wonders wrote:

hi~
我不知道用中文还是英文好，所以我就用英文了
[general]
you need at least one diff is under 3 stars fix

[insane]
00:14:651 why make this shape？ 只是不想用直線
00:27:373 NC fix
00:30:411 ^ fix
00:39:904 delete this note fix
00:09:714 move a little to right 我不明白這個...

[Hard]
00:18:282 flow is bad fix
00:54:145 bad shape fix
02:09:335 bad stack 這個可以fix,但我覺得沒問題


~

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello ^^ Random mod!

[General]
Kai time at 03:15:031 looks more effective if starting at 03:27:183 instead. fix

[Normal]
00:12:752 (1) - Change whistle on the head to a finish. fix
00:13:132 - I think the clap hitsound pattern should start here instead, going in this pattern: fix

00:29:461 (4,1) - Could you move these apart, I dislike how their heads are overlapping each other. fix
00:48:828 (1) - Add finish on the tail. fix
00:51:487 (3) - ^ fix
00:54:904 (2) - ^ fix
01:01:360 (2) - Add finish on the head. fix
01:01:360 (2,4) - Another bad overlap, since the head of 01:02:879 (4) - is completely covered. Moving your objects to something like this would look neater: fix

01:10:474 (4) - Add finish fix
01:35:917 (5) - Add finish on the tail. fix
01:55:474 (1) - Remove NC, it should be on 01:56:423 (3) - fix
02:08:955 (1) - Remove NC, not necessary. fix
02:08:195 (2) - Add finish fix
02:11:233 (3) - ^ fix
02:11:993 (1) - Remove NC fix
02:20:347 (2) - Add finish on the head. fix
02:26:044 (1) - Add finish on the reverse. fix
02:38:575 (2) - Add finish on the head. fix
02:54:525 (3) - Add finish on the tail. fix
03:19:968 (4,2) - Bad overlap... fix
03:37:056 (3) - Add finish on the tail. fix
03:45:031 (1) - Add finish on the reverse. fix

The flow and rhythm looks alright, but there's a few disturbing overlaps,and some missing hitsounds here and there. Nothing to wrong really

[Hard]
00:18:449 (5) - Finish hitsonud should be on 00:18:828 (1) fix
00:48:828 (1) - Add finish on the tail. fix
00:55:284 (4) - Add finish on the head. fix
01:01:360 (1) - Add finish fix
01:13:512 (1) - ^ fix
01:19:588 (1) - ^ fix
01:25:664 (1) - ^ fix
01:28:322 (8,2) - Weird overlap, either stack them or move apart. if i change this part is not well.
01:34:398 (2) - Add finish on the tail. fix
01:36:297 (6) - Add finish fix
01:46:930 (2) - Add finish on the head. fix
02:19:968 (4) - Add finish on the tail. fix
02:26:044 (1) - ^ fix
02:29:461 (9) - Add finish fix
03:21:297 (2) - Move higher so it isn't touching the head of slider 4. fix

Looks well done
Sorry I can't do Insane, I'm not really experienced in modding this kind of diff >///<

Hope this helps! ^^

1. Romansed Title: "Hashire! Penguin"
2. it is better to uniform font size of the credit (T01~04.png)

1. T02.png: "Lyrics: 秋元　康"
2. T02.png:　"Composition: 織田哲郎"　(uniform to noun or verb)
3. L32.png: strange move. is it on purpose?
4. L36.png: "ずっと立っているなんて"
5. L51(1).png: "空だって飛べただろう"

1. 00:35:727 (1,1) - avoid overlap
2. 00:48:449- add a note
3. 01:33:259 (4) - I prefer to end at 01:34:018
4. 02:32:499 (1) - rotate clockwise more
5. 03:25:664 (3) - move to x:216 y:216 (for symmetric shape of 03:24:145 (1,2,3) - )
6. 03:47:689 (5,1) - avoid overlap

1. 00:18:259 (4,1) - avoid overlap
2. 01:16:170- add clap
3. 01:23:765- add a note and clap
4. 01:29:461 (4,6) - it is better to increase angle between the two sliders
5. 01:35:157 (3) - add clap
6. 01:35:537 (4) - ^
7. 01:35:917 (5) - ^
8. 01:37:436 (9) - add finish
9. 01:52:246 (7) - end at 01:52:626 and add clap at 01:52:626
10. 01:59:841 (3,5) - stack correctly
11. 02:08:765 (3,4) - this overlap is not good
12. 02:19:588- move Inherited Point to 02:19:968
13. 02:32:499 (1) - finish
14. 02:36:676- add a note and clap
15. 02:42:752- ^
16. 02:43:132 (2,4) - stack correctly
17. 02:44:651 (1) - finish
18. 02:47:309- clap
19. 02:54:145 (2,3,4) - clap
20. 02:55:284 (5) - finish
21. 02:56:423 (8) - ^
22. 03:02:879 (1) - ^
23. 03:15:031 (1) - ^
24. 03:35:917 (1) - clap
25. 03:36:676 (3,4,5) - clap
26. 03:37:816 (6) - finish
27. 03:38:955 (9) - ^
28. 03:54:525 (1) - end at 03:57:563

1. 00:03:638 (6) - finish
2. 00:24:335 (5,6) - move to x:244 y:240
3. 00:25:284 (3,5) - stack correctly
4. 00:57:942 (1) - clap
5. 01:13:512 (1) - finish
6. 01:21:107 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - How about star pattern?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   272,182,81107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   317,43,81297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   198,128,81487,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   344,128,81676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   226,43,81866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   226,43,82246,1,8,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:23:006- clap
8. 01:29:651 (3,4,5,6) - this overlap is not good
9. 01:55:664 (2) - remove clap
10. 02:07:626- I prefer to add a note
11. 02:32:499 (1) - finish
12. 03:07:056 (6) - clap
13. 03:15:031 (1) - finish
14. 03:27:183 (1) - ^
15. 03:31:360- clap
16. 03:39:335 (10) - finish
17. 03:54:525 (1) - end at 03:57:563

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. Romansed Title: "Hashire! Penguin" fix
   [Lyrics]
   
   1. T02.png: "Lyrics: 秋元　康" fix
   2. T02.png:　"Composition: 織田哲郎"　(uniform to noun or verb) fix
   3. L32.png: strange move. is it on purpose? fix
   4. L36.png: "ずっと立っているなんて" fix
   5. L51(1).png: "空だって飛べただろう"
   fix
   [Normal]
   
   1. 00:35:727 (1,1) - avoid overlap fix
   2. 01:33:259 (4) - I prefer to end at 01:34:018 fix
   3. 02:32:499 (1) - rotate clockwise more fix
   4. 03:25:664 (3) - move to x:216 y:216 (for symmetric shape of 03:24:145 (1,2,3) - ) fix
   [Hard]
   
