1. 00:08:059 (1) - x:292 y:160
2. 00:08:059 (1) - x:304 y:152 edit: 01:08:856 (3) - x:304 y:152 sry i was wrong link
3. 01:19:069 (3) - x:204 y:196 is better :3 edit: 01:19:069 (3) - move up a little on tail > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1004969

1. 00:06:941 (1) - try this > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1004938

[general]

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  what the preview time!!~ = [ ] =
  set preview time at 1st kiai
  
  i like hitsound of this map!!~

[Easy]

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  look like normal ;w;
  why easy style don't same insane Orz
  nice~i

[Normal]

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  you should avoid to using 1/4 beat
  00:30:718 (3) - hard for new player
  
  try this

  
  01:16:356 (1,2,1) - this flow but not pretty , try some pattern
  01:24:973 (1) - this all don't have sound in song
  not bad for normal

[Hard]

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  not thing~
  01:22:899 (3,4) - i like this pattern

[Insane]

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  so... good job for you <3
  but you need to control distance of note for balance more~

• [General]

1. Good hitsounding :3/
2. Remove the unused files pls you have some old's in here:
   

• [Easy]

1. 00:05:665 (1,2) - Uuhm yea nazi maybe center this? like --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1009490 will look neater. 00:05:665 (1) - 180|284 , 00:06:941 (2) - 256|105
2. 00:12:048 (2) - ^ here too you can center it without problems will look neater
3. 00:13:644 (1) - Remove whistle o-o, only place where you have it at second white tick in that section
4. 00:23:218 (6) - Make a curve upwards will flow better
5. 00:26:410 (1,2) - Blanket is off move end point more curve ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1009496
6. 00:36:303 (1,2) - Blanket here off too move end point a bit up
7. 00:40:133 (1) - Uuh remove NC for consistency with your NC pattern o-o
8. 00:46:516 (1,1) - Stack with each other than DS the next notes
9. 00:56:729 (1) - Remove NC here for consistency with your NC pattern
10. 01:06:941 (3,4) - Try to do it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1009609 it flows alot better
11. 01:16:516 (1) - Center this ? (Move to 256|276)

• [Normal]

1. 00:01:835 (4,5) - Blanket is off fix it ---> http://puu.sh/4Dd7O/1a2170af61.jpg
2. 00:09:335 (1,2) - This might be too hard maybe just change it to a 1/1 slider
3. 00:55:452 (1,2,3) - Make it like this? flows a lot better http://puu.sh/4DdwQ/f550e9be25.jpg Coordinates are:
   
   Coordinates

   00:55:452 (1) - 156|84
   00:55:771 (2) - 244|132
   00:56:410 (3) - 440|144
4. 00:59:282 (3) - Make curve go down instead is better imo http://puu.sh/4DdDe/7187db8c1a.jpg
5. 01:22:261 (1) - move end a little bit up

• [Hard]

1. 00:08:856 (3,4) - do it like this ---> http://puu.sh/4DdUx/709cd34528.jpg looks cleaner (3) at 397|271 and (4) stack with 00:08:059 (5) -
2. 00:10:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bit awkward do it like this?
   
3. 00:25:293 (3,4) - Try to stack with 00:24:016 (3,4) - to make it cleaner
4. 00:30:559 (1) - imo this screams for a jump really so put a jump here might be even better if you change it to two circles
5. 00:51:782 (2) - This overlap is bad I think you should change the jumps pattern
6. 01:16:995 (3) - Move it little down
7. 01:20:505 (4,1) - Fix blanket

• [Insane]

1. 00:26:410 (2,3,4,5,6) - Tidy this a bit up looks a bit messy atm
2. 00:13:165 (6,4) - Stack (4) with (6)
3. 00:19:388 (1) - NC music is different
4. 01:16:516 (3,4) - Make them the same
5. 01:19:707 (1) - remove NC lol o-o

• Please remove all *.osu.old files
  For all diffs ,From 00:46:516 -to01:11:090 (2),I think soft custom2’ clap is much more suitable than S;C1.S;C1’s clap is too soft and when playing this map ,I can’t feel comfortable
  Please set preview time

