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Kuraki Mai - Mou Ichido

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Xinely
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 29 Nopember 2013 at 15:22:29

Artist: Kuraki Mai
Title: Mou Ichido
Source: Kiri ni Sumu Akuma
Tags: 霧に棲む悪魔 J-pop One More Time Hinsvar over the rainbow Devil in the Mist
BPM: 68
Filesize: 11993kb
Play Time: 03:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,51 stars, 402 notes)
  2. Normal (2,29 stars, 241 notes)
  3. Together (4,88 stars, 500 notes)
Download: Kuraki Mai - Mou Ichido
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For 1st anniversary with Hinsvar when 25 November ><

check out our 2nd anniversary here

Mappusetto :
Normal : Done
Hard : Done
Together : Done by Hinsvar and Xinely <3
SB : Done
Ready for mods :D
Thanks 4 mods
sjoy
HelloSCV
Accel World
esTeHaeS
Unsfamiliar
-Umi-
Fycho
Gloria Guard
Momochikun
P A N
Gero
Yumih
Eggache0
Kytoxid
Tidek
Natsu
happy623
Sonnyc
-Srui-
Tari
James2250
alacat
Sekai-nyan (testplay)
Leorda
Andrea
Irreversible
Byakugan249
xChippy
Nymph (bubble) <3
Kytoxid (rank)<3<3
Especially thanks for Nymph and Kytoxid ;)
Momochikun
No Pertamina aftur..
Pertamax diamankan :D
sjoy
Hi From M4M
[Normal]
00:28:770 (2) - make a same shape as 00:27:888 (1) - and ctrl+j?
[Hard]
00:41:564 (9) - NC and 00:42:005 (1) - no NC follow vocal?
01:43:329 (3) - maka a small arc?
02:06:711 (1) - ctrl+g and http://puu.sh/4wsBt.jpg
02:41:123 (7) - add fin?
03:42:668 (2) - add fin?
[Together]
00:45:094 (8) - NC as hard?
00:50:829 (4) - NC?
00:52:152 (7) - chang it to 1/2 slider?
02:02:741 (8) - NC
02:09:799 (10) - chang it to 1/2 slider?
02:46:197 (2) - move to 84,108?
02:51:711 (4) - NC?

Nice map and storyboard
Star :)
HelloSCV
as M4M on your queue

it'll be better if you fix Together diff first (you may know why am i suggesting this if you see my mod post haha)

Normal

00:42:888 (2,3) - hmm? maybe this is mistake (clap)
01:01:417 (4) - finish on repeat
01:31:417 - uh add break time?
01:34:947 (1) - you may know here by mod on Together
00:59:652 (1) - check this suggestion on Together plz~
02:19:505 (2) - like Together
02:21:711 (3) - where are claps on this part?

Hard

00:17:300 - same clap suggestion with Together
00:34:285 (7,9) - delete these? maybe don't need these (and some parts like 00:51:932 (5,7) - here too)
00:59:652 (1) - check this suggestion on Together plz
01:02:079 (6) - add finish
01:34:947 (1) - decreasing volume suggestion
02:19:505 (2) - like Together diff

Together

  1. check AIMod
00:17:300 - from this part, i recommend you to remove some 00:19:064 (5,1) - these claps since this part feels really clam,i think don't need claps on 1st and 3rd white ticks
00:28:770 (3) - 1.3x DS is purposed? -nazinazi
00:38:697 (1,2,3) - hmm i think this pattern isn't playable maybe keep DS consistantly is nice since there is no high pitch and some increasing voice,keep DS is best for me (and fix 01:56:785 (3) - that too if you fix this)
00:53:917 (4) - another 1.3xDS but it seems purposed for beauty :>
00:59:652 (1) - well maybe soft whistle is better than normal finish (and other same parts too)
01:02:079 (5) - consider add finish here
01:14:211 (2) - delete clap and 01:14:652 (3) - add it on this' start
01:34:947 (1) - try 30% volume on this note and same suggestion about clap pattern with before
01:39:358 (3,9) - where are claps?
02:19:505 (2) - finish on end (and decreasing volume is good choice too)
03:37:593 (3) - missed clap?

why didn't you make this with Hinsvar >_>

beautiful song~ good luck!
Accel World
From M4M :3

[Normal]

HP,OD +1
00:04:065 (1) x:196 y:356

[Hard]

00:26:123 (4) x:236 y:192
00:56:123 (1) x:232 y:152
00:41:564 (9) nc
00:42:005 (1) remove nc

[Together]

There are some unsnapped note, please check the AImod

00:18:623 (4) +finish
00:19:064 (5) remove clap
00:19:726 (6) add whistle
00:19:947 (7) x:456 y:88
00:20:608 (8) x:404 y:132
00:20:829 (1) remove clap, then add finish
00:22:594 (3) remove the clap at the end of slider
00:24:538 (7) ^, then add finish
00:26:123 (5) ^, then add whistle
00:27:667 (7) add whistle
00:27:888 (8) remove clap, then add finish
00:28:550 (2) x:100 y:268
00:28:770 (3) x:92 y:200
00:29:432 (4) x:60 y:44
00:29:652 (5) remove clap
00:42:667 (2) add whistle
00:45:094 (8) nc
00:45:535 (1) remove nc
00:47:300 (7) nc
00:50:829 (4) ^
00:51:491 (4) add finish

00:53:255 (2) x:184 y:348
00:53:476 (3) x:256 y:328
00:53:917 (4) x:376 y:368
00:54:579 (5) x:308 y:216
00:54:800 (6) x:324 y:144
00:55:020 (7) x:256 y:116
00:55:241 (8) x:188 y:144
00:55:902 (9) x:124 y:304

01:02:079 (5) x:164 y:112
01:02:300 (6) x:204 y:176
01:02:961 (7) x:160 y:348

01:12:005 (5) change whistle to finish?
01:14:652 (3) add whistle at head?

