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Xinely
ugh so many mods XD
thanks 4 mod all
sorry can't reply all =w=
P A N
hi xinely, sorry for a delay so much XD

[2geter]

00:29:652 (5) - 1 grid up and move tail to 172|156 for better pattern.
00:47:300 (4) - this pattern is better imo :3
00:51:491 (7,9) - add whistle?
01:02:079 (5) - add finish is fit the music imo.
01:07:594 (3) - move tail 1 grid up and move (5) to 382|144 for more blanket.
01:15:094 (4) - 1 grid up to make the distance from tail to the curve space balance with (2) to (1).
01:26:123 (5) - move tail 1 grid up and move (6) 1 grid right for more blanket.
02:01:417 (1) - move tail 2 grid right for more blanket.
02:23:807 (5,6,7) - move to 196|304 , 232|304 , 268|292 for more flow.
02:25:682 (6,7,8) - Ctrl+g and move it like this is more playable, and make it blanket with (5) too. and move next (3) stack with this (8).
02:27:557 (7,8) - down 1 grid , left 1 grid.
02:31:197 (8) - move to 320|292.
02:33:844 (2) - add some hitsound on tail?
02:34:616 (7) - 1 grid down.
02:37:814 (4) - ^
02:41:454 (5,6,7,8) - hmm I think this stream not beautiful :X
02:51:932 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - move to 192|372 , 292|268 , 308|244 , 316|216 , 320|188 , 316|160 , 308|132.
02:56:013 (9) - 1 grid up.
03:06:050 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - move to 296|156 and move red point of (1) 1 grid right.
03:45:204 - lower a volume and off the kial?

[Hard]

00:28:770 (3) - move it like this? :3
00:34:726 (9) - 1 grid left?
00:35:608 (2) - 1 grid left and move tail 1 grid right.
01:02:079 (6) - add finish instead?
01:17:300 (1) - 1 grid up?
01:46:417 (3) - eh.. same I mod it before O: (same reason as 00:28:770)
01:52:373 (9) - 1 grid left
01:53:255 (2) - ^
01:59:652 (1) - like this?
02:03:844 (2) - move to 132|23?
02:26:123 (5) - move tail 1 grid right.

[Normal]

01:07:594 (3) - 1 grid down?
01:42:005 (1) - move tail 1 grid down.
01:57:005 (3) - 2 grid down?
very nice normal :3

good luck :3 and star, gogo!
Hinsvar

P A N wrote:

hi xinely, sorry for a delay so much XD

[2geter]

02:01:417 (1) - move tail 2 grid right for more blanket. Only dragged it one grid because two makes the blanket worse.
03:45:204 - lower a volume and off the kial? I don't see any problem here, actually... o.o
Thanks for modding! :D
Gero
Yo! M4M here

General

  1. Clean
  2. disable this, because your SB is a small, predetermined resolution http://puu.sh/4ITYM.png

Normal

  1. 00:10:241 (3,1) - this pattern is confusing to inexperienced players, would be better if you try another type of pattern here.
  2. 02:20:829 (1) - whistle here
  3. 02:21:711 (3) - on head ^
  4. 02:35:829 (3,4) - it flows a little bad imo, try this:
  5. 03:06:711 (1) - Ugly slider, would be better to do a little more symmetrical, something like this:

    Here the code if you want:
    [HitObjects]
    285,165,186711,6,0,B|305:226|472:320|558:248|570:181|548:105|477:71|409:70|323:142|387:324|444:354,1,675,4|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 03:12:888 - insert a break time here.
  7. 03:42:888 (1) - wistle? sounds good :3

Hard

  1. 00:29:432 (4,5) - a little jumps random? would be better if you move this note to X:485 Y:168
  2. 01:47:079 (4) - ^
Together

  1. Cool Diff :D
This is all, Good Luck Guys >w<~
Yumih
Hi, Xinely~! Thank you for M4M :3

Great song <3

Unrankable issue
Highly suggested
Suggestion

[General]
● This map needs epilepsy warning because of the white flashs on the SB.

● Delete unused images:
  1. sb\c761807sample1.jpg
  2. sb\sakura flower.png


[SB]
Great story board! I'll just point out some stuff~!
● The lyrics 1i.png is wrong.
  • 明日(ほし)を探したい = Ashita (Hoshi) wo sagashitai = This is wrong
    星を探したい = Hoshi wo sagashitai = This is correct
● Hmm, the grass.jpg on the SB bothered me a little because it looked too "artificial", imo. So I decided to play around with the photoshop and make this, feel free to use if you like it! Oh, I also modified together800x600.png a little so that it looked more natural with the background.
Grass/Preview
Preview



grass.jpg



together800x600.png



If you don't want the petals


Oh, please don't bother with green or white blurs, they won't appear on the SB xD

[Normal]
● 00:43:770 - Maybe add a note here and make the spinner start on 00:44:211 to follow the voice?

01:28:329 (5) - Maybe move this note to 01:28:550 to fit the voice better? Even if it's in a blue line, I don't find it difficult to follow.

● 01:34:947 (1) - The Finish sound here is too loud, imo. Maybe reduce the volume to 35%?

● 01:57:447 - Hmm, remove Whistle? Sounds unfit, imo.

● 02:13:770 (1) - I straightened the heart. I made it symmetrical, if you want to apply it, here's the code:
Code/Preview


252,172,133770,6,0,B|328:120|372:244|280:308|224:332|224:332|168:308|76:244|120:120|196:172,1,540,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
● 02:17:300 - Again, the Finish hitsound is too loud. I'd say 60% of volume would sound better.

● 02:31:417 (1) - ^

02:36:711 (4,5) - The flow here is somehow awkward.

● 02:42:888 - Loud Finish hitsound. At this point, the Kiai time is almost gone, so a lower sound would be better. Maybe 60%?

● 02:44:211 - The Drum sampleset here sounds weird, imo.

● 02:44:652 (4) - Kiai time is almost at its end, so I think a lower volume would be better fit for this Finish. Maybe 30%?

● 03:01:858 (2) - Reduce the volume to 50%? Same thing as you did on 02:57:005

● 03:10:241 - Maybe reduce the volume to 50%?

● 03:27:888 (1) - Same thing said earlier. Maybe 60%?

● 03:37:594 (5) - 60% here still sounds a bit loud. Maybe 50%?

● 03:39:358 - ^

● 03:41:123 - Maybe 40%?

● 03:42:447 (6) - Move it to 03:42:667 - ?

Sorry I made mostly hitsounds suggestions. The diff looks good c:

[Hard]
● Please check all the hitsounds suggestions I made on Normal and if you applied there, please apply to this difficult too :D

● 00:47:961 (5,6,7) - Maybe align them better?

● 01:22:594 (3,4) - Maybe improve the blanket? If doing so, move the middle node to x:105 y:282

● 03:01:858 (5) - Shouldn't it be Normal Sampleset Finish?

I don't see any problems with this difficult, so I just pointed out these nazi stuff! :?

[Together]

● 00:46:638 (3) - This slider flows a bit awkward, imo. How about doing something like this?

Just this... I guess I got too tired xD

Yeah, I am tired. I'm sorry, but I'll stop here! I'm sorry for not being so useful! It was difficult to find things to point out, the mapset is great!!

I wish you 2 the best of luck! :)

*Shoots star & goes to sleep*
hoshisorakiseki
hello, from my queue.
the storyboard and the song is good, i like it.

general:
ok

storyboard:
turn on epliepsy warning (some flashlights in your beatmap)
some images have a high resolution, try to resize them
file list
e.jpg
f.jpg
sakura flower.png

diff:Normal
-->change "beat snap divisor" to 1/4
-->try to avoid the quarter(1/4) beat.
-->i found some same pattern, try to make them a diffrent.

diff:Hard
ok

diff:Together
ok

i want to copy the hitsound to my beatmap, it sounds good for my beatmap.
finally, good luck.
Topic Starter
Xinely
it's so very helpful
thank you all >w<

@Yumih : i didn't fixed circle which move to blue tick due it's not hard but it may make newbie confuse, oh yeah thank you very much for images, it's so nice and i used it now ~

about resolution in images , is fine due i'm using scale in SB, also i'm lazy to make them smaller due maybe will be bad resolution

Updated and thank you again ~
Fushimi Rio
From queue

[General]
nothing.

[Normal]

01:34:947 (1) - remove the normal sample. normal addtion is better
02:57:005 - ^
03:37:594 (5) - ^
01:49:947 - from here to 02:00:976 - don't use whistle and clap at the same time.
02:27:005 (6) - 3rd point move 2 gird right
03:02:300 (3) - add normal sample (and of course soft addition
03:26:123 (1,1) - fix blanket

[Hard]

00:34:285 (7) - remove
00:52:373 (7) - ^
01:48:844 (9) - ^
00:42:667 (2) - move to x364 y112
02:00:314 (2) - ^
01:15:976 (4) - remove and stretch 3 to 01:15:976 -
01:34:947 (1) - use normal addition, not normal sample
03:37:594 (7) - ^
02:17:300 (1) - ^
02:42:005 (1,2) - fix blanket
03:00:314 (2) - move to x344 y140
03:02:300 - add normal sample (and soft addition

[Together]

00:35:608 (2) - remove whistle
00:39:138 (2) - ^
02:41:013 (3) - remove
02:50:719 (7) - ^
02:54:248 (6) - ^
03:04:836 (6) - ^
03:06:601 - add note here

Sorry for delay. I think this map could be more relaxing.
Topic Starter
Xinely

Eggache0 wrote:

From queue

[General]
nothing.

[Normal]

01:34:947 (1) - remove the normal sample. normal addtion is better i don't really see what's different orz
02:57:005 - ^
03:37:594 (5) - ^
01:49:947 - from here to 02:00:976 - don't use whistle and clap at the same time. consistency with from 00:31:417 - also it's my pattern hitsound
02:27:005 (6) - 3rd point move 2 gird right okay
03:02:300 (3) - add normal sample (and of course soft addition okay
03:26:123 (1,1) - fix blanket qe

[Hard]

00:34:285 (7) - remove since piano low here, okay removed
00:52:373 (7) - ^ okay
01:48:844 (9) - ^ did similar different here
00:42:667 (2) - move to x364 y112 changed with other fixed for better flow
02:00:314 (2) - ^ same here
01:15:976 (4) - remove and stretch 3 to 01:15:976 - yes, fixed
01:34:947 (1) - use normal addition, not normal sample same as Normal
03:37:594 (7) - ^
02:17:300 (1) - ^ for both too
02:42:005 (1,2) - fix blanket qe
03:00:314 (2) - move to x344 y140 fixed
03:02:300 - add normal sample (and soft addition i not really see the different again but okay i trust you

[Together]

00:35:608 (2) - remove whistle follow vocal
00:39:138 (2) - ^ ^
02:41:013 (3) - remove tell reason why remove here
02:50:719 (7) - ^
02:54:248 (6) - ^
03:04:836 (6) - ^ for all too
03:06:601 - add note here no sound here as i heard

Sorry for delay. I think this map could be more relaxing.
thanks 4 mod ~
OMG YUMIH 6 STARS SANKYUU!! <3 :oops:
Natsu
sorry I always forget this will edit this post with mod tomorrow x_x
Kytoxid
Really nice song, the SB fits really well.

[General]

Add "JPop" to tags?

Some of your SB images (e and f) are over the max 800x600 limit.

00:57:746 - The stars here are really cool. One thing though, their outlines are very sharp, while the image features a blurry sky (see the edges of the moon, for example). Maybe blur the stars a little too?

[Normal]

This difficulty has an epilepsy warning that doesn't match the other diffs. I'd recommend removing it.

It's good overall. A bit boring, but it's okay for this song and difficulty.

[Hard]

I really liked the rhythms in this map.

One thing that bugged me throughout the map though, was the spacing. In my opinion, there's a big difference between when notes touch and when they don't touch, so even slight movements can cause things to look strange. Maybe see if there are ways to keep the notes touching without breaking the visuals? For example, I think 00:25:020 (2,3,4) looks better as:


01:10:020 (8,1) - These mini-jumps between combos didn't really add much to the map for me since they were so small, so they felt a bit out of place. YMMV.
01:13:550 (8,1) - The bigger jumps, like here, were nice though.
02:15:535 (5,6) - A 1/8 pattern, cool. I think you could have used patterns like this a bit more between sliders.