   1. 01:16:170- add clap fix
   2. 01:29:461 (4,6) - it is better to increase angle between the two sliders fix
   3. 01:35:157 (3) - add clap fix
   4. 01:37:436 (9) - add finish fix
   5. 01:52:246 (7) - end at 01:52:626 and add clap at 01:52:626 fix
   6. 01:59:841 (3,5) - stack correctly fix
   7. 02:08:765 (3,4) - this overlap is not good fix
   8. 02:32:499 (1) - finish fix
   9. 02:36:676- add a note and clap fix
   10. 02:42:752- ^ fix
   11. 02:44:651 (1) - finish fix
   12. 02:47:309- clap fix
   13. 02:55:284 (5) - finish fix
   14. 02:56:423 (8) - ^ fix
   15. 03:02:879 (1) - ^ fix
   16. 03:15:031 (1) - ^ fix
   17. 03:37:816 (6) - finish fix
   18. 03:38:955 (9) - ^ fix
   19. 03:54:525 (1) - end at 03:57:563 fix
   [Insane]
   
   1. 00:03:638 (6) - finish fix
   2. 00:24:335 (5,6) - move to x:244 y:240 fix
   3. 00:25:284 (3,5) - stack correctly fix
   4. 00:57:942 (1) - clap fix
   5. 01:13:512 (1) - finish fix
   6. 01:21:107 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - How about star pattern? fix,this is good
      
      SPOILER

      
      

      272,182,81107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
      317,43,81297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
      198,128,81487,1,8,0:0:0:0:
      344,128,81676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
      226,43,81866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
      226,43,82246,1,8,0:0:0:0:

   7. 01:23:006- clap fix
   8. 01:29:651 (3,4,5,6) - this overlap is not good fix
   9. 01:55:664 (2) - remove clap fix
   10. 02:32:499 (1) - finish fix
   11. 03:07:056 (6) - clap fix
   12. 03:15:031 (1) - finish fix
   13. 03:27:183 (1) - ^ fix
   14. 03:31:360- clap fix
   15. 03:39:335 (10) - finish fix
   16. 03:54:525 (1) - end at 03:57:563 fix

I don't know AKB48 well, so sorry that I cannot give the available Tags suggetion
~Good Luck~

[ infL ] wrote:

Hi this is for m4m
Can you please mod the hard diff on my song: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/121320
Thanks ^^

SPOILER

Hard
00:17:879 (3, 4, 5) - You could move 4 to where 5 is to improve readability fix
Like this:


02:19:208 (1, 2) - Perhaps move these notes closer to the slider so its more consistent with the other parts of map? fix
Like this:


02:30:221 (1, 2, 3) - I would make 2 centred and make the whole thing symmetrical and make sure its perfectly straight. fix
Make it like how you made it at 01:11:233 (1, 2, 3)

SPOILER

Insane
01:08:941 (8) - AiMod saying this isn't snapped fix
01:44:651 (3, 4) - I would swap these around since I think it matches the rhythm better. fix
From:

To:


02:29:461 (1, 5) - These 2 circles move to x:440, y:192 so its symmetrical with (3) fix

liangv587 wrote:

写得不好请见谅

normal
问题挺多
00:03:638 (1) - 没叠好 本來是故意的...不過算了 fix
00:34:398 (5,6,1) - 有点挤，可以把00:34:398 (5) - 取消折返在00:35:157加1/2滑条，然后排列站开一点 只是改了位置
00:48:449加个note？ fix
02:39:145加上长度1的滑条02:39:714 (4) - 后退1/2 fix
03:18:828 (2) - 换成1/2滑条03:19:208 (3) - 后退1/2 fix
03:25:284 (2) - 删去03:25:094和03:25:474加note fix

hard
01:19:208 (8) - 02:00:601 (5) - 02:43:892 (4) - 没叠好 fix
02:47:309 (1,2) - 感觉可以包一下 fix

任重而道远啊多做点吧会变好的

Makina wrote:

Hi! Mod from my Queue.

[Insane]
00:14:651 (5) - I don`t like this slider. Maybe u can change this? - http://puu.sh/57l4w.jpg fix
02:16:930 (1,2,3) - Bad distance (in game,I would have thought that this steam)fix

[Normal]
If u have 1 easy\normal diff,don`t use this 00:03:638 (1) - it`s pretty hard for beginners. fix
01:17:309 (2,3) - Hard for begginers,please fix it. fix
03:54:335 (6) - Mayve change to slider? fix


Not bad map,I hope you will rank this.

1. This mapset is unrankable imo. Normal diff should be the star rate ( x < 3.24 ). so i recommend you to make easy diff or reduce it.
2. i guess you forgot to put #3 kiai at Normal diff. 03:15:031 - Try comparing this to the other diffs.
3. you must put "1830m" on tag since it's an album name.
4. " T04 " file is wrong ... what is " ( 10 " ? As i said above , album name is " 1830m " so consider removing it.
5. You should delete one of osb file in this folder.

1. 00:00:601 - How about using lower volume here ? i recommend around 40% ~ 50% since the melody is calmer than next part. I believe that you can check the remain other diffs by yourself.
2. 00:02:879 (4) - add clap to the tail of the slider here to follow the back sound in the music.
3. 00:03:638 - it needs stronger volume imo. so consider turning up the volume +10 ~ 20%.
4. 00:32:119 (2) - i feel this part looks crowded so try to move this note up for the flow. like this
   
   img

   
5. 00:37:056 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music. like your previous part. 00:24:904 (1) - , probably you forget to add a finish on this sound so you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part. 01:04:398 - ,01:13:512 (1) - ,01:13:512 - and so on.
6. 00:39:714 (1,2,3,4) - This part feels too hard. i don't agree many stack in normal diff. so i hope you remove this part and remake another pattern. Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading
7. 00:48:069 (3,4,1) - what's happened O.O you must put the spacing equal here.
8. 01:01:360 (2) - try to put a new combo from here ? as here is cymbal sound so i think the current one looks better.
9. 01:21:297 (4,5) - Design suggestion : why don't you use a curve slider in place of straight slider ?
   
   img

   
10. 01:34:778 (2,4) - finish
11. 01:51:107 - i feel kinda empty here, it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a note or one slider here. also you can add a clap here.
12. 01:59:461 (1,2,3) - same reason as here. 00:39:714 (1,2,3,4) -
13. 02:05:537 (2,1,1,2) - Rhythm suggestion : 02:06:297 (1) - i feel this spinner is really short for beginner. so try this suggegtion ,you can put long spinner. at last, don't forget to add a finish on the spinner
    
14. 02:10:474 (1,2,3) - this part is a little boring imo, so i hope you remove it and remake another pattern. for example, put a triangle or repeat slider ... etc
15. 02:28:702 (1,2,3,4) - I think it would look better if it was symmetrical.
16. 02:45:980 (3) - Please try to rotate this slider around 20°. The part will flow more naturally also it looks better to me.
    
    img

    
17. 02:53:006 - Same as here.01:51:107 -
18. 02:56:803 (6) - you should put a new combo here. like your previous part. 01:37:816 (1) -
19. 03:11:993 (1,1) - hmm... I still think the following notes appear too early in this difficulty so consider putting spinner's end here 03:13:512 -
20. 03:18:069 (1) - please remove clap from the tail since it follows nothing. i prefer whistle instead of clap since it would fit well with this kind of music.
21. 03:19:018 - ^ same.
22. 03:28:512 (3) - i feel this part looks crowded please put more distance. like this
    
    img

    
23. 03:57:563 - 5% volume.

