Makkon - Winterglade

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Lanturn
M4M~

[General]
Files:
Background dimensions are strange. You should change it to the pic Brian was showing.. but instead of .png, use this jpg | http://puu.sh/5sqEQ.jpg | This will also make your storyboard look a lot nicer as your current image is zoomed in way too far.

Your mp3 is 320kbs. Convert it to 192kb. or just use this already converted one I made | http://puu.sh/5sqKf.mp3

Your combo number for 6 is backwards. As I already mentioned that to you | http://puu.sh/5sqRM.png

Sliderslide for your NC:1 I would recommend be a blank file like the Soft and the Drum.

Combo Colours:
I'm not sure about Combo 2.. Kind of strange having one reddish color and the rest are all blue. how about a light blue/gray instead? maybe: 68,86,208?

Tags:
Add | Irreversible VinylDash14

Countdown:
There is no point to having it checked, go ahead and turn it off on all the difficulties.
Inconsistency in Countdown: - [Avalanche] : 0 - [Irre's Snow] : 1 - [Vinyl's Blizzard] : 1

[Irre]
  1. 00:05:873 (1,2) - how about moving this up to create more of a circular flow instead of the sharp u-turn from the previous 2 notes?
  2. 00:25:385 (5,6,7) - how about doing one of your cool 3/4 reverses here? Much like what you have at 2:00:142 -
  3. 01:04:166 - Feels so lonely without a circle here, although I see why you skipped it :(
  4. 01:14:898 - I'll only mention this once. When you have this pattern come up, it might actually sound better if you had a circle here, since the 1/2 lead-in really invites it, as well as the music itself makes a big impact here.
  5. 01:18:800 (3) - Circle? | This will add some needed lead-in to the reverse slider you have after this.
  6. 02:00:142 (2,3) - this 3/4 gap plays very odd. I'm thinking it might be better to stick to a full 1/1 gap here like you do with 02:00:995 (4,5) -
  7. 02:06:361 (2,1) - nice jump <3 | I don't think it fits in a normal though.
  8. 02:17:093 (5) - How about rotating this just a bit more anti-clockwise so you can adjust (6) a bit better to flow with (1)
  9. 02:39:531 (3) - When I was testing this.. I actually hit this as a 100, thinking it would probably be placed 1/2 later. What do you think? Of course if you do this, it will probably change the whole last bit of the map, so I'm not sure. Maybe some way of making it more clear you'll be using 1/1s instead of 1.5/1s.
    ---
  10. http://puu.sh/5ssUa.png My... god... what's going on here Irre? (hah... I'm horrible when it comes to lame rhymes)


[Vinyl]
  1. 00:25:873 (1,2,3) - Try moving this out of the corner a bit more. I noticed you had to move the (3) up a bit to avoid touching the bottom of the screen, so if you just moved them all up more, you could probably get the symmetry correct by letting the (3) go down to its proper position. Adjusting 00:28:556 (4,5) - afterwards shouldn't be a problem.
  2. 00:43:434 (2) - considering you have been starting this section 1/2 later everytime, I still think it would be best to start this 1/2 later as well. I'm talking about the gap between 00:38:312 (2,1) - for example would still be used at this spot of the map too.
  3. 00:46:117 (2,3) - same idea as above. Though this will need a bit of fixing to avoid using the slider tick, as it doesn't sound nice. (you could lower the volume of it)
  4. 00:52:703 (1) - move this back to 00:51:971 - People will be listening to the chime thing more at this point, and will be able to predict 1.5/1 gaps
  5. You could easily do the above with the rest of the section, but it seems you have an idea of how you want it, so I'll leave this alone.
  6. 01:17:337 (2) - delete? | It doesn't really fit in how you've been following the drums.
  7. 02:17:093 (7) - NC?
  8. 02:20:507 (1) - you should NC here, that means, removing the previous NC as well
  9. 02:27:581 (3) - Not sure about this slider. It starts on a no audible sounds besides the small tick in the background, which isn't worth trying to map. I would just suggest deleting this and adding a circle at 02:27:825 -
  10. 02:32:459 (4) - same idea as above. maybe delete this?
  11. 02:58:312 (2,3) - since you have a nice little curve in this (3) slider, how about using it to blanket around the (2)?

