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150P - Makeinu Shijou Shugi

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jieusieu
460 posts
Joined March 2011
jieusieu
[Normal]
01:10:073 (3,4) - hmm.. it can change to more beatiful
SPOILER

[Koinuri's Hard]
consistent spacing plz, at least in hard diff

00:22:673 (5,6) - up 2 grid (grid 4)
00:25:373 (7) - remove NC, and add 00:25:073 (6) -
00:47:873 (1) - remove NC
00:49:673 (7) - add NC
01:36:773 (6,7,1) - this spacing... i suggest fix it like this
SPOILER
01:59:573 (3,4) - confusing 01:59:573 (3,4) - with 02:00:173 (5,6) - , it needs spacing 0.7
SPOILER
02:08:873 (1) - this is unreadable xP like this?
SPOILER

[Insane]
your style is too diffrent to me ;-; so i can't mod.. sorry


sorry about my poor mod. but gl for ranked!
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
"jieusieu"
[Normal]
01:10:073 (3,4) - hmm.. it can change to more beatiful sure
[Insane]
your style is too diffrent to me ;-; so i can't mod.. sorry :P


sorry about my poor mod. but gl for ranked!

thanks for the mod!
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Mod coming soon owo
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
:D
[ Yuki ]_old
132 posts
Joined October 2012
[ Yuki ]_old
Hello~ M4M

[Easy]
00:00:473 (1) - ctrl+H and x:72,y:320 <<Orientation
00:16:073 (1) - NC Deletion <<The feeling of the song
00:17:273 (2) - NC <<^
00:29:873 (1) - finish the head
01:28:673 (1) - x:88,y:40 <<Distance
02:32:273 (2) - Deletion and 02:32:123 - ~ 02:32:273 - Slide Add
02:48:473 (1) - x:164,y:280 <<Distance 1.0x
02:58:673 (1) - finish add

[Normal]
01:10:673 (4) - ctrl+J and x:144,y:188

[Koinuri's Hard]
00:42:473 (1) - tune 6' and x:163,y:220
00:55:073 (4) - x:168,y:144
00:57:173 (2) - x:272,y:152 <<00:57:923 (4) - head overlap
01:15:998 - timeing point Deletion
01:16:073 - ^
01:16:148 - ^
01:30:473 (1,3) - tune -5' and x:232,y:216 <<01:29:573 (4) - head overlap
02:08:723 (7) - x:413,y:329 <<02:08:873 (1) - on not recommend
02:54:473 (1) - x:192,y:168 <<02:53:273 (1) - head overlap
02:53:273 (1) - x:272,y:200 <<02:54:023 (2) - head overlap
03:00:398 - timeing point Deletion
03:00:473 - ^
03:00:548 - ^

[Insane]
BPM200-Slider Velocity 2.00 :o

02:27:023 (7) - NC
02:54:473 (5) - NC <02:14:873 (1) - and 01:10:073 (1) - same
03:00:173 (4,5,6,7,8) - x:256,y:128 <down feel


Good song GL :D
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
thanks! I'll check once I have time after class

"Yuki"
Hello~ M4M

[Easy]
00:00:473 (1) - ctrl+H and x:72,y:320 <<Orientation
00:16:073 (1) - NC Deletion <<The feeling of the song
00:17:273 (2) - NC <<^
00:29:873 (1) - finish the head
01:28:673 (1) - x:88,y:40 <<Distance
02:32:273 (2) - Deletion and 02:32:123 - ~ 02:32:273 - Slide Add
02:48:473 (1) - x:164,y:280 <<Distance 1.0x
02:58:673 (1) - finish add

[Normal]
01:10:673 (4) - ctrl+J and x:144,y:188

[Insane]
BPM200-Slider Velocity 2.00 :o >:3

02:27:023 (7) - NC only one I didn't do, never did this nc anywhere else
02:54:473 (5) - NC <02:14:873 (1) - and 01:10:073 (1) - same
03:00:173 (4,5,6,7,8) - x:256,y:128 <down feel


Good song GL :D

thanks for the mod!
Last edited by captin1 , edited 3 times in total.
[ Yuki ]_old
132 posts
Joined October 2012
[ Yuki ]_old

captin1 wrote:

thanks! I'll check once I have time after class
ok~ :D
_koinuri
451 posts
Joined June 2012
_koinuri

jieusieu wrote:

[Koinuri's Hard]
consistent spacing plz, at least in hard diff Going to try fixing the spacing as much as I can >.<

00:22:673 (5,6) - up 2 grid (grid 4)
00:25:373 (7) - remove NC, and add 00:25:073 (6) -
00:47:873 (1) - remove NC
00:49:673 (7) - add NC
01:36:773 (6,7,1) - this spacing... i suggest fix it like this
SPOILER
01:59:573 (3,4) - confusing 01:59:573 (3,4) - with 02:00:173 (5,6) - , it needs spacing 0.7
SPOILER
02:08:873 (1) - this is unreadable xP like this? fixed in a different way
SPOILER

[ Yuki ] wrote:

[Koinuri's Hard]
00:42:473 (1) - tune 6' and x:163,y:220
00:55:073 (4) - x:168,y:144
00:57:173 (2) - x:272,y:152 <<00:57:923 (4) - head overlap
01:15:998 - timeing point Deletion
01:16:073 - ^
01:16:148 - ^
01:30:473 (1,3) - tune -5' and x:232,y:216 <<01:29:573 (4) - head overlap
02:08:723 (7) - x:413,y:329 <<02:08:873 (1) - on not recommend
02:54:473 (1) - x:192,y:168 <<02:53:273 (1) - head overlap
02:53:273 (1) - x:272,y:200 <<02:54:023 (2) - head overlap
03:00:398 - timeing point Deletion
03:00:473 - ^
03:00:548 - ^
Fixed everything, thanks for modding!
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Tari
I sailed the 4 seas!
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
www irc shitting on easy and normal