[Add Green line to change the volume]
01:29:652 40%
01:30:535 30%
01:31:417 25%

Nice SB and song, normal seems fine, but Hard and together need more mods, anyway Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Xinely

sjoy wrote:

Hi From M4M
[Normal]
00:28:770 (2) - make a same shape as 00:27:888 (1) - and ctrl+j? okay, fixed
[Hard]
00:41:564 (9) - NC and 00:42:005 (1) - no NC follow vocal?
01:43:329 (3) - maka a small arc?
02:06:711 (1) - ctrl+g and http://puu.sh/4wsBt.jpg
02:41:123 (7) - add fin?
03:42:668 (2) - add fin?
[Together]
00:45:094 (8) - NC as hard?
00:50:829 (4) - NC?
00:52:152 (7) - chang it to 1/2 slider?
02:02:741 (8) - NC
02:09:799 (10) - chang it to 1/2 slider?
02:46:197 (2) - move to 84,108?
02:51:711 (4) - NC?

Nice map and storyboard
Star :)

HelloSCV wrote:

as M4M on your queue

it'll be better if you fix Together diff first (you may know why am i suggesting this if you see my mod post haha)

Normal

00:42:888 (2,3) - hmm? maybe this is mistake (clap) yap, fixed
01:01:417 (4) - finish on repeat whistle is enough for repeat
01:31:417 - uh add break time? damn forgot XD
01:34:947 (1) - you may know here by mod on Together change 45% for finish and keep 40% volume after finish due starting have music here
00:59:652 (1) - check this suggestion on Together plz~ yap i'm baka , fixed
02:19:505 (2) - like Together i guess i'm not mapping the blue tick here so,, XD
02:21:711 (3) - where are claps on this part? damn forgot to hitsound this part lol

Hard

00:17:300 - same clap suggestion with Together
00:34:285 (7,9) - delete these? maybe don't need these (and some parts like 00:51:932 (5,7) - here too)
00:59:652 (1) - check this suggestion on Together plz
01:02:079 (6) - add finish
01:34:947 (1) - decreasing volume suggestion
02:19:505 (2) - like Together diff

Together

  1. check AIMod
00:17:300 - from this part, i recommend you to remove some 00:19:064 (5,1) - these claps since this part feels really clam,i think don't need claps on 1st and 3rd white ticks
00:28:770 (3) - 1.3x DS is purposed? -nazinazi
00:38:697 (1,2,3) - hmm i think this pattern isn't playable maybe keep DS consistantly is nice since there is no high pitch and some increasing voice,keep DS is best for me (and fix 01:56:785 (3) - that too if you fix this)
00:53:917 (4) - another 1.3xDS but it seems purposed for beauty :>
00:59:652 (1) - well maybe soft whistle is better than normal finish (and other same parts too)
01:02:079 (5) - consider add finish here
01:14:211 (2) - delete clap and 01:14:652 (3) - add it on this' start
01:34:947 (1) - try 30% volume on this note and same suggestion about clap pattern with before
01:39:358 (3,9) - where are claps?
02:19:505 (2) - finish on end (and decreasing volume is good choice too) use finish :3
03:37:593 (3) - missed clap?

why didn't you make this with Hinsvar >_> first, wanna to make this mapset for him, but after thinking again, for anniversary better if together is collab lol, WIP then

beautiful song~ good luck!

Accel World wrote:

From M4M :3

[Normal]

HP,OD +1 since easiest diff, wanna keep hp od 3 :3
00:04:065 (1) x:196 y:356 umm, idk why i must put in there so keep mine

[Hard]

00:26:123 (4) x:236 y:192 hmm but i prefer mine
00:56:123 (1) x:232 y:152 same as i mean above
00:41:564 (9) nc see stanza
00:42:005 (1) remove nc ^

[Together]

There are some unsnapped note, please check the AImod

00:18:623 (4) +finish
00:19:064 (5) remove clap
00:19:726 (6) add whistle
00:19:947 (7) x:456 y:88
00:20:608 (8) x:404 y:132
00:20:829 (1) remove clap, then add finish
00:22:594 (3) remove the clap at the end of slider
00:24:538 (7) ^, then add finish
00:26:123 (5) ^, then add whistle
00:27:667 (7) add whistle
00:27:888 (8) remove clap, then add finish
00:28:550 (2) x:100 y:268
00:28:770 (3) x:92 y:200
00:29:432 (4) x:60 y:44
00:29:652 (5) remove clap
00:42:667 (2) add whistle
00:45:094 (8) nc
00:45:535 (1) remove nc
00:47:300 (7) nc
00:50:829 (4) ^
00:51:491 (4) add finish

00:53:255 (2) x:184 y:348
00:53:476 (3) x:256 y:328
00:53:917 (4) x:376 y:368
00:54:579 (5) x:308 y:216
00:54:800 (6) x:324 y:144
00:55:020 (7) x:256 y:116
00:55:241 (8) x:188 y:144
00:55:902 (9) x:124 y:304

01:02:079 (5) x:164 y:112
01:02:300 (6) x:204 y:176
01:02:961 (7) x:160 y:348

01:12:005 (5) change whistle to finish?
01:14:652 (3) add whistle at head?

