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yanaginagi - Toaru Kaizoku Ou no Kimagure [Osu|Taiko]

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HabiHolic
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HabiHolic

Leader wrote:

Seems fine, bubbled! (drum icon by kpy: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3075703)
Thanks Leader!!!
gom1502
gom1502
go go!
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
I redownloaded this mapset few times and I can't see any of my suggestions been applied to this mapset even though I got replied with ''All fixed'' and looking at Leader's mod, there's still few things untouched like the OD of Insane, he suggested to change it into 8 but it's still 7, why's this?
HabiHolic
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Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic

Asphyxia wrote:

I redownloaded this mapset few times and I can't see any of my suggestions been applied to this mapset even though I got replied with ''All fixed'' and looking at Leader's mod, there's still few things untouched like the OD of Insane, he suggested to change it into 8 but it's still 7, why's this?
>_> mistake;; reupdate~
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
'Kay, since Habi applied my mod, I'm going to give you a detailed mod about Insane and few suggestions for the Hard because other diffs are fine. I guess this is a re-check, no kds.

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:692 (5) - Since you're NC'ing usually when there's a stanza, shouldn't this have NC too instead of 00:06:692 (1) - ? Feels more logical that way.
  2. 00:14:192 (6) - Because you ignored the blanket, this doesn't work really well because 6 is not fitting enough by it's curve to have a nice effect with 2, that's why you should curve it more
    Example
  3. 00:17:692 (1) - I think just by making the curve go to the other side, the flow improves here which means that it's more enjoyable to play. It also creates a smoother flow between the next note.
    Example
  4. 00:21:025 (5,6,7) - I dislike these because they're curved awkwardly and they should have more spacing in order to play better. That being said, you could make them go like this, players would enjoy it a lot more imo. (I used 0.6 spacing)
    Example
  5. 00:22:192 (3) - Move this slider few grids (2-3) to the right in order to make a better O shaped pattern with 00:21:692 (2) - , here's an
    Example
  6. 00:23:025 (6) - Again, stanza for NC? It feels way more logical to use a NC here.
  7. 00:24:025 (2,3,4) - Please apply the suggestion to here too, here's an example for possible placements if you're having troubles with it.
    Example placement
  8. 00:25:692 (1,2) - Please make the blanket perfect, it's so close to being one.
  9. 00:27:025 (1) - This felt weird in a way because usually you have jumps when there's a strong beat but this didn't, so you could move this to x:312 y:68 to make it more jumpy, I think it'd make it more fun.
  10. 00:28:858 (6) - Cuve it more > better blanket > better pattern, win win for everyone.
    Example
  11. 00:30:025 (2,3,4) - Yeah, apply it here too please~ (and remember to use 0.6x spacing to be consistent, preferably a straight triplet like in my examples, would fit the map overall a bit better)
  12. 00:34:692 (1,2) - Switch NC's in order to keep consistency?
  13. 00:35:025 (2) - Here's a better placement how this pattern could work, as I said, you usually have a jump in the strong beat (stanza) so this would make a lot of sense after you'd change the NC, take this as an example.
    Example
  14. 00:39:358 (7) - This could be a nice, small effect, since the voice is here similar to 00:39:025 - , your placement could be like this
    Example
  15. 00:43:525 (7,8,9) - Apply the suggestion here too, please~
  16. 00:45:692 (1,2,3) - This is weird in a way because usually the strong beat has a spacing change instead of an object like this 00:46:025 (4) - , so you can move the triplet 00:45:692 (1,2,3) - to x:284 y:212 so that it gives you an awesome triangle AND makes it more fun to play.
    Example
  17. 00:51:692 (4,5,6) - ~
  18. 00:53:692 (7) - NC should be here
  19. 00:59:025 (5) - ^
  20. 01:00:858 (1,2,3) - ~
  21. 01:30:358 (3,4,5) - ~
  22. 01:33:358 (3,4) - Mm, I think you could play around with these notes a bit and come up with a better placement for these, here's what I came up with
    Example
  23. 01:33:692 (5) - Should have NC
  24. 01:43:692 (8) - You might want to consider moving the curve to the opposite side, that way the flow is way smoother with 01:43:358 (7) - this object, and it also creates a stylish overlap with the next objects, here's an example.
    Example
  25. 01:45:525 (6) - CTRL + G plays here really well, you should test it and tell me what you think about it.
  26. 01:47:525 (7,8,9) - ~
  27. 01:55:692 (3,4,5) - ~
  28. 01:57:692 (7) - Should have NC
  29. Okay, that's for the Insane.
[Hard]
  1. Only few things.
  2. 00:00:359 (1,2) - I'd like you to remove small overlaps such as these, I feel like they're not necessary and they're so small it makes no sense to me. Looks a bit unclean. 00:06:525 (3,4) - the same would apply here too.
  3. 00:25:025 (2) - Mm, look at my example here. I think it'd look better that way and the overlap isn't that great so it gets rid of it too, your choice.
    Example
  4. 00:51:358 (1,2) - First suggestion would apply here.
  5. Great hard difficulty.
Mm, call me back~
KantoKun
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Joined December 2011
KantoKun
fix all thanks!!

