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Ezel-Ash - Love Colored Master Spark

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Gabi

lesjuh wrote:

I Love it man (approve extra stage itz awesum)

Only thing is the 1/6 notes in Lunatic @ 01:48:98 (13,14,15,1) Since you're not ranking Extra stage (wich has many more of these 1/6 notes) it would be great if you'd prevent me from missing and raise my score make this more readable with a slider or whatever. Leave it if you want, I only think it's a little confusing because the 1/4 streams have 0,3x spacing.

AND! What are the option images doing in the songs folder? D:
well i thought it would make it clear if i had larger spacing with the 1/6 notes. maybe i make it tighter....

And the option images are removed xD
Dangaard
I would like to have Extra Stage in the ranked mapset rather than going for approval for this single diff. There are maps as hard as this (or even harder) already ranked.
Anyway star for this challenge-map :3
Doomsday

Dangaard wrote:

I would like to have Extra Stage in the ranked mapset rather than going for approval for this single diff. There are maps as hard as this (or even harder) already ranked.
Anyway star for this challenge-map :3
as much as i'd want the Extra Stage to be ranked, its got a 23 mil max score. no way will that be ranked.

anyways, <3 Ezel-Ash

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

i won't mod Extra Stage since it isn't going for rankage. if it goes for Approved though, ill come back and mod it (unless you really don't want me to)

timing looks good

[LUNATIC]

00:49:52 (1) - i'd prefer this stacked on (2) and (3)

pfft. thats all i got

very fun map :D
star'd
Topic Starter
Gabi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DaRRi
lower drain will be cool
extra -1
lunatic -2
MegaManEXE
Fuck you Gabi why do you make such hard shit

Amazing song though, way better than the Haru version
Topic Starter
Gabi
lowered hp drain on both diffs.... lol

also removed most of the skin, just kept my favorite parts of it.

now you should be able to pass without problems.
livender
Bah died at 80% at Extra Stage
Awesome Star :)
Gopice
very nice map!!! I especially like the extra stage difficulty :)

But could you please put the stack leniency 1 tick to the right.
It's very hard to read the stacks, especially with the background.
Topic Starter
Gabi

gopice wrote:

very nice map!!! I especially like the extra stage difficulty :)

But could you please put the stack leniency 1 tick to the right.
It's very hard to read the stacks, especially with the background.
at the moment im trying to figure out a solution for this. the reason i cant put the stack leniency to 0.2 is the patterns will get so ugly and messed up.

thanks alot though :)
konan-yoshi999
i like this map :D
i suggest making a normal diff... but its just a suggestion.
Card N'FoRcE
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Topic Starter
Gabi

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Timing: wow, i thought 170,02 was wrong, but it seems to be ok xD

- Lunatic:
00:17:58 (8) - new combo? it doesn't quite fit
00:20:23 (9,10) - new combo at one of these? ^
01:00:63 (15) - new combo? Changed
01:08:40 (7) - new combo? Changed
02:06:27 (8) - ^ Changed
(My point is: there are some combos over 12/15. That's why i pointed them out :P )

- Extra stage:
fine

Anyway, there's omething that bugs me.
You set the map to Rarely Stack, but when testing or playing osu! doesn't apply that.
Can you check?

i know this is a problem. but i have no idea how to fix it. the only way to fix it is to put stack leniency to 0.1 but then reading becomes difficult for some people.

Anyway, map is awesome and i'll star anyway :D

EDIT: also, why menu-back.png? It's useless D: removed, thanks xD
thanks ^^
tasli
nice map :D star
Topic Starter
Gabi
Thanks. also, personally im done with this map so if anyone wants to make a normal diff feel free too..
Sleep Powder
[Extra Stage]
00:46:34 (8) - Add a finish at the end
01:52:16 (14) - The stream before this slider seems go offbeat near the end.
02:12:71 (1) - Maybe I should add yellow to my color guide~
03:29:47 (1) - Add a clap? idk

[Lunatic]
00:02:23 (2) - Add whistle here?
00:05:05 (2) - ^
01:52:16 (14) - The stream before this slider seems go offbeat near the end.
Topic Starter
Gabi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ft1717492
This map is really difficult
But in order to listen to the whole song, I will try my best! ;)

~star~
blissfulyoshi
Extra stage:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:09:11 (2) - new combo for consistency with first 4 combos
00:11:93 (2) - ^

Lunatic:
SPOILER
The same things as extra stage.

