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Twenty Knives - Crow's Ghost

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Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Tidek
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2 marca 2014 at 11:52:40

Artist: Twenty Knives
Title: Crow's Ghost
Tags: Breakcore 20 Knives rhythm accuracy dark death Kurokami Kin
BPM: 190
Filesize: 6013kb
Play Time: 04:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra (5 stars, 902 notes)
  2. Hard (4,87 stars, 464 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 679 notes)
  4. Kin's Easy (1,92 stars, 144 notes)
  5. Kurokami's Normal (4,11 stars, 233 notes)
Download: Twenty Knives - Crow's Ghost
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Just listen and die...
read me
2nd beatmap
Osu! needs more Breakcore!!!
Death - By me
Insane - By me
Hard - By me
Normal - GD by Kurokami's
Easy - GD by Kin's
SB - by Kurokami's, thank you ;)
When I will get my 1st map ranked? ;_;
PS. No, i wont delete last 5 notes.
Last edited by Tidek , edited 55 times in total.
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Just a fast check before I start my GD.

I think the BPM should be 189,96. The difference isn't that much, but at some place it give enourmous distance.
And the offset is 40643. Thats where the first upbeat is.
Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Tidek

Kurokami wrote:

Just a fast check before I start my GD.

I think the BPM should be 189,96. The difference isn't that much, but at some place it give enourmous distance.
And the offset is 40643. Thats where the first upbeat is.
BPM is fine, mixmeiser BPM analyzer sometimes gives wrong bpm. When i put 189,96 in DDReamStudio, sound waves in middle of song and later looks unrhytmic, so i will stay with 190 (mixmeister BPM analyzer showed wrong bpm probably because there are no sounds on beginning and quiet places), however im not sure about ending (last 5 notes), i think it needs small correct with red timing line, but not sure here.

Changed offset to 40011, not big difference at all, just red timing point look more estetic : ) (i cant put 40643 because im starting mapping little earlier)
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Here is the SB, tho it is just the first version. http://puu.sh/4BtA0.zip Just delete your sb folder and use this one, its the same, but I changed some name.
Tell me what I need to change, (I used other timing a bit so that one is for sure.) and I will change it.

And about the heart rate signal, I still working on it.
Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Tidek

Kurokami wrote:

Here is the SB, tho it is just the first version. http://puu.sh/4BtA0.zip Just delete your sb folder and use this one, its the same, but I changed some name.
Tell me what I need to change, (I used other timing a bit so that one is for sure.) and I will change it.

And about the heart rate signal, I still working on it.
Everything is ok, just 2 things:
- texts on beginning are moving little too fast
- 03:00:853 - 03:02:116 - Better if u stay on black screen here

Thank u ; )
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Here is all completed stuff: https://copy.com/OAyPWlInWaN7

I will ask a BAT about the timing, I think my offset is much better since it is the point where the upbeat is. But changes will not affect anything at all. Enjoy~
Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Tidek
Ok, all important stuff are complete so I can move it to pending.

GD Normal and rest diffs will have little different timings untill BAT will check this and write which one is correct. Its not big changes at all, so it wont affect for modding.
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. please Letterbox during breaks and tags consistent of all diffs.

[Insane]
  1. AR+1. this diff have high bpm and many notes. so AR8 is not match imo.
  2. 00:44:906 (2,3,4) - weird rhythm. like this?

  3. 00:50:748 (1) - add finish or whistle of the slider start.
  4. 00:53:275 (1) - ^
  5. 00:54:222 (6,1) - spacing is too far. try it.

  6. 01:14:748 (7) - add NC? for suddenly change rhythm.
  7. 03:02:432 (2) - add NC. for make players understand to this jump pattern.
  8. 03:03:064 (5) - ^
  9. 03:03:696 (8) - ^
  10. 03:22:643 (2) - ^
  11. 03:23:275 (5) - ^
  12. 03:23:906 (8) - ^
  13. 03:47:590 (1) - add finsih of the slider start.

[Death]
  1. 00:52:170 (10) - object is not snapped.

    amazing.

[Hard]
  1. Skip.

[Kurokami's Normal]
  1. Star rating is 4,17.. need Easy diff this map imo.
  2. Why offset is different other diffs? it is unrankable issue.
  3. add more hitsounds please.

    rhythm is fine almost for me. but this diff have some issue i guess.
Good luck! :)
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami

Guy wrote:

[Kurokami's Normal]
  1. Star rating is 4,17.. need Easy diff this map imo. Yeah, but I supposed to map a Normal and not an Easy so this has to do nothing with my diff.
  2. Why offset is different other diffs? it is unrankable issue. Please read at least the last post in this thread. First, this has to do nothing with the diff itself since there is no difference in rhythm and second, this will stay as it is until Andrea finally check it out.
  3. add more hitsounds please. Eh, I hoped that will Tidek copy them over with from the others with hitsound copier. o.o

    rhythm is fine almost for me. but this diff have some issue i guess. If those are the ones which are pointed out above then they are not really counts. o.o
Good luck! :)
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
the current offset (except normal diff) is apparently wrong due to the downbeat issue.
change it to 211 would be perfect since the music starts there and it could correct the downbeat.
Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Tidek

Guy wrote:

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. please Letterbox during breaks and tags consistent of all diffs.
Idk what u really mean about letterbox, but added tags


[Insane]
  1. AR+1. this diff have high bpm and many notes. so AR8 is not match imo. ok
  2. 00:44:906 (2,3,4) - weird rhythm. like this? nice, fixd

  3. 00:50:748 (1) - add finish or whistle of the slider start. added finish
  4. 00:53:275 (1) - ^ ^
  5. 00:54:222 (6,1) - spacing is too far. try it. fixd

  6. 01:14:748 (7) - add NC? for suddenly change rhythm.
  7. 03:02:432 (2) - add NC. for make players understand to this jump pattern. no need NCs here
  8. 03:03:064 (5) - ^
  9. 03:03:696 (8) - ^
  10. 03:22:643 (2) - ^
  11. 03:23:275 (5) - ^
  12. 03:23:906 (8) - ^[/color]
  13. 03:47:590 (1) - add finsih of the slider start. I want to make it without loud hitsounds

[Death]
  1. 00:52:170 (10) - object is not snapped. fixd

    amazing.

[Hard]
  1. Skip.

[Kurokami's Normal]
  1. Star rating is 4,17.. need Easy diff this map imo.
  2. Why offset is different other diffs? it is unrankable issue.
  3. add more hitsounds please.

    rhythm is fine almost for me. but this diff have some issue i guess.
Good luck! :)
Hit sounds on Normal are added

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

the current offset (except normal diff) is apparently wrong due to the downbeat issue.
change it to 211 would be perfect since the music starts there and it could correct the downbeat.
Fixd timing on all diffs
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
Hi



  • General
    inconsistency tags, also add Kurokami in tags
    inconsistency red timing, Death diff have 221 while others have 211
    Normal diff have not preview time (inconsistency)
    use 1500 or 2000 on audio lead in?