SPOILER
2013-11-02 01:47 Tari: easy
2013-11-02 01:47 Tari: 00:19:673 (1) - 
2013-11-02 01:47 Tari: move
2013-11-02 01:47 Tari: to
2013-11-02 01:47 Tari: http://puu.sh/56crD.jpg
2013-11-02 01:47 captin1: kk
2013-11-02 01:48 Tari: 00:09:173 (2,3) - Use sliders
2013-11-02 01:48 Tari: 1/4th rhythm in easy should be fairly simple
2013-11-02 01:48 Tari: you can use circles later
2013-11-02 01:48 Tari: 00:18:773 (2,3) - Same
2013-11-02 01:50 Tari: 00:31:673 (3) - Don't overlap , try this, where stacking occurs http://puu.sh/56jEQ.jpg
2013-11-02 01:50 Tari: Oh yeah
2013-11-02 01:50 Tari: note 2 should be placed in front of previous slider
2013-11-02 01:50 Tari: because the previous slider's direction focuses on going that direction
2013-11-02 01:50 captin1: got a nice view of your friends list there, but not of the map
2013-11-02 01:50 captin1: LOL
2013-11-02 01:51 Tari: 00:34:973 (4,1) - Good example of place to start using 1/4th circles
2013-11-02 01:51 captin1: kk
2013-11-02 01:52 captin1: but can I get that overlap example for real this time?
2013-11-02 01:53 Tari: 00:49:673 (4) -  Move to http://puu.sh/56jJS.jpg because the direction of the slider is slightky titled
2013-11-02 01:53 Tari: your circle should be slightly titled to match that
2013-11-02 01:53 Tari: yeah
2013-11-02 01:53 Tari: I gave you
2013-11-02 01:53 Tari: 00:31:673 (3) - 
2013-11-02 01:53 captin1: click the link you gave me
2013-11-02 01:53 Tari: overlaps
2013-11-02 01:53 Tari: oh faaaail
2013-11-02 01:53 captin1: :P
2013-11-02 01:53 Tari: you already know like
2013-11-02 01:54 Tari: 1/2 these people
2013-11-02 01:54 captin1: only one I'm mutual with is uws
2013-11-02 01:54 captin1: lol
2013-11-02 01:54 Tari: heeeere
2013-11-02 01:54 Tari: http://puu.sh/56jMS.jpg
2013-11-02 01:55 captin1: kk cool
2013-11-02 01:55 Tari: 00:53:273 (2) - Don't do these sliders
2013-11-02 01:55 Tari: they look awful.
2013-11-02 01:55 captin1: lol k
2013-11-02 01:56 Tari: 01:01:673 (1) - Bend it less
2013-11-02 01:56 Tari: and maybe I won't say these sliders look ugly too
2013-11-02 01:59 Tari: 01:07:673 (3,1) - Change these sliders into this : http://puu.sh/56jWM.jpg
2013-11-02 01:59 Tari: Nice clean placement
2013-11-02 01:59 Tari: and blanket too
2013-11-02 01:59 Tari: 01:10:973 (3) - Probably not neccessary
2013-11-02 01:59 Tari: That slider end before
2013-11-02 01:59 Tari: signals a little break
2013-11-02 01:59 captin1: kk
2013-11-02 02:00 Tari: to start that loong vocal
2013-11-02 02:00 captin1: kk
2013-11-02 02:00 Tari: 01:32:873 (1,2,3) - needs some repositioning.
2013-11-02 02:01 Tari: 01:34:973 (4) - Feels forced.
2013-11-02 02:01 captin1: hm
2013-11-02 02:02 Tari: just don't make 4 be a blanket slider
2013-11-02 02:02 Tari: :D
2013-11-02 02:02 captin1: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074519 this better?
2013-11-02 02:03 Tari: yeaaah
2013-11-02 02:03 captin1: cool
2013-11-02 02:03 Tari: 02:00:473 (3) - Don't do hard curve
2013-11-02 02:03 Tari: it disrupts the design,
2013-11-02 02:03 Tari: or the goal
2013-11-02 02:03 captin1: k
2013-11-02 02:03 Tari: of this slider
2013-11-02 02:04 captin1: ez fix lol, just killed the anchor
2013-11-02 02:04 Tari: cause you blanketed in a similar part before
2013-11-02 02:04 captin1: yea
2013-11-02 02:04 Tari: 02:02:273 (2) - no
2013-11-02 02:04 captin1: ;;
2013-11-02 02:04 Tari: 02:05:273 (2) - Straight slider
2013-11-02 02:04 Tari: no purpose for being curved.
2013-11-02 02:05 Tari: 02:06:473 (1) - no
2013-11-02 02:05 Tari: 02:11:873 (2) - Move this more to the right,
2013-11-02 02:05 Tari: so this whole combo curves pretttyyy
2013-11-02 02:06 Tari: 02:15:773 (3) - remove.
2013-11-02 02:06 captin1: yep
2013-11-02 02:06 Tari: consistent to previous change
2013-11-02 02:06 captin1: ya
2013-11-02 02:07 Tari: 02:24:473 (2) - no
2013-11-02 02:07 Tari: 02:43:673 (1) - no
2013-11-02 02:08 Tari: 02:48:473 (1) - no
2013-11-02 02:08 Tari: 02:50:873 (1) - to this http://puu.sh/56kgR.jpg
2013-11-02 02:09 Tari: 02:53:273 (1) - Move to the right so people don't tell you to blanket
2013-11-02 02:09 Tari: lol
2013-11-02 02:09 Tari: that's all!
2013-11-02 02:09 Tari: see how my changes make the map better as a whole
2013-11-02 02:09 Tari: XD
2013-11-02 02:09 captin1: ye
2013-11-03 16:50 captin1: hey, wanna rip up my normal or somethin? :3
2013-11-03 16:50 Tari: uhmm
2013-11-03 16:50 captin1: lol
2013-11-03 16:50 Tari: ok
2013-11-03 16:50 Tari: 1 sec
2013-11-03 16:50 captin1: kk
2013-11-03 16:53 Tari: 00:04:373 (3,4,5) - Change to reverse arrow slider
2013-11-03 16:53 captin1: :< okay
2013-11-03 16:54 Tari: 00:03:473 (2) - Reverse red dot in end
2013-11-03 16:54 captin1: I killed that slider and made it 3 point
2013-11-03 16:55 captin1: cause it was originally designed to go to that symmetry pattern more but now that it's gone not really needed
2013-11-03 16:56 Tari: 00:11:123 (3) - Move to 292 152
2013-11-03 16:56 Tari: 00:10:823 (2) - Fix spacing of this
2013-11-03 16:57 captin1: and then spacing 3-4?
2013-11-03 16:57 Tari: yes
2013-11-03 16:58 Tari: 00:23:273 (1) - Curve more
2013-11-03 16:58 Tari: 00:24:323 (2) - Move this same spot as 00:21:923 (2) - 
2013-11-03 16:59 Tari: once you curve it
2013-11-03 16:59 Tari: 00:25:073 (3) - Fix spacing
2013-11-03 16:59 Tari: 00:25:673 (1) - Same.
2013-11-03 17:00 Tari: 00:28:073 (1,2) - Move up
2013-11-03 17:00 Tari: 00:29:273 (3) - The end of the slider should be at the same spot as  00:27:473 (3) - 
2013-11-03 17:00 Tari: oh the top one
2013-11-03 17:00 Tari: try to do it
2013-11-03 17:01 Tari: 00:26:723 (2,3) - You can try to do the above suggestions
2013-11-03 17:01 Tari: by moving that
2013-11-03 17:01 Tari: 00:26:723 (2,3) - 
2013-11-03 17:01 Tari: to the right
2013-11-03 17:02 Tari: your mapping is soo messy at times
2013-11-03 17:02 captin1: lol yeah...
2013-11-03 17:10 captin1: k I think I futzed with that part enough, updated it if you want to see
2013-11-03 17:31 Tari: daaang
2013-11-03 17:31 Tari: well
2013-11-03 17:31 Tari: can you fix the other stacking erros
2013-11-03 17:31 Tari: erros
2013-11-03 17:31 captin1: yeah

