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lkx_Shore
喝芬达
Koiyuki
还有王老吉
Spencers
哇在B战上看到的现在就有了 李狗蛋
神曲
留名 :)
Crystal
洗剪吹♪

算是前排?
ZHSteven
吊炸天
难道是B站占领osu的时代?
Megurine Luka
:lol: 求个H

还有位不
pw384
治病救不了中国人。

当你们刷贴吧的时候,当你们复读的时候,你可知道还有很多人根本找不到mod,即使找到了mod也没法rank图。马上十一就结束了,如果你有爱心的话,请为 osu.ppy.sh/s/119335 图送上一个mod,不管是十行,五行,还是只写三行。让他和你们一样快乐!我刚也写了十行给他,不要在你这断了!传递正能量!只要人人献出一点爱,世界就美好多了!

no kds, TAG里可以spam一下,加上出现的所有歌词的歌名?
Topic Starter
popner
有道理
dyxxzgc
insane金坷垃那段break可以做了吗
dyxxzgc
Yuko's hard难度起始位置和insane normal不一样而且还有countdown
lkx_Shore
[General]
  1. Color里的两个红色也太相近了吧...感觉去掉一个也可以
  2. 信息界面和tag没有标出hard是谁做的
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:534 (4) - 加note?
  2. 00:19:014 (6,7,8) - 似乎吹吹吹能用drum的whistle
  3. 00:31:254 (8) - 从7接过来有点莫名的不爽...总感觉应该放在下面
  4. 00:45:894 (3) - 似乎可以加whistle
  5. 00:53:334 (2) - 这样下节奏如何,我觉得自然很多 http://puu.sh/4IQQz.jpg
  6. 01:29:094 (1) - 感觉顺着前面的flow的话,这样链接有点勉强,往左下拉点试试(下的趋势大点
  7. 01:32:934 (1) - clap?
[Yuko's Hard]
  1. 00:49:134 (3) - 加note?
  2. 01:31:014 - 为什么空了?...我觉得空得也不自然
  3. 01:56:934 (4) - 用1/3hold滑条不好吗这里
  4. 03:04:374 (4) - 开头叠个3连?
  5. 03:33:894 - 看来是故意的,不过我还是觉得不自然
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:734 (5) - 我觉得这里这么放比较好 http://puu.sh/4IRbD.jpg
  2. 02:33:894 (8) - 我觉得这是不是有点太外面了呢...把这一部分整体往左拉点?
EnakoRin
[General]
  1. 感觉开头一段用鼓点音效有点奇怪……我觉得直接用soft音效就行
  2. Title应该是“洗剪吹”,原唱在微博上说过,还有建议加上中文名
  3. tags里面没有看到GD作者的ID,加上
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:774 (1) - 移动到(25,157),当前的位置不好看,打出的300还会挡住后面的slider
  2. 00:27:654 (1) - 个人不大喜欢被挡住的slider,新人可能也不好读出来
  3. 01:16:134 (4,2) - 没有重叠好
  4. 01:21:414 (1,3) - 没有重叠好
  5. 02:09:894 (3,1) - 前者的弧度应该更大一点,和后者形成blanket
  6. 02:54:534 (2,4) - 没有重叠好
  7. 感觉应该多加一些finish
[Yuko's Hard]
  1. 01:32:934 - 冗余的时间线
  2. 02:26:214 - 冗余的时间线
  3. 00:01:134 - 无用的时间线
  4. 00:14:814 - 也是无用的时间线,它前面没有note,音效可以直接加在红线上
  5. 00:38:454 (3) - NC?
  6. 00:44:694 (2,4) - 这样挺难看啊orz 分开吧
  7. 01:31:014 - 这里应该加个spinner吧
  8. 03:28:134 (1,2) - 估计别人也会吐槽这种排列吧……
  9. 03:33:894 - 这里应该加个spinner吧
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:054 (5,1) - 没有重叠好
  2. 00:12:294 (1,2) - 这两个slider不是水平的
  3. 01:51:654 - 加一个circle?
  4. 02:26:694 (2,1) - 听说是unrank的?
总体感觉是Normal太简单(和Hard比),Insane有点平淡
给个星星
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren
Topic Starter
popner
lkx: thx for modding!
EnakoRin
edit:wpcap我忘了之前回复过了
Vita-VVA
[hard]
forget the spinner? :(
and its length is different from the other difficulty......it should be avoided......