1. 00:02:119 (1) - add a whistle. like your previous note 00:00:601 (1) -
2. 00:03:638 (5) - ,01:37:816 (10) - ,02:56:803 (9) - As you can see Normal diff, you added a new combo here. so consider adding it here.
3. 00:54:525 (2) - Unsnapped slider.
4. 00:12:752 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music.
5. 00:12:752 - ~ 00:18:449 - you don't put hit sound this part. why not ? 00:13:132 - ,00:13:892 - ,00:14:651 - ... you have only to add a clap with constant rhythm.
6. 00:20:727 (1,2,3,4) - Design suggestion : it is better to make a square. it looks better to me.
   
   img

   
7. 00:34:588 - i feel kinda empty here. if you followed the vocal you should put a note here. it would fit well with this kind of music.
8. 00:44:271 (3,4,5) - a bit nazi mod, make the spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going , so would look better.
9. 01:04:968 (5) - As you can see here, since you already have the up and down motion from your previous patterns, the transition from this to the next note almost feels like unnatural jump. so i recommend you to use ctrl + G
10. 01:12:942 - ~ 01:13:132 - i want to put 3 hit or one repeat slider here. it is better to put a sound for kiai, so will be more interesting imo
11. 01:25:094 (4) - flow suggestion: how about moving this slider down for the flow ? so the jumps will flow more naturally and beautifully.
    
    img

    
12. 01:25:664 (1) - a bit nazi mod, if you move to x:396 y:304 this note, you can make a beautiful rhombus.
    
    img

    
13. 01:30:790 (7) - hmm .. This jump part feels too hard. Please reduce spacing around ~ x2.0
14. 01:34:398 (2) - add a finish to the tail of the slider instead of head ? since it follows nothing.
15. 01:52:246 (7) - missing clap here.
16. 02:08:195 - same as here.00:12:752 (1) - you had better to pur more finish sound like this sound.
17. 02:48:259 (3) - please check the spacing same as above.
18. 03:31:360 (3,4,5) - it would look better if it was symmetrical imo.
    
    img

    
19. 03:40:854 (1) - it is better to put a new combo with constant rhythm. so i hope you remove it and remake like this
    
20. 03:52:436 (5,6) - it's not beautiful , so consider putting this note under the tail of the slider
21. 03:53:575 (1) - I feel this sudden big jumps could confuse players. i think you should make the spacing equal here.
22. 03:57:563 - 5% volume.

1. 01:37:816 (10) - ,02:56:803 (10) - same as hard diff.
2. 00:39:525 (10,11,12) - i expect something related to previous part.00:30:411 (1,2,3) -
3. 01:58:512 (7,8,9) - i feel this part looks crowded please put more distance. also don't forget to add a new combo here. 01:58:512 (7) - like your previous part.
   
   img

   
4. 02:01:360 (7) - Same as above.
5. 02:08:195 (3) - add a finish here to follow the crash cymbal in the music.
6. 02:19:968 (1) - i guess you put to reverse this slider, try to remake it so consider using ctrl + g.
7. 02:24:525 (5) - missing clap here.
8. 02:26:613 (4,5,6) - Design suggestion: how about moving this slider left for design ? you can make a beautiful hexagon. 02:26:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
   
   img

   
9. 02:49:778 (9) - if you followed the vocal ,it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing like your previous part. 02:48:259 (4,5) - so i hope you remove this slider and remake like this
   
10. 03:06:961 - i want more 3 hits for insane diff. it will be more interesting imo. so consider adding a note here
11. 03:21:107 (1) - ,03:21:866 - ,03:22:626 (6) - ,03:23:385 - finish pls, 03:24:145 - same reason from here
12. 03:44:461 (4,5,6) - please check the spacing here. i agree this part, looks better to me. 03:28:512 (5,6,7) -
13. 03:51:107 (11) - this sound feels too strong so i think you should make more jumps here.
14. 03:57:563 - 5% volume.

alacat wrote:

Hi~ modding time :3 from My queue

[General]

1. This mapset is unrankable imo. Normal diff should be the star rate ( x < 3.24 ). so i recommend you to make easy diff or reduce it. fix
2. i guess you forgot to put #3 kiai at Normal diff. 03:15:031 - Try comparing this to the other diffs. fix
3. you must put "1830m" on tag since it's an album name. fix
4. " T04 " file is wrong ... what is " ( 10 " ? As i said above , album name is " 1830m " so consider removing it. no fix,10 is mean the tracks.
5. You should delete one of osb file in this folder. fix

[Normal]

1. 00:00:601 - How about using lower volume here ? i recommend around 40% ~ 50% since the melody is calmer than next part. I believe that you can check the remain other diffs by yourself. fix
2. 00:02:879 (4) - add clap to the tail of the slider here to follow the back sound in the music. fix
3. 00:03:638 - it needs stronger volume imo. so consider turning up the volume +10 ~ 20%. fix
4. 00:32:119 (2) - i feel this part looks crowded so try to move this note up for the flow. fix
5. 00:37:056 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music. like your previous part. 00:24:904 (1) - , probably you forget to add a finish on this sound so you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part. 01:04:398 - ,01:13:512 (1) - ,01:13:512 - and so on. fix
6. 00:39:714 (1,2,3,4) - This part feels too hard. i don't agree many stack in normal diff. so i hope you remove this part and remake another pattern. Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading fix
7. 00:48:069 (3,4,1) - what's happened O.O you must put the spacing equal here. fix
8. 01:01:360 (2) - try to put a new combo from here ? as here is cymbal sound so i think the current one looks better. no fix,that ok
9. 01:21:297 (4,5) - Design suggestion : why don't you use a curve slider in place of straight slider ?fix
   
   img

   
10. 01:34:778 (2,4) - finish fix
11. 01:51:107 - i feel kinda empty here, it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a note or one slider here. also you can add a clap here. fix
12. 01:59:461 (1,2,3) - same reason as here. 00:39:714 (1,2,3,4) - fix
13. 02:05:537 (2,1,1,2) - Rhythm suggestion : 02:06:297 (1) - i feel this spinner is really short for beginner. so try this suggegtion ,you can put long spinner. at last, don't forget to add a finish on the spinner fix,like this
    
14. 02:10:474 (1,2,3) - this part is a little boring imo, so i hope you remove it and remake another pattern. for example, put a triangle or repeat slider ... etc fix
15. 02:28:702 (1,2,3,4) - I think it would look better if it was symmetrical. fix
16. 02:45:980 (3) - Please try to rotate this slider around 20°. The part will flow more naturally also it looks better to me. fix
    
    img

    
17. 02:53:006 - Same as here.01:51:107 - no fix,If i add note is feel bad
18. 02:56:803 (6) - you should put a new combo here. like your previous part. 01:37:816 (1) - fix
19. 03:11:993 (1,1) - hmm... I still think the following notes appear too early in this difficulty so consider putting spinner's end here 03:13:512 - fix
20. 03:18:069 (1) - please remove clap from the tail since it follows nothing. i prefer whistle instead of clap since it would fit well with this kind of music. fix
21. 03:19:018 - ^ same. fix
22. 03:28:512 (3) - i feel this part looks crowded please put more distance. like this fix
    
    img

    
23. 03:57:563 - 5% volume. fix

[Hard]