  • Kurokami's Normal
    it's unrankable for Normal due have 4,17 star while normal is the easier diff in here
    Normal when easiest diff in mapset should be under 3 star, make sure change Normal become under 3 star or make Easy diff instead

    also just opinion, NC in here kinda confusing due when just have 1 combo like 00:43:168 (1) - , well, make it NC every 2 stanza? it will be better imo

    Okay general modding, just looking unrankable and my opinion
    00:46:484 (2) - inconsistency spacing
    00:58:326 (1,2) - inconsistency spacing, it's must be consistency with use 1,0 (as you used in here)
    01:50:747 (4) - inconsistency spacing
    01:50:747 (4) - how about drum whistle in tail?
    02:24:694 (2) - inconsistency spacing (0,94x)
    02:26:431 (5) - ^ (1,15x) no jump pls
    02:28:799 (3) - ^ (1,07x)
    02:31:799 (2) - ^ (0,94x) etc, i hope you can find by yourself


  • Hard
    00:42:211 (6,7) - try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1038799 for better flow?
    00:43:790 (3,4,5) - try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1038803 for better flow?
    00:46:948 (3) - remove whistle in tail, add whistle in 00:47:422 (4) - 's head, sounds better imo
    00:49:158 - you should add note in here for following music
    00:56:264 (9) - it's bad imo due so many repeat, well change like http://puu.sh/4Qy2M.jpg
    01:00:211 (3,4,5) - well this is kinda make confuse imo, try to make slider which have repeat in blue tick? (same rhythm as this but the different only use 1 slider)
    01:14:737 (5,6) - try http://puu.sh/4Qy8g.jpg ? personally i prefer this flow
    01:35:737 (7) - NC due different pattern?
    01:37:474 (4) - better to ctrl+G imo
    01:40:632 (5,6,7) - same as i mean in 01:00:211 (3,4,5) -
    03:41:264 (1,2,3,4) - this is for insane actually, so hard for hard diff


  • Death
    okay seems okay i guess


  • Insane
    AR 8 for better spread? due AR 9 is better for death diff only imo
    00:41:264 (4) - NC due different pattern?
    00:58:316 (1,2,3) - try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1038814 for better flow?
    01:00:448 (2) - move to 248,32 and 01:00:685 (3) - 372,120 for avoid touched with next slider
    01:19:790 (7) - this is 1/4 jump so It must have NC for readable
    03:03:053 (5,8) - NC due seems anti jump

Good Luck ~
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,526 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
General

As what Xinely has mentioned~

Hard

00:53:737 - add a note here
01:43:160 (2) - object isn't snapped
02:13:316 (6,7) - I think you should not put (7) so far back to the right of (6), not really good flow imo, also, does not look that great, maybe you could curve the slider more
03:29:264 (8,9) - I know you are trying to make a pattern here, but it does not fit with the song to have such spacing

Insane

00:50:736 (1) - not snapped

Death

00:55:157 (11) - object not snapped
00:55:315 (12) - ^
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami

Xinely wrote:

Hi



  • General
    inconsistency tags, also add Kurokami in tags
    inconsistency red timing, Death diff have 221 while others have 211
    Normal diff have not preview time (inconsistency)     It was there all the time. o.o
    use 1500 or 2000 on audio lead in? This is no-more an option. osu! gives auto lead-in.


  • Kurokami's Normal
    it's unrankable for Normal due have 4,17 star while normal is the easier diff in here
    Normal when easiest diff in mapset should be under 3 star, make sure change Normal become under 3 star or make Easy diff instead
    Well its just needs around 3, 3,2 is also acceptable, but yes. Altough I won't change it since I can't do simplier rhythm.

    also just opinion, NC in here kinda confusing due when just have 1 combo like 00:43:168 (1) - , well, make it NC every 2 stanza? it will be better imo Every NC was went after the rhythm in the music but changed it.

    Okay general modding, just looking unrankable and my opinion
    00:46:484 (2) - inconsistency spacing
    00:58:326 (1,2) - inconsistency spacing, it's must be consistency with use 1,0 (as you used in here)
    01:50:747 (4) - inconsistency spacing
    01:50:747 (4) - how about drum whistle in tail?
    02:24:694 (2) - inconsistency spacing (0,94x)
    02:26:431 (5) - ^ (1,15x) no jump pls
    02:28:799 (3) - ^ (1,07x)
    02:31:799 (2) - ^ (0,94x) etc, i hope you can find by yourself
    Meh, I always forgot to go through once more with grid level 4. q.q Corrected everything.
Thanks for the mod.
Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Tidek

Xinely wrote:

Hi



  • General
    inconsistency tags, also add Kurokami in tags fixd
    inconsistency red timing, Death diff have 221 while others have 211 u mean normal diff have 221, while others 211, will be fixd ; )
    Normal diff have not preview time (inconsistency)
    use 1500 or 2000 on audio lead in? Audio leading has been removed from editor, so idk how to understand that : P


  • Kurokami's Normal
    it's unrankable for Normal due have 4,17 star while normal is the easier diff in here
    Normal when easiest diff in mapset should be under 3 star, make sure change Normal become under 3 star or make Easy diff instead     Im looking for easy GD atm, so dont worry about that : )


  • Hard
    00:42:211 (6,7) - try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1038799 for better flow? both fixd
    00:43:790 (3,4,5) - try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1038803 for better flow?
    00:46:948 (3) - remove whistle in tail, add whistle in 00:47:422 (4) - 's head, sounds better imo ok
    00:49:158 - you should add note in here for following music yeah, added
    00:56:264 (9) - it's bad imo due so many repeat, well change like http://puu.sh/4Qy2M.jpg Yea, i was thinking a lot how to map that part because of totally breaked rhythm, will try with your suggestion
    01:00:211 (3,4,5) - well this is kinda make confuse imo, try to make slider which have repeat in blue tick? (same rhythm as this but the different only use 1 slider) nah, 3/4 are very fun to "click" on hard or higher diff, on normal or easy i can consider that, but not here
    01:14:737 (5,6) - try http://puu.sh/4Qy8g.jpg ? personally i prefer this flow It looks nice, but I will stay with anti jumps, fits better to music for me
    01:35:737 (7) - NC due different pattern? ok
    01:37:474 (4) - better to ctrl+G imo ok
    01:40:632 (5,6,7) - same as i mean in 01:00:211 (3,4,5) - ^
    03:41:264 (1,2,3,4) - this is for insane actually, so hard for hard diff fixd a little


  • Death
    okay seems okay i guess


  • Insane
    AR 8 for better spread? due AR 9 is better for death diff only imo I was thinking a lot about it and find out that AR9 for Insane is better solution, we have some maps with extra (death) and insane diffs with the same AR, so i dont see problem
    00:41:264 (4) - NC due different pattern? nah, previous combo will be to small then
    00:58:316 (1,2,3) - try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1038814 for better flow? fixd
    01:00:448 (2) - move to 248,32 and 01:00:685 (3) - 372,120 for avoid touched with next slider fixd
    01:19:790 (7) - this is 1/4 jump so It must have NC for readable ok
    03:03:053 (5,8) - NC due seems anti jump Will consider this.

Good Luck ~

neonat wrote:

General

As what Xinely has mentioned~

Hard

00:53:737 - add a note herenah, i will stay with my pattern
01:43:160 (2) - object isn't snapped fixd
02:13:316 (6,7) - I think you should not put (7) so far back to the right of (6), not really good flow imo, also, does not look that great, maybe you could curve the slider more hmm, i will make better blanket
03:29:264 (8,9) - I know you are trying to make a pattern here, but it does not fit with the song to have such spacing fixd, moved 9 further

Insane

00:50:736 (1) - not snapped fixd

Death

00:55:157 (11) - object not snapped both fixd
00:55:315 (12) - ^
Thanks
-Srui-
94 posts
Joined October 2012
-Srui-
Hi~ :3

[Kurokami's Normal]
  • It is feels like Hard diff.. but not bad :)
    00:58:316 (1,2) - blanket ?
    01:04:947 (3) - add whistle
    01:05:263 (4) - add whistle on start
    02:13:158 (3) - reduce some curve
    02:19:474 (2) - ^ and blanket with 02:20:421 (3) -
    02:30:526 (3,1) - blanket
    02:31:789 (1,2,3) - maybe this patter is hard for beginner. i suggest delete (2)

    [Hard]
    • 00:57:053 (1) - reduce some curve
      01:13:158 (6,7) - close
      01:39:842 (3) - a little bent

