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Kawada Mami - Shana'mania [OsuMania]

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-DanteMayCry-
54 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 15 de noviembre de 2013 at 11:59:08 a.m.

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: Shana'mania
Source: Shakugan No Shana
Tags: Kawada Mami
BPM: 184
Filesize: 6878kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K Hard - 4Key (3.46 stars, 749 notes)
  2. 4K Insane - 4Key (3.77 stars, 741 notes)
  3. 4K Normal - 4Key (1.91 stars, 312 notes)
Download: Kawada Mami - Shana'mania
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Shakugan No Shana (L)
•4K Normal - Kawada Mami - All In Good Time
•4K Hard - Kawada Mami - Hishoku No Sora
•4K Insane - Kawada Mami - U/n
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Last edited by -DanteMayCry- , edited 19 times in total.
Skalim
311 posts
Joined December 2012
Skalim
hola dante, insisto que isiste un muy buen mapset XD, ahora veamos lo que podrias cambiar, mejorar o corregir

4K Normal

00:01:805 - Añade una nota en la columna 2 (jack)
00:04:881 - Añade una nota en la columna 3 (jack)
00:05:074 - Añade una nota en la columna 3 (jack)
00:07:958 - Añade una nota en la columna 1 (jack)
00:11:034 - Añade una nota en la columna 2 (jack)
00:11:227 - Añade una nota en la columna 2 (jack)
00:15:601 - Nota desfasada (atraso), mueve 1 arriba (1/8 BeatSnap Divisor)
00:20:840 - Añade 2 notas al centro, esta muy vacio y se siente un tambor al fondo (opcional)
00:24:494 - mueve a la columna 4.
00:24:686 - mueve a la columna 1.
00:26:416 - Añade una nota a tu gusto para enfatizar el tono
00:29:301 - Añade una nota a tu gusto para enfatizar
00:29:493 - Añade una nota a tu gusto para enfatizar
00:30:262 - Añade una nota a tu gusto, se escucha tono.
00:31:800 - añade 2 notas para emparejar con lo anterior.
00:34:877 - Añade una nota a tu gusto
00:44:104 - Añade una nota a tu gusto
00:45:067 - Añade una nota a tu gusto
00:57:181 - Añade una nota a tu gusto por el tono.
00:59:104 - añade una nota en la columna 3 (jack)
01:03:334 - añade una nota en la columna 1 (jack)
01:06:410 - añade una nota en la columna 4 (jack)
01:09:486 - añade una nota en la columna 3 (jack)

4K Hard

00:01:627 - añade 1 nota.
00:01:982 - añade 1 nota.
00:03:225 - añade 1 nota
00:03:402 - borra esa nota, no sigue ningun tono
00:04:645 - borra esa nota.
00:04:822 - añade 1 nota
00:05:000 - añade 2 notas
00:16:006 -- 00:17:071 - ENTRE estas zonas se escucha un stream, añade mas notas para darle mas significado al HARD.
00:33:580 -- 00:33:935 - ENTRE estas zonas se escucha stream.
00:44:852 - elimina esa nota, no tiene nada que hacer hay
00:51:154 -- 00:51:509 - ENTRE estas zonas se escucha stream.
00:52:130 - elimina esa nota
00:53:816 - añade 1 nota
00:57:722 -- 00:58:077 - cambia el orden de ese stream, esta muy utilizado (opcional)
01:02:603 - mueve a la columna 2

4K Insane

00:18:720 - nota desfasada (apurado), mueve 1 hacia arriba (1/8 snap)
00:45:663 -- 00:45:989 - elimina esa andanada de notas, no se coordinan bien, usa los patrones azules rojos y blancos en este caso. (1/8 snap)
01:07:959 - nota desfasada (atrasado)), mueve 1 hacia abajo (1/8 snap)
01:08:163 - nota desfasada (atrasado)), mueve 1 hacia abajo (1/8 snap)
01:17:131 -- 01:17:620 - acorde desfasado, ordena las notas en lineas rojas y blancas solamente (1/8 snap)
01:28:503 -- 01:28:911 - stream desfasado, mueve todo 1 hacia arriba (1/8 snap)
01:38:327 -- final - Reordena y recrea esa zona, esta desfasada y tiene notas de mas.

7K Insane

00:22:499 -- 00:34:224 - te sujiero que cambies de estilo, casi todo el mapa es un SPAM de stream, asi que esta zona es perfecta para un cambio (pausas, reordenamientos), inventa, pero te sujiero el de pausas (opcional)
00:51:231 - final - te sujiero que aumentes la dificultad aca, es la encrucijada el mapa, el kiai time imaginario XD, añade notas dobles pero algunas no mas, buscale el ritmo, sient eel ritmo (opcional).

Global

Los mapas empiezan MUY rapido, debido a que modificaron el sistema del editor no se como arreglar eso, antes estaba en el setup en audio, pero ahora no esta u_u al menos que te aparesca a ti.