much love <3

going to be doing some serious work on normal the next couple days
Last edited by captin1 , edited 1 time in total.
[Akito]
419 posts
Joined April 2013
[Akito]
Heyn :3

[Easy Difficult]
00:29:873 (1) - Add Finish at Head
01:54:473 (4) - Delete it, and put Start from Spinner here !
Varius Distance Snap ! Please turn on Distance Snap ._.

[Normal Difficult]
AR - 1
00:29:273 (3) - Add Finish at Tail of Slider
Again a bit Various Distance Snap q.q ... Maybe Re-position Easy & Normal diff with Turning Distance snap on :c

[Hard Difficult]
HP Drain +1

00:00:473 (1,2,3,4) - These Overlap look quiet Ugly ... q.q
01:25:673 (1) - Turn Kiai-Time off ?
01:38:573 - Add Note
02:29:873 (3,4,5,6,7) - Wrong Spacing..
02:41:273 (1) - Add Finish at Head of Slider
02:42:023 (3) - Ugly Overlap
02:46:973 (4) - ^
03:00:473 - Kiai Time ? for what ...

[Insane Difficult]
Overall Difficult +1
HP Drain +1
01:29:123 (8) - New Combo
01:39:473 (11) - ^
01:49:673 (1) - Copy - Paste & Mirrored ... Please be more imaginative.
02:41:273 (1) - Add Finish at Head of Slider

Your Map need more Work ._. But its Nice :3 !
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
"Xebo"
Heyn :3

[Easy Difficult]
00:29:873 (1) - Add Finish at Head no thanks, the finish is at the slider end, this is a pick-up note
01:54:473 (4) - Delete it, and put Start from Spinner here ! I would like to accent this note more, so having a click here is more important to me than starting the spinner where it may sound
Varius Distance Snap ! Please turn on Distance Snap ._. most of the distance snap issue is + or - .02, which is insignificant at this slider velocity, however I did adjust a couple spots

[Normal Difficult]
AR - 1 I'll keep this ar for now, I think it gives the map a little more forward motion, however if I get more opinions on this I will consider the change
00:29:273 (3) - Add Finish at Tail of Slider again, this is a pick-up note, and there is no finish sound here
Again a bit Various Distance Snap q.q ... Maybe Re-position Easy & Normal diff with Turning Distance snap on :c it's not like I mapped with it off, there's just very very slight errors that occur with grid snap, they're really not a big deal

[Insane Difficult]
Overall Difficult +1
HP Drain +1 neither done, my settings are like this intentionally
01:29:123 (8) - New Combo whoops yeah small consistency issue, thanks
01:39:473 (11) - ^
01:49:673 (1) - Copy - Paste & Mirrored ... Please be more imaginative. why do I need to be? it gets my point across well, which is mimicking the directional sound of the vocals switching between left and right ear. it actually makes more sense for them to all be the same, since it's the same vocal line over and over
02:41:273 (1) - Add Finish at Head of Slider okay

Your Map need more Work ._. But its Nice :3 !

thanks for the mod
_koinuri
451 posts
Joined June 2012
_koinuri

Xebo wrote:

[Hard Difficult]
HP Drain +1 Before I make the difficulty, I looked at many Hard difficulties I like, and majority of Hard seemed like HP5 so.. I also prefer HPs to be a bit more forgiving

00:00:473 (1,2,3,4) - These Overlap look quiet Ugly ... q.q I like it >.>, will keep
01:25:673 (1) - Turn Kiai-Time off ? fixed
01:38:573 - Add Note I want to keep consistency with the rest of the song, and I think it fits better without it
02:29:873 (3,4,5,6,7) - Wrong Spacing.. I hope the new one isn't too difficult
02:41:273 (1) - Add Finish at Head of Slider It doesn't sound right to me... I added a finish at the end of spinner though
02:42:023 (3) - Ugly Overlap Moved the circle a bit
02:46:973 (4) - ^ I personally find that little back and forth pattern cool so I'll keep it. Might change if people have problem reading it though
03:00:473 - Kiai Time ? for what ... fixed
Thanks for modding!

