sheela901 wrote:

[General]
There's an inconsistent in the combo colors. Use same the same colors to all difficulties. this again. i swear i already make the color consistency at both diff :3

[Relaxing]
00:11:080 (1) - Flip it vertically, and rotate it 90° anticlockwise. After that, move it to x:328 y:144 for a flow. not bad
00:28:747 (2) - Try to improve this slider. A wave slider like: little dislike the wave, but fixed on my own

SPOILER

00:40:413 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make another pattern. i won't change this for some reason
02:22:413 (2,3,4) - Try to make this: fixed on my way

SPOILER

[Lunaties]
00:06:414 (3) - Remove this note. But, to say, 00:06:080 (2,3,4) sounds weird. not really. it's follow the drum sound
00:08:747 (2,3,4) - Same as above. ^
For the two suggestions above, make them like: 00:13:747 (1,2,3,4) . i prefer current to make a variety pattern here

Cool difficulty.

Good Luck and here's a star.

328,136,61413,6,0,B|312:32|312:32|256:32,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

328,136,61413,6,0,B|312:32|312:32|256:32,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Komeiji Hatsu wrote:

❤eat~~
❤i like this
❤suggestions
❤count for little

[❤Lunaties❤]

❤~~i love your rhythm，perfect！thank you ~

❤~~add a colour replace coloure，according to Koishi‘s clothing yeah why not

❤~~03:47:080 (1) - add a ❤ to replace the boring spinner↓↓↓ boring u said? .__. but hey i love that love shape'd slider. can you give me an example code? i might replace it

SPOILER

❤~~03:24:247 (3,1) - ^……↓↓↓ i want the code 1st :3

SPOILER

❤~~00:17:747 (5,6,1,2,3) -considering other parts of your map……i think ↓↓↓better oh yea seems better. k fixed

SPOILER

❤~~00:09:247 (4,5,6) - make parallel or like your 03:36:581 (4,5,6) - 03:41:913 (4,5,6) - ok moved the tail 1 grid up

❤~~00:06:414 (3) - （87.167）meh idk if it's still not prefectly stacked. fixed

❤~~00:29:080 (4,5) - ……↓↓↓…… i prefer the current since both it's head and tail has clap on it so i keep better on straight slider

SPOILER

❤~~00:06:580 (4,5) - bend 00:06:580 (4) - or move 00:07:080 (5) - like ↑↑↑……pay attention to others that same nothing change on this. i'll keep mine

❤~~00:34:414 (4,5) - 00:34:080 (2,3) - exchange position it's better not to make a jump. i guess

❤~~01:24:080 (2,3,4,5,6) - inaccurate……make a note in Y axis，ctrl+shift+R……72°……can be perfect flows bad from (2) to (3). so i'll keep mine

❤~~01:36:414 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ same reason as ^

❤~~00:40:080 (1,2) - it's better not to stack them，Music no pause，use stack when 00:26:414 (6,7) - i stack these notes based on something whatever da "dug dug" drum sound here. so i think it's okay

❤~~00:53:247 (1,2,3) - angle too big……plz steady↓↓↓ i testplayed with some of my friend and they said not a big matter here. should no problem

SPOILER

❤~~00:54:580 (4,5,6) - ^ same reason as ^

❤~~03:39:747 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - not beautiful…… i won't change this. yeah really won't change this

❤~~your normal diff …… a lot of it is detail is done bad，like 01:21:080 (2,3,4,1) - ，distance……keep distance snap open in normal&easy，what‘more，your can break 3.25 star if bat think it's no problem i want to remake this diffff so badddd ;w;

❤~~maybe your are generous man……but……turn IadzXenon down！he just a newmapper now hey2 no need to saying rude to other people. basically i am a new mapper too

IadzXenon wrote:

你好！
Thanks for Vhy udh mod beatmapku. Sesuai janjiku "I will mod you beatmap back... " loh? .__.