      [Death]
      • Nice :3

        [Insane]
        • Nice :3
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
I'm not sure what happened but I can't quote it normaly. o.o Anyways:

-Srui- wrote:

[Kurokami's Normal]
It is feels like Hard diff.. but not bad :) I dunno, I can fc it so it shouldn't be a Hard. :3
00:58:316 (1,2) - blanket ? Eh, Done.
01:04:947 (3) - add whistle Sure.
01:05:263 (4) - add whistle on start Sure.
02:13:158 (3) - reduce some curve Probably done.
02:19:474 (2) - ^ and blanket with 02:20:421 (3) - Reduced curve, but it was already a blanket..
02:30:526 (3,1) - blanket (3) was blanket with (2) but oh well.
02:31:789 (1,2,3) - maybe this patter is hard for beginner. i suggest delete (2) Idon't think this was really that hard but removed for the sake of be easier. :3
Here ya go~
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 121474
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Crow's Ghost
TitleUnicode:Crow's Ghost
Artist:Twenty Knives
ArtistUnicode:Twenty Knives
Creator:Tidek
Version:Kurokami's Normal
Source:
Tags:Breakcore 20 Knives rhythm accuracy dark death Kurokami
BeatmapID:310894
BeatmapSetID:117450

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Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Tidek

-Srui- wrote:

Hi~ :3

[Hard]
  • 00:57:053 (1) - reduce some curve fixd
    01:13:158 (6,7) - close nah, its accented with music
    01:39:842 (3) - a little bent nah, it fits with next slider
Thanks
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
hi, from my queue :3

[Insane]

00:43:158 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - what about this pattern?
SPOILER
if you follow above, move this too - 00:44:421 (1,2,3,4,5) - 40|216 , 232|320 , 320|204 , 324|192 , 252|128 for still keep the perfect stack. and fix the note after this too.
00:47:421 (7,8) - I think move to 68|180 , 104|16 is more playable.
01:01:789 (3,4,5) - for this and the triple after this, please move a triple far from the tail slider, the player will think that is a quad stream.
01:34:158 (2) - 1 grid up
01:48:842 (5,6) - why suddenly change the spacing here?
I think some of your jump need more pattern like I suggest on the first.

[Death]

00:49:632 (6,7,9) - move to 208|128 , 20|120 , 116|48 for star pattern.
00:51:842 (8,9,10) - try to make all of tail be a triangle too.
SPOILER
01:02:105 / 01:02:895 - NC
01:06:842 (6) - move about to 256|160 for avoid overlap.
01:07:947 - NC
01:17:263 - NC
01:21:053 (2,3,4) - I think balance spacing with (1) is already fine, this can media that its a triple here.
01:25:632 (6,7,8) - 444|168 for better pattern.
02:00:842 - this combo is too long so i suggest to NC on (11)
02:06:211 (1,3) - swap NC is more fit.
02:15:842 (3) - 2 grid left for parallel. and please avoid the overlap on (2)
02:16:316 (1,3) - swap NC is more fit.
02:18:447 (13) - move to 02:18:368 (red tick) and NC?
02:38:579 - NC?
02:39:842 (2,3,4) - move to 256|332? for stack with next (10) and fix (5) for balance spacing.
03:03:053 / 03:03:684 / 03:05:579 / 03:06:211 / 03:23:263 / 03:23:895 / 03:25:789 - NC?

[kurokami]

00:52:653 (4) - please avoid overlap. this is not looks good D:
01:10:316 (3,4,1) - move to 336|320 , 220|348 , 156|248 for better star symmetry.
01:25:158 (4) - center point: 300|320 and tail: 360|308 for better blanket.
01:40:000 (3) - tail: 408|292 for more blanket.

[Hard]

skip ;w;

good luck!
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Done everything. Thanks.

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288,72,155895,2,0,P|200:144|112:80,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,156842,22,0,P|32:120|32:40,2,180,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,256,158105,2,0,P|145:300|96:312,2,120,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,232,159053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,159211,1,4,0:0:0:0:
400,152,159368,6,0,P|392:88|352:48,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,144,160316,1,4,0:0:0:0:
168,96,160632,2,0,L|112:64,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,160,161105,2,0,L|64:216,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,161579,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,320,161895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,104,182105,6,0,P|352:168|312:200,1,120,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,182579,1,4,0:0:0:0:
200,200,182737,2,0,P|155:161|144:104,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
40,40,183368,2,0,P|24:104|32:160,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,264,184000,2,0,L|32:304,2,60,4|2|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,312,184632,22,0,P|256:328|312:312,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
396,232,185263,2,0,P|428:288|420:344,2,120,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,186211,1,2,3:0:0:0:
404,116,186526,2,0,L|428:60,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,60,187158,6,0,P|240:68|200:116,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
404,116,188105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,188421,2,0,P|248:208|192:216,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
96,152,189053,2,0,L|64:96,2,60,0|2|4,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,189684,6,0,L|40:296,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,190158,2,0,L|128:352,2,60,2|2|0,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,288,190632,2,0,P|276:304|332:288,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,191263,2,0,P|448:248|448:304,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,192211,22,0,P|248:112|232:56,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
176,36,192684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,56,192842,2,0,P|102:112|56:149,1,120,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
96,264,193474,2,0,P|152:240|176:184,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,360,194421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,352,194737,6,0,P|208:352|264:328,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
364,272,195368,2,0,L|404:320,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,196000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,196316,2,0,L|256:56,2,60,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,104,196947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,197263,6,0,P|120:224|64:168,2,180,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
336,188,198526,2,0,P|328:260|296:300,2,120,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,128,199316,2,0,L|364:80,2,60,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,108,199789,22,0,P|212:132|156:108,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,100,200263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,156,200421,2,0,P|80:220|112:268,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,280,201053,2,0,P|164:344|76:352,2,180,2|2|4,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,320,202316,6,0,P|388:280|404:224,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
284,208,202947,2,0,P|308:152|356:112,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,88,203579,2,0,P|316:24|388:32,2,180,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,40,204842,6,0,P|128:104|152:160,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,196,205316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,184,205474,2,0,P|268:248|244:296,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
344,360,206105,2,0,P|384:312|400:256,1,120,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
416,200,206579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,144,206737,2,0,P|382:86|344:41,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,207368,22,0,L|256:56,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,208000,1,2,3:0:0:0:
160,312,208316,1,2,3:0:0:0:
264,256,208632,2,0,P|320:288|376:280,2,120,4|2|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,209579,1,4,0:0:0:0:
72,112,209895,6,0,P|128:80|184:80,2,120,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
24,224,210842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,320,211158,2,0,P|152:344|208:328,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,352,211789,2,0,P|368:312|376:256,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,212421,6,0,P|384:136|440:152,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,213368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,80,213684,2,0,P|152:88|112:128,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,240,214316,2,0,P|128:296|176:312,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,312,214947,22,0,P|384:344|472:328,2,180,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,240,216211,2,0,P|448:224|488:176,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,216,217158,1,2,3:0:0:0:
376,152,217474,6,0,P|416:120|432:56,1,120,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
312,32,218105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,218421,1,2,3:0:0:0:
144,192,218737,2,0,L|104:144,2,60,2|2|2,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
264,192,219368,2,0,L|304:144,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,312,220000,6,0,P|200:344|120:312,2,180,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,280,221263,2,0,L|448:320,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,244,221737,1,2,3:0:0:0:
344,184,221895,1,2,3:0:0:0:
256,104,222211,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,222526,12,0,225053,0:0:0:0:
Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Tidek

P A N wrote:

hi, from my queue :3

[Insane]

