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[Mahua]

Joined November 2010

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[Mahua] 2013-10-14T14:18:20+00:00

azuretwinight wrote:
好听的曲子，作图风格大好~音效和sb也很不错~希望早日完成rank~（似乎正好是我比较喜欢的难度呢）
有几个地方提一下建议，仅供参考~
00:34:062 (6,1) - 中间是不是加一个note连贯。。
02:18:462 (1) - 这个note也许可以去掉，比较配合音乐。
02:34:062 (1,2,3,4) - 确实突然增加读图的压力感，个人感觉没必要再用短滑条组，而且本来是连打的地方弄成这种跳有点突然。。四个circle应该要稍微好一点。。

以上
另外短滑条组用的稍微多了点是不是会感觉每次遇到这种节奏都是短滑条呢？关于这点我觉得可以参照Az姐姐的Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga - Yumeutsutsu，其中类似的节奏对于短滑条的应用幅度和频率我觉得简直棒极

感觉可以给kd 有时间用电脑再说

soulfear

947 posts

Joined January 2010

soulfear 2013-10-20T20:08:35+00:00

好，看来差不多开始着手这个了

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

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[Mahua] 2013-10-21T04:12:12+00:00

Fear wrote:
好，看来差不多开始着手这个了

好评

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-10-21T04:29:03+00:00

wpcap现在才看到看来是删不掉了我只能edit
歌好听

Last edited by Awaken 2013-10-21T14:24:53+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

[Mahua]

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[Mahua] 2013-10-21T04:47:51+00:00

Awaken wrote:
恭喜rank

限你1分钟之内删掉不然拉黑

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2013-11-07T08:36:46+00:00

http://puu.sh/5b9Kq.osu

爽

[Mahua]

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[Mahua] 2013-11-07T09:39:23+00:00

Evil_Twilight wrote:
http://puu.sh/5b9Kq.osu

爽

好等我放假

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2013-11-30T09:55:11+00:00

00:25:662 - 00:39:262 这一段我觉得用normal音效比较好, soft太轻了o.o

00:39:262 - 00:46:862 这里可以把24白线的位置换成normal, 别的保持soft

后面也差不多.. 音效加的whisle finish clap什么的应该没问题, 不过听不出来233

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-12-21T09:11:55+00:00

Easy done.

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[Mahua]

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Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2013-12-22T06:55:17+00:00

Awaken wrote:

Easy done.

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148,287,136862,2,0,L|113:212,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,366,138062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,381,138462,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,143,141662,6,0,P|295:79|340:2,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,75,142862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,145,143262,2,0,P|397:190|367:215,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,216,144062,2,0,P|267:244|255:282,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,278,144862,6,0,P|160:199|78:174,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,251,146062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,330,146462,2,0,P|144:355|197:354,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,318,147262,2,0,P|292:321|323:346,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,310,148062,6,0,B|375:279|346:261|346:261|376:214|350:163,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,210,149262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,244,149662,2,0,P|173:258|129:258,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,191,150462,2,0,P|77:152|77:108,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,54,151262,6,0,B|179:44|179:44|211:60|243:46|243:46|286:62,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,95,152462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,163,152862,2,0,P|391:203|396:251,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,299,153662,2,0,P|342:338|333:377,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,364,154462,6,0,B|205:353|205:353|153:369|153:369|90:353,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,318,155662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,276,156062,2,0,P|107:240|108:196,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,177,156862,2,0,P|186:137|199:99,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,67,157662,6,0,P|211:22|132:58,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,105,158862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,184,159262,2,0,L|117:273,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,160062,2,0,L|212:313,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,357,160862,6,0,P|212:381|287:318,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,273,162062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,220,162462,2,0,P|431:193|471:186,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,107,163262,2,0,P|425:77|418:37,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,61,164062,6,0,B|340:98|367:135|367:135|362:145|362:145|330:168|313:214,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,252,165262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,295,165662,2,0,P|150:302|110:329,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,299,166462,2,0,P|38:256|20:215,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,143,167262,6,0,P|78:132|126:138,1,80,14|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,78,168062,2,0,P|213:82|251:71,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,128,168862,2,0,L|303:208,1,80,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,241,169662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,164,170062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,214,170462,6,0,P|71:199|46:117,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,139,171662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,151,172062,2,0,P|227:183|226:236,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,291,172862,2,0,P|193:331|218:362,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,302,173662,6,0,P|311:315|355:311,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,236,174462,2,0,P|414:234|452:246,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,167,175262,2,0,P|460:126|470:81,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,44,176062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
345,105,176462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,122,176862,6,0,P|231:103|179:105,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,161,177662,2,0,P|101:159|66:140,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,205,178462,2,0,L|32:292,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,337,179262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,265,179662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,327,180062,6,0,P|243:317|279:238,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,162,181262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
269,82,181662,2,0,P|296:55|346:44,1,80,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,68,182462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
459,131,182862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
446,209,183262,6,0,P|405:266|316:256,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,194,184462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,183,184862,2,0,P|247:215|238:253,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,318,185662,2,0,P|242:354|209:376,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,301,186462,6,0,B|150:273|105:276|105:276|72:311|23:304,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,223,187662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,195,188062,2,0,P|139:160|142:115,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,92,188862,2,0,P|221:52|244:20,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,81,189662,6,0,B|341:106|378:93|378:93|417:76|466:100,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,165,190862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,179,191262,2,0,P|303:200|284:242,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,211,192062,2,0,P|206:172|179:135,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,107,192862,5,6,0:0:0:0:

能不能把滑条改了太蠢

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-12-22T09:56:17+00:00

qq944364487 wrote:
能不能把滑条改了太蠢

beautiful号码

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2013-12-22T14:17:37+00:00

Awaken wrote:
beautiful号码

美丽个屁股

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-12-23T04:05:59+00:00

qq944364487 wrote:
Awaken wrote:
beautiful号码
美丽个屁股

你要删的话删前面就好后面别删啊

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2013-12-23T04:36:48+00:00

Awaken wrote:
你要删的话删前面就好后面别删啊

你改了行不行不行我帮你改这图本来应该是纯洁的感觉那几个滑条刚看见我就想删图你说要不要改？

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-12-23T09:48:25+00:00

qq944364487 wrote:
Awaken wrote:
你要删的话删前面就好后面别删啊
你改了行不行不行我帮你改这图本来应该是纯洁的感觉那几个滑条刚看见我就想删图你说要不要改？

~~我试试改改~~
明明很纯洁号码你看他们长得多像翅膀

EDIT：好爸你帮我改但是别改太多啊改那些长滑条就好

mintong89

3,695 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-12-27T00:32:24+00:00

Hi

[General]
没kiai time?
countdown 去掉吧...很不适合.