    Nice stuff


[Avalanche]
  1. 00:19:288 (4,1,2) - I really don't like this jump from (1) to (2). Very unpredictable. If you want to keep the jump, have some build-up from (4) to (1) by moving them further apart from each other. (Irre taught me this silly technique, so blame him :P)
  2. 00:20:264 (3) - I'm actually wondering if you are trying to follow that one chime. It seems to hit more at 00:20:142 - than where your (3) is. Maybe you might want to map this a bit different otherwise it might make hitting the notes a bit too strange.
  3. 00:31:239 (7) - Remove the clap effect. sounds better without it.
  4. 00:32:946 (6) - Try removing the clap here as well.
  5. 00:39:044 (7) - Finish instead of Clap.
  6. 00:44:410 (6) - same as above, just on the end of the slider.
  7. Overall your kiai time is very nice. A few circles don't really seem needed, but it is an insane I guess, so they're fine.
  8. 01:51:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm having trouble trying to figure out what you were actually mapping to here. I'll assume you had something in mind.. It just sounds strange in my ears. same goes for 01:59:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - No suggestions, just curious is all.
  9. 03:02:703 (2,3,4) - This L shape seems unnecessary. Try x68 y136 on (2) | x108 y272 for (3) and x248 y300 for (4)
  10. 01:29:044 (2,3,4) - go ahead and flip this around as well, since it's a copy.
  11. 01:35:629 (1) - and 03:09:288 (7) - Should NC or take the NC away to be consistent.


Sure.. I think this is good enough. Good luck :3

Topic Starter
Itachi_Uchiha

Lanturn wrote:

M4M~

[General]
Files:
Background dimensions are strange. You should change it to the pic Brian was showing.. but instead of .png, use this jpg | http://puu.sh/5sqEQ.jpg | This will also make your storyboard look a lot nicer as your current image is zoomed in way too far. - Changed - Had to mess the SB a bit up for it to fit^^

Your mp3 is 320kbs. Convert it to 192kb. or just use this already converted one I made | http://puu.sh/5sqKf.mp3 - Thanks^^ Dunno why I added a 320kbs .mp3 - Converted it myself since my browser is bugging me with downloading .mp3

Your combo number for 6 is backwards. As I already mentioned that to you | http://puu.sh/5sqRM.png - Added a whole different default.png set

Sliderslide for your NC:1 I would recommend be a blank file like the Soft and the Drum. - I thought I already added them :O

Combo Colours:
I'm not sure about Combo 2.. Kind of strange having one reddish color and the rest are all blue. how about a light blue/gray instead? maybe: 68,86,208? - True... I changed the red one to a grey/blue one

Tags:
Add | Irreversible VinylDash14 - Yay Metadata stuff :D

Countdown:
There is no point to having it checked, go ahead and turn it off on all the difficulties.
Inconsistency in Countdown: - [Avalanche] : 0 - [Irre's Snow] : 1 - [Vinyl's Blizzard] : 1 - Odd... I applied this to all diffs, atleast I thought it

[Avalanche]
  1. 00:19:288 (4,1,2) - I really don't like this jump from (1) to (2). Very unpredictable. If you want to keep the jump, have some build-up from (4) to (1) by moving them further apart from each other. (Irre taught me this silly technique, so blame him :P) - Reduced the Spacing a bit
  2. 00:20:264 (3) - I'm actually wondering if you are trying to follow that one chime. It seems to hit more at 00:20:142 - than where your (3) is. Maybe you might want to map this a bit different otherwise it might make hitting the notes a bit too strange. - It´s more a filler^^
  3. 00:31:239 (7) - Remove the clap effect. sounds better without it. - Nah, I like the Hitsounding as it is^^
  4. 00:32:946 (6) - Try removing the clap here as well. - See above
  5. 00:39:044 (7) - Finish instead of Clap. - Again^^
  6. 00:44:410 (6) - same as above, just on the end of the slider. - And again xD
  7. Overall your kiai time is very nice. A few circles don't really seem needed, but it is an insane I guess, so they're fine. - Thank you :D
  8. 01:51:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm having trouble trying to figure out what you were actually mapping to here. I'll assume you had something in mind.. It just sounds strange in my ears. same goes for 01:59:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - No suggestions, just curious is all. - I dunno why everyone don´t hear the Glockenspiel which I mapped on :O
  9. 03:02:703 (2,3,4) - This L shape seems unnecessary. Try x68 y136 on (2) | x108 y272 for (3) and x248 y300 for (4) - Thanks^^ Added
  10. 01:29:044 (2,3,4) - go ahead and flip this around as well, since it's a copy. - here too^^
  11. 01:35:629 (1) - and 03:09:288 (7) - Should NC or take the NC away to be consistent. - I took it away^^