Relaxing :
- 01:01:413 mungkin perlu d'ubah bentuknya, code :

328,136,61413,6,0,B|312:32|312:32|256:32,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

or

328,136,61413,6,0,B|312:32|312:32|256:32,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

- *Kenapa 01:25:580 beda sama 02:42:913 ? 02:42:913 ada reversenya kalo 01:25:580 nggak ada? Adain. oh keliru yang di 02:42:580 (4) emang harusnya ga pake reverse :3
# 01:25:580

# 02:42:913

*Atau sangat aku saranin spinner 01:25:747 tarik ke 01:25:580
hapus reverse 02:42:913 dan tarik juga spinner 02:43:080 ke 02:42:913 ini bertujuan supaya nggak tanggung kalo dimainin di mode osu!mania / taiko.
01:25:580
Before

After

02:42:913
Before

After

- 01:43:080 dan 01:43:747 maybe sound look good if you delete the claps ty for pointing this out

Lunaties :
Hitsounds + desain sudah cukub bagus menurutku. Cuma ya ada saran yang sama kayak di Relaxing di 01:25:580 sama 02:42:913 hapus reversenya terus tarik spinnernya.
Well this is my mod. Sorry if this not helped anything for you.

Hmhmhmhm memang bener kalo cuma ada 2 diff, normal ama insane aja maka kemungkinan kecil ni beatmap bisa ranked. Gimana kalo aku buat hard diffnya? Ntar kamu bisa ubah lagi sesuai keinginanmu... btw itu hard lho

thanks for checking
aaandddddddddd ~

IadzXenon wrote:

Aku nggak tau maunya orang yang nulis "mungkin kamu adalah orang yang murah hati……tapi……tolak IadzXenon！dia hanya pembuat map baru sekarang" itu apa? jangan tanya saya .___.

Emang aku ini pertama kali bikin beatmap dan pertamakali modding dan nggak punya pengalaman. Tapi bukan berarti aku nggak tau apa2! Aku tau aturan2 beatmap yang ranked itu kayak gimana aja. Namanya juga belajar emangnya salah?! Seenaknya ngerendahin orang! kalo saya pribadi sih, mod bagus ato jelek ya ngga pedul2 amat.cuma bisa menghargai aja

Lunaties maaf ya kalo modku nggak membantumu tapi itu udah semampuku sebagai orang yang nggak berpengalaman modding...

cirnocon wrote:

Hi lunaties~
Overall
Try to change the normal type hit hitsounds to the default normal hit hitsounds, maybe it looks more suitable than the hitsound you used?

i'm new to modding, so i can't find something more to improved.
Anyway, Good luck.

Vhy wrote:

ahahaha kan uda dibilangin itu diff uda kek sejenis insane, disuruh bikin diff lagi ngeyel ga mau :3
tak bikin in yang hard ta?

RIP 2nd map lelelelelel

IadzXenon wrote:

Kalo Star difficultynya 4,99 itu udh trmasuk insane...

Vhy wrote:

ahahaha kan uda dibilangin itu diff uda kek sejenis insane, disuruh bikin diff lagi ngeyel ga mau :3
tak bikin in yang hard ta?

RIP 2nd map lelelelelel

LexiaLovesU wrote:

"The mapset must have a well-designed spread of difficulties, containing at least an Easy or a Normal difficulty (based on how the map feels): this is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. It's really hard to define how a specific spread could work in a specific song beforehand, but here's a list of things to consider: the difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order and/or with a reasonable gap between them; there should be at least one difficulty around ~2.5/3 star difficulty level; if your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be insane (this basically means that it's highly recommended to have 3 difficulties unless the song itself doesn't allow much variety); if your mapset has three difficulties, one of them should be about ~2.5/3 star difficulty level, and the second should not be Insane; if your map has four or more difficulties, at least two should be something other than Insane. The difficulty level of Taiko-specific difficulties must also follow a well-designed spread with no jumps in between difficulties, hence if you may include Normal/Hard/Insane, or Normal/Hard or Hard/Insane (only if it also has standard difficulties)"
keep this in mind