[SB]

bg_effect.png 的刚开始没用fade大丈夫? 感觉好突然. 还有我发现你的SB没在线上...
bg1.jpg 是什么回事...我觉得这种歌黑BG比较好.
外面的BG怎么没去掉? 这样很浪费SB Load, 把这行加在.osb 里的 //Background and Video events 就好了.

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"EdelWeiss.jpg",0,0

[EdelWeiss]

这种diff名字是unrankable我相信你也知道的, 看看这贴 p/2725713

00:32:262 - 不加note么? 空虚感
02:47:662 (2) - CTRL+G?

...sad 真的找不出什么治好射星了

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2013-12-27T04:35:13+00:00

Mintong wrote:
Hi

[General]
没kiai time?
countdown 去掉吧...很不适合.
ok 没kiai
[SB]

bg_effect.png 的刚开始没用fade大丈夫? 感觉好突然. 还有我发现你的SB没在线上... 用osbhelper生成的就表在意了
bg1.jpg 是什么回事...我觉得这种歌黑BG比较好.
外面的BG怎么没去掉? 这样很浪费SB Load, 把这行加在.osb 里的 //Background and Video events 就好了.
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"EdelWeiss.jpg",0,0
ok
[EdelWeiss]

这种diff名字是unrankable我相信你也知道的, 看看这贴 p/2725713 不是能辨认出难度就ok吗

00:32:262 - 不加note么? 空虚感空虚多好
02:47:662 (2) - CTRL+G? 前后一致D:

...sad 真的找不出什么治好射星了

ok thx~~~

MeraMiPoP_old

155 posts

Joined October 2013

MeraMiPoP_old 2013-12-30T06:33:20+00:00

EW:
前面的SB无法直视请开epilepsywarning
00:31:162 - 这里加个note叠在(1)上面
02:20:862 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里太难了啊, 前面的都好打
02:59:462 (2,3,1) - 这个梗也挺难, 如果3是滑条还好打些, 单点的话跳的太大
别的打着挺舒服的, 没什么需要挑的吧

G:
01:06:262 (4,5,6) - 这里节奏太怪异了跟vocal会好很多
01:27:062 - 01:29:662 - 这一段可以去黑边造成停顿感
02:15:062 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种时候就不要放那么多了。。
02:17:862 (1,2,3) - 可以放原地0.2x间距之类的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211744
02:46:262 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 后面有减速, 我觉得这个串用一个原地回转的滑条代替会好一些

normal:
ar+1
01:51:262 (4) - 去掉一个reverse
02:39:262 (4,5,6,7) - 花花啊233

图挺赞的不过能不能换个没自带黑边的BG www 虽然影响不大

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2013-12-30T15:09:22+00:00

Meramipop wrote:
EW:
前面的SB无法直视请开epilepsywarning 改了
00:31:162 - 这里加个note叠在(1)上面不太好听
02:20:862 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里太难了啊, 前面的都好打萨米试着这梗还好啊
02:59:462 (2,3,1) - 这个梗也挺难, 如果3是滑条还好打些, 单点的话跳的太大能打233
别的打着挺舒服的, 没什么需要挑的吧

G:
01:06:262 (4,5,6) - 这里节奏太怪异了跟vocal会好很多
01:27:062 - 01:29:662 - 这一段可以去黑边造成停顿感
02:15:062 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种时候就不要放那么多了。。
02:17:862 (1,2,3) - 可以放原地0.2x间距之类的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211744
02:46:262 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 后面有减速, 我觉得这个串用一个原地回转的滑条代替会好一些

normal:
ar+1
01:51:262 (4) - 去掉一个reverse
02:39:262 (4,5,6,7) - 花花啊233

图挺赞的不过能不能换个没自带黑边的BG www 虽然影响不大

黑边的BG是要做sb的2333333

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2014-01-01T03:51:22+00:00

Meramipop wrote:
G:
01:06:262 (4,5,6) - 这里节奏太怪异了跟vocal会好很多 X, 這裡我還是跟著鼓聲的阿o.o
01:27:062 - 01:29:662 - 这一段可以去黑边造成停顿感 X, 意思是加break嗎，有試過但是不是我想要的感覺
02:15:062 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种时候就不要放那么多了。。 X, 為神馬，這段節奏不是都一樣嗎
02:17:862 (1,2,3) - 可以放原地0.2x间距之类的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211744 X, 這種排法我覺得在02:18:862 (4) - 和02:20:062 (5) - 用比較適合
02:46:262 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 后面有减速, 我觉得这个串用一个原地回转的滑条代替会好一些 X, 串間距不太大應該還好

Foreverends

992 posts

Joined July 2011

Foreverends 2014-01-23T10:01:07+00:00

mod神圖巨壓力;w;

EdelWeiss
00:16:062 (1,2,3) - 我覺得00:16:062 (1) - 可以放在大約x:384 y:196附近,之後則把00:16:462 (2,3) - ctrl+>後放在大約x:216 y:28附近,個人認為flow會比較順><

大約像這樣owo

00:23:262 (1) - 彎一點~
00:25:662 (6) - NC
00:28:062 (1) -

感覺這樣放也不錯~

00:34:262 - 補個circle叠在00:34:362 (1) - 的頭試試
00:48:062 (7) -

QWQ

01:27:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 嗯...個人認為這可以小跳一下:p
02:55:062 (1,2,3) -

你認為這樣放好么?