Sure.. I think this is good enough. Good luck :3 - Thanks :D

Topic Starter
Itachi_Uchiha
Update

Deleted unnecessary files (sb\bg.jpg and sb\black.jpg)

Added a new default0-9.png set (old one was hard to read)

Re-sized reversearrow.png to 128x128 without changing the reverse-arrow itself so that AI mod don't bug me

Added a re-sized BG and changed the SB a bit so that it fits

Added a 192kbs .mp3

Deleted all Meta-Tag errors

fixed the "unsnapped object" errors on Irres diff
Kardet
Mod as per Itachi_Uchiha's request. :D

[General]

I think you could adjust the reverse arrow to be more than just white, maybe with light blue around the outside? Something like this, but a bit more professional.

[Vinyl's Blizzard]

02:20:020 (3,4,5,6) - Make these a bit more circular rather than straight sliders?
02:30:751 (2) - Ctrl+g this here, makes it feel a bit better to me.
03:01:239 (8) - Maybe replace this with two circles?

[Avalanche]

00:34:654 (3) - Just looking at this slider I think you could make it a bit more smooth. Maybe copy this one 00:36:117 (3) - and ctrl+g?
00:47:337 (1,2,3) - I think these bits could flow a bit more if you put them like this:
01:07:581 (3) - Removing this note gives a better sound and flow imo.
01:14:654 (2) - ^
03:08:312 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think if you spread these out a tiny bit more it would play better, give more emphasis on the song ending.

My first mod so disregard anything you don't agree with. :P
Good luck getting this ranked. :D
Topic Starter
Itachi_Uchiha

Kardet wrote:

Mod as per Itachi_Uchiha's request. :D

[General]

I think you could adjust the reverse arrow to be more than just white, maybe with light blue around the outside? Something like this, but a bit more professional.
- Nice Idea - Gonna change it

[Avalanche]

00:34:654 (3) - Just looking at this slider I think you could make it a bit more smooth. Maybe copy this one 00:36:117 (3) - and ctrl+g?
- I wanted it to be a sharp curved Slider^^
00:47:337 (1,2,3) - I think these bits could flow a bit more if you put them like this:
- Nah, THe gap between the repeater and the next note would be too big then
01:07:581 (3) - Removing this note gives a better sound and flow imo. - Nah, it would destroy my hitsound consistency
01:14:654 (2) - ^ - See above
03:08:312 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think if you spread these out a tiny bit more it would play better, give more emphasis on the song ending. - Nice Idea, gonna change it

My first mod so disregard anything you don't agree with. :P - THanks for it :D
Good luck getting this ranked. :D - Thanks :D
Irreversible

Lanturn wrote:

M4M~

[Irre]
  1. 00:05:873 (1,2) - how about moving this up to create more of a circular flow instead of the sharp u-turn from the previous 2 notes? sorry what?
  2. 00:25:385 (5,6,7) - how about doing one of your cool 3/4 reverses here? Much like what you have at 2:00:142 - love that idea
  3. 01:04:166 - Feels so lonely without a circle here, although I see why you skipped it :(oh? i can't hear smth
  4. 01:14:898 - I'll only mention this once. When you have this pattern come up, it might actually sound better if you had a circle here, since the 1/2 lead-in really invites it, as well as the music itself makes a big impact here. uhm.. well i don't wanna put too much circle density here..
  5. 01:18:800 (3) - Circle? | This will add some needed lead-in to the reverse slider you have after this. i guess you linked that wrong.. the slider starts there, so how can it be after?..
  6. 02:00:142 (2,3) - this 3/4 gap plays very odd. I'm thinking it might be better to stick to a full 1/1 gap here like you do with 02:00:995 (4,5) - you're right. i replaced it, i wanna get opinions on it tho since it still ends on a blue tick
  7. 02:06:361 (2,1) - nice jump <3 | I don't think it fits in a normal though. ops o.o fixed
  8. 02:17:093 (5) - How about rotating this just a bit more anti-clockwise so you can adjust (6) a bit better to flow with (1) yea
  9. 02:39:531 (3) - When I was testing this.. I actually hit this as a 100, thinking it would probably be placed 1/2 later. What do you think? Of course if you do this, it will probably change the whole last bit of the map, so I'm not sure. Maybe some way of making it more clear you'll be using 1/1s instead of 1.5/1s. didn't understand again.. what's the problem again?
    ---
  10. http://puu.sh/5ssUa.png My... god... what's going on here Irre? (hah... I'm horrible when it comes to lame rhymes) i guess fixed xD
oh well maybe i went full retard, but I just didn't understand some of your suggestions. Could you show me screens that I can see what you're talking about? Thanks, and sorry ><

osu file format v12

[General]
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TitleUnicode:Winterglade
Artist:Makkon
ArtistUnicode:Makkon
Creator:Itachi_Uchiha
Version:Irre's Snow
Source:Soundcloud
Tags:VinylDash14 Irreversible
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Lanturn
Irreversible:

I'm pretty stupid when it comes to explaining things so don't worry about not being able to understand some stuff. :P


00:05:873 (1,2) - Nevermind on this. XD

00:07:825 (4,5) - nazi but, 1.10 instead of 1.0 gap between them

01:18:800 (3) - I think I meant 01:18:800 - but since you didn't take the mod before this, I'm guessing this will add too much circle density as well. (I linked the spot, I'm not sure why I copied the (3)... maybe its because I added a note there myself and forgot to erase it)

Now the big one:

02:39:531 (3) - So when you listen to 02:39:776 - it has the taiko drum sound in the background. This was what I was trying to hit instead of the circle at 02:39:531 (3) - | What I was suggesting is that you move the circle to 02:39:776 - and any other future patterns that need a change. http://puu.sh/5udqF.jpg

Hopefully it makes a little more sense..

No KD obviously
Topic Starter
Itachi_Uchiha

Lanturn wrote:

No KD obviously
Pfft please...
As if I would give KDs to everyone *stops hovering the "Give Kudos" Button*
My Name Is R
well... I told you, this map is so perfect (for me x.X)...
sooo... take a STAR!!!! :3
SubLime-
Really well made in sync with the song and snow in BG is perfect. Please rank this!
Topic Starter
Itachi_Uchiha
Thanks :O
ColdTooth
Apologies for a long-freaking wait on my difficulty. Too much things at once, especially a project in school.

Anyways, I fixed almost 90% of what the modders say.~


Here
Lizbeth
Hello

Use wide screen support for this SB maybe?

[Avalanche]
I loved this. But there's something that really bugged me while playing it, and it was the BG/combo colors/SB combination. I was literally forcing myself to see better, especially on kiai times. This is a map I'd turn off SB and Skin, and isnt something I like doing at all. I think you need more contrast.
00:24:166 (1,2,3) - This was a weird change of spacing, I think it could be really confusing considering you used this distance for circles separated by 1/2 beat before. Same for others like this.

[Vinyl's Blizzard]
Same thing I said about the BG/SB/Combo colors on Avalanche, obviously.
Also, the slider tick was too loud in my opinion, you could decrease the volume of it.

[Irre's Snow]
02:04:410 - I think adding a circle here is a good idea, that second slider was hard to catch bacause it was missing something in the middle.
Other than that nice

Solid mapset~~
Good job~
Topic Starter
Itachi_Uchiha

Lizbeth wrote:

Hello

Use wide screen support for this SB maybe?

[Avalanche]
I loved this. But there's something that really bugged me while playing it, and it was the BG/combo colors/SB combination. I was literally forcing myself to see better, especially on kiai times. This is a map I'd turn off SB and Skin, and isnt something I like doing at all. I think you need more contrast. - How exactly can I understand this? I´m a bit confused :(
00:24:166 (1,2,3) - This was a weird change of spacing, I think it could be really confusing considering you used this distance for circles separated by 1/2 beat before. Same for others like this. - If you delete (2) you see that it is a simple star pattern spacing
ColdTooth

Lizbeth wrote:

[Vinyl's Blizzard]
Same thing I said about the BG/SB/Combo colors on Avalanche, obviously.
Also, the slider tick was too loud in my opinion, you could decrease the volume of it.
Fixed sound, rawr.

Here
Lizbeth

Itachi_Uchiha wrote:

Lizbeth wrote:

Hello

Use wide screen support for this SB maybe?

[Avalanche]
I loved this. But there's something that really bugged me while playing it, and it was the BG/combo colors/SB combination. I was literally forcing myself to see better, especially on kiai times. This is a map I'd turn off SB and Skin, and isnt something I like doing at all. I think you need more contrast. - How exactly can I understand this? I´m a bit confused :(
00:24:166 (1,2,3) - This was a weird change of spacing, I think it could be really confusing considering you used this distance for circles separated by 1/2 beat before. Same for others like this. - If you delete (2) you see that it is a simple star pattern spacing
By contrast I mean that for the combo colors you could use different colors than the background's ones, so is easier to see.
Topic Starter
Itachi_Uchiha
Ah alright~

Changed the Colours...

And thanks to Charles445 for the new timing :D
Lizbeth

Itachi_Uchiha wrote:

Ah alright~

Changed the Colours...
Much better ^^
Frostmourne
General
solid, especially the SB fits with this song!

Irre's Snowfall
01:21:469 (3) - this stack might be too hard for beginners since some SB effect may interfere them (in case they don't know how to dim or disable sb)
02:26:347 (5) - this stack is even harder than above because of a repeating slider. Do something like this should be fine 02:29:518 (4,5) -
02:33:420 (4,5) - ^
02:37:811 (7,1) - no stack please...
I am sorry that I complain too much about stacks but they might be too hard to be here, the easiest difficulty of this mapset.

Vinyl's Snowstorm
AR6 is enough for this map (bpm and how you mapped it)

Snowchaos
nice :)

call me for a bubble once you are done fixing/applying these.
Irreversible

Frostmourne wrote:

Irre's Snowfall
01:21:469 (3) - this stack might be too hard for beginners since some SB effect may interfere them (in case they don't know how to dim or disable sb) i don't even know how this got here -.-
02:26:347 (5) - this stack is even harder than above because of a repeating slider. Do something like this should be fine 02:29:518 (4,5) - yes
02:33:420 (4,5) - ^ and yes
02:37:811 (7,1) - no stack please... i'm leaving this one because the song is really strong here, the stack is Fitting perfectly.
I am sorry that I complain too much about stacks but they might be too hard to be here, the easiest difficulty of this mapset. you have a new nickname now, stackcomplainer :) i'm just kidding lol
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Winterglade.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64427
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Winterglade
TitleUnicode:Winterglade
Artist:Makkon
ArtistUnicode:Makkon
Creator:Itachi_Uchiha
Version:Irre's Snowfall
Source:Soundcloud
Tags:VinylDash14 Irreversible
BeatmapID:329085
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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132,96,157079,2,0,L|108:160,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,216,157567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,272,157811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,158055,5,12,0:0:0:0:
264,332,158542,2,0,P|332:344|400:284,1,150
392,148,159518,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,200,160006,2,0,L|92:216,2,150,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,184,161469,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,44,161957,6,0,B|232:44|232:44|156:80|156:80|32:80,2,300,12|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,156,164396,2,0,P|440:224|380:276,1,150
231,275,165372,2,0,B|155:263|155:263|71:279,1,150,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,136,166347,5,0,0:0:0:0:
148,36,166835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,148,167567,2,0,L|432:160,1,75,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,308,168298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,159,168786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,232,169274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,324,169762,6,0,B|122:247|122:247|159:171|159:171|92:143|48:72,2,300,12|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,348,172201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,264,172689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,44,173664,5,12,0:0:0:0:
96,124,174152,2,0,P|54:183|70:254,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,200,175128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,320,175616,2,0,L|453:334,2,150,12|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,180,177079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,232,177567,6,0,B|184:184|136:184|136:184|104:92|104:92|56:88|4:36,2,300,12|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,352,180006,2,0,P|392:360|461:316,1,150
454,175,180981,2,0,P|418:107|343:74,1,150,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,124,181957,5,0,0:0:0:0:
324,220,182445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,183176,2,0,L|40:344,1,75,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,196,183908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
54,342,184396,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,244,184884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,356,185372,6,0,B|336:316|316:228|316:228|404:256|476:176,2,300,4|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,240,187811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,116,188298,2,0,L|256:40,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,41,188786,2,0,L|431:39,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,114,189274,1,4,0:0:0:0:

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