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288,288,54525,2,0,P|264:248|264:200,1,75,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,272,54858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,272,55025,6,0,P|176:224|184:184,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,55358,2,0,P|104:168|120:136,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,55692,2,0,L|0:72,2,75,2|0|8,1:2|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,138,56192,2,0,L|192:130,2,37.5,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,56692,6,0,B|320:56|312:8|312:8|376:16,1,150,12|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
416,80,57192,1,0,1:0:0:0:
488,40,57358,2,0,P|496:80|488:120,1,75,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,57692,6,0,P|424:208|440:248,1,75,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,58025,2,0,L|312:304,1,75,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,344,58358,2,0,L|240:336,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,58692,2,0,P|254:237|256:216,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,184,59025,6,0,P|232:136|248:72,1,112.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,59358,2,0,L|176:64,1,75,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,128,59692,2,0,L|104:120,1,75,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
168,184,60025,2,0,P|176:224|160:264,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,328,60358,6,0,P|176:296|256:312,2,150,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,61192,2,0,L|40:208,1,75,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,88,61692,5,0,1:0:0:0:
232,184,62025,2,0,P|272:200|376:192,1,150,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,40,62525,2,0,P|296:80|304:120,1,75,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,80,62858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,113,63025,6,0,L|224:104,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,144,63358,2,0,L|152:136,1,75,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,63692,2,0,L|240:232,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,64025,2,0,L|304:240,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64358,12,2,66858,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67025,12,4,69692,1:0:0:0:
48,112,75025,5,0,1:0:0:0:
48,112,75358,1,0,1:0:0:0:
160,88,75692,1,0,1:0:0:0:
160,88,76025,1,0,1:0:0:0:
136,216,76358,5,0,1:0:0:0:
136,216,76692,1,0,1:0:0:0:
248,192,77025,1,0,1:0:0:0:
248,192,77358,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,272,77692,6,0,P|392:280|456:264,2,112.500004291535,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,78692,2,0,L|392:184,1,56.2500021457673,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,136,79025,6,0,P|256:152|176:128,1,112.500004291535,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
120,88,79525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,88,79692,2,0,P|80:72|0:80,1,112.500004291535,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
32,312,80358,6,0,P|48:272|48:152,1,150,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,280,81025,2,0,L|240:288,2,75,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,81692,6,0,P|336:224|344:120,1,150,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,80,82192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,80,82358,2,0,L|488:88,2,75,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,88,83025,6,0,P|232:112|120:88,1,150,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,32,83525,2,0,P|112:104|88:200,1,150,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,84025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,328,84358,6,0,L|256:320,1,75,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,84692,2,0,L|208:232,1,75,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,144,85025,2,0,L|248:136,1,75,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,56,85358,2,0,L|336:64,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,48,85692,6,0,P|392:64|496:48,1,150,4|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,86358,2,0,P|281:117|215:35,1,150,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,168,87025,6,0,P|374:194|336:292,1,150,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,224,87692,2,0,L|184:144,2,75,2|0|10,1:2|1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
104,336,88358,5,2,1:2:0:0:
104,336,88692,1,10,0:0:0:0:
72,184,89025,1,2,1:2:0:0:
72,184,89358,1,10,0:0:0:0:
216,152,89692,5,2,1:2:0:0:
216,152,90025,1,10,0:0:0:0:
248,304,90358,1,2,1:2:0:0:
248,304,90692,1,10,0:0:0:0:
280,80,91025,6,0,P|224:56|136:96,1,150,4|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,168,91525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,91692,2,0,P|216:272|304:232,1,150,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,80,92358,6,0,L|456:160,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,120,92692,2,0,L|384:192,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,232,93025,2,0,L|344:256,1,75,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
272,360,93358,2,0,L|352:336,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,296,93692,6,0,L|24:288,1,150,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,112,94358,2,0,L|216:120,1,150,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,94858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,88,95025,6,0,P|340:48|336:12,1,75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,120,95358,2,0,P|440:112|472:120,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,232,95692,2,0,P|432:240|400:232,1,75,10|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