太神了啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
渣mod抱歉;w;
加油><

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2014-01-23T10:33:46+00:00

Foreverends wrote:
mod神圖巨壓力;w;

EdelWeiss
00:16:062 (1,2,3) - 我覺得00:16:062 (1) - 可以放在大約x:384 y:196附近,之後則把00:16:462 (2,3) - ctrl+>後放在大約x:216 y:28附近,個人認為flow會比較順>< 这梗是做给萨米这种神触玩的反正他能1pcfc
大約像這樣owo
00:23:262 (1) - 彎一點~ ok
00:25:662 (6) - NC ok
00:28:062 (1) -抱歉有点不顺flow
感覺這樣放也不錯~
00:34:262 - 補個circle叠在00:34:362 (1) - 的頭試試跟音轨压力巨大
00:48:062 (7) -不太好看啊
QWQ
01:27:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 嗯...個人認為這可以小跳一下:p 这段为了不掉血只能跟vocal了所以我还是善良一下
02:55:062 (1,2,3) -不跳惹怎么办
你認為這樣放好么?

太神了啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
渣mod抱歉;w;
加油><

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-01-23T14:15:29+00:00

来骗kds

lyrics

儚い思い出に最後の言葉を
囁く風はそよいでる
やわらかな陽射しは僕を見ていた

夢に儚く咲いた
微かな言葉を囁きかけても
牢屋めいた心に
届くことはないと知りながら

それなのに、それなのに
夜にまぎれて歌は消え
息をひそめ

憂いに沈む日々は
まるで六月の雨模様
けれど闇は裂け日は昇り
そして花はまた咲くだろう

囁く、君にもう一度
悪夢が覚めればまた小鳥が歌う
せめての声を聞かせてよ
失うことはもう僕は嫌だから

それなのに、それなのに
夜にまぎれて声は消え
呼吸をやめて

憂いに沈む僕は
まるで六月の雨模様
そして君は遠くのどこへ？
僕はそれすらも分からない

小鳥の歌が響きだす頃
鮮やかに虹がかかり始め
雫にまだ濡れた花々は
夏が来て君に咲いた泉

『EdelWeiss』それは君のこと
儚い思い出に最後の言葉を
囁く風はそよいでる
やわらかな陽射しは僕を見ていた

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2014-01-23T14:15:47+00:00

这diff名真sb

[General]
开头的combo colour在该背景下很难可见，这是逼人关sb么，明明做的这么神

[EdelWeiss]
难道是我AR病发作了，最近总是读不清AR9
改成AR8以后acc又提高了，所以即使可能是我有病，也请你考虑一下AR8
00:23:062 (13,1) - 个人不是很喜欢这个flow，建议：（如果不接受的话也请把blanket做好）

SPOILER

00:24:862 (2,3,4,5) - 音量递增？
00:34:262 - 由于这里有歌词，所以很容易按错，建议考虑
00:48:862 (3) - 3/4有些奇怪，建议1/2或者1/1
00:57:862 (1,2,3) - 如果不是特别的梗，建议向右下移动2小格，因为和00:57:662 (9) - 距离保持统一，而这里有个三连的auto stack
01:48:862 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉有点莫名，初见唯一一个断了的同类九连，建议缩小距离
01:50:262 (3,4,5,6) - blanket
02:04:062 (3,4) - 缩小目测距离，跟02:04:462 (4,5) - 区分开
02:59:262 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ……

[Hard]
00:49:662 (1,2) - 感觉交换combo比较好，更能读
01:23:062 (2,3) - 感觉有点像3/4+1/2了，总之只是说一下
01:27:262 - 加个break？
01:42:262 (4,5) - 间距拉开一些，最好不碰上
02:15:062 (7,1,2,3,4) - 这边遮挡有点那啥了……02:15:462 (2,3,4) - 放到x:320 y:200？（同时注意auto stack）
没啥问题不愧是G神

[Normal]
00:41:462 (5) - 建议指向左下而不是右下，这样可以保持345的间距一致，当然后面的部分可能就要调整
01:27:262 - 加个break？
02:39:262 (4,5,6,7,1) - 这种重叠对新人来说应该是比较苦手的，建议重新考虑
02:44:862 (2,3,4,5) - 这个排列也是非常吃人，建议重新考虑
02:46:862 (1,1) - 嗯……你要作甚，还不如空着，其次这里的减速也很让新人看不懂，至少不要减速
03:11:262 (3,4,5,6) - ^

[Easy]
00:00:862 (1) - 你这个花不如让科林帮你画……有点别扭，再一个后面的遮挡也有些大了，实际上这类滑条都建议摆在一串note的最后
这不就是完全看不见了么

SPOILER

其他没了

Good luck~

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2014-01-23T14:36:18+00:00

Flower wrote:
这diff名真sb

[General]
开头的combo colour在该背景下很难可见，这是逼人关sb么，明明做的这么神

[EdelWeiss]
难道是我AR病发作了，最近总是读不清AR9
改成AR8以后acc又提高了，所以即使可能是我有病，也请你考虑一下AR8
00:23:062 (13,1) - 个人不是很喜欢这个flow，建议：（如果不接受的话也请把blanket做好）
SPOILER
blanket做好
00:24:862 (2,3,4,5) - 音量递增？听着不爽
00:34:262 - 由于这里有歌词，所以很容易按错，建议考虑坑人用
00:48:862 (3) - 3/4有些奇怪，建议1/2或者1/1 这里用1/2听着不如3/4好听啊
00:57:862 (1,2,3) - 如果不是特别的梗，建议向右下移动2小格，因为和00:57:662 (9) - 距离保持统一，而这里有个三连的auto stack ok
01:48:862 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉有点莫名，初见唯一一个断了的同类九连，建议缩小距离求试图时这个梗还好啊主要我能打
01:50:262 (3,4,5,6) - blanket ok
02:04:062 (3,4) - 缩小目测距离，跟02:04:462 (4,5) - 区分开 orz 因为前面有用这梗所以应该比较好辨认
02:59:262 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - …… 哈哈哈哈被坑了吧

[Hard]
00:49:662 (1,2) - 感觉交换combo比较好，更能读
01:23:062 (2,3) - 感觉有点像3/4+1/2了，总之只是说一下
01:27:262 - 加个break？
01:42:262 (4,5) - 间距拉开一些，最好不碰上
02:15:062 (7,1,2,3,4) - 这边遮挡有点那啥了……02:15:462 (2,3,4) - 放到x:320 y:200？（同时注意auto stack）
没啥问题不愧是G神

[Normal]
00:41:462 (5) - 建议指向左下而不是右下，这样可以保持345的间距一致，当然后面的部分可能就要调整找人试试好了
01:27:262 - 加个break？ ok
02:39:262 (4,5,6,7,1) - 这种重叠对新人来说应该是比较苦手的，建议重新考虑没梗
02:44:862 (2,3,4,5) - 这个排列也是非常吃人，建议重新考虑没梗+1
02:46:862 (1,1) - 嗯……你要作甚，还不如空着，其次这里的减速也很让新人看不懂，至少不要减速 ok
03:11:262 (3,4,5,6) - ^ 只是想回到中间.......

