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Awaken

qq944364487 wrote:

Awaken wrote:

你要删的话删前面就好 后面别删啊
你改了行不行 不行我帮你改 这图本来应该是纯洁的感觉 那几个滑条刚看见我就想删图 你说要不要改?
我试试改改
明明很纯洁号码 你看他们长得多像翅膀

EDIT:好爸 你帮我改 但是别改太多啊 改那些长滑条就好
mintong89
Hi

[General]
没kiai time?
countdown 去掉吧...很不适合.
[SB]

bg_effect.png 的刚开始没用fade大丈夫? 感觉好突然. 还有我发现你的SB没在线上...
bg1.jpg 是什么回事...我觉得这种歌黑BG比较好.
外面的BG怎么没去掉? 这样很浪费SB Load, 把这行加在.osb 里的 //Background and Video events 就好了.
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"EdelWeiss.jpg",0,0
[EdelWeiss]

这种diff名字是unrankable我相信你也知道的, 看看这贴 p/2725713

00:32:262 - 不加note么? 空虚感
02:47:662 (2) - CTRL+G?

...sad 真的找不出什么 治好射星了
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Mintong wrote:

Hi

[General]
没kiai time?
countdown 去掉吧...很不适合.
ok 没kiai

[SB]

bg_effect.png 的刚开始没用fade大丈夫? 感觉好突然. 还有我发现你的SB没在线上... 用osbhelper生成的就表在意了
bg1.jpg 是什么回事...我觉得这种歌黑BG比较好.
外面的BG怎么没去掉? 这样很浪费SB Load, 把这行加在.osb 里的 //Background and Video events 就好了.
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"EdelWeiss.jpg",0,0
ok
[EdelWeiss]

这种diff名字是unrankable我相信你也知道的, 看看这贴 p/2725713 不是能辨认出难度就ok吗

00:32:262 - 不加note么? 空虚感 空虚多好
02:47:662 (2) - CTRL+G? 前后一致D:

...sad 真的找不出什么 治好射星了
ok thx~~~
MeraMiPoP_old
EW:
前面的SB无法直视 请开epilepsywarning
00:31:162 - 这里加个note叠在(1)上面
02:20:862 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里太难了啊, 前面的都好打
02:59:462 (2,3,1) - 这个梗也挺难, 如果3是滑条还好打些, 单点的话跳的太大
别的打着挺舒服的, 没什么需要挑的吧

G:
01:06:262 (4,5,6) - 这里节奏太怪异了 跟vocal会好很多
01:27:062 - 01:29:662 - 这一段可以去黑边造成停顿感
02:15:062 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种时候就不要放那么多了。。
02:17:862 (1,2,3) - 可以放原地0.2x间距之类的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211744
02:46:262 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 后面有减速, 我觉得这个串用一个原地回转的滑条代替会好一些

normal:
ar+1
01:51:262 (4) - 去掉一个reverse
02:39:262 (4,5,6,7) - 花花啊233

图挺赞的 不过能不能换个没自带黑边的BG www 虽然影响不大
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Meramipop wrote:

EW:
前面的SB无法直视 请开epilepsywarning 改了
00:31:162 - 这里加个note叠在(1)上面 不太好听
02:20:862 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里太难了啊, 前面的都好打 萨米试着这梗还好啊
02:59:462 (2,3,1) - 这个梗也挺难, 如果3是滑条还好打些, 单点的话跳的太大 能打233
别的打着挺舒服的, 没什么需要挑的吧

G:
01:06:262 (4,5,6) - 这里节奏太怪异了 跟vocal会好很多
01:27:062 - 01:29:662 - 这一段可以去黑边造成停顿感
02:15:062 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种时候就不要放那么多了。。
02:17:862 (1,2,3) - 可以放原地0.2x间距之类的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211744
02:46:262 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 后面有减速, 我觉得这个串用一个原地回转的滑条代替会好一些

normal:
ar+1
01:51:262 (4) - 去掉一个reverse
02:39:262 (4,5,6,7) - 花花啊233

图挺赞的 不过能不能换个没自带黑边的BG www 虽然影响不大
黑边的BG是要做sb的2333333
Evil_Twilight

Meramipop wrote:

G:
01:06:262 (4,5,6) - 这里节奏太怪异了 跟vocal会好很多 X, 這裡我還是跟著鼓聲的阿o.o
01:27:062 - 01:29:662 - 这一段可以去黑边造成停顿感 X, 意思是加break嗎,有試過但是不是我想要的感覺
02:15:062 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种时候就不要放那么多了。。 X, 為神馬,這段節奏不是都一樣嗎
02:17:862 (1,2,3) - 可以放原地0.2x间距之类的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211744 X, 這種排法我覺得在02:18:862 (4) - 和02:20:062 (5) - 用比較適合
02:46:262 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 后面有减速, 我觉得这个串用一个原地回转的滑条代替会好一些 X, 串間距不太大應該還好
Foreverends
mod神圖巨壓力;w;

EdelWeiss
00:16:062 (1,2,3) - 我覺得00:16:062 (1) - 可以放在大約x:384 y:196附近,之後則把00:16:462 (2,3) - ctrl+>後放在大約x:216 y:28附近,個人認為flow會比較順><

00:23:262 (1) - 彎一點~
00:25:662 (6) - NC
00:28:062 (1) -

00:34:262 - 補個circle叠在00:34:362 (1) - 的頭試試
00:48:062 (7) -

01:27:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 嗯...個人認為這可以小跳一下:p
02:55:062 (1,2,3) -


太神了啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
渣mod抱歉;w;
加油><
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Foreverends wrote:

mod神圖巨壓力;w;

EdelWeiss
00:16:062 (1,2,3) - 我覺得00:16:062 (1) - 可以放在大約x:384 y:196附近,之後則把00:16:462 (2,3) - ctrl+>後放在大約x:216 y:28附近,個人認為flow會比較順>< 这梗是做给萨米这种神触玩的 反正他能1pcfc

00:23:262 (1) - 彎一點~ ok
00:25:662 (6) - NC ok
00:28:062 (1) -抱歉有点不顺flow

00:34:262 - 補個circle叠在00:34:362 (1) - 的頭試試 跟音轨压力巨大
00:48:062 (7) -不太好看啊

01:27:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 嗯...個人認為這可以小跳一下:p 这段为了不掉血只能跟vocal了 所以我还是善良一下
02:55:062 (1,2,3) -不跳惹怎么办


太神了啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
渣mod抱歉;w;
加油><
sammy711
来骗kds
儚い思い出に最後の言葉を
囁く風はそよいでる
やわらかな陽射しは僕を見ていた

夢に儚く咲いた
微かな言葉を囁きかけても
牢屋めいた心に
届くことはないと知りながら

それなのに、それなのに
夜にまぎれて歌は消え
息をひそめ

憂いに沈む日々は
まるで六月の雨模様
けれど闇は裂け日は昇り
そして花はまた咲くだろう

囁く、君にもう一度
悪夢が覚めればまた小鳥が歌う
せめての声を聞かせてよ
失うことはもう僕は嫌だから

それなのに、 それなのに
夜にまぎれて声は消え
呼吸をやめて

憂いに沈む僕は
まるで六月の雨模様
そして君は遠くのどこへ?
僕はそれすらも分からない

小鳥の歌が響きだす頃
鮮やかに虹がかかり始め
雫にまだ濡れた花々は
夏が来て君に咲いた泉

『EdelWeiss』それは君のこと
儚い思い出に最後の言葉を
囁く風はそよいでる
やわらかな陽射しは僕を見ていた
Flower
这diff名真sb

[General]
开头的combo colour在该背景下很难可见,这是逼人关sb么,明明做的这么神

[EdelWeiss]
难道是我AR病发作了,最近总是读不清AR9
改成AR8以后acc又提高了,所以即使可能是我有病,也请你考虑一下AR8
00:23:062 (13,1) - 个人不是很喜欢这个flow,建议:(如果不接受的话也请把blanket做好)

