Pink Agate wrote:

easy mod

[easy]

00:30:204 (4) - spacing wrong,it should colse to the 00:28:928 (3) - k

[Insane]

00:11:055 - add a kiai fountain in here? k
01:15:364 (4) - ctrl+G? k
01:15:843 (5) - ^ then the next jump is too big
01:20:151 (3) - maybe nwe combo in here?

good luck

Soror wrote:

All suggestions, you can ignore all of them.

[Insane]

00:21:268 (1) - Make it wave like 00:31:481 (1)? (to emphasis the finish sound) k
00:35:151 (2) - delete? (the vocal around here sounds like punctuated) k
00:40:417 (4) - To a slider? (this sounds connected to me, because of the 1/4s)honestly i dont know how to arrange a slider there =/
01:09:779 (4,6) - Ctrl+G (..to make it tricky?) k
01:12:332 - Kiai fountain again? (cf. 02:23:821) i'll put one at 01:22:545 - sound better
01:28:928 (1,2,3,4) - Flow change? (because 01:28:289 (4,5) - gives an impression of anticlockwise rotation)fixed.. not really sure how to adjust it right though o3o
*if you decide to change, adjustments are needed
03:51:470 (4) - Stack with (1)? (maybe, like previous) ok

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Sorry for simple mod, I couldn't feel something to change in other diffs.

GL

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
Quick check mod. Since I didn't tell the details so feel free to send me pm if you don't know why or how to make changes.
[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Maybe you need a Hard diff to make the diff spread consistent. i know but mapping this is really tiring >_>

[Easy]
General
Good diff.
Beats
01:23:183 - Maybe drum is not so obvious so vocal is easy to follow like this. not so sure, i'll have to adjust the rest if i fix this
03:26:576 - make here a note to emphasize the vocal here. dont really think it's necessary
Placement
00:07:864 (3,4) - Flow change is not reasonable. what flow? o_O
00:34:672 (3,1) - Flow is not smooth. i was using symmetry there
01:31:481 (6) - Check whether it is outside the screen. hmm a little bit

[Normal]
General
Good diff.
Placement
00:30:204 (3) - I'm not sure but here may hit the HP bar.tested, it's fine
02:32:119 (3,4) - Not in good flow. i was kinda out of idea >_>
03:36:151 (2) - Hit HP bar? no it's doesnt

Hitsound
01:02:757 (2) - No finish here. there is a finish in insane too o3o

[Insane]
General
Good diff.
Beats
03:21:470 (2,3,4) - To keep the style of the map consistent I don't prefer this kind of beats. A simple note is recommended. k

Placement
00:27:332 (1,2) - Not reasonable flow change I think. No sign showed in the song to change flow. i want consistent flow between 00:26:374 (5,6) - and 00:27:651 (2,3) - o3o 00:27:332 (1) - doesnt matter
00:36:268 (4,1) - ^
01:01:481 (1,2) - Suitable for a jump. yep, but since they are 1/1, anti jump may be better
01:15:364 (4,5) - Flow not consistent. i'd like to fix this but where should i put 01:16:640 (6,1) -
01:24:779 (3,1) - ^ and jump a little big. cuz it's 1/1
02:24:140 (2) - Ctrl+g will be better to make the flow fit in your slider flow in this part. k
03:25:459 (4,5) - Sudden flow change. i think it's ok, there are several kinds of flow

NCs
00:07:225 (1,1,1) - Too much ncs here and not reasonable for me.well each nc stands for 1 "ni"? im not so sure >_>

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .

kazumikos wrote:

azuretwinight wrote:

[Easy]

Placement

00:34:672 (3,1) - Flow is not smooth. i was using symmetry there Ctrl+g 00:36:587 (1,3) - will help, but you need to adjust something.

thanks for modding :3

azuretwinight wrote:

kazumikos wrote:

[Easy]

Placement

00:34:672 (3,1) - Flow is not smooth. i was using symmetry there Ctrl+g 00:36:587 (1,3) - will help, but you need to adjust something.

Sry for taking the mod too quickly and a lot of things not rechecked when I finish the mod. Here is an explain of my mod and hope it helps.

