I think this beatmap needs more unique patterns or gimmicks.
like here (Maximum)
00:39:492 (39492|1,39492|5,39578|2,39578|4,39665|1,39665|5) -
00:40:706 (40706|4,40706|2,40792|5,40792|1,40879|4,40879|2) -
00:42:093 (42093|4,42093|2,42180|1,42180|5,42266|4,42266|2) -
repeating same pattern makes player boring...
and here 00:44:347 (44347|3) -
suggestion : http://puu.sh/5zV7D.png
notes should be follow the beat and tones.
00:46:081 (46081|1,46081|2,46255|4,46428|1,46602|4,46602|2,46775|1,46775|3,46775|0,47122|2,47122|3,47122|0) -
and here.
6,7 line makes feel empty. suggest move some notes here
00:47:469 (47469|6,47469|4,47642|2,47815|5,47989|2,47989|4,48162|6,48162|3,48162|5,48509|6,48509|3,48509|4) - ^
00:56:833 (56833|3) - ~ 01:07:237 (67237|0) -
first line(column1) looks empty.
02:24:405 (144405|4,144492|5,144578|6,144665|4,144752|5,144839|6,144925|5,145012|4,145099|6,145185|5,145272|4) -
re-arrange it. worst two hand balance.... place some notes at left-handed part.
other parts are needs same^ fix too...
like here (Maximum)
00:39:492 (39492|1,39492|5,39578|2,39578|4,39665|1,39665|5) -
00:40:706 (40706|4,40706|2,40792|5,40792|1,40879|4,40879|2) -
00:42:093 (42093|4,42093|2,42180|1,42180|5,42266|4,42266|2) -
repeating same pattern makes player boring...
and here 00:44:347 (44347|3) -
suggestion : http://puu.sh/5zV7D.png
notes should be follow the beat and tones.
00:46:081 (46081|1,46081|2,46255|4,46428|1,46602|4,46602|2,46775|1,46775|3,46775|0,47122|2,47122|3,47122|0) -
and here.
6,7 line makes feel empty. suggest move some notes here
00:47:469 (47469|6,47469|4,47642|2,47815|5,47989|2,47989|4,48162|6,48162|3,48162|5,48509|6,48509|3,48509|4) - ^
00:56:833 (56833|3) - ~ 01:07:237 (67237|0) -
first line(column1) looks empty.
02:24:405 (144405|4,144492|5,144578|6,144665|4,144752|5,144839|6,144925|5,145012|4,145099|6,145185|5,145272|4) -
re-arrange it. worst two hand balance.... place some notes at left-handed part.
other parts are needs same^ fix too...
grats :3