[Add Green line to change the volume]
01:29:652 40%
01:30:535 30%
01:31:417 25%

Nice SB and song, normal seems fine, but Hard and together need more mods, anyway Good luck! :)
will continue to checking mods ~
okay WIP now becuase together will collab with hinsvar Done , pending now
THS
hi o3o/
noobish mod ;_;/
Normal
01:53:255 (2) - add new notes like this
02:03:623 (1) - add one notes and remove the new combo on 02:04:064 (2) - ....so i'll make the map more fun to play for newbies :3
03:42:667 (7) - add one note imo
Hard
01:37:373 (2) - new notes at 92,52 imo
02:21:711 (5) - ( i think ) combining the last 2 notes to 1 slider
03:29:432 (4) - remove this note imo
Together
AR-1 ( i think 68 bpm is fit with AR7 rather than AR8 imo )

goodluck sis o3o/
Unsfamiliar
Hiii Xinely (and Hinsvar), request from pm~

Together
  1. 00:34:726 (9,1) - I think spacing should be consistent here because of the 1/4 sequence right before it. In fact, removing 00:34:726 (9) plays and sounds much better for me.
  2. 00:36:270 (3,4) - It's easy for a player to confuse this for a 1/2 beat gap and I don't think a jump is quite necessary. Maybe even consider replacing
  3. 00:36:270 (3) with just a single note on 00:36:270 and leave that gap which flows nicely into 00:36:711 (4,5,6,7,8).
  4. 02:03:182 (1,2,1) - Any particular reason for this uneven spacing?
  5. 02:15:535 (1) - I think the tail of this slider and 02:16:197 (3,4,1) could also use the drum sampleset, since I can hear the percussive notes at these points in the song.
  6. 02:49:064 - G senjou no maou =w=

Hard
  1. 00:19:064 (1) - I think the clap is overused in this part. I think it suits much better with it on every second white tick instead, like in your [Together] diff.
  2. 01:22:594 (3,4) - Blanket this? Moving the middl point of 01:22:594 (3) to x:100, y:292 and the end point to x:108, y:360 might fix it :3
  3. 01:33:182 - Add a break here like you did in the harder diff? Otherwise it's just a kind of an awkward space.
  4. 02:22:594 (8) - NC? Not sure if 11 is too high, but since it goes in a circle a NC might be easier to read.
  5. 02:54:358 (5) - Rotating this a few degrees counter-clockwise and move it up a bit would make for better flow in my opinion. Since it would be an arc made from 02:53:917 (3,4).
  6. 03:42:888 (1) - Decrease the volume at the end of this spinner? I think it would suit better as her voice trails off at the end. Oh and I just noticed, but you could do the same thing for the [Together] diff. Also also, I just noticed that you did this in [Normal] :)

Normal
  1. Some potential blankets but I know it's difficult in Normal and annoying so I'll be good and keep quiet :P
  2. Otherwise, nice diff :D

Incredible map set and beautiful storyboard. Very touching and the collab of you two is surely something to envy. Sorry for my lousy mod, but I hope it helped a bit. Good job and, here, a star to show my support.
Umi
hi hi nely <3

let'su go (finally)

