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[General]
Files:
Background dimensions are strange. You should change it to the pic Brian was showing.. but instead of .png, use this jpg | http://puu.sh/5sqEQ.jpg | This will also make your storyboard look a lot nicer as your current image is zoomed in way too far.
Your mp3 is 320kbs. Convert it to 192kb. or just use this already converted one I made | http://puu.sh/5sqKf.mp3
Your combo number for 6 is backwards. As I already mentioned that to you | http://puu.sh/5sqRM.png
Sliderslide for your NC:1 I would recommend be a blank file like the Soft and the Drum.
Combo Colours:
I'm not sure about Combo 2.. Kind of strange having one reddish color and the rest are all blue. how about a light blue/gray instead? maybe: 68,86,208?
Tags:
Add | Irreversible VinylDash14
Countdown:
There is no point to having it checked, go ahead and turn it off on all the difficulties.
Inconsistency in Countdown: - [Avalanche] : 0 - [Irre's Snow] : 1 - [Vinyl's Blizzard] : 1
[Irre]
[General]
Files:
Background dimensions are strange. You should change it to the pic Brian was showing.. but instead of .png, use this jpg | http://puu.sh/5sqEQ.jpg | This will also make your storyboard look a lot nicer as your current image is zoomed in way too far.
Your mp3 is 320kbs. Convert it to 192kb. or just use this already converted one I made | http://puu.sh/5sqKf.mp3
Your combo number for 6 is backwards. As I already mentioned that to you | http://puu.sh/5sqRM.png
Sliderslide for your NC:1 I would recommend be a blank file like the Soft and the Drum.
Combo Colours:
I'm not sure about Combo 2.. Kind of strange having one reddish color and the rest are all blue. how about a light blue/gray instead? maybe: 68,86,208?
Tags:
Add | Irreversible VinylDash14
Countdown:
There is no point to having it checked, go ahead and turn it off on all the difficulties.
Inconsistency in Countdown: - [Avalanche] : 0 - [Irre's Snow] : 1 - [Vinyl's Blizzard] : 1
[Irre]
- 00:05:873 (1,2) - how about moving this up to create more of a circular flow instead of the sharp u-turn from the previous 2 notes?
- 00:25:385 (5,6,7) - how about doing one of your cool 3/4 reverses here? Much like what you have at 2:00:142 -
- 01:04:166 - Feels so lonely without a circle here, although I see why you skipped it
- 01:14:898 - I'll only mention this once. When you have this pattern come up, it might actually sound better if you had a circle here, since the 1/2 lead-in really invites it, as well as the music itself makes a big impact here.
- 01:18:800 (3) - Circle? | This will add some needed lead-in to the reverse slider you have after this.
- 02:00:142 (2,3) - this 3/4 gap plays very odd. I'm thinking it might be better to stick to a full 1/1 gap here like you do with 02:00:995 (4,5) -
- 02:06:361 (2,1) - nice jump <3 | I don't think it fits in a normal though.
- 02:17:093 (5) - How about rotating this just a bit more anti-clockwise so you can adjust (6) a bit better to flow with (1)
- 02:39:531 (3) - When I was testing this.. I actually hit this as a 100, thinking it would probably be placed 1/2 later. What do you think? Of course if you do this, it will probably change the whole last bit of the map, so I'm not sure. Maybe some way of making it more clear you'll be using 1/1s instead of 1.5/1s.
--- - http://puu.sh/5ssUa.png My... god... what's going on here Irre? (hah... I'm horrible when it comes to lame rhymes)
- 00:25:873 (1,2,3) - Try moving this out of the corner a bit more. I noticed you had to move the (3) up a bit to avoid touching the bottom of the screen, so if you just moved them all up more, you could probably get the symmetry correct by letting the (3) go down to its proper position. Adjusting 00:28:556 (4,5) - afterwards shouldn't be a problem.
- 00:43:434 (2) - considering you have been starting this section 1/2 later everytime, I still think it would be best to start this 1/2 later as well. I'm talking about the gap between 00:38:312 (2,1) - for example would still be used at this spot of the map too.
- 00:46:117 (2,3) - same idea as above. Though this will need a bit of fixing to avoid using the slider tick, as it doesn't sound nice. (you could lower the volume of it)
- 00:52:703 (1) - move this back to 00:51:971 - People will be listening to the chime thing more at this point, and will be able to predict 1.5/1 gaps
- You could easily do the above with the rest of the section, but it seems you have an idea of how you want it, so I'll leave this alone.
- 01:17:337 (2) - delete? | It doesn't really fit in how you've been following the drums.
- 02:17:093 (7) - NC?
- 02:20:507 (1) - you should NC here, that means, removing the previous NC as well
- 02:27:581 (3) - Not sure about this slider. It starts on a no audible sounds besides the small tick in the background, which isn't worth trying to map. I would just suggest deleting this and adding a circle at 02:27:825 -
- 02:32:459 (4) - same idea as above. maybe delete this?
- 02:58:312 (2,3) - since you have a nice little curve in this (3) slider, how about using it to blanket around the (2)?
Nice stuff
- 00:19:288 (4,1,2) - I really don't like this jump from (1) to (2). Very unpredictable. If you want to keep the jump, have some build-up from (4) to (1) by moving them further apart from each other. (Irre taught me this silly technique, so blame him )
- 00:20:264 (3) - I'm actually wondering if you are trying to follow that one chime. It seems to hit more at 00:20:142 - than where your (3) is. Maybe you might want to map this a bit different otherwise it might make hitting the notes a bit too strange.
- 00:31:239 (7) - Remove the clap effect. sounds better without it.
- 00:32:946 (6) - Try removing the clap here as well.
- 00:39:044 (7) - Finish instead of Clap.
- 00:44:410 (6) - same as above, just on the end of the slider.
- Overall your kiai time is very nice. A few circles don't really seem needed, but it is an insane I guess, so they're fine.
- 01:51:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm having trouble trying to figure out what you were actually mapping to here. I'll assume you had something in mind.. It just sounds strange in my ears. same goes for 01:59:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - No suggestions, just curious is all.
- 03:02:703 (2,3,4) - This L shape seems unnecessary. Try x68 y136 on (2) | x108 y272 for (3) and x248 y300 for (4)
- 01:29:044 (2,3,4) - go ahead and flip this around as well, since it's a copy.
- 01:35:629 (1) - and 03:09:288 (7) - Should NC or take the NC away to be consistent.