Recuerda guardar una copia aparte de tu mapa antes de seguir cualquier clase de moddeo. Muchas gracias
-DanteMayCry-
54 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

Skalim wrote:

hola dante, insisto que isiste un muy buen mapset XD, ahora veamos lo que podrias cambiar, mejorar o corregir

4K Normal

00:01:805 - Añade una nota en la columna 2 (jack)
00:04:881 - Añade una nota en la columna 3 (jack)
00:05:074 - Añade una nota en la columna 3 (jack)
00:07:958 - Añade una nota en la columna 1 (jack)
00:11:034 - Añade una nota en la columna 2 (jack)
00:11:227 - Añade una nota en la columna 2 (jack)
00:15:601 - Nota desfasada (atraso), mueve 1 arriba (1/8 BeatSnap Divisor)
00:20:840 - Añade 2 notas al centro, esta muy vacio y se siente un tambor al fondo (opcional)
00:24:494 - mueve a la columna 4.
00:24:686 - mueve a la columna 1.
00:26:416 - Añade una nota a tu gusto para enfatizar el tono
00:29:301 - Añade una nota a tu gusto para enfatizar
00:29:493 - Añade una nota a tu gusto para enfatizar
00:30:262 - Añade una nota a tu gusto, se escucha tono.
00:31:800 - añade 2 notas para emparejar con lo anterior.
00:34:877 - Añade una nota a tu gusto
00:44:104 - Añade una nota a tu gusto
00:45:067 - Añade una nota a tu gusto
00:57:181 - Añade una nota a tu gusto por el tono.
00:59:104 - añade una nota en la columna 3 (jack)
01:03:334 - añade una nota en la columna 1 (jack)
01:06:410 - añade una nota en la columna 4 (jack)
01:09:486 - añade una nota en la columna 3 (jack)

4K Hard

00:01:627 - añade 1 nota.
00:01:982 - añade 1 nota.
00:03:225 - añade 1 nota
00:03:402 - borra esa nota, no sigue ningun tono
00:04:645 - borra esa nota.
00:04:822 - añade 1 nota
00:05:000 - añade 2 notas
00:16:006 -- 00:17:071 - ENTRE estas zonas se escucha un stream, añade mas notas para darle mas significado al HARD.
00:33:580 -- 00:33:935 - ENTRE estas zonas se escucha stream.
00:44:852 - elimina esa nota, no tiene nada que hacer hay
00:51:154 -- 00:51:509 - ENTRE estas zonas se escucha stream.
00:52:130 - elimina esa nota
00:53:816 - añade 1 nota
00:57:722 -- 00:58:077 - cambia el orden de ese stream, esta muy utilizado (opcional)
01:02:603 - mueve a la columna 2

4K Insane

00:18:720 - nota desfasada (apurado), mueve 1 hacia arriba (1/8 snap)
00:45:663 -- 00:45:989 - elimina esa andanada de notas, no se coordinan bien, usa los patrones azules rojos y blancos en este caso. (1/8 snap)
01:07:959 - nota desfasada (atrasado)), mueve 1 hacia abajo (1/8 snap)
01:08:163 - nota desfasada (atrasado)), mueve 1 hacia abajo (1/8 snap)
01:17:131 -- 01:17:620 - acorde desfasado, ordena las notas en lineas rojas y blancas solamente (1/8 snap)
01:28:503 -- 01:28:911 - stream desfasado, mueve todo 1 hacia arriba (1/8 snap)
01:38:327 -- final - Reordena y recrea esa zona, esta desfasada y tiene notas de mas.

7K Insane

00:22:499 -- 00:34:224 - te sujiero que cambies de estilo, casi todo el mapa es un SPAM de stream, asi que esta zona es perfecta para un cambio (pausas, reordenamientos), inventa, pero te sujiero el de pausas (opcional)
00:51:231 - final - te sujiero que aumentes la dificultad aca, es la encrucijada el mapa, el kiai time imaginario XD, añade notas dobles pero algunas no mas, buscale el ritmo, sient eel ritmo (opcional).

Global

Los mapas empiezan MUY rapido, debido a que modificaron el sistema del editor no se como arreglar eso, antes estaba en el setup en audio, pero ahora no esta u_u al menos que te aparesca a ti.

Recuerda guardar una copia aparte de tu mapa antes de seguir cualquier clase de moddeo. Muchas gracias
Muchas gracias por la ayuda Skalim!, ya arregle las Diffs 4K, solo me falta la 7K(Y la diff 5K de YoCheck cuando la termine), cuando pueda la edito un poco aunque como dijiste me toca arreglarla bastante para que no sea repetitivo y mas que todo spam el map xD, nuevamente gracias por la ayuda crack!, saludos :)

