Reikosaka wrote:

i like but why using at this maps, if you want use this http://puu.sh/4B8Bw.jpg

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi there. Excuse me for little delay please ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

Hyper
00:31:558 (31558|4) - move to 5th column
00:31:701 (31701|2) - to 4th column
00:32:130 (32130|1) - to 5th column
00:32:415 (32415|6) - to 3rd column
00:32:844 (32844|4) - to 2nd column

Pattern Fixed at 00:31:844 for above 5 Mods

^Remodel this part please, it will be more comfortable to play
From 00:50:272 to 00:51:415 - remodel those "pairs" like >this< Fixed some patterns! Thank you!
Move this 00:53:510 (53510|1) to 00:53:510 (53510|0) and this 00:53:510 (53510|5) to 00:53:510 (53510|6) accordingly Disagree. Sorry!
00:53:701 (53701|3) - move to 2nd column Fixed!
01:26:034 (86034|3) - delete this and move 01:26:082 (86082|4) to 3rd column coz there should be only two notes according to melody
Disagree. Sorry!


Hope my mods will be useful.
I love the way you've hitsounded your map <3
Good luck :3/

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi there. Excuse me for little delay please ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:


7onather
01:25:987 (85987|0) - delete again and move 01:26:034 (86034|1) to 01:26:034 (86034|0)
From 00:42:653 to 00:43:987 pattern seems monotonously, I suggest to remodel it like >this<
00:55:701 (55701|4) - move to 3rd column
00:56:177 (56177|4) - ^
00:58:844 - add note here in 5th column
01:01:701 - remodel this part using >this< pattern
01:28:653 (88653|6) - move to 5th column
01:29:034 (89034|4) - ^
01:46:272 (106272|3) - move to 01:46:272 (106272|0)
Finally delete this note 02:04:272 (124272|5) and move 02:04:272 (124272|1) to 3rd column with adding Normal Finish hitsound

Hope my mods will be useful.
I love the way you've hitsounded your map <3
Good luck :3/

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hello Chocoliti, sorry for my late mod, i'm actually busy to many things later xD
Well, i'm want to say, your map is awesome ! hitsounds and patters also great, i'm a newbie modder, so... it will be hard to me for mod this map xD
You can accept or ignore these mods.

Beginner :
* 00:01:130(1130|1) - move this circle to 1st column Sorry!
* 00:15:987(15987|1) - move this circle to 5th column Fixed!
* 00:31:987(31987|2) - move this slider to 1st column Sorry!
* 00:44:558(44558|3) - move this circle to 5th column Fixed!
* 00:51:987(51987|2) - move this circle to 4th column Fixed!
* 00:52:558(52558|1,52558|4) - move those circles to 3rd column and 6th column Fixed!
* 01:44:558(104558|6) - move this circle to 6th column Fixed!
* 01:55:987(115987|4) - move this circle to 3rd column Sorry!

Normal :
* 00:04:272(4272|3) - move this circle to 2nd column Sorry!
* 00:25:701(25701|1) - move this circle to 3rd column Sorry!
* 00:32:844(32844|2) - move this circle to 5th column Fixed!
* 00:33:987(33987|4) - move this circle to 4th column Fixed!
* 00:34:272(34272|2) - move this circle to 5th column, and add circle in the first column. This is like a patterns in 00:35:415 - Fixed!
* 01:55:415(115415|2) - move this circle to 2nd column Fixed!

Hyper :
* 00:34:558(34558|5) - move this circle to 7th column Sorry!
* 00:48:558(48558|2) - move this circle to 4th column Fixed!
* 01:01:415(61415|1) - move this circle to 3rd column Fixed!
* 01:05:701(65701|4) - move this circle to 4th column Fixed!

And about the diff names .... if this diff level are based on Beatmania IIDX, isn't a usually diff names are Beginner < Standard < Hyper < Another ?
Hmm... isn't it better if the Normal diff names is changed become " Standard " or " Advanced " ? ( oh i'm just asking about this, sorry hehe xD )

Beatmania IIDX's difficulty: Beginner < Normal < Hyper < Another check plz XD


OMG since i'm heard this song, this song was so nice ! i even likely to re-play this song many times XDD ( yeah, i'm like to heard some classic and instrumentals )
How to get that hitsounds o.o ? i want a custom hitsounds like that but i can't find it

Hope my mod are useful, if you getting confused with my mods, you can pm me again about these mods in osu! ( in my userpage ) Good Luck !!