Normal


IRC mod
2013-09-24 15:47 -Umi-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/303108 Kuraki Mai - Mou Ichido [Normal]]
2013-09-24 15:47 Xinely: i'm ready ~
2013-09-24 15:47 -Umi-: 00:01:418 (1) - hum hum
2013-09-24 15:47 -Umi-: what a nice blanket xd
2013-09-24 15:48 Xinely: <3
2013-09-24 15:48 -Umi-: move end point
2013-09-24 15:48 -Umi-: to
2013-09-24 15:48 -Umi-: 225,122
2013-09-24 15:48 -Umi-: wait no '-'
2013-09-24 15:48 Xinely: lol done
2013-09-24 15:49 Xinely: D:
2013-09-24 15:49 -Umi-: middle point x:272,y:188
2013-09-24 15:49 -Umi-: and end point same as i said :3
2013-09-24 15:50 Xinely: well, i guess i decided to move 00:00:536 (1) - in 92,206 , 00:01:418 (1) - i love this curve <3
2013-09-24 15:50 -Umi-: ahah okay
2013-09-24 15:50 -Umi-: well then
2013-09-24 15:51 -Umi-: the whistle is too noisy imo, reduce the volume, like 25% or 30 ? fit better '-'
2013-09-24 15:52 Xinely: yap i'm baka, fixed :3
2013-09-24 15:52 -Umi-: 00:08:587 - same on this part :3
2013-09-24 15:52 Xinely: yap fixed all btw until 00:08:587 -
2013-09-24 15:53 -Umi-: kk
2013-09-24 15:53 -Umi-: 00:10:241 (3) - move to x:156,y:337 ? better flow
2013-09-24 15:54 -Umi-: ops forget
2013-09-24 15:54 -Umi-: i have another idea for this part :3
2013-09-24 15:55 -Umi-: 00:10:241 (3,4,1) - what about this ? :D http://puu.sh/4z4Dx/7d37f58cdf.jpg
2013-09-24 15:56 Xinely: moe :3
2013-09-24 15:57 -Umi-: next ?
2013-09-24 15:57 Xinely: yap
2013-09-24 15:57 -Umi-: 00:18:623 (4) - > http://puu.sh/4z4HH/9b38362e6e.jpg ? '-'
2013-09-24 15:58 Xinely: okay seems flow better, fixed ~
2013-09-24 15:59 -Umi-: 00:24:358 (1) - middle point 283,144 better blanket :3
2013-09-24 16:00 Xinely: fixed than
2013-09-24 16:00 -Umi-: 00:35:829 (2) - same as before 21,131
2013-09-24 16:01 -Umi-: sorry a bit maniac about blanket ;w;
2013-09-24 16:01 Xinely: lol it's so helpful :3
2013-09-24 16:01 Xinely: fixed
2013-09-24 16:02 -Umi-: 00:41:123 (4) - @.@ middle point 480,164 xD
2013-09-24 16:02 Xinely: xD
2013-09-24 16:02 Xinely: sorry kinda slow to check, doing SS for chara game, for question round xD
2013-09-24 16:03 -Umi-: don't worry x)
2013-09-24 16:03 -Umi-: just say whe you fixed :3
2013-09-24 16:03 -Umi-: me*
2013-09-24 16:04 Xinely: oh fixed the branket btw lol
2013-09-24 16:04 -Umi-: 00:42:005 (1) - in this way better flow http://puu.sh/4z4Rm/1cf01fd2af.jpg
2013-09-24 16:04 Xinely: Umi for bat pls :3
2013-09-24 16:05 -Umi-: no xD too much work isn't for me ahah or if they accept lazy bat mouahah
2013-09-24 16:05 Xinely: oh sorry for this, i prefer mine ><
2013-09-24 16:05 -Umi-: okay :3
2013-09-24 16:05 -Umi-: 00:56:123 (1) - KYAAA <3
2013-09-24 16:06 Xinely: <3
2013-09-24 16:06 -Umi-: maybe move to 314,175 ?
2013-09-24 16:06 Xinely: let's try together in next app :3
2013-09-24 16:07 -Umi-: or 286,181
2013-09-24 16:07 -Umi-: for symetry '-'
2013-09-24 16:07 Xinely: okay 288, 184 tham xD
2013-09-24 16:07 -Umi-: well ok ahah
2013-09-24 16:08 -Umi-: 01:11:564 (2,3) - why not blanket ?
2013-09-24 16:09 Xinely: because no plan for blanket lol
2013-09-24 16:09 -Umi-: ok :'(
2013-09-24 16:10 -Umi-: 01:27:005 (4) - middle poitn 320,294
2013-09-24 16:11 Xinely: okay
2013-09-24 16:11 Xinely: umi watch SAO is it?
2013-09-24 16:11 -Umi-: 01:53:476 (2) - end point 196,251 o/
2013-09-24 16:11 -Umi-: and yeah of course :3
2013-09-24 16:12 Xinely: fixed
2013-09-24 16:12 Xinely: http://puu.sh/4z56i.png this guy seems like Diabel lol
2013-09-24 16:12 -Umi-: ahah yeah xD
2013-09-24 16:12 Xinely: XD
2013-09-24 16:13 Xinely: yap that's for question round xD
2013-09-24 16:13 -Umi-: question round already start ? :o
2013-09-24 16:13 Xinely: nope, still SS character one by one
2013-09-24 16:14 -Umi-: 01:59:652 (1) - middle point 323,308 end point 266,293 :3 oh okay
2013-09-24 16:15 Xinely: damn still level 1 to almost all, all people will know they aren't my favourite chara xD
2013-09-24 16:16 Xinely: fixed lol
2013-09-24 16:16 -Umi-: 02:27:005 (6) - in this way better flow with 02:27:888 (1) - http://puu.sh/4z5jc/5b6c77d91e.jpg
2013-09-24 16:16 -Umi-: ahah your favorite lvl 100? xD
2013-09-24 16:17 Xinely: almost xD
2013-09-24 16:17 -Umi-: ahah
2013-09-24 16:17 Xinely: because main chara, i can't throw she/he xD
2013-09-24 16:17 -Umi-: >3<
2013-09-24 16:17 Xinely: well, feel free to try :P
2013-09-24 16:18 -Umi-: I'll i'll ;3
2013-09-24 16:18 Xinely: aa no for this, i prefer my flow lol
2013-09-24 16:18 -Umi-: kay
2013-09-24 16:18 -Umi-: 02:30:535 (4) - end point 92,203
2013-09-24 16:19 Xinely: okay
2013-09-24 16:19 Xinely: want some tips?
2013-09-24 16:23 Xinely: xD
2013-09-24 16:23 -Umi-: sorry i'm calling someone '-'
2013-09-24 16:24 Xinely: damn ono play my map, wanna spectating first xD
2013-09-24 16:26 Xinely: ><
2013-09-24 16:32 -Umi-: back sorry xD
2013-09-24 16:33 -Umi-: it was my grandmother '-'
2013-09-24 16:33 -Umi-: can i continu :3
2013-09-24 16:34 Xinely: yap
2013-09-24 16:34 -Umi-: 02:33:182 (4) - middle point 315,304 end point 257,280
2013-09-24 16:35 Xinely: fixed
2013-09-24 16:36 -Umi-: middle point 354,251 end point 429,181 i'm so nazy omg xD
2013-09-24 16:37 Xinely: xD
2013-09-24 16:38 -Umi-: 03:37:594 (5) - kinda noisy this finish :o
2013-09-24 16:38 -Umi-: 03:39:358 - same here
2013-09-24 16:38 -Umi-: doesn't really fit imo
2013-09-24 16:38 Xinely: the music force me xD
2013-09-24 16:38 -Umi-: lol x)
2013-09-24 16:39 Xinely: D:
2013-09-24 16:39 Xinely: well i will reduce volume
2013-09-24 16:39 -Umi-: yeah do it :3
2013-09-24 16:39 Xinely: :3
2013-09-24 16:40 -Umi-: ok that"s all for the normal '-'
2013-09-24 16:40 -Umi-: not really usefull sorry xD
2013-09-24 16:40 Xinely: xD
2013-09-24 16:40 Xinely: thanks :3
2013-09-24 16:40 Xinely: it's helpful D:

Hard

- 00:29:652 (5) - move to 481,220 for blanket ?
- 00:41:564 (9) - NC should be here instead of 00:42:005 (1) -
- 00:42:888 (3) - move to 360,196 blanket '-'
- 00:45:535 (1) - make t more curve and then do a better blanket with 00:46:197 (2) -
- 01:47:299 (5) - same as 01:47:299 (5) -
- 02:00:535 (3) - same as 00:42:888 (3) -
- 02:03:844 (2) - blanket blanket @.@
- 02:31:417 - just wondering http://puu.sh/4zjtG/dfb97c7001.jpg why this ? xD
- 02:42:888 - too noisy reduce the volum :3
- 02:53:255 (2) - end point 332,144
- 03:00:535 (3) - move to 339,231
- 03:03:844 (2) - ^ 349,251

Together

- 00:29:652 (5) - move to 43,140
- 00:47:300 (5) - ^ 410,179
- 00:49:064 (1) - ^ 99,45
- 01:05:608 (6) - delete, then 01:04:947 (5) - ctrl c /ctrl h / ctrl J and move to 448,360
- 02:01:417 (1) - middle point 179,264, end point 193,211
- 02:06:711 (1) - move to 402,236 better imo
- 02:28:770 - too noisy this finish @.@ reduce a bit volum
- 02:30:535 - ^
- 02:42:888 - ^
- 02:44:652 - ^
- 03:42:005 - we can hear the slider slide here intentional ?