[Easy]
00:00:862 (1) - 你这个花不如让科林帮你画……有点别扭，再一个后面的遮挡也有些大了，实际上这类滑条都建议摆在一串note的最后
这不就是完全看不见了么
SPOILER
其他没了

Good luck~

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-01-23T17:00:19+00:00

In game ask~
支持电音mapper star~
[General]

为了种草牺牲了kiai....
难度名EdelWeiss似乎不能用了因为规则有了改动
另外 tags 要加入“sm21893513 vocaloid hatsune miku”
检查每个难度的widescreen support 开启
检查每个难度的preview time设置

[Storyboard]

00:26:462 - 时间点的过度请做一些效果或者切换预示
初音背景切换后乃是完全还原pv的制作方法（实际上这个曲子的pv做的不好up主偷懒了）但是在osu里面为了凸显让漂浮点可以试着在sb底部加上蓝色烟雾等等
实在没感觉出sb里面的effect和effect2有什么用如果是为了遮盖浮点的话没有必要这样呀 nick的效果的确很漂亮
01:30:462 - 这个时间点可以做扩影的效果（用一个bg放大渐渐消失

[EdelWeiss]

00:23:262 (1,2) - 手动把1 2 的时间点对调下这样是一个flow 不要ctrl+G 那样会反过来
01:50:462 (5,6) - 贴的太近了 blanket不太好
声音渐小的想法不错但是这里因为是这种位置很近的单点梗音效达到让人听到的音量挺重要的（坚持就忽略这句吧/.\)

[G's Hard]

00:05:662 (1,2,1) - 空隙保持一样
00:39:862 - 时间线的音量调小些 clap的音量很吵
01:07:062 (5) - 时间点换到01:06:862 - （不喜欢Ignore 只是感觉这样打起来舒服些
01:46:262 (5,1) - 如果是跳的话再远一些吧别让人误认为是spacing的问题
01:48:062 (1) - ^
02:15:462 (2,3,4) - 为了美观不要和02:14:662 (6,7) - 叠到一起

[Normal]

00:02:462 (4) - 为什么要折返？直接长滑条才合适
00:08:462 - 这里为什么不map呢你这里都做了00:05:062 (2) -
00:40:662 (3,4,5) - 请与00:43:862 (9) - 保持一致
00:42:462 (1) - nc 太长了都到10了
01:16:662 (5) - 不好看
02:45:462 (3,4,5) - 这种overlap在normal里面很不合适出现3个以上combo的时候normal难度最好不要有overlap

[Awaken's Easy]

00:00:862 (1) - 做不好看就不要做了= = 人家会问这事什么的

渣mod一枚祝早rank~

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-01-24T09:15:52+00:00

我决定把你跟我画的那2B花花删掉
换上美丽的滑条组

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2014-01-24T09:18:02+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
In game ask~
支持电音mapper star~
[General]
为了种草牺牲了kiai....
难度名EdelWeiss似乎不能用了因为规则有了改动
另外 tags 要加入“sm21893513 vocaloid hatsune miku”
检查每个难度的widescreen support 开启 no 开这个选项会影响sb
检查每个难度的preview time设置都一样也就无所谓了吧23333
[Storyboard]
00:26:462 - 时间点的过度请做一些效果或者切换预示做不动那个光晕我惆怅了一晚上
初音背景切换后乃是完全还原pv的制作方法（实际上这个曲子的pv做的不好up主偷懒了）但是在osu里面为了凸显让漂浮点可以试着在sb底部加上蓝色烟雾等等可以试试
实在没感觉出sb里面的effect和effect2有什么用如果是为了遮盖浮点的话没有必要这样呀 nick的效果的确很漂亮 2是用来给前面加光的
01:30:462 - 这个时间点可以做扩影的效果（用一个bg放大渐渐消失没想过不过我想到另一种更好的
[EdelWeiss]
00:23:262 (1,2) - 手动把1 2 的时间点对调下这样是一个flow 不要ctrl+G 那样会反过来自己打着不舒服
01:50:462 (5,6) - 贴的太近了 blanket不太好色卡mod完后改了
声音渐小的想法不错但是这里因为是这种位置很近的单点梗音效达到让人听到的音量挺重要的（坚持就忽略这句吧/.\) 能听见啊
[G's Hard]
00:05:662 (1,2,1) - 空隙保持一样
00:39:862 - 时间线的音量调小些 clap的音量很吵
01:07:062 (5) - 时间点换到01:06:862 - （不喜欢Ignore 只是感觉这样打起来舒服些
01:46:262 (5,1) - 如果是跳的话再远一些吧别让人误认为是spacing的问题
01:48:062 (1) - ^
02:15:462 (2,3,4) - 为了美观不要和02:14:662 (6,7) - 叠到一起
[Normal]
00:02:462 (4) - 为什么要折返？直接长滑条才合适
00:08:462 - 这里为什么不map呢你这里都做了00:05:062 (2) -
00:40:662 (3,4,5) - 请与00:43:862 (9) - 保持一致
00:42:462 (1) - nc 太长了都到10了
01:16:662 (5) - 不好看
02:45:462 (3,4,5) - 这种overlap在normal里面很不合适出现3个以上combo的时候normal难度最好不要有overlap
[Awaken's Easy]
00:00:862 (1) - 做不好看就不要做了= = 人家会问这事什么的
渣mod一枚祝早rank~