328,288,96025,2,0,L|256:296,2,37.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96358,12,0,98858,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99025,12,0,100192,0:0:0:0:
192,200,100358,6,0,L|200:280,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,100692,2,0,L|136:48,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,101025,2,0,P|72:232|32:232,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,120,101358,2,0,P|264:96|304:96,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,101608,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,104,101692,2,0,L|312:184,1,75,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,232,102025,2,0,L|400:152,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,288,102358,2,0,P|400:320|320:280,1,150,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,232,102858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,320,103025,6,0,L|168:312,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,103358,2,0,L|152:200,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,136,103692,2,0,P|256:64|224:-8,1,150,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,104,104192,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,104,104275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,104,104358,2,0,P|424:96|432:96,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,104692,2,0,P|368:200|360:200,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,248,105025,2,0,B|296:312|304:328|304:328,1,75,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,184,105358,2,0,P|176:176|168:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,105692,6,0,P|136:184|144:80,1,150,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,32,106192,2,0,L|0:40,1,75,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,106525,2,0,L|304:56,1,75,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,48,106858,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,48,106942,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,48,107025,2,0,P|419:85|411:157,1,112.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,181,107358,6,0,P|435:165|467:165,1,75,12|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,272,107692,2,0,P|448:288|416:288,1,75,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,320,108025,2,0,P|280:304|240:304,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,340,108358,6,0,L|144:188,2,150,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
56,280,109192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,152,109358,2,0,P|104:120|144:112,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,109608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,112,109692,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,144,110025,6,0,P|320:184|424:176,1,150,12|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
440,88,110525,1,0,1:0:0:0:
360,32,110692,2,0,P|352:72|360:112,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,111025,6,0,B|376:304,1,75,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
272,336,111358,2,0,B|280:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,111692,2,0,L|176:272,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,312,112025,2,0,P|64:320|24:312,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,296,112275,5,8,0:0:0:0:
8,296,112358,1,4,1:0:0:0:
56,152,112692,2,0,P|64:200|64:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,184,113025,2,0,L|224:192,1,75,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
272,80,113358,2,0,L|192:72,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,168,113692,6,0,P|344:136|352:24,1,150,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,120,114192,2,0,P|395:163|488:226,1,150,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,114692,2,0,P|348:204|247:253,1,150,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
328,368,115358,6,0,L|336:280,1,75,12|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,168,115692,2,0,L|256:256,1,75,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,304,116025,2,0,P|144:320|112:312,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,272,116358,5,0,1:0:0:0:
48,272,116692,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,272,117025,2,0,L|40:232,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,117358,2,0,L|56:160,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,117692,5,0,1:0:0:0:
136,64,117858,1,0,1:0:0:0:
200,120,118025,2,0,P|224:152|336:168,1,150,12|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,16,118525,2,0,P|280:56|288:96,1,75,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,144,119025,5,0,1:0:0:0:
440,216,119192,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,288,119358,2,0,L|376:368,1,75,12|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,119692,2,0,L|296:240,1,75,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,120025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,88,120192,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,88,120275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,88,120358,2,0,P|200:56|112:64,2,150,0|12|0,1:0|1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,121192,2,0,P|168:176|176:136,1,75,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,121525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,272,121692,6,0,P|217:298|178:312,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,122025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,176,122192,2,0,P|294:189|325:216,1,75,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
392,168,122525,2,0,P|384:127|392:88,1,75,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,122858,2,0,P|289:74|250:88,1,75,8|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
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Topic Starter
HabiHolic