00:24:862 (2,3,4,5) - 音量递增?
00:34:262 - 由于这里有歌词,所以很容易按错,建议考虑
00:48:862 (3) - 3/4有些奇怪,建议1/2或者1/1
00:57:862 (1,2,3) - 如果不是特别的梗,建议向右下移动2小格,因为和00:57:662 (9) - 距离保持统一,而这里有个三连的auto stack
01:48:862 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉有点莫名,初见唯一一个断了的同类九连,建议缩小距离
01:50:262 (3,4,5,6) - blanket
02:04:062 (3,4) - 缩小目测距离,跟02:04:462 (4,5) - 区分开
02:59:262 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ……

[Hard]
00:49:662 (1,2) - 感觉交换combo比较好,更能读
01:23:062 (2,3) - 感觉有点像3/4+1/2了,总之只是说一下
01:27:262 - 加个break?
01:42:262 (4,5) - 间距拉开一些,最好不碰上
02:15:062 (7,1,2,3,4) - 这边遮挡有点那啥了……02:15:462 (2,3,4) - 放到x:320 y:200?(同时注意auto stack)
没啥问题 不愧是G神

[Normal]
00:41:462 (5) - 建议指向左下而不是右下,这样可以保持345的间距一致,当然后面的部分可能就要调整
01:27:262 - 加个break?
02:39:262 (4,5,6,7,1) - 这种重叠对新人来说应该是比较苦手的,建议重新考虑
02:44:862 (2,3,4,5) - 这个排列也是非常吃人,建议重新考虑
02:46:862 (1,1) - 嗯……你要作甚,还不如空着,其次这里的减速也很让新人看不懂,至少不要减速
03:11:262 (3,4,5,6) - ^

[Easy]
00:00:862 (1) - 你这个花不如让科林帮你画……有点别扭,再一个后面的遮挡也有些大了,实际上这类滑条都建议摆在一串note的最后
这不就是完全看不见了么

其他没了

Good luck~
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Flower wrote:

这diff名真sb

[General]
开头的combo colour在该背景下很难可见,这是逼人关sb么,明明做的这么神

[EdelWeiss]
难道是我AR病发作了,最近总是读不清AR9
改成AR8以后acc又提高了,所以即使可能是我有病,也请你考虑一下AR8
00:23:062 (13,1) - 个人不是很喜欢这个flow,建议:(如果不接受的话也请把blanket做好)
blanket做好
00:24:862 (2,3,4,5) - 音量递增? 听着不爽
00:34:262 - 由于这里有歌词,所以很容易按错,建议考虑 坑人用
00:48:862 (3) - 3/4有些奇怪,建议1/2或者1/1 这里用1/2听着不如3/4好听啊
00:57:862 (1,2,3) - 如果不是特别的梗,建议向右下移动2小格,因为和00:57:662 (9) - 距离保持统一,而这里有个三连的auto stack ok
01:48:862 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉有点莫名,初见唯一一个断了的同类九连,建议缩小距离 求试图时这个梗还好啊 主要我能打
01:50:262 (3,4,5,6) - blanket ok
02:04:062 (3,4) - 缩小目测距离,跟02:04:462 (4,5) - 区分开 orz 因为前面有用这梗所以应该比较好辨认
02:59:262 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - …… 哈哈哈哈被坑了吧

[Hard]
00:49:662 (1,2) - 感觉交换combo比较好,更能读
01:23:062 (2,3) - 感觉有点像3/4+1/2了,总之只是说一下
01:27:262 - 加个break?
01:42:262 (4,5) - 间距拉开一些,最好不碰上
02:15:062 (7,1,2,3,4) - 这边遮挡有点那啥了……02:15:462 (2,3,4) - 放到x:320 y:200?(同时注意auto stack)
没啥问题 不愧是G神

[Normal]
00:41:462 (5) - 建议指向左下而不是右下,这样可以保持345的间距一致,当然后面的部分可能就要调整 找人试试好了
01:27:262 - 加个break? ok
02:39:262 (4,5,6,7,1) - 这种重叠对新人来说应该是比较苦手的,建议重新考虑 没梗
02:44:862 (2,3,4,5) - 这个排列也是非常吃人,建议重新考虑 没梗+1
02:46:862 (1,1) - 嗯……你要作甚,还不如空着,其次这里的减速也很让新人看不懂,至少不要减速 ok
03:11:262 (3,4,5,6) - ^ 只是想回到中间.......