The AR also felt a bit high, but manageable.

[Together]

Ooh, a collab. Nice. I think you can really feel the transitions between the mapping styles, but they both fit the song very well.

The AR here feels too high, I think the AR7 on Hard is the highest I can recommend for this song.

Xinley:

- I think the comments from Hard about notes touching/not touching apply to this diff as well, so I won't repeat them.
- Some of the jumps in this map felt a bit out of place in that there wasn't much in the music to justify a jump.
02:16:638 (1) - Wow, this section is really fun and different. Some might say it's a bit overmapped, but it's pretty cool and okay for the kiai section of the song.
03:06:491 (8,1) - I'd recommend unstacking these, since there's a 1/8 gap between the stack and the slider.

Hinsvar:

01:39:358 (3,1,2,1) - The timing on this is a bit hard to read due to the slider.
01:49:947 (3,4) - I liked your use of notes on 1/8 beat snap throughout your parts, gave it a cool feeling.
03:26:123 - I like how you ramp up the energy in your kiai part too, nice.
03:30:755 (4) - I'd recommend removing a repeat and adding a note at 03:31:197, the slider is a bit awkward and unpredictable with 2 repeats.
03:37:814 (2) - Same idea here; 2 repeats doesn't really feel right since it ends the slider on a yellow tick, and most of your sliders of this size only have a single repeat.
03:41:344 (2) - ^

If you want to keep the double-repeat slider idea, it might be better as 4 notes or 2 sliders, since it would be more readable that way.

Cool map overall, have a star~
Topic Starter
Xinely

Kytoxid wrote:

Really nice song, the SB fits really well. thanks >w<

[General]

Add "JPop" to tags? oh already j-pop here, i guess it's same :3

Some of your SB images (e and f) are over the max 800x600 limit. if i made become 800x600 etc , it will be bad orz

00:57:746 - The stars here are really cool. One thing though, their outlines are very sharp, while the image features a blurry sky (see the edges of the moon, for example). Maybe blur the stars a little too? yes fixed :3

[Normal]

This difficulty has an epilepsy warning that doesn't match the other diffs. I'd recommend removing it. opps fixed

It's good overall. A bit boring, but it's okay for this song and difficulty. inb4 relax diff

[Hard]

I really liked the rhythms in this map. <3

One thing that bugged me throughout the map though, was the spacing. In my opinion, there's a big difference between when notes touch and when they don't touch, so even slight movements can cause things to look strange. Maybe see if there are ways to keep the notes touching without breaking the visuals? For example, I think 00:25:020 (2,3,4) looks better as: oh, fixed than :3


01:10:020 (8,1) - These mini-jumps between combos didn't really add much to the map for me since they were so small, so they felt a bit out of place. YMMV. well, we will see later when someone tell this again ~
01:13:550 (8,1) - The bigger jumps, like here, were nice though. <3
02:15:535 (5,6) - A 1/8 pattern, cool. I think you could have used patterns like this a bit more between sliders. hai, added one like this in other time

The AR also felt a bit high, but manageable. i just make AR 7 due SV high ><

[Together]

Ooh, a collab. Nice. I think you can really feel the transitions between the mapping styles, but they both fit the song very well. <3

The AR here feels too high, I think the AR7 on Hard is the highest I can recommend for this song. aaa this is insane actually, well i will change when someone tell this :3

Xinley: omg xinley OAO , also i will check this after Hinsvar

- I think the comments from Hard about notes touching/not touching apply to this diff as well, so I won't repeat them.
- Some of the jumps in this map felt a bit out of place in that there wasn't much in the music to justify a jump.
02:16:638 (1) - Wow, this section is really fun and different. Some might say it's a bit overmapped, but it's pretty cool and okay for the kiai section of the song.
03:06:491 (8,1) - I'd recommend unstacking these, since there's a 1/8 gap between the stack and the slider. fixed :3

Cool map overall, have a star~
Omg thanks 4 mod and feedback Kytoxid <3
Natsu
HI~ Xinely

General:
  1. Unused Image Files
    sb\sakura flower.png
    sb\sakura tree.png
  2. Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning

Together:
  1. 00:01:418 (1) - move this one a little down to y:248 to be in line with 00:00:536 (1) - just for better design
  2. 00:05:830 (2) - maybe you can lower a little the volume on the tail of this one cuz 00:05:830 (2) - this spot dont have sound and when you play it sound really bad imo
  3. 00:11:786 lol really nazy but this one 1 grid up to make the triplet curve more noticeable owo
  4. 00:13:771 what about to add a circle with whistle here and start the spinner in 00:13:881 sound alot better with the melody imo
  5. 00:19:726 This beat dont have sound in the music I suggest you to remove it In my opinion this kid of calm sound are alot better If you always follow the music like it is
  6. 00:25:020 (2) - this slider play really bad orz it start in a offbeat with almost no sound on it why you dont try to convert this 00:24:800 in 1/2 slider and add a circle here 00:25:241 with clap like:
  7. 00:25:902 bad snapping actually there is not sound the vocal start in 00:26:013 listen it to 25%
  8. 00:27:667 symilar ^
  9. 00:27:888 (1,2) - this slider end kinda weird is not better if they finish following the music properly like:
  10. 00:30:976 nothing in the music here like 00:19:726
  11. 00:31:858 nothing in the music here this circle should be here 00:31:969
  12. 00:32:961 symilar case ^
  13. 00:35:829 this spot have a important sound in the music and should be mapped imo
  14. 00:36:491 this spot feel empty since are music on it
  15. 00:39:358 same as 00:35:829 this downbeat should be mapped need a hit action imo
  16. 00:42:888 (3) - this one should finish in 00:43:439
  17. 00:43:550 this one is not following nothing it should be in 00:43:660
  18. 00:45:094 (7,8) - same here they are not correctly snapped should be in 1/8 both of them alot of symilar case owo im lazy to point all of them maybe you can check your map at 25% again x_x
  19. 00:46:417 add a circle here since you mapped 00:46:197 (2) - with exactly the same sound
  20. 00:56:123 this spinner is ok for a normal but in a hard should be mapped properly imo kinda kill the flow of the map
  21. 01:17:079 nothing in the music here too
  22. 01:21:932 same as above also this one play really awkward
  23. 01:25:902 ^
  24. 01:27:005 ignoring clap sound? not mapping this part broke your hitsound patterns and rhythm imo
  25. 01:46:197 nothing in the music here it make sense if was snapped here with vocals 01:46:086
  26. 02:20:608 (5,5) - stack they perfect
  27. 02:46:417 kiai end here is not better if you add a circle to empathize the music better and start the spinner in 02:46:527
  28. 03:30:755 this rhythm dont follow the music sound weird also it have 2 repeats I personaly cant read it in first game and broke my combo T.T
  29. 03:41:344 (2) - Symilar to above maybe tray atleast to 1/4 sliders instead of the 2 repeats?

Hard:
  1. 00:28:550 symilar case nothing in the music here but if you snap it in 00:28:439 it make sense wiuth the vocals
  2. 00:29:432 same as above ^
  3. 00:30:976 nothing in the music here better remove it x_x
  4. 00:33:844 (6,7) - Distance? the jump is kinda hard to read cuz nothing suggest you it or swap the NC here 00:34:505 (7,1) -
  5. 00:41:123 (8,9) - symilar case as above hard to read the antijump on first place owo maybe use the properly distance or swap the NC 00:41:564 (9,1) -
  6. 00:46:858 nothing in the music here too..
  7. 00:48:844 same as above
  8. 00:50:167 ^
  9. 01:11:785 ^ and alot of symilar cases x_X
  10. 01:45:094 (5,1) - swap NC like I suggest you in other symilar parts
  11. 01:51:932 nothing here in the music it have to be in 01:51:822
  12. 02:02:961 (8,1) - fix the distance play awkward
  13. 02:22:594 (8) - try to stack the tail with previous 02:21:050 (2) - actually look really bad
  14. 02:50:608 use 2 circles better this repeat dont play really nice after the single tap here 02:49:726 (2,3,4,5) - also it feel bad cuz you dont map this one
  15. 02:50:498 x_x
  16. 02:57:447 (5) - cttl G? make a better jump pattern for me and get better flow than the actual way

Normal:
  1. OD 4 HP 4 AR 5 fit this diff best also for better diff spread~ actually the jumpp from normal to hard is kinda big
  2. 00:03:183 (2) - distance im being so much nazi?x_x
  3. 02:55:902 (5,1) - dont stack beats on the easy diff or the map newbies cant read/play them also break the flow and the nice gameplay of this diff

owo GL Xinely moe owo
happy623
yo

General

  1. seems something is missed :
  2. together800x600.png - i feel this pic is compressed and did not look nice ;w; or try to resize it again?, if you cant make it, you can give me your original picture and I will cut one for you

Normal

  1. 02:56:123 (1,2) - hmmm, I guess this blanket can be twisted better
  2. 03:13:770 (1) - try to place it in the center

Hard

  1. remove Widescreen support and turn on the display epilepsy warning
  2. 01:59:652 (1,3) - it isnt a nice blanket, try to move 02:00:535 (3) a grid down
  3. 03:00:535 (3) - ^

Together

  1. Same as Hard, remove Widescreen support and tick the display epilepsy warning
  2. 01:26:123 (5) - move the last anchor a grid up, to make this slider symmetrical
  3. 03:30:755 (4) - If I were you, I would have extent this slider until 03:31:197 -, Since there is nothing in 03:31:086 -, if you decide to change this, make sure you apply 03:37:814 (2) and 03:41:344 (2) as well

nothing much to say, star (´ω`)/
Kytoxid
Aaah, sorry for misspelling your name. D: Have an extra star to make up for it.

About the 800x600px image size, unfortunately it's part of the ranking criteria that static images can't exceed this size: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Storyboarding :( It shouldn't look too much worse with smaller dimensions, imo.
Hinsvar

Eggache0 wrote:

[Together]

02:41:013 (3) - remove Nope; there's a syllable from the lyrics.

Kytoxid wrote:

Hinsvar:

01:39:358 (3,1,2,1) - The timing on this is a bit hard to read due to the slider. Uh, I've played this a lot, and I can feel that it isn't as hard as what you've thought. Will consider more on this if any other modder suggested this, though.
01:49:947 (3,4) - I liked your use of notes on 1/8 beat snap throughout your parts, gave it a cool feeling. Good to hear that lol
03:26:123 - I like how you ramp up the energy in your kiai part too, nice. ^
03:30:755 (4) - I'd recommend removing a repeat and adding a note at 03:31:197, the slider is a bit awkward and unpredictable with 2 repeats. Weird. I feel extremely comfortable with a slider. It reflects how the instrument goes better than a short stream, IMO.
03:37:814 (2) - Same idea here; 2 repeats doesn't really feel right since it ends the slider on a yellow tick, and most of your sliders of this size only have a single repeat. ^
03:41:344 (2) - ^ ^

If you want to keep the double-repeat slider idea, it might be better as 4 notes or 2 sliders, since it would be more readable that way. I might also consider this, anyway.

Natsu wrote:

Together:
  1. 01:46:197 nothing in the music here it make sense if was snapped here with vocals 01:46:086 Nope; the vocal is indeed on the current place.
  2. 03:30:755 this rhythm dont follow the music sound weird also it have 2 repeats I personaly cant read it in first game and broke my combo T.T It does follow the music (in fact it's the best way to reflect the sound of the instruments compared to using two separate sliders or a short stream), doesn't sound or feel weird at all, and while this one has two repeats, I can feel that it is indeed really fitting with how the song goes. I also hate sliders like this if they're used incorrectly, so if I'm actually in need to use one, I'll make sure it's done nicely, and from what I've felt, it DOES go well with the song. Well, again, I'm going to reconsider if a lot of people disagree with this, but for now...
  3. 03:41:344 (2) - Symilar to above maybe tray atleast to 1/4 sliders instead of the 2 repeats? ^

happy623 wrote:

Together

  1. 03:30:755 (4) - If I were you, I would have extent this slider until 03:31:197 -, Since there is nothing in 03:31:086 -, if you decide to change this, make sure you apply 03:37:814 (2) and 03:41:344 (2) as well ...Guys, guys.