PD: Lo de los mapas empiezan rápido si wn :/, estaba por preguntar eso pero no me sale ninguna opción ni nada para que no empiecen tan rapido...sobre todo la de 7k xD
Rumia-
2,513 posts
Joined July 2012
Rumia-
irc mod
00:19 -DanteMayCry-: Hi Rumia ^^, sorry to bother you >.<, what happens is that I just uploaded a map, but I have no experience in 7k, 4k single game, wanted to know if you could help me a bit with the map of 7k, tell me that I can improve and some tips if not too much trouble and if you're not busy (Sorry for bad english xD)
00:48 - R u m i a -: sure why not
00:48 - R u m i a -: im sorry i afk jzu now
00:48 *-DanteMayCry- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/314628 Shakugan No Shana - Shana'mania]
00:48 -DanteMayCry-: Thanks *o*
00:50 - R u m i a -: wan irc mod or juz leave there?
00:50 - R u m i a -: xD
00:52 - R u m i a -: lemme give a try of ur map xD
00:52 -DanteMayCry-: Mod in 7k please xD, 4k are ready, just need 7k, 7k I have no experience so I have no idea how to do it well >.<
00:52 -DanteMayCry-: Ok :3
00:53 - R u m i a -: ok the intro were bad
00:54 - R u m i a -: well hmm ok lemme finish play xd
00:55 -DanteMayCry-: Yes, I got a little confused in the intro so the song starts fast
00:55 -DanteMayCry-: >.<
00:55 - R u m i a -: ok
00:56 - R u m i a -: hmm 0.00 to 00:07:288
00:56 - R u m i a -: this is too dense
00:56 - R u m i a -: it doesnt fit the bgm
00:56 - R u m i a -: how about 1/2 beat in this
00:57 - R u m i a -: remove all the blue line notes
00:58 -DanteMayCry-: Oki
00:58 - R u m i a -: u can make it as 1/2 hold (just suggestion tho) can ignore
01:00 - R u m i a -: remove letterbox during breaks
01:00 -DanteMayCry-: in 1/2 to.. 00:07:288? o all map ?
01:01 - R u m i a -: http://puu.sh/4TbzW.jpg
01:01 - R u m i a -: shud be like this
01:02 -DanteMayCry-: Oh nice xD
01:03 - R u m i a -: and
01:03 - R u m i a -: i think 1 notes is enuff cuz the sound is a bit dim
01:03 - R u m i a -: cant be hear loud
01:05 - R u m i a -: ok how about on white lines 2 notes on red line 1 note
01:05 - R u m i a -: the best dense so far 1/2 measure
01:05 - R u m i a -: next mod ill mod pattern xD
01:07 - R u m i a -: k tell me when ur done.
01:07 -DanteMayCry-: xDDDD mmmm after 00:07:288 used blue notes? o.o
01:07 - R u m i a -: waiit xD
01:07 - R u m i a -: ok starts here 00:03:907
01:07 - R u m i a -: 00:03:907
01:07 - R u m i a -: shud use long notes 1/2
01:08 -DanteMayCry-: sorry if I reply slow, is not English and helped me to google translator xD
01:08 - R u m i a -: ok sure xD
01:09 - R u m i a -: start 00:03:907
01:09 - R u m i a -: make like this http://puu.sh/4TbTv.jpg
01:09 - R u m i a -: untill 00:07:288
01:09 - R u m i a -: 00:07:288
01:09 - R u m i a -: *
01:11 - R u m i a -: till you done pm me k xD
01:14 -DanteMayCry-: I tangled a bit sorry xD..Overall remove blue notes and just do the map in 1/2 ? and agree LN
01:14 - R u m i a -: jus untill 0:07:288
01:14 - R u m i a -: 0:07:288
01:15 -DanteMayCry-: Aaaa ok xP
01:16 -DanteMayCry-: And agree LN in 00:03:907
01:17 - R u m i a -: ok
01:17 - R u m i a -: 00:08:238 (8238|6) - remove this
01:17 - R u m i a -: and 00:08:450 (8450|1,8661|6,8872|1) -
01:18 - R u m i a -: and 00:09:928 (9928|4,10140|2,10351|6) -
01:18 - R u m i a -: oh and this too 00:10:562 (10562|0) -
01:19 - R u m i a -: that should fix the music
01:19 - R u m i a -: and 00:13:309 (13309|2,13520|5,13731|0,13943|3) -
01:20 -DanteMayCry-: Ok, fixed xD
01:20 - R u m i a -: and this
01:20 - R u m i a -: 00:16:689 (16689|0,16900|3,17112|3,17323|1) -
01:21 - R u m i a -: ok note * dun put 0% volume, u cant hear the hitsound
01:21 - R u m i a -: this overnotes ruin the beat
01:22 - R u m i a -: 00:19:224 (19224|0) - move to 00:19:330
01:23 - R u m i a -: 00:19:435 (19435|6) - remove - not needed
01:23 - R u m i a -: 00:19:647 (19647|2) - move to 00:19:752
01:23 - R u m i a -: 00:19:858 (19858|3) - remove
01:25 - R u m i a -: 00:20:809 to 00:22:499
01:25 - R u m i a -: 1/4 beat is enough , dont need to 1/8 jere
01:25 - R u m i a -: here*
01:28 - R u m i a -: tell me when ur done k
01:31 -DanteMayCry-: Done :P
01:32 - R u m i a -: ok
01:32 - R u m i a -: 00:34:330
01:32 - R u m i a -: add notes
01:32 - R u m i a -: 00:34:488 (34488|1,34488|3,34488|5,34700|2,34700|0,34700|4,34700|6) - ok this is off beat
01:33 - R u m i a -: move them to white and red line instead of yellow lines
01:33 -DanteMayCry-: No need to add LN ? D:, is that I like to make maps without LN >.<
01:33 - R u m i a -: i guess it is not needed
01:34 - R u m i a -: its good that way anyway , LNs is for string sounds or guitar or even piano that have a long sound
01:34 - R u m i a -: this part is good , just need a bit patterning
01:36 - R u m i a -: 00:35:333 (35333|0,35333|6) - remove this
01:36 -DanteMayCry-: 00:34:541 - Red and 00:34:752 - white ?
01:36 - R u m i a -: yep
01:39 - R u m i a -: sv change
01:39 - R u m i a -: 49531 change to 49541
01:39 - R u m i a -: put x10 here
01:40 - R u m i a -: 49994 remove this sv
01:41 - R u m i a -: 50094 change to 50809
01:42 - R u m i a -: k ill be waiting till u done
01:43 -DanteMayCry-: Done :3
01:44 - R u m i a -: nice
01:44 - R u m i a -: 00:51:231
01:45 - R u m i a -: untill 01:02:640
01:45 - R u m i a -: i found no problems but u can make LN streams for more interesting (suggestion tho) can ignore
01:47 - R u m i a -: 01:04:752 (64752|4,64752|0,64752|6,64752|2) -
01:47 - R u m i a -: move down by 1/8
01:47 - R u m i a -: on yellow lines
01:47 - R u m i a -: 01:17:006
01:48 - R u m i a -: untill 01:20:122
01:48 - R u m i a -: nice pattern ,try arrange pattern like this looks more proper and not just random and lazy pattern
01:48 -DanteMayCry-: What happens is that the game I come, no LN (FFR). then it is like putting on maps LN t.t
01:49 - R u m i a -: lol u dont need to if u dont want
01:49 - R u m i a -: its just a suggestion tho~
01:49 - R u m i a -: remove this 01:20:967 (80967|5,80967|1) -
01:50 - R u m i a -: 01:20:703 (80703|3) - move up 1/8 to the yellow line
01:51 - R u m i a -: 01:21:654 (81654|2,81654|4,81654|6,81654|0) - move down 1/8 to the yellow lines
01:51 - R u m i a -: line*
01:52 -DanteMayCry-: I would like to put LN, but I have to learn to play first 7k xD, to learn patterns of LN u.u
01:52 - R u m i a -: LN patterns is just the same as normal notes
01:53 -DanteMayCry-: 01:21:812 move to yellow also ?
01:53 -DanteMayCry-: 01:21:812 *
01:53 -DanteMayCry-: -.- fail xD
01:53 -DanteMayCry-: 01:21:812
01:54 - R u m i a -: 01:21:654
01:54 - R u m i a -: 01:21:654
01:54 - R u m i a -: move down by 1/8
01:54 - R u m i a -: 1:21:812
01:54 - R u m i a -: there is no note D:
01:55 -DanteMayCry-: 01:21:759 - *
01:55 -DanteMayCry-: Blue note, move in yellow note ?
01:55 - R u m i a -: no that 1 stays there
01:55 - R u m i a -: 01:21:654
01:55 - R u m i a -: this 1 only
01:58 -DanteMayCry-: Ok, done xP
01:58 - R u m i a -: ok go update
01:58 - R u m i a -: xD
01:58 - R u m i a -: i want to see
01:59 - R u m i a -: maybe ill leave a pattern mod later
02:01 -DanteMayCry-: Ok xD, Let me accommodate little else and upload it >.<
02:06 -DanteMayCry-: uploaded :3
02:11 -DanteMayCry-: Oh lol,I forgot accommodate 01:17:006
02:11 -DanteMayCry-: >.<
02:11 - R u m i a -: ok
02:11 - R u m i a -: that 1 ill mod tomorrow
02:13 -DanteMayCry-: Ok, when you can :3, Thank you very much for the help ^^
02:14 - R u m i a -: np
-Stratos
-Stratos
Este Map te quedo buenisimo man.. Sigue asi bro.. tremendo mapper
Bruce
1,076 posts
Joined January 2013
Bruce
Mod by request
[General]
the Volume sound Need More than 35%.
All Diffs need add kiai time
Open Aimod and check problems