[Easy]
00:00:862 (1) - 你这个花不如让科林帮你画……有点别扭,再一个后面的遮挡也有些大了,实际上这类滑条都建议摆在一串note的最后
这不就是完全看不见了么

其他没了

Good luck~
Selisi
In game ask~
支持电音mapper star~
[General]
  1. 为了种草牺牲了kiai....
  2. 难度名EdelWeiss似乎不能用了 因为规则有了改动
  3. 另外 tags 要加入“sm21893513 vocaloid hatsune miku”
  4. 检查每个难度的widescreen support 开启
  5. 检查每个难度的preview time设置

[Storyboard]
  1. 00:26:462 - 时间点的过度请做一些效果 或者切换预示
  2. 初音背景切换后 乃是完全还原pv的制作方法(实际上这个曲子的pv做的不好up主偷懒了) 但是在osu里面为了凸显让漂浮点 可以试着在sb底部加上蓝色烟雾等等
  3. 实在没感觉出sb里面的effect和effect2有什么用 如果是为了遮盖浮点的话 没有必要这样呀 nick的效果的确很漂亮
  4. 01:30:462 - 这个时间点可以做扩影的效果(用一个bg放大渐渐消失

[EdelWeiss]
  1. 00:23:262 (1,2) - 手动把1 2 的时间点对调下 这样是一个flow 不要ctrl+G 那样会反过来
  2. 01:50:462 (5,6) - 贴的太近了 blanket不太好
  3. 声音渐小的想法不错 但是这里因为是这种位置很近的单点梗 音效达到让人听到的音量挺重要的(坚持就忽略这句吧/.\)

[G's Hard]
  1. 00:05:662 (1,2,1) - 空隙保持一样
  2. 00:39:862 - 时间线的音量调小些 clap的音量很吵
  3. 01:07:062 (5) - 时间点换到01:06:862 - (不喜欢Ignore 只是感觉这样打起来舒服些
  4. 01:46:262 (5,1) - 如果是跳的话再远一些吧 别让人误认为是spacing的问题
  5. 01:48:062 (1) - ^
  6. 02:15:462 (2,3,4) - 为了美观不要和02:14:662 (6,7) - 叠到一起

[Normal]
  1. 00:02:462 (4) - 为什么要折返?直接长滑条才合适
  2. 00:08:462 - 这里为什么不map呢 你这里都做了00:05:062 (2) -
  3. 00:40:662 (3,4,5) - 请与00:43:862 (9) - 保持一致
  4. 00:42:462 (1) - nc 太长了 都到10了
  5. 01:16:662 (5) - 不好看
  6. 02:45:462 (3,4,5) - 这种overlap在normal里面很不合适 出现3个以上combo的时候normal难度最好不要有overlap

[Awaken's Easy]
  1. 00:00:862 (1) - 做不好看就不要做了= = 人家会问这事什么的

渣mod一枚 祝早rank~
Awaken
我决定把你跟我画的那2B花花删掉
换上美丽的滑条组
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

In game ask~
支持电音mapper star~
[General]
  1. 为了种草牺牲了kiai....
  2. 难度名EdelWeiss似乎不能用了 因为规则有了改动
  3. 另外 tags 要加入“sm21893513 vocaloid hatsune miku”
  4. 检查每个难度的widescreen support 开启 no 开这个选项会影响sb
  5. 检查每个难度的preview time设置 都一样也就无所谓了吧23333

[Storyboard]
  1. 00:26:462 - 时间点的过度请做一些效果 或者切换预示 做不动 那个光晕我惆怅了一晚上
  2. 初音背景切换后 乃是完全还原pv的制作方法(实际上这个曲子的pv做的不好up主偷懒了) 但是在osu里面为了凸显让漂浮点 可以试着在sb底部加上蓝色烟雾等等 可以试试
  3. 实在没感觉出sb里面的effect和effect2有什么用 如果是为了遮盖浮点的话 没有必要这样呀 nick的效果的确很漂亮 2是用来给前面加光的
  4. 01:30:462 - 这个时间点可以做扩影的效果(用一个bg放大渐渐消失没想过 不过我想到另一种更好的