1. 00:02:119 (1) - add a whistle. like your previous note 00:00:601 (1) - fix
2. 00:03:638 (5) - ,01:37:816 (10) - ,02:56:803 (9) - As you can see Normal diff, you added a new combo here. so consider adding it here. fix
3. 00:54:525 (2) - Unsnapped slider. fix
4. 00:12:752 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music. fix
5. 00:12:752 - ~ 00:18:449 - you don't put hit sound this part. why not ? 00:13:132 - ,00:13:892 - ,00:14:651 - ... you have only to add a clap with constant rhythm. fix
6. 00:20:727 (1,2,3,4) - Design suggestion : it is better to make a square. it looks better to me. fix,it is a utmost of design
   
   img

   
7. 00:34:588 - i feel kinda empty here. if you followed the vocal you should put a note here. it would fit well with this kind of music. fix
8. 00:44:271 (3,4,5) - a bit nazi mod, make the spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going , so would look better. fix
9. 01:04:968 (5) - As you can see here, since you already have the up and down motion from your previous patterns, the transition from this to the next note almost feels like unnatural jump. so i recommend you to use ctrl + G fix
10. 01:12:942 - ~ 01:13:132 - i want to put 3 hit or one repeat slider here. it is better to put a sound for kiai, so will be more interesting imo fix
11. 01:25:094 (4) - flow suggestion: how about moving this slider down for the flow ? so the jumps will flow more naturally and beautifully.fix,good flow
    
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12. 01:25:664 (1) - a bit nazi mod, if you move to x:396 y:304 this note, you can make a beautiful rhombus.fix,x:400
    
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13. 01:30:790 (7) - hmm .. This jump part feels too hard. Please reduce spacing around ~ x2.0 fix,i use x1.9
14. 01:34:398 (2) - add a finish to the tail of the slider instead of head ? since it follows nothing. fix
15. 01:52:246 (7) - missing clap here. fix
16. 02:08:195 - same as here.00:12:752 (1) - you had better to pur more finish sound like this sound. fix
17. 02:48:259 (3) - please check the spacing same as above. fix,
18. 03:31:360 (3,4,5) - it would look better if it was symmetrical imo. fix
    
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19. 03:40:854 (1) - it is better to put a new combo with constant rhythm. so i hope you remove it and remake like this fix
    
20. 03:52:436 (5,6) - it's not beautiful , so consider putting this note under the tail of the slider fix
21. 03:53:575 (1) - I feel this sudden big jumps could confuse players. i think you should make the spacing equal here. fix
22. 03:57:563 - 5% volume. fix

[Insane]

1. 01:37:816 (10) - ,02:56:803 (10) - same as hard diff. fix
2. 00:39:525 (10,11,12) - i expect something related to previous part.00:30:411 (1,2,3) - fix,i very like this
3. 01:58:512 (7,8,9) - i feel this part looks crowded please put more distance. also don't forget to add a new combo here. 01:58:512 (7) - like your previous part. fix
   
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4. 02:01:360 (7) - Same as above. fix
5. 02:08:195 (3) - add a finish here to follow the crash cymbal in the music. fix
6. 02:19:968 (1) - i guess you put to reverse this slider, try to remake it so consider using ctrl + g. fix
7. 02:24:525 (5) - missing clap here. fix
8. 02:26:613 (4,5,6) - Design suggestion: how about moving this slider left for design ? you can make a beautiful hexagon. 02:26:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fix,good design
   
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9. 02:49:778 (9) - if you followed the vocal ,it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing like your previous part. 02:48:259 (4,5) - so i hope you remove this slider and remake like this fix
   
10. 03:06:961 - i want more 3 hits for insane diff. it will be more interesting imo. so consider adding a note here fix,i feel this note may too hard,but so fix.because it is insane
11. 03:21:107 (1) - ,03:21:866 - ,03:22:626 (6) - ,03:23:385 - finish pls, 03:24:145 - same reason from here fix,why i feel add these finish is too stimulate
12. 03:44:461 (4,5,6) - please check the spacing here. i agree this part, looks better to me. 03:28:512 (5,6,7) - fix
13. 03:51:107 (11) - this sound feels too strong so i think you should make more jumps here. fix
14. 03:57:563 - 5% volume. fix

I recommend you to put more finish sound in kiai time .so i believe that you can check the remain part by yourself. Good luck !

m1223961117 wrote:

我最近時間真的太少，晚MOD先說聲抱歉

首先，你可以按Ctrl+G調整到小型網格去調整，這對你會有幫助
※紅色字要特別注意

Insane

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00:20:347 (2,3) - 建議位置對調比較好 感覺很好 fix
00:39:525 (10) - new combo no fix
00:57:752 (1,2,3) - 移到x:256 y:224 fix
00:58:892 (6) - ^ fix
00:58:132 (4) - 可以分開 no fix
00:59:841 (9) - 換成滑條?? 不了,這部分滑條太多
01:00:601 (3) - 調一下和(1)的距離 不了,我比較喜歡這個設計
01:03:638 (9) - new combo 不了
01:04:778 (2) - 移到x:256 y:160...用小網格維條比較好 fix
01:08:955 (8) - 藏在回調下藏好 fix
01:15:411 (8) - new combo fix
01:17:119 (2,3) - 和三連打的位置對齊 fix
01:20:727 (5,6) - 距離有點近，拉遠吧 no fix
01:20:347 (4,5) - 建議換成1 circle + 1滑條 + 1 circle比較好，後面那個circle當作起始音(試著聽聽看) no fix
01:21:866 (10) - new combo no fix,因為這部分歌詞還在唱
01:24:145 (5) - 往下拉1格?? fix
01:26:613 (5,6) - 換成兩個1/2滑條比較好 no fix
01:27:942 (10) - new combo no fix
01:30:221 (6,7) - 換成兩個1/2滑條?? no fix
01:36:297 (6) - New combo比較好，要不然就在(10)上加new combo fix
01:38:195 (11) - break拉到這裡開始，第二個break也同樣做法，其他diff也都調一下吧 fix
01:44:461 (2) - 距離好近，拉遠 no fix
01:46:930 (1,2) - ^ no fix
01:48:069 (3,4) - 位置對調回來，然後再把距離拉遠。要不然就上(3)往上移，(4)往下挪 fix,上下...
01:50:157 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建議你把circle和滑條的距離拉遠，要不然就是疊起來比較好 fix
01:54:714 (1,2,3) - 距離拉遠 fix
01:55:474 (1,2,3) - ^ fix
01:58:132 (6,7) - 位置對調感覺比較好 no,fix
02:01:930 (10) - new combo，02:02:119 (1) - 取消new combo fix
02:03:259 (5) - new combo no,fix
02:10:284 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 距離拉開才有跳點的感覺 fix
02:11:613 (2) - 沒有音可以跟，看要不要換成別的 no,fix
02:13:512 (7) - 和(8)疊在一起比較好 no,fix 這個是想做個三角型,可能不太似樣,so
02:13:892 (1,2) - 換成兩個1/2滑條 + 1 circle?? no,fix 感覺不太好
02:19:018 (6,7,8,9,10) - 星星排好 fix
02:24:714 (6) - 移到x:232 y:304?? no,fix
02:26:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡也跟著歌詞吧 no,fix 我覺得這裹不用跟太多 因為是高潮的前夕
02:34:018 (6,7,8,9) - 星星排好 fix
02:34:778 (10) - 中間有兩個音，改一下比較好 fix
02:39:904 (5) - new combo fix
02:43:512 (7,8) - 兩個疊起來移到x:112 y:328 fix
02:46:170 (6) - 往下拉1格?? fix
02:48:638 (5) - new combo no,fix
02:48:828 (6,7) - 距離拉開；不想改的話建議你還是位置對調回來比較好 fix
02:50:347 (3,4,5) - ^ no,fix
02:51:676 (1,2) - 和01:20:347 (4,5) 同樣建議 no,fix
02:55:284 (6) - new combo fix 02:56:803 (1) - 改了
03:04:208 (4,5,6) - 大大很喜歡這種擺法嗎??可以換成別種樣式，這種樣式多了會很讓人受不了，而且放太多就顯得整個難度沒特色。擺法可以很多樣化，三角形、疊起來、或是改成長距離跳點也行。我拿我來說，我會把 03:04:208 (4,5,6,1) 這四個circle做其他的擺法，最後再接滑條，看大大你怎麼做，後面有類似的擺法我就都不解釋了 改了三角型
03:06:107 (1,2) - 改滑條比較好，跟著電吉他的音 no,fix...高潮的前夕
03:06:487 (3,4) - ^ no,fix
03:17:974 (2) - del, 03:17:309 (10,1) - 換成兩個1/2滑條比較好 no,fix
03:19:018 (6) - 中間有鼓聲，分開來?? no,fix 這裹沒有歌詞 不想故意放
03:19:588 (7) - new combo no,fix
03:21:107 (1) - Kiai從這裡開始，每個難度都調一次吧，其他難度就不說了 no,fix 沒有需要在這裹開始
03:25:474 (6) - new combo fix
03:25:664 (7) - 往右拉1格 fix
03:27:373 (3,4) - 這兩個距離也太近了吧，還你要做出迷惑敵人效果?? 很迷惑吧.fix,我拉長了小許距離,另外我是故意這樣放
03:32:879 (10) - ^，取消下一個滑條的new combo no,fix 因為這4個note是一組
03:37:816 (6) - new combo no,fix
03:41:993 - 音不見了 fix
03:44:461 (4,5,6) - 串燒調好no,fix
03:49:968 (6) - new combo no,fix