That's all for me :D well together is a bit overmapped for me xD but i guess it's ok :3 anyways good luck =3=b
Fycho
Hi~

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
KIAI time in Together diff is different from other diffs

[Together]

  • 00:35:608 (2) –The clap on slider head sounds a little weird, I suggest you remove it. Keep the whistle to emphasize vocal
    00:39:138 (3) -^
    00:38:035 (9,1,2) –I don’t recommend you put downbeat at slider end. Have a try this rhythm:http://puu.sh/4zQMt.jpgand I think this is consistence with 00:34:947 (1,2)
    00:43:991 (6) –try removing this note. The rhythm will be in transition later,so a break is very suitable like 00:44:873 –
    00:48:402 (8) –This can make a jump like00:46:638 (4) –
    00:53:476 (3,4) -^
    01:01:417 (4) –The bell(finish) at slider head feels a little noisy to me ,try reducing the volume
    01:04:947 (5) -^,others are the same advice
    01:11:123 (3,4) –This jump is a little big,How about moving 01:11:123 (3) –(264,100)
    01:15:535 (5) –I highly recommend you set a jump here0.0.Because 01:14:211 (2,3,4) –are jump,but 01:15:535 –is a strong vocal, So you had better set a jump.Maybe ctrl+G and move to another place
    01:18:844 (3,4) –I can’t understand the changed spacing
    01:39:358 (3) –move to(320,72)to make a better flow
    01:56:785 (2) –move (88,176)to make a better flow?
    02:19:064 (1) –As above finish is a little noisy,try reducing volume
    02:28:770 (3) –Try reducing the volume,Now it’s noisy imo
    02:30:535 (3) -^
    03:30:755 (4) –I think many players will expect a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/4zSiC.jpg
    Too many reverses are not good imo
    03:36:050 (2) –nazi,stack perfectly with03:34:285 (2) –

[Hard]

  • 00:40:461 (6,7) –There is a vocal at00:40:682 –bnt no vocal at00:40:461 –So don’t put slider head at a place where there is no vocal.Try ctrl+G
    00:46:197 (2,5) –same advice as together diff
    01:05:608 (5) –It will be better if you make it similar with01:02:300 (7,) -or01:09:358 (7) –
    02:31:417 (1) – enlarge spacing to make a jump ?
    03:01:197 (4,5,6,7) –this rhythm feels betterhttp://puu.sh/4zT9B.jpg make some different rhythm like following the other track or it will be boring~
    03:27:888 - 03:42:667 –These seems similar with the pattern from 02:31:417 –to 02:46:197 -.I really don’t like copy at all.This seems very boring:<Try to make another pattern and rhythm:>

[Noraml]

  • 01:12:005 (3) –change the finish to whistle at reverse arrow, bell is not suitable here imo ,Otherwise you can add finish to slider head instead
    01:28:329 (5) –moving this to 01:28:549 –to follow the piano seems better
    01:57:005 (3) –The rhythm is strange imo,try this http://puu.sh/4zTOR.jpg
    02:45:535 (1) –expand this slider to 02:45:535 (1) –
    02:55:461 (4) –rhythm suggestion, http://puu.sh/4zTYk.jpg
    03:02:300 (3) –expand this to 03:02:961 –
    03:10:461 (1) –I am pretty sure that you miss a finish here:3
    03:42:447 (6) –move to03:42:667 –

pretty cute song and good map<3,gl~
Gloria Guard
Sorry I'm late this map modding. orz
and Start my modding
'Sup'


[General]

You check Display epilepsy warning (storyboard has quick strobing)


[Normal]


00:00:536 (1,1) A little not pretty this blanket pattern, 00:01:418 (1) this slider end point more down
is better
01:04:505 (3,4) well this overlap pattern a little awkward I suggestion this pattern don't overlap
and 01:04:947 (4) this slider middle point move x:36 y:172 is nice blanket shape imo.
01:57:005 (3) You are wrong on this part rhythm, You hear this part drum or lyrcis rhythm sound here
If you agree this part wrong rhythm point, I suggestion this point rhythm.
02:17:300 (1) Hmm I think this normal sound is not such a decent sound. well this slider head point sound suggestion
you add Sampleset drum is good imo
02:31:417 (1) ^
02:36:270 (3,4,5) This is pattern shape is fine.. but I think more improve this pattern shape imo, If you think pattern change
I suggestion this pattern shape
02:42:888 (1) Umm this slider end point use normal hitsound so noisy. so this song is definitely a quiet and relaxing
But why do you use the normal hitsound did here? If you change this normal sound, I think you add Sampleset drum sound slider end point.
Also 02:44:652 (4) this slider head point too add Sampleset drum sound.
02:57:888 (1,2) Oh you mistake this slider blanket here


[Hard]

00:25:682 (3) Oh This slider is you intended? well I think this slider spacing error imo.
00:45:976 (1) This is slider middle point more down is better shape.
02:03:182 (1,2) Please blanket!!!!
02:06:711 (1) This is slider flow a little confuse, because this slider is in the opposite direction to the head notes.
I think Ctrl+G is better flow, so you change this point flow I suggestion this pattern.
02:42:005 (1,2,3,4,5) Can you change this pattern flow ?
02:53:093 (1,2) Uh... why you this (2) slider middle point down? I don't agree this slider flow here, you change is slider middle point shape
03:39:358 (1,2,3,4,5,) This is part chagne by 02:42:005 (1,2,3,4,5) this suggestion.


[Together]

01:26:123 (5,6) This is part for hard diff same.