Thanks for the mods, anyway... I guess?
Tidek
M4M

Like calm maps, map is overall good so my mod wont be big, but I hope it will be helpful : )

Together
  1. 00:18:623 (4) - 1/2 slider instead of circle? I think it fits better to vocal
  2. 00:30:976 (7) - It looks more pretty with music if u delete that circle
  3. 00:46:197 (2) - move it little further? (overlap) + I think 1/2 slider better here (piano)
  4. 01:21:932 (3) - delete circle?
  5. 01:26:123 (5) - move it to 356 152, and fix blanket after
  6. 02:29:652 (1,2) - these straight sliders dont look pretty for me, little shapes? http://puu.sh/4PVCe.jpg
  7. 02:34:947 (1,2) - ^ especially second slider need a shape
  8. 02:37:925 (5) - move to x400
  9. 02:52:483 (10,1) - why DS is higher here?

Hard
  1. 00:25:020 (2) - move to 312 56?
  2. 00:30:976 (6) - look "together"
  3. 00:47:300 (4) - one grid up?
  4. 01:16:858 (5) - slider 1/2? (delete 6-circle), fits better to vocal
  5. 01:34:947 - 01:42:005 - That part need a little fix in my opinion. You not accenting 1/4 beats where they should be. Look:
    01:35:388 (2,3,4) - here u put 3 1/4 circles (u should stay 1/2 here) when here 01:36:491 - u hear strong beat and u didnt accent that. My english suck so i will show u on screen lol (Thats how it should look in my opinion)

    01:38:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The same here, u should add circles here 01:40:020 and here 01:40:902 (and maybe delete here 01:39:138 (2) )
  6. 02:22:594 (8,9,10) - Try this?
  7. 02:36:711 (5,6,7) - ^
  8. 03:33:182 (5,6,7) - ^
  9. 02:57:888 (6,7,8) - maybe accent beat here?
  10. 03:05:608 (6) - move to 156 52

Normal
  1. 00:23:476 (5) - move to 180 140
  2. 01:41:123 (5) - move to 140 104
  3. 03:02:300 (3) - delete and put circle here 03:02:520 ?
  4. 03:06:711 (1) - That slider need a little fix, use this code
    208,272,186711,6,0,B|304:320|464:264|480:128|432:80|360:32|288:80|240:128|256:264|416:320|512:272,1,720,4|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 03:42:447 (6) - move to 03:42:667 ?

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Xinely

Tidek wrote:

M4M

Like calm maps, map is overall good so my mod wont be big, but I hope it will be helpful : )

Together
  1. 00:18:623 (4) - 1/2 slider instead of circle? I think it fits better to vocal yes but i made pattern here ><
  2. 00:30:976 (7) - It looks more pretty with music if u delete that circle still have low piano sound as i heard, i will delete when someone tell this again
  3. 00:46:197 (2) - move it little further? (overlap) + I think 1/2 slider better here (piano) u're right but i try follow piano, it's fit right now imo xD
  4. 01:21:932 (3) - delete circle? not overmapped, so no
  5. 01:26:123 (5) - move it to 356 152, and fix blanket after oki
  6. 02:29:652 (1,2) - these straight sliders dont look pretty for me, little shapes? http://puu.sh/4PVCe.jpg itentional nice overlap (:
  7. 02:34:947 (1,2) - ^ especially second slider need a shape fix for this
  8. 02:37:925 (5) - move to x400 oki
  9. 02:52:483 (10,1) - why DS is higher here? ups fixed

Hard
  1. 00:25:020 (2) - move to 312 56? fixed in kytoxid's mod
  2. 00:30:976 (6) - look "together" o.o?
  3. 00:47:300 (4) - one grid up? okay
  4. 01:16:858 (5) - slider 1/2? (delete 6-circle), fits better to vocal aa i prefer this
  5. 01:34:947 - 01:42:005 - That part need a little fix in my opinion. You not accenting 1/4 beats where they should be. Look:
    01:35:388 (2,3,4) - here u put 3 1/4 circles (u should stay 1/2 here) when here 01:36:491 - u hear strong beat and u didnt accent that. My english suck so i will show u on screen lol (Thats how it should look in my opinion) i understand your mean without SS actually ahaha, you're right so added note in 01:36:491 - , thanks 4 notice ~

    01:38:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The same here, u should add circles here 01:40:020 and here 01:40:902 (and maybe delete here 01:39:138 (2) )fixed
  6. 02:22:594 (8,9,10) - Try this? aa not bad but i wanna make hard in here ^^
  7. 02:36:711 (5,6,7) - ^
  8. 03:33:182 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
  9. 02:57:888 (6,7,8) - maybe accent beat here? fixed with mine ~
  10. 03:05:608 (6) - move to 156 52 i prefer my flow here ><

Normal
  1. 00:23:476 (5) - move to 180 140
  2. 01:41:123 (5) - move to 140 104 fixed both
  3. 03:02:300 (3) - delete and put circle here 03:02:520 ? aa no due heavy music in whitetick
  4. 03:06:711 (1) - That slider need a little fix, use this code okay
    208,272,186711,6,0,B|304:320|464:264|480:128|432:80|360:32|288:80|240:128|256:264|416:320|512:272,1,720,4|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 03:42:447 (6) - move to 03:42:667 ? it is hard for newbie imo

Good luck :)

Natsu wrote:

HI~ Xinely Hi Natsu ~

General:
  1. Unused Image Files
    sb\sakura flower.png
    sb\sakura tree.png removed
  2. Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning fixed in Kytoxid's mod

Together:
  1. 00:01:418 (1) - move this one a little down to y:248 to be in line with 00:00:536 (1) - just for better design
  2. 00:05:830 (2) - maybe you can lower a little the volume on the tail of this one cuz 00:05:830 (2) - this spot dont have sound and when you play it sound really bad imo
  3. 00:11:786 lol really nazy but this one 1 grid up to make the triplet curve more noticeable owo
  4. 00:13:771 what about to add a circle with whistle here and start the spinner in 00:13:881 sound alot better with the melody imo
  5. 00:19:726 This beat dont have sound in the music I suggest you to remove it In my opinion this kid of calm sound are alot better If you always follow the music like it is
  6. 00:25:020 (2) - this slider play really bad orz it start in a offbeat with almost no sound on it why you dont try to convert this 00:24:800 in 1/2 slider and add a circle here 00:25:241 with clap like:
  7. 00:25:902 bad snapping actually there is not sound the vocal start in 00:26:013 listen it to 25%
  8. 00:27:667 symilar ^
  9. 00:27:888 (1,2) - this slider end kinda weird is not better if they finish following the music properly like:
  10. 00:30:976 nothing in the music here like 00:19:726
  11. 00:31:858 nothing in the music here this circle should be here 00:31:969
  12. 00:32:961 symilar case ^
  13. 00:35:829 this spot have a important sound in the music and should be mapped imo
  14. 00:36:491 this spot feel empty since are music on it
  15. 00:39:358 same as 00:35:829 this downbeat should be mapped need a hit action imo
  16. 00:42:888 (3) - this one should finish in 00:43:439
  17. 00:43:550 this one is not following nothing it should be in 00:43:660
  18. 00:45:094 (7,8) - same here they are not correctly snapped should be in 1/8 both of them alot of symilar case owo im lazy to point all of them maybe you can check your map at 25% again x_x
  19. 00:46:417 add a circle here since you mapped 00:46:197 (2) - with exactly the same sound
  20. 00:56:123 this spinner is ok for a normal but in a hard should be mapped properly imo kinda kill the flow of the map
  21. 01:17:079 nothing in the music here too
  22. 01:21:932 same as above also this one play really awkward
  23. 01:25:902 ^
  24. 01:27:005 ignoring clap sound? not mapping this part broke your hitsound patterns and rhythm imo
  25. 01:46:197 nothing in the music here it make sense if was snapped here with vocals 01:46:086
  26. 02:20:608 (5,5) - stack they perfect
  27. 02:46:417 kiai end here is not better if you add a circle to empathize the music better and start the spinner in 02:46:527
  28. 03:30:755 this rhythm dont follow the music sound weird also it have 2 repeats I personaly cant read it in first game and broke my combo T.T
  29. 03:41:344 (2) - Symilar to above maybe tray atleast to 1/4 sliders instead of the 2 repeats?

Hard:
  1. 00:28:550 symilar case nothing in the music here but if you snap it in 00:28:439 it make sense wiuth the vocals "do" still have sound in blue tick so i guess is not overmapped xD but i will change when someone tell again
  2. 00:29:432 same as above ^ ^
  3. 00:30:976 nothing in the music here better remove it x_x oki
  4. 00:33:844 (6,7) - Distance? the jump is kinda hard to read cuz nothing suggest you it or swap the NC here 00:34:505 (7,1) -
  5. 00:41:123 (8,9) - symilar case as above hard to read the antijump on first place owo maybe use the properly distance or swap the NC 00:41:564 (9,1) -
  6. 00:46:858 nothing in the music here too..
  7. 00:48:844 same as above
  8. 00:50:167 ^
  9. 01:11:785 ^ and alot of symilar cases x_X
  10. 01:45:094 (5,1) - swap NC like I suggest you in other symilar parts
  11. 01:51:932 nothing here in the music it have to be in 01:51:822
  12. 02:02:961 (8,1) - fix the distance play awkward
  13. 02:22:594 (8) - try to stack the tail with previous 02:21:050 (2) - actually look really bad
  14. 02:50:608 use 2 circles better this repeat dont play really nice after the single tap here 02:49:726 (2,3,4,5) - also it feel bad cuz you dont map this one
  15. 02:50:498 x_x
  16. 02:57:447 (5) - cttl G? make a better jump pattern for me and get better flow than the actual way

Normal:
  1. OD 4 HP 4 AR 5 fit this diff best also for better diff spread~ actually the jumpp from normal to hard is kinda big since easiest diff, i prefer use AR 4 and hard for ar 7 ><
  2. 00:03:183 (2) - distance im being so much nazi?x_x what happen with distance? it's used 1,00 same as others
  3. 02:55:902 (5,1) - dont stack beats on the easy diff or the map newbies cant read/play them also break the flow and the nice gameplay of this diff but this is 1/4 xD , unstacked make more confuse

owo GL Xinely moe owo

happy623 wrote:

yo

General

  1. seems something is missed : removed the code
  2. together800x600.png - i feel this pic is compressed and did not look nice ;w; or try to resize it again?, if you cant make it, you can give me your original picture and I will cut one for you talked in game and thanks 4 BG :3

Normal

  1. 02:56:123 (1,2) - hmmm, I guess this blanket can be twisted better tried to make better
  2. 03:13:770 (1) - try to place it in the center already :P

Hard

  1. remove Widescreen support and turn on the display epilepsy warning need widescreen support due i'm not resize at well, i not use epilepsy due no repetitive flash or pulse, relax SB ahahaha
  2. 01:59:652 (1,3) - it isnt a nice blanket, try to move 02:00:535 (3) a grid down
  3. 03:00:535 (3) - ^ both fixed

Together

  1. Same as Hard, remove Widescreen support and tick the display epilepsy warning [color=#FF0000]same as Hard[/color]
  2. 01:26:123 (5) - move the last anchor a grid up, to make this slider symmetrical fixed in previous mod
    l

nothing much to say, star (´ω`)/
Thanks 4 mods and stars all <3

Under construction for reply others
@Natsu : i know the overmapped but if i'm not map the overmapped, it will be weird than mine i guess, in 00:31:858 (2) - , it's so weird when i use 1/8 as vocal. so idk what i must to do, lemme see others mod

@Sonnyc : since i'm lazy add post count, almost fixed in your mod, helpful :3

Updated with Hinsvar's
Sonnyc
Normal:

00:23:035 (4) - Delete Note feels better imo.
00:24:358 (1) - ctrl+G for flow?
01:40:682 (4,1) - Similar above.
02:43:770 (3) - Uhh,, Drum at the end felt weird to me.
03:33:844 (5) - Mmm.. Delete?

