,2,3) I think a more improve slider patterns flow this part, 00:55:209 (2) this is slider
curve is more natural flow imo.
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■ 01:02:621 Hmm, why don't add note this part?, I think a little suddenly here. You already add this part sound notes
by 00:58:386 and 00:59:798 (4) here.
■ 01:05:445 ^
■ 01:08:268 This is part same, I think add note is better sound imo.
■ 01:11:445 (1) Hmm, This is slider head can't hear finish sound. remove finish.


[Andrea's Normal]

■ 00:07:209 (1) This is slider move by 00:07:033 because I hear lyrics rhythm here.
■ 00:29:092 (2,3) I think a lyrics rhythm follow is better imo. well, you try this lyrics rhythm.
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[Hard]

■ 00:56:974 (1,1) Hmm, This is 00:56:974 (1) slider end hidden by 00:57:327 (1) slider is bad imo.
I think a change this slider patterns is better imo.
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[Insane]

■ 00:33:327 (1) This is slider shape a little bad. If you agree I suggestion a more improve slider shape.
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■ 00:45:680 (4,1,2,3,4,5) Hmm I understand this slider rhythm 1/3 and stream. but I don't agree 00:45:680 (1) note hidden.
and players confuse this slider end stream rhythm. If you change this pattern. try this.
SPOILER
■ 00:54:504 (1,2,3,4) Can you try this pattern shape?
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Sorry, my poor modding. I hope you're map my modding helpful
Good luck :3
popner
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Topic Starter
popner

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi, m4m for you're modding queue
and I'm sorry this map already bubbled. but I try this map modding.


[Genera]

Fine


[Easy]

■ 00:54:856 (1,2,3) I think a more improve slider patterns flow this part, 00:55:209 (2) this is slider
curve is more natural flow imo. I think it doesn't make a difference
SPOILER
■ 01:02:621 Hmm, why don't add note this part?, I think a little suddenly here. You already add this part sound notes
by 00:58:386 and 00:59:798 (4) here. It is because I want to give the player a break, or the constantly clicking will be hard for beginner players.
■ 01:05:445 ^
■ 01:08:268 This is part same, I think add note is better sound imo.
■ 01:11:445 (1) Hmm, This is slider head can't hear finish sound. remove finish. Sorry, but that will makes finishs inconsistent

[Hard]

■ 00:56:974 (1,1) Hmm, This is 00:56:974 (1) slider end hidden by 00:57:327 (1) slider is bad imo. I don't think so. The shape is made like this intentionally
I think a change this slider patterns is better imo.
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[Insane]

■ 00:33:327 (1) This is slider shape a little bad. If you agree I suggestion a more improve slider shape. I think mine is better
SPOILER
■ 00:45:680 (4,1,2,3,4,5) Hmm I understand this slider rhythm 1/3 and stream. but I don't agree 00:45:680 (1) note hidden.
and players confuse this slider end stream rhythm. If you change this pattern. try this. That's why there is a manually stack there - it's not a hidden note
SPOILER
■ 00:54:504 (1,2,3,4) Can you try this pattern shape? that's too normal for me
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Sorry, my poor modding. I hope you're map my modding helpful
Good luck :3
Thx for mod but no change for now. Waiting for Andrea's response.
Andrea
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Andrea
No changes from me as well, sorry.

Thanks for modding though!
Kurai
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Kurai

Dat face

[Insane]
  1. 00:22:915 (4,1) - It looks quite ugly to me, I wouldn't put the red slider under the purple one :/
    Maybe try to move it a bit to the left like this ?
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popner
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Fixed!
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Rakuen
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Rakuen
恭喜 :)
popner
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Thx :)
Konei
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Konei
Is it just me or is the mp3 like really quiet? o.o
Andrea
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Andrea
Yay it's ranked <3
Guy
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congrats :)
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