The map
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TitleUnicode:負け犬至上主義
Artist:150P
ArtistUnicode:150P
Creator:captin1
Version:Koinuri's Hard
Source:
Tags:IA vocaloid vocaloid3 bookmark demise project suzumu gibson kara saine yuuki iwakura underdog supremacist Koinuri Loli Nyanderson-Kun
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I'm not sure if I did that right..
Gloria Guard
2,273 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
Sorry, I am a little busy ;w;..

11/6 This is map, I'll mod soon.
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
yay! :D
ichivictus
ichivictus
[Normal]
In response to a previous mod, I like the AR as it is. :D

02:31:673 (1,2) - Consider this rhythm http://i.imgur.com/EpnBCEd.png

[Hard]
00:06:773 (2,1) - Overlap here looks kindof ugly. It's okay I guess, but it was noticeable that's all.
00:10:523 (3,1) - ^
00:36:323 (4,6) - ^
01:05:123 (3,5) - ^

00:14:273 (3) - Consider ctrl+g
There's a few other sliders you might be able to do that too with the same small slider blanketing long slider technique.

00:26:273 (2) - Spacing between (1) and (3) is different and noticeable when playing.

01:47:723 (2,3) - blanket 3 better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1079276

02:02:273 (3,4) - Make slider end of 4 exactly on slider head of 3. A bit is poking out.

02:04:223 (2,3) - Blanket better

02:13:073 (5) - One grid lower

[Insane]
02:55:673 - Crazy idea I just had,. Consider having a slider at .125x SV (that's -800 in notepad) from that time to 02:57:473 - for sweet dramatic effect instead of a spinner.

Good mapset ~star :)
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
"ichivictus"
[Normal]
In response to a previous mod, I like the AR as it is. :D

02:31:673 (1,2) - Consider this rhythm http://i.imgur.com/EpnBCEd.png cool, thanks

[Insane]
02:55:673 - Crazy idea I just had,. Consider having a slider at .125x SV (that's -800 in notepad) from that time to 02:57:473 - for sweet dramatic effect instead of a spinner. LOL nty, for consistency and less "wtfslider" mods

Good mapset ~star :)

thanks for the mod and star!
_koinuri
451 posts
Joined June 2012
_koinuri

ichivictus wrote:

[Hard]
00:06:773 (2,1) - Overlap here looks kindof ugly. It's okay I guess, but it was noticeable that's all.
00:10:523 (3,1) - ^
00:36:323 (4,6) - ^
01:05:123 (3,5) - ^

^ Fixed everything

00:14:273 (3) - Consider ctrl+g
There's a few other sliders you might be able to do that too with the same small slider blanketing long slider technique. I couldn't find any sliders I could ctrl+g without making the jump too big, including this one

00:26:273 (2) - Spacing between (1) and (3) is different and noticeable when playing. Fixed

01:47:723 (2,3) - blanket 3 better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1079276 Fixed

02:02:273 (3,4) - Make slider end of 4 exactly on slider head of 3. A bit is poking out. Fixed

02:04:223 (2,3) - Blanket better Wow, I couldn't have find it by myself, fixed

02:13:073 (5) - One grid lower Done
Thanks for modding! :)