00:43:158 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - what about this pattern?
SPOILER
if you follow above, move this too - 00:44:421 (1,2,3,4,5) - 40|216 , 232|320 , 320|204 , 324|192 , 252|128 for still keep the perfect stack. and fix the note after this too. like it, fixd all
00:47:421 (7,8) - I think move to 68|180 , 104|16 is more playable. fixd
01:01:789 (3,4,5) - for this and the triple after this, please move a triple far from the tail slider, the player will think that is a quad stream. I think there is no problem with reading this
01:34:158 (2) - 1 grid up fixd
01:48:842 (5,6) - why suddenly change the spacing here? music accent (lower DS for normal beat, higher DS for drums or whateva is this : D)
I think some of your jump need more pattern like I suggest on the first. Yea, I will fix some of them

[Death]

00:49:632 (6,7,9) - move to 208|128 , 20|120 , 116|48 for star pattern. nice fixd
00:51:842 (8,9,10) - try to make all of tail be a triangle too. fixd
SPOILER
01:02:105 / 01:02:895 - NC nah, im keeping long combos between strong beats
01:06:842 (6) - move about to 256|160 for avoid overlap. I moved it, but not that high
01:07:947 - NC ^
01:17:263 - NC ^
01:21:053 (2,3,4) - I think balance spacing with (1) is already fine, this can media that its a triple here. For me its harder to read when i use 1,0x spacing on (1)
01:25:632 (6,7,8) - 444|168 for better pattern. fixd
02:00:842 - this combo is too long so i suggest to NC on (11) like i said before
02:06:211 (1,3) - swap NC is more fit. Yes, but red sliders inform a player that there is speed up
02:15:842 (3) - 2 grid left for parallel. and please avoid the overlap on (2) fixd
02:16:316 (1,3) - swap NC is more fit. ^
02:18:447 (13) - move to 02:18:368 (red tick) and NC? wow, my big mistake with that blue that tick, fixd. But NCs stay the same here
02:38:579 - NC? ^
02:39:842 (2,3,4) - move to 256|332? for stack with next (10) and fix (5) for balance spacing. fixd
03:03:053 / 03:03:684 / 03:05:579 / 03:06:211 / 03:23:263 / 03:23:895 / 03:25:789 - NC? I will consider NCs here (the same on insane and hard)

[Hard]

skip ;w;

good luck!
Thank you : )
Alumetorz
408 posts
Joined October 2011
Alumetorz
My thoughts about Death diff
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Tidek
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Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Tidek
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Squichu
1,013 posts
Joined November 2012
Squichu
Sorreeey, mod comes late, but at least it's here! ><
I'm lazy.. orz

[General]
  1. the resolution of bg.png is fine, it doesn't get deformed, but overscaled extremely. really, if you play with fullscreen it's not nice to look at.. :\
    I'd suggest lookin for a background that's the maximum size, cause it's last pixelated then.
  2. also, the Audio Quality is acceptable, buuut it could be better. I know the song is a few years old, but still you might be able to get your hands on a higher quality file..
  3. SB files look fine, but the bg.png file is there twice, you can delete one, I think? cause it's useless to have it two times if it's exactly the same.
    oh, and the black borders in text1 and text2 are pixelated as well, doesn't look nice. :c
  4. SB load is far too high though. I think up till 5,00 it's okay, but 6 is not.. while testplaying you can see the SB load flashing in red.. gotta change that.
  5. cause of SB you should display epilepsy warning in all difficulties
  6. and check your tags, they're not the same in all diffs (or at least AIMod says so)
[Kurokami's Normal]
this feels more like a Hard diff than a Normal.. but I guess that's fine once an Easy is added. :D
  1. Preview Time hast to be the same as in other diffs
  2. 00:43:158 (1,2) - align sliders like 1 perfectly to 2, you can use the approach circle as a template
    that's just a matter of taste, though.. some people do it that way intentional.. I do prefer the 'perfectly round' shape though, looks more structured to me.
    00:48:526 (2) - same here
    00:52:632 (4) - and here, the end is too close to 00:52:000 (2)
    00:54:842 (3,1,2)
    and many more, I won't point all of them out
  3. 00:46:632 (3) - move further down to 260|236, 00:45:684 (1,2,3) match with 00:45:368 (6) then
  4. 00:50:421 (4,1) - has a nicer feeling if you switch them around or just move 4 to the same place as 1, cause the movement of 00:49:474 (3) indicates an object there, the way it it now it's disrupting the flow
  5. 01:08:263 (3) - why does this start on a red tick? it doesn't match the beat
  6. 01:28:632 (1) - the shape looks weird.. is there any reason to use this? .o.
  7. 02:41:895 to 03:02:105 - this break is definitely too long
[Hard]
  1. DS is broken at some parts unnecessarily, example: 01:13:316 (7,1) - the mini-jump doesn't increase difficulty at all, cause it's only visually disturbing the flow of the diff. play-wise it's totally okay, but it doesn't look good.
  2. 01:36:842 (5,6,7) - looks crampled, make sure the distance between the slider borders and cirlce is the same everywhere
    that does apply to a few more parts, if you pay attention to stuff like that the diff looks more structured and thought-out, less random
  3. 02:41:895 to 03:02:105 - same as in Normal, too long
hmh, overall this diff lacks structure, imo.. DS needs to be more consistent I think. the diff is too full of jumps, I guess. s:
personal taste!! >o<

[Insane / Death]
Only thing: same as in Hard - imo even Insanes need more consistent spacing. I'm not saying this is bad or anything, I just like creative structure and this seems overloded with jumps.. or maybe I just don't notice structure.. well, can't really say anything about this style of mapping, cause I don't have that much experience in modding yet.. sorry. :\
Also, I don't know if
Also, do not use the same color twice consecutively.
applies to combocolours after breaks, but I think it doesn't.. cause it should be readable.. but I don't know for sure, you should ask a BAT about this sometime, cause of the consecutive usage of red c-colour at the end of the diff..

well, wasn't that useful, sorry. Dx
Good luck with this! ^__^/
Asphyxia
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Joined June 2012
Asphyxia
Hi, mod from my queue! Sorry I'm a bit late but o well, let's get started!

[General thoughts]

  1. There is inconsistency with stuff:
  2. Combo colours
    Click me
  3. Other stuff:
    Click me
[Kurokami's Normal]

  1. Please turn up the volume a bit, I can't hear any kind of hitsounds. :s
  2. 00:43:158 (1,2) - This could be a better blanket
  3. 00:45:684 (1,2,3) - Why didn't you add a bit more curve to this? You could curve it little more by moving (3) more down?
  4. 00:48:526 (2) - Slider middlepoint at x:168 y:336 and endpoint at x:112 y:348 to make a better blanket
  5. 00:50:737 (1,3) - You could improve this blanket also a bit. You probably see where I am going with these blanket suggestions, if you fixed these please make sure to fix every blanket in the map because I wont bother mentioning these again because there's a slight chance you don't want them to be fixed or so.
  6. 01:23:579 (1) - You could try to make this slider more symmetrical, it looks ugly when it's not. Here's a way to do it, press CTRL + Shift + R and put the slider like this. (should be rotated by 34 degrees clockwise or so)
    Click
    You see now that it's not very beautiful actually so try to make it symmetrical like this
    Click
    And then rotate it back!
  7. 01:26:105 (1,2,3) - I could see this curving like this one here 01:27:684 (4,5,6) - but that's up to you really.
  8. 02:15:368 (4) - Slider redpoint 1 grid right to make it more symmetrical I assume?
  9. Otherwise fine.
[Hard]

