Okay then! Here is my mod! Let's get this map ranked! (Also my 2222th Post *runs*)

1. Nothing to really point out, although the timing kind of felt too early at some parts and too late at other parts (at least when I hear the metronome). This situation is typical to most guitar-related music. The map itself sounded fine when I hear it. Other than that, the BPM is absolutely correct!
2. Just an observation while test playing, but the combo colors seems a bit too light relative to the BG. I would probably make it a bit darker by decreasing the Luminosity (leave the Hue and Saturation untouched). I also recommend that the Luminosity is the same for all combo colors for perfect color consistency. I should probably do this in my maps often. XD

1. 00:39:637 (1) - This 1/1 slider feels off with the rest of the notes due as they were prominently following the vocal lines. I believe it would be more consistent to the vocals if you extend this 1/1 slider into a 3/2 slider (similar to what you did at 00:28:474 (2,3)). An alternative solution is to add a note at 00:40:160 (2) for a better vocal transition to the next note. If suggested, you could do the same thing at 00:42:079 (1,2) and 01:01:613 (1,2) if you like.
2. 02:29:171 (2) - Optional, but I feel that there should be a note here due to the prominent drum/cymbal sounds (simliar to what you did at 02:22:543 (3,4,5)). If you consider this suggestion, feel free to add an extra note here along with a soft-finish to emphasize the cymbals playing in the BGM. :3

1. 00:38:590 (3,4) - Optional suggestion, but I have an idea that replacing these notes with a 1/2 reverse slider to emphasize the pitch of the vocals better with the drums. This change is not really necessary as it is simply my personal taste on emphasizing sound relative to the notes. See if you like it, otherwise just move on XD.
2. 00:40:160 (4) - Try your best on following the prominent drums and vocals sounds. For example, you can add an extra note here (maybe stacking it with the end of 00:40:509 (1) or somewhere else if you like :3) for the prominent vocals playing here. In addition, you can move the next note at 00:40:334 (4) a grid down to polish the blanket pattern if you like. Here is an example of what you could do:
   
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3. 02:29:694 (3,4,5) - About this 1/4 kick slider, the beats are actually off-beat as the music is playing mostly in 1/3 beats (the first 3 notes are playing in 1/4 beats). You going to have to slow down the music speed and listen closely to the rhythm to confirm this. Notice that the drums sounds are playing in different beat snaps. You may have to re-arrange this note to something like this (notice the kick slider is in 1/3 beats):
   
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1. There's nothing to really point out with the insane as it plays really well with the song. Nothing feels off while I was test playing this difficulty. I only have a few suggestions that you could follow and this map should be good to go hehe.
2. 00:05:102 (3) - Comparing with the combo pattern at 00:01:963 (2,1), it would be more consistent if you add a new combo here.
3. 00:07:718 (5) - This note feels inconsistent with the prominent drums. How about moving this hit circle at 00:07:893 (5)? It sounds more relatively consistent with the drums.
4. 02:29:781 (6) - At first, I was thinking that you should add an extra note here, but then I realized that 02:29:869 (1,2,3) is fully readable without it anyways. You should add it if you want, otherwise move on. XD

Really great mapset indeed. Nice structure, very playable, and simply a fun map for everyone to play.
Alright, take it over Irreversible.

Irreversible wrote:

Alright, quick recheck until it's ready :3 no kd

[General]

Audio-Leadin should be the same for all, so either you put 2000 on flower's diff, or put 1500 to normal and insane.
ya! fixed!
i'm actually more concerned about timing as modders have noticed already as well
[Normal]

Go over your diff please, and check the DS. There are some erros, such as 02:25:334 (1) - . The jump from 0.99 to 1.1 is too big Shouldn't take you too long, just make sure it's equal. ok fixed

[re:construction]

00:00:219 (1) - unsnapped circle fixed
01:23:947 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - did you add some hitsounds here? you said you fixed, but I still can't here them :c mmm I tried various combinations but... they really just don't sound good to me. so in the end I still decide to just use soft-hitnormal to create the contrast.
02:30:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same goes to here, just nothing is boring. Add some whistles please! Even if they're silent, it helps I did add to this sections though. so fixed
02:41:380 (9) - finish to put the perfect emphasis on the end of the stream. Also, it's in the song fixed

Kk, that's it:3

LunarSakuya wrote:

orz late sry xD

Highly suggest you get your timing checked in certain areas. Some parts felt a little off to me such as this last section 03:04:403 (1) - . It's noticeably early when you slow it down like what you can do for 03:08:066 (2,3,4) - it sounds a bit "quicker" and plays rather late (around 12-15ms late after consistent testplaying this last section). In fact, i'm suspecting this section needs a new timing point

great map btw <3

lolcubes wrote:

Why 172.001? Thats probably never correct. :p

BPM 172 Offset 219
BPM 172 Offset 161396 (this is where the timing goes whack, be careful, it's the last note of the stream in your insane, so make sure it's not located there else it's a guaranteed 100.
BPM 172 Offset 162093 (metronome reset)
all fixed! thanks so much!!!!!
[Reconstruct]
OD8 or OD9 fits much better. OD7 is a free SS. I even SSd it with wrong timing :/ well can't really say it's a free SS since it is still quite challenging. There are broken streams and long streams with uneven spacing. You're already good so saying you can SS this with ease isn't really helpful for this. I just don't think higher OD works well with this diff and I can really feel the difference after crossing the OD7 threshold.
02:41:744 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This is really hard to read. I can see the map's style is random spacing, but this is just ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Don't make it such a jump, especially if the flow is so linear, it's really confusing just make the spacing normal. (02:46:802 (3,4,5) - is not linear flow so its not confusing). ok fixed!
after last kiai - no hitsounds? I didn't hear any claps at least. yea it's just like the intro, didn't put any hitsounds, only hitnormal

boop

Irreversible wrote:

unsnapped slider in flower's hard

02:29:782 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 02:29:782 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 02:29:782 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).

also, check the kiai: (re:construction, kiai#3)

happy30 wrote:

few things

[Normal]
01:36:149 (2) - make prev/next equal: 1.00x fixed
02:39:288 (1) - snap to the next red timing section well I guess since they`re spinners it doesn't really matter so sure

[Flower's Hard]
02:39:375 (1) - snap to the next red timing section fixed too