好像太長了點...抱歉，我檢察太仔細了...
音效就讓給別人MOD吧

Hard

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01:30:790 (7) - 距離調整一下 fix
01:36:297 (6) - 副歌結尾+ new combo的部分可以參照Insane，後面的我就不說了 沒有必要

歌詞抓得很好，沒有可以挑剔的地方，就差把距離做些調整就差不多了

我告訴大大你我的感覺好了，Hard作的比Insane好很多，有些形狀的部分都有抓好，比方說星星的部分
還有，大大Hard的部分歌詞抓得比Insane好，可以試著從Hard去修正Insane會對你有幫助

Hard的部分可以用Distance Snap去做距離的微調，這樣比較不會有差錯
多運用Alt去做調整吧，少量的小跳點是可以被允許的
還有按住Alt的時候再調滾輪可以為調距離差，大大你就自己拿捏吧

Normal

沒多大問題

希望我的MOD會對你有幫助

Lexi-chan- wrote:

Hey, saw you in #modreqs, so I decided to take a look on your map. My English isn't the best so I hope you're able to understand me.

Insane:
00:39:904 (12,1) - I don't think it fits. Try to reduce the spacing a bit. fix
01:02:119 (5,6,7) - Expand the spacing between 6 and 7. Doesn't look nice and can bee confusing, too. fix



Hard:
01:16:550 (1,2,3) - Put 2 more in the middle of 1 and 3. fix
01:59:082 (1,2,3) - Use the same spacing. fix

Normal:
This difficulty is good so far. There's nothing I would change.


I hope I could help you a bit!

Lizbeth wrote:

[Insane]
00:00:601 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I think doesnt really makes much sense how you placed the new combo, Seems like you just mirror this:00:01:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - in a new combo. I think these:00:00:601 (1,2,3,4,1) - should be in the same combo, and these: 00:02:119 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - in a different one, you could also place stream on a different one too. I think would make more sense. would look like this: fix

SPOILER

or

00:37:531 (3) - There s no sound in the song that tells you to add a note here, this is what s called overmapping. Do not put objects where there's no sound of vocals or instrument to avoid overmapping. fix
00:38:575 (9) - delete a repeat and add notes at : 00:39:145 - 00:39:335 - fix
00:54:904 (5,6) - This looks like randomly place, what about if you make them look like this: fix

SPOILER

00:58:132 (4,5) - I believe the distance is too close fix
01:17:499 (4,1) - too close to each other, was awkward to play, place them farther, or stack them. fix
01:25:854 (3,5) - doesnt fits, there a note missing in the middle of each slider, you might wanna take advantage of them. fix
01:52:626 (1,2,3,4) - Dunno why the deacrease of distance here, looks random. i d keep consistence fix
02:32:689 (3,5) - doesnt fits, as i say before, there s notes missing in the sliders body fix
03:27:373 (3,4) - Im generally ok with overlaps, except when they look like a mistake, and that s how this one looks like. Do you mind fixing this? fix

[Hard]
00:16:930 (2,3) - Distance is wrong, is too far to be a circle half beat away from the previous one, considering the distance you used before for notes separated by one beat. Should look like this: fix

SPOILER

00:33:638 (1,2) - This two are too separated from each other. Try to keep distance snap turned on and only turn off to place jumps. fix
00:54:145 (1,2,3,4) - why this increase in distance? if there s no a good reason, fix it. fix
02:15:790 (8) - I think you put a clap here by mistake fix
03:52:246 (4) - detele this circle fix
03:53:006 - what about if you do this at the end: fix

SPOILER

There s lot of inconsistency in spacing, you might double check it

[Normal]
00:48:449 (4,1) - too close to each other. fix
00:48:449 (4,1) - I dont recommend you to change slider velocity in normal or easy diffs, might be confusing for beginners or medium players. fix
03:52:436 (3,4) - messy overlap fix

Good luck~

1. 00:37:056 (1) - 其他难度看你这里都没加finish，要加就都加，不加就都不加，保持一致性吧
2. 00:40:474 (2) - 这个slider头是不是忘了个clap
3. 01:05:917 (4) - 这个finish听起来略突兀，我是觉得还是去掉比较好
4. 01:34:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一串的音效我感觉有点乱，如果用finish的不如每一小拍都用（每根白线），要不然就按之前那样每个一拍加个clap
5. 02:08:955 (2) - 这个spinner后面的note还是弄个new combo吧
6. 03:13:892 (1,2,3) - 个人建议删掉这几个note，最为最简单的难度，这种spinner后面一拍马上接note的对于新手来说有点不太好反应过来
7. 03:25:664 (4) - 这个finish也是听起来太突兀