Well.. This is part of a little problem, but I think it's okay.
Momochikun


Pasang poto dlu biar gaya :roll:

[General]
  1. IMO Normal finish buat awal kiai suara terlalu keras..pertama denger aku kaget orz.. -10 % maybe ? atau mungkin additions aj yg normal.. sampleset dibiarin soft :3
  2. Di Awal awal Whistle emphasis kyk nya kurang pas.. coba pake whistle di suara piano yg agak keras aja IMO.
  3. duo 1/1 slider pake clap di tick biru suaranya weird IMO.. knp nggak ganti ke whistle aja ? music nggak mendukung buat clap di tick biru -w- ex :00:34:947 (1,2) - n banyak lainnya.. intinya clap di blue tick aneh lol :v
[Insane]
AR - 1 ? bikin lbih mudah buat bedain spacing.. rasanya AR 8 buat 68 BPM itu terlalu cepet.
  1. 00:01:418 - Coba Rhytm ini ? rasanya lebih pas sama piano, soalnya nggak enak klo kw skip suara piano di 00:02:300 - , kan jadi bisa tambah whistle :3
  2. 00:10:241 (4) - Hapus whistle di akhirnya ? nggak ada suara piano soalnya, jdi kedengarannya agak aneh
  3. 00:19:947 (7) - End slider dibuat 500,56 ? drop flow ke (8) dan (1) kyknya keren :3
  4. 00:38:917 (2) - 312 284 ? pling nggak buat note (2) sama jarak dengan (1) dan (4) biar jump lbih kliatan
  5. 00:46:417 (3,4) - Awkward banget ini jumpnya.. jujur stack sebelumnya bikin ini jump makin unpredictable, pertamanya gw kira 1/2 jump ini =_=
  6. 01:12:888 (7) - Ini walau mau dibuat jump bentuk kotak.. slider lurus jelek flow ke note berikutnya, ganti ke curved mungkin ?
  7. 01:19:726 (5) - Bad flow gan.. pindah ke tengah tengah slider copas nya aja biar lbih bagus patternnya :p
  8. 01:26:123 (5) - Ctrl J maybe ?.. the pattern seems awkward IMO
  9. 01:39:358 (3,5,9) - Miss clap ho ho ho
  10. 01:39:579 (4) - Try this pattern ~ smoother flow
  11. 01:53:476 (3) - Off beat repeat slider ~ entah unrankable atau ndak..
  12. Emphasize please.. 02:15:866 - and 02:16:638 - ^_^
  13. 02:20:608 (5,1,2,3,4) - Kok rasanya ini star formatin agak off.. di cek lagi koordinat nya dund
  14. Btw itu bunga muncul nya nggak kecepetan ya ? bukannya di set muncul pas kiai mulai ?
  15. 02:51:160 (2) - A bit nazi.. move > 36 180 :3
    Overall map bagus.. walau spacing ad yg rada bingungin, klo jump tanpa NC lbih bagus note nya di samain spacing nya. Single jump yg biasa dipake bikin bingung sumpe... Dan rasanya beberapa stream di kiai itu terlalu maksa n kliatan overmap IMO. klo lagu nggak minta stream knp pake stream ? D:

Late post sorry.. diff laennya ntar ajah di IRC yah :p ~
Hinsvar

THS wrote:

Together
AR-1 ( i think 68 bpm is fit with AR7 rather than AR8 imo ) This is specifically designed to be an Insane diffs with jumps and little streams. AR8 should be fine :D~

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Together
  1. 02:03:182 (1,2,1) - Any particular reason for this uneven spacing?...Damn, didn't notice this. Fixed.
  2. 02:15:535 (1) - I think the tail of this slider and 02:16:197 (3,4,1) could also use the drum sampleset, since I can hear the percussive notes at these points in the song. Drum'd all except (4); that one's fine only with a clap.

-Umi- wrote:

Together

- 02:01:417 (1) - middle point 179,264, end point 193,211 Hmm, for what reason?
- 02:06:711 (1) - move to 402,236 better imo This is intentional to emphasize the power of the music.
- 03:42:005 - we can hear the slider slide here intentional ? S:C1'd.

Fycho wrote:

[Together]

  • 01:39:358 (3) –move to(320,72)to make a better flow Umm, the flow is worse like that, IMO.
    01:56:785 (2) –move (88,176)to make a better flow? Okay, done.
    03:30:755 (4) –I think many players will expect a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/4zSiC.jpg
    Too many reverses are not good imo ...I don't think so. It goes really well with the song to the point where the players will expect it... although according to the song it only needs two reverses... Okay, just reduced the number of repeats.
    03:36:050 (2) –nazi,stack perfectly with03:34:285 (2) – Made a different pattern so the flow will be better, instead.

Momochikun wrote:

[Insane]
AR - 1 ? bikin lbih mudah buat bedain spacing.. rasanya AR 8 buat 68 BPM itu terlalu cepet. Ah masa? Coba lihat reply saya di mod THS~
  1. 01:39:358 (3,5,9) - Miss clap ho ho ho Ada kok... Also (5) sama (9) itu yang mana o.o
  2. 01:39:579 (4) - Try this pattern ~ smoother flow Umm no. Pattern yang sekarang jauh lebih bagus dalam mencerminkan instrumen di lagunya.
  3. 01:53:476 (3) - Off beat repeat slider ~ entah unrankable atau ndak.. ...Uhm, repeat? Also, musiknya emang gini kok; kenapa bisa unrankable?
  4. Emphasize please.. 02:15:866 - and 02:16:638 - ^_^ Drum'd.
    Overall map bagus.. walau spacing ad yg rada bingungin, klo jump tanpa NC lbih bagus note nya di samain spacing nya. Single jump yg biasa dipake bikin bingung sumpe... Dan rasanya beberapa stream di kiai itu terlalu maksa n kliatan overmap IMO. klo lagu nggak minta stream knp pake stream ? D: Ada banyak 1/8 kok di chorus lagu ini... Mestinya oke-oke aja.
Thanks for modding, everyone! :D