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288,128,125273,2,2,P|341:112|397:114,2,112.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,160,125873,2,0,P|136:160|120:152,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,72,126173,2,0,L|40:48,3,37.5,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,72,126473,6,0,L|168:48,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,112,126773,2,0,L|280:136,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,112,127073,2,0,P|328:152|304:192,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,127523,2,0,P|336:24|400:56,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,112,127973,2,0,L|392:168,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,128273,2,0,P|272:248|336:320,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,248,128723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,183,128873,2,0,P|432:247|400:312,2,150
360,152,129623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,152,129923,2,0,L|216:88,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,130373,2,0,P|128:112|104:152,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,200,130673,2,2,P|192:216|256:184,2,150,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,144,131423,6,0,P|88:128|128:128,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,131723,2,0,P|224:232|264:240,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,132323,2,0,P|272:160|336:208,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,132773,2,0,L|464:88,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,200,133073,2,0,L|480:208,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,133373,6,0,B|328:64|328:64|264:40,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,56,133823,2,0,P|160:136|192:208,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,280,134273,2,0,P|232:316|210:346,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,134573,2,0,P|120:248|136:200,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,134873,6,2,L|120:128,2,112.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,135473,2,0,L|320:320,2,75,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,135923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136073,12,0,137273,0:0:0:0:
264,244,138473,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,244,138623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,216,139073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,216,139223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,139673,2,0,L|376:56,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,184,140273,2,0,L|360:355,1,150,12|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,140873,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,141023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,216,141473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,216,141623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,142073,2,0,L|136:56,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,184,142673,2,0,L|151:355,1,150,12|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,322,143123,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,232,143273,2,0,P|280:216|416:304,1,225,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,304,143873,2,0,P|312:264|424:216,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,264,144323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,296,144473,6,0,P|368:232|384:200,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,136,144773,2,0,P|426:98|409:65,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,136,145073,2,0,P|280:181|244:183,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,181,145373,2,0,P|135:197|115:228,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,336,145673,6,0,P|120:344|200:296,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,248,146123,2,0,P|384:216|440:232,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,146573,2,0,P|360:336|384:360,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,147023,2,0,P|402:166|411:133,2,75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,224,147473,2,0,P|194:211|129:229,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,280,147923,5,0,0:0:0:0:
133,227,148073,2,0,P|160:152|152:80,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,136,148523,2,0,P|112:160|192:144,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,80,148973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,56,149123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,149273,6,0,L|408:176,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,248,149573,2,0,L|301:259,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,248,149873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,222,150023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,147,150173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,126,150323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,187,150473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,151673,6,0,P|80:144|104:224,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,304,152123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,152273,2,0,P|208:184|184:104,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,152723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,144,153023,2,0,L|488:168,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,184,153473,2,0,P|256:232|144:240,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,158273,12,4,160973,0:0:0:0:
160,144,161273,6,0,P|152:208|160:240,2,86.2500016450882,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,88,161723,2,0,P|245:130|236:172,1,86.2500016450882,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,162023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,336,162323,6,0,P|392:336|488:288,1,172.500003290176,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,232,162773,2,0,P|392:192|392:152,1,86.2500016450882,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,163073,2,0,P|432:144|312:112,1,172.500003290176,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,48,163523,5,0,0:0:0:0:
184,56,163673,2,0,P|160:96|160:144,1,86.2500016450882,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,163973,2,0,P|148:253|114:287,1,86.2500016450882,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,288,164273,2,0,P|280:304|376:232,1,172.500003290176,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,176,164723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,164873,6,2,L|136:120,2,129.375002467632,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,165473,2,0,L|432:88,3,43.1250008225441,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,165773,2,0,L|400:336,1,172.500003290176,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,166223,6,0,P|256:288|216:312,1,86.2500016450882,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,360,166523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,296,166673,2,0,P|144:272|200:272,1,86.2500016450882,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,288,166973,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,248,167123,6,0,P|368:200|336:64,1,172.500003290176,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,136,167573,2,0,P|240:160|184:168,1,86.2500016450882,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,168,167873,2,0,P|94:177|57:200,1,86.2500016450882,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,296,168173,6,0,P|145:286|182:263,1,86.2500016450882,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,192,168473,2,0,P|200:144|232:8,2,172.500003290176,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,248,169223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,264,169373,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,200,169523,6,0,P|416:256|360:328,1,172.500003290176,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,264,169973,2,0,L|168:232,1,172.500003290176,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,170423,2,0,P|64:168|56:128,2,86.2500016450882,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,136,170873,6,0,P|192:104|224:104,1,86.2500016450882,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,171173,2,0,L|256:216,1,86.2500016450882,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,264,171473,2,0,P|256:280|296:272,2,86.2500016450882,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,171923,6,0,P|80:248|72:352,1,172.500003290176,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,304,172373,2,0,P|208:280|216:176,1,172.500003290176,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,172823,2,0,L|288:56,2,86.2500016450882,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,173273,6,0,L|112:264,2,172.500003290176,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,174023,2,0,P|336:208|368:184,2,86.2500016450882,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,168,174473,6,2,P|176:216|208:304,2,129.375002467632,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,171,175073,2,0,P|320:250|288:328,1,172.500003290176,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,175673,12,0,176873,0:0:0:0:
216,288,178073,6,2,L|136:328,1,86.2500016450882,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,178673,2,2,L|384:192,1,86.2500016450882,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,44,179273,2,2,L|296:136,1,86.2500016450882,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,179573,2,0,L|216:280,1,86.2500016450882,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,304,179873,2,0,L|104:320,4,43.1250008225441,8|0|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Gloria Guard
2,273 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
As mod request me.

[General]

■ Why this map image size 1167x700? You change this map image size. If you can't find image size, you use this image.
http://puu.sh/5aeZL.png


[Easy]

■ 00:34:973 (4,1) Hmm, this two note remove and add 1/2 slider? I think a little difficult patterns imo
■ 00:40:073 (1) Here is there is no reason why there should be a new combo. remove NC please
■ 01:00:473 (2) This is slider repeat rhythm is a bit awkward, Can you change this slider rhythm?
You try this.
■ 01:30:173 (3,1) You try 1/2 slider add here, 00:34:973 (4,1) same
■ 01:39:773 (4,1) ^
■ 02:05:273 (2,3,1) This is (2) repeat slider a little not correct rhythm. I think 1/4 slider add is better imo.
so I suggestion this pattern rhythm.
SPOILER
■ 02:14:873 (2) This is repeat slider too, rhythm is not correct, Please change 1/4 slider here.
■ 02:32:123 (2) Hmm, I agree this 1/1 slider here, but this is 1/1 slider rhythm a read difficult to beginners
I think this 1/1 slider remove add note is better.
■ 02:44:873 (2,3,1) This is rhythm same by 02:05:273 (2,3,1) here.
■ 02:54:473 (2) This is repeat slider not correct rhythm, Can you change 1/4 slider?


[Normal]

I think fine imo.


[Koinuri's Hard]

Uhh..... I don't agree this hard diff.. This is hard diff, distance and pattern shape is bad
and this map have so many read difficult pattern and Please don't use overlap hidden pattern.
example 02:11:273 (12,1,2) and 02:24:173 (3,4,1) so many etc. and New combo is a mess.
I'm not blaming you for the map. Your own map to see a little more improvement and to fix too many parts.
I'm sorry, but I can't be modding the map


[Insane]

■ 00:24:173 (3,4) The distance is too close

well, A little bad shape bit the problem can't be found :(



P.S : This map is not ready to get into position, Hard and Insane is a lot of bad flow and patterns, this map requires a lot of improvement
You don't feel bad I'm not saying you try to derogatory. You can make a better map, I believe. :D
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
"Gloria Guard"
As mod request me.