Komeiji Hatsu wrote:

about ❤，replace the last spinner，sv*0.5

116,288,227080,38,0,B|192:228|256:264|256:264|296:192|488:144|392:80|368:-32|256:48|256:48|144:-32|120:80|24:144|216:192|256:264|256:264|320:228|408:296,1,1120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

make a ❤ too hard ……so only one

ahh~~

❤~~01:24:080 (2,3,4,5,6) - ，maybe a misunderstanding，your Five-pointed star…… inaccurate……let……ahh……↓↓↓

SPOILER

comprehend？，move and type ……after the completion of Five-pointed star……let it go at that……

01:24:247 (3) - （130.165）01:24:413 (4) - （198.258）01:24:580 (5) - （198.143）01:24:747 (6) - （130.236）……

if you understand……01:36:414 (1,2,3,4,5) - ……fix it too……okay……i have ocd…… i adjust it on my own, should be more okay now

good luck

Lunaties wrote:

Vhy wrote:

ahahaha kan uda dibilangin itu diff uda kek sejenis insane, disuruh bikin diff lagi ngeyel ga mau :3
tak bikin in yang hard ta?

RIP 2nd map lelelelelel

anjrit. yauda bikin aja sono. sekalian pulsa 50k ya

Vainslay wrote:

Hello, from CatsR'Us Modding team. first mod of the team

Normal I really do like this diff, but I'll just put out a few suggestions
00:28:747 (2) - this slider here feels a tab bit awkward. just a small suggestion but placing a circle here at 00:29:080 ( x:276 y:180) would be much more reasonable for it sounds much like this part 00:16:413 (1,2,3) - from before. not gonna change this
00:36:080 - move your break here. (not too big of a change but it would end with the vocals) okay
00:56:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - this doesn't really go with the vocals. changed in other way. simply like the current 02:13:413 (1,2,3,4,5)
Your old one

My suggested one

01:04:413 (5) - NC oops added
01:53:080 - A finish? no need to add finish here. would be unnecessary
01:55:413 (1) - imo you could move the spinner to the blue tick closest to the slider, spinners have no beginning so that end slider hitsound serve as that hit for the long vocal note im not sure. will think about this later
02:09:747 (3) - remove NC idk why i NC'ed this
02:10:747 (1) - ^ this too
02:11:080 (2) - NC also straighten this slider up a little nah NC should be at here
02:13:413 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - similar to the one at 00:56:080 - I rather you take my pattern for it sounds much nicer to the vocals do changes on my own same as 00:56:080
02:53:747 (1,2) - please separate~I see your Idea but for normal and it being kinda slow I wouldn't recommend it. let's see if any further modder mentioned this too
03:25:413 (1) - move spinner to the blue tick nearest to end of last slider

Hard
I seem to find this map agreeable but I might just be a bit fatigued from modding Normal
If you doubt anything just reply and I'll see to it.

Well anyway~ Good luck!

Edit:

As noted above from LexiaLovesU, The diff spread of this map set is too high, as Hard should rather be considered as an Insane. As stated with the rules, a mapset of two can't have one as an Insane.

thanks for modding

Swayzo wrote:

Normal:
Fun: 7/10
Design: 8.5/10
- The spinner and slider @ 03:24:247 doesn't play very well. I suggest you remove the slider and replace that with the spinner so that it starts @ 03:24:247 and ends @ 03:27:080
- Replace the slider @ 01:54:747 so that the spinner starts at that spot and ends @ 01:57:413
Fundamentals: 10/10

Hard:
Fun: 9/10
Design: 9.5/10
- The area @ 03:22:747 - end of spinner need some polishing. The spinner and slider @ 03:24:247 doesn't play very well. I suggest you remove the slider and replace that with the spinner so that it starts @ 03:24:247 and ends @ 03:27:080
- Change 00:32:080 (1,2) so that it's like:

OLD:

Fundamentals: 10/10