Hard:

01:41:785 (9) - Delete Note to emphasize lyrics?
01:47:961 (6) - NC? Since it follows the background music.
01:52:373 (8) - Uhh,, consider deleting. This jump didn't felt nice.

Together:

00:46:417 - Strongly suggest to fill this blank. It feels too weird.
00:55:902 (9) - Umm,, felt quite irregular for this mini jump.
01:11:123 (3,4) - This jump felt quite large. Rather move (3) to somewhere like (272,56)?
01:46:417 (1) - Felt like a useless NC. It makes the previous combo too short, and hope you to remove it. If your intention was to emphasize the instrument, just keeping with the lyric may be better.
01:53:917 (2) - Not sure about this note. Deleting may fit the song better imo.
02:05:829 (1) - Removing NC will be better, but fine to keep if you want to distribute the pattern.
02:52:483 (10,1) - Umm.. keep distance?
02:54:248 (6,1) - ^?
03:06:711 (1) - Remove the clap at the reverse.
03:30:755 (4) - Add reverse?
03:34:836 - Imo, Soft:2 feels better in the timeline.

Starting 02:17:300, 75% volume feels tooooo loud compared to the music. You may want to reduce the volume a bit.
Hinsvar

Sonnyc wrote:

Together:

01:46:417 (1) - Felt like a useless NC. It makes the previous combo too short, and hope you to remove it. If your intention was to emphasize the instrument, just keeping with the lyric may be better. ...Okay, removed the NC.
01:53:917 (2) - Not sure about this note. Deleting may fit the song better imo. There is still some sort of instrument sounds on that spot...
02:05:829 (1) - Removing NC will be better, but fine to keep if you want to distribute the pattern. Yeah no. It's used to emphasize that a different pattern begins there.
03:30:755 (4) - Add reverse? The instrument only plays every 1/8 beats until 03:31:086, so now, because it will be overmapped that way.
03:34:836 - Imo, Soft:2 feels better in the timeline. Okay, fixed.
Thanks for the mod!

lol
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460,268,222667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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-Srui-
Hi~ :3

[Normal]
  • 00:51:711 (4) - opposite slider. maybe it is look like better.
    00:56:123 (1) - wow, i like this slider >w<
    01:39:358 (3) - reduce some curve
    02:09:358 (4) - opposite slider

    [Hard]
    • Nice :3

      [Together]
      • Nice :3
Tari
Hmm okay , wow really nice sb :D, you really put the emotion in your map.

General
[General]

  1. You should make sure you have the epilepsy warning on all diffs, if your using the flashing SB for all diffs at least.
  2. The kiai's are slightly different so I assume its not intentional.
Normal
[Normal]

  1. 00:21:711 (3) - With low volume I can hear this piano sound more clearly than any other of the piano sounds, how about adding a whistle to accompany this loud sound?
  2. 00:29:652 (3) - ^ to remain consistent.
  3. 01:20:829 (1) - don't you think whistle would sound better to match with : 01:06:711 (1) - ? Either make both finish or whistle.
  4. 02:38:476 (1) - ^
  5. 01:36:270 (4) - Just some more some choices to hitsounds, but changing the sampleset of the slider end to normal makes it sound alot better in this part, because of that certain beat.
  6. 01:42:005 (1) - ^ to the end of the slider
  7. 01:47:299 (3) - ^
  8. 01:49:947 (2) - ^
  9. 01:57:005 (3) - ^
  10. 02:54:358 (3) - Change the slider end sampleset to drum?

Hard
[Hard]

  1. 00:19:064 (1) - This part can use more whistles, I won't mention them all because this can be done on your liking :P
  2. 00:33:844 (6) - I think its a bit overmapped because there nothing in the blue tick? I think removing the circle at the blue tick will be better
  3. 00:40:020 (5) - Little overmapped again for a hard, that being said can you extend the slider to the white tick? It'll fit loads better in terms of vocals
  4. 00:50:388 (3) - Whistle to the end fits , and there seems to be a lack of them here,
  5. 01:02:079 (6,7) - I'd say use slider here, puts more focus on the vocals here and so it matches with 01:12:667 (6) -
  6. 01:10:902 (2) - Whistle to the end here? it sounds nice with the piano
  7. 01:20:167 (5) - ^ but to the start
  8. 01:15:535 (3) - Curve this slider up, so it looks more nice and to add some variety, like this : http://puu.sh/4SBdY.jpg
  9. 01:23:917 (5) - A jump to the next note makes sense and feels good to me, how about you reverse by means of ctrl+G
  10. 01:36:711 (1) - Like in normal, normal-hitnormal sounds nice here
  11. 01:38:476 (1) - ^
  12. 01:40:241 (6) - ^
  13. 01:42:005 (1) - ^ you know what I mean by now
  14. 01:51:491 (5,6,7) - Little overmapped in my view, it would better like this : http://puu.sh/4SBuA.jpg
  15. 01:53:917 (3) - This here, needs to be stacked properly
  16. 01:57:667 (5,6,7,8) - Can you remove note 8 here and move this whole thing 1/4th tick forward , I think it feels much better and more natural because note 5 should be obviously clickable when stacked.
  17. 02:22:594 (8) - Stack properly, looks badly overlapped
  18. 02:25:682 (3) - ^ by moving up this time.
  19. 02:34:505 (7,8) - Slider? it feels more fitting and makes the jump to the next note less harsh.
  20. 02:44:652 (7,8) - Move this whole thing down, so 8 can be stacked properly (again)
  21. 02:57:005 (4) - Ctrl+G this jump will make this note actually make the finish start stand out more
  22. 03:05:829 (7,8,9) - Would be way better, if you can curve this rather than making it a straight line, the reason for making it curved is slider 9 here, its direction makes the whole pattern a little curvy http://puu.sh/4TsDf.jpg
  23. 03:28:991 (3) - Why such short spacing here? doesn't make sense

Together
[Together]

  1. 00:40:902 (6) - Why all of a sudden the stacks get bad at the higher diffs :<
  2. 01:09:138 (6) - Use a slider instead for this, like something like this :
  3. 01:19:064 (4) - Put that little blanket in the end of the slider to good use and do something like this : http://puu.sh/4TteD.jpg
  4. 01:43:770 (1,2,3,4) - Improve the curve here it looks ugly! http://puu.sh/4Ttk2.jpg
  5. 01:57:005 (1,2) - Is this part of your style? it may be hard to read for others
  6. Wow, the kiai and parts after don't have to super crazy mapped like that, thats forcing more the difficulty where your suppose to map to the song orz

Hinsvar mapping in Together fits really well, its not mapped to where its maxed out
Topic Starter
Xinely
thanks 4 mods ~
fix all in Srui and almost all in Tari's mod
if you feel 2nd kiai time together too much crazy. ask the music why so many 1/8 stream xP

Updated~
James2250
[General]
All checks out, SB is nicely done

[Normal]
02:26:123 (4) - whistle to match previous pattern?
02:27:888 (1) - ^
02:54:358 (3) - hitsound sounds out of place to me here

[Hard]
00:29:432 (4,5) - soft part of the music and the jump doesn't really fit
00:34:064 (6) - clap?
00:42:667 (4,5) - same spacing comment (same for other parts but I guess they can stay for now unless anyone else mentions it)
01:34:947 (1) - much louder than it needs to be, I prefer how Normal does it. The song gets louder but not to that amount
02:17:300 (1) - again louder than I think it needs to be - same for the rest
02:54:138 (4,5) - don't think spacing change is needed

[Together]
Wont complain about jumps during the slow parts but I still wish there were less of them, I don't mind during kiai though
(Too many streams on peaceful part, ahhhh)
The louder finish sounds don't stand out as much as Hard, but I think turning them down slightly wouldn't hurt
00:25:241 (2) - clap
01:54:358 (1,2,3) - odd spacing
02:23:476 (3) - expected this to be a clap
03:04:947 (1,2,3,4) - keep spacing consistent
03:30:755 (4), 03:37:814 (2), 03:41:344 (2) - not a big fan of these sliders, they just break the flow of this section and don't really follow anything

Nicely done mapset, I think the jumps take away from the peaceful nature of the song at some points but good job overall, stared.
alacat
Hi.

[General]
  1. Please check kiai time at " Together diff ". 01:13:660 - .
  2. 00:51:711 - ~ width ... xD I thought when I saw, this is unnatural.
    800x600
  3. How about adding the album name in tag ? "over the rainbow" .
[Normal]
  1. 01:20:929 - This green line is unnecessary.
  2. 00:13:771 (3,1) - try to change spinner at here. 00:13:771 - ~ 00:15:536 -
    it is better to follow the piano sound. same as your previous part. Don't forget to add a whistle. 00:15:536 -
  3. 00:19:064 - ,00:22:594 - ,00:26:123 - add a whistle. why don't you put sound with constant rhythm for beginner?
  4. 00:23:476 (4) - Try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the flow.
  5. 00:24:358 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
  6. 00:47:741 (2) - suggestion of the design. x:300 / y:164.
  7. 00:59:211 (2) - I recommend you to put the center same as previous heart slider. looks better imo :3
  8. 01:21:711 (3) - Please try to rotate this slider around -20°, you could improve this flow a bit.
  9. 01:42:336 (1) - moving the 3rd slider point to 3 for blanket.
  10. 01:45:535 (1) - o_O please check this spacing :3
  11. 02:42:005 (1,3) - i guess it is confusing many beginners. try to remake this ?
  12. 02:54:358 (3) - remove drum sound from the tail since it follows nothing.
  13. 02:55:461 (4,5) - i feel this part is hard. I recommend you to use one slider.
  14. 03:33:182 (4,5) - ,03:40:241 (3,4) - ^ same as reason. one slider please.
  15. 03:45:094 - volume up to 30 ~ 40% i can't hear whistel sound. or Remove whistle.
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:770 (3,4,5) - Make the spacing equal here.I want to put 1.2x spacing :3
  2. 00:34:064 (6) - clap
  3. 00:42:005 (3,4,5) - same as here.
  4. 00:47:079 - add a note. it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing.
  5. 00:54:800 (6) - add a new combo same as your pattern. 02:12:447 (6) -
  6. 01:13:108 (7) - emm... too big jump x.x please reduce it around ~2.5x
  7. 01:28:550 (2) - add a finish.
  8. 01:49:505 (1) - remove whistle from the tail since it follows nothing.
  9. 01:59:652 (1,2,3) - same as here.
  10. 02:12:447 (6) - add a new combo from here , following the vocal.
  11. 02:16:969 - add a note ?
  12. 02:46:197 (2) - whistle or finish
  13. 02:52:594 (1) - Try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the flow.
  14. 03:04:947 (5) - i want a jump here, same as 02:54:358 (5) -
  15. 03:06:050 - suggestion of the rhythm.
  16. 03:42:006 (1) - i feel the curve slider is better in this part.
[Together]
  1. 00:00:536 (1,2,1) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
  2. 00:17:400 - unsnapped.
  3. 00:25:241 (2) - clap
  4. 00:25:902 - add a note ? if you follow the vocal in this part.
  5. 00:46:638 (4) - i want to put jump here. Because it is strong sound !
  6. 01:05:608 (6) - add whistle to the head of the slider.
  7. 01:16:638 (7) - move to 160/32 ?
  8. 02:41:123 (4) - add clap to the head of the slider.
  9. 03:27:005 (3) - suggestion of the flow.
  10. 03:30:755 (4) - it doesn't follow the music also i guess it is confusing many players. it is better to put 3 hits or this rhythm : http://puu.sh/4VvSi.jpg
  11. 03:37:814 (2) - ,03:41:344 (2) - ^ same as reason.
  12. 03:32:741 (4) - whistle
  13. 03:41:123 (1) - try to put normal sound and remove finish. same as your pattern.03:37:594 (1) - ,03:39:358 (1) -
I remembered my map. :?

