1. 00:57:753 Unsnap one note
2. 00:57:903 ^
3. 00:59:103 Add a LN
4. 01:01:803 to 01:03:753 How about Zig-zag?
5. 01:11:194 Add a note in coll 7
6. 01:12:094 ^
7. 01:12:094 - 01:12:994 - 01:13:894 ^
8. Why 01:19:294 and 01:21:694 Have only two notes?
9. 01:34:444 to 01:39:394 Add note for "tick-tock" sound
10. 01:39:994 Add a LN
11. 02:22:364 - 02:25:064 Add a note/notes

1. 01:01:803 to 01:03:753 Zig-zag
2. 01:17:344 Add a note
3. 01:17:944 - 01:20:344 - 01:24:994 - 01:27:394 -... ^ I think you missed some beats
4. 01:34:444 to 01:39:394 "tick-tock"
5. 01:39:994 Add 2 or more LNs
6. Kiai time = Suicide time

Ayu wrote:

Hello. I'm not here to really nitpick on blankets to fill the mod, but I'll still mention some that could be fixed easily and make the design stand out some more. Your own difficulties actually look amazing and are really good, so I'm not sure what others usually tell you but you're a great mapper.

Beginner

1. 01:46:364 (2) - Since this is a Beginner, I'd recommend to avoid this overlap. I've noticed that a lot of the not natural talents have trouble understanding Approach Rate and will usually fail to notice that there's another circle beneath the slider end (I do not entirely know if the slidertrack will help them, but they will need a lot of time to get a hold of the slider start since it's hidden away).bI think they'll be able to do it since the incoming of the new skin
2. 02:20:564 - I think you should map this tiny break, for the same reason mentioned above. Since they'll have trouble understanding AR, they will most likely break the next slider because they'll hit it way too early. But there's nothing relevant to map, I'd rather leave them a very little break time

Normal

1. 00:40:817 (2,3,4) - I find this pattern unfitting with the design of the map, mainly because of the curve and the first straight slider matching the repeat slider before, but the other red anchor sliders being in a different degree and one also being longer than the other. I'd suggest to make a curve slider of 3, since it'd look more visually appealing This part has some angled sliders so it's fine
2. 01:49:214 (2) - I'd repeat this slider instead of the rhythm pattern you've used here, the red tick seems to be a minor beat and i think they'd feel weird having to click the circle there. Rhythm is fine imo
3. 01:58:364 (1,2,3,4) - Do know that this might be really tricky. People will start to understand distance so they're probably inclined to 'stream' this. DON'T KILL MAPPER SPIRITS

Another

1. 00:18:167 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like the back and forth too much here. I'd switch (2) & (3), although this is more something subjective. It's fine as-is, but I just don't prefer it this way myself. It's probably your opinion
2. 01:09:094 (1,2) - I'd rather create an anti-jump here to emphasize the 1/3 and since the current spacing might be confusing, because it's bigger than the spacing between (8) and (1). It's actually 1/8 and it's barely noticeable
3. 01:59:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this part of the stream could be improved a lot design wise. How though ;_;
4. 02:01:214 (2,3,4,5) - The flow is a little bit going anywhere here (reference). B-But it plays great to me

Wonderful map, especially the Another which I liked very much. Although, I was dissapointed by goww's Extra as it feels really unpolished and random at times. Try to work on emphasizing the music and adjust the feel of the map to the feel of the music.