1. 00:18:259 (5) - 建议NC以便分明，这个间距跟之前很不一样
2. 00:41:423 - 00:46:550 - 这段时间内的那些三连我不太清楚到底是为什么这样弄，跟节奏不太搭的感觉，打起来也很别扭
3. 01:17:879 (1) - 这个虽然NC了，但是间距这么近很容易误读_(:3」∠)_
4. 01:46:170 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这里我觉得可以把12 13去掉，然后11用slider延长到01:46:740，另外这一串都加上clap效果更佳
5. 03:49:778 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个看起来排列也很乱，如果从音乐来听的话，56和78应该是对应的一组音，但是你排列上45一组，67一组感觉很奇怪

Breeze wrote:

hi 随便看看

[Normal]

1. 00:37:056 (1) - 其他难度看你这里都没加finish，要加就都加，不加就都不加，保持一致性吧 不加了fix
2. 00:40:474 (2) - 这个slider头是不是忘了个clap fix
3. 01:05:917 (4) - 这个finish听起来略突兀，我是觉得还是去掉比较好 fix
4. 01:34:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一串的音效我感觉有点乱，如果用finish的不如每一小拍都用（每根白线），要不然就按之前那样每个一拍加个clap fix 加上clap
5. 02:08:955 (2) - 这个spinner后面的note还是弄个new combo吧 這個不太明白,3個note弄new combo?
6. 03:13:892 (1,2,3) - 个人建议删掉这几个note，最为最简单的难度，这种spinner后面一拍马上接note的对于新手来说有点不太好反应过来 fix
7. 03:25:664 (4) - 这个finish也是听起来太突兀 fix

[Insane]

1. 00:18:259 (5) - 建议NC以便分明，这个间距跟之前很不一样 fix
2. 00:41:423 - 00:46:550 - 这段时间内的那些三连我不太清楚到底是为什么这样弄，跟节奏不太搭的感觉，打起来也很别扭 我本來是為了加強難度 fix
3. 01:17:879 (1) - 这个虽然NC了，但是间距这么近很容易误读_(:3」∠)_ fix
4. 01:46:170 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这里我觉得可以把12 13去掉，然后11用slider延长到01:46:740，另外这一串都加上clap效果更佳fix,不錯
5. 03:49:778 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个看起来排列也很乱，如果从音乐来听的话，56和78应该是对应的一组音，但是你排列上45一组，67一组感觉很奇怪fix

排列我就不说什么了，现在看起来确实并不是那么完美，slider拉得不是那么的漂亮，多拉来练练多看看别人的好图多打打那些好看的图都有帮助。节奏本身没什么问题

Fycho wrote:

~popner's modding team~

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
Fine

[ Insane]
总体印象和建议：排列略粗，soft whistle每个小节都可以加，应该多加点。跟节奏的时候尽量不同轨多跟一些，这样整个图才不boring。NC最好是都加在大白线上，现在有点乱。把格子关了或者调到最小。

1. 00:03:069 (5) –我建议去掉这个然后把00:03:259 (1,2,3,4,5) –首叠到00:02:879 (4) –来和00:01:360 (4,5) –对应 fix
2. 00:15:601 (1,2) –对调，重音滑条尾不舒服 fix
3. 00:19:018 (2,4) –打的时候这离的有点近，建议放远点，其他有的类似 fix
4. 00:19:778 (4,2) –包好并放远 fix
5. 00:23:955 (4,1) –虽然加了NC这间距还是有点坑 fix,放遠了一點
6. 00:25:854 (4,5,6) –flow不怎么好，试试这样，fix
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:30:031 (2,3,4) –不是正三角形。略不美观fix,不過我不太懂做三角形,可能還有不足
8. 00:31:740 (3,4) –包好，要么干脆别包做成flow型的。no fix,因為我覺得包得不錯
9. 00:32:879 –这突然少了个音效很别扭，而且00:32:689 –也没人声特别需要强调，所以别使用1/1滑条。fix
10. 00:42:942 (1) –没有人声或者什么强音，尽量别这样起滑条把大白线前方滑条尾fix
11. 00:47:689 (2,3,4) –我会在这放6个circle并来个跳。 fix
12. 00:47:499 (1,2) –交换NC，划分梗用，而且00:47:689 –是大白线。 fix
13. 00:49:113 –这有鼓音，或许00:49:018 –改成三连更好 fix
14. 00:49:208 -01:01:360 –这一段我强烈建议你跟鼓点。而且这一段音效绝对不是加普通的2,4白线clap。我随便下了点仅供参考，
    SPOILER

    
    ，音效的话也是跟着音乐里的乐器来加，例如clap加在00:49:778 -00:50:347 –00:51:297 -00:51:487 -00:51:866 -这类位置。总之听音乐，比较响的鼓加clap，低音鼓别加。 fix
15. 01:01:360 (3) –漏finish fix
16. 01:01:360 –01:07:436 –这段我建议所有白线加clap。这段也做出特色点，别和00:49:208 (1) –看起来梗什么的都差不多。 no fix,這個太有特色了吧= =
17. 01:14:461 (7) –这别跟人声了，跟鼓点下节奏，把音效加全，就像这01:15:790 (4,5,6,7) –一样。 fix
18. 01:17:689 -^ fix
19. 01:45:790 (6) –漏clap？fix
20. 01:46:930 (1) –漏finishfix
21. 01:53:765 (4,5) –这anitijump我不是很喜欢 fix
22. 01:56:044 (1) –首加finish？ no fix,因為前邊有6個finish 不想再加
23. 02:15:031 (4,6) –用复制粘贴然后旋转180° fix
24. 02:17:309 (3,5) -^，太明显了这两个不一样 fix
25. 02:20:347 (2) –首finish fix
26. 02:45:790 –加circle，空拍太违和 fix
27. 03:03:259 (2,3) –间距太小，看着像1/4一样 fix
28. 03:26:044 (4) –漏clap fix
29. 03:34:778 (4,5,6,7,8) –用ctrl+shit+D的工具摆正五边形 fix
30. 03:51:866 (2) –这个把折返去掉，03:52:246 –是没音的，来个停顿更好
    首加finish fix
31. 03:52:056 –加finish fix
32. 03:51:107 (2) –finish换成clap fix
33. 03:52:436 (3,4,5) –加finish fix
34. 03:53:385 (6) –加clap fix
35. 03:53:575 (1,2,3,4) –这些别空着，随便加点clap，听起来不难听。 fix

[Hard]
很多建议和insane一样，不细说了。1/2的正常间距别太变化。

1. 00:03:259 (4) –漏whistle fix
2. 00:25:664 (2,3,4) –等间距？ fix
3. 00:26:993 (5,6) –这1/2间距突然加那么大没必要又不是什么跳，这反而和1/1的00:27:183 (6,1) - 00:24:904 (1,2) –看起来差不多影响读图。 fix
4. 00:39:525 –加circle？节奏更完整 fix
5. 00:48:828 (1) –大白线滑条尾打击感差 fix
6. 01:08:955 (6) –加finish fix
7. 01:14:651 (1,2) –交换NC fix
8. 01:18:069 (1) –你看这01:14:082 (4,2) –都是跟的人声，而这却跟鼓点，01:16:170 (5) –差不多，建议统一起来跟着人声，换下周围的节奏。 fix
9. 03:03:638 (3,4,5,6) –等间距=。= fix
10. 03:08:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –我认为间距太小 fix
11. 03:31:170 (3,4,5,6) –间距。。。 fix
12. 03:32:879 (1,2,3) –貌似这种1/2靠的很近的出现了很多次，我觉得这没任何必要 fix,我改用了滑條
13. 03:45:411 (1,2,3,4) –这两个间距怎么突跃那么大 no fix 我覺得還可以@@