Soror wrote:

..No kds please

http://puu.sh/5rQvi/b4c5928a44.zip

1. Maybe you can increase the volume, especially in the chorus part? The volume of the song is kinda big over that part it's kinda difficult to hear the hit object (Especially for Easy diff with low density hit object). Around 80% or 90% is good
2. I've been away from modding for a long time so I'm not sure about the object before offset thingy. You may want to confirm it to BAT

1. 00:11:055 - A very awkward kiai cause it's on break, might as well remove it cause it doesn't mean anything. Or you can change 00:08:502 (4) into a single slider without repeat then add slider from 00:09:779 until 00:11:055 that way there will be a hit object on the kiai fountain just like in the other 2 diff
2. 03:18:917 (3) - First time playing, I miss this. Kinda let my guard down cause I think there won't be any slider with 2 repeats

1. 00:30:683 (4,5) - Quite complex rhythm right of the bat, I highly suggest some simpler pattern. My suggestion is to make 3 into a slider that ends on 00:30:683 then make it into a repeat slider. This will cover the rhythm on the music while keep it simple, ofc you can use your own idea.
2. 00:57:491 (3) - Hmm, maybe change this into a single slider? I think it's good to have the slight blank after this slider if you make it into single slider
3. 01:58:289 (3) - A single long slider is a better match to the vocal, I suggest to change it into a single slider that start from 01:58:289 until 01:59:247
4. 02:07:225 (7) - Anti jump in Normal? it doesn't really fit. Please change it into normal spacing
5. 02:57:497 (6) - Maybe move this right under the 02:55:637 (3) slider end? It'll keep the circling movement. You have to reposition 02:57:962 (1) if you do this though (which could be annoying) so do what you want

1. 01:09:779 (3,4,5,6,7) - The jump is kinda stiff, this really conflict with the smooth flow of the previous part. Maybe try something with more consistent jump. Something like this below
   
   SPOILER

   
   in the image I arrange 01:09:779 (3,4,5,6,7) (I change the color for better viewing) into a triangle with the same jump spacing (around 1.8x)
   Anyway, you can use your own idea but not the current one, it's bad
2. 02:35:789 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above. I guess you can say that I don't like this kind of jump xD
3. 03:25:619 (5) - Maybe move it under 03:25:140 (3) like this? yeah I know it's crazy, but I just like the flow xD
   

Sallad4ever wrote:

Halo Kazumikos
Really sorry for the late reply, been kinda busy this past week

(General)

1. Maybe you can increase the volume, especially in the chorus part? The volume of the song is kinda big over that part it's kinda difficult to hear the hit object (Especially for Easy diff with low density hit object). Around 80% or 90% is good fixed
2. I've been away from modding for a long time so I'm not sure about the object before offset thingy. You may want to confirm it to BAT kk

(Easy)

1. 00:11:055 - A very awkward kiai cause it's on break, might as well remove it cause it doesn't mean anything. Or you can change 00:08:502 (4) into a single slider without repeat then add slider from 00:09:779 until 00:11:055 that way there will be a hit object on the kiai fountain just like in the other 2 diff ok
2. 03:18:917 (3) - First time playing, I miss this. Kinda let my guard down cause I think there won't be any slider with 2 repeats so you're saying i should add more 2 repeat sliders? :3

(Normal)

1. 00:30:683 (4,5) - Quite complex rhythm right of the bat, I highly suggest some simpler pattern. My suggestion is to make 3 into a slider that ends on 00:30:683 then make it into a repeat slider. This will cover the rhythm on the music while keep it simple, ofc you can use your own idea. k
2. 00:57:491 (3) - Hmm, maybe change this into a single slider? I think it's good to have the slight blank after this slider if you make it into single slider mmm ok
3. 01:58:289 (3) - A single long slider is a better match to the vocal, I suggest to change it into a single slider that start from 01:58:289 until 01:59:247 but i want to keep the clap at the reverse
4. 02:07:225 (7) - Anti jump in Normal? it doesn't really fit. Please change it into normal spacing anti-jump? nah it's just a mistake
5. 02:57:497 (6) - Maybe move this right under the 02:55:637 (3) slider end? It'll keep the circling movement. You have to reposition 02:57:962 (1) if you do this though (which could be annoying) so do what you want not only 02:57:962 (1) - i'll have to fix 02:58:893 (2) - and the rest as well :< it's really tiring