Low wrote:

[Beginner]
OD +1. this may be a beginner difficulty, but players should still be able to hold a decent rhythm while playing.
00:40:367 (1) - at 4:3 windowed resolution, this goes slightly off-screen. shift it up a grid
00:56:853 (2,3) - curve these sliders to match the curves of 00:55:653 (1), like this. it's more aesthetically pleasing than what you have now

SPOILER

I really like myy straight sliders there
01:30:094 (1) - add a whistle here. i don't see why you suddenly stopped following this sound in the music.
01:31:294 (3) - ^
01:58:064 (2) - shift this down a grid to make a perfect line
02:27:314 (3) - the start of this slider should be in the normal sampleset. the heavy beat is in the music

[Normal]
00:24:167 (4) - clap should be removed from the end of this slider and placed on the beginning.
00:53:253 (1) - should be a whistle at the end of this slider.
00:56:853 (3) - ^
01:58:364 (1,2,3,4,1) - you shouldn't have anti-jumps in a normal difficulty. the song already has a confusing rhythm for inexperienced players, so don't make it more complicated by adding inconsistent spacing. make a star pattern like this and shift the following objects according to distance spacing. But I like it, and I love to have a tricky pattern in my diff.

SPOILER

02:22:064 (2) - start of this should be in the normal sampleset
02:30:014 (4,1) - (1) and the end of (4) should both be in the normal sampleset.

[Another]
00:47:567 (1) - soft
02:30:464 (8,1) - missing normal sampleset
02:33:014 (2) - ^

gl

-Bakari- wrote:

Sorry, I am late. @.@

[General]

• 
  Clean.

[Beginner]

1. As we've discussed via in-game you did a few changes.
   
   Now the diff is okay from my point of view, although I don't really agree with 01:28:894 (3,1,2) - this pattern, but meh, it's still readable. I'd leave it

[Normal]

1. 01:18:094 (1,5) - minor - they are overlapped with the default HP-Bar, even on 16:9 display, I suggest you re-arranging pattern a bit to avoid this.
   Note: 02:25:514 (4) - might be a trouble for 4:3 display users.
2. 01:19:294 (5) - try to finish this one on the red tick (01:19:444), it will actually match better with the sound and give an make the pattern slightly easier due to 1/1 gap to the next circle. I don't feel like having a stack there @_@
   
   I think that you're overusing 1/2 patterns for non-kiai parts and beacuse of that, kiai-time feels too easy. Try to get rid of some 1/2s in non-kiai parts to make the spread and the diff itself feel more balanced. This is a 200 BPM song, after all. Kiai time gives me a smoother sensation than the non-kiai parts, so I rather map like I did.

[Another]

1. I'd drop OD by 0,5 since this is not the hardest diff of the mapset and gowww's is supposed to be harder. It will make your diff more playable and improve the balance of the spread.
2. 01:09:094 (1,2) - it's kinda hard to tell whether it's 1/4 or 1/2 while playing. Mind reducing the DS here? That's 1/8 and it's barely noticeable tbh
3. 01:23:794 (3) - try to add a new combo here. It will emphasize the beginning of the new part + give some extra HP, which is also nice.
4. 02:18:164 (3) - try to reduce the DS here, the jump feels exaggerated, I'd go with x2.1 or so. I'll see..
   
   Looks clean, nice diff.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

another:
i think you shouldn't use normal whistle in the part around 00:37:811 it will sound noisy, soft whistle is better Normal whistle fits more the song sample in my opinion
on the other hand, normal whistle fits better in kiai part at 02:04:012

01:03:994 - add storyboard here (and remove this circle) I'll think about it!

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nicemap w

Irreversible wrote:

[cheesiest's Hard]

00:22:067 - How about adding a circle here to match the strong beat in the background? Without it, it seems like something is missing. nah
00:49:217 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks a bit unclean if I compare it to how you've mapped the rest. fixed it to be a bit more tidier
00:59:103 (1) - wow o.o cool thank
01:32:494 (1) - add nc? ok i guess

Nice slidershapes and the rhythm is cool tho. Except the pattern above I have nothing to complain about, I assume.

