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REDALiCE - Kizuato [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
Sorarei

happy30 wrote:

artist and title should be:

REDALiCE ft. a☆ru - キズアト
REDALiCE ft. a*ru - Scar
Scar is translated title , not romanised title.
anyway thanks for your mention about this
didn't not change to artist , just changing tags "aru" to " a☆ru"
imariL
From my queue~ Sorry for late.

column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]

AImod: Letterbox in breaks conflicts with each difficulties.

[Easy]

00:17:642 (17642|2) - move to 4
00:31:862 (31862|1,31862|5) - these long notes should be finished at 00:33:249
01:03:769 (63769|5) - may be at 6?
01:38:451 (98451|5,98451|1) - same with 31862 should be finished at 01:39:839 -
01:53:711 (113711|4) - here should be double notes. You used double notes at 01:52:324 (112324|3,112324|4) already here

[Normal]

00:12:093 (12093|6) - move to 5? but you can ignore it
00:12:440 (12440|2) - move to 3
00:12:787 (12787|3) - move to 2
00:51:891 (51891|3) - maybe placed at 00:51:977
00:59:261 (59261|4) - move to 5
01:09:318 (69318|1) - placed at 01:09:665
01:24:232 - add note at here. maybe like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1092382

[Hard]

01:45:561 (105561|3,105561|4) - delete one

[Maximum]

00:21:457 - where is triple notes? add note one more here.
01:45:041 (105041|1,105041|0) - move to 4 and 5?
01:48:683 (108683|1,108769|2,108856|3) - you used 01:47:295 (107295|3,107295|5,107382|4,107469|6,107469|2) - pattern at here. how about match with this?
01:57:526 (117526|2,117700|2) - move to 4 for balance
02:17:122 (137122|5) - move to 4


Nice map. Good luck! :D
Topic Starter
Sorarei

Chocoliti wrote:

From my queue~ Sorry for late.

column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]

AImod: Letterbox in breaks conflicts with each difficulties.

[Easy]

00:17:642 (17642|2) - move to 4 moved
00:31:862 (31862|1,31862|5) - these long notes should be finished at 00:33:249 there's no sound
01:03:769 (63769|5) - may be at 6? moved
01:38:451 (98451|5,98451|1) - same with 31862 should be finished at 01:39:839 - same
01:53:711 (113711|4) - here should be double notes. You used double notes at 01:52:324 (112324|3,112324|4) already here added

[Normal]

00:12:093 (12093|6) - move to 5? but you can ignore it not fixed
00:12:440 (12440|2) - move to 3 not fixed
00:12:787 (12787|3) - move to 2 not fixed
00:51:891 (51891|3) - maybe placed at 00:51:977 it should in this beat
00:59:261 (59261|4) - move to 5 moved
01:09:318 (69318|1) - placed at 01:09:665 if i do finish note will be gone, and if adding not it will be compare
01:24:232 - add note at here. maybe like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1092382 added

[Hard]

01:45:561 (105561|3,105561|4) - delete one delete

[Maximum]

00:21:457 - where is triple notes? add note one more here. added
01:45:041 (105041|1,105041|0) - move to 4 and 5? moved
01:48:683 (108683|1,108769|2,108856|3) - you used 01:47:295 (107295|3,107295|5,107382|4,107469|6,107469|2) - pattern at here. how about match with this? compared
01:57:526 (117526|2,117700|2) - move to 4 for balance fixed another way
02:17:122 (137122|5) - move to 4 not fixed


Nice map. Good luck! :D
thanks you for mod :)
PROGUY
Hi there. Here's my BAT check as requested. :)

[General]
- Alice.jpg is contained in the folder but is not being used as the BG. Please remove it.

[Normal]
00:12:440 I'm still uncomfortable with these specific notes (highlighted in blue) since the first time I modded this. I recommend placing them in different columns, with the long note and short note on columns that both hands would use (one for each). Changing the long notes to normal notes without affecting their position would also work.
Topic Starter
Sorarei
fixed , maybe need re-download if BG changed ?
PROGUY
Yep, my bad.
Well everything's alright now. Here's a bubble :)
Topic Starter
Sorarei
thanks you :)
indyinyou
good luck :D
happy30
ALiCE'S EMOTiON is the circle, but since this consist of multiple people (and possibly guests) it shouldn't be put as artist.
use arranger or arranger feat/ft. vocalist.
Topic Starter
Sorarei
Artist change to REDALiCE
add tags "alice emotion"
17VA
I think this beatmap needs more unique patterns or gimmicks.

like here (Maximum)

00:39:492 (39492|1,39492|5,39578|2,39578|4,39665|1,39665|5) -

00:40:706 (40706|4,40706|2,40792|5,40792|1,40879|4,40879|2) -

00:42:093 (42093|4,42093|2,42180|1,42180|5,42266|4,42266|2) -

repeating same pattern makes player boring...

and here 00:44:347 (44347|3) -

suggestion : http://puu.sh/5zV7D.png

notes should be follow the beat and tones.

00:46:081 (46081|1,46081|2,46255|4,46428|1,46602|4,46602|2,46775|1,46775|3,46775|0,47122|2,47122|3,47122|0) -

and here.

6,7 line makes feel empty. suggest move some notes here

00:47:469 (47469|6,47469|4,47642|2,47815|5,47989|2,47989|4,48162|6,48162|3,48162|5,48509|6,48509|3,48509|4) - ^

00:56:833 (56833|3) - ~ 01:07:237 (67237|0) -

first line(column1) looks empty.

02:24:405 (144405|4,144492|5,144578|6,144665|4,144752|5,144839|6,144925|5,145012|4,145099|6,145185|5,145272|4) -

re-arrange it. worst two hand balance.... place some notes at left-handed part.

other parts are needs same^ fix too...
Topic Starter
Sorarei
All Fixed (Hard & Maximum) thanks 17VA ;)
Evening
o_o why is the BG scaled, it'll be better if it's cropped instead of pushing the sides together, the face looks disproportionate now :c
Topic Starter
Sorarei
okay i'll fix it
Topic Starter
Sorarei
BG Changed
PROGUY
Apologies for the late reply.
Anyway, rechecked everything and it's all good - hitsounds and stuff.
So let's try this again. Re-bubbled. :)
woc2006
ranked.
Kyouren
Gratzz!! Reikosaka!!^^

For Ranked Maps!!^^
Bruce
Congratulations ;)
Decipher
gratz Reiko :)
PROGUY
Well that was fast lmao
Congrats, Reikosaka! :)
-DanteMayCry-
Congrats reikosaka! :D
Topic Starter
Sorarei
thanks all !
Xinely
Nice, another mapper from indo ;)

selamat ~
jyu
congrats!! :)
asd123iii
congrantz~
YunoFanatic
omg reiko-san so pro
[Emiria]
Congrats
[Shi-Ra]
Yay! Congratz Reiko ^w^
captin1
:o grats :3
DJNightmare
Hello, terribly sorry for not finishing your request in time @_@
I couldn't find the time to do much requests during that time >_<
Topic Starter
Sorarei

DJNightmare wrote:

Hello, terribly sorry for not finishing your request in time @_@
I couldn't find the time to do much requests during that time >_<
lol it's already long time ago, don't worry :)
Sapphiire_old_1
Congrats~
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