Good Luck.
Topic Starter
Xinely
thanks james alacat ~
it was very helpful
fixed all XD

Updated
@alacat : i will mod yours after exams =w=
Hinsvar

James2250 wrote:

[Together]
01:54:358 (1,2,3) - odd spacing This follows the pitch of the instrument and vocal here, I suppose?
03:30:755 (4), 03:37:814 (2), 03:41:344 (2) - not a big fan of these sliders, they just break the flow of this section and don't really follow anything I won't make a slider like this so randomly. In fact, I think these are the rare times where a short slider with two repeats actually works.

alacat wrote:

[Together]
  1. 03:30:755 (4) - it doesn't follow the music also i guess it is confusing many players. it is better to put 3 hits or this rhythm : http://puu.sh/4VvSi.jpg No. I'm not sure about how long have I talked about this.
  2. 03:37:814 (2) - ,03:41:344 (2) - ^ same as reason. ^
  3. 03:32:741 (4) - whistle Okay.
  4. 03:41:123 (1) - try to put normal sound and remove finish. same as your pattern.03:37:594 (1) - ,03:39:358 (1) - Reduced the volume instead.
Thanks for the mods, guys!

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372,240,153182,6,0,P|412:176|368:96,1,134.999995880127,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,92,153623,2,0,L|276:96,1,89.9999972534181
152,52,154064,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,192,154285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,228,154395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,260,154505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,284,154616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,300,154726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,280,154947,6,0,L|448:280,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,280,155388,2,0,P|492:232|480:184,1,89.9999972534181
272,104,155829,2,0,P|312:112|362:104,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,128,156270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,128,156380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,128,156491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,156711,6,0,L|136:128,1,134.999995880127,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,157152,2,0,L|232:192,1,89.9999972534181
256,316,157594,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,256,157814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,228,157925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,158035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,156,158145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,158255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,158476,6,0,P|196:192|160:128,1,134.999995880127,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,96,158917,2,0,L|32:96,1,89.9999972534181
60,288,159358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,292,159579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,216,159800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,180,159910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,144,160020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,44,160241,6,0,P|408:32|472:68,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,100,160682,2,0,P|488:148|464:196,1,89.9999972534181
432,276,161123,2,0,L|328:308,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,312,161454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,324,161564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,161675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,328,161785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,136,162005,6,0,P|260:136|320:92,1,134.999995880127,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,162447,2,0,P|352:144|416:200,1,89.9999972534181
508,300,162888,2,0,L|392:300,1,89.9999972534181,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,328,163329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,308,163439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,284,163550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,163770,6,0,P|236:128|268:48,1,134.999995880127,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,56,164211,2,0,L|404:108,1,89.9999972534181
472,192,164652,1,4,1:0:0:0:
424,320,164873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,272,165094,2,0,L|292:328,2,44.999998626709
168,188,165535,6,0,P|247:176|309:86,1,179.999994506836,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,48,166197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,166417,12,0,168623,0:0:0:0:
96,240,169064,6,0,P|152:256|192:300,1,112.5,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,320,169505,2,0,L|304:280,1,75
452,152,169947,2,0,L|352:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,112,170388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,170498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,104,170608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,108,170719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,116,170829,6,0,P|100:148|60:172,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,171270,2,0,P|64:316|57:279,1,75
236,336,171711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,264,171932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,240,172042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,172152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,182,172263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,152,172373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,128,172483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,108,172594,6,0,P|252:120|192:108,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,108,173035,2,0,P|132:104|68:120,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,173697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,268,173807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,296,173917,2,0,L|96:308,1,75
72,308,174248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,308,174358,6,0,P|8:255|34:191,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,176,174800,2,0,L|124:176,1,75
244,108,175241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,152,175461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,180,175572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,208,175682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,236,175792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,256,175902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,260,176013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,252,176123,6,0,L|256:336,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,340,176454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,352,176564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,344,176785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,184,177005,2,0,L|56:268,1,75,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,272,177447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,244,177557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,216,177667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,177777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,168,177888,6,0,P|172:140|140:88,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,72,178329,2,0,L|40:108,1,75
40,248,178770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,340,178991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,340,179101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,336,179211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,328,179322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,312,179432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,104,179652,6,0,P|372:169|334:237,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,180,180314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,164,180535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,296,180755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,316,180866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,332,180976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,336,181086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,340,181197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,332,181307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,320,181417,6,0,P|244:352|292:360,2,75,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
288,248,182079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,172,182300,2,0,P|384:136|383:78,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,76,182630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,56,182741,2,0,L|272:44,1,75
156,92,183182,6,0,L|96:180,1,75,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,180,183513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,208,183623,2,0,L|120:288,1,75
332,312,184064,2,0,P|364:264|352:200,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,184505,2,0,L|240:184,1,75
232,180,184836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,180,184947,6,0,P|136:192|88:148,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,144,185388,2,0,L|86:69,1,75
192,40,185829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,104,186050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,186160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,186270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,186380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,186491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,186711,6,0,B|356:132|400:224|368:296|296:292|260:348|260:348|220:292|152:280|120:224|160:132|236:192,2,539.999983520508,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,190351,12,4,192005,0:0:0:0:
256,188,193770,5,4,0:0:0:0:
88,200,206123,6,0,P|80:152|120:96,1,101.249996910095,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,84,206564,2,0,L|216:64,1,67.4999979400635
300,120,207005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,240,207226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,224,207447,2,0,P|404:256|388:308,2,67.4999979400635,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
360,144,208108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,112,208329,2,0,P|264:68|280:20,1,89.9999972534181
364,12,208770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,64,208991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,152,209211,2,0,L|508:172,2,44.999998626709
328,272,209652,6,0,P|264:296|208:252,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,232,210094,2,0,P|184:272|156:320,1,89.9999972534181,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,364,210535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,280,210755,2,0,P|40:264|20:256,3,44.999998626709
280,284,211417,6,0,P|288:216|260:148,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,132,211858,2,0,P|240:88|260:40,2,89.9999972534181,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,120,212520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,172,212741,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,204,212851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,240,212961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,336,213182,6,0,P|252:312|188:336,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,356,213623,2,0,L|184:264,1,89.9999972534181,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,120,214064,5,8,0:0:0:0:
180,60,214285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,60,214395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,60,214505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,124,214726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,48,214947,6,0,P|444:112|420:184,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,196,215388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,224,215608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,144,215829,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,80,216050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,120,216270,2,0,L|348:60,2,44.999998626709,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,216711,6,0,P|140:264|80:216,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,200,217152,2,0,L|64:300,1,89.9999972534181
256,352,217594,5,4,1:0:0:0:
336,308,217814,2,0,P|356:292|368:268,3,44.999998626709
365,275,218476,6,0,P|344:208|360:144,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,124,218917,2,0,L|272:136,1,89.9999972534181
88,36,219358,5,0,1:0:0:0:
48,116,219579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,188,219800,2,0,L|80:240,2,44.999998626709
252,92,220241,6,0,P|280:156|272:228,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,240,220682,2,0,L|368:256,1,89.9999972534181
472,144,221123,5,4,0:0:0:0:
404,88,221344,2,0,L|412:40,3,44.999998626709
232,244,222005,6,0,P|308:308|408:316,1,179.999994506836,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,268,222667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,222888,12,2,225204,0:0:0:0:
Leorda
Hi there...

[Storyboard]
SB\together800x600.png - This image looks cut off on side, so it makes ugly to look. Use vector scale and scale it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1058255 Do this again at 02:17:741 and 03:27:888


[Hard]
00:29:432 (4) - Spacing error?
00:46:197 (2) - Move this to 00:46:417 and add note at 00:46:197 for making a better rhythm?
00:52:152 (6) - Move 2 grid left for allign? (nazi)
01:13:108 (7) - Add clap at tail slider?


[Together]
00:38:035 (7) - Reverse this for making a circular flow?


Good luck~
Andrea
~General~
  1. The file "bg.jpg" seems to be codeless in the storyboard, fix that.
  2. Disable the Widescreen Support on all of the difficulties, this SB is not widescreen.
~Normal~
  1. 00:30:535 (5,1) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack these two circles together since it might be confusing for beginners to read.
  2. 03:13:770 (1) - This circle isn't perfectly centered actually, you should move it 1 grid down to be perfect.
~Hard~
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  1. 00:25:682 (3,4) - This small jump somehow doesn't fit here, since you've used consistent spacing on the rest.
  2. 00:28:770 (3,4,5) - Why is the spacing bigger here? Make it consistent.
  3. 00:42:005 (3,4,5) - ^ And similiar patterns like this, I won't mention the others like that.
  4. 01:12:005 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the jumpy pattern.
  5. 01:35:388 (2,3,4) - Why is the spacing so large here once again? Please make it like the others.
  6. 01:43:329 (3,4) - This small jump somehow doesn't fit here, since you've used consistent spacing on the rest.
  7. 01:47:300 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  8. 01:47:961 (1) - Remove the new combo from here afterwards.
  9. 01:59:652 (1,2,3) - I know you wanted to make a blanket here and stuff, but please make the spacing consistent once again.
  10. 02:04:505 (3) - Move this slider to the right side so you won't also have this small jump, plays better to me.
  11. 02:22:594 (8) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change, also because the spacing becomes quiet again.
  12. 02:40:241 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the jumpy pattern.
  13. 02:42:005 (1) - The normal finish at the end of this slider sounds too loud, lower the volume of it please.
  14. 02:44:652 (7) - ^ It's on the beginning here though.
  15. 02:54:138 (4,5) - Why the jump here? The music doesn't really call for it. If you want to keep it, add a new combo at least.
  16. 02:57:005 (4) - Same volume issue for the normal hitfinish.
  17. 02:58:770 (9) - You should add a normal finish at the beginning of this slider too imo.
  18. 03:01:858 (5) - Lower the volume on this as well.
  19. 03:06:270 (6) - ^
  20. 03:10:241 (1) - ^
  21. 03:26:123 (1) - ^ And so on, won't mention the rest.
  22. 03:29:653 (6) - Add a new combo here due to the jumpy pattern.
  23. 03:36:712 (5) - ^
~Together~
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  2. I would simply rename this difficulty to "Insane".
  1. 01:01:417 (4,5,6,7) - The spacing on this pattern is inconsistent from each object, make sure to fix it properly.
  2. 01:21:711 (2) - The stack here could be improved if you disable the grid snap.
  3. 03:30:755 (4) - It feels like this slider is missing a repeat here.
  4. 03:37:814 (2) - Same as above.
  5. 03:39:358 (1) - Add a finish here, it fits perfectly with the music.
  6. 03:41:344 (2) - Once again, add another repeat here.
The last difficulty is really calm until the 2nd kiai then it gets a lot of streams out of nowhere, they're completely overmapped and doesn't fit on such a calm song if you ask me.
Topic Starter
Xinely

Leorda wrote:

Hi there...

[Storyboard]
SB\together800x600.png - This image looks cut off on side, so it makes ugly to look. Use vector scale and scale it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1058255 Do this again at 02:17:741 and 03:27:888 nice idea Leo-san , fixed ><


[Hard]
00:29:432 (4) - Spacing error?
00:46:197 (2) - Move this to 00:46:417 and add note at 00:46:197 for making a better rhythm? no for this i prefer follow piano in blue tick
00:52:152 (6) - Move 2 grid left for allign? (nazi)
01:13:108 (7) - Add clap at tail slider?


[Together]
00:38:035 (7) - Reverse this for making a circular flow? too much hard for relax song, i wanna keep mine


Good luck~
@Andrea : it's fixed all, i tried to remap the streams and it will be fine now i hope you can check it's fine or not this song, since i heard sound in all 1/8 that i mapped, i just remove a little and make them slider instead
about name i want to keep due http://osu.ppy.sh/s/64564

thanks 4 mods and Updated~
Hinsvar
There's already a finish at 03:39:358 (1).

And don't bother suggesting to add a repeat to those three sliders anymore, please. I would've added one on all of them if a sound from the instruments were there. There is none, though, in fact.

Please don't ever, EVER complain about the three sliders anymore, unless you can prove that there's a sound I can follow on the tick after the yellow ones where those sliders ended. And no, don't use flow reasons or awkwardness; adding a repeat will make them more awkward, actually.

Thanks for modding, and thanks for reading.
Andrea
My only problem is that they are really weird to play, rhythm is fine actually.
Hinsvar

Andrea wrote:

My only problem is that they are really weird to play, rhythm is fine actually.
Hmm, then can you give any suggestion about how should I fix the problem, in case you are talking about my 1/8 sliders with two repeats? :D

Problem solved; made them triplets instead.