  1. +1 HP to make diff spread more equal
  2. 01:03:368 (1) - Spacing pls
  3. 01:13:474 (1) - ^
  4. 01:18:526 (1) - ^
  5. 02:04:000 (1) - Maybe lower it spacing a bit
  6. 01:45:053 (3) UNSNAPPED SLIDER
  7. 03:16:474 (6,9) - Overlaps
  8. Otherwise fine
[Insane]

  1. +1 For this also
  2. 01:45:053 (9) Unsnapped slider (end)
  3. I like it, no problems for me here
[Death]

  1. Not really good at finding stuff in this kind of insane so I wont mod it, sorry =(
  2. 01:45:184 (2) Unsnapped circle tho
Nice mapset, best of luck with this :)
Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Tidek

Squirrel wrote:

Sorreeey, mod comes late, but at least it's here! ><
I'm lazy.. orz

[General]
  1. the resolution of bg.png is fine, it doesn't get deformed, but overscaled extremely. really, if you play with fullscreen it's not nice to look at.. :\
    I'd suggest lookin for a background that's the maximum size, cause it's last pixelated then. Will consider this, if there will be more suggestions about it
  2. also, the Audio Quality is acceptable, buuut it could be better. I know the song is a few years old, but still you might be able to get your hands on a higher quality file.. I dont think that i will be able to find that version in 192kpbs, because for example version from youtube sounds different (here all sounds are way more clearly)
  3. SB files look fine, but the bg.png file is there twice, you can delete one, I think? cause it's useless to have it two times if it's exactly the same.
    oh, and the black borders in text1 and text2 are pixelated as well, doesn't look nice. :c Im not SB maker, so idk i can delete bg.png ;d About texts, like in resolution of bg file, will consider this
  4. SB load is far too high though. I think up till 5,00 it's okay, but 6 is not.. while testplaying you can see the SB load flashing in red.. gotta change that.
  5. cause of SB you should display epilepsy warning in all difficulties
  6. and check your tags, they're not the same in all diffs (or at least AIMod says so) fixd tags
[Kurokami's Normal]
this feels more like a Hard diff than a Normal.. but I guess that's fine once an Easy is added. :D Easy will be added (still looking for GD, its really hard to find mapper who will like that kind of song and will make for beginner mapper like me xD)

[Hard]
  1. DS is broken at some parts unnecessarily, example: 01:13:316 (7,1) - the mini-jump doesn't increase difficulty at all, cause it's only visually disturbing the flow of the diff. play-wise it's totally okay, but it doesn't look good. Will write about my mapping style on the end (in your example, i accented strongest beats)
  2. 01:36:842 (5,6,7) - looks crampled, make sure the distance between the slider borders and cirlce is the same everywhere fixd
    that does apply to a few more parts, if you pay attention to stuff like that the diff looks more structured and thought-out, less random
  3. 02:41:895 to 03:02:105 - same as in Normal, too long Well, not my fault at all, there are no sounds, I wont make "hitsound rhythm"
hmh, overall this diff lacks structure, imo.. DS needs to be more consistent I think. the diff is too full of jumps, I guess. s:
personal taste!! >o< I thought that a little jumpy is only kiai part ; ) (well, kiai should be that "boss" part)

Squirrel wrote:

[Insane / Death]
Only thing: same as in Hard - imo even Insanes need more consistent spacing. I'm not saying this is bad or anything, I just like creative structure and this seems overloded with jumps.. or maybe I just don't notice structure.. well, can't really say anything about this style of mapping, cause I don't have that much experience in modding yet.. sorry. :\
Also, I don't know if
Also, do not use the same color twice consecutively.
applies to combocolours after breaks, but I think it doesn't.. cause it should be readable.. but I don't know for sure, you should ask a BAT about this sometime, cause of the consecutive usage of red c-colour at the end of the diff..

well, wasn't that useful, sorry. Dx
Good luck with this! ^__^/
My mapping style: I always put notes in places where i can hear sound in music, I never make "hit sound rhythm" that means, putting random triplets or streams or whateva just to make map more difficulty without any accent with music. Also, my DS changes are in places where music "tells" me to do it, stronger beat/drum/any sound = higher DS.

About colours, I think that there is nothing wrong with using the same colour after break. But yea, will ask BAT about that.


EDIT: next mod

Asphyxia wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue! Sorry I'm a bit late but o well, let's get started!

[General thoughts]

  1. There is inconsistency with stuff:
  2. Combo colours Hmm, I think that i can use different combo colour on some diffs. On insane and death I was using red colour only for slider speed changes, on hard diff i dont need this
    Click me
  3. Other stuff: fixd tags before, rest probably Kurokami will fix
    Click me

[Hard]

  1. +1 HP to make diff spread more equal Ok
  2. 01:03:368 (1) - Spacing pls
  3. 01:13:474 (1) - ^
  4. 01:18:526 (1) - ^
  5. 02:04:000 (1) - Maybe lower it spacing a bit
  6. 01:45:053 (3) UNSNAPPED SLIDER No, its 1/12 rhythm (yea was hard to find that) listen on 25% playback
  7. 03:16:474 (6,9) - Overlaps fixd
  8. Otherwise fine
[Insane]

  1. +1 For this also Ok
  2. 01:45:053 (9) Unsnapped slider (end) look hard
  3. I like it, no problems for me here
[Death]

  1. Not really good at finding stuff in this kind of insane so I wont mod it, sorry =(
  2. 01:45:184 (2) Unsnapped circle tho look above : )
Nice mapset, best of luck with this :)
Thank you : )
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue (:

General

- You should consider adding a super Easy, the spread atm is on the hard side and the Normal isn't very Easy, so beginners don't have an easy starts on your map and can't play something simple. The rythm in Normal and the BPM make it especially harder. The rythm is quiet hard for an Easy but if you focus on the white ticks you can make a simple Easy.
- The SB coding is a little off, you should fix the tiny difference in ms.
- The hitsounds are barely hearable. You need to higher the volume of the hitsounds in the time sections. They totally go under in this powerful song.
- The epilepsy warning isn't enabled in every difficultie.

Normal

01:34:947 (2) - I think you can create a better looking and fitting slider than this. It doesn't look so attractive and the shape is a little disturbing towards 01:33:684 (1) - , which might confuse a little. You could simply just 01:33:684 (1) - copy paste this and horizintal swap it. It gives a better effect and play nicer. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056769
01:38:421 (6,1) - Blanket this better.
01:42:842 (4,1) - These two together look a little weird. If you curve it a little into the other direction the flow gets better and it also goes hand in hand with 01:44:421 (2) - this slider. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056774
02:06:526 (1,2) - Blanket this better so it suits to the previous slider.
02:14:105 (1,2,3,4) - That's a nice way of combining slider and circle. It looks very nice!
02:25:474 (4,5) - The blanket here also looks a little unattractive. You should rotate this slider 02:26:421 (5) - a little so it fits to the previous one and looks better. You can simply copy paste and horizontale swap this again. Of course without a repeat. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056788
03:12:842 (3,4) - You could shape them better to each other.
03:22:947 (2,3) - The right left movement is not easy for new players. The only get used to more rythms and simple flow and shouldn't play things like this. The flow 03:22:947 (2) - of this goes right so when you have to move left after it might be hard to play. Patterns like this go better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056796 Ofc you have to adjust the following then, or you make it different.#
03:27:368 (1) - When the slider reverse is so close to the end of 03:26:737 (6) - it might be missclicked. You should move the sliderpoint of the repeat slider left.
03:41:737 - Tbh, a slider would work better here for the ending. It fits to the song and plays better.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056798

Hard

- Take care of your comboing. Sometimes 00:43:158 (1,1) - they are short and then they go long 00:46:000 (1) - . Don't use both.