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2014-01-24T09:21:40+00:00

Awaken wrote:
我决定把你跟我画的那2B花花删掉
换上美丽的滑条组

只要不是弯弯曲曲的我就接受
~~然后我打算把你的gd slot给妹儿特~~

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2014-01-25T09:08:34+00:00

OkP

irz

16:30 qq944364487: ball mod
16:30 fanzhen0019: a我在做SB
16:31 *qq944364487 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/307657 OkameP - EdelWeiss [EdelWeiss]]
16:31 qq944364487: 求摸啊
16:31 qq944364487: 我都不会sb
16:31 fanzhen0019: 可以irc
16:32 qq944364487: 厚
16:33 *fanzhen0019 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/307657 OkameP - EdelWeiss [EdelWeiss]]
16:37 fanzhen0019: 这跳的
16:37 qq944364487: 嘛
16:42 fanzhen0019: 这
16:42 fanzhen0019: 00:34:362 (1) -
16:43 fanzhen0019: 节奏有点怪
16:43 fanzhen0019: 前方一大片草
16:44 fanzhen0019: 槽我没掉线吧
16:44 qq944364487: 没
16:45 fanzhen0019: 00:34:362 (1) - nazi x320 y56
16:45 fanzhen0019: 直线
16:45 qq944364487: 啊嘞
16:47 qq944364487: 算了已经3个人说着了我还是在前面加上note吧
16:47 fanzhen0019: 你这SB不是做的挺好..
16:48 qq944364487: 渣啊
16:50 fanzhen0019: 00:57:862 (1,2,3) -
16:51 fanzhen0019: 手动stack一下
16:51 fanzhen0019: 打的时候并不平行
16:52 qq944364487: k
16:53 fanzhen0019: reserve用的挺好
16:53 fanzhen0019: 我都找不到合适的哭哭
16:53 fanzhen0019: 01:01:662 (1,2,3) - 这三个你可以做成blanket
16:54 qq944364487: 这个我不打算blanket0.0
16:54 qq944364487: 感觉不是很舒服
16:54 fanzhen0019: haoba
16:57 fanzhen0019: 02:34:062 (1,2,3,4,1) - 摆的有点奇怪..?
16:58 qq944364487: 没想到更好的怎么办……
16:58 fanzhen0019: 摆成弧吧
16:58 fanzhen0019: 关掉grid
16:59 fanzhen0019: 02:52:662 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 其实drum感觉怪怪
17:00 qq944364487: 这里找学姐帮忙找的音效结果用上不合适
17:01 fanzhen0019: 没啥了
17:01 qq944364487: 然后发现drum还正常点
17:01 qq944364487: 好

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-01-25T11:02:05+00:00

最终版本

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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256,192,78462,6,0,P|223:213|182:222,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,170,79262,2,0,P|102:236|165:304,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,299,80462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,261,80862,6,0,P|346:261|391:280,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,207,81662,2,0,P|464:220|504:220,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
509,300,82462,2,0,B|484:307|459:302|459:302|434:362|360:354,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,331,83662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,308,84062,6,0,P|178:297|134:298,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,231,84862,2,0,P|87:190|94:143,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,135,85662,2,2,B|211:127|248:146|248:146|265:189|241:234,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,294,86862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,312,87262,5,0,0:0:0:0:
207,116,90462,6,0,P|143:153|66:108,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,74,91662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,35,92062,2,0,P|254:51|279:81,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,154,92862,2,0,P|308:181|346:193,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,273,93662,6,0,P|263:288|238:370,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,348,94862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,336,95262,2,0,P|419:304|418:251,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,196,96062,2,0,P|385:156|410:125,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,54,96862,6,0,B|343:73|325:102|325:102|276:68|227:98,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,164,98062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,236,98462,2,0,P|322:275|322:319,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,357,99262,2,0,P|216:371|172:371,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,317,100062,6,0,B|120:288|108:269|108:269|124:237|124:237|108:208|126:162,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,90,101262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,48,101662,2,0,P|267:57|315:52,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,109,102462,2,0,P|402:106|441:115,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,184,103262,6,0,B|492:240|492:240|488:289|488:289|503:342,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,367,104462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,353,104862,2,0,P|312:341|268:340,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,273,105662,2,0,P|184:272|146:259,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,187,106462,6,0,P|66:248|102:327,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,352,107662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,356,108062,2,0,L|335:328,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,252,108862,2,0,L|421:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,286,109662,6,0,P|486:226|423:151,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,111,110862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,92,111262,2,0,P|261:62|254:22,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,35,112062,2,0,P|144:62|104:69,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,146,112862,6,0,B|163:146|200:119|200:119|228:164|279:173,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,220,114062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,292,114462,2,0,L|347:375,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,357,115262,2,0,P|227:368|178:360,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,332,116062,38,0,B|80:276|112:224|112:224|60:176|60:176|104:112|184:128,1,320,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,84,118462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,200,119262,6,0,B|272:240|328:212|328:212|340:220|340:220|356:216|356:216|368:224|368:224|384:224|384:224|368:280|412:328|464:324,1,320,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,356,121662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,324,122462,6,0,P|450:279|463:240,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,169,123262,2,0,P|490:130|484:91,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,127,124062,2,0,P|374:141|325:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,102,124862,2,0,P|223:100|186:114,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125662,12,2,128862,0:0:0:0:
256,192,129662,6,0,P|222:215|176:218,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,158,130462,2,0,P|104:218|125:279,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,348,131662,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,354,132462,6,0,P|405:342|451:351,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,290,133262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
491,210,133662,2,0,L|478:130,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,290,134862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
431,334,135262,6,0,P|394:353|356:354,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,301,136062,2,0,P|256:302|221:321,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,287,136862,2,0,L|113:212,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,366,138062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,381,138462,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,143,141662,6,0,P|295:79|340:2,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,75,142862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,145,143262,2,0,P|397:190|367:215,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,216,144062,2,0,P|267:244|255:282,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,278,144862,6,0,P|160:199|78:174,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,251,146062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,330,146462,2,0,P|144:355|197:354,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,318,147262,2,0,P|292:321|323:346,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,310,148062,6,0,B|375:279|346:261|346:261|376:214|350:163,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,210,149262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,244,149662,2,0,P|173:258|129:258,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,191,150462,2,0,P|77:152|77:108,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,54,151262,6,0,B|164:44|188:60|188:60|228:52|228:52|256:68|286:62,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,95,152462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,163,152862,2,0,P|391:203|396:251,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,299,153662,2,0,P|342:338|333:377,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,364,154462,6,0,B|205:353|205:353|153:369|153:369|90:353,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,318,155662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,276,156062,2,0,P|107:240|108:196,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,177,156862,2,0,P|186:137|199:99,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,67,157662,6,0,P|211:22|132:58,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,105,158862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,184,159262,2,0,L|117:273,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,160062,2,0,L|212:313,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,357,160862,6,0,P|212:381|287:318,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,273,162062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,220,162462,2,0,P|431:193|471:186,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,107,163262,2,0,P|425:77|418:37,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,61,164062,6,0,B|340:98|368:136|368:136|324:160|312:212,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,252,165262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,295,165662,2,0,P|150:302|110:329,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,299,166462,2,0,P|38:256|20:215,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,143,167262,6,0,P|78:132|126:138,1,80,14|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,78,168062,2,0,P|213:82|251:71,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,128,168862,2,0,L|303:208,1,80,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,241,169662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,164,170062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,214,170462,6,0,P|71:199|46:117,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,139,171662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,151,172062,2,0,P|227:183|226:236,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,291,172862,2,0,P|193:331|218:362,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,302,173662,6,0,P|311:315|355:311,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,236,174462,2,0,P|414:234|452:246,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,167,175262,2,0,P|460:126|470:81,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,44,176062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
345,105,176462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,122,176862,6,0,P|231:103|179:105,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,161,177662,2,0,P|101:159|66:140,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,205,178462,2,0,L|32:292,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,337,179262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,265,179662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,327,180062,6,0,P|243:317|279:238,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,162,181262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
269,82,181662,2,0,P|296:55|346:44,1,80,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,68,182462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
459,131,182862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
446,209,183262,6,0,P|405:266|316:256,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,194,184462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,183,184862,2,0,P|247:215|238:253,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,318,185662,2,0,P|242:354|209:376,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,301,186462,6,0,B|150:273|105:276|105:276|72:311|23:304,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,223,187662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,195,188062,2,0,P|139:160|142:115,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,92,188862,2,0,P|221:52|244:20,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,81,189662,6,0,B|341:106|378:93|378:93|417:76|466:100,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,165,190862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,179,191262,2,0,P|303:200|284:242,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,211,192062,2,0,P|206:172|179:135,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,107,192862,5,6,0:0:0:0:

Rotte

582 posts

Joined October 2011

Rotte 2014-01-26T09:58:20+00:00

路边的草泥马，你真的好漂亮啊~

冲啊草泥马！撞死麻花！

[General]

Timing 862→855，根据音效听出来的。
超喜欢你的normal，咱要mark一下研究研究>_>

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[Awaken's Easy]

你这个复制狂咱就不说了。

Rhythm

02:12:462 (1) - 挪到344|268？
02:18:462 (1) - 其实咱觉得这个note完全可以去掉。
02:45:262 - 这个地方根据音乐完全没有任何声音，为什么要加note，求解。

Sound Effect

[Normal]

咱喜欢这个diff，很喜欢，非常喜欢！！！

Rhythm

00:02:462 (4) - 这是咱错觉么，这个slider长度不对啊，节奏也不对。

00:21:262 (3,4) - 这样好看些。

咱的建议

324,224,21262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,224,21462,2,0,P|296:176|252:168,1,90.0000034332277,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:49:462 (2) - 根据你的这个combo，咱觉得就这一小段用1/1slider有些不划算，干脆跟着音乐的clap，用1/2得了。

02:14:862 (6,1) - 这样可能会好看些，你试试？

咱的建议

400,364,134862,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,288,135262,2,0,P|456:248|444:196,1,90.0000034332277
416,164,135862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,128,136062,2,0,P|384:80|396:28,1,90.0000034332277,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,48,136862,2,0,L|212:32,1,90.0000034332277,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:18:462 (1) - 这个note去掉吧，感觉去掉更好。
02:20:062 (2) - NC吧。

02:36:862 (3) - Blanket了一下。

咱的建议

360,312,156862,2,0,P|344:292|320:276,2,45.0000017166138,8|0|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:54:462 (2) - 没叠好。
03:05:662 (6,1) - 这俩遮挡没问题么。

Sound Effect

01:25:662 (1) - 这个开头音效建议声音再小些，否则听来很突兀。

[G's Hard]

None.

Rhythm

00:08:662 (4) - Move to 124|364 ?

00:59:062 (2,3,4) - 感觉原来的不好看，不知道这样改了改你觉得如何。

咱的建议

92,228,59062,1,8,3:0:0:0:
144,172,59262,2,0,P|157:141|154:101,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,52,59662,1,8,3:0:0:0:

01:23:062 (2,3) - 这俩没叠好。

Sound Effect

啥都没。

[Insane]

跨度真大。

Rhythm

00:16:862 (1) - 个人认为这个flow不好。但是这个图比较难，咱不好说咱的看法对不对，底下是咱的小改。

咱的建议

177,255,16862,6,0,P|117:283|52:272,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,296,17462,2,0,P|382:268|448:280,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,366,18062,2,0,P|428:368|396:360,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,180,18462,2,0,L|504:112,2,67.5000025749208,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,19062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,112,19262,69,0,0:0:0:0:
236,64,19462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,64,19562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,64,19662,1,2,0:0:0:0:

00:28:662 (3,4,5,6) - 还是觉得flow有点问题，咱稍作修改。

咱的建议

244,156,28662,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,156,28762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,156,28862,2,0,B|184:140|184:140|144:136|112:160,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,228,29262,2,0,P|56:276|84:332,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:42:062 (10,1,2) - 同上

咱的建议

264,324,42462,6,0,B|216:348|216:348|176:316|136:328,1,135.000005149842,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,364,43062,1,8,0:0:0:0:

01:07:662 (6) - ctrl+g 试试。01:43:262 (1) - 直的打起来不爽，咱改成弯的你看看感觉怎么样。

咱的建议

456,280,103262,6,0,L|432:368,1,90

02:09:662 (5) - 这里跳起来超级不爽，建议ctrl+g换回来还好些。02:46:062 (3) - ctrl+g如果这个换了的话，建议下面也接着02:46:462 (1,3) - ctrl+g，打起来感觉就顺溜多了。 02:47:662 (2) - ctrl+g02:48:062 (1,2,3,4) - 这么说吧，咱个人觉得这种梗用在这里打起来超级不爽，咱认为34交换一下顺序跳更舒服些，不知道你怎么想。如果你觉得你这种梗打起来挺爽，那就别换了，如果有很多人觉得都不喜欢这个梗，那建议还是换掉为好。

Sound Effect

没。

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你中奖了。

:3

不过话说回来，咱觉得你的鬼畜I还有超级大的提升空间，建议再多找些mod，那个normal咱觉得是很成功了，尽量少改那个:3
哦对了，那个hard咱觉得嘛>_> 音效挺好，排列卖糕的，有点普通了。

祝顺利rank。

Sun Rainbow

1,382 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2014-01-26T13:01:32+00:00

request from QQ
00:25:662 (1) - 就这样的光晕还不如用white effect变个色
01:27:462 (1) - 建议黑白变化然后white
01:56:062 (1) - 变成胶片那样的背景?