Only the third kiai time here ``
88,200,206123,6,0,P|80:152|120:96,1,101.249996910095,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,84,206564,2,0,L|216:64,1,67.4999979400635
300,120,207005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,240,207226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,224,207447,2,0,P|404:256|388:308,2,67.4999979400635,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
360,144,208108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,112,208329,2,0,P|264:68|280:20,1,89.9999972534181
364,12,208770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,64,208991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,152,209211,2,0,L|508:172,2,44.999998626709
328,272,209652,6,0,P|264:296|208:252,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,232,210094,2,0,P|184:272|156:320,1,89.9999972534181,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,364,210535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,280,210755,2,0,P|40:264|20:256,2,44.999998626709,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,280,211417,6,0,P|120:256|176:208,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,176,211858,2,0,P|180:132|200:84,2,89.9999972534181,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,212520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,176,212741,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,208,212851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,244,212961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,332,213182,6,0,P|192:308|128:332,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,352,213623,2,0,L|124:260,1,89.9999972534181,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,120,214064,5,8,0:0:0:0:
180,60,214285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,60,214395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,60,214505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Xinely
Updated
Kyouren
Go for Hinely!!
Irreversible


I want a new banner :( haha

Here's the requestsed IRC mod~

IRC mod
17:21 *Irreversible is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/303207 Kuraki Mai - Mou Ichido]
17:21 Irreversible: ~
17:21 Xinely: aa yay \:D/
17:23 Irreversible: We can go for an irc mod, as you said
17:23 Xinely: okay >w<
17:28 Irreversible: kk, let's goo :D
17:28 Xinely: ready ~
17:30 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/303108 Kuraki Mai - Mou Ichido [Normal]]
17:30 Irreversible: 00:04:065 (3,1) - i'd move this a tiny bit to the right to align them more properly,
17:30 Irreversible: very nazi tho
17:32 Xinely: aa okay fixed ><
17:32 Irreversible: 00:04:947 (1,2,3) - I can see what you're trying here, although i don't really like how you've done it; here's my suggestion: 00:06:712 (3,4,5) - mark those three and then move it to 416 112, so it gets more like a triangle shape
17:32 Irreversible: it looks so oddly straight right now
17:32 Irreversible: there shouldn't be too much fixing stuff with DS, because of the spinner
17:33 Xinely: seems better, fixed ~
17:34 Irreversible: 00:24:358 (1,2,3,4,1) - : http://puu.sh/54OMV.jpg doesn't that flower pattern look nice? ^-^~ you should try it, the current pattern seems a bit uncreative, no offense! it's good to play, but just some aesthetic stuff :)
17:37 Xinely: beautiful <3 , fixed ~
17:38 Irreversible: 00:32:300 (3) - blanket, i don't need to explain this i hope :o
17:38 Irreversible: aesthetics, if you need the reason. lol if it was on purpose, leave it
17:39 Xinely: always can't make a perfect blanket orz sorry ;3;
17:39 Irreversible: mhm, it's enough if you move the last white point a bit
17:40 Irreversible: the problem is, that the natural flow is a bit broken 00:32:300 (3,4) - here.
17:40 Xinely: aaa yap, i changed it become different pattern
17:40 Irreversible: 00:28:770 (2,3) - same here, i can show you what's the problem, you often have it :
17:41 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/54P4n.jpg
17:41 Irreversible: check this out
17:41 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/54P64.jpg
17:41 Irreversible: and then this.
17:42 Xinely: it's changed because make a flower pattern, i need to re spacing it
17:42 Xinely: like this now http://puu.sh/54P8E.jpg
17:43 Irreversible: yeah about this problem shown above,
17:43 Irreversible: i won't mention this anymore, could you go over the map and check that? I'll focus on the other stuff a bit now :o
17:43 Xinely: okay
17:43 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/54PbB.jpg 00:48:182 (3,1,2) - this won't look as close placed as before
17:44 Irreversible: 01:17:300 (1) - IT'S A BIT TOO STRAIGHT, MOVE IT A BIT UP (MAYBE 136 88?)
17:44 Irreversible: omg sorry caps :C
17:45 Xinely: yap fixed both, lol don't worry xD
17:45 Irreversible: 01:35:829 (3,4) - this rhythm isn't really consistent to the rest i've seen so far, also it sounds a bit odd to my ears; ctrl + g (only rhythm?) see how it works for you
17:47 Xinely: aa okay ctrl+g it
17:48 Irreversible: 01:55:241 (4,1) - align, same reason as before
17:48 Irreversible: 01:56:564 (2) - and make a slight triangle :o looks cuter . (320 28) or so.
17:50 Xinely: okay both are fixed
17:52 Irreversible: back
17:52 Irreversible: ah vfor this triangle issue, i can see this alot of times
17:52 Irreversible: remember, if things aren't really straight all the time it looks more interesting, at least I think so
17:52 Irreversible: if you disagree it's ok :3
17:52 Irreversible: and sometimes straight things are good too
17:52 Irreversible: :b
17:53 Xinely: ah i see, okay i will try to change many triangle to make them better ~
17:53 Irreversible: 03:37:594 (5) - this hitsound is a bit too loud :(
17:53 Irreversible: it doesn't fit the mood.
17:53 Irreversible: maybe even normal is too much
17:54 Xinely: or maybe use drum? O.o
17:54 Irreversible: oh maybe :o
17:55 Xinely: aa okay2 ><
17:56 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/303107 Kuraki Mai - Mou Ichido [Hard]]
17:58 Irreversible: just testplayed it,
17:58 Irreversible: but of the time it seems good but some of the jumsp doesn't fit really, it's a really calm song
17:59 Irreversible: and some untidy stuff, but not a big deal i guess
17:59 Xinely: example? ><
17:59 Irreversible: yeah i'll come to that
17:59 Irreversible: haha
18:00 Xinely: lol okay2 ~
18:01 Irreversible: 00:04:947 (1) - i would make the straight part a bit bigger.
18:01 Irreversible: so it looks a bit more consistent
18:01 Irreversible: 00:20:829 (1,2,3) - in things like this it's important to keep the natural flow as good as possible:
18:02 Irreversible: try moving 3 to 268 268 and you'll see whta i mean
18:02 Xinely: http://puu.sh/54PWJ.jpg like this?
18:02 Irreversible: make the curve a bit bigger :3
18:02 Irreversible: i mean
18:02 Irreversible: rounder
18:02 Irreversible: pull the white round point a bit to the left
18:03 Xinely: okay
18:04 Irreversible: as said, rhythm is okay
18:04 Irreversible: there's just plenty untidy stuff
18:04 Irreversible: 01:26:785 (4,5,6) - should be aligned
18:04 Irreversible: 01:34:947 (1) - drum finish? as easy.
18:04 Irreversible: normal*
18:05 Xinely: fixed both ><
18:05 Irreversible: 01:42:005 (1,2,3,4) - what happened to this spacing here? any reason why you've increased it
18:05 Xinely: try to make better flow on 01:26:785
18:06 Irreversible: 01:47:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - well, i mean it works your way but again, i'd make it rounder.http://puu.sh/54Q7y.jpg
18:06 Irreversible: 01:58:770 (8,9,10) - this combo gets really high. you should place a NC here, i'd make it on 8 but that's up to you.
18:08 Irreversible: 02:20:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ...? technically it's okay but it's absolutely inconsitent to the rest of your map O_O you've never used such a high ds
18:08 Xinely: okay fixed the spacing (it was an accident =w=) , make it rounder, and NC'ed
18:08 Irreversible: 02:24:358 (1,2,3,4,5) - this should obviously be a curve haha but make it smoother :) or try it, i'm sure you can do that
18:11 Xinely: fixed the inconsistency (but actually it's a mini jump flower pattern lol) and make it curve smother ><
18:11 Irreversible: 02:49:064 - uhm.. i need an explanation for here. imo this is a calm part, why is the overall DS increased? shouldn't the kiai be like the most 'emphasized' part? o.o
18:11 Irreversible: i have to say, this part looks very nice
18:11 Irreversible: but still.
18:12 Irreversible: yeah and there is many more spacing stuff, but i would keep repeating myself, please go over your map again and fix those untidy things :/ but you're on a good way
18:12 Xinely: aaa, i forgot to make 1,0x orz
18:12 Xinely: fixed ><
18:14 Irreversible: just maybe my opinion
18:14 Irreversible: next time you should take effort on this from the beginning on, it saves you very much time
18:14 Irreversible: it doesn't affect the gameplay really. but that's what a map makes really good imo
18:14 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/303207 Kuraki Mai - Mou Ichido [Together]]
18:15 Irreversible: 00:37:594 (6) - NC? seems like a new sentence here.
18:15 Irreversible: 00:36:711 (2,3,4,5) - and i think you know what iwanna say here :)
18:16 Irreversible: 01:25:241 (3,4,5) - spacing looks a bit messed up here.
18:16 Xinely: fixed the spacing and go to together now
18:16 Xinely: about NC, i prefer to NC'ed every stanza
18:16 Irreversible: sure
18:17 Irreversible: 02:23:697 (4,1) - i'm not sure if i'm right but this is technically wrong
18:17 Irreversible: ops nvm i had it on 1/8
18:17 Irreversible: no. 02:23:697 (4) - this shouldn't start on a blue tick, 1/4 stuff is not really supposed to start on blue ticks
18:18 Irreversible: (? i'm confused now lol) http://puu.sh/54QE3.jpg try this, 3 = 02:23:476 -
18:19 Irreversible: insane looks cleaner
18:19 Xinely: but no sound in 02:23:586 - ><
18:19 Irreversible: well the 1/4 repeater is a bit misleading
18:20 Xinely: how about 1/8 stream? /runs
18:20 Irreversible: LOL
18:20 Irreversible: nono. haha
18:21 Xinely: it will be challenge for insane diff and not overmapped so why not ahahaha /slapped
18:24 Irreversible: haha xD
18:24 Irreversible: well, that's it i guess :o
18:24 Irreversible: hiope i could help,.
18:24 Irreversible: ^
18:24 Irreversible: hope i could help*
18:25 Xinely: it's was very helpful \:D/
18:25 Xinely: post it XD
18:25 Irreversible: sure

I love IRC mod. It's so great.

What we've fixed:
- Many many untidy things
- 1-2 rhythm issues
- DS issues, in hard (consistency)
- Improved the flow in hard mostly
- Blanket nazi-stuff in normal

Well, I guess the diff that you need to take care of now is hard, because there's still untidy stuff (according to natural flow, i've explained to you), modding won't help with that, you need to check it yourself I'd say, but you can ask me if there is something not clear.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Xinely
Arigatou irre,i will remap hard diff and maybe i will ask you to check again, it's better or not xD okay done, i tried remap the flow and reduce some jumps in hard to make it fit with song
updated

thanks again ~

Edit : aa gomen, remap flow i mean
Irreversible
You don't have to remap it o.o As said, the overall idea is fine, you could just work on the minor things which make a map even better.
YTYuyu
IRC mod :D