[General]

■ Why this map image size 1167x700? You change this map image size. If you can't find image size, you use this image.
http://puu.sh/5aeZL.png as long as the background image is less than the maximums specified, it's fine, the background doesn't look strange in play. The one you gave me I'm definitely not using, that's squished up o.o



[Easy]

■ 00:34:973 (4,1) Hmm, this two note remove and add 1/2 slider? I think a little difficult patterns imo I was told earlier that this would be fine, adds a little more spice to the rhythm, plus I want to have a click on the downbeat, so no change on any of these
■ 00:40:073 (1) Here is there is no reason why there should be a new combo. remove NC please heh ok
■ 01:00:473 (2) This is slider repeat rhythm is a bit awkward, Can you change this slider rhythm?
You try this. I think you meant to give a suggestion here? well I changed all of these to the same suggestion you gave later, so all good haha
■ 01:30:173 (3,1) You try 1/2 slider add here, 00:34:973 (4,1) same ^
■ 01:39:773 (4,1) ^ ^
■ 02:05:273 (2,3,1) This is (2) repeat slider a little not correct rhythm. I think 1/4 slider add is better imo.
so I suggestion this pattern rhythm. ^
SPOILER
■ 02:14:873 (2) This is repeat slider too, rhythm is not correct, Please change 1/4 slider here.^
■ 02:32:123 (2) Hmm, I agree this 1/1 slider here, but this is 1/1 slider rhythm a read difficult to beginners
I think this 1/1 slider remove add note is better. don't understand your suggestion here o.o I'll ask you in game heh
■ 02:44:873 (2,3,1) This is rhythm same by 02:05:273 (2,3,1) here. ^
■ 02:54:473 (2) This is repeat slider not correct rhythm, Can you change 1/4 slider? ^


[Normal]

I think fine imo.

[Insane]

■ 00:24:173 (3,4) The distance is too close moved

well, A little bad shape bit the problem can't be found :(



P.S : This map is not ready to get into position, Hard and Insane is a lot of bad flow and patterns, this map requires a lot of improvement
You don't feel bad I'm not saying you try to derogatory. You can make a better map, I believe. :D

while I do agree that the insane could use some help with pattern structure, I'm not so sure about your flow comment, because when I play it generally feels quite relaxed and intuitive.

thaaaaanks :>
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Moway
Hiii

[General]

02:23:273 - don't know if this will be too spammy or not, but maybe add a kiai flash here also? I think it fits well with the music, since the musical idea from 02:20:873 - is repeated.

[Easy]

00:02:273 (3,2) - this overlap doesn't look too great to me, maybe move the slider up so it forms a sort of blanket instead?
00:44:873 (1,2) - I think if you make these symmetrical across the y-axis, they'll look cleaner
00:49:823 (1) - I think you can begin this spinner at 00:49:973 instead. I don't really like having spinners that quickly after objects for your Easy.
00:49:823 (1,1) - not sure if this will be a problem or not, but having an object 2/1 after a spinner on an Easy is iffy, especially for a 200 bpm song. Don't know if I have a strong opinion on this yet, but just something to keep in mind.
01:01:373 (3) - I like this one moved down more below the endpoint of 01:00:473 (2). The flow from 01:00:473 (2) - leans more downward and slightly too the left (accounting for slider leniency), so moving the circle down to somewhere like (232,232) makes it so that the angle to the circle from the flow of 01:00:473 is less sharp.
01:05:273 (2,1) - for these, maybe aim for a sort of blanket like you did at 00:55:673 (3,1)?
01:44:873 (1) - remove this NC, or alternatively add an NC at 00:40:073 (3) for consistency.
01:49:673 (1,2) - symmetry thing again
01:54:623 (1) - same suggestion as the spinner before the first kiai
02:12:473 (3,1) - maybe form a blanket here with these objects.
02:26:873 (3) - I prefer this moved to the left more in order to make the flow more natural from 02:25:673 (1,2), which establish a more leftward flow.
02:30:473 - I think you could use a circle here. I think having nothing is a bit empty, and a circle could be nice to match the beginning of that solo vocal part
02:48:473 (1) - I think moving this down a bit flows better. (156,324) seems alright to me.
02:58:673 (1,3) - readjust this part so that these stack properly.

[Normal]

I would suggest AR4 for this diff, I think 5 feels a bit too quick.

00:18:473 (3) - curve this a bit more to form a nicer blanket with 00:19:073 (4).
00:38:873 (3) - ctrl+h on this one maybe, I think it would flow better. If you do this, then you can have 00:39:773 (4) - stack with 00:38:573 (2).
00:59:273 (1) - I think rotating this a bit (20-30 degrees maybe) would make the flow better toward 01:00:173 (2).
01:33:773 (2) - I prefer this moved up to (256,52) or somewhere around there. The flow is a bit more natural that way, and I think having the circle higher compliments the reflected sliders.
01:38:723 (2) - I kinda like a shape like this for (2), I think it looks a bit better. http://puu.sh/5aXX7.jpg
02:25:673 (1) - Maybe reshape this slider so that the curved part is more curved, and so that there is a bit more for the straight part at the end. Right now I think the shape is too subtle, and it looks kind of weird. Here's what I came up with: http://puu.sh/5aY6J.jpg
02:30:473 - Same suggestion from Easy, I think a circle here would be great to play.
02:46:073 (1,3) - not such a big deal, but I think fixing this overlap would make it look just a bit nicer.
02:48:473 (1,2) - readjust the slope of one of these so that they line up properly

[Koinuri's Hard]

Hi there Koinuri! I was told that you are going to remap this diff, so I'll just give some general suggestions for you from what I saw from this diff.

Use the distance snap tool a lot. I noticed that in a lot of parts of this diff your spacing is a bit inconsistent, even though your intentions seemed to be to keep consistent spacing. I also suggest either using the smallest grid-level or turning off grid snap, as the grid can make your spacing a bit wonky.

I guess continuing on about spacing. For the most part for your Hard diff your spacing should be pretty uniform through the map. Jumps and antijumps should be reserved for parts in the music that vary in their strength one way or another, and even then they shouldn't be too crazy or too difficult to read.

You had a lot of overlap in your objects, which I think is not as great for the Hard difficulty. For me, I prefer for things below Insane level to be easy to read, and too much overlapping can mess with that. For me, I like to say that for Hard diffs and below, all slider starts, slider ends, and circles should be unobscured (except for stacks). That of course is just a guideline, but it's a good one to ensure that you're getting nice readability.