01:08:263 (7) - Move the circle a little right so you have a nice triangle pattern. You have consistant spacing so far so don't destroy it by one circle.
01:13:316 (7,1) - , 01:18:368 (7,1) - Same, the little spacing difference is unneeded and feels odd when playng.
01:25:316 (5) - It will play better if you unstack these, since the sliders aren't stacked either.
01:35:579 - On this white tick should be an element due to it being clearly hearable its an important beat. Maybe something like that, or you could find something better. http://puu.sh/4YaU2.jpg (starting point is 01:35:895 - )
02:08:895 (8,1) - , 02:13:947 (8,1) - , 02:19:000 (9,1) - , 02:24:053 (6,1) - , 02:29:105 (7,1) - , 02:31:474 (9,1) - , 02:34:158 (7,1) - , 02:39:211 (9,1) - Again, this jump is unneeded and not fitting and i see no point of making one.
02:20:421 (3,4,5,6) - The placement is very random and confusing at this part. You should replace them proper in a better shape. Maybe something similar to this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056818
02:40:000 (2,3) - Tiny spacing mistake, move it further away.
02:40:632 (4) - And here its too far away, move it closer.
03:40:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - You truly expect this to be the same 1/1 as the previous pattern 03:39:368 (5,6,7,8) - . You should make something different here or else its missunderstood and playerd wrong.
03:42:526 (1) - Unstack this so its more readable and people know its an 1/1 circle.

Extra (Consider this on the Insane difficultie as well, please. Same mistakes)

- The ending of the difficultie is different from the other difficulties and should be the same, also i dont understand why you have such weird patterns at the end, when there is nothing much to play to anymore in the song. You really should remove this. If not, make something playable.
- There are too many breaks at the end which are unneeded.
- 03:47:579 (1) - Sliders like those are unrankable and not allowed.
- You need to fix up your comboing again, it's very random at times and should be consistant. There are combos up to 17.
- 00:45:842 (2,3,4,5) - Such spacing is really disturbing when playing. First you have 00:45:368 (7,8,1) - big jumps and then tiny spacing and clustered pattern. You should make this clear how to play since its the same 1/2 rythm pattern and when you have it so clustered it might be missunderstod.
- 00:48:526 (2,3) - You have the same spacing as 00:48:211 (1,2) - . Yet the rythm placement is totally different. You should again make it clear how to play this, since how it is now, is not readable enough.
- 00:54:526 (6) - This is a hidden note and is not readable, playable and visible enough.
- 01:05:895 (4) - Slider is not clearly visible and hidden due to the previous slider, you have to fix this and make it readable enough so it can be played.
- 01:07:789 (11,17) - Done for symmetry and the spacing, even though its the same 1/2 pattern, is not consistatn with 01:07:947 (12) - . You need to make your decision how you use jumps and spacing changes.
- 01:09:053 (3,4,5) - Again the same
- 01:26:737 (4,5) - Very close to the previous pattern and also not clearly visible to play. Move them further away or so you can clearly see the difference.
- 01:31:158 (1) - Spacing mistake, needs to be further away or else it will be played as 1/2 circle.
- 01:35:737 (7) - Same again

You need to fix things up which i advised in the whole difficultie. It's really not readable and playable enough sometimes. The whole difficultie needs more work on spacing and placement. Currently it's not on a good standard.

I hope this makes you better prepared for further mapping and away from such mistakes and makes you more aware of things. The Extra and Insane is really messed up and makes no sense sometimes.

Very good luck on this o/
Kurokami
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Kurokami
Man, I guess I need to get to work. lol

Edit:

Squirrel wrote:

[Kurokami's Normal]
this feels more like a Hard diff than a Normal.. but I guess that's fine once an Easy is added. :D
  1. Preview Time hast to be the same as in other diffs Tidek forgot to change it. \o/
  2. 00:43:158 (1,2) - align sliders like 1 perfectly to 2, you can use the approach circle as a template
    that's just a matter of taste, though.. some people do it that way intentional.. I do prefer the 'perfectly round' shape though, looks more structured to me.
    00:48:526 (2) - same here
    00:52:632 (4) - and here, the end is too close to 00:52:000 (2)
    00:54:842 (3,1,2)
    and many more, I won't point all of them out I changed to ones above but I'm lazy to search after these, bear with them. /me runs
  3. 00:46:632 (3) - move further down to 260|236, 00:45:684 (1,2,3) match with 00:45:368 (6) then k.
  4. 00:50:421 (4,1) - has a nicer feeling if you switch them around or just move 4 to the same place as 1, cause the movement of 00:49:474 (3) indicates an object there, the way it it now it's disrupting the flow Done.
  5. 01:08:263 (3) - why does this start on a red tick? it doesn't match the beat It is, you just need to listen more, but w/e, changed.
  6. 01:28:632 (1) - the shape looks weird.. is there any reason to use this? .o. Yes, I'm tired of useing only curved ones.
  7. 02:41:895 to 03:02:105 - this break is definitely too long Maybe yes, but please tell me what I can map there. Completely silenced hitsounds are not alloved but other way you can't hear the music nor rhythm if I map there something. And not speaking about it freaking hard to map something there. x.x

Asphyxia wrote:

[Kurokami's Normal]

  1. Please turn up the volume a bit, I can't hear any kind of hitsounds. :s Okay. o.o
  2. 00:43:158 (1,2) - This could be a better blanket Done with the previous mod.
  3. 00:45:684 (1,2,3) - Why didn't you add a bit more curve to this? You could curve it little more by moving (3) more down? Done, I guess.
  4. 00:48:526 (2) - Slider middlepoint at x:168 y:336 and endpoint at x:112 y:348 to make a better blanket Done.
  5. 00:50:737 (1,3) - You could improve this blanket also a bit. You probably see where I am going with these blanket suggestions, if you fixed these please make sure to fix every blanket in the map because I wont bother mentioning these again because there's a slight chance you don't want them to be fixed or so. I changed this place due the previous mod, and I can't do blanket here w/o overlapping or DS breaking.
  6. 01:23:579 (1) - You could try to make this slider more symmetrical, it looks ugly when it's not. Here's a way to do it, press CTRL + Shift + R and put the slider like this. (should be rotated by 34 degrees clockwise or so) Done I guess.
    Click
    You see now that it's not very beautiful actually so try to make it symmetrical like this
    Click
    And then rotate it back!
  7. 01:26:105 (1,2,3) - I could see this curving like this one here 01:27:684 (4,5,6) - but that's up to you really. Its impossible if I want to keep the blanket between two notes before.
  8. 02:15:368 (4) - Slider redpoint 1 grid right to make it more symmetrical I assume? Done.
  9. Otherwise fine.

BounceBabe wrote:

Normal

01:34:947 (2) - I think you can create a better looking and fitting slider than this. It doesn't look so attractive and the shape is a little disturbing towards 01:33:684 (1) - , which might confuse a little. You could simply just 01:33:684 (1) - copy paste this and horizintal swap it. It gives a better effect and play nicer. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056769 Done.
01:38:421 (6,1) - Blanket this better. Done.
01:42:842 (4,1) - These two together look a little weird. If you curve it a little into the other direction the flow gets better and it also goes hand in hand with 01:44:421 (2) - this slider. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056774 Done.
02:06:526 (1,2) - Blanket this better so it suits to the previous slider. Done.
02:14:105 (1,2,3,4) - That's a nice way of combining slider and circle. It looks very nice! :3
02:25:474 (4,5) - The blanket here also looks a little unattractive. You should rotate this slider 02:26:421 (5) - a little so it fits to the previous one and looks better. You can simply copy paste and horizontale swap this again. Of course without a repeat. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056788 Done but not the distance between 02:26:421 (5,1) - is 1,12x. o.o I'm not sure if this is allowed. q.q
03:12:842 (3,4) - You could shape them better to each other. Done. I hope. Well, the repeat is want to be in the previous "combo"s center.
03:22:947 (2,3) - The right left movement is not easy for new players. The only get used to more rythms and simple flow and shouldn't play things like this. The flow 03:22:947 (2) - of this goes right so when you have to move left after it might be hard to play. Patterns like this go better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056796 Ofc you have to adjust the following then, or you make it different.# Done.
03:27:368 (1) - When the slider reverse is so close to the end of 03:26:737 (6) - it might be missclicked. You should move the sliderpoint of the repeat slider left. I'm not sure if I did it right but I hope so.
03:41:737 - Tbh, a slider would work better here for the ending. It fits to the song and plays better.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056798 Done.
Thanks for the mod guys (or girls/both) they were really helpful. I learned some "new" things again. :3