Asphyxia wrote:

'Kay, since Habi applied my mod, I'm going to give you a detailed mod about Insane and few suggestions for the Hard because other diffs are fine. I guess this is a re-check, no kds.

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:692 (5) - Since you're NC'ing usually when there's a stanza, shouldn't this have NC too instead of 00:06:692 (1) - ? Feels more logical that way.
  2. 00:14:192 (6) - Because you ignored the blanket, this doesn't work really well because 6 is not fitting enough by it's curve to have a nice effect with 2, that's why you should curve it more
    Example
  3. 00:17:692 (1) - I think just by making the curve go to the other side, the flow improves here which means that it's more enjoyable to play. It also creates a smoother flow between the next note.
    Example
  4. 00:21:025 (5,6,7) - I dislike these because they're curved awkwardly and they should have more spacing in order to play better. That being said, you could make them go like this, players would enjoy it a lot more imo. (I used 0.6 spacing)
    Example
  5. 00:22:192 (3) - Move this slider few grids (2-3) to the right in order to make a better O shaped pattern with 00:21:692 (2) - , here's an
    Example
  6. 00:23:025 (6) - Again, stanza for NC? It feels way more logical to use a NC here.
  7. 00:24:025 (2,3,4) - Please apply the suggestion to here too, here's an example for possible placements if you're having troubles with it.
    Example placement
  8. 00:25:692 (1,2) - Please make the blanket perfect, it's so close to being one.
  9. 00:27:025 (1) - This felt weird in a way because usually you have jumps when there's a strong beat but this didn't, so you could move this to x:312 y:68 to make it more jumpy, I think it'd make it more fun.
  10. 00:28:858 (6) - Cuve it more > better blanket > better pattern, win win for everyone.
    Example
  11. 00:30:025 (2,3,4) - Yeah, apply it here too please~ (and remember to use 0.6x spacing to be consistent, preferably a straight triplet like in my examples, would fit the map overall a bit better)
  12. 00:34:692 (1,2) - Switch NC's in order to keep consistency?
  13. 00:35:025 (2) - Here's a better placement how this pattern could work, as I said, you usually have a jump in the strong beat (stanza) so this would make a lot of sense after you'd change the NC, take this as an example.
    Example
  14. 00:39:358 (7) - This could be a nice, small effect, since the voice is here similar to 00:39:025 - , your placement could be like this
    Example
  15. 00:43:525 (7,8,9) - Apply the suggestion here too, please~
  16. 00:45:692 (1,2,3) - This is weird in a way because usually the strong beat has a spacing change instead of an object like this 00:46:025 (4) - , so you can move the triplet 00:45:692 (1,2,3) - to x:284 y:212 so that it gives you an awesome triangle AND makes it more fun to play.
    Example
  17. 00:51:692 (4,5,6) - ~
  18. 00:53:692 (7) - NC should be here
  19. 00:59:025 (5) - ^
  20. 01:00:858 (1,2,3) - ~
  21. 01:30:358 (3,4,5) - ~
  22. 01:33:358 (3,4) - Mm, I think you could play around with these notes a bit and come up with a better placement for these, here's what I came up with
    Example
  23. 01:33:692 (5) - Should have NC
  24. 01:43:692 (8) - You might want to consider moving the curve to the opposite side, that way the flow is way smoother with 01:43:358 (7) - this object, and it also creates a stylish overlap with the next objects, here's an example.
    Example
  25. 01:45:525 (6) - CTRL + G plays here really well, you should test it and tell me what you think about it. / Very high Jump No
  26. 01:47:525 (7,8,9) - ~
  27. 01:55:692 (3,4,5) - ~
  28. 01:57:692 (7) - Should have NC
  29. Okay, that's for the Insane.
Mm, call me back~
Fixed
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
Re-check here;

-I still see Inconsistency in combo colors, KantoKun's hard being the problem here. You can just copy your Insane's combo colors into Kanto's .osu unless there's a special reason Kanto wants to use different ones.

-There seems to be unused image files, might wanna remove them. http://puu.sh/8UzRh.png

Lemme know when fix'd~
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic

Asphyxia wrote:

Re-check here;

-I still see Inconsistency in combo colors, KantoKun's hard being the problem here. You can just copy your Insane's combo colors into Kanto's .osu unless there's a special reason Kanto wants to use different ones.

-There seems to be unused image files, might wanna remove them. http://puu.sh/8UzRh.png

Lemme know when fix'd~
Fixed
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
Mapset looks so much better, Insane especially. Rebub~
HabiHolic
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HabiHolic

Asphyxia wrote:

Mapset looks so much better, Insane especially. Rebub~
thx
captin1
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captin1
your NC patterns are still very inconsistent, I recommend you fix like I give you here so that they fit much better into the 1 bar phrases
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:025 (5) - NC
  2. 00:05:692 (5) - NC
  3. 00:06:692 (1,2) - swap NC
  4. 00:12:358 (6) - NC
  5. 00:13:192 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:13:692 (4) - NC
  7. 00:21:358 (1,2) - swap NC
  8. 00:23:025 (6,1) - swap NC
  9. 00:24:358 (5) - NC
  10. 00:28:358 (5) - NC
  11. 00:33:692 (5) - NC
  12. 00:39:025 (6) - NC
  13. 00:41:525 (6) - NC
  14. 00:42:192 (1) - remove NC
  15. 00:43:858 (1,2) - swap NC
  16. 00:42:858 (5) - NC
  17. 00:43:858 (1,2) - swap NC
  18. 00:46:858 (5) - NC
  19. 00:49:525 (5) - NC
  20. 00:52:192 (8,1) - swap NC
  21. 00:54:858 (4) - NC
  22. 01:00:192 (5) - NC
  23. 01:00:858 (1) - remove NC
  24. 01:01:692 (6) - NC
  25. 01:16:358 (6) - NC
  26. 01:17:025 (1) - remove NC
  27. 01:17:692 (3) - NC
  28. 01:22:358 (1) - remove NC
  29. 01:23:025 (3) - NC
  30. 01:23:858 (1) - remove NC
  31. 01:24:358 (3) - NC
  32. 01:27:025 (6) - NC
  33. 01:28:025 (1) - remove NC
  34. 01:28:358 (3) - NC
  35. 01:35:025 (7) - NC
  36. 01:43:025 (6) - NC
  37. 01:45:525 (6) - NC
  38. 01:46:192 (1) - remove NC
  39. 01:46:858 (5) - NC
  40. 01:47:858 (1,2) - swap NC
  41. 01:50:858 (5) - NC
  42. 01:53:525 (5) - NC
  43. 01:56:192 (7,1) - swap NC
  44. 01:58:858 (4) - NC
  45. 02:01:692 (6) - NC
  46. 02:04:358 (5) - NC
  47. 00:32:358 (1) - this would sound better with Soft Addition, not Soft Sampleset
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:025 (6,1) - swap NC
  2. 01:49:692 (5) - NC
  3. 01:51:025 (1) - remove NC
[Gloria's Easy]
  1. 01:28:358 (1) - remove NC
HabiHolic
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Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic

captin1 wrote:

your NC patterns are still very inconsistent, I recommend you fix like I give you here so that they fit much better into the 1 bar phrases
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:025 (5) - NC
  2. 00:05:692 (5) - NC
  3. 00:06:692 (1,2) - swap NC
  4. 00:12:358 (6) - NC
  5. 00:13:192 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:13:692 (4) - NC
  7. 00:21:358 (1,2) - swap NC
  8. 00:23:025 (6,1) - swap NC
  9. 00:24:358 (5) - NC
  10. 00:28:358 (5) - NC
  11. 00:33:692 (5) - NC
  12. 00:39:025 (6) - NC
  13. 00:41:525 (6) - NC
  14. 00:42:192 (1) - remove NC
  15. 00:43:858 (1,2) - swap NC
  16. 00:42:858 (5) - NC
  17. 00:43:858 (1,2) - swap NC
  18. 00:46:858 (5) - NC
  19. 00:49:525 (5) - NC
  20. 00:52:192 (8,1) - swap NC
  21. 00:54:858 (4) - NC
  22. 01:00:192 (5) - NC
  23. 01:00:858 (1) - remove NC
  24. 01:01:692 (6) - NC
  25. 01:16:358 (6) - NC
  26. 01:17:025 (1) - remove NC
  27. 01:17:692 (3) - NC
  28. 01:22:358 (1) - remove NC
  29. 01:23:025 (3) - NC
  30. 01:23:858 (1) - remove NC
  31. 01:24:358 (3) - NC
  32. 01:27:025 (6) - NC
  33. 01:28:025 (1) - remove NC
  34. 01:28:358 (3) - NC
  35. 01:35:025 (7) - NC
  36. 01:43:025 (6) - NC
  37. 01:45:525 (6) - NC
  38. 01:46:192 (1) - remove NC
  39. 01:46:858 (5) - NC
  40. 01:47:858 (1,2) - swap NC
  41. 01:50:858 (5) - NC
  42. 01:53:525 (5) - NC
  43. 01:56:192 (7,1) - swap NC
  44. 01:58:858 (4) - NC
  45. 02:01:692 (6) - NC
  46. 02:04:358 (5) - NC
  47. 00:32:358 (1) - this would sound better with Soft Addition, not Soft Sampleset
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:025 (6,1) - swap NC
  2. 01:49:692 (5) - NC
  3. 01:51:025 (1) - remove NC
[Gloria's Easy]
  1. 01:28:358 (1) - remove NC
Fixed
captin1
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captin1
looks nice now, great map!

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Piine
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Joined March 2012
Piine
Gratz~
HabiHolic
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Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic

captin1 wrote:

looks nice now, great map!

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Thanks captin1
mingmichael
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Joined May 2012
mingmichael
wohooo congrats~
Lust
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Lust
Congrats!
Beige
Elite Mapper
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Joined February 2011
Beige
크으...
caren_sk
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Joined October 2010
caren_sk
good map!!
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