[Normal]

1. 00:22:626 (2,3,4) –我吧怎么喜欢这种排列 fix
2. 00:29:461 (4) –把滑条身上的whistle去掉，只加滑条头上。还有换成个三点式滑条，现在的这滑条不美观 fix
3. 00:35:347 (6) –我推荐去掉这个 fix
4. 00:37:056 (1,3) –碰一起了,避免overlap fix
5. 00:38:575 (3,2) -^ fix
6. 00:43:892 (2,4) -^ fix
7. 01:04:018 (1) –我推荐换成一个circle在01:04:018 – fix
8. 01:13:512 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) –因为这是最低难度的normal，强烈建议全跟鼓点下满1/1的节奏，跟人声的节奏对于新手很容易混乱。建议把三段kiai给remap下 fix
9. 02:24:904 (3) –去掉finish，觉得多余 fix
10. 03:27:752 (2) –左右对称（） fix
11. 03:47:689 (5,1) –碰一起了 fix
12. 03:54:145 (1) –首加clap？ fix

Good luck.

Feverie wrote:

[Normal]
00:45:031 (3,4) - Try putting these on the same x axis no fix,it is not necessary that to put
01:02:879 (4,1,2) - Start of 4 slider overlaps with 2 no fix,not ,^
02:10:854 (2,3) - Put on same y axis no fix,not ,^
00:49:968 (2,3) - Try making symmetrical fix
01:05:917 (4) - Either make this a sharper direction change or a curve fix


Good Luck

[Kamiya] wrote:

HI~^^
insane

00:43:132 (1,2,3) - irregular no fix,this is OK
01:12:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
02:02:499 (3,4) - too close and irregular^ fix some spacing
02:04:018 (7,8) - ^ ^
that all
nice sound
gj
gl

P o M u T a wrote:

hi. #modreqs
[Normal]
AR+1 more playable for me. try it. fix
00:37:056 (1) - add finish slider head.no fix, it is too noisy
01:56:044 (1) - add finish ^
00:58:322 (1,3) - add whistle. i think fit imo. fix
01:37:816 (1) - move (x:256 y:192) is more better. if change, 01:37:056 (3) - move (x:384 y:332). because spacing fix. fix
01:46:930 (1) - try curve slider? also, add finish slider head? fix,only add finish
01:54:145 (3) - try 1/1 slider. next rhythm more easily. fix

[Hard]
00:30:031 (2) - add whisle slider head fit imo. fix
00:37:056 (1) - add finish slider head. no fix, it is too noisy
02:41:613 (1,2,3) - close spacing is bit weird imo. fix

[Insane]
00:03:069 x) - add note fit imo.not need ,sorry

good luck!

-Neipezi wrote:

hi o/

[Normal]
00:37:056 (1) - finishi add the head i thing there are too many finish,no fix
00:54:904 (2) - change the direction of the tail? x260 y28 move? good
01:13:132 - circle add? will hear the finish here. add
01:32:879 (2) - hmm.. this "x36 y240" Are want to move? OK
01:56:044 (1) - 00:37:056 (1) - same same
02:17:309 (1,2,3) - whistle add? add
02:28:702 (1) - ^ and 02:28:702 (1,2) - (2) adding a new combo, and then add the circle 02:30:601 - . fix
02:32:119 - 01:13:132 - same add
02:53:765 (2) - whistle add the head add
02:54:525 (3) - ^ add
03:36:297 (1) - ^ add
03:37:816 - whistle add add
03:38:575 (3) - whistle add the head add

[Hard]
00:34:588 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - a little confused fix
01:13:132 - finishi add. 03:13:892 (1) - same add
02:32:119 - ^ add
03:19:018 (4) - whistle add the head add
03:35:917 (1) - whistle add add
03:36:676 (3,5) - clap add add
03:39:335 (10,1) - NC change OK

[Insane]
00:57:752 (7,8,9) - interval is too short OK
03:19:398 (1) - whistle add add

GL..'w';;

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Boo.

[General]
03:21:107 - I feel that it may sound better if Kai time started here instead of 03:15:031 change

Insane

00:12:752 (1) - Add a finish here for the cymbal crash in the music? fix

00:23:385 (1,3) - Move more apart, this unnecessary overlap just makes the flow here look crowded. OK
00:23:575 (2,4) - ^ OK^

00:26:993 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star formation is screwed up, because there isn't a jump for 00:27:563 (4,5) - , which breaks the flow.
Try re-arranging the notes to this: i know that your meanning,change

SPOILER

That way, the jumps in this combo is consistent. There doesn't need to be a jump between 00:27:752 (5,1) -, since they're in separate rhythm cycles

00:37:056 (1) - Add a finish here on the head, for the cymbal crash in the music? add

00:51:866 (5,6) - Interesting. Try adding drum claps to these notes to match the interesting beats heard in the music. Once you've highlighted the notes and added the clap, just adjust the hitsound settings (shown on the top left of the board) to this:
i very like this hitsound!!!!!



01:28:702 (1,2) - Not going to try and forma blanket here? It could help make the flow look neater. fix

01:31:740 (5) - Should be NC instead of 01:31:360 (1) - , because it is the one that's starting on a new rhythm cycle (on the large white tickmark). change

01:58:892 (5,2) - Move more apart, so they don't look so crowded here. fix

01:59:841 (3,4) - Please fix the blanket here, or don't bother creating the overlap. fix
02:05:157 (3,4) - ^ fix

02:07:816 (6,7,8) - Add claps on these notes to follow the drum rolls in the music. i just add on (6) of the clap

02:10:854 (5,6) - Same suggestion as 00:51:866 (5,6) - same fix

02:15:790 (1,2) - You really need to improve on blanketing these notes. fix

02:16:740 (3,4,5) - Change claps to drum claps really like this

02:20:347 (2) - Should be NC instead of 02:19:968 (1) - . Again, please look at the timing (tick marks), often the first object landing on the big white tick mark is a NC, because it's in a new rhythm cycle. OK

02:26:613 (4) - Because of this note, this rhythm is flawed. In the previous rhythm, you had an empty space on 02:24:335, so the followup rhythm here shouldn't have a note either. Either remove 02:26:613 (4) - , or add a note on 02:24:335.
i try change other rhythm in 02:24:335

02:51:676 - Same problem as before, there shouldn't be a hit note here, because there isn't one at 02:48:449. Either remove 02:51:676 (7) - ad add a note at 02:51:866, or add a note at 02:48:449. good rhythm

03:19:778 (3) - Add drum clap? add

03:29:461 (4,1) - Fix blanket a bit more here. fix all here
03:31:740 (1,2) - ^
03:33:259 (1,2) - ^

03:39:335 (10) - NC i think 03:35:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - is a part of the lyric