[4K Normal]
column: 1 2 3 4
HP7 OD7
00:04:881 (4881|2) - Move to 2
00:11:034 (11034|1) - Move to 3
00:25:070 - Remove 2 Notes
00:25:840 - Add a Note
00:40:453 (40453|0) - Move to 4
00:48:913 (48913|2) - Move to 2
00:51:028 - Add a Note
00:51:412 - Add a Note
00:59:296 (59296|3) - Move to 2
01:06:410 (66410|3) - Move to 2
01:14:678 - Remove a Note
01:15:062 - Remove a Note
01:15:447 - Remove a Note

[4K Hard]
HP8 OD8
00:04:467 - Add a Note at 4
00:08:328 (8328|2) - Move to 00:08:373 -
00:34:379 (34379|2) - Remove
00:36:154 - Add a Note
00:36:597 (36597|3) - Move to 2
00:37:308 - Add a Note at 3
01:01:982 - Add a Note
01:19:024 - Add a Note
01:24:526 - Add a Note at 2
01:25:947 (85947|3) - Remove this Note
01:27:988 - Add a Note

[4K Insane]
HP9 OD9
00:06:859 - Remove a Note
00:07:185 - Remove a Note
00:10:283 - Add a Note at 3
00:17:131 (17131|0) - Remove
00:19:739 - Add a Note at 4
00:27:239 (27239|0) - Move to 4
00:41:424 (41424|0) - Move to 4
00:43:544 (43544|2) - Move to 2
00:47:457 - Add 1 or 2 Notes
01:07:756 (67756|1) - Move to 3
01:38:408 - Add a Note at 1
01:38:571 (98571|2) - Remove this Note
01:38:897 - Add a Note
01:38:978 - Add a Note
01:39:060 - Add a Note
01:40:120 (100120|0) - Remove this Note
01:40:364 (100364|3) - Remove this Note

Good Luck :oops:
-DanteMayCry-
54 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

Simple_Star wrote:

Mod by request
[General]
the Volume sound Need More than 35%.
All Diffs need add kiai time
Open Aimod and check problems

[4K Normal]
column: 1 2 3 4
HP7 OD7
00:04:881 (4881|2) - Move to 2
00:11:034 (11034|1) - Move to 3
00:25:070 - Remove 2 Notes
00:25:840 - Add a Note
00:40:453 (40453|0) - Move to 4
00:48:913 (48913|2) - Move to 2
00:51:028 - Add a Note
00:51:412 - Add a Note
00:59:296 (59296|3) - Move to 2
01:06:410 (66410|3) - Move to 2
01:14:678 - Remove a Note
01:15:062 - Remove a Note
01:15:447 - Remove a Note

[4K Hard]
HP8 OD8
00:04:467 - Add a Note at 4
00:08:328 (8328|2) - Move to 00:08:373 -
00:34:379 (34379|2) - Remove
00:36:154 - Add a Note
00:36:597 (36597|3) - Move to 2
00:37:308 - Add a Note at 3
01:01:982 - Add a Note
01:19:024 - Add a Note
01:24:526 - Add a Note at 2
01:25:947 (85947|3) - Remove this Note
01:27:988 - Add a Note

[4K Insane]
HP9 OD9
00:06:859 - Remove a Note
00:07:185 - Remove a Note
00:10:283 - Add a Note at 3
00:17:131 (17131|0) - Remove
00:19:739 - Add a Note at 4
00:27:239 (27239|0) - Move to 4
00:41:424 (41424|0) - Move to 4
00:43:544 (43544|2) - Move to 2
00:47:457 - Add 1 or 2 Notes
01:07:756 (67756|1) - Move to 3
01:38:408 - Add a Note at 1
01:38:571 (98571|2) - Remove this Note
01:38:897 - Add a Note
01:38:978 - Add a Note
01:39:060 - Add a Note
01:40:120 (100120|0) - Remove this Note
01:40:364 (100364|3) - Remove this Note

Good Luck :oops:
Fixed :D, Thanks Simple_Star ^^
[Shi-Ra]
458 posts
Joined October 2012
[Shi-Ra]
Hi there (from SRMQ) :3/

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3)
4K Normal
Inside :3
00:01:613 (1613|1) - move to 3 column, coz it's NM I suggest you to avoid situations, when notes are going one by one

00:07:766 (7766|0) - move to 2nd column, same reason ^

00:14:111 - add here note in according to the beat, to 2nd column I suggest

00:14:303 - add one more note here, to 0 column and finally

00:14:688 - add note here to 3rd column, there's no need to make some break, just follow the song

00:17:379 - add at least one note here according to the beat, to 1st column

00:20:456 - add note or two here to 1st and 2nd columns, same reason ^

00:23:532 - same, add note to 0 column

00:31:223 (31223|1) - delete and I recommend you don't use chords which include more than 2 notes in NM

00:35:646 - add note here, the beat here is clearly to hear

01:14:293 (74293|3) - delete, same reason, like in previous chord

4K Hard
Inside :3
00:08:018 (8018|3) - better move it to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable pattern

00:15:296 (15296|3) - move to 2nd column and this one 00:15:651 (15651|1) - move to 2nd column too, it'll be good transition between your patterns here

00:19:734 (19734|2) - move to 1st column, it's more comfortable and there's no repeating sound

00:33:225 (33225|3) - move to 2nd column again, some reason ^

00:42:278 (42278|2) - move to 1st column, it's too fast for catching two notes in a row here, so perform a triplet

00:47:515 (47515|2) - move to 1st column again, same reason ^

01:06:775 (66775|2) - move to 3rd column, it'll be more comfortable here

01:19:201 (79201|3) - move to 2nd column, same reason ^

01:28:432 (88432|3,88432|0) - turn these notes to LNs and end them here 01:30:207

4K Insane
Inside :3
00:15:500 (15500|0) - move to 2nd column, more comfortable for your pattern here

00:23:163 - add note here to 0 column, then 00:23:326 - here to 2nd column and finally 00:23:652 - here to 1st column - follow the vocal part here, it'll be suitable with your patterns too

00:27:239 (27239|3) - move to 1st column, it's more comfortable than placing two notes in a row

00:28:218 (28218|3) - move to 2nd column, same reason ^

00:48:435 (48435|2) - move to 3rd column, don't leave it empty for a long time

00:52:674 (52674|3,53000|3) - move to 2nd column both of them, it'll be good transition with your pattern here

01:16:152 (76152|3) - move to 3rd column, more comfortable, as previous

Love 3rd song so much, you've got my star >///<
Good luck :3/
-DanteMayCry-
54 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi there (from SRMQ) :3/

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3)
4K Normal
Inside :3
00:01:613 (1613|1) - move to 3 column, coz it's NM I suggest you to avoid situations, when notes are going one by one

00:07:766 (7766|0) - move to 2nd column, same reason ^

00:14:111 - add here note in according to the beat, to 2nd column I suggest

00:14:303 - add one more note here, to 0 column and finally

00:14:688 - add note here to 3rd column, there's no need to make some break, just follow the song

00:17:379 - add at least one note here according to the beat, to 1st column

00:20:456 - add note or two here to 1st and 2nd columns, same reason ^

00:23:532 - same, add note to 0 column

00:31:223 (31223|1) - delete and I recommend you don't use chords which include more than 2 notes in NM