SPOILER
2013-10-31 23:13 Byakugan249: let's start with normal 
2013-10-31 23:15 Xinely: okay ready
2013-10-31 23:15 Xinely: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/303108 Kuraki Mai - Mou Ichido [Normal]]
2013-10-31 23:16 Byakugan249: orz i like how it took me 3mins just to load this map ;w;
2013-10-31 23:16 Xinely: Q_Q
2013-10-31 23:16 Xinely: asdf ><
2013-10-31 23:17 Byakugan249: 00:06:712 (3,4) - i think replacing this for a 1/2 slider would me more flowy for beginners during gameplay
2013-10-31 23:17 Byakugan249: also somewhat consistent
2013-10-31 23:18 Xinely: okay changed ~
2013-10-31 23:21 Byakugan249: 00:13:330 (2,3) - go right instead of left so that it'll be symmetrical to 00:11:565 (4) - like [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072070 this]
2013-10-31 23:22 Xinely: okay ~ :D
2013-10-31 23:24 Byakugan249: 00:21:270 (2,3) - align (2) to (5) and (3) to (1) so that it'll look more fun to follow since it's a zig-zag pattern, also change the shape of (3) to something like [http://puu.sh/55jVu.jpg this]
2013-10-31 23:25 Xinely: naisu idea \:D/ , zig zag it and changed (3)'s shape
2013-10-31 23:25 Byakugan249: :D
2013-10-31 23:26 Byakugan249: 00:27:888 (1) - i think you can move this down a bit so that it'll flow smoother andd easier for beginners to follow during gameplay
2013-10-31 23:27 Xinely: okay
2013-10-31 23:27 Xinely: changed (1)'s tail ~
2013-10-31 23:27 Byakugan249: hai >w<
2013-10-31 23:28 Byakugan249: 00:33:623 (4,5) - a 1/2 slider is more appropriate since it follows "ku" "ru" IMO
2013-10-31 23:29 Xinely: hai >w<
2013-10-31 23:29 Byakugan249: 00:42:888 (2,3) - move it up a bit. same reason as 00:27:888 -
2013-10-31 23:30 Xinely: okay ~
2013-10-31 23:30 Byakugan249: 00:51:711 (4) - this part is separate, so replace this for a circle and a 1/2 slider. the circle follows the BGM, and the slider follows the vocals
2013-10-31 23:32 Xinely: nyakuchan so pro, it's right so fixed lol
2013-10-31 23:32 Byakugan249: :3
2013-10-31 23:32 Byakugan249: 01:18:182 (3) - it'd be better if you flip this vertically because the flow feels broken once you hit this note during gameplay IMO
2013-10-31 23:33 Xinely: it will be like http://puu.sh/55khy.jpg right?
2013-10-31 23:34 Byakugan249: yea :3
2013-10-31 23:35 Xinely: okay :D
2013-10-31 23:35 Byakugan249: 01:19:726 (5,1) - you have 2 options: move the tail of (5) down so that it'd flow smoother to the next note, or align the circle to the slider. same reason
2013-10-31 23:36 Xinely: choose to move the tail ~
2013-10-31 23:36 Byakugan249: hai >w<
2013-10-31 23:36 Byakugan249: wow i didn't notice that Kyou was in this SB o.o
2013-10-31 23:37 Xinely: kyou? i don't know anything about the pics, just take it from the link that i gave to you to look CG lol
2013-10-31 23:37 Byakugan249: 2nd verse
2013-10-31 23:37 Byakugan249: girl with the long purple hair
2013-10-31 23:37 Xinely: aaa in kiai time? xD
2013-10-31 23:38 Byakugan249: 01:39:358 (3) - same idea as 00:21:270, but you can move this down
2013-10-31 23:38 Byakugan249: 01:34:947 (1) - here
2013-10-31 23:38 Xinely: or when 01:34:947 - ?
2013-10-31 23:39 Xinely: okay lol xD
2013-10-31 23:39 Xinely: changed~ zig zag ~
2013-10-31 23:39 Byakugan249: haha Tomoyo as well :D
2013-10-31 23:39 Byakugan249: 02:03:182 -
2013-10-31 23:39 Byakugan249: oh yea you need to watch Clannad and Clannad after story
2013-10-31 23:40 Xinely: XD that pics so awesome, snow is falling down <3
2013-10-31 23:40 Byakugan249: you'll literally cry watching it ;_;
2013-10-31 23:40 Byakugan249: haha i can see that :D
2013-10-31 23:40 Xinely: i heard clannad is nice anime ><
2013-10-31 23:40 Xinely: and have sad story
2013-10-31 23:40 Byakugan249: it's really sad ;__;
2013-10-31 23:41 Xinely: ;3; , oh no, i already cried saw SAO, when Yui deleted by Cardinal ;3;
2013-10-31 23:42 Byakugan249: Yui...ohh that part omg ;___;
2013-10-31 23:42 Byakugan249: yea that saddened me to see their daughter disappear like that orz ;w;
2013-10-31 23:42 Xinely: it's fact, i cried ;-;
2013-10-31 23:42 Xinely: ><
2013-10-31 23:43 Byakugan249: 02:43:770 (3,4,1) - re-arrange it like [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072093 this]. it'll be more fun to follow during gameplay
2013-10-31 23:43 Byakugan249: ;_;
2013-10-31 23:43 Byakugan249: i was shocked to see that ><
2013-10-31 23:43 Byakugan249: didn't cry though
2013-10-31 23:43 Byakugan249: but i was happy to see Yui in that other game :3
2013-10-31 23:43 Xinely: ALO /:D/
2013-10-31 23:43 Byakugan249: \:D\ hai
2013-10-31 23:44 Xinely: oh yeah i want to ask ur opinion, is normal finish in here 02:42:888 - and etc it's not fit with song?
2013-10-31 23:45 Byakugan249: ahh that's fine o.o
2013-10-31 23:45 Xinely: irre told me really not fit with song, and told to use other like drum or something
2013-10-31 23:45 Byakugan249: no don't use the drum
2013-10-31 23:45 Byakugan249: it'll ruin the feeling of the song
2013-10-31 23:45 Xinely: okay ><
2013-10-31 23:45 Byakugan249: oh yea did you apply my last usggestion? o.o
2013-10-31 23:45 Byakugan249: suggestion*
2013-10-31 23:45 Xinely: or need to reduce the volume again? i was did it 2 times
2013-10-31 23:46 Xinely: yap changed it, flow seems better xD
2013-10-31 23:46 Byakugan249: yea~ reduce it o.o
2013-10-31 23:46 Xinely: around 50%?
2013-10-31 23:47 Byakugan249: yea that works
2013-10-31 23:47 Xinely: okay ~
2013-10-31 23:48 Byakugan249: 02:55:461 (4) - move this to the right a bit. same reason as 00:27:888 -
2013-10-31 23:49 Xinely: moved w/o grid ~
2013-10-31 23:49 Byakugan249: yay \o/
2013-10-31 23:49 Byakugan249: 02:58:770 (3,4) - maybe a 1/2 slider because of the vocals?
2013-10-31 23:49 Xinely: i mean a little bit w/o grid lol
2013-10-31 23:49 Byakugan249: hai >w<
2013-10-31 23:50 Xinely: aa i want to keep circle , since wa ta still have a little break to say it
2013-10-31 23:51 Byakugan249: ok then if you insist :3
2013-10-31 23:51 Byakugan249: 03:33:844 (5) - remove the clap at the beginning because it breaks consistency with the claps during gameplay
2013-10-31 23:51 Byakugan249: 03:37:594 (5) - >< replace this back to normal. remember what we talked about :3
2013-10-31 23:51 Xinely: xd but i changed 02:58:770 (3) - clap to finish, i heard cymbal xdxd asdf xD
2013-10-31 23:52 Xinely: it's happened due irre lol
2013-10-31 23:52 Xinely: changed
2013-10-31 23:52 Byakugan249: ahh i see o.o
2013-10-31 23:52 Byakugan249: done with normal :3
2013-10-31 23:52 Byakugan249: hard is next :3
2013-10-31 23:53 Xinely: hai >w<
2013-10-31 23:54 Byakugan249: 00:00:977 (2) - i was thinking that you can move this up instead of down for a smoother transition in this part of the song :3
2013-10-31 23:56 Xinely: how about 188,216? xD
2013-10-31 23:57 Byakugan249: that's what i mean when i said "up" :3
2013-10-31 23:57 Byakugan249: the current pattern goes downwards
2013-10-31 23:57 Xinely: omg lol sorry2
2013-10-31 23:57 Byakugan249: :3
2013-10-31 23:57 Byakugan249: daijobu
2013-10-31 23:58 Xinely: ahaha fixed
2013-10-31 23:58 Byakugan249: :D
2013-10-31 23:58 Byakugan249: 00:22:594 (5) - align this to (4) so that it'll flow a lot smoother for players during gameplay
2013-11-01 00:00 Xinely: okay, moved the triplet (6,7,8) too
2013-11-01 00:00 Byakugan249: hai >w<
2013-11-01 00:01 Byakugan249: 00:22:594 (5) - replace this for a circle because it'll be easier. it also follows the vocals nicely as well during gameplay IMO
2013-11-01 00:01 Byakugan249: 00:25:682 (3) -
2013-11-01 00:01 Byakugan249: oops ><
2013-11-01 00:01 Byakugan249: gomen ><
2013-11-01 00:03 Xinely: like http://puu.sh/55lmW.jpg?
2013-11-01 00:04 Byakugan249: no--i mean one circle
2013-11-01 00:05 Byakugan249: that would be even harder
2013-11-01 00:05 Byakugan249: btw, if you want to link like i did, it's [link here text here] :3
2013-11-01 00:05 Xinely: remove the (4) ?
2013-11-01 00:05 Byakugan249: yea
2013-11-01 00:06 Xinely: lol i knew the code but i'm lazy :3
2013-11-01 00:06 Xinely: okay removed
2013-11-01 00:06 Byakugan249: ahh i see :3
2013-11-01 00:06 Xinely: (like)[http://puu.sh/55lmW.jpg] <-- i knew it ahaha
2013-11-01 00:07 Byakugan249: hai >w<
2013-11-01 00:07 Byakugan249: 00:29:432 (4,5) - i don't like this overlap. i understand the blanket, but this looks bad to follow during gameplay, no offense...for this one, do [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072115 this] instead. it'll be more neater to follow during gameplay
2013-11-01 00:09 Xinely: i trust you >< , fixed
2013-11-01 00:09 Byakugan249: 00:31:858 (2) - are you following the BGM or the vocals here? o.o
2013-11-01 00:09 Xinely: BGM i think
2013-11-01 00:10 Byakugan249: ahh ok o.o
2013-11-01 00:10 Xinely: 00:32:079 - i heard something like drum
2013-11-01 00:10 Byakugan249: yea i hear it too :3
2013-11-01 00:10 Xinely: \o/
2013-11-01 00:10 Byakugan249: 00:35:608 (2) - remove the clap because you're breaking consistency in the claps ><
2013-11-01 00:11 Xinely: xdxd i always hitsound based vocal xD , anyway removed the clap
2013-11-01 00:11 Byakugan249: ww
2013-11-01 00:11 Byakugan249: 00:46:197 (2) - ><
2013-11-01 00:12 Xinely: yap? >< inb4 bad shape or something
2013-11-01 00:12 Byakugan249: no--same as above
2013-11-01 00:12 Byakugan249: the shape is fine
2013-11-01 00:13 Byakugan249: 00:47:961 (5) - here as well www
2013-11-01 00:13 Xinely: aaa? the flow?
2013-11-01 00:13 Byakugan249: no the clap
2013-11-01 00:14 Byakugan249: when i say "same as above" i'm referring to my last suggestion
2013-11-01 00:14 Xinely: ahahaha again ><
2013-11-01 00:14 Xinely: removed ><
2013-11-01 00:14 Xinely: oh i see xd
2013-11-01 00:14 Byakugan249: 01:05:608 (5) - www
2013-11-01 00:14 Xinely: and need to remove clap in 00:47:961 (5) - ?
2013-11-01 00:15 Xinely: www removed
2013-11-01 00:15 Byakugan249: yea i mentioned that :3
2013-11-01 00:15 Xinely: removed too xd
2013-11-01 00:15 Byakugan249: >w<
2013-11-01 00:16 Xinely: 01:10:902 (2) - removed this too before you mention it /runs
2013-11-01 00:16 Byakugan249: wwwww
2013-11-01 00:16 Byakugan249: 01:03:182 (1,2) - this might be a problem for players to follow since theymight not reach it in time. reduce the spacing like you did on 00:59:652 (1,2) -
2013-11-01 00:16 Byakugan249: they might*