[EdelWeiss]
  1. 00:23:262 (1,2) - 手动把1 2 的时间点对调下 这样是一个flow 不要ctrl+G 那样会反过来 自己打着不舒服
  2. 01:50:462 (5,6) - 贴的太近了 blanket不太好 色卡mod完后改了
  3. 声音渐小的想法不错 但是这里因为是这种位置很近的单点梗 音效达到让人听到的音量挺重要的(坚持就忽略这句吧/.\) 能听见啊

[G's Hard]
  1. 00:05:662 (1,2,1) - 空隙保持一样
  2. 00:39:862 - 时间线的音量调小些 clap的音量很吵
  3. 01:07:062 (5) - 时间点换到01:06:862 - (不喜欢Ignore 只是感觉这样打起来舒服些
  4. 01:46:262 (5,1) - 如果是跳的话再远一些吧 别让人误认为是spacing的问题
  5. 01:48:062 (1) - ^
  6. 02:15:462 (2,3,4) - 为了美观不要和02:14:662 (6,7) - 叠到一起

[Normal]
  1. 00:02:462 (4) - 为什么要折返?直接长滑条才合适
  2. 00:08:462 - 这里为什么不map呢 你这里都做了00:05:062 (2) -
  3. 00:40:662 (3,4,5) - 请与00:43:862 (9) - 保持一致
  4. 00:42:462 (1) - nc 太长了 都到10了
  5. 01:16:662 (5) - 不好看
  6. 02:45:462 (3,4,5) - 这种overlap在normal里面很不合适 出现3个以上combo的时候normal难度最好不要有overlap

[Awaken's Easy]
  1. 00:00:862 (1) - 做不好看就不要做了= = 人家会问这事什么的

渣mod一枚 祝早rank~
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Awaken wrote:

我决定把你跟我画的那2B花花删掉
换上美丽的滑条组
只要不是弯弯曲曲的我就接受
然后我打算把你的gd slot给妹儿特
fanzhen0019
OkP

16:30 qq944364487: ball mod
16:30 fanzhen0019: a我在做SB
16:31 *qq944364487 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/307657 OkameP - EdelWeiss [EdelWeiss]]
16:31 qq944364487: 求摸啊
16:31 qq944364487: 我都不会sb
16:31 fanzhen0019: 可以irc
16:32 qq944364487: 厚
16:33 *fanzhen0019 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/307657 OkameP - EdelWeiss [EdelWeiss]]
16:37 fanzhen0019: 这跳的
16:37 qq944364487: 嘛
16:42 fanzhen0019: 这
16:42 fanzhen0019: 00:34:362 (1) -
16:43 fanzhen0019: 节奏有点怪
16:43 fanzhen0019: 前方一大片草
16:44 fanzhen0019: 槽 我没掉线吧
16:44 qq944364487: 没
16:45 fanzhen0019: 00:34:362 (1) - nazi x320 y56
16:45 fanzhen0019: 直线
16:45 qq944364487: 啊嘞
16:47 qq944364487: 算了已经3个人说着了 我还是在前面加上note吧
16:47 fanzhen0019: 你这SB不是做的挺好..
16:48 qq944364487: 渣啊
16:50 fanzhen0019: 00:57:862 (1,2,3) -
16:51 fanzhen0019: 手动stack一下
16:51 fanzhen0019: 打的时候并不平行
16:52 qq944364487: k
16:53 fanzhen0019: reserve用的挺好
16:53 fanzhen0019: 我都找不到合适的 哭哭
16:53 fanzhen0019: 01:01:662 (1,2,3) - 这三个你可以做成blanket
16:54 qq944364487: 这个我不打算blanket0.0
16:54 qq944364487: 感觉不是很舒服
16:54 fanzhen0019: haoba
16:57 fanzhen0019: 02:34:062 (1,2,3,4,1) - 摆的有点奇怪..?
16:58 qq944364487: 没想到更好的怎么办……
16:58 fanzhen0019: 摆成弧吧
16:58 fanzhen0019: 关掉grid
16:59 fanzhen0019: 02:52:662 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 其实drum感觉怪怪
17:00 qq944364487: 这里找学姐帮忙找的音效 结果用上不合适
17:01 fanzhen0019: 没啥了
17:01 qq944364487: 然后发现drum还正常点
17:01 qq944364487: 好
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401,220,162462,2,0,P|431:193|471:186,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,107,163262,2,0,P|425:77|418:37,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,61,164062,6,0,B|340:98|368:136|368:136|324:160|312:212,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,252,165262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,295,165662,2,0,P|150:302|110:329,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,299,166462,2,0,P|38:256|20:215,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,143,167262,6,0,P|78:132|126:138,1,80,14|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,78,168062,2,0,P|213:82|251:71,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,128,168862,2,0,L|303:208,1,80,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,241,169662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,164,170062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,214,170462,6,0,P|71:199|46:117,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,139,171662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,151,172062,2,0,P|227:183|226:236,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,291,172862,2,0,P|193:331|218:362,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,302,173662,6,0,P|311:315|355:311,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,236,174462,2,0,P|414:234|452:246,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,167,175262,2,0,P|460:126|470:81,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,44,176062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
345,105,176462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,122,176862,6,0,P|231:103|179:105,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,161,177662,2,0,P|101:159|66:140,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,205,178462,2,0,L|32:292,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,337,179262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,265,179662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,327,180062,6,0,P|243:317|279:238,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,162,181262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
269,82,181662,2,0,P|296:55|346:44,1,80,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,68,182462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
459,131,182862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
446,209,183262,6,0,P|405:266|316:256,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,194,184462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,183,184862,2,0,P|247:215|238:253,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,318,185662,2,0,P|242:354|209:376,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,301,186462,6,0,B|150:273|105:276|105:276|72:311|23:304,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,223,187662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,195,188062,2,0,P|139:160|142:115,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,92,188862,2,0,P|221:52|244:20,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,81,189662,6,0,B|341:106|378:93|378:93|417:76|466:100,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,165,190862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,179,191262,2,0,P|303:200|284:242,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,211,192062,2,0,P|206:172|179:135,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,107,192862,5,6,0:0:0:0:
Rotte
路边的草泥马,你真的好漂亮啊~

冲啊草泥马!撞死麻花!


[General]


  1. Timing 862→855,根据音效听出来的。
  2. 超喜欢你的normal,咱要mark一下研究研究>_>


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[Awaken's Easy]

  1. 你这个复制狂咱就不说了。
  • Rhythm
  1. 02:12:462 (1) - 挪到344|268?
  2. 02:18:462 (1) - 其实咱觉得这个note完全可以去掉。
  3. 02:45:262 - 这个地方根据音乐完全没有任何声音,为什么要加note,求解。
  • Sound Effect


[Normal]

  1. 咱喜欢这个diff,很喜欢,非常喜欢!!!
  • Rhythm
  1. 00:02:462 (4) - 这是咱错觉么,这个slider长度不对啊,节奏也不对。
  2. 00:21:262 (3,4) - 这样好看些。
    324,224,21262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    324,224,21462,2,0,P|296:176|252:168,1,90.0000034332277,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:49:462 (2) - 根据你的这个combo,咱觉得就这一小段用1/1slider有些不划算,干脆跟着音乐的clap,用1/2得了。
  4. 02:14:862 (6,1) - 这样可能会好看些,你试试?
    400,364,134862,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    448,288,135262,2,0,P|456:248|444:196,1,90.0000034332277
    416,164,135862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    388,128,136062,2,0,P|384:80|396:28,1,90.0000034332277,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    304,48,136862,2,0,L|212:32,1,90.0000034332277,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 02:18:462 (1) - 这个note去掉吧,感觉去掉更好。
  6. 02:20:062 (2) - NC吧。
  7. 02:36:862 (3) - Blanket了一下。
    360,312,156862,2,0,P|344:292|320:276,2,45.0000017166138,8|0|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 02:54:462 (2) - 没叠好。
  9. 03:05:662 (6,1) - 这俩遮挡没问题么。
  • Sound Effect
  1. 01:25:662 (1) - 这个开头音效建议声音再小些,否则听来很突兀。


[G's Hard]