00:35:646 - add note here, the beat here is clearly to hear

01:14:293 (74293|3) - delete, same reason, like in previous chord

4K Hard
Inside :3
00:08:018 (8018|3) - better move it to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable pattern

00:15:296 (15296|3) - move to 2nd column and this one 00:15:651 (15651|1) - move to 2nd column too, it'll be good transition between your patterns here

00:19:734 (19734|2) - move to 1st column, it's more comfortable and there's no repeating sound

00:33:225 (33225|3) - move to 2nd column again, some reason ^

00:42:278 (42278|2) - move to 1st column, it's too fast for catching two notes in a row here, so perform a triplet

00:47:515 (47515|2) - move to 1st column again, same reason ^

01:06:775 (66775|2) - move to 3rd column, it'll be more comfortable here

01:19:201 (79201|3) - move to 2nd column, same reason ^

01:28:432 (88432|3,88432|0) - turn these notes to LNs and end them here 01:30:207

4K Insane
Inside :3
00:15:500 (15500|0) - move to 2nd column, more comfortable for your pattern here

00:23:163 - add note here to 0 column, then 00:23:326 - here to 2nd column and finally 00:23:652 - here to 1st column - follow the vocal part here, it'll be suitable with your patterns too

00:27:239 (27239|3) - move to 1st column, it's more comfortable than placing two notes in a row

00:28:218 (28218|3) - move to 2nd column, same reason ^

00:48:435 (48435|2) - move to 3rd column, don't leave it empty for a long time

00:52:674 (52674|3,53000|3) - move to 2nd column both of them, it'll be good transition with your pattern here

01:16:152 (76152|3) - move to 3rd column, more comfortable, as previous

Love 3rd song so much, you've got my star >///<
Good luck :3/
Fixed :3
01:28:432 (88432|3,88432|0) - turn these notes to LNs and end them here 01:30:207 (looks a little weird having only two LN on the map, but fit well with the end xD)
Thanks [Shi-Ra] ^^
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
Mod by Request :P

I'll start from the hardest song first

[4K Insane]

Off letterbox and countdown
Preview Point!

Sound Volume Mod (Recommended to Change)
Note that pressing 2 keys will be louder than one
- I don't really have to tell you that

Using 2 keys at a section will emphasize it heavily

Here are the sections that I don't get why is there only 1 or 2 or 3 keys

1 Key ( Add one key )
00:20:228


2 Keys ( Reduce it by one key )
00:06:207
00:06:370
00:10:446
00:15:989
00:16:315
00:16:641
00:53:163
01:24:305

3 Keys ( Reduce it by one key ) Emphasized it too much
00:26:750
00:27:402
01:11:098
01:11:424
01:34:576
01:34:902

Timing Mod
BPM and Offset are Perfect :)
00:32:946 to 00:34:250 is mapped out of time
00:33:068 (33068|0,33150|1,33231|2,33313|3,33394|0,33476|1,33557|3,33639|2,33720|0,33802|1,33883|0,33965|3,34046|0,34128|3,34209|2) - Shift down to the nearest 1/4
00:33:068 (33068|0,33231|2,33394|0) - are not included in the drums, remove them
00:57:525 (57525|3) - is not included in the drums, remove it
00:57:606 (57606|2,57688|1,57769|0) - Shift down to the nearest 1/4
01:07:878 (67878|2) - Shift up to the nearest 1/4
01:07:919 (67919|1) - is not included in the drums, remove it
01:08:041 (68041|1) - Shift down to the nearest 1/4
01:17:824 (77824|2,78557|1) - are not included in the drums, remove them
01:17:742 (77742|3,77905|1,77987|0,78068|1,78150|2,78231|3,78313|2,78394|3,78476|0) - Shift up to the nearest 1/4
01:18:476 (78476|0) - Move to other columns
01:18:680 to 01:39:468 - Add Kiai Time?

Flow / Mood Mod
This mod is to check whether there should be less or more notes at a point depending on the hype of the music
00:44:685 to 00:46:968 has too many notes, reduce them
01:34:250 to 01:38:163 Add notes at every 1/2

[4K Hard]

Off letterbox and countdown
Preview Point!
Kiai Time?

Sound Volume Mod (Recommended to Change)
Note that pressing 2 keys will be louder than one
- I don't really have to tell you that

Using 2 keys at a section will emphasize it heavily

Here are the sections that I don't get why is there only 1 or 2 or 3 keys

2 Keys ( Reduce it by one key )
01:17:603
01:17:781
01:17:958

3 Keys ( Reduce it by one key ) Emphasized it too much
00:58:254
00:58:964

Timing Mod
BPM and Offset are perfect again :)
Cannot really find any timing errors here

[4K Normal]

Off letterbox and countdown
Preview Point!
Kiai Time?

Timing Mod
The BPM and Offset are a bit off

BPM : 156 ( Most songs have BPMs as integers )
Offset : 459

Cannot really find any timing errors here

Nicely mapped, great emphasizing using double and triple notes.
Just remember that BPM has a very low chance having a decimal.
Use AiMod often to check if you have met all the requirements for ranking!
Good luck Mapping :)
-DanteMayCry-
54 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

lZenxl wrote:

Mod by Request :P

I'll start from the hardest song first

[4K Insane]

Off letterbox and countdown
Preview Point!