Remillion Cross wrote:

7onather :
* 00:03:415(3415|5) - move this circle tp 4th column
* 00:18:272 - hmm.. how about adding circle in 7th column ? i think it would be better
* 00:39:272(39272|0) - hmm.. should be better if this circle moved to 3rd column ?
* 00:41:558(41558|0) - move this circle to 3rd column

ExPew wrote:

ok light check ( sorry for late xd )

bms/iidx style note

-should change name mapper ur new nickname? Fixed!

[Beginner]

OD6
HP6 ( i think, this is the lowest rate, cannot more lower in mania)

00:42:272 - add 2 note (1 for finish)

All Fixed!

[Normal]

OD7
HP6

Fixed!

note : if 'difficulty' make ur diff normal to hard icon, change back ur current OD and HP

00:42:130 - add 1 note Fixed!
00:42:272 - add 2 note (1 for finish) Fixed!
01:02:844 to 01:11:701 - try focus on piano solo Sorry, I want to insert Break Time at here until Normal Difficulty. Players can't rest.

[Hyper]

OD8 Fixed!

00:39:987 to 00:44:558 - add note pleaseFixed! add note at 00:42:130 same as Beginner, Hyper

Simple_Star wrote:

Mod by request column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Begininer
00:02:844 - Add a Note Disagree. If add note at here, add note at 00:01:701 too.
00:43:415 - Add a LN Fixed!
01:13:130 - Add a LN Disagree. Too many long notes I think.
01:15:415 - Add a LN ^
01:17:701 - Add a LN ^
01:19:987 - Add a LN ^
01:31:987 - Add a Note Disagree. If add note at here, add note at 01:33:272 , 01:34:285 , 01:35:415 too imo.
01:43:415 (103415|3) - Move to 5 Fixed!
01:49:130 - Add a Note Sorry!
01:58:844 (118844|2) - Move to 1 Fixed!
01:59:987 (119987|4) - Move to 2 Fixed!
02:02:272 (122272|2) - Move to 6 Fixed!

Normal
HP7
00:10:272 - 00:17:987 - Many stairs,upset some can be better I think it is fine. Sorry!
00:11:130 - Add a Note Fixed!
00:11:415 - Add a Note ^
00:12:272 - Add a Note ^
00:12:558 - Add a Note ^
00:13:130 - Add a Note ^
00:13:701 - Add a Note ^
00:14:844 - Add a Note ^
00:15:701 - Add a Note ^
00:15:987 - Add a Note ^
00:16:844 - Add a Note ^
00:17:130 - Add a Note ^
00:43:415 - Add a LN ^
01:17:130 (77130|1) - Move to 6 ^
01:49:701 - Add a Note ^
01:50:558 - Add a Note ^
01:50:844 - Add a Note ^
01:51:701 - Add a Note ^
02:03:130 (123130|5) - Move to 3 ^

Hyper
HP8
00:22:130 - Remove 1 or 2 notes Fixed!
00:26:558 - Add a Note I placed notes by piano's rhythm Sorry!
00:27:701 - Add a Note ^
00:43:415 - Add a LN Fixed!
00:53:510 (53510|5,53510|1) - Move to 1 and 7 Sorry, I think this pattern is more fun
01:13:130 - Add a LN Fixed!
01:15:415 - Add a LN Fixed!

ExPew wrote:

ok light check ( sorry for late xd )

[7onather]

OD9 or 10
Hp8

00:43:487 (43487|0,43522|1,43558|0,43594|1,43630|2,43665|3) - this not feel bit too 'cruel' there means (combobreak) bcoz 1/8 (210BPM) imb4 fast , try change bit more easier?
02:03:320 (123320|4) - read down carefully v
dont like this note stick with 02:03:415 (123415|4,123510|4,123606|4,123701|4,123796|4,123891|4,123987|4) - , try rearrange this part.. for example like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1011445

Fixed by 7omoa

pattern is fine , i guess

Spy wrote:

Hello,mod by request~

[General]
Breaktime is not suggest for mania.
So I suggest your Beginner and Normal diff can put some notes from 01:02:844 to 01:10:844.