麻花倾情力作必推
神SB 神note
我也会努力的((‵□′)) ~

Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2014-01-26T13:47:15+00:00

[General]
EdelWeiss這diff name大丈夫??????

[SB]
最後那段的sb不夠激昂啊,應該噴雪花什麽的才對啊(逃

[Insane]
感覺沒啥問題(其實是懶)

[G's Hard]
00:05:662 (1,2,1) - 可以弄成三個一組的pattern
00:32:262 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:42:062 (2) - 感覺可以音量-10%,不然跟後面那個音一比就重疊了聽上去不爽
00:43:862 (1,2,3) - 這裡也可以做相類似的處理
00:56:462 (4) - 感覺有點吵,乾脆remove clap吧
00:57:262 (6,7) - 同理
01:12:062 (1) - Remove NC
01:15:862 (2,3,4) - spacing
01:25:662 (1) - 這樣子中間的音就不見了...
01:26:262 (2,3,4) - 醜
01:29:662 (1) - 建議分成兩個
02:20:862 (1) - ^
02:42:862 (2,3) - 這裡spacing感覺怪怪的,不過先留著吧,我也不肯定
02:50:062 (4) - finish?
03:02:862 (8) - ^

先這樣吧,加油~

Last edited by Regou 2014-01-30T07:01:25+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2014-01-26T14:14:09+00:00

Rotte wrote:
路边的草泥马，你真的好漂亮啊~

冲啊草泥马！撞死麻花！

[General]

Timing 862→855，根据音效听出来的。
超喜欢你的normal，咱要mark一下研究研究>_>
fear测得我听起来没错话说你确定你没早打？（话说我原来测得就是855来着！
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

[Normal]

咱喜欢这个diff，很喜欢，非常喜欢！！！
Rhythm
00:02:462 (4) - 这是咱错觉么，这个slider长度不对啊，节奏也不对。就这个还能听
00:21:262 (3,4) - 这样好看些。好
咱的建议
324,224,21262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,224,21462,2,0,P|296:176|252:168,1,90.0000034332277,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:49:462 (2) - 根据你的这个combo，咱觉得就这一小段用1/1slider有些不划算，干脆跟着音乐的clap，用1/2得了。好
02:14:862 (6,1) - 这样可能会好看些，你试试？ no
咱的建议
400,364,134862,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,288,135262,2,0,P|456:248|444:196,1,90.0000034332277
416,164,135862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,128,136062,2,0,P|384:80|396:28,1,90.0000034332277,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,48,136862,2,0,L|212:32,1,90.0000034332277,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:18:462 (1) - 这个note去掉吧，感觉去掉更好。 no
02:20:062 (2) - NC吧。 no
02:36:862 (3) - Blanket了一下。好
咱的建议
360,312,156862,2,0,P|344:292|320:276,2,45.0000017166138,8|0|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:54:462 (2) - 没叠好。好
03:05:662 (6,1) - 这俩遮挡没问题么。萌大奶
Sound Effect
01:25:662 (1) - 这个开头音效建议声音再小些，否则听来很突兀。好

Sound Effect
啥都没。

[Insane]

跨度真大。感谢妹儿特的gd还没做完不过我估计坠毁
Rhythm
00:16:862 (1) - 个人认为这个flow不好。但是这个图比较难，咱不好说咱的看法对不对，底下是咱的小改。不太舒服
咱的建议
177,255,16862,6,0,P|117:283|52:272,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,296,17462,2,0,P|382:268|448:280,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,366,18062,2,0,P|428:368|396:360,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,180,18462,2,0,L|504:112,2,67.5000025749208,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,19062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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236,64,19462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,64,19562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,64,19662,1,2,0:0:0:0:
00:28:662 (3,4,5,6) - 还是觉得flow有点问题，咱稍作修改。好吧这图我放弃乱扭滑条了
咱的建议
244,156,28662,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,156,28762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,156,28862,2,0,B|184:140|184:140|144:136|112:160,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,228,29262,2,0,P|56:276|84:332,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:42:062 (10,1,2) - 同上同上
咱的建议
264,324,42462,6,0,B|216:348|216:348|176:316|136:328,1,135.000005149842,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,364,43062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
[*]01:07:662 (6) - ctrl+g 试试。 no
[*]01:43:262 (1) - 直的打起来不爽，咱改成弯的你看看感觉怎么样。这梗我试着还行萨米很流畅
咱的建议
456,280,103262,6,0,L|432:368,1,90
[*]02:09:662 (5) - 这里跳起来超级不爽，建议ctrl+g换回来还好些。太顺就不好玩了
[*]02:46:062 (3) - ctrl+g如果这个换了的话，建议下面也接着02:46:462 (1,3) - ctrl+g，打起来感觉就顺溜多了。又是自己打起来顺流系列（我在说我
[*]02:47:662 (2) - ctrl+g 不爽
[*]02:48:062 (1,2,3,4) - 这么说吧，咱个人觉得这种梗用在这里打起来超级不爽，咱认为34交换一下顺序跳更舒服些，不知道你怎么想。如果你觉得你这种梗打起来挺爽，那就别换了，如果有很多人觉得都不喜欢这个梗，那建议还是换掉为好。挺好玩的

Sound Effect
没。

--------------------------------------------------------

你中奖了。

:3

不过话说回来，咱觉得你的鬼畜I还有超级大的提升空间，建议再多找些mod，那个normal咱觉得是很成功了，尽量少改那个:3
哦对了，那个hard咱觉得嘛>_> 音效挺好，排列卖糕的，有点普通了。