Combo mod:
00:09:11 (2) - new combo for consistency with first 4 combos
00:11:93 (2) - ^

Nice map. Star.
Topic Starter
Gabi

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Extra stage:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:09:11 (2) - new combo for consistency with first 4 combos
00:11:93 (2) - ^

Lunatic:
SPOILER
The same things as extra stage.

Combo mod:
00:09:11 (2) - new combo for consistency with first 4 combos
00:11:93 (2) - ^

Nice map. Star.
thanks done all ^^
DaRRi
discussed on irc

what else is

Extra Stage
02:19:51 (7,8) - it's confusing if you put them here, how about move (7) down and move (8) up by some grids?
02:27:80 (2,3,4,5,6) - wavy stream is ugly
02:37:51 (2,3,4,5) - i suggest stack them
02:52:50 (4) - reverse arrow can't be seen
02:57:27 (5,6) - flip vertically
02:59:33 (4) - just put on 1/4 tick, it's too confusing
03:04:15 (1) - new combo
03:06:97 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not making sense
tfxllvna
I want to tell to you about "Strange Japanese" in "Love Colored Master Spark".
(Conversely, This sentence will be seen strange English ...my English is poor. >:( )
Because Japanese used for the menu etc. is a little unnatural, I proposes to change it as follows.

-Quit and Return to Title
current ”やめて、選択るために戻ってください"
amended ”タイトルに戻る"
-Return to Game
current "戻り、ゲームに"
amended "ゲームに戻る"
-Retry this Game
current "リトライこのゲーム"
amended "ゲームをリトライ"
-GAME OVER
current "向こうへの ゲーム、"
amended "ゲーム オーバー"

(Is the character correctly displayed?)

This MAP is very very difficult. However it's look like fun.
I practice more. :x
Topic Starter
Gabi

DaRRi MIx wrote:

discussed on irc

what else is

Extra Stage
02:19:51 (7,8) - it's confusing if you put them here, how about move (7) down and move (8) up by some grids?i think its ok
02:27:80 (2,3,4,5,6) - wavy stream is ugly fixed
02:37:51 (2,3,4,5) - i suggest stack them [color=#0000Fdone][/color]
02:52:50 (4) - reverse arrow can't be seen i know.... but ok i'll change
02:57:27 (5,6) - flip vertically done
02:59:33 (4) - just put on 1/4 tick, it's too confusing
03:04:15 (1) - new combo done
03:06:97 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not making sense im not sure what you mean? they follow the guitar in a 1/6 beat.
ty fixed most stuff.
Shinxyn
My opinion of Approved maps are when mappers can free to go all out... therefore, there's nothing "technically" wrong~

I would suggest you look around for places to add much more new combos, since its fairly hard to read... oh well
Oh, and redo breaks (not that it really matters)
Wow, 1/6 sections X_X!

Anyways.... Star~!
Echo
First off, make the changes to Japanese as suggested by tfxllvna above. At the moment it's really really awkward (google translate? :P)

BPM: 170.050, resnap all notes. Some sliders will become messed up; you'll need to play through and make sure these are as they used to be.

Lunatic:
00:49:52 (1,2,3) - keep it stacked, but make them all have the same spacing as 4 to 5
01:50:22 (4) - shorten by 1 repeat - this makes it more intuitive

Extra:
both points for lunatic apply for extra
02:59:30 (4) - move 1/8 earlier would be better I think (and respaced)
03:06:97 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I agree with darri, this is wrong. This is most definitely 4/4 time, so use 1/4 snap (beats 1-3 are quavers, beat 4 is a crotchet)

Point out any other places you used 1/6 so I can check them please :)

Somehow I get this feeling that you ran out of ideas when mapping (03:16:85 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) in Extra, and the huge copy/pasted section in the middle).
Topic Starter
Gabi

Echo wrote:

First off, make the changes to Japanese as suggested by tfxllvna above. At the moment it's really really awkward (google translate? :P)

BPM: 170.050, resnap all notes. Some sliders will become messed up; you'll need to play through and make sure these are as they used to be. are you sure it is .05? it sounds really off after the middle, and the 1/6 parts sounds like 1/8's now :s. not sure how to fix those anymore.

Lunatic:
00:49:52 (1,2,3) - keep it stacked, but make them all have the same spacing as 4 to 5 done
01:50:22 (4) - shorten by 1 repeat - this makes it more intuitive done, allthough i still think the last repeat goes with the guitar :s

made some additional combo changes to make it look better.

Extra:
both points for lunatic apply for extra done
02:59:30 (4) - move 1/8 earlier would be better I think (and respaced) hmm ok
03:06:97 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I agree with darri, this is wrong. This is most definitely 4/4 time, so use 1/4 snap (beats 1-3 are quavers, beat 4 is a crotchet) to me it sounded like i was following the guitar tones. i think i fixed it now though...