Sound Volume Mod (Recommended to Change)
Note that pressing 2 keys will be louder than one
- I don't really have to tell you that

Using 2 keys at a section will emphasize it heavily

Here are the sections that I don't get why is there only 1 or 2 or 3 keys

1 Key ( Add one key )
00:20:228


2 Keys ( Reduce it by one key )
00:06:207
00:06:370
00:10:446
00:15:989
00:16:315
00:16:641
00:53:163
01:24:305

3 Keys ( Reduce it by one key ) Emphasized it too much
00:26:750
00:27:402
01:11:098
01:11:424
01:34:576
01:34:902

Timing Mod
BPM and Offset are Perfect :)
00:32:946 to 00:34:250 is mapped out of time
00:33:068 (33068|0,33150|1,33231|2,33313|3,33394|0,33476|1,33557|3,33639|2,33720|0,33802|1,33883|0,33965|3,34046|0,34128|3,34209|2) - Shift down to the nearest 1/4
00:33:068 (33068|0,33231|2,33394|0) - are not included in the drums, remove them
00:57:525 (57525|3) - is not included in the drums, remove it
00:57:606 (57606|2,57688|1,57769|0) - Shift down to the nearest 1/4
01:07:878 (67878|2) - Shift up to the nearest 1/4
01:07:919 (67919|1) - is not included in the drums, remove it
01:08:041 (68041|1) - Shift down to the nearest 1/4
01:17:824 (77824|2,78557|1) - are not included in the drums, remove them
01:17:742 (77742|3,77905|1,77987|0,78068|1,78150|2,78231|3,78313|2,78394|3,78476|0) - Shift up to the nearest 1/4
01:18:476 (78476|0) - Move to other columns
01:18:680 to 01:39:468 - Add Kiai Time?

Flow / Mood Mod
This mod is to check whether there should be less or more notes at a point depending on the hype of the music
00:44:685 to 00:46:968 has too many notes, reduce them
01:34:250 to 01:38:163 Add notes at every 1/2

[4K Hard]

Off letterbox and countdown
Preview Point!
Kiai Time?

Sound Volume Mod (Recommended to Change)
Note that pressing 2 keys will be louder than one
- I don't really have to tell you that

Using 2 keys at a section will emphasize it heavily

Here are the sections that I don't get why is there only 1 or 2 or 3 keys

2 Keys ( Reduce it by one key )
01:17:603
01:17:781
01:17:958

3 Keys ( Reduce it by one key ) Emphasized it too much
00:58:254
00:58:964

Timing Mod
BPM and Offset are perfect again :)
Cannot really find any timing errors here

[4K Normal]

Off letterbox and countdown
Preview Point!
Kiai Time?

Timing Mod
The BPM and Offset are a bit off

BPM : 156 ( Most songs have BPMs as integers )
Offset : 459

Cannot really find any timing errors here

Nicely mapped, great emphasizing using double and triple notes.
Just remember that BPM has a very low chance having a decimal.
Use AiMod often to check if you have met all the requirements for ranking!
Good luck Mapping :)
BPM : 156 ( Most songs have BPMs as integers )
Offset : 459 <---- OMG I did not realize I had the wrong offset xDDDD
All other fixed :3, Thanks lZenxl ! :D
Spy
2,538 posts
Joined November 2011
Spy
Why I feel title is wrong... ? :o
-DanteMayCry-
54 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
-DanteMayCry-

Spy wrote:

Why I feel title is wrong... ? :o
It's which are 3 difficulties each with a different song, not to name him so, so I put Shana mania mania xD
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
Insane is now easier than Hard, reduce the amount of notes in hard or increase the number of notes in insane :)
(No Kud)
Skalim
311 posts
Joined December 2012
Skalim
Modeo del la dificultad Insane por peticion.