祝顺利rank。

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2014-01-26T15:50:57+00:00

Hi

[Normal]

00:02:462 (4) - 这个节奏这么放是故意的么orz
00:23:262 (1) - 个人喜欢尾巴朝上拉点，看起来和2,3距离一样
01:01:662 (7) - 这可以考虑nc
01:27:262 这里这个break不要的话感觉效果会好些
01:53:662 (2,3) - 试试换一换节奏呢
SPOILER
01:58:062 break可以拉到这里试试效果
02:16:862 (4) - 这一段开始试试这样呢
SPOILER

[G's Hard]

00:47:062 (1) - 总感觉这类似的节奏很别扭，但是我也没想好怎么改orz
02:10:462 (8) - nc

[EdelWeiss]

00:03:462 (1) - 可以算没叠好么（逃
00:21:662 (6) - combo太长了的感觉，可以考虑nc一个
01:02:062 (2,3,4) - blanket可以再好一点

其实真没什么好吐槽的 ;w;

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2014-01-28T04:08:38+00:00

Melt wrote:
Hi

[Normal]
00:02:462 (4) - 这个节奏这么放是故意的么orz 对
00:23:262 (1) - 个人喜欢尾巴朝上拉点，看起来和2,3距离一样我懒不要打我
01:01:662 (7) - 这可以考虑nc好
01:27:262 这里这个break不要的话感觉效果会好些好
01:53:662 (2,3) - 试试换一换节奏呢跟鼓
SPOILER
01:58:062 break可以拉到这里试试效果不是很好
02:16:862 (4) - 这一段开始试试这样呢不跟鼓了啊
SPOILER
[G's Hard]
00:47:062 (1) - 总感觉这类似的节奏很别扭，但是我也没想好怎么改orz
02:10:462 (8) - nc
[EdelWeiss]
00:03:462 (1) - 可以算没叠好么（逃故意的23333
00:21:662 (6) - combo太长了的感觉，可以考虑nc一个别介这段还没完
01:02:062 (2,3,4) - blanket可以再好一点再好点就不好看了
其实真没什么好吐槽的 ;w;

pw384

2,286 posts

Joined January 2012

pw384 2014-01-29T00:33:29+00:00

渣mod即将降临！！！!!!!!!!!!!111111111111111111

哇善良图

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.

[General]

虽然preview time刚好是40%，但是还是建议在那个地方设黄线
Combo5 Combo6的颜色太近了，把5调亮一点，6调深一点吧

[Insane]

03:08:462 (2) - 终于找到一个小问题了，这里应该往下移一格，这样7 8 9 2的绝对间距就都一样了
03:08:862 (1,1) - 这两个任选一个去掉NC吧，虽然很nazi。。
图不错，根本找不到什么吗OAO 明知我mod很烂还找我要mod，~~真是zz~~

[G]

01:34:462 (3,4,5,1) - Spacing
01:47:262 (3,4,5,1) - ^
02:42:462 (1) - finish
02:44:062 (1) - ^
03:01:662 (5) - NC. 你看这里02:48:862 (1) - 是加了NC的，而现在这一段的音乐和02:48:862 (1) - 一样，所以也应该加上NC

[Normal]

00:02:462 (4) - 这里不应该是1/1滑条吗，3/4听上去特别奇怪......
00:21:462 (4,5) - 我建议这两个滑条头的hitsound应该反过来
01:29:662 (1) - 换成两个滑条会比较好吧，两个又不长又不短的折返现在几乎不用了
01:51:262 (4) - ^ 下面一样的地方就不说了OAO
02:34:462 - 这里为什么要开始减速呢。。

[Awaken]

Combo color的梗呢？最好和其它难度一样，在开头用深色，之后用蓝和白色
00:07:262 (1) - 不够圆啊233
这是我画的代码：
149,188,7262,6,0,B|210:186|210:186|236:256|316:260|384:204|352:136|324:104,1,320
00:10:462 (1) - ^
01:27:262 (1) - 去掉这个note和后面的break吧
02:18:462 - ^
挺工整的，~~有啥好mod的啊~~

这图真是把我虐惨了

我不会mod一张准rank的图啊

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2014-01-29T03:53:50+00:00

384059043 wrote:
渣mod即将降临！！！!!!!!!!!!!111111111111111111

哇善良图

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.

[General]
虽然preview time刚好是40%，但是还是建议在那个地方设黄线

Combo5 Combo6的颜色太近了，把5调亮一点，6调深一点吧

[Insane]
03:08:462 (2) - 终于找到一个小问题了，这里应该往下移一格，这样7 8 9 2的绝对间距就都一样了 ok

03:08:862 (1,1) - 这两个任选一个去掉NC吧，虽然很nazi。。 no

图不错，根本找不到什么吗OAO 明知我mod很烂还找我要mod，~~真是zz~~

[Normal]
00:02:462 (4) - 这里不应该是1/1滑条吗，3/4听上去特别奇怪...... 1/1也挺奇怪的

00:21:462 (4,5) - 我建议这两个滑条头的hitsound应该反过来好

01:29:662 (1) - 换成两个滑条会比较好吧，两个又不长又不短的折返现在几乎不用了接不上梗

01:51:262 (4) - ^ 下面一样的地方就不说了OAO

02:34:462 - 这里为什么要开始减速呢。。直接用的g神的diff然后懒得改绿线了23333

这图真是把我虐惨了

我不会mod一张准rank的图啊

妈蛋我都没怎么改过好么

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-01-29T04:30:32+00:00

384059043 wrote:
[Awaken]

Combo color的梗呢？最好和其它难度一样，在开头用深色，之后用蓝和白色

00:07:262 (1) - 不够圆啊233
这是我画的代码：
149,188,7262,6,0,B|210:186|210:186|236:256|316:260|384:204|352:136|324:104,1,320

00:10:462 (1) - ^

01:27:262 (1) - 去掉这个note和后面的break吧

02:18:462 - ^

挺工整的，~~有啥好mod的啊~~

这图真是把我虐惨了

我不会mod一张准rank的图啊
All fixed

小猫的引用不了啊改了几个那个没音的加note是为了维持节奏？我觉得删掉有点违和的样子;w;
thx for mods~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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100,251,146062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,244,149662,2,0,P|173:258|129:258,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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