Alright. As requested, here's my recheck.
[Hard]
- ...I assume you didn't take my advice on attempting to balance between both hands? Remember that if one hand has to do most of the work in your charts, you're gonna make the players suffer A LOT rather than enjoying them. Anyways, some of these below will help you guide parts of it to assure the correct balance.
00:12:613 (12613|2,12787|1,14000|4,14174|5) Try to mirror these notes like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061215
00:23:538 I recommend doing either this or this.
00:29:087 (29087|2,29434|2,29781|2,30128|2) Move to 5th column.
00:30:474 Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061229
00:32:902 (32902|1,32989|3,33076|1) Try this. You can also move these notes to the left by a column if you like from the screenshot.
00:33:943 (33943|2,34116|1,34289|4,34289|3) Personally I don't think these notes are based on anything in the song (because it's a sudden silence part, aside from vocals). I will only recommend removing all of these and then adding two normal notes at this time (for the drum).
00:34:983 (34983|1) Move to 5th column. ...I think I said this before? Must be some deja vu... Oh well.
00:35:503 (35503|5) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
00:36:370 (36370|5) Move to 3rd column.
00:37:064 (37064|1) Move to 5th column.
00:37:758 (37758|0) Either move this to 7th column or add a new normal note at this time on the 5th or 7th column.
00:38:451 (38451|4) Move to 3rd column.
00:40:359 Add note in 5th column (to match drum beat).
00:40:532 (40532|2) Move to 4th column.
00:41:573 (41573|3,41746|4,41920|1) Try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061262 (Also try rearranging this a bit. Looking at this makes me feel uncomfortable.)
00:46:081 (46081|5) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
00:46:255 (46255|3,46602|4) Move left by one column.
00:47:469 (47469|1) Move to 5th or 7th column.
00:47:989 (47989|4) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
00:49:550 (49550|2) Move to 2nd column.
00:51:284 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061289
00:52:671 Same as above, but mirrored.
00:53:191 (53191|4) Move to 3rd column.
00:56:833 The patterns you used here with combinations of normal and long notes on either sides make it really awkward. I highly recommend trying to balance them out like this. Keep doing this for the next few measures until 01:16:255.
01:18:509 (78509|1,78856|2) Remove these notes as they don't fit the song at all. At this same time, add a normal note in 3rd column.
01:21:804 (81804|4,81977|5,82151|3,82324|5) Move left by either 2 or 3 columns.
01:24:578 (84578|2,84752|1,84925|3,85099|1) Move right by either 2 or 3 columns.
01:26:659 (86659|5) Move to any column that the left hand uses (1st to 3rd).
01:27:353 (87353|4) Move to 3rd column.
01:30:128 I believe I seen this before in the first verse, except it's mirrored. You can use the recommendation from 00:23:538 above, just mirror it.
01:35:677 This and the next measure doesn't fit the song at all, and the short long notes already made it ugly. Delete everything and try this instead. You can alter the patterns any way you like here, but this is my recommended pattern. This pattern also works.
01:40:532 (100532|4,100706|5,100879|2,100879|3) Delete all of these notes, and at this same time add two normal notes in any columns.
01:41:226 Wait, this is the second chorus? Okay, now I understand why this is much more difficult. Compared to the first chorus at 00:34:636, this part is way harder due to the long note in the way. I will recommend two methods to solve this issue (just use either one). Method One: Delete about a third or half of the normal notes in measures that has a long note inside, then rearrange the pattern. Method Two: Delete the long notes, then rearrange the normal notes' patterns.
01:50:937 (110937|4) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
01:52:324 Continue with either one of the two methods in 01:41:226.
02:02:209 Add a normal note in 3rd column.
02:02:555 ^
02:02:902 (122902|1,123076|2,123076|3) Delete these notes as, again, they don't fit in the song.
02:12:266 (132266|5,132613|5) Move to 3rd column.
02:24:578 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061354
02:27:006 Third chorus. Use what I've suggested above since the patterns are similar (or exactly the same?) as the ones used in the first chorus.
[Maximum]
- I noticed that you use two long notes with different timings and lengths in various parts of this chart. IMO this is usually fine in an Insane chart, but this specific song doesn't feel to deserve that kind of treatment. The first example at 00:24:752 does not make any sense at all with the purpose of these long notes. The solution to some of this is to make the first long note end at the time where the second long note starts. As for the ones from 00:56:833 onwards, have them end at the same times as the other long note like this.
00:10:185 (10185|1) Move to 5th column.
00:17:295 (17295|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:28:220 Remove this timing section.
01:34:810 ^
02:25:619 ^
- As for the rest, apply similarly to what I've suggested in Hard above (especially deleting notes that makes no sense at all and rebalancing patterns for both hands).