  1. None.
  • Rhythm
  1. 00:08:662 (4) - Move to 124|364 ?
  2. 00:59:062 (2,3,4) - 感觉原来的不好看,不知道这样改了改你觉得如何。
    92,228,59062,1,8,3:0:0:0:
    144,172,59262,2,0,P|157:141|154:101,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    204,52,59662,1,8,3:0:0:0:
  3. 01:23:062 (2,3) - 这俩没叠好。
  • Sound Effect
  1. 啥都没。


[Insane]

  1. 跨度真大。
  • Rhythm
  1. 00:16:862 (1) - 个人认为这个flow不好。但是这个图比较难,咱不好说咱的看法对不对,底下是咱的小改。

    177,255,16862,6,0,P|117:283|52:272,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    322,296,17462,2,0,P|382:268|448:280,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    462,366,18062,2,0,P|428:368|396:360,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    472,180,18462,2,0,L|504:112,2,67.5000025749208,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    376,200,19062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    340,112,19262,69,0,0:0:0:0:
    236,64,19462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    236,64,19562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    236,64,19662,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:28:662 (3,4,5,6) - 还是觉得flow有点问题,咱稍作修改。
    244,156,28662,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    244,156,28762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    244,156,28862,2,0,B|184:140|184:140|144:136|112:160,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    64,228,29262,2,0,P|56:276|84:332,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:42:062 (10,1,2) - 同上
    264,324,42462,6,0,B|216:348|216:348|176:316|136:328,1,135.000005149842,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    64,364,43062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
01:07:662 (6) - ctrl+g 试试。01:43:262 (1) - 直的打起来不爽,咱改成弯的你看看感觉怎么样。
456,280,103262,6,0,L|432:368,1,90
02:09:662 (5) - 这里跳起来超级不爽,建议ctrl+g换回来还好些。02:46:062 (3) - ctrl+g如果这个换了的话,建议下面也接着02:46:462 (1,3) - ctrl+g,打起来感觉就顺溜多了。 02:47:662 (2) - ctrl+g02:48:062 (1,2,3,4) - 这么说吧,咱个人觉得这种梗用在这里打起来超级不爽,咱认为34交换一下顺序跳更舒服些,不知道你怎么想。如果你觉得你这种梗打起来挺爽,那就别换了,如果有很多人觉得都不喜欢这个梗,那建议还是换掉为好。


  • Sound Effect
  1. 没。


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你中奖了。

:3

不过话说回来,咱觉得你的鬼畜I还有超级大的提升空间,建议再多找些mod,那个normal咱觉得是很成功了,尽量少改那个:3
哦对了,那个hard咱觉得嘛>_> 音效挺好,排列卖糕的,有点普通了。

祝顺利rank。
Sun Rainbow
request from QQ
00:25:662 (1) - 就这样的光晕还不如用white effect变个色
01:27:462 (1) - 建议黑白变化 然后white
01:56:062 (1) - 变成胶片那样的背景?

麻花倾情力作 必推
神SB 神note
我也会努力的((‵□′)) ~
Regou
[General]
EdelWeiss這diff name大丈夫??????

[SB]
最後那段的sb不夠激昂啊,應該噴雪花什麽的才對啊(逃

[Insane]
感覺沒啥問題(其實是懶)

[G's Hard]
00:05:662 (1,2,1) - 可以弄成三個一組的pattern
00:32:262 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:42:062 (2) - 感覺可以音量-10%,不然跟後面那個音一比就重疊了聽上去不爽
00:43:862 (1,2,3) - 這裡也可以做相類似的處理
00:56:462 (4) - 感覺有點吵,乾脆remove clap吧
00:57:262 (6,7) - 同理
01:12:062 (1) - Remove NC
01:15:862 (2,3,4) - spacing
01:25:662 (1) - 這樣子中間的音就不見了...
01:26:262 (2,3,4) - 醜
01:29:662 (1) - 建議分成兩個
02:20:862 (1) - ^
02:42:862 (2,3) - 這裡spacing感覺怪怪的,不過先留著吧,我也不肯定
02:50:062 (4) - finish?
03:02:862 (8) - ^

先這樣吧,加油~
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