[insane]
tricks should used more differently to make insane more challenging and interesting, instead of using streams.

and just another advise
01:25:254 (1) - you could set the sliders just like this

IA-Six Trillion Years and Overnight Story(0108 style)
CodeBreaker Hao
求添加视频,不然没同步率 :)
Emperor_old_1
你为什么这么屌........why you so diao ? 好图.nice map
Neptunus
时隔一年多没登陆osu了,为你这张好map来顶一下,加油!
Megurine Luka
卧槽就差我了

骚瑞拖进度了
Topic Starter
popner

Megurine Luka wrote:

卧槽就差我了

骚瑞拖进度了
别慌,我还有3个新番op要搞
Banana
hard的中文歌名,没打
路过 no kd
ieb

CodeBreaker Hao wrote:

求添加视频,不然没同步率 :)
最好还要带歌词
Megurine Luka
BounceBabe
Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue.

It's good to hear other asian languages than japanese and korean. It's a good change c(:

General

- Unicode title and artist is not the same on every difficultie. Please check and fix this.

Easy

00:41:094 (3,4) - , 00:17:094 (2,3) - , 01:18:534 (2,3) - Spacing is 1,1x, 1,07x and 1,2x here, might be good to fix that for beginners so they don't get confused. It's only a slight change but still important.
00:10:374 (3) - This is slightly offscreen and needs to be higher placed. Please fix this so players play the whole slider start.
01:02:214 (1,2) - I don't know if stacking is a good idea for a beginner difficultie. Beginners have had to play only a row of elements so far and that's how it should be. Stacking might cause missclicking due to them not being able enough to read the time, when to click, proper. Unstack this to avoid that problem, on all stacks.
02:01:734 (4) - Beginners probably get confused by the contact of the part of the slider here 02:02:694 - - You should space it out there alittle more to avoid missunderstanding and its also visually more attractive imo.
02:13:734 (3) - Element is too high and touches the HP bar, please lower it so it doesn't touch it.
02:30:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That's a long row of circles. It's not so easy to play for new players, they might come out of the rythm in the middle of the pattern and then get stuck and missclick circles. Maybe add a slider in the middle to give them more safety.
02:51:654 (4) - Shouldn't the NC be here? You comboing is 4 elements long this is 6.

Hard

00:25:494 (4) - , 01:42:774 (1) - , 03:16:614 (1) - The element is too high and touches the HP bar, lower it to avoid this mistake.
00:33:174 (5,1,2) - Nice placement of elements and it also fits. (:
01:03:894 (6,1) - , 01:11:814 (1) - , 02:09:174 (6,1) - I think that this little jump doesn't really fit. I can't find something in the song which would match this jump, except the NC, which is nonsense to use a jump on NC. A jump should be when the song allowes it the most.
01:31:014 - I actually expected a spinner here, for the reason it would just fit and its very empty here. Consider adding one.
01:47:694 - , 01:48:054 - Add a circle here for a transition between your previous vocal you mapped to and then beginning of the next one. Would fit very good.
01:52:134 (1) - This is too hidden to see this good. The previous slider hasnt faded out fully so you can see the next one good. You should move them apart so its better visible.
02:00:294 (2,3) - . 02:13:014 (4,1) - This slight spacing change is very unneeded and looks not good. Make normal spacing here.
02:01:734 (1) - , 02:19:014 (1) - NC is not needed, remove it. It also is not good and doesnt make sense to put 1 NC at the end of a pattern.
02:26:454 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - .... Well... that's self explanationable xD Reduce the combo please.
02:47:334 (4) - , 03:23:814 (4) - , 03:28:614 (2,4,6,8) - , 01:25:734 (2,4,6,8) - This is not 100% visible enough to notice it and play it good. You should shape it somehow different to make it more visible.
03:00:774 (4,5,1) - Consistant spacing would be better and would look better too.
02:58:854 (4,5,1) - Make a better triangle pattern, this playment from 4 to 5 is surely odd and doesnt play well.
03:20:454 (1,2) - You should make the placement how you had it on the last time, this is slightly confusing.

Nice and flowy difficultie (:

Insane

- Wait, why are the hitsounds different than the other diffs? Or is it just me.