CelsiusLK wrote:

[cheesiest's Hyper]

1. 01:12:994 (4,1) - Stack at tail no
2. 01:18:694 - This here feel empty how about add a note here? no
3. 01:30:094 (1,2) - I don't know what are you follow here but how about end (2) at 01:30:694 - that where the beat play haha no
4. 02:14:864 (8) - Ctrl+G better flow nah
5. 02:44:489 (1) - Same as Another xD stop putting spinners in fade outs 2k14

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hmm

cheesiest's hyper:
02:15:164 (1,2) - hmm what
02:22:364 (2,3,4,5,6) - move left 2grid no
02:35:564 (3,4) - ? what

-Bakari- wrote:

[cheesiest's Hyper]

1. 01:03:603 - try to finish the slidr here to represent the music better, the same was done on the guest Another, so, why not. there is no sound that starts or w/e there or any fade out there :////
2. 01:11:194 (3,1) - minor - the transition does not flow good and feels forced. To improve the transition, try moving the stack to theright side. not sure what you mean, so im keeping it as it is, since i find it to be fine atmexample
   
   Not so much to say, well done.

Low wrote:

[cheesiest's Hyper]
00:39:617 (4,5,1) - ugly almost-overlap. space them out just a tiny amount more personally, i like them like that
00:42:917 (3,5) - do this. it flows so much better with the other objects around them. !!!!!!! tru

SPOILER

00:56:103 (2) - i'd move the end node of this slider more to the left. it currently looks a bit clustered with the previous slider i want the triangle there lol

Ayu wrote:

Hyper

1. Isn't Hyper usually a lighter kind of insane? Since there's a Normal and a Beginner the difficulty gap may be found a bit too big. I'm not saying this difficulty feels more like an insane, but I've noticed that it does feel a little over Hard. (1.74 => 2.24 => 3.43)
2. 00:22:067 - I'm most certainly hearing a beat here that's been covered in almost every other situation. intro tbh
3. 00:25:967 (5) - It looks really neat, but I myself always have a little weird feeling when playing something like this. The flow change to sharply go up after such a curve, doesn't really make the flow anything better nor does it emphasize anything in the music. too bad i can't extend that slider further to fill the gap that makes the flow weird since ya
4. 00:44:567 (1,2) - This jump feels really random and unnecessary. The music doesn't really call for it and you also haven't used them in the upcoming patterns, which it also makes it look like inconsistency. im keeping my pattern tbh
5. 00:59:103 (1) - This, is epic.
6. 01:41:569 - This is pretty much where the difficulty gap starts to be noticed. The spacing increasing here really makes this part look like as if it was from an easier insane map. well, y'know, the music got more intense
7. 01:52:364 (5) - I usually uncover a small part of the circle in a situation like this. Currently it's entirely hidden underneath the slidertrack, so it will take some reading skills or sense of flow to notice that there's a circle here.
8. 02:04:214 (4) - A follow up of the suggestion above. You should either also move it like mentioned above, or you should move it a little bit without gridsnap so you can actually fully cover it with the slider. If you're going to do it, do it right. doin' it well. fixed