Also, just as a side-nazi thing, it is best to clean up all slight overlaps, as that will make your map look a lot cleaner.

Properly stacking things! You had a lot of spots in this map where it looked like you were going for stacks, but they didn't quite work perfectly. I suspect that this was due to you trying to stack things with grid snap on. Turning off grid snap will let you stack slider ends and the like much more effectively. Cleaning up these will make your map look a lot tidier.

These were just a few quick thoughts. If you need me to clarify anything or need any general tips feel free to PM me here or in game.

[Insane]

00:07:823 (2,6) - stack is a bit off here
00:09:773 (10,11,12,13,1) - for these I would say go for a manual stack that leads to the bottom right. That way the approach circles start around (312,336) instead of slightly too high and to the left.
00:22:973 - I think that a 1/2 slider here would be really great to match that little drum part in the music. It would also allow for a jump to 00:23:273 (1), which I think would play well and fit to the strong musical part.
00:27:773 - feels a bit empty to me to not play anything here, I think the little drum part sticks out pretty well.
00:28:973 (5,6,7) - Not sure that I like the uniform increase in spacing here. Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/5b02Q.jpg This would put a bit of a jump after the slider which I think matches the vocal pretty well. The spacing between (5,6,7) would be 1.3x just like it was for 00:28:373 (2,3,4).
00:37:223 (10,1) - check your stack here
00:39:773 (11,1) - not sure that I like this antijump so well. I think that it feels better to have a bit more spacing between these so that the player can feel that strong finish.
01:13:973 (2,3,2,3) - These circles feel overmapped to me. I don't hear anything in the music to suggest that these should be here. I would say delete these, and to put a bit of a challenge in this part maybe instead separate 01:13:673 (1,1) - both into two circles for some jumps to match those drum parts, like you did at 00:47:273 (1,2,1,2). I think it would be a nice return to that theme.
01:15:773 (4) - NC here for consistency with your other diffs
01:31:223 (5) - move this up a bit to avoid the overlap with 01:30:773 (3).
01:36:323 (6) - I would prefer this to be a normal 3 point curve so that it blankets 01:35:873 (4) - a bit better.
02:18:773 (2,3,2,3) - same suggestion as with the end of the first kiai
02:21:173 (2,3,2,3) - here also
02:47:123 (6) - put a bit more curve on this so that it forms a blanket with the slider end of 02:47:573 (8).
02:58:373 (2,3,2,3) - same thing as before

That's all for me for now. Good luck guys!
captin1
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Hiii

[General]

02:23:273 - don't know if this will be too spammy or not, but maybe add a kiai flash here also? I think it fits well with the music, since the musical idea from 02:20:873 - is repeated. sure, we'll see

[Easy]

00:02:273 (3,2) - this overlap doesn't look too great to me, maybe move the slider up so it forms a sort of blanket instead?
00:44:873 (1,2) - I think if you make these symmetrical across the y-axis, they'll look cleaner
00:49:823 (1) - I think you can begin this spinner at 00:49:973 instead. I don't really like having spinners that quickly after objects for your Easy.
00:49:823 (1,1) - not sure if this will be a problem or not, but having an object 2/1 after a spinner on an Easy is iffy, especially for a 200 bpm song. Don't know if I have a strong opinion on this yet, but just something to keep in mind. I removed it to be safe
01:01:373 (3) - I like this one moved down more below the endpoint of 01:00:473 (2). The flow from 01:00:473 (2) - leans more downward and slightly too the left (accounting for slider leniency), so moving the circle down to somewhere like (232,232) makes it so that the angle to the circle from the flow of 01:00:473 is less sharp.
01:05:273 (2,1) - for these, maybe aim for a sort of blanket like you did at 00:55:673 (3,1)?
01:44:873 (1) - remove this NC, or alternatively add an NC at 00:40:073 (3) for consistency.
01:49:673 (1,2) - symmetry thing again
01:54:623 (1) - same suggestion as the spinner before the first kiai
02:12:473 (3,1) - maybe form a blanket here with these objects.
02:26:873 (3) - I prefer this moved to the left more in order to make the flow more natural from 02:25:673 (1,2), which establish a more leftward flow.
02:30:473 - I think you could use a circle here. I think having nothing is a bit empty, and a circle could be nice to match the beginning of that solo vocal part
02:48:473 (1) - I think moving this down a bit flows better. (156,324) seems alright to me.
02:58:673 (1,3) - readjust this part so that these stack properly.

[Normal]

I would suggest AR4 for this diff, I think 5 feels a bit too quick. hmmm been varying opinions on this, I personally like ar5 but I'll go with 4 for a bit, to see the reaction

00:18:473 (3) - curve this a bit more to form a nicer blanket with 00:19:073 (4).
00:38:873 (3) - ctrl+h on this one maybe, I think it would flow better. If you do this, then you can have 00:39:773 (4) - stack with 00:38:573 (2).
00:59:273 (1) - I think rotating this a bit (20-30 degrees maybe) would make the flow better toward 01:00:173 (2).
01:33:773 (2) - I prefer this moved up to (256,52) or somewhere around there. The flow is a bit more natural that way, and I think having the circle higher compliments the reflected sliders.
01:38:723 (2) - I kinda like a shape like this for (2), I think it looks a bit better. http://puu.sh/5aXX7.jpg
02:25:673 (1) - Maybe reshape this slider so that the curved part is more curved, and so that there is a bit more for the straight part at the end. Right now I think the shape is too subtle, and it looks kind of weird. Here's what I came up with: http://puu.sh/5aY6J.jpg
02:30:473 - Same suggestion from Easy, I think a circle here would be great to play.
02:46:073 (1,3) - not such a big deal, but I think fixing this overlap would make it look just a bit nicer.
02:48:473 (1,2) - readjust the slope of one of these so that they line up properly


[Insane]