00:08:214 (5,1) - I really don't like such placement when its the same as 00:07:494 (3,4,5) - this spacing. You should really make the spacing bigger here to avoid missunderstandings.
01:11:334 (5,1) - You map to the vocal and here imo, is no need and nothing to emphasize with this jump. Consider making normal spacing. It would also look better and give a better transition with 01:11:334 (5,1) - .
01:13:014 (5,6) - This little jump or spacing change is not need as well. It doesnt follow something big and looks weird. It looks slightly like a mistake happened. 01:13:014 (5,6,1) - Yes it works and is consistant with this pattern but it doesnt fit due to it not emphasizing something.
01:57:294 (6,7) - , 01:59:214 (6,7) - I don't understand such placement. This surely plays and looks very odd. I see no point in making such a weird placment. Stack it please.
02:21:894 (3) - jericho told me this is unrankable to slowdown sliders with this kind of way how you made it. I consider it as unrankable and suggest to find another slider.
02:23:814 (5,6) - Such tiny spacing changes can be avoided and are not needed. They look unattractive too. Use more of a symmetric kind of pattern ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1071885 ) to fix the spacing. I really dont see a point of breaking it because of copy paste. You did this here too 02:50:214 (3,4,5) -
02:52:854 (6,1) - This is not stacked proper, please stack it.
03:44:933 (6) - Not snapped.
03:50:214 (1,2,3) - This is very unexpected this ending, due to you previous tripples and its the same spacing. Why don you make a triangle pattern or else to keep normal spacing or stack it. Just dont use the same spacing, this is really confusing.

Very nice set, like it.
Topic Starter
popner

Megurine Luka wrote:

久等-0-

http://puu.sh/54eGH.osu
大哥好萌, updated

BounceBabe wrote:

SPOILER
Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue.

It's good to hear other asian languages than japanese and korean. It's a good change c(:

General

- Unicode title and artist is not the same on every difficultie. Please check and fix this. Caused by a bug, fixed

Easy

00:41:094 (3,4) - , 00:17:094 (2,3) - , 01:18:534 (2,3) - Spacing is 1,1x, 1,07x and 1,2x here, might be good to fix that for beginners so they don't get confused. It's only a slight change but still important. same as Insane: 02:23:814 (5,6)
00:10:374 (3) - This is slightly offscreen and needs to be higher placed. Please fix this so players play the whole slider start. not offscreen for me in testplay: http://puu.sh/5OnPl.jpg
01:02:214 (1,2) - I don't know if stacking is a good idea for a beginner difficultie. Beginners have had to play only a row of elements so far and that's how it should be. Stacking might cause missclicking due to them not being able enough to read the time, when to click, proper. Unstack this to avoid that problem, on all stacks. When it's not mixing of 1/1 stacks and 1/2 stacks, it's fine.
02:01:734 (4) - Beginners probably get confused by the contact of the part of the slider here 02:02:694 - - You should space it out there alittle more to avoid missunderstanding and its also visually more attractive imo. ok
02:13:734 (3) - Element is too high and touches the HP bar, please lower it so it doesn't touch it. it doesn't touch the hp bar for me using default skin: http://puu.sh/5OnhV.jpg
02:30:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That's a long row of circles. It's not so easy to play for new players, they might come out of the rythm in the middle of the pattern and then get stuck and missclick circles. Maybe add a slider in the middle to give them more safety. There is a long break after this pattern and I think the player will have time to recover from it. I don't have a good idea to turn some notes to slider too, for consistent reason.
02:51:654 (4) - Shouldn't the NC be here? You comboing is 4 elements long this is 6. It's actually NCs for every 2 big white ticks.

Insane

- Wait, why are the hitsounds different than the other diffs? Or is it just me.

