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u's - Natsuiro Egao de 1, 2, Jump!

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taka1235
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年10月5日 at 14:08:25

Artist: u's
Title: Natsuiro Egao de 1, 2, Jump!
Source: Love Live! School idol project
Tags: Mermaid Festa Summer Smiles Star Stream muse
BPM: 170.01
Filesize: 23488kb
Play Time: 04:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.9 stars, 816 notes)
Download: u's - Natsuiro Egao de 1, 2, Jump!
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Kodora
Great map! :3
Kodora
Ok, i love doubleposting

[General]

  1. According to new rules ranked score is no longer approval criteria, so you can't shoot it for approval :( You must map more diffs to see it ranked.
  2. Please find good replacement for soft-hitfinish2.wav - it sounds way too long, loud and weird :(
  3. Also i suggest reduce volume in all sections by 20% - 80-100% sounds too loud here IMO :(
  4. Songs starts too suddenly, please add Audio Lead-In 2000 using notepad
[Insane]

*Please remove kiai during breaks
*Reduce Stack Leniency to 0.3-0.4? Some stacked parts looks a bit weird.
*How about use tickrate 1? 2 sounds a bit too noisy at the beginning, and 1 fits vocals more imo

  1. 00:03:154 (2,3) - Placement looks a bit incorrect. How about hide (3) under the tail of (2)?
  2. 00:10:741 (3,1) - Unperfect stack looks a bit confusing here, maybe stack perfectly for better playability?
  3. 00:29:446 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm.. Unperfectly hided slider looks messy a bit. What about slighty change slider-snape and hide perfectly? Like this:


    Code
    408,232,29975,2,0,P|465:229|512:260,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    448,324,30328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    356,344,30504,2,0,L|252:368,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    168,264,30857,6,0,B|144:224|144:224|180:68,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:32:269 (1) - Maybe change snape of this slider to not overlap with 00:33:151 (3)? Like this:
  5. 00:33:504 (1,2) - not perfectly stacked :o
  6. 00:35:798 (3,1) - Hmm, what about curve (3) a bit to make it flows more smoothy? Example:
  7. 00:40:739 (1,2) - Same estetical thing:
  8. 00:42:151 (1,2) - How about perfectly hide (2) under (1)? o.o Just move (2) to x268 y168
  9. 00:45:680 (3,4) - Feels a bit hard to play, how about reduse spacing between those notes?
  10. 00:46:386 (1,2) - I'm not really fan of 2reverse sliders XD Thought i must say that separating them to usualy 1/2 kick-sliders works better here, try it!
  11. 00:48:150 (2) - Change snape to make it flows better?
  12. 00:52:032 (1,2) - Same as at 00:46:386
  13. 00:52:738 (2,2) - oh maybe actually stack them perfectly for estetical reasons? XD
  14. 00:55:561 (2,3) - ^ Yup, same
  15. 00:57:502 (1) - Maybe slighty curve it?
  16. 01:54:145 (1,2) - Maybe make blanket here? :3
  17. 02:03:321 (4,1) - Perfect stack looks better here IMO
  18. 02:13:908 (1,2) - Same as at 00:46:386
  19. 02:16:026 (3) - Up this slider a bit please, it almost go offscreen
  20. 02:17:790 (4) - As suggestion: To improve flow maybe would be better to use same snape as (3), also it looks pretty nice if you will move it a bit higher! For example:

  21. 02:19:555 (1,2) - Same as Same as at 00:46:386
  22. 02:23:437 (3) - Ah, i guess curved a bit would work better here. Example:

  23. 02:25:554 (3,1) - Please make perfect blanket here ;)
  24. 02:26:966 (4,1) - They looks better as perfectly stacked IMO
  25. 02:37:465 (8,1) - Uhh, there are huge spacing issue :( Fix it please
  26. 02:39:318 (1) - Add finish to the slider's head?
  27. 02:47:788 (1) - Same ^
  28. 02:50:611 (1) - Finish
  29. 02:53:435 (2) - Finish to head
  30. 02:55:023 (1) - And you actually forgot finish at the end of spinner
  31. 03:15:845 (1,2,3) - How about something like this?
    Code
    232,216,195845,6,0,B|168:244|168:244|88:220|88:220|8:228,1,200
    12,316,196374,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    156,336,196551,2,0,P|180:284|168:240,1,100
  32. 03:17:433 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This plays a bit uncomfortable due to unexpected 1/3, how about replace them with reverse-sliders like you did at 03:18:844 (1,2)?
  33. 03:25:550 (4) - NC due to spacing change?
  34. 03:28:726 (1) - There are no background music, that makes spinner sounds too loud :( Maybe reduce volume here?
  35. 03:36:137 (2,4) - not perfectly stacked o3o
  36. 03:48:489 (1) - add finish to the head of slider?
  37. 03:54:136 (1) - ^
  38. 03:59:782 (1) - ^
  39. 04:02:606 (1) - ^
  40. 04:03:841 (3) - ^
  41. 04:05:429 - There are very strong beat what needs finish, and ignoring it feels a bit weird. How about add note here with finish and start spinner 1 tick later?
  42. 04:05:429 (1) - Maybe end spinner at 04:08:252? Feels more natural and not too long, imo
  43. 04:15:134 (1,2) - Swap NC follow pattern?
Mostly estetical suggestions, overral very nice map :D/ Also, you can use more finish hitsounds during kiai ;)
Good luck with rank!
Topic Starter
taka1235
thanks :D
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