lol
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160,284,147336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,280,147447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,264,147557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,147667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,147888,6,0,P|224:72|160:12,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,36,148329,2,0,P|108:76|112:128,1,89.9999972534181
84,232,148770,1,4,1:0:0:0:
164,316,148991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,300,149211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,149432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,149652,6,0,L|336:120,1,134.999995880127,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,152,150094,2,0,L|252:172,1,89.9999972534181
148,192,150535,1,4,1:0:0:0:
176,296,150755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,308,150866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,316,150976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,304,151086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,288,151197,2,0,L|432:272,1,89.9999972534181,0|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,132,151638,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,116,151748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,116,151858,2,0,P|316:116|276:148,1,89.9999972534181
136,80,152300,2,0,P|136:128|168:168,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,284,152741,2,0,L|204:332,2,44.999998626709
372,240,153182,6,0,P|412:176|368:96,1,134.999995880127,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,92,153623,2,0,L|276:96,1,89.9999972534181
152,52,154064,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,192,154285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,228,154395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,260,154505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,280,154616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,296,154726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,280,154947,6,0,L|448:280,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,280,155388,2,0,L|480:176,1,89.9999972534181
272,104,155829,2,0,L|362:104,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,128,156270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,128,156380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,128,156491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,156711,6,0,L|136:128,1,134.999995880127,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,157152,2,0,L|232:192,1,89.9999972534181
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412,192,158035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,156,158145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,158255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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60,288,159358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,320,159579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,216,159800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,180,159910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,144,160020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,44,160241,6,0,P|408:32|472:68,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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452,212,161013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,304,161454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,328,161675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,316,161785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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284,328,163329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,308,163439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,284,163550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,56,164211,2,0,L|404:108,1,89.9999972534181
472,192,164652,1,4,1:0:0:0:
424,320,164873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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292,272,165204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,272,165314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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144,44,166197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,166417,12,0,168623,0:0:0:0:
96,240,169064,6,0,P|152:256|192:300,1,112.5,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,320,169505,2,0,L|304:280,1,75
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208,104,170498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,104,170608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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52,188,171160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,132,172483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,264,176013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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220,348,176564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,336,179211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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276,312,179432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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72,316,180866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,332,181307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,248,182079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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380,76,182630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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100,180,183513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,192,184505,2,0,L|240:184,1,75
232,180,184836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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80,144,185388,2,0,L|86:69,1,75
232,52,185829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,156,186050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,156,186160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,156,186270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,156,186380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,156,186491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,190351,12,4,192005,0:0:0:0:
256,188,193770,5,4,0:0:0:0:
88,200,206123,6,0,P|80:152|120:96,1,101.249996910095,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,84,206564,2,0,L|216:64,1,67.4999979400635
216,208,207005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,240,207226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,224,207447,2,0,P|404:256|388:308,2,67.4999979400635,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
360,144,208108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,112,208329,2,0,P|264:68|280:20,1,89.9999972534181
364,12,208770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,64,208991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,152,209211,2,0,L|508:172,2,44.999998626709
328,272,209652,6,0,P|264:296|208:252,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,232,210094,2,0,P|184:272|156:320,1,89.9999972534181,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,364,210535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,280,210755,2,0,P|40:264|20:256,3,44.999998626709
280,284,211417,6,0,P|288:216|260:148,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,132,211858,2,0,P|240:88|260:40,2,89.9999972534181,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,120,212520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,172,212741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,204,212851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,240,212961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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180,60,214505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,124,214726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,48,214947,6,0,P|444:112|420:184,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,196,215388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,224,215608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,144,215829,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,80,216050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,240,216711,6,0,P|140:264|80:216,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,352,217594,5,0,1:0:0:0:
336,308,217814,2,0,P|356:292|368:268,3,44.999998626709
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472,144,221123,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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460,268,222667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,222888,12,0,225204,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Xinely
ugh so many mods XD
thanks 4 mod all
sorry can't reply all =w=
P A N
hi xinely, sorry for a delay so much XD

[2geter]

00:29:652 (5) - 1 grid up and move tail to 172|156 for better pattern.
00:47:300 (4) - this pattern is better imo :3
00:51:491 (7,9) - add whistle?
01:02:079 (5) - add finish is fit the music imo.
01:07:594 (3) - move tail 1 grid up and move (5) to 382|144 for more blanket.
01:15:094 (4) - 1 grid up to make the distance from tail to the curve space balance with (2) to (1).
01:26:123 (5) - move tail 1 grid up and move (6) 1 grid right for more blanket.
02:01:417 (1) - move tail 2 grid right for more blanket.
02:23:807 (5,6,7) - move to 196|304 , 232|304 , 268|292 for more flow.
02:25:682 (6,7,8) - Ctrl+g and move it like this is more playable, and make it blanket with (5) too. and move next (3) stack with this (8).
02:27:557 (7,8) - down 1 grid , left 1 grid.
02:31:197 (8) - move to 320|292.
02:33:844 (2) - add some hitsound on tail?
02:34:616 (7) - 1 grid down.
02:37:814 (4) - ^
02:41:454 (5,6,7,8) - hmm I think this stream not beautiful :X
02:51:932 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - move to 192|372 , 292|268 , 308|244 , 316|216 , 320|188 , 316|160 , 308|132.
02:56:013 (9) - 1 grid up.
03:06:050 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - move to 296|156 and move red point of (1) 1 grid right.
03:45:204 - lower a volume and off the kial?

[Hard]

00:28:770 (3) - move it like this? :3
00:34:726 (9) - 1 grid left?
00:35:608 (2) - 1 grid left and move tail 1 grid right.
01:02:079 (6) - add finish instead?
01:17:300 (1) - 1 grid up?
01:46:417 (3) - eh.. same I mod it before O: (same reason as 00:28:770)
01:52:373 (9) - 1 grid left
01:53:255 (2) - ^
01:59:652 (1) - like this?
02:03:844 (2) - move to 132|23?
02:26:123 (5) - move tail 1 grid right.

