1. 02:51:394 (2,3) - Try Ctrl+G and see if you like it.
   
2. 03:02:446 (7) - I recommend a NC here because there is a new rhythm starting. It will help players read the 03:02:785 (8) better.
   
3. 03:25:849 (8,9,1) - The stack causes it to touch the HP bar, maybe you can move 03:23:405 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - down a few grids.
   
4. 03:39:405 (2,3) - Imo you should use larger DS because this is a new rhythm. It will help the player realize the 3 is on the blue tick. You can try more like so:
   
   Example

   
5. 05:18:358 (1,2) - Maybe you prefer to switch NC here? Because the downbeat is on 2.
   
6. 09:13:692 - Try a triplet here instead to make it a bit more interesting.
   
   Example

   
7. 09:42:318 (2) - Just flow suggestion. I thought this flow felt strange. It is better if 09:42:318 (2) flows more downwards at first after the 1 imo. Maybe you can try this:
   
   Example

   Copy 09:40:818 (3) and paste at 09:42:318. Flip 180 and place blanketing 3.
   
   That's just an example you can do anything.
8. 11:19:592 (1,2,3,4,1) - Consider to replace these with a spinner. It would make the end of the map unique from the rest since you don't use a spinner anywhere else.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello~ Hi UWS san

[Marathon]

1. 02:51:394 (2,3) - Try Ctrl+G and see if you like it.
   
2. 03:02:446 (7) - I recommend a NC here because there is a new rhythm starting. It will help players read the 03:02:785 (8) better.
   
3. 03:25:849 (8,9,1) - The stack causes it to touch the HP bar, maybe you can move 03:23:405 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - down a few grids.
   
4. 03:39:405 (2,3) - Imo you should use larger DS because this is a new rhythm. It will help the player realize the 3 is on the blue tick. You can try more like so:
   
   Example

   
5. 05:18:358 (1,2) - Maybe you prefer to switch NC here? Because the downbeat is on 2.
   You are right. but keep. I guess Pentagon is beautiful lol
   
6. 09:13:692 - Try a triplet here instead to make it a bit more interesting.
   
   Example

   
7. 09:42:318 (2) - Just flow suggestion. I thought this flow felt strange. It is better if 09:42:318 (2) flows more downwards at first after the 1 imo. Maybe you can try this:
   
   Example

   Copy 09:40:818 (3) and paste at 09:42:318. Flip 180 and place blanketing 3.
   
   That's just an example you can do anything.
   thanks for suggestion :3 but sorry. I think it =,=
   
8. 11:19:592 (1,2,3,4,1) - Consider to replace these with a spinner. It would make the end of the map unique from the rest since you don't use a spinner anywhere else.

Really wonderful map. Check these and I can rank.

Asphyxia wrote:

Graz Satellite

-Umi- wrote:

omedeto !!!

arigatou !!

BeatofIke wrote:

OMG YES!

- R u m i a - wrote:

holy ! gratz love this.

Secretpipe wrote:

Gratz Satellite

Oracle wrote:

Congratz!!!

thanks!!!

-Asagi wrote:

Wow Ranked!!
Gratz Satellite :3

Andrea wrote:

Amazing work <3

Congrats

Scorpiour wrote:

finally!!

おめでとうございます～

Darksonic wrote:

Congratulations! thanks for doing a hard work at ranking more senya stuff! <3

Decipher wrote:

おめでとう！！！
Gazel is senya master

xChippy wrote:

MOAR Senyaaa :3 Omedetou Satellite-san ~(*w*)~

Natsu wrote:

おめでとう

ありがとう

Dai wrote:

WOW congrats!!!!!

Kodora wrote:

Epic work, gratz moe Gazel! >w<

Lust wrote:

congrats

thanks

Freya wrote:

gratz

KSHR wrote:

やっときたか・・