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Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Tidek

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue (:

General

- You should consider adding a super Easy, the spread atm is on the hard side and the Normal isn't very Easy, so beginners don't have an easy starts on your map and can't play something simple. The rythm in Normal and the BPM make it especially harder. The rythm is quiet hard for an Easy but if you focus on the white ticks you can make a simple Easy. still looking for easy GD ;_;
- The SB coding is a little off, you should fix the tiny difference in ms.
- The hitsounds are barely hearable. You need to higher the volume of the hitsounds in the time sections. They totally go under in this powerful song. im not fan of hitsounds, but ok, i will do it
- The epilepsy warning isn't enabled in every difficultie. fixd

Hard

- Take care of your comboing. Sometimes 00:43:158 (1,1) - they are short and then they go long 00:46:000 (1) - . Don't use both.

01:08:263 (7) - Move the circle a little right so you have a nice triangle pattern. You have consistant spacing so far so don't destroy it by one circle. Ok, after few suggestions, i will fix all of these spacing changes, hope u guys were right
01:13:316 (7,1) - , 01:18:368 (7,1) - Same, the little spacing difference is unneeded and feels odd when playng. ^
01:25:316 (5) - It will play better if you unstack these, since the sliders aren't stacked either. fixd
01:35:579 - On this white tick should be an element due to it being clearly hearable its an important beat. Maybe something like that, or you could find something better. http://puu.sh/4YaU2.jpg (starting point is 01:35:895 - ) Actually main beats are quiet on that white tick, will stay with my pattern atm
02:08:895 (8,1) - , 02:13:947 (8,1) - , 02:19:000 (9,1) - , 02:24:053 (6,1) - , 02:29:105 (7,1) - , 02:31:474 (9,1) - , 02:34:158 (7,1) - , 02:39:211 (9,1) - Again, this jump is unneeded and not fitting and i see no point of making one. ^
02:20:421 (3,4,5,6) - The placement is very random and confusing at this part. You should replace them proper in a better shape. Maybe something similar to this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056818 That placement wasnt random xD, but yea i fixd it
02:40:000 (2,3) - Tiny spacing mistake, move it further away. fixd
02:40:632 (4) - And here its too far away, move it closer. fixd
03:40:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - You truly expect this to be the same 1/1 as the previous pattern 03:39:368 (5,6,7,8) - . You should make something different here or else its missunderstood and playerd wrong. fixd that part
03:42:526 (1) - Unstack this so its more readable and people know its an 1/1 circle. not sure about that, but ok, fixd

Extra (Consider this on the Insane difficultie as well, please. Same mistakes)

- The ending of the difficultie is different from the other difficulties and should be the same, also i dont understand why you have such weird patterns at the end, when there is nothing much to play to anymore in the song. You really should remove this. If not, make something playable. You mean kiai part or last 5 notes?
- There are too many breaks at the end which are unneeded. ^ (and read description : P)
- 03:47:579 (1) - Sliders like those are unrankable and not allowed.
- You need to fix up your comboing again, it's very random at times and should be consistant. There are combos up to 17. Im making new combos almost always at the same beat, some times it can be longer or shorter cuz of 1/4 reverse sliders, but yea, i will fix some of them
- 00:45:842 (2,3,4,5) - Such spacing is really disturbing when playing. First you have 00:45:368 (7,8,1) - big jumps and then tiny spacing and clustered pattern. You should make this clear how to play since its the same 1/2 rythm pattern and when you have it so clustered it might be missunderstod.
I knew that some1 finally will mention that, honestly idk why I lowered DS here. fixd
- 00:48:526 (2,3) - You have the same spacing as 00:48:211 (1,2) - . Yet the rythm placement is totally different. You should again make it clear how to play this, since how it is now, is not readable enough. moved 3-circle further
- 00:54:526 (6) - This is a hidden note and is not readable, playable and visible enough. ok, made longer 1/4 repeater here, but in some similar places on that map it fits.
- 01:05:895 (4) - Slider is not clearly visible and hidden due to the previous slider, you have to fix this and make it readable enough so it can be played. changed curve of previous slider
- 01:07:789 (11,17) - Done for symmetry and the spacing, even though its the same 1/2 pattern, is not consistatn with 01:07:947 (12) - . You need to make your decision how you use jumps and spacing changes. it has higher spacing because of 2 strong sounds there, i think its reasonable
- 01:09:053 (3,4,5) - Again the same ok, here i agree, fixd
- 01:26:737 (4,5) - Very close to the previous pattern and also not clearly visible to play. Move them further away or so you can clearly see the difference. fixd
- 01:31:158 (1) - Spacing mistake, needs to be further away or else it will be played as 1/2 circle. its easily readable
- 01:35:737 (7) - Same again ^

You need to fix things up which i advised in the whole difficultie. It's really not readable and playable enough sometimes. The whole difficultie needs more work on spacing and placement. Currently it's not on a good standard.

I hope this makes you better prepared for further mapping and away from such mistakes and makes you more aware of things. The Extra and Insane is really messed up and makes no sense sometimes.

Very good luck on this o/
Also, fixd some NCs in all (my) diffs

Thanks
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Okay, I adjusted the sb to the current timing.

SB
And here is the sb changes only for the two hardest diff:
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You need to put bellow Foreground in text editor.
Nwolf
2,598 posts
Joined September 2012
Nwolf
woof

[Kurokami's Normal]

00:42:684 (5) and 00:45:211 (5) - delete them, might be a bit better for a Normal diff and most people that start playing Osu can't click three 1/2 in a row : D (and it's the only part in the map where you used 1/2 triplets, except for one time at the end but the end can be a little bit harder than the beginning imo)
00:46:474 (2,3) - Convert to slider
00:54:211 (2) - the clap at the end sounds pretty weird to me, replace with whistle or finish
01:13:474 (1,2) - Use same slider design so it looks a bit better


hm... can't find anything in the hard diff... and the other two diffs are too hard for me^^

gl for rank : D
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami

Nwolf wrote:

woof

[Kurokami's Normal]

00:42:684 (5) and 00:45:211 (5) - delete them, might be a bit better for a Normal diff and most people that start playing Osu can't click three 1/2 in a row : D (and it's the only part in the map where you used 1/2 triplets, except for one time at the end but the end can be a little bit harder than the beginning imo) k.
00:46:474 (2,3) - Convert to slider What?
00:54:211 (2) - the clap at the end sounds pretty weird to me, replace with whistle or finish k.
01:13:474 (1,2) - Use same slider design so it looks a bit better Maybe, but that way it is impossible to place there, so no.


hm... can't find anything in the hard diff... and the other two diffs are too hard for me^^

gl for rank : D
Thanks for the mod.

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TitleUnicode:Crow's Ghost
Artist:Twenty Knives
ArtistUnicode:Twenty Knives
Creator:Tidek
Version:Kurokami's Normal
Source:
Tags:Breakcore 20 Knives rhythm accuracy dark death Kurokami
BeatmapID:310894
BeatmapSetID:117450

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,111252,120154
2,162095,180785
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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182105,-100,4,2,0,90,0,1
222526,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0


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Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Mira-san
Hi. From my modding queue.