03:45:411 (1) - Add finish. add

Hard

00:00:601 (1) - Add a finish on the head? not fit

00:27:183 (6,7) - Fix blanket. OK

00:33:638 (1,2) - ^ OK

00:36:487 (1) - Remove NC, it really isn't necessary here. it is a special sound

00:37:056 (1) - Add finish on the head. add

00:51:866 (4) - Add drum claps on both ends of this slider. add
00:54:904 (4) - ^ add

00:52:246 (1) - Change clap no the head to a finish. change

01:08:006 (2) - Nazi suggestion here, move to 460:216 for neater blanket. fix

01:43:892 (1) - Add finish. not need


01:55:474 (1) - Remove NC, it really isn't necessary here. same^

01:56:044 (1) - Add finish on the head. add
02:08:195 (1) - ^ add

02:10:854 (4) - Change claps to drum claps. add
02:16:930 (4,5) - ^ add

02:13:892 (5,6) - Add drum claps. add

02:14:271 (1) - Add finish on the head. add

02:35:917 (2,3) - Fix the blanket here a bit, please. fix all
02:37:436 (2,3,4) - ^
02:42:563 (4,1) - ^

03:26:803 (10,1) - Their DS is too close to each other. Please move more apart. fix

03:31:360 (4,5) - This jump is pretty random, and doesn't make sense. Swap their positions please. fix

03:45:411 (1) - Add finish on the head. add

Normal

00:19:588 (2) - Nazi suggestion here, move to 188:120 so it 's head is blanketed better by 00:18:828 (1) -

00:38:575 (3) - Fix the blanket here please. no problem here

00:43:892 (2) - Move to 168:296 for neater blanket.

01:01:360 (2) - Please fix blanket here. is OK @@

01:09:714 (3) - Is slightly too far from the previous slider. near the slider of 0.05x ,because i can't how to change this

01:13:512 (2) - Should be NC instead of 01:13:132 (1) - , because it's the first object to appear in Kai time. fix

01:15:031 (4) - Slider can still blanket 01:14:271 (3) - 's tail better. Move it's middle anchor point to 436:264. nice

01:18:828 (1) - Remove NC here, it isn't needed. fix

01:49:588 - There shouldn't a a hit note here, because there wasn't any at 01:46:550. Either add a note at 01:46:550, or remove this slider and add a note at 01:49:968. fix

01:56:044 (1) - Add a finish on the head. add

02:23:765 (2) - Move to 332:228 for a neater blanket. fix
02:32:499 (2) - Should be NC instead of 02:32:119 (1) - fix

03:45:411 (1) - Add finish on the head. add
03:52:436 (3) - ^ Needs a a finish on the revlor]

The flow would've been so nice, if it wasn't for all those messy blankets

Good luck!

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue
sry for delay
开头SB报幕那边明显阴影被切掉了。。画布稍微开大点吧
title字体有点挫 字體方面...我會打算把陰影再改良一下..畢竟現在晝布我覺得很大了
03:27:183 - 奏音乐的话kiai应该这里开 OK
唉。。。这图有一种AR8看着乱AR9还不合适的感觉 果然真是這樣._. 因為我原本是用ar8的,在上一次update才換上ar9打算試試看...FIX
00:50:727 (1) - 稍微往左转转可能好点吧 fix...
00:58:322 - 音乐还是在这一段为啥加速了 fix
01:01:265 - 可以加个note 前面摆个五角星 好主意
01:02:689 (4) - 这个不如ctrl+g OK
01:12:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 有点微妙啊。。而且12好像间距还不太对 DS,FIX
01:27:942 (5,6,1) - 做个等边多好 OK
01:34:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 里面这个显然不好看 還可以接受吧
01:44:651 (3) - flow的话ctrl+g好点 OK
03:06:202 - guitar solo空过去吗。。。 guitar solo是啥._. (我是小白
03:08:101 - 03:08:290- 都有音 而且还不是寻常位置 加上更有趣些 嘗試換上串燒...
03:48:449 (1) - 有点突然 fix
03:50:157 (5,7) - 交换位置 交换之后的03:50:347 (6,7) - 交换位置 会好很多 FIX
恩。。其实还是挺不成系统的不过现在这样也还勉强OK吧 主要还是加强排列 很多地方挤 而且大部分不好看。。其次节奏可以多加点note insane这样有点疏 我排列會加以修改,thanks

[Hard]
00:32:119 (4) - 前面接了两三个大跳。。这里突然又变成1/1不太好读 這個不打算改...因為00:31:360 (2,3) - ,00:32:119 (4,5) - ,00:32:879 (6,7) - 我想是相同節奏和間距,而且00:30:980 (1) - 停頓一下應該不會出現難讀的問題
00:55:854 (2) - 近 FIX
01:01:930 (3) - overlap了 FIX
01:30:221 (5) - 前面都有跟vocal吧 这边空出来了 fix
01:34:018 (5,1,2) - 动一下1放个正三角形吧 后面间距都挺固定的 fix
02:03:259 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 干嘛突然放anti啊。。 没意义 OK
03:08:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - 太随便了点吧。。 fix
间距小。。冷不丁的放个大跳。你这边很多跳和1/1间距是一样的 不太推荐这样 我再修改一下

[Normal]
01:00:980 (1) - 间距不太对劲吧 fix
还行吧

[-Sophie-] wrote:

[Normal]
00:03:638 - Change the hitsound no fix
[Hard]
00:38:480 (5) - Remove note OK
[Insane]
Fine!
Goodluck!

chaee wrote:

From: chaee's queue [NM 3/5] Status: closed
Thanks for stopping by

[Normal]

00:14:271 (3) - Distance snap more no fix...DS no any problem here
00:18:828 (1) - ^ ^
00:20:727 (4) - 152x 276y no fix...because i would like to blanket with 00:21:866 (1) -
00:26:423 (4) - Replace with a duplicate of 00:29:461 (4) - Change other rhythm here
00:33:638 (4) - I think there should be a note here? slider would be better than circle there
00:43:892 (2) - Curve end a little more OK
00:57:942 (5) - Here feels empty ;w; fix
01:00:980 (1,2) - Fix blanketing fix
01:02:879 (4) - Why not make this straight? i hope to make a flow
01:05:917 (4) - Replace with a duplicate of 01:04:398 (2) - and adjust I think use a some same slider may feel bored for the player.So i like to make different design in there.
01:25:664 (1,2) - Blanket OK
01:27:183 (3,1) - ^ OK
02:11:233 (3) - Distance snap. Level with 02:10:854 (2) -
Make 02:13:892 (1) - Parallel to 02:13:132 (2) - OK
02:26:044 (1,2) - Replace 2 with a duplicate of 1 no fix
02:43:132 (3,4) - Rotate 3 straight to make a perfect blanket with 4 no fix
03:06:676 (2) - x:268 y:108 OK
03:15:790 (2) - Move down OK
03:46:930 (4,5) - Fix blanket OK

[Hard]

00:33:638 (1,2) - Blanket OK
00:58:892 (2,3) - 2 is too far away from 3. Fix maybe? no fix...because i feel not too far away(just DS:1.5x
01:07:436 (1) - Replace with a duplicate of 01:08:195 (3) - OK
01:56:044 (1,2) - Keep 1 where it is but blanket with 2 more fix


That's all. Great map good luck