00:07:823 (2,6) - stack is a bit off here
00:09:773 (10,11,12,13,1) - for these I would say go for a manual stack that leads to the bottom right. That way the approach circles start around (312,336) instead of slightly too high and to the left.
00:22:973 - I think that a 1/2 slider here would be really great to match that little drum part in the music. It would also allow for a jump to 00:23:273 (1), which I think would play well and fit to the strong musical part.
00:27:773 - feels a bit empty to me to not play anything here, I think the little drum part sticks out pretty well.
00:28:973 (5,6,7) - Not sure that I like the uniform increase in spacing here. Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/5b02Q.jpg This would put a bit of a jump after the slider which I think matches the vocal pretty well. The spacing between (5,6,7) would be 1.3x just like it was for 00:28:373 (2,3,4).
00:37:223 (10,1) - check your stack here
00:39:773 (11,1) - not sure that I like this antijump so well. I think that it feels better to have a bit more spacing between these so that the player can feel that strong finish.
01:13:973 (2,3,2,3) - These circles feel overmapped to me. I don't hear anything in the music to suggest that these should be here. I would say delete these, and to put a bit of a challenge in this part maybe instead separate 01:13:673 (1,1) - both into two circles for some jumps to match those drum parts, like you did at 00:47:273 (1,2,1,2). I think it would be a nice return to that theme.
01:15:773 (4) - NC here for consistency with your other diffs
01:31:223 (5) - move this up a bit to avoid the overlap with 01:30:773 (3).
01:36:323 (6) - I would prefer this to be a normal 3 point curve so that it blankets 01:35:873 (4) - a bit better.
02:18:773 (2,3,2,3) - same suggestion as with the end of the first kiai
02:21:173 (2,3,2,3) - here also
02:47:123 (6) - put a bit more curve on this so that it forms a blanket with the slider end of 02:47:573 (8).
02:58:373 (2,3,2,3) - same thing as before

pretty much everything done haha
That's all for me for now. Good luck guys!

thanks for the mod!
_koinuri
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Moway wrote:

[Koinuri's Hard]

Hi there Koinuri! I was told that you are going to remap this diff, so I'll just give some general suggestions for you from what I saw from this diff.

Use the distance snap tool a lot. I noticed that in a lot of parts of this diff your spacing is a bit inconsistent, even though your intentions seemed to be to keep consistent spacing. I also suggest either using the smallest grid-level or turning off grid snap, as the grid can make your spacing a bit wonky.

I guess continuing on about spacing. For the most part for your Hard diff your spacing should be pretty uniform through the map. Jumps and antijumps should be reserved for parts in the music that vary in their strength one way or another, and even then they shouldn't be too crazy or too difficult to read.

You had a lot of overlap in your objects, which I think is not as great for the Hard difficulty. For me, I prefer for things below Insane level to be easy to read, and too much overlapping can mess with that. For me, I like to say that for Hard diffs and below, all slider starts, slider ends, and circles should be unobscured (except for stacks). That of course is just a guideline, but it's a good one to ensure that you're getting nice readability.

Also, just as a side-nazi thing, it is best to clean up all slight overlaps, as that will make your map look a lot cleaner.

Properly stacking things! You had a lot of spots in this map where it looked like you were going for stacks, but they didn't quite work perfectly. I suspect that this was due to you trying to stack things with grid snap on. Turning off grid snap will let you stack slider ends and the like much more effectively. Cleaning up these will make your map look a lot tidier.

These were just a few quick thoughts. If you need me to clarify anything or need any general tips feel free to PM me here or in game.
Thank you for taking your time giving me advice, I'll try my best applying all those tips. :)
captin1
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putting this on hold temporarily, don't bother modding it

will probably return to this after I finish up some other things
Sorarei
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[General]
didn't see any problem here

[Koinuri Hard]
I see many spacing note didn't fit to play
00:02:273 (3,4,5,6) - seems weird , try distance space 1.0x ?
00:03:473 (3) - move to x:24 y:124
00:11:873 (3,4,5,6) - same as above, try distance space
00:13:973 (2,3) - looks better if move like this Click me!
00:25:823 (1,2,3) - same as above Click me!
00:30:173 (2) - like hidden with previous slider
00:34:823 (5,6) - fix like this Click me!
00:47:873 (3) - forever alone slider (little and far away to next slider)
00:49:673 (1) - make distance space better
00:53:573 (5) - ^
01:00:473 (5) - almost like hidden slider from previous slider , move outside that slider
01:04:073 (1) - make it mirror so that note can be read
01:09:623 (4) - make distance space better
01:39:173 (6) - make distance space better so next note will be fit to do
02:04:673 (3) - move to x:236 y:200

[Normal]
00:47:273 (1,2) - Change to circle ?, its weird i see
01:15:773 (1) - do this Click me!

Nice pattern
captin1
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I'll give kds for the effort, but...yea :/
Sorarei
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if not helping don't kudos :3
_koinuri
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Reikosaka wrote:

[Koinuri Hard]
I see many spacing note didn't fit to play
00:02:273 (3,4,5,6) - seems weird , try distance space 1.0x ?
00:03:473 (3) - move to x:24 y:124
00:11:873 (3,4,5,6) - same as above, try distance space
00:13:973 (2,3) - looks better if move like this Click me!
00:25:823 (1,2,3) - same as above Click me!
00:30:173 (2) - like hidden with previous slider
00:34:823 (5,6) - fix like this Click me!
00:47:873 (3) - forever alone slider (little and far away to next slider)
00:49:673 (1) - make distance space better
00:53:573 (5) - ^
01:00:473 (5) - almost like hidden slider from previous slider , move outside that slider
01:04:073 (1) - make it mirror so that note can be read
01:09:623 (4) - make distance space better
01:39:173 (6) - make distance space better so next note will be fit to do
02:04:673 (3) - move to x:236 y:200
Nice pattern
Sorry, I already remapped my difficulty completely >.>, the map uploaded isn't updated yet.
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