00:08:214 (5,1) - I really don't like such placement when its the same as 00:07:494 (3,4,5) - this spacing. You should really make the spacing bigger here to avoid missunderstandings. Well I got may tester and it seems fine in reading this rhythm change
01:11:334 (5,1) - You map to the vocal and here imo, is no need and nothing to emphasize with this jump. Consider making normal spacing. It would also look better and give a better transition with 01:11:334 (5,1) - . Map to vocal, but when the vocal becomes monotonous, drums are in consideration.
01:13:014 (5,6) - This little jump or spacing change is not need as well. It doesnt follow something big and looks weird. It looks slightly like a mistake happened. 01:13:014 (5,6,1) - Yes it works and is consistant with this pattern but it doesnt fit due to it not emphasizing something. This is something that I called "transitional part" between two vocal sections and the spacing change will make the two sections separated clearly
01:57:294 (6,7) - , 01:59:214 (6,7) - I don't understand such placement. This surely plays and looks very odd. I see no point in making such a weird placment. Stack it please. I think this kind of patterns make the map different from one by a mapping program
02:21:894 (3) - jericho told me this is unrankable to slowdown sliders with this kind of way how you made it. I consider it as unrankable and suggest to find another slider. This has been used for years in ranked maps. The boarder shows the path clearly.
02:23:814 (5,6) - Such tiny spacing changes can be avoided and are not needed. They look unattractive too. Use more of a symmetric kind of pattern ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1071885 ) to fix the spacing. I really dont see a point of breaking it because of copy paste. You did this here too 02:50:214 (3,4,5) - The real spacing of this kind of patterns during playing is not what it shows on the right upside. You can refer to t/86329
02:52:854 (6,1) - This is not stacked proper, please stack it. It is intentional because if they are stacked proper, 02:52:494 (3,4,5,6) - will not be in a straight line
03:44:933 (6) - Not snapped. Copying bug. fixed
03:50:214 (1,2,3) - This is very unexpected this ending, due to you previous tripples and its the same spacing. Why don you make a triangle pattern or else to keep normal spacing or stack it. Just dont use the same spacing, this is really confusing. There is NC here for anti-jump and it fits the music well, and causes no reading problem to testers. So I don't think it is fine

Very nice set, like it.
Thx for mod!
BounceBabe

popner wrote:

BounceBabe wrote:

blabla
I really laughed xD
Koiyuki
说好的不mod
SPOILER
才怪
等会回家后再来摸
其实是马克一下
Koiyuki


From your request

[General]
  1. 我看到了即喜羊羊之后第二个要被国人刷爆的歌曲,233333

[Easy]
  1. 00:27:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 和前面一小段下一样的节奏吧我觉得
  2. 02:58:374 (2) - 建议拆成note,和前面保持一致,这里全都是1/1滑条有点单调了
  3. 03:12:774 (1,3) - 感觉没包好

[Luka's Normal]
  1. 01:06:054 (1,1) - 不太喜欢这两个spin,感觉还可以再做的……
  2. 01:43:494 (3) - 位置有点过高

[Xingye's Hard]

  • 你确定不用Yuko's Hard?不过Hard里面也能看到星爷的风格真是不好多书
  1. 其他diff前面都有做,我觉得也可以做一点。
  2. 01:31:014 - 总觉得空着比较奇怪,不过也无所谓,后面也一样
  3. 02:46:854 (3,4) - 我只是说说,因为实在太多这种了……发现也没啥好说的,JB
  4. 00:01:134 - 01:32:934 - 02:26:214 - 多余的绿线

[Insane]
  1. 02:53:094 (1) - 我觉得这个1移出来比较好-.-
  2. 03:38:454 (1) - 这个NC怎么回事
  3. 00:01:134 - 多于的绿线

没啥大问题
Atrue
Hello~
From my modding queue



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
药不能停,听了几遍整个人都洗剪吹了
[Easy]
摸到这里我得吃药了。。
脱线到不行。。ez我实在是不想再听一遍了。。
放了一遍感觉没有啥硬性问题。。
[Luka's Normal]
00:17:334 (2) - 这里节奏。。我觉得应该跟vocal比较好,或者前边白线加note
00:23:814 (1,2) - flow似可商榷,要不要弯一弯前边那个滑条?
01:34:134 (3) - 跟前面第一点一样
01:37:974 (4) - 这前边为何也漏note?刻意为之的话也不是很推荐这样
凡是遇见杀马特必定空一拍。。这种设定其实我觉得有点不自然啊。。
01:37:974 (4) - 这里为何又要空vocal去跟节拍呢?
02:05:574 (3,4) - flow似乎比较硬
03:38:214 (4,5,6) - 这里跟vocal的话还是跟“洗剪吹”比较好


[Xingye's Hard]
00:51:414 (2) - 跳的似乎有点远
03:26:454 (6,1) - flow不顺


[Insane]
只是挑点刺。。
00:07:974 (4) - 这里是不是距离跟上个滑条有点远?而且flow感觉有点硬
00:48:054 (7,8,1) - flow不顺
00:51:894 (7,1) - 跳的无根据并且换flow也不是很适合
01:04:134 (1,2) - flow有点奇怪。。不过可以理解。。
01:28:614 (2,3,1) - 换flow我觉得同意,但是这里似乎间距也可以扩大一下进行区分
02:08:934 (7,1) - flow不顺畅
02:52:854 (6,1) - 叠的感觉没有那么浓吧
03:16:134 (7,1) - flow不顺畅并且没有很强的跳跃感




That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:) .
Megurine Luka
No change.