IRC Mod
22:57 Skalim: mmm
22:57 Skalim: hay streams que no deberian estar donde deben
22:58 -DanteMayCry-: Sep de eso tenia la duda xD, por agregarle notas meti la pata jaja
22:59 Skalim: XD
23:00 Skalim: aver atento ps
23:00 Skalim: ponte en el editor
23:00 Skalim: aremos el mod por IRC
23:01 -DanteMayCry-: Lo otro es que imagino que el nombre del mapa esta malo, por como dijo Spy xD
23:01 -DanteMayCry-: Le puse Shana'mania por lo que son 3 cancion en un mapa de Shakugan no shana de Kawada Mami xD
23:01 -DanteMayCry-: Vale, ahi entro
23:01 Skalim: Shana Try-colection
23:02 Skalim: por ultimo
23:02 Skalim: collection*
23:02 Skalim: Shana Try-Collection
23:02 -DanteMayCry-: Le pongo eso en el nombre general _
23:02 -DanteMayCry-: ?*
23:03 -DanteMayCry-: Pense que estaba mal era el Shana xDDD
23:03 Skalim: XD
23:03 -DanteMayCry-: Pero como no se hablar ingles, no le pregunte a ****
23:03 -DanteMayCry-: ****
23:03 -DanteMayCry-: :X
23:03 Skalim: pero si quieres pones el titulo que te recomiendo
23:03 -DanteMayCry-: Tenias ganas de preguntarle a *******
23:03 -DanteMayCry-: xD
23:03 Skalim: lel
23:03 Skalim: no a conectado
23:03 Skalim: quisas que hace
23:04 -DanteMayCry-: Ayer taba on, pero cuando le iba a escribir se fue
23:04 -DanteMayCry-: D:
23:04 Skalim: lel
23:05 -DanteMayCry-: Listo ya toy en el editor xD
23:05 Skalim: ok veamos
23:06 Skalim: 00:06:686 - borra esto
23:06 Skalim: esta puro dando jugo
23:06 -DanteMayCry-: Listo
23:07 Skalim: 00:06:775 - añade
23:07 Skalim: para dar juego con el patron del mapa
23:07 -DanteMayCry-: Pero ya hay 1 nota ahi D: agrego una 2da nota ?
23:08 Skalim: se, es para enfatizar
23:08 -DanteMayCry-: Listo
23:10 Skalim: 00:06:864 - añade nota para stream
23:11 -DanteMayCry-: Vale
23:12 Skalim: 00:07:751 - añade
23:13 -DanteMayCry-: Mmm añado en la columna 0 para jack ? o en la 1 y muevo las 2 notas de arriba para cerrar con stream ?
23:13 Skalim: intenta evitar lo mas que puedas los streams rapidos
23:15 -DanteMayCry-: Donde la agrego ? D:, en la 2 ?
23:15 Skalim: en cual posicion dices?
23:15 -DanteMayCry-: la de
23:15 -DanteMayCry-: 00:07:751
23:16 -DanteMayCry-: La columnas la cuento de 0,1,2,3
23:16 -DanteMayCry-: xD
23:16 Skalim: en el 2
23:17 -DanteMayCry-: Listo :P
23:18 Skalim: 00:25:148 - añade en el 0
23:18 Skalim: 00:25:325 - añade en el 3
23:18 Skalim: 00:26:745 - borra la nota del 2
23:19 Skalim: 00:27:811 - borra el 2
23:21 -DanteMayCry-: 00:27:899 (27899|1) la muevo a la 3 ?
23:21 Skalim: 00:42:367 - añade al 2 (aparte)
23:21 Skalim: aver reviso
23:21 -DanteMayCry-: 00:27:899(27899|1) - La muevo a la 3? fail <.< xD
23:21 Skalim: eso es gusto tuyo
23:21 Skalim: XD
23:22 -DanteMayCry-: Va y ahora no marca la nota, pingo osu
23:22 Skalim: jajaja
23:23 -DanteMayCry-: Listo
23:24 Skalim: 01:12:455 - elimina una nota a eleccion
23:26 Skalim: 01:12:811 - elimina nota a eleccion
23:27 -DanteMayCry-: Listo :P
23:27 Skalim: 01:18:137 - añade para darle ritmo
23:27 -DanteMayCry-: 01:13:166 - aca tambien entonces no ?
23:28 Skalim: no es necesario, se escucha bn el sonido agudo
23:28 -DanteMayCry-: Aunque ahi como que suenta un drum de fondo xD
23:28 -DanteMayCry-: suena*
23:29 Skalim: mas encima XD
23:31 Skalim: 01:25:237 - añade a tu eleccion
23:31 Skalim: 01:25:592 - añade en la misma columna donde aras el anterior
23:31 Skalim: para darle ritmo y por la voz
23:32 Skalim: eso es todo
23:32 Skalim: updatea y reviso como quedo
23:33 -DanteMayCry-: Jajaja ok xD
23:34 -DanteMayCry-: 01:14:231 sera que le agrego otra nota mas por la bateria que suena en el fondo ? xD
23:34 -DanteMayCry-: Coño se me olvida separar eso
23:34 -DanteMayCry-: <.<
23:34 Skalim: eso es gusto tuyo XD
23:35 -DanteMayCry-: Ya empezo a trollear el Bancho...
23:35 Skalim: jajaja
23:36 -DanteMayCry-: Te decia que sera que agrego una 2da nota aca 01:14:231- por la bateria que suena en el fondo xD
23:36 Skalim: separalo!! XD
23:36 -DanteMayCry-: 01:14:231
23:37 -DanteMayCry-: Ahora no sale
23:37 -DanteMayCry-: jajajaja
23:37 Skalim: ya lo vi
23:37 -DanteMayCry-: 01:14:231
23:37 Skalim: sep, añade
23:37 -DanteMayCry-: Lol no sale o.o
23:37 Skalim: 01:14:231 ESPACIO raya
23:37 Skalim: XD
23:37 -DanteMayCry-: 01:14:231
23:37 -DanteMayCry-: a ya xDDDD
23:39 Skalim: updateaste?
23:39 -DanteMayCry-: No, aun :C
23:39 -DanteMayCry-: Ya lo subo asi ?
23:39 Skalim: sep
23:40 -DanteMayCry-: Vale
23:40 -DanteMayCry-: Listo
23:40 Skalim: deja provar ps
23:41 -DanteMayCry-: Ok xD
23:43 Skalim: lo veo entretenido
23:43 Skalim: aun asi ese speed change lo veo asesino
23:43 Skalim: lo dejas o lo borras?
23:44 -DanteMayCry-: Mmm, sera que lo borro y hago como en la otra diff lo que dijo Shi-ra ?
23:44 -DanteMayCry-: Ponerle notas a la vocal
23:44 Skalim: tambien es buena idea
23:45 -DanteMayCry-: Sep, mejo lo quito xD
23:45 Skalim: XD ok
23:45 Skalim: subire el chat al thread
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