(Insane)

1. 01:09:779 (3,4,5,6,7) - The jump is kinda stiff, this really conflict with the smooth flow of the previous part. Maybe try something with more consistent jump. Something like this below mm ima ctrl+g on 01:09:938 (4,6) -
2. 02:35:789 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above. I guess you can say that I don't like this kind of jump xD k
3. 03:25:619 (5) - Maybe move it under 03:25:140 (3) like this? yeah I know it's crazy, but I just like the flow xD ok.. seem good although it's a bit hidden
   

The gap between Normal & Insane worries me, but it's for BAT to decide. Just brace your self if they told you to make an in between diff
Fun, that's all. Take my star

1. You could use the Korean titles for artist and song title

1. Honestly, I think this is easy enough to call it "Hard", and personally I don't think you need another diff as Normal is already "Normal +" territory.
2. You might want to consider lowering the hp drain by 1

Shulin wrote:

CAKE! It looks like a chocolate gateau to me.

[General]

1. You could use the Korean titles for artist and song title ok

[Easy]

00:09:779 (5) - Finish the end. fixed
00:21:268 (1) - Finish the start? ^
00:30:204 (4) - Don't really like how this note plays, maybe extend 00:28:928 (3) - to this point. ^
00:36:587 (1) - Well I kinda think this would be better placed to the right of 00:34:672 (3) - but you'd have to rearrange the pattern. yea.. but i'd have to rearrange.... >_>
03:33:597 (2) - This blanket could be better (something like this maybe?). You'd have to rearrange the end though. ok
03:50:193 (1) - Extend to 03:54:023 to have all diffs end in the same place? it sounds weird o_o

[Normal]


00:09:779 (1) - Maybe lower the volume to about 50% ok
00:31:481 (1) - Finish k
00:40:417 (3) - Whistle > Finish k
01:31:481 (1) - I kinda think the spinner is too sudden, Easy and Hard are better ways to map the rhythm imo. ok
02:11:534 (4) - End at 02:12:013 ? I think it plays better after 02:10:736 (3,4) - k
02:41:055 (1) - Remove return and do 02:42:172 (2,3) - rhythm as a returning slider? I only suggest this because I don't think the stack at 02:42:651 (3,4) - is very good. fixed

I suppose you could tidy up a few sliders but I felt it was too nazi to mention.

[Insane]

1. Honestly, I think this is easy enough to call it "Hard", and personally I don't think you need another diff as Normal is already "Normal +" territory.
2. You might want to consider lowering the hp drain by 1 ok

02:16:481 (1,2) - I don't really like this, its kinda hard to see, a slider might be better and more visible, or move the notes?
02:52:381 (6) - This jump is kinda big and sudden, you might want to consider placing it closer to 02:51:916 (5) - or in the same place as 02:51:451 (4) -
fixed
I don't have much else to say about this diff, it's really fun and the hitsounds are cool.

That's all from me, good luck getting it ranked!

Vahe- wrote:

need/want custom skin parts ?

Nymph wrote:

nice one you got here, nothing to complain about.

dkun wrote:

omg a kazumikos map! But uh, gonna have to pop this for a bad title.

"Why Are You Being Like This" is the proper title. (1 & 2)

Let me know when you've updated and I'll re-check.

dkun wrote:

Could you also capitalize the letters? @_____@

Andrea wrote:

02:26:374 (3,4,5,1,2) - This spacing seems to be really confusing, it's really easy to miss.

I'm talking about Hard difficulty.

Andrea wrote:

02:26:374 (3,4,5,1,2) - This spacing seems to be really confusing, it's really easy to miss.

I'm talking about Hard difficulty.

Andrea wrote:

02:26:374 (3,4,5,1,2) - This spacing seems to be really confusing, it's really easy to miss.

I'm talking about Hard difficulty.

Andrea wrote:

02:26:374 (3,4,5,1,2) - This spacing seems to be really confusing, it's really easy to miss.

I'm talking about Hard difficulty.