节奏的话我基本跟的鼓点-。-目前这样比较满意不想做改动

两个spin我会考虑。不过现在想的是前半部分不要太为难人所以就摆了spinner
Spy
hao
Kevin Hunter
没视频不欢乐啊 :D
Nymph
王師傅給我燙個頭啊
Koiyuki
tag里面加上“杀马特遇见洗剪吹”“五色石楠叶”“王师傅”“可乐”“芬达”“王老吉”(后面四个纯粹是瞎掰的)
gfcjyb
来顶
Spy
這首是翻唱的,不知道需不需要tag上原曲跟原團體?
如果需要的話,就加上SHINee Ring Ding Dong
Topic Starter
popner

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

tag里面加上“杀马特遇见洗剪吹”“五色石楠叶”“王师傅”“可乐”“芬达”“王老吉”(后面四个纯粹是瞎掰的)
杀马特遇见洗剪吹已经是title了,然后那个唱的人自称是“五色石南叶”。


[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

SPOILER


From your request

[General]
  1. 我看到了即喜羊羊之后第二个要被国人刷爆的歌曲,233333

[Easy]
  1. 00:27:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 和前面一小段下一样的节奏吧我觉得
  2. 02:58:374 (2) - 建议拆成note,和前面保持一致,这里全都是1/1滑条有点单调了
  3. 03:12:774 (1,3) - 感觉没包好
这几个感觉没什么区别啊

[Insane]
  1. 02:53:094 (1) - 我觉得这个1移出来比较好-.- nope
  2. 03:38:454 (1) - 这个NC怎么回事 removed
  3. 00:01:134 - 多于的绿线 removed

没啥大问题

Atrue wrote:

SPOILER
[Insane]
只是挑点刺。。
00:07:974 (4) - 这里是不是距离跟上个滑条有点远?而且flow感觉有点硬
00:48:054 (7,8,1) - flow不顺
00:51:894 (7,1) - 跳的无根据并且换flow也不是很适合
01:04:134 (1,2) - flow有点奇怪。。不过可以理解。。
01:28:614 (2,3,1) - 换flow我觉得同意,但是这里似乎间距也可以扩大一下进行区分
02:08:934 (7,1) - flow不顺畅
02:52:854 (6,1) - 叠的感觉没有那么浓吧
03:16:134 (7,1) - flow不顺畅并且没有很强的跳跃感
感觉都没什么问题啊,新vocal或者重音的时候断一下flow基本都是故意的




That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:) .
Thx for mod!
Topic Starter
popner

Spy wrote:

這首是翻唱的,不知道需不需要tag上原曲跟原團體?
如果需要的話,就加上SHINEE Ring Ding Dong
Thx. Added.
-Teina-
這首歌真的沒問題嗎?
雖然我近乎聽不明普通話...

Form我的modding queues的mod
[Insane]
open
00:04:134 (5) - X:242 Y:287
00:27:414 (8) - X:200 Y:289
01:00:774 (1) - X:305 Y:327
01:15:174 (7) - X:390 Y:95
02:21:414 (2) - X:196 Y:254
02:53:094 (1) - 這裡是想重疊與否?

不要給我KD
只簡單地看了一次
沒有從整體角度入手

其實真的不太受得了這種音樂>_<

祝你成功~
ts8zs
[Insane]
01:01:014 (2,3) - 朝下
01:51:414 (7,8) - slider
03:26:934 (1,2,3,4) - move to 326,264
03:50:574 (2) - move to 228,268
[Hard]
00:31:734 (2) - 包1?
01:31:014 - 加两听加多宝
03:33:894 - ^
01:41:574 (3) - 12点中间加个白点柔和下
03:44:454 (3) - ^
02:47:334 (4) - remove clap
剩下俩难度看不出来啥了……这种慢图不容易出问题吧
source或者tag加上bilibili douga就更好了XD
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