Point out any other places you used 1/6 so I can check them please :)

1/6 that needs rechecking are
00:49:63 (2,3) -
01:43:32 (11,12,13) -
01:48:96 (13,14,15) -
02:58:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this odd now after the bpm change :s



Somehow I get this feeling that you ran out of ideas when mapping (03:16:85 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) in Extra
true, i will re pattern/re note.

and the huge copy/pasted section in the middle).
please point out from where to where it's copy pasted. im against copy pasta (eventually it happens in the rythm) and will change cause i can't remember copying anything.
Thanks! fixed some combos and added some more hitsounds aswell.
Echo
Sorry about the BPM - I don't know what I was thinking ._. definitely 170.02

Extra:
00:49:51 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be identical to hard?
02:58:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is definitely 4/4 as well
03:07:68 (5) - definitely 4/4

The other ones are tuplets, so using 1/6 divisor is fine.

(just so you know - I'm going through this at 75% in edit)

about this:
01:50:22 (4) - done, allthough i still think the last repeat goes with the guitar :s
The last repeat does indeed go with the guitar, but how many people will know what the guitar is playing, and at that speed? However, with one less repeat, it becomes identical to the 2 and 3 sliders which is what I think people would be expecting from that slider.
Topic Starter
Gabi

Echo wrote:

Sorry about the BPM - I don't know what I was thinking ._. definitely 170.02

Extra:
00:49:51 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be identical to hard? due to slider velocity the spacing becomes different, but i have copied it in now
02:58:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is definitely 4/4 as well i don't know what happened but i think i can hear this now xD
03:07:68 (5) - definitely 4/4 done ^

The other ones are tuplets, so using 1/6 divisor is fine.

(just so you know - I'm going through this at 75% in edit)

about this:
01:50:22 (4) - done, allthough i still think the last repeat goes with the guitar :s
The last repeat does indeed go with the guitar, but how many people will know what the guitar is playing, and at that speed? However, with one less repeat, it becomes identical to the 2 and 3 sliders which is what I think people would be expecting from that slider.
alright :)

thanks Echo, i don't get how i could have missjudged those 1/6's so bad. :oops:

i think i fixed everything good now. please feel free to comment on any long ugly sliders (i know i have a few, but i need to be pushed to re-shape them :P ), or repetetive/boring copy pasta.
Echo
I guess the sliders at the end of Extra could be worked on :P

And poke Cyclone for corrections to the skin.
0_o
Extra Stage
01:12:63 (1,2) - Ctrl-R this, it fits better imo

Lunatic
00:49:52 (1) - Stack on top of 2? *suggestion*
00:52:69 (4,5) - New combo on one of these
01:48:98 (13,14,15,1) - I would turn this into a 1/4 stream personally

*
Topic Starter
Gabi

0_o wrote:

Extra Stage
01:12:63 (1,2) - Ctrl-R this, it fits better imo i like how you think ^_^however i only reversed 1, then i put 2 on 1's end point

b]Lunatic[/b]
00:49:52 (1) - Stack on top of 2? *suggestion*
00:52:69 (4,5) - New combo on one of these done
01:48:98 (13,14,15,1) - I would turn this into a 1/4 stream personally But echo approved of my 1/6 :<

*
thanks for the mod :>

@Echo: im not sure if cyclone can fix those right now. it seems his main computer has crashed :s. also i will work on the sliders at the end soon, im gonna try to get some inspiration from other maps xD
Cyclone

Gabi wrote:

@Echo: im not sure if cyclone can fix those right now.
It's in the works. I just wasn't the one who personally made those in the first place. Also my computer with everything on it is dead. Also i don't have photoshop on this one.
0_o
Are ranked/approved mapsets allowed yet? Because if this had an easier difficulty I bet Lunatic could be ranked...
Topic Starter
Gabi

0_o wrote:

Are ranked/approved mapsets allowed yet? Because if this had an easier difficulty I bet Lunatic could be ranked...
that was intended from the beginning... however i had no more time to make a mapset for lunatic, hard easy etc... so if anyone wishes to make a normal/hard they can go ahead.
Topic Starter
Gabi
sorry for double post but

Echo wrote:

I guess the sliders at the end of Extra could be worked on :P
done! sorry for the delay. hopefully it's alright now
Alace
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Topic Starter
Gabi
uploaded this for the last time. BAT's said they would mod it but uh no one does. im done with it unless someone actually mods/bubbles it.
Takuma
Bubble #1? OwO/
0_o
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Furawa
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