Metro Station - After the Fall · forum

EEeee

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-08-14T12:48:56+00:00

well I'm not gonna fix anything, cause yumiko can just do it for me, anyways, on that unrankable part, lets see, I really try my best to stay with the rules, and as I see it, it's really seeable on both ends, start of slider is seeable cause the close in on the circles, and the endpoints are . . . well seeable
anyways, ooops on the non-fixed break

Symbolic

519 posts

Joined June 2008

Symbolic 2009-08-14T13:25:13+00:00

[Normal]

01:24:64 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:25:06 (1) - ^
01:51:33 (4) - Shorten 1/4 to let it end on the last word of the sentence.
02:18:44 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:18:85 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:16:99 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:26 (1) - ^
00:38:09 (1) - ^
01:16:99 (1) - ^
01:59:19 (1,2,3) - This is really confusing because of the 1/2 jump and the 1/1 note with way smaller spacing in between it, change it.
02:31:88 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:32:09 (1) - ^
02:32:30 (1) - ^
02:32:508 (x) - Add a note here.

[EEeee's Hard]

Nothing here.

Nice song, is it a new Metro Station song?
Also, nice map.
Starred *

Yumiko

505 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

Yumiko 2009-08-16T00:32:50+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

fartownik

2,189 posts

Joined December 2008

fartownik 2009-08-18T18:31:02+00:00

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:25:474 (6) - Move a tick to left.
00:41:612 - Clap.

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:30:853 (6) - Clap on the beggining instead of ending of the slider.
00:41:405 (3) - Clap.
00:45:750 (5) - ^
00:47:198 (6) - ^
00:48:026 (1) - ^
01:39:543 - Add a note (I prefer on the center of this square).
01:45:129 (4) - Clap.
01:45:957 (5) - ^

[EEeee's Hard]

SPOILER

01:37:681 - Delete new combo.
01:38:508 - Add new combo.

~Starry

mrtn

osu! Alumni

1,065 posts

Joined March 2008

mrtn 2009-08-20T09:01:14+00:00

[normal]
there are many useless timing sections in this difficulty, remove them please.
01:24:97 - what's the point of this slowdown?

[hard]
the chorus notes sound really bad imo. It's like a bad 1/2 beat spam to me. Not matching the rhythm or vocals...
most 1/4s feel really out of place. Like you made them up yourself in really bad places...
most slowdowns feel really out of place...
01:52:57 (1,2,3) - really weird jump, definitely not allowed.
01:59:19 (1,2,3) - ^

[EEeee's hard]
01:22:78 (8) - new combo

starred

kino77

909 posts

Joined March 2009

kino77 2009-08-24T03:37:43+00:00

Sorry for the late mod...

Nice song and map~ n__n
I like hitsound as EEeee's Hard~

[normal]
00:26:51(1)-end here 00:27:54?
00:30:85(2)-clap?
00:33:96(3)-^
00:39:54(2)-remove clap?
00:39:75(3)-clap?
00:39:96(4)-^
00:47:20(1)-^
00:50:51(2)-^

[Hard]
Maybe coz the too many spin,I feel it more difficult than EEeee's hard...
Same hitsound issues~
01:52:57(1,1,2)-confusing...I missed here...
01:59:19(1,1,2)-^

[EEeee's hard]
I like this diff~
01:54:44(5)-spacing?
Great~Nothing else~

Star~

Card N'FoRcE

osu! Alumni

4,058 posts

Here since the beginning

Card N'FoRcE 2009-08-26T12:52:54+00:00

- Normal:
02:42:64 (2,3) - ho da ridire solo per lo spacing tra queste due.
Cmq, questa sarebbe più una "hard" che una normal D:

- Hard:
00:20:50 (4) - nuova combo?
02:04:78 (6) - nazi scemo, un quadretto più in alto (lo ho notato non so come xD)
Potresti tranquillamente chiamarla "Insane" D:

- EEeee's Hard:
~0:54:00 - Please disable Kiai here. It's ugly to see it disappear when the break ends.
01:54:23 (4,5) - why the sudden change? O.o
More like "Insane" than hard D:

Cool maps, i enjoyed them ^^

Star'd

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-08-29T18:20:53+00:00

Offset = 434

Normal
looks normal enough, except look at Hards comment on kiai times

02:33:020 kiai time starts bad T_T

hard
00:17:61 (8,9,10) - new combo all of these
00:20:50 (4) - New combo this one
01:19:46 (2,3,4) - New combo to each on of these

ur Kiai times seems a bit off, maybe adjust ur green lines, they all look a bit off, also I think u have kiai times when the guy Screams "AFTER THE FALL!!" move the kiai time to start when the guys says After, not Fall, idk place it on a right note T_T
this one starts really bad 02:35:721

kk here's my diff again, it's not as good as urs T_T

Download: Metro Station - After the Fall (Yumiko) [EEeee's Hard].osu

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2009-09-23T13:52:13+00:00

Normal:

it's ok

Hard:

nice D:

EEeee:

00:26:916 (6) = new combo
00:30:227 (12) = ^
00:40:158 (9) = ^
01:39:744 (9) = ^
01:57:537 (10) = ^
02:01:261 (8) = ^
02:06:640 (6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11) = nooo D:
02:09:951 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) = oh nooooo D:

starred

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-09-28T13:06:59+00:00

did some new combos

but 02:06:640 (6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11) = nooo D:
02:09:951 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) = oh nooooo D:

uh uh those are allowed and stays :3

Download: Metro Station - After the Fall (Yumiko) [EEeee's Hard].osu

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-10-12T21:01:15+00:00

First of all, yumiko plz move this to pending ^^ i'm gonna try and ask around, i want this ranked

Overall
Fix breaks in all diffs, except mine ^^, they are slightly off

ztrot

osu! Alumni

4,378 posts

Joined February 2008

ztrot 2009-10-15T18:45:25+00:00

I'd love to mod this but the link to the map is broken plz resubmit the map

ztrot

osu! Alumni

4,378 posts

Joined February 2008

ztrot 2009-10-15T19:04:24+00:00

add an easy plz