I think it is fine to put break time on Beginner and Normal diff at this song. Sorry!

[Beginner]
00:01:701 - Add a note
00:02:844 - Add a note
00:04:272 - Add a note
00:06:272 - Add a note
00:07:415 - Add a note
00:09:701 - Add a note
Beginner diff is made for who really play osu!mania at first time. So I think it is too hard if I add some notes.
00:26:272 - Add a long note to 00:26:844
00:26:844 (26844|3) - Remove
00:27:415 - Add a long note to 00:27:987
I think long note is not so necessary at here. Sorry!
00:37:701 (37701|5,38272|4,38844|3,39415|2) - Ctrl + H
Piano's pitch is going down.

[Normal]
00:01:130 (1130|3,1130|6,1701|2,1701|5,2272|1,2272|4,2844|0,2844|3) - All remove one
00:04:558 - Add a note
00:10:272 - Add a note
00:14:272 - Add a note
00:17:701 - Add a note
00:22:844 - Add a note
00:25:130 - Add a note
00:27:415 - Add a note
All fixed!
00:31:130 (31130|1,31415|2,31701|3) - Ctrl + H Sorry!
00:53:130 (53130|4,53130|1,53415|2,53415|5,53701|3,53701|6) - Here is 1/3,try to use long note ?
I think this is more fun than using lone notes sorry!
01:12:558 (72558|2,72844|3,73130|4) - Ctrl + H Sorry!
01:19:130 - Add a long note to 01:19:701 Sorry!
01:19:415 (79415|1) - Remove Sorry, I tried to placing notes by piano's rhythm.
01:20:272 - Add a note Fixed! I forgot it XD
01:45:130 (105130|0,105415|1,105701|2,105987|3,106272|2,106558|3,106844|4,107130|5,107415|6,107701|5,107987|4,108272|3,108558|2) - Ctrl + H Don't agree. Piano's pitch is going up at here.
01:52:272 - Add a note Fixed!
01:52:844 - Add a note Fixed!
02:03:415 (123415|6,123415|0,123701|6,123701|0,123987|0,123987|6) - Here is 1/3

[Hyper]
00:06:130 (6130|3) - Remove
00:07:130 (7130|0,7272|2) - Remove
00:07:701 (7701|6,7844|2) - Remove
Don't agree. Sorry!
00:10:368 (10368|3,10463|4) - Remove
00:10:653 (10653|4,10749|5,10939|4,11034|6) - Remove
00:11:511 (11511|3,11606|2,11796|2,11892|1,12082|2,12177|0) - Remove
00:14:939 (14939|1,15034|2,15225|3,15320|2,15510|3,15606|4) - Remove
00:16:082 (16082|5,16177|4,16368|3,16463|4,16653|3,16749|2) - Remove
00:27:701 - Add a note
Placed notes by piano's rhythm. Sorry!
00:39:987 - 00:43:415 - I suggest you can add more note
Wanted to make difference with 7onather difficulty at here by left this space. Sorry!
00:57:320 - Add a note
00:58:368 (58368|1,58653|2) - Remove
01:00:939 (60939|2) - Remove
Dont' agree. Sorry!

[7onather]
noob on modding,sorry

- R u m i a - wrote:

[Easy]
perfect diff for ez
[Normal]
nice.
[Hyper]
00:03:415 (3415|3) - move to 00:03:701 Fixed!
00:07:987 (7987|5,8272|3,8558|2) - remove Fixed some patterns at this part.

- R u m i a - wrote:

[7onather]
snap ur map tho
00:03:987 (3987|1,3987|2,3987|0,4272|3,4272|4,4272|2,4558|6,4558|4,4558|5) - make doubles instead?
00:05:130 (5130|4,5130|1,5130|0,5130|5,5130|6,5130|2) - too dense , 3 notes is enuff i guess
00:09:130 (9130|5,9130|1) - remove
00:08:558 (8558|0,8558|1,8701|2,8701|1,8844|2,8844|3,8987|4,8987|3) - like this? http://puu.sh/519vz.png
00:19:415 (19415|2,19415|4,19415|1,19415|6,19558|3,19558|0,19558|5,19630|2,19630|1,19630|6,19630|4,19701|5,19701|0,19701|3,19844|2,19844|6,19844|1,19844|4,19915|5,19915|0,19915|3,19987|1,19987|2,19987|4,19987|6,20130|0,20130|3,20130|5,20201|4,20201|1,20201|2,20201|6,20272|3,20272|0,20272|5,20415|6,20415|2,20415|4,20415|1,20487|5,20487|0,20487|3,20558|2,20558|6,20558|4,20558|1) - o.o make it lighter?
00:43:844 (43844|4,43844|2) - evil
00:46:844 (46844|2,46844|1,47415|2,47415|1,47701|1) - remove
00:53:272 (53272|0,53272|1,53344|0,53344|1,53415|4,53415|5,53558|5,53558|4,53630|4,53630|5) - like this? http://puu.sh/519GQ.png
02:03:415 (123415|5,123415|1,123558|5,123558|1,123630|5,123630|1,123701|5,123701|1,123844|1,123844|5,123915|5,123915|1,123987|5,123987|1) - remove?

ExPew wrote:

just passing by again

[Ex7ra]

i think add HP+1 = 9

more challenging draining

No Kudosu~

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hi ( again ) Chocoliti and 7omoa. As you say in pm, you want me to check again the new 2 diffs.
Here's my mod, you can accept or ignore my mods XD

Another :

*00:05:130 (5130|1,5130|2,5130|3) - move to 5th column, 6th column, and 7th column or move to 4th,5th,6th column
*00:26:558 - maybe add circle in 4th column
*00:26:987 (26987|1) - move to 5th column
*00:27:844 (27844|2) - move to 5th column
*00:33:987 - add a circle in 7th column ( seeing the pattern and song in 00:33:415 - )
*00:34:558 (34558|5) - move to 7th column
*00:35:415 (35415|6) - deleted ( seeing the pattern in 00:36:558 - )
*00:37:701 (37701|6) - move to 4th column
*00:49:130 (49130|3) - move to 6th column
*00:57:415 (57415|1) - move to 1st column
*01:06:844 (66844|1) - move to 4th column
*01:12:844 (72844|4) - move to 2nd column or 4th column
*01:13:130 (73130|2) - move to 4th column
*01:23:415 (83415|4) - move to 6th column
*01:23:987 (83987|5) - move to 7th column
*01:24:558 (84558|6) - move to 6th column
*01:26:344 (86344|4) - move to 3rd column
*01:29:130 (89130|2) - move to 7th column
*01:30:272 (90272|1) - move to 6th column ( for balancing pattern )
*01:31:415 (91415|2) - move to 1st column
*01:44:558 (104558|4) - move to 3rd column
*02:00:368 (120368|1) - move to 3rd column

Ex7ra :

*00:09:701 (9701|2) - move to 2nd column
*00:10:130 - too many notes in here, maybe deleting 2 circles in 00:10:130 (10130|1,10130|5) - will be good
*00:16:463 (16463|2) - maybe move this to 1st column
*00:16:749 (16749|5) - move this to 2nd column
*00:21:701 (21701|4) - move to 4th column
*00:27:058 - heard some sounds here, add circle in 4th column
*00:28:272 (28272|2) - move to 4th column
*00:28:201 - add a circle in 3rd column
*00:29:558 (29558|3) - move to 00:29:415 -
*00:32:772 (32772|3) - move to 6th column
*00:34:701 - add a circle in 6th column
*00:36:558 (36558|2) - move to 2nd column
*00:36:701 (36701|1) - move to 1st column
*00:42:130 (42130|4) - move to 6th column
*00:42:653 (42653|2,42749|3,42844|4,42939|5) - move to 4th,5th,6th,and 7th column
*00:53:701 (53701|0) - deleted
*00:54:558 - add circle in 3rd column
*00:56:177 (56177|6,56177|5) - move at same place in 00:56:272 -
*00:56:749 (56749|6,56749|5) - move at same place in 00:56:844 -
*00:56:844 (56844|6) - move to 1st column
*00:57:987 - move to 1st column

Nice pattern but i'm not sure about the ex7ra diff. I will come back again for further mods
Good luck for ranked !

ExPew wrote:

just passing by again

[Ex7ra]

i think add HP+1 = 9

more challenging draining

No Kudosu~

wogh, i'm can't even always pass this in HP8, if this diffs is HP9 .... i'm gonna be ded !