2013-11-01 00:17 Byakugan249: also the repeat is in the way, so that could distrupt the flow o.o
2013-11-01 00:19 Xinely: aa okay changed to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072124 ><
2013-11-01 00:19 Xinely: *like =w="
2013-11-01 00:19 Byakugan249: ahh that might work :3
2013-11-01 00:19 Byakugan249: 01:11:785 (4) - remove this note since it doesn't follow anything ><
2013-11-01 00:20 Xinely: okay ><
2013-11-01 00:20 Xinely: 01:34:947 (1) - changed to normal xd
2013-11-01 00:20 Byakugan249: i'm not there yet ww
2013-11-01 00:21 Xinely: but i found it xd
2013-11-01 00:21 Byakugan249: yay \o/
2013-11-01 00:21 Xinely: before you mention it lol
2013-11-01 00:21 Byakugan249: 01:12:667 (2,3,4) - for this one, replace this for a 1/1 slider and 2 circles. the 1/1 slider follows the piano amd the circles follow the vocals
2013-11-01 00:21 Byakugan249: 01:12:667 (2) - start the 1/1 slider here in case you don't know
2013-11-01 00:22 Xinely: hai sound better xD
2013-11-01 00:22 Byakugan249: 01:17:079 (6) - same as 01:11:785 -
2013-11-01 00:23 Byakugan249: 01:18:844 (3) - and here
2013-11-01 00:23 Xinely: removed both
2013-11-01 00:23 Byakugan249: 01:23:255 (4) - ehh~
2013-11-01 00:25 Xinely: clap?
2013-11-01 00:25 Byakugan249: hai ><
2013-11-01 00:25 Xinely: removed before you mention it xdxd
2013-11-01 00:25 Byakugan249: ahh haha
2013-11-01 00:25 Byakugan249: 01:34:947 (1) - you changed it to normal--problem is that it's too loud ><
2013-11-01 00:26 Xinely: yap reduced volume instead xD
2013-11-01 00:26 Byakugan249: >w<
2013-11-01 00:26 Xinely: around 25?
2013-11-01 00:26 Xinely: or soft finish? xD
2013-11-01 00:27 Byakugan249: no there's a beat in this part ><
2013-11-01 00:27 Xinely: aa yeah calvin used soft finish o.o , changed soft finish xD
2013-11-01 00:27 Byakugan249: ok thenif you say so ;3
2013-11-01 00:27 Byakugan249: then if*
2013-11-01 00:27 Xinely: xD
2013-11-01 00:27 Xinely: his hitsound sometimes is nice xD
2013-11-01 00:28 Byakugan249: 01:38:255 (4) - i say go upwards instead of downwards. same reason as my 1st suggestion
2013-11-01 00:28 Byakugan249: haha i see :D
2013-11-01 00:29 Xinely: make it smoother instead xD
2013-11-01 00:29 Byakugan249: ahh close enough :3
2013-11-01 00:29 Byakugan249: 01:43:329 (3) - same idea. replace this for a circle since it'll be easier, also the cicle would emphasize the piano :3
2013-11-01 00:31 Byakugan249: >< did you get my last pm?
2013-11-01 00:31 Xinely: gomen dc D:
2013-11-01 00:31 Xinely: until "ahh close enough :3"
2013-11-01 00:31 Byakugan249: 01:43:329 (3) - same idea. replace this for a circle since it'll be easier, also the cicle would emphasize the piano :3
2013-11-01 00:32 Xinely: changed :3
2013-11-01 00:33 Byakugan249: 01:51:932 (6) - maybe you can remove this circle. i can't seem to hear anything in this part o.o
2013-11-01 00:34 Xinely: removed, i wrong to hear it >< , thanks 4 notice it :3
2013-11-01 00:35 Byakugan249: 01:53:255 (2) - you removed the clap right? :P
2013-11-01 00:35 Xinely: yap xD
2013-11-01 00:36 Xinely: 02:03:844 (2) - this is too
2013-11-01 00:36 Byakugan249: >w< hai
2013-11-01 00:36 Xinely: xD
2013-11-01 00:39 Byakugan249: 02:02:299 (6,7) - replace all this for a slider, but no jump. it'll be easier to follow during gameplay
2013-11-01 00:40 Xinely: it's mean become 1/1 slider or 1/2 repeat slider?
2013-11-01 00:40 Xinely: owait 1/2, i mean 1/4 ,and 1/1 = 1/2 ?
2013-11-01 00:40 Byakugan249: uhh...the slider ends at 02:02:741 (7) -
2013-11-01 00:41 Xinely: okay ><
2013-11-01 00:42 Xinely: fixed xD
2013-11-01 00:42 Byakugan249: 02:09:579 (5,6,7) - what are you following here? o.o
2013-11-01 00:45 Xinely: (5) piano , (6) (7) drum ><
2013-11-01 00:45 Byakugan249: ohh ok then o.o
2013-11-01 00:45 Xinely: lol xd
2013-11-01 00:46 Byakugan249: 02:17:300 (1) - here as well--it's too loud ><
2013-11-01 00:46 Xinely: reduced until 45 as others ><
2013-11-01 00:46 Byakugan249: 02:16:858 (9) - this should be replaced for a 1/4 slider since i don't hear anything that follows the repeat
2013-11-01 00:46 Byakugan249: ahh ok then :3
2013-11-01 00:47 Xinely: 02:16:858 - vocal, 02:16:969 - a little sound, a like drum (maybe) 02:17:079 - vocal ><
2013-11-01 00:48 Byakugan249: ooh o.o
2013-11-01 00:48 Byakugan249: ok then
2013-11-01 00:48 Xinely: hehe gomene xD
2013-11-01 00:52 Byakugan249: 02:30:314 (5,6) - for this one, i think you can re-adjust this pattern like [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072166 this]
2013-11-01 00:52 Byakugan249: again--it'll be more flowy to follow during gameplay IMO
2013-11-01 00:54 Byakugan249: 02:31:417 (1,2) - same as 01:03:182 -
2013-11-01 00:54 Xinely: hai flow better >w<
2013-11-01 00:55 Xinely: changed lol
2013-11-01 00:55 Byakugan249: 03:27:888 (1,2) - and here as well
2013-11-01 00:55 Byakugan249: done with hard--last diff~ \o/
2013-11-01 00:57 Xinely: aaa hai fixed xD
2013-11-01 00:57 Byakugan249: 00:07:153 (3) - same idea--go upwards instead of downwards
2013-11-01 00:58 Xinely: and make flow better xD
2013-11-01 00:58 Xinely: yay /w/
2013-11-01 00:59 Xinely: hai ><
2013-11-01 00:59 Byakugan249: 00:35:829 (1,2) - remove the NC on (1) because the vocals are connected from the previous 2 notes
2013-11-01 00:59 Byakugan249: also make the next note a NC sicne it follows a different phrase
2013-11-01 01:01 Xinely: gomene ><
2013-11-01 01:01 Byakugan249: did you get my last pm? ><
2013-11-01 01:01 Xinely: until 00:07:153 (3) - only
2013-11-01 01:02 Byakugan249: 00:35:829 (1,2) - remove the NC on (1) because the vocals are connected from the previous 2 notes
2013-11-01 01:02 Byakugan249: also make the next note a NC since it follows a different phrase
2013-11-01 01:02 Xinely: okay
2013-11-01 01:03 Byakugan249: 00:40:902 (6) - go 1 grid right. you'll be stacking 00:39:138 (2) - perfectly
2013-11-01 01:08 Byakugan249: dc again? ><
2013-11-01 01:08 Xinely: orz yap
2013-11-01 01:08 Xinely: baka connection orzzzzz
2013-11-01 01:08 Byakugan249: did you get my last pm?
2013-11-01 01:09 Xinely: no orz
2013-11-01 01:09 Byakugan249: 00:40:902 (6) - go 1 grid right. you'll be stacking 00:39:138 (2) - perfectly
2013-11-01 01:10 Xinely: lol fixed xd
2013-11-01 01:11 Byakugan249: 01:10:902 (2,3,4) - keep your spacing conistent. it'll be more flowly if you do it like [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072180 this]
2013-11-01 01:12 Xinely: okay ><
2013-11-01 01:12 Byakugan249: 01:17:079 (9) - remove this note since it doesn't follow anything in this part of the song
2013-11-01 01:13 Xinely: xd gomen xd fixed
2013-11-01 01:14 Byakugan249: 01:36:711 (1) - remove the drum sampleset since it ruins the feeling of the song
2013-11-01 01:14 Byakugan249: 01:38:476 (1) -
2013-11-01 01:14 Byakugan249: 01:40:241 (1) -
2013-11-01 01:15 Byakugan249: and so on ><
2013-11-01 01:15 Xinely: aaa i will ask hinsvar first ><
2013-11-01 01:15 Byakugan249: the piano stands out the most, so the drum ruins it o.o
2013-11-01 01:18 Xinely: aaa hinsvar want to keep it. he said it have drum sound at all
2013-11-01 01:18 Xinely: and he said drum have harder sound than piano
2013-11-01 01:19 Byakugan249: oh umm...
2013-11-01 01:20 Byakugan249: ask if he can use the finish because whistle is too distracting
2013-11-01 01:20 Byakugan249: *the whistle
2013-11-01 01:21 Xinely: wait , i will ask him now
2013-11-01 01:21 Byakugan249: also since he says that it has a harder sound, the finish would be perfect o.o
2013-11-01 01:22 Xinely: asdf he is afk ``"
2013-11-01 01:22 Byakugan249: x.x
2013-11-01 01:22 Xinely: aa he is back
2013-11-01 01:24 Xinely: aa he is busy with school work
2013-11-01 01:24 Byakugan249: ahh damn then...
2013-11-01 01:24 Xinely: and he said no need until finish , keep let's continue
2013-11-01 01:25 Byakugan249: orz ok then
2013-11-01 01:25 Xinely: gomen nyakuchan ><
2013-11-01 01:25 Byakugan249: i'll mention your parts instead ><
2013-11-01 01:25 Byakugan249: i'll mention Hinsvar when i post
2013-11-01 01:25 Xinely: hai><
2013-11-01 01:25 Xinely: yay /w/
2013-11-01 01:26 Xinely: ACTION hugs <3
2013-11-01 01:26 Byakugan249: o.o
2013-11-01 01:26 Byakugan249: ACTION hugs back
2013-11-01 01:26 Byakugan249: <3
2013-11-01 01:26 Xinely: >w< , okay let's continue /w/
2013-11-01 01:27 Byakugan249: 02:21:932 (6,7,1) - here too--keep your spacing consistent
2013-11-01 01:28 Xinely: okay moved to 340,32 (7)
2013-11-01 01:30 Byakugan249: that's all for your part ><
2013-11-01 01:31 Xinely: okay >w<
2013-11-01 01:31 Xinely: arigatou gozaimasu nyakuchan <3
2013-11-01 01:31 Byakugan249: hai >w<
2013-11-01 01:31 Byakugan249: wait--how do you say yw? o.o
2013-11-01 01:32 Xinely: doita shimasute
2013-11-01 01:32 Xinely: but it's better to use doita only
2013-11-01 01:32 Xinely: shorter lol
2013-11-01 01:32 Byakugan249: yea i was gonna say :3
2013-11-01 01:32 Byakugan249: i'll keep that in mind
2013-11-01 01:32 Xinely: hehe xD
2013-11-01 01:33 Xinely: when you're done mod all, post in forum , i will give kd \:D/

As for Hinsvar...
01:41:564 (5) - i can hear drums at only the 1/4 part, so replace this for a 1/4 slider because this 1/8 repeat is unnecessary since the repeat doesn't follow anything.
01:51:270 (3,4) - a jump should be here because not only it'll emphasize the vocals, but it'll emphasize that sound in the BGM at (4).
02:11:344 (4) - same as 01:41:564.
03:27:447 (5) - keep your spacing consistent. with the note this close, this breaks the sense of flow, even if it's following the vocals.

and that's all ><. GL and don't give up on this map :D.
Hinsvar

Byakugan249 wrote:

As for Hinsvar...
01:41:564 (5) - i can hear drums at only the 1/4 part, so replace this for a 1/4 slider because this 1/8 repeat is unnecessary since the repeat doesn't follow anything. Sure.
01:51:270 (3,4) - a jump should be here because not only it'll emphasize the vocals, but it'll emphasize that sound in the BGM at (4). Yep.
02:11:344 (4) - same as 01:41:564. ...No, there's clearly a sound from an instrument here.
03:27:447 (5) - keep your spacing consistent. with the note this close, this breaks the sense of flow, even if it's following the vocals. ...What did I do here? Did my own random stuff.
Thanks for the mod~
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