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1. Add a long note at 00:15:017 - and end at 00:17:717 in 7th column
2. 00:19:667 - that 2 notes seems have same sound like the preview notes, remove one of them? just suggest
3. 00:21:767 - ^
4. 00:22:967 - add a note at 5
5. 00:24:167 - maybe just only add a note at 1 and remove 00:23:867 (23867|0,23867|5) - one note and 00:24:467 (24467|1,24467|4) - same
6. 00:25:367 - add a note at
7. 00:26:267 - 00:26:867 - ^ one line
8. 00:28:667 (28667|6,28667|0) - remove one of them?
9. 00:29:717 - strong beat, add a note
10. 00:30:767 (30767|6,30767|4) - remove a note?
11. 00:35:567 - add a note like before, and and suggest 00:34:967 (34967|4) - change to Ln until it get to the next double-white line
12. 00:53:103 (53103|1) - seems hard, suggest move to 1
13. 00:59:103 - suggest add one more note
14. 01:03:678 (63678|3) - change to long note until the next notes?
15. 01:12:694 - 01:13:894 - suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1983124 cause of pattern of 01:13:894 - can like 01:15:094 -
16. 01:15:694 - this part a strong beat more than 01:16:294 - but you use 3 notes after that, suggestr at a note at 7 in 01:15:694 -
17. 01:19:294 - and 01:21:694 - and 01:26:494 - and 01:27:694 - beat still the same volume, why only that part are two notes only?
18. Suggest 01:32:494 (92494|4) - the end reach until 01:39:244 cause of echo
    Add a long begin at 01:39:994 and end at 01:40:744 - ?
19. 01:41:564 - suggest add a least one or two notes
20. 01:43:364 - add a note at 6 cause the before (01:42:014 - 01:42:464 -) used two notes when it's have a long sound in the song
21. 01:45:764 - ^
22. 01:50:564 - 01:51:164 - sound higher, i think it not lower, suggest 01:50:564 (110564|3) - move to 01:50:864 - and 01:51:164 (111164|3) - move to 3 and add a note in 2 if you allowed in add note before, if two, one more note at 5
23. 01:52:964 - add a note at 2
24. 01:55:364 - ^ at 5
25. 02:20:414 - add a note at 6
26. 02:24:614 - ^ at 1
27. 02:26:714 - ^ at 7
28. 02:33:014 - ^ at 1
29. The last notes, move to 02:44:489 - (1/8 beat) for like the MX, or vice versa
    Nice pattern at the middle to end of the kiai, I love it

1. How about a little 1/4 stream before press long notes? From 00:03:917 - to 00:04:217 -
2. 00:15:017 - Add a long note and end at 00:17:717 -
3. 00:18:617 - add a note cause this sound more stronger and not same like 00:18:167 - and 00:18:317 -
4. 00:20:717 - ^
5. 00:27:617 - ^
6. 00:28:817 - 00:29:267 - suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1983222
7. 00:29:717 - add a note
8. 00:29:717 - ^
9. 00:35:342 (35342|4,35942|4) - doesn't have sound but add hitsound maybe can
10. 00:22:967 - 00:24:167 - 00:25:367 - 00:26:567 - the after (00:31:967 -) used 3 notes but still have samne beat, suggest at 3 notes at those times too
11. 00:35:567 - add a note
12. 00:36:167 - add a note at 6?
13. Why in MX use 1/8 beat but HD is 1/6? Like 00:37:967 (37967|6,38004|5,38042|4) - hmmm... maybe can cause of diff's rating
14. In here 00:40:667 - use 3 notes, suggest 00:40:967 - 00:41:867 - (whilte line only) use 3 notes
15. 00:43:067 - 00:43:967 - ^
16. 00:44:567 - 00:48:767 - no streaming? maybe not use it, suggest add some long notes in it
17. 00:45:017 - add a note
18. 00:45:017 - ^ or 2 notes
19. 00:47:117 - ^ (1 only)
20. 00:48:167 - ^ or 2 notes
21. 00:48:767 - 00:49:217 - add a note
22. 00:58:503 (58503|3,58803|4) - change to a long note and end at the whilte line? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1983282
23. 01:03:678 (63678|3) - change to long note and end at the next two notes
24. 01:06:094 - 01:06:694 - suggest add one more note
25. 01:07:894 - 01:08:194 - 01:08:494 - 01:08:794 - 01:09:094 - 01:09:394 - 01:09:694 - 01:09:844 - 01:09:994 - 01:10:144 - 01:10:294 - ^
26. All the before you use 3 notes (like 01:12:994 (72994|1,72994|4,72994|5) - ) why here are only 2 notes? 01:14:494 - suggest add a note
27. 01:15:694 - add a note at 7
28. 01:27:244 (87244|3,87544|1) - change to? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1983298
29. 01:28:894 - 01:29:494 - 01:30:094 - 01:30:694 - 01:31:294 - 01:31:894 - suggest add one more note cause you used 3 notes at before
30. Suggest 01:32:494 (92494|0) - end at 01:39:244 -
31. Add a long note at 01:39:994 - and end at 01:40:744 -
32. Woa, very very strong beat add here: 01:41:564 - suggest add at least 3 more notes or 4 notes
33. 01:43:364 - add one more note cause that long sound have two notes (01:43:664 (103664|2) - )
34. 01:43:664 (103664|2,105614|2,105914|2,106214|4) - change to the long note and end at the next white line?
35. 01:48:164 - add a note
36. 01:50:414 - ^ same cause before you used 3 notes, but this sound like the before
37. 01:42:464 - add a note cause you used 3 notes at 01:52:064 -
38. 01:52:964 - add a note?
    01:55:964 (115964|3) - try to get this end at 01:58:364 -
39. 02:00:014 - 02:00:464 - have different sounds with 01:59:864 - 02:00:164 - suggest a note at 02:00:014 - 02:00:464 -
40. 02:03:164 - add a note at 7
41. 02:05:564 - ^
42. 02:10:364 - 02:11:564 - 02:12:764 - 02:13:964 - 02:15:164 - 02:16:364 - 02:17:564 - 02:18:164 - 02:18:764 - 02:19:364 - not have same beats, suggest add a note in those times! 02:19:964 - add a note at 5
43. 02:22:514 - add a note
44. 02:24:314 - add a note causr after that all use 2 notes and 3 notes for red line and white line too and have almost same beats
45. 02:24:614 - strong beat, add a note at 1
46. 02:26:714 - ^
47. 02:30:914 - ^
48. 02:32:714 - ^
49. 02:33:014 - ^
    