[Normal]

01:07:594 (3) - 1 grid down?
01:42:005 (1) - move tail 1 grid down.
01:57:005 (3) - 2 grid down?
very nice normal :3

good luck :3 and star, gogo!
Hinsvar

P A N wrote:

hi xinely, sorry for a delay so much XD

[2geter]

02:01:417 (1) - move tail 2 grid right for more blanket. Only dragged it one grid because two makes the blanket worse.
03:45:204 - lower a volume and off the kial? I don't see any problem here, actually... o.o
Thanks for modding! :D
Gero
Yo! M4M here

General

  1. Clean
  2. disable this, because your SB is a small, predetermined resolution http://puu.sh/4ITYM.png

Normal

  1. 00:10:241 (3,1) - this pattern is confusing to inexperienced players, would be better if you try another type of pattern here.
  2. 02:20:829 (1) - whistle here
  3. 02:21:711 (3) - on head ^
  4. 02:35:829 (3,4) - it flows a little bad imo, try this:
  5. 03:06:711 (1) - Ugly slider, would be better to do a little more symmetrical, something like this:

    Here the code if you want:
    [HitObjects]
    285,165,186711,6,0,B|305:226|472:320|558:248|570:181|548:105|477:71|409:70|323:142|387:324|444:354,1,675,4|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 03:12:888 - insert a break time here.
  7. 03:42:888 (1) - wistle? sounds good :3

Hard

  1. 00:29:432 (4,5) - a little jumps random? would be better if you move this note to X:485 Y:168
  2. 01:47:079 (4) - ^
Together

  1. Cool Diff :D
This is all, Good Luck Guys >w<~
Yumih
Hi, Xinely~! Thank you for M4M :3

Great song <3

Unrankable issue
Highly suggested
Suggestion

[General]
● This map needs epilepsy warning because of the white flashs on the SB.

● Delete unused images:
  1. sb\c761807sample1.jpg
  2. sb\sakura flower.png


[SB]
Great story board! I'll just point out some stuff~!
● The lyrics 1i.png is wrong.
  • 明日(ほし)を探したい = Ashita (Hoshi) wo sagashitai = This is wrong
    星を探したい = Hoshi wo sagashitai = This is correct
● Hmm, the grass.jpg on the SB bothered me a little because it looked too "artificial", imo. So I decided to play around with the photoshop and make this, feel free to use if you like it! Oh, I also modified together800x600.png a little so that it looked more natural with the background.
Grass/Preview
Preview



grass.jpg



together800x600.png



If you don't want the petals


Oh, please don't bother with green or white blurs, they won't appear on the SB xD

[Normal]
● 00:43:770 - Maybe add a note here and make the spinner start on 00:44:211 to follow the voice?

01:28:329 (5) - Maybe move this note to 01:28:550 to fit the voice better? Even if it's in a blue line, I don't find it difficult to follow.

● 01:34:947 (1) - The Finish sound here is too loud, imo. Maybe reduce the volume to 35%?

● 01:57:447 - Hmm, remove Whistle? Sounds unfit, imo.

● 02:13:770 (1) - I straightened the heart. I made it symmetrical, if you want to apply it, here's the code:
Code/Preview


252,172,133770,6,0,B|328:120|372:244|280:308|224:332|224:332|168:308|76:244|120:120|196:172,1,540,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
● 02:17:300 - Again, the Finish hitsound is too loud. I'd say 60% of volume would sound better.

● 02:31:417 (1) - ^

02:36:711 (4,5) - The flow here is somehow awkward.

● 02:42:888 - Loud Finish hitsound. At this point, the Kiai time is almost gone, so a lower sound would be better. Maybe 60%?

● 02:44:211 - The Drum sampleset here sounds weird, imo.

● 02:44:652 (4) - Kiai time is almost at its end, so I think a lower volume would be better fit for this Finish. Maybe 30%?

● 03:01:858 (2) - Reduce the volume to 50%? Same thing as you did on 02:57:005

● 03:10:241 - Maybe reduce the volume to 50%?

● 03:27:888 (1) - Same thing said earlier. Maybe 60%?

● 03:37:594 (5) - 60% here still sounds a bit loud. Maybe 50%?

● 03:39:358 - ^

● 03:41:123 - Maybe 40%?

● 03:42:447 (6) - Move it to 03:42:667 - ?

Sorry I made mostly hitsounds suggestions. The diff looks good c:

[Hard]
● Please check all the hitsounds suggestions I made on Normal and if you applied there, please apply to this difficult too :D

● 00:47:961 (5,6,7) - Maybe align them better?

● 01:22:594 (3,4) - Maybe improve the blanket? If doing so, move the middle node to x:105 y:282

● 03:01:858 (5) - Shouldn't it be Normal Sampleset Finish?

I don't see any problems with this difficult, so I just pointed out these nazi stuff! :?

[Together]

● 00:46:638 (3) - This slider flows a bit awkward, imo. How about doing something like this?

Just this... I guess I got too tired xD

Yeah, I am tired. I'm sorry, but I'll stop here! I'm sorry for not being so useful! It was difficult to find things to point out, the mapset is great!!

I wish you 2 the best of luck! :)

*Shoots star & goes to sleep*
hoshisorakiseki
hello, from my queue.
the storyboard and the song is good, i like it.

general:
ok

storyboard:
turn on epliepsy warning (some flashlights in your beatmap)
some images have a high resolution, try to resize them
file list
e.jpg
f.jpg
sakura flower.png

diff:Normal
-->change "beat snap divisor" to 1/4
-->try to avoid the quarter(1/4) beat.
-->i found some same pattern, try to make them a diffrent.

diff:Hard
ok

diff:Together
ok

i want to copy the hitsound to my beatmap, it sounds good for my beatmap.
finally, good luck.
Topic Starter
Xinely
it's so very helpful
thank you all >w<

@Yumih : i didn't fixed circle which move to blue tick due it's not hard but it may make newbie confuse, oh yeah thank you very much for images, it's so nice and i used it now ~

about resolution in images , is fine due i'm using scale in SB, also i'm lazy to make them smaller due maybe will be bad resolution

Updated and thank you again ~
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