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  00:05:186 –add note.If you hear closely you will hear a drum here and add a note will be more smooth imo
  00:07:261 (2,3,4) –the spacing is small imo,try enlarging it?
  00:08:059 (1) –put downbeat at sliderend is a little strange,I suggest you change a rhythm.This also breaks the NC,you can add nc at downbeat
  00:16:356 –This break is not good imo,it breaks the rhythm and flow
  00:18:750 (2) –Try using stream here ,because all is 1/2and 1/1rhtthm is a little boring
  00:26:729 (4,5) –enlarge the spacing?
  00:27:207 (7) –same suggestion as above,downbeat at sliderend
  00:29:920 (4) –add nc to be more readable
  00:31:197 –from here,I suggest you use more 1/1slider and break because rhythm is less than others.For example http://puu.sh/4Db7f.jpg
  00:37:739 (7) –add nc?
  00:51:622 (1,2) –removing finish is better imo.Because this two is not stronger than00:52:101 (1,2) –
  00:56:410 (5) –chanege this two a 1/2 and a note ,the same reason as above
  01:01:835 (1) –add a finish at sliderhead
  01:02:473 (3) –remove this note,A break here feels better imo
  01:07:739 (4,5) –Crtl+G?slider fit the vocal better than note
  01:13:324 (7) –add nc
  01:13:404 (1) –add some hitsound to the spinner?
  01:15:878 -40% volume is too small,try 50%or more?
  01:15:878 (1) –change whistle to finish?
  01:20:027 (1) –remove nc

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  AR7 fits better than AR8,I play with both ar7 and ar8 btw
  00:11:729 (2) –the rhythm should be consist with00:14:441 (3) -.
  00:12:367 (4) –this slider miss a vocal at00:12:527 -.
  I guess you follow drums at00:10:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -,.but you follow vocal at00:13:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -.So you should remake this part imo
  00:14:441 (3,4) –spacing is too small to read for a hard diff
  00:20:505 (5) –shorten this slider to black tick00:20:665 -.There is an instrument at here not at 00:20:824 –
  00:23:378 (1) –please follow drum here ,The vocal is not strong to be follow,so00:23:378 (1,2) –ctrl+G
  00:31:835 (2) –Clap is better than whistle imo,Maybe you can make the diff is consistent with insane
  00:27:048 (4) –same issus,Don’t put downbeat at sliderend it’s strange
  00:29:601 (3,4,5,6) –rhythm suggestions http://puu.sh/4DccM.jpg
  00:35:505 (4) –This rhythm is wrong.. 00:35:665 –There is a clear drum at here,and you ignore it.So I suggest 00:35:505 (4,5) – CTRL+G,don’t follow vocals here.and add clap at00:35:665
  00:42:048 (2) –use clap not whistle at sliderhead
  00:47:473 (4,1) –This looks not beautiful,please see this: http://puu.sh/4DclX.jpg
  00:50:984 (3,1,2) –These spacing is a trap.It’s very hard to be read because the sudden big spacing and overlap.I don’t recommend you use jump here
  00:52:101 (1,2) -^
  00:56:410 (1) –Why always put downbeat at sliderend
  01:10:612 (4,1) –overlap is not beautiful ,refer to this: http://puu.sh/4Dcvv.jpg
  01:12:527 (3) –add a finish at sliderend if you feel noisy try reducing the volume

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  OD+1 AR+1 to balance the different
  00:07:420 (5) –remove this?I think this note is no need
  00:17:793 (5,6) –Ctrl+G
  00:52:580 –delete Inherit section
  00:56:729 (1) –remove nc
  01:01:835 (1) -^?
  01:09:495 (1) -^
  01:05:984 (2,4) –The ovelap is not good imo

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  00:41:410 (1,2) –make a blanket?
  01:23:537 (1,2,3) –rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/4DcZL.jpg

1. 00:02:473 (5) - Blanket this by using the slider circle from (4)
   
   Before

   
   After

   

1. 00:51:782 (2,1) - I personally think you should space these apart more. Even though you have used a new combo here, it still might be confusing for some players who think it is a 1/2 note.
2. 00:54:176 (1) - Move the middle point of the slider down one grid (level 4) to make a perfect blanket :3
3. 01:02:314 (3) - Same with this one, except move it up instead.
   
   Like this

   
4. Really nice diff, but lots of potential blankets. I didn't point all of them out otherwise I feel you'll start to hate me >~<

1. 00:15:559 (5,6) - I think this is a strange place to put a jump. In my opinion a jump would work so much better if was between 00:15:718 (6,1) - for the new measure.
   
   Something like this works better for me

   
2. 01:01:356 (4,5) - This is a strange angle and feels a bit awkward to play for me.
   
   hnggg...

   
   I suggest move 01:01:516 (5) more to the left and rotate it clockwise a bit, so that it flows in more of a curve.
   
   This works quite well

   
3. 01:06:622 (5,1) - Blanket please
4. 01:19:548 (4) - Add new combo to signify that there is a 1/1 gap.
5. 01:20:027 (1) - Remove new combo to signify there isn't a 1/1 gap.
6. 01:23:218 (6,1) - Umm, you can stack these. You have for these 01:23:537 (1,2,1,2).