[Kurokami's Normal]
Found nothing here.

[Hard]
02:06:211 (7)
- Rotate this clockwise by -30 degrees but it's up to you. Just my suggestion.
03:21:053 (1,2,3,4,5)
- Make this a perfect pentagon.
03:31:158 (4,5,6,7,8)
- ^

[Death]
Put NC on these notes. (You can ignore this one.)
00:55:000 (9)
00:57:684 (8)
01:02:895 (14)
01:07:947 (12)
01:10:789 (16)
...

02:41:737 (12)
- Move this to x:328 y:96


[Insane]
02:30:684 (6,7,8,9,10)
- Make this a perfect pentagon (if possible).
02:38:105 (4,5,6,7,8)
- wat. Change this to a square jump or triangle. (or move 02:38:263 (5) to x:236 y:232)


That's all I can find.
Not much, forgive me lol.

ECG sliders are awesome :D
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
Hello!

From Modding Queue.

Modding

General

  1. It's too hard song for me-.

Kurokami's Normal

  1. 00:52:632 (4) - change this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1075528
  2. 01:18:842 (1) - move tail point (368,352) perpect blanket
  3. 01:22:316 (2) - move (352,90) , 01:22:947 (3) - move (412,195) maybe much better~
  4. 01:45:053 (3) - move (358,130)
  5. 02:16:632 (1) - move (444,152)
  6. 03:07:158 (1) - move (296,60)

Hard

  1. 01:00:211 (1) - NC?

Death

  1. Pass. hardcore map.

Insane

  1. 01:04:632 (5,6) - change four note?
  2. 01:29:737 (3) - move (242,232) more jump-
  3. 02:25:474 (7,8) - change four note?


hooooaa

really hard rythem.

wait, 03:47:579 (1,1,1,1,1) - it's heartbeat!

..

nice mapset- and hard rythem :o .

S.T.A.R ;)
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Changed everything. Thanks for the mod.

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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Title:Crow's Ghost
TitleUnicode:Crow's Ghost
Artist:Twenty Knives
ArtistUnicode:Twenty Knives
Creator:Tidek
Version:Kurokami's Normal
Source:
Tags:Breakcore 20 Knives rhythm accuracy dark death Kurokami
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440,72,130947,2,0,P|384:56|328:80,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,184,131579,6,0,P|208:120|216:32,2,180,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,180,132842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,252,133158,2,0,P|424:348|312:328,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,212,134105,22,0,P|232:244|200:292,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,324,134579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,288,134737,2,0,P|69:239|17:211,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,96,135368,2,0,B|104:88|156:120|156:120|208:88|272:96,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,48,136316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,152,136632,6,0,P|388:208|292:208,2,180,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,48,137895,2,0,P|440:32|504:48,2,120,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,88,138842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,48,139158,5,4,0:0:0:0:
48,96,139474,2,0,P|52:208|160:248,1,240,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,256,140421,2,0,P|264:320|224:352,2,120,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,141368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,141684,22,0,P|312:40|216:32,2,180,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,142947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,296,143263,2,0,L|424:336,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,143895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,344,144211,6,0,P|128:288|152:232,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,144684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,148,144842,2,0,P|128:92|152:36,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,44,145474,2,0,P|324:28|388:44,2,120,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,148,146421,2,0,P|392:160|444:144,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,44,147211,6,0,P|212:108|220:204,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,316,148000,2,0,P|300:284|324:236,2,120,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,148789,2,0,P|136:256|80:272,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,240,149263,22,0,P|24:176|56:128,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,96,149895,2,0,P|224:120|280:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,64,150526,2,0,P|384:168|348:236,2,180,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,96,151789,6,0,P|260:160|220:192,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,152421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,136,152737,2,0,P|24:72|56:24,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,153684,2,0,P|72:304|128:320,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,154158,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,324,154316,6,0,P|300:306|337:260,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,148,154947,2,0,P|432:188|448:244,2,120,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,72,155895,2,0,P|200:144|112:80,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,156842,22,0,P|32:120|32:40,2,180,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,256,158105,2,0,P|145:300|96:312,2,120,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,232,159053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,159211,1,4,0:0:0:0:
400,152,159368,6,0,P|392:88|352:48,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,144,160316,1,4,0:0:0:0:
168,96,160632,2,0,L|112:64,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,160,161105,2,0,L|64:216,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,161579,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,320,161895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,104,182105,6,0,P|352:168|312:200,1,120,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,182579,1,4,0:0:0:0:
200,200,182737,2,0,P|155:161|144:104,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
40,40,183368,2,0,P|24:104|32:160,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,264,184000,2,0,L|32:304,2,60,4|2|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,312,184632,22,0,P|256:328|312:312,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
396,232,185263,2,0,P|428:288|420:344,2,120,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,186211,1,2,3:0:0:0:
404,116,186526,2,0,L|428:60,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,60,187158,6,0,P|240:68|200:116,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
404,116,188105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,188421,2,0,P|248:208|192:216,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
96,152,189053,2,0,L|64:96,2,60,0|2|4,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,189684,6,0,L|40:296,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,190158,2,0,L|128:352,2,60,2|2|0,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,288,190632,2,0,P|276:304|332:288,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,191263,2,0,P|448:248|448:304,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,192211,22,0,P|248:112|232:56,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
176,36,192684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,56,192842,2,0,P|102:112|56:149,1,120,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
96,264,193474,2,0,P|152:236|192:196,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,360,194421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,352,194737,6,0,P|208:352|264:328,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
364,272,195368,2,0,L|404:320,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,196000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,196316,2,0,L|256:56,2,60,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,104,196947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,197263,6,0,P|120:224|64:168,2,180,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
336,188,198526,2,0,P|328:260|296:300,2,120,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,128,199316,2,0,L|364:80,2,60,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,108,199789,22,0,P|212:132|156:108,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,100,200263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,156,200421,2,0,P|80:220|112:268,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,280,201053,2,0,P|164:344|76:352,2,180,2|2|4,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,320,202316,6,0,P|388:280|404:224,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
284,208,202947,2,0,P|320:164|324:100,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,116,203579,2,0,P|160:184|184:272,2,180,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,48,204842,6,0,P|324:92|316:164,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,168,205474,2,0,P|416:222|420:284,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
312,336,206105,2,0,P|256:312|200:336,1,120,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
104,264,206737,2,0,P|144:216|144:160,1,120,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,207368,22,0,L|296:72,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,208000,1,2,3:0:0:0:
352,312,208316,1,2,3:0:0:0:
248,256,208632,2,0,P|192:288|136:280,2,120,4|2|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,209579,1,4,0:0:0:0:
440,112,209895,6,0,P|384:80|328:80,2,120,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
488,224,210842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,211158,2,0,P|360:344|304:328,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,352,211789,2,0,P|144:312|136:256,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,212421,6,0,P|128:136|72:152,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,200,213368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,80,213684,2,0,P|360:88|400:128,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,240,214316,2,0,P|384:296|336:312,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,312,214947,22,0,P|128:344|40:328,2,180,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,240,216211,2,0,P|64:224|24:176,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,217158,1,2,3:0:0:0:
136,152,217474,6,0,P|96:120|80:56,1,120,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
200,32,218105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,218421,1,2,3:0:0:0:
368,192,218737,2,0,L|408:144,2,60,2|2|2,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,219368,2,0,L|208:144,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,220000,6,0,P|312:344|392:312,2,180,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,221263,2,0,L|64:320,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,232,221737,2,0,P|188:148|156:68,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,222526,12,0,225053,0:0:0:0:
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