ExPew wrote:

just passing by again

[Ex7ra]

i think add HP+1 = 9

more challenging draining

No Kudosu~

Skalim wrote:

Hi, Mod by request, sorry for the late T.T so busy

Let´s go

Hyper

00:14:844 --- 00:16:844 - good pattern, but i suggest what use CTRL+H for make the patterns no really monotone
00:18:272 --- 00:18:884 - ^
00:53:130 --- 00:53:701 - here i detect a stream, remap this.
01:49:701 --- 01:51:701 - CTRL+H

All Fixed!

Another

01:38:915 - erase 1 note
01:39:130 - erase 1 note
01:39:487 - erase 2 notes
01:39:701 - erase 2 notes
01:40:058 - erase 2 notes
01:40:272 - erase 1 note

^ is not necessary enphasize these notes

Disagree. Sorry!


Extra

00:12:891 (3) - lose note, erase it Fixed!
00:23:501 (1) - Displaced note, move 1 down (1/12 Snap divisor) Woops, Fixed!
02:03:415 --- 02:03:987 - i think what this zone is "overmapped", try the zigzag pattern (suggerence) Sorry. Tried Beatmania IIDX's original pattern.

Sorry for the short mod, i am not good modding BMS map style, but if you want follow the mod, is you choise ^^.

17VA wrote:

[Another]

01:49:701 (109701|0) - 추가 (앞부분은 이 패턴에 3개가 있었으니까....)

01:50:844 (110844|3) - 추가

01:56:272 (116272|2,116272|4,116272|1) - 왼쪽으로....

All Fixed!

[Hyper]

01:24:558 (84558|6,84558|0) - 더블 단놋 패턴으로 대체하심이..

01:26:085 - 피아노 노트(음)이 필요해보입니다.

All Fixed!

woc2006 wrote:

Beginner HP:6 OD:7. Basically we don't allow any maps under OD 7 with only a few holds.

ljqandylee wrote:

Nice map~
[Ex7ra]
00:01:701 (1701|2) - Delete? bcz no whistle sound here, and it's more similar to 00:03:701
00:02:844 (2844|6) - ^
00:10:130 - Here has 3 notes, but 00:10:272 only has 2 notes, it's not suitable imo, bcz the latter sound is much stronger
00:18:558 (18558|5,18558|6,18558|1) - Delete one of them, suggest 6th
00:20:558 - Add a note at 7th
00:41:701 (41701|1,41844|3,41987|2) - All move 1 column left
00:42:415 (42415|6,42487|5,42558|6) - Why not also put 1/3?
00:44:082 (44082|5) - The sound here is on the 1/4 line, 00:44:058
01:00:368 (60368|0) - This note is strange, I suggest either move to 01:00:272, or 01:00:463 at 2nd
01:25:987 (85987|0) - unsnapped to the piano, better move to 01:26:022 (on 1/8 line)
01:26:022 (86022|1) - ^, move to 01:26:058
01:26:058 (86058|2) - ^, move to 01:26:130
01:26:272 (86272|6) - ^, move to 01:26:344
01:34:558 (94558|2,94630|3,94701|4) - Too simple here, expecially for the heavy sounds on 01:34:558 and 01:34:701
02:02:225 (122225|6) - No sounds to apply, 1/6 is overmapped

Discussed with 7omoa by in-game PM, All Fixed!

[Another]
00:01:701 (1701|0,1701|2,1701|3) - Reduce to 1~2 notes would be better imo
00:02:844 (2844|0,2844|4,2844|1) - ^
01:26:058 (86058|3,86094|4) - Both move 1/8 earlier (you can refer to my mod on Ex7ra)

All Fixed!

[Hyper]
00:35:701 - Add a note would be better imo
00:36:844 - ^
01:26:058 (86058|3,86094|4) - Both move 1/8 earlier (you can refer to my mod on Ex7ra)
01:45:987 (105987|0) - Delete, unlike 01:50:558, here doesn't have strong beat
01:46:272 (106272|4) - ^
01:47:129 (107129|0) - ^

All Fixed!

[Beginner]
01:46:272 (106272|2,106272|6) - Delete one of them, for the same reason with Hyper
01:49:130 - Add a note

All Fixed!