neonat wrote:

Mao's Another

00:25:817 (1,2) - I don't know how to say it but this part bothered me in how they are placed They play fine to me ._.
02:32:264 (7,1) - blanket these nicely I've tried it as good as I can and it's looking fine for me :/ I'll do further adjustments if I'm told to do so again

Tess wrote:

Beginner01:26:794 (3) - Due to the chimes in the background here, wouldn't it be better to make this into 2 circles to accentuate those? I don't see a big difference here
02:30:764 (4) - This rhythm feels a little off, I think a return 1/1 on the red tick would play and sound better - something like this Mhm, I'll see..
02:44:489 (1) - This doesn't really add to the map, it feels more like something intended as a joke than anything else - goes for every diff That's the point!

Normal00:26:417 (2) - Is there a reason for this bezier slider? I mean, if you're trying to accentuate the glitchy sound in the background, maybe it'd be good to turn 00:25:967 (1) - into a similar bezier as well? Just aesthetic.
00:45:617 (3) - I think this would look better as a bezier slider Seems fine as curved too
01:58:364 (1,2,3,4) - Are these antijumps really okay for a Normal? YESSS

Extra00:54:453 (5) - This slider is a bit counter-intuitive What do you mean?
01:31:744 (6,7) - Wouldn't these look better if they had a slight curve to them? Nah
02:11:264 (3,4,5,6) - This stream looks a bit sloppy Seems like the others to me

Hope this helps.

Tess wrote:

Mao's Another01:06:094 (6,1) - The spacing between these feels a bit awkward, why not end the singletap section with a triangle like this? I still don't really know what to do with this. I think it plays okay but the jump is needed for the emphasis so I can't do it like this.
01:06:394 (1,2) - Eh maybe you could ctrl G (1) and move (2) to either x182 y336 or x187 y281. I found the former to work better. Connected to the one above
01:43:964 (1,2) - Considering all of the other blankety/symmetrical goodness in the map this pattern feels rather out of place, like it didn't come out as intended. I like it, fits the atmosphere well imo :<
02:25:214 (5,6) - Ctrl + G (5) and then place (6) at x190 y216? Fit the music way better in my opinion DS would turn out to big for my taste :/

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