That's all for now. Good luck!
[Hard]
- ...I assume you didn't take my advice on attempting to balance between both hands? Remember that if one hand has to do most of the work in your charts, you're gonna make the players suffer A LOT rather than enjoying them. Anyways, some of these below will help you guide parts of it to assure the correct balance.
00:12:613 (12613|2,12787|1,14000|4,14174|5) Try to mirror these notes like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061215
00:23:538 I recommend doing either this or this.
00:29:087 (29087|2,29434|2,29781|2,30128|2) Move to 5th column.
00:30:474 Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061229
00:32:902 (32902|1,32989|3,33076|1) Try this. You can also move these notes to the left by a column if you like from the screenshot.
00:33:943 (33943|2,34116|1,34289|4,34289|3) Personally I don't think these notes are based on anything in the song (because it's a sudden silence part, aside from vocals). I will only recommend removing all of these and then adding two normal notes at this time (for the drum).
00:34:983 (34983|1) Move to 5th column. ...I think I said this before? Must be some deja vu... Oh well.
00:35:503 (35503|5) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
00:36:370 (36370|5) Move to 3rd column.
00:37:064 (37064|1) Move to 5th column.
00:37:758 (37758|0) Either move this to 7th column or add a new normal note at this time on the 5th or 7th column.
00:38:451 (38451|4) Move to 3rd column.
00:40:359 Add note in 5th column (to match drum beat).
00:40:532 (40532|2) Move to 4th column.
00:41:573 (41573|3,41746|4,41920|1) Try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061262 (Also try rearranging this a bit. Looking at this makes me feel uncomfortable.)
00:46:081 (46081|5) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
00:46:255 (46255|3,46602|4) Move left by one column.
00:47:469 (47469|1) Move to 5th or 7th column.
00:47:989 (47989|4) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
00:49:550 (49550|2) Move to 2nd column.
00:51:284 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061289
00:52:671 Same as above, but mirrored.
00:53:191 (53191|4) Move to 3rd column.
00:56:833 The patterns you used here with combinations of normal and long notes on either sides make it really awkward. I highly recommend trying to balance them out like this. Keep doing this for the next few measures until 01:16:255.
01:18:509 (78509|1,78856|2) Remove these notes as they don't fit the song at all. At this same time, add a normal note in 3rd column.
01:21:804 (81804|4,81977|5,82151|3,82324|5) Move left by either 2 or 3 columns.
01:24:578 (84578|2,84752|1,84925|3,85099|1) Move right by either 2 or 3 columns.
01:26:659 (86659|5) Move to any column that the left hand uses (1st to 3rd).
01:27:353 (87353|4) Move to 3rd column.
01:30:128 I believe I seen this before in the first verse, except it's mirrored. You can use the recommendation from 00:23:538 above, just mirror it.
01:35:677 This and the next measure doesn't fit the song at all, and the short long notes already made it ugly. Delete everything and try this instead. You can alter the patterns any way you like here, but this is my recommended pattern. This pattern also works.
01:40:532 (100532|4,100706|5,100879|2,100879|3) Delete all of these notes, and at this same time add two normal notes in any columns.
01:41:226 Wait, this is the second chorus? Okay, now I understand why this is much more difficult. Compared to the first chorus at 00:34:636, this part is way harder due to the long note in the way. I will recommend two methods to solve this issue (just use either one). Method One: Delete about a third or half of the normal notes in measures that has a long note inside, then rearrange the pattern. Method Two: Delete the long notes, then rearrange the normal notes' patterns.
01:50:937 (110937|4) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
01:52:324 Continue with either one of the two methods in 01:41:226.
02:02:209 Add a normal note in 3rd column.
02:02:555 ^
02:02:902 (122902|1,123076|2,123076|3) Delete these notes as, again, they don't fit in the song.
02:12:266 (132266|5,132613|5) Move to 3rd column.
02:24:578 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061354
02:27:006 Third chorus. Use what I've suggested above since the patterns are similar (or exactly the same?) as the ones used in the first chorus.
[Maximum]
- I noticed that you use two long notes with different timings and lengths in various parts of this chart. IMO this is usually fine in an Insane chart, but this specific song doesn't feel to deserve that kind of treatment. The first example at 00:24:752 does not make any sense at all with the purpose of these long notes. The solution to some of this is to make the first long note end at the time where the second long note starts. As for the ones from 00:56:833 onwards, have them end at the same times as the other long note like this.
00:10:185 (10185|1) Move to 5th column.
00:17:295 (17295|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:28:220 Remove this timing section.
01:34:810 ^
02:25:619 ^
- As for the rest, apply similarly to what I've suggested in Hard above (especially deleting notes that makes no sense at all and rebalancing patterns for both hands).
That's all for now. Good luck!