Nemis wrote:[Vinyl's Blizzard]
- 00:35:629 (1) - Rotate this slider by 90° anticlockwise and then reverse it (CTRL+G); this change will improve the flow after playing 00:34:410 (2) - this slider. Somewhat fixed. I think..
- 00:40:020 (2) - Move this slider a bit left (x:8 y:128 is fine, for example) to make a flowy movement with 00:39:776 (1) - this note. Fixed.
- 01:16:117 (1,2,3,4) - Personally I don't find it really good to see while playing. Try moving 01:17:337 (2) - this note at x:336 y:100, it plays really better. I actually like this idea.
- 01:17:825 (4,1) - Same for this pattern, even if it's a bit different. Try moving 01:18:556 (1) - this note far from 01:17:825 (4) - this slider, or at least stack it perfectly/manually!
- 01:31:239 (3,4) - I'm sure you can improve this blanket a little bit. Fixed. Somewhat.
- 01:35:629 (6) - Consider adding a new combo here since the music changes and the chorus ends ad you did 01:35:629 (7) - here, in the end. Yes
- 02:21:482 (6) - As AiMod says, this slider is unsnapped. Fix it. Good eye.
- 02:26:849 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern looks weird looks as it is now 'cause you used different spacings. You should mantain the same distance from each element to each other since it's a normal difficulty. Fixed.
From 01:51:239 (1) - here I liked a lot how you mapped it, but from the begin until 01:03:434 (1) - here I didn't. The patterns look weird to see and to play. The first KIAI is good as the second, but I still prefer the last one!
Thank you two for the feedback. I shall puush this to the map owner whenever puush decides to let me in.
GoldenWolf wrote:[Vinyl's Blizzard]
01:03:434 (1) - it's kinda meh, use a row of 1/2 circles instead? I actually like what I have here atm, so I don't want to change it.
01:17:337 (2,3,4,1) - this look a bit ugly :c the overlaps are meh and the anti-jump is just weird Fixed slightly w/ the mod above
02:37:093 (1) - same as 01:03:434 (1) -Nah, I like the pattern here.
Not much else to say, overall watch the aesthetic (like at 01:58:556 (5,6